The Alpha's Virgin Tribute Comments

  • Ruth Jackson

    reading these chapters and she is really pissing me off. I’m trying to finish this but her sense of entitlement is irritating. like just leave already if you’re so unhappy about a tradition, ugh.

    09/07/2021 05:37

  • Ruth Jackson

    honestly she is getting on my nerves, she always mad and angry for nothing. this chapter made me mad, mad at tradition that you don’t understand because you never had a family. I wish he leaves her, she acts like a spoil child .

    09/07/2021 01:01

  • Jessica Miller

    i think u meant to say sje makes her way to bathroom to empty her overflowing bladder but u said uterus

    09/07/2021 00:31

  • Clarice Doctor

    this story is like reading poetry. you are so elegant in your writing style and beautiful deceptions of the depth of love. thank you for writing with such fire and grace.

    09/06/2021 23:56

  • Puja Shetty

    nice story...nicely written...at times we get irritated by both Deimos and lumina actions but that is how character is described....will surely read PHOBOS. thankyou for this amazing story. All the best for PHOBOS.

    09/03/2021 04:50

  • Jourdan Coleman

    chapter you brought some tears

    09/03/2021 03:00

  • Reader-867183

    I mean… he put her through hell, her life appears far worse and she should have stronger trust issues than him. yet somehow she’s always the lost puppy following him. waiting on him. it’s ridiculous really. so far, all I see is that he lost his parents. she was humiliated, in a cell much of her life locked away, had to fight for everything she had, not Even Named- yet he’s so much more bruised than her? she pines for him, yet he doesn’t as any other mate with her?! I’m tired of it really! he’s lost my trust.

    09/03/2021 02:41

  • Reader-867183

    so far it seems to me she’s been through far worse and let him in. why can’t he let her in?! why is she always begging for his love yet he barely gives to her?!

    09/03/2021 02:38

  • Michelle Alvarado

    Also, is Deimos autistic or something..?? All of a sudden he started acting like rain man. I'm not trying to be mean to the author because I do like her writing I just feel the female is weak and Deimos character took a weird turn of sorts

    09/03/2021 02:29

  • Michelle Alvarado

    I am a little upset, all through the book she keeps saying she is an Alpha but she is so weak. If she was a true Alpha she would be a lot stronger, she needs to stop crying, apologizing and begging to be marked!! If she's so proud if being an Alpha then act like one and turn the damn tables on his ass! I keep waiting and it doesn't happen!

    09/03/2021 02:25

  • Reader-867183

    oh my goodness I almost got mad! I didn’t realize she was Reading Captain Correli’s Mandolin! The very first line I KNEW where it was from- such an amazing quote

    09/02/2021 16:22

  • Booklover99

    I’m re-reading this book for the THIRD time lmfao 🌚 I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH. I read it whenever I need a good cry cuz this book literally never fails to bring out my emotions 🥺 I love you author! 💕

    09/02/2021 13:37

  • Ellen Mcbroom

    hmm don’t trust him

    09/02/2021 02:20

  • WatUpG

    She needs to get over it forgive him for their traditions he didn't sleep with his chosen

    08/31/2021 21:57

  • Rose SB

    Far too often you are duplicating paragraphs. So you need a proofreader?

    08/31/2021 04:26

  • Rose SB

    Don’t trust Deimos! What happened to the love of his life, Theia?

    08/31/2021 04:14

  • Rose SB

    what is Ragon up too!

    08/31/2021 03:37

  • bells

    I canNOT put this book down omg!!!!!!!!!!!!

    08/31/2021 01:06

  • bells

    okay did I miss something or was I just so wrapped up in this story I didn’t even catch Deimos’ mates name?!!!!!????

    08/31/2021 00:57

  • Reader-171692

    waist of my money.

    08/29/2021 21:37

  • Tonia Strachan

    done ✅

    08/29/2021 03:38

  • Gigi

    I’m so done with this book. she has become so spoiled that she treats him like he is nothing to her. but he is wrong if he treated her that way. she needs to truly grow up.

    08/28/2021 03:21

  • Rose SB

    You’re repeating paragraphs and it’s annoying.

    08/27/2021 18:44

  • B Beau L

    I'm gutted the little after chappies parts are gone now the app is updated to likes 👍it was nice reading Luna Liz's comments to us. x

    08/27/2021 06:35

  • amie-rae iverson

    the main lady of this story making him suffer more for something she did not like , then tell him when he said well let the moon goddess welcome me she got mad make up your Mind do you care and love him or do you not , if you don’t love him why get upset when the thought of him dying you say you can and will life without

    08/27/2021 02:18

  • Natasha Mya Lock

    I don’t understand how a few years has gone in the book lol

    08/26/2021 11:54

  • Roni Lee

    I almost stopped reading when diemos took that sword. was weary about paying more into this book. heartbroken that she worked so hard to be worthy of his heart to have it taken away. so I went thru comments, hoping to see something positive. I saw someone say “keep reading 💕”. so I did. hoping. and I’m glad I did

    08/24/2021 23:59

  • Mary-ann Abeñon

    nice story

    08/24/2021 01:00

  • Tarsha Johnson

    good Book

    08/23/2021 23:08

  • StarHappy

    Ive only got to read the first few chapters but now I have to purchase...which is no problem! Great authors deserve their work and time dedicated to be rewarded. My only problem is having to wait until payday! I cannot wait to see how their relationship blossoms and who they truly become when side by side. It seems both are stubborn! ❤️😍

    08/23/2021 11:29

  • Kitara Harmony Merchant

    so far I’ve had a few parts that repeat, I hope this does not continue

    08/21/2021 17:24

  • CassLouise95

    is this book available anywhere else? have other apps like this that are cheaper systems, would be cheaper to buy the book from a store 🙃

    08/20/2021 04:50

  • Milly Reece

    My bad! He just used her thighs 😂

    08/19/2021 18:00

  • Candace Hays

    what happened to demos alpha of alphas?

    08/18/2021 17:21

  • Cassidy White

    What I was able to read, I really liked and I would love to finish this story but I'm not paying $30 to read one story, so it will have to go unfinished.

    08/18/2021 12:58

  • Sheona Patterson

    £24.00 for one story is ridiculous

    08/18/2021 09:45

  • Clarisa Revelo

    that's was such a great read, thank you so much and I hope on more updates on Phobos, I actually started reading first.

    08/18/2021 09:29

  • Crystal Taft Graham

    I just started this book and the first chapter has me hooked! I cannot wait to see the twist this book will take.

    08/17/2021 18:02

  • Anisha S.

    I just started and I must say why she made to seem weak. the minute she stepped in the hall and her aura gave me boss vibes and by the time she went back to her pack she was like a shrimp that couldn’t hold her own. ima keep reading to se if it gets better but I feel like the guy saves the day.

    08/16/2021 23:59

  • Shelby Mckay

    why does she not have a name…

    08/16/2021 21:57

  • dashawn alston

    I’m intrigued

    08/16/2021 14:50

  • Michelle F. Rivera

    anyone else notice the change in the story... initially it was great, captivating. then somewhere along the lines it switched to being written like prim and proper and just a totally did vibe. I liked first half better

    08/16/2021 13:08

  • Miss L

    I wish we could comment/discuss chapter by chapter. I’m up to ‘Glad you’re by my side’ I’m struggling with Lumina’s inexperience and stubbornness. she continually takes one or two comments from Deimos and runs with her own assumptions, without taking the time to take to him. she’s very ruled by her emotions all of the time. I know this is from her upbringing and having to literally teach herself everything, but after the amount of time they’ve been together, does she not see patterns. 🤦‍♀️ I do love that these characters can actually make me feel all the different emotions 😁

    08/15/2021 15:29

  • Reader-185116

    how is she an alpha and she acting like a whole Mitch I the beginning 🤷🏽‍♀️

    08/15/2021 06:03

  • Heavenly-Diamond Bynum

    what is the alphas name??

    08/14/2021 07:21

  • Mey Volcy

    there's no wall 🙄! I thought she was on a piano. when did she get on a wall?

    08/14/2021 06:58

  • Reader-254912

    I loved this story he may have been bad at first but just like life everyone has reasons as did Deimos so this book was very well written both character we let amazing and in the end love endures thank you Luna Liz and yes I’m enjoying Phobos as we speak it’s awesome too 👏👏👏💪🏼

    08/13/2021 23:51

  • Midnight Star

    👎👎👎👎👎I really don't mean no offense to you or your story but screw him,and he can go to hades he is a real basta$d.AND there is no way in hades I would put up with that poop that is b.s..

    08/13/2021 22:56

  • Jennah_63074

    I loved it! reading Lumina’s story was amazing then reading Deimos’ version made it all better. Thank you! I’m reading Phobos and love it!

    08/12/2021 22:50

  • So So

    Wow absolutely love this! It really feels like I’ve gone through the journey with this female Alpha. Some stories feel rushed but this isn’t rushed which leave one satisfied at the end.

    08/12/2021 10:31

  • Sherrie M McHenry

    love

    08/12/2021 04:27

  • BluezCluez

    💙💙 ...deimos’s pov was amazing. thank you Luna Liz

    08/12/2021 02:43

  • XO_XV

    absolutely love this story!! thank you so much

    08/12/2021 01:18

  • Neva Dat

    love your book but Deimos told his side within her side u didn’t have to do that

    08/11/2021 23:41

  • Neva Dat

    I’m not understanding u told Deimos side within the story y repeat I just spent my money for a repeat🤦🏽‍♀️

    08/11/2021 23:40

  • Cassia Johnston

    Has Deimos really died? 💔💔 I can’t wait to find out!!

    08/11/2021 20:45

  • Cassia Johnston

    Has Deimos really died? 💔💔 I can’t wait to find out!

    08/11/2021 20:43

  • Regina Ellis

    I can’t even make it through the first three chapters that are unlocked because it is so stupid and poorly written. If you enjoy poor grammar and sentences that don’t make sense or manage to read further and find something worth reading more power to you but not the story for me…

    08/11/2021 17:55

  • Cindy Griffin

    The END?! 😭 I will miss them! My favorite story...💗💗💗

    08/11/2021 04:19

  • Sky💕

    Omg. Demios POV was everything! And I appreciate you and your story ‘s. You already know I adore Deimos, and understand him. But to actually hear how he was feeling ❤️.

    08/11/2021 01:02

  • Philippa Rosemary

    Thank you for this story, love, love Deimos and Lumina. Love Deimos POV. Also reading Thobos and Theia. ❤

    08/10/2021 09:58

  • Jaime Berget

    I love this book

    08/10/2021 01:34

  • Latasia Stoll

    tay stoll Latasia

    08/09/2021 19:37

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    I loved Deimos view! it really showed how she broke down his walls time and time again and then stitched them back together with her love and by baring her soul to his and his to her....

    08/09/2021 16:24

  • ireadpastmybedtime

    this book. and Phobos. beautiful writing. makes me want to read it again. I loved this book the most over any other book I have found on this app. thank you for writing it and sharing your gift.

    08/09/2021 03:16

  • Angelica Monteon

    I loved this book and am reading book two can’t wait for the updates

    08/09/2021 01:09

  • Paula Lewis

    loved this book and Deimos’ POV did not disappoint me! I’ve already started to read Phobos and I’m really love how the two stories intertwined. that you so much for these books, kudos to you Luna Liz.

    08/08/2021 20:48

  • Serrah Stambaugh

    Thank you soo much! Your talent knows no bounds and the last chapters of Deimos' POV did not disappoint❤❤❤❤❤❤ I am looking forward to reading this all over again😍😍😍😍😍😍

    08/08/2021 19:10

  • Rhonda Fergie

    ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    08/08/2021 17:11

  • LC9

    thank you for sharing your talents. I enjoyed this book! I can’t wait to read what Phobos and Theia bring on their journey!!

    08/08/2021 15:25

  • Lidiane Barros

    thank you 🙏🏻❤️ I do have one question… the name of the new pup 👧

    08/08/2021 13:27

  • blocartil

    It's good to know his point of view.❤

    08/08/2021 13:13

  • Reader-371843

    applouse!!!!! loved it!!! loved it!!! now back to Phobos the frustrating dummy!!!! xx

    08/08/2021 12:27

  • Queen M

    Thank you Luna Liz…I feel whole.

    08/08/2021 05:28

  • Yoli Betz

    beautiful read

    08/08/2021 04:19

  • Ocey

    Beautiful, love the ending with Deimos Pov 💗💗 hope you might sell hardcopies of your books in future I would buy such a great author.

    08/08/2021 03:55

  • Tabitha Vickers

    I am breathless. You words move me so much. This story is beautiful. Thank you. I am reading Phobos, King of Beasts & I desperately wait for each chapter. What an amazing author you are. Congratulations.

    08/08/2021 03:09

  • Nita

    Thoroughly loved reading this! thank you so very much 🥰🙏😊

    08/08/2021 02:56

  • Tracy Bramante Wojtaszek

    Thank you. I enjoyed your book immensely. I am reading Phobos now. loving it just as much 😊

    08/08/2021 02:07

  • Melody Cawthra

    I have been through every single emotion in this story. I have felt the rawness & passion of your words. thank you for giving me Deimos’ POV. it ended their journey beautifully for me.

    08/08/2021 01:05

  • Luna Liz

    Hello my little wolves ❤️ DEIMOS POV chapters are finally published!! I have gifted you all a straight up ten chapters containing the development of his character and feelings at one go so you do not need to wait and can truly savour his pov! The first POV chappy is ‘The Deadly Bond’ and the last is ‘Lumina, my salvation’ With this TAVT is officially complete, I wished to say thank you to every sweet and kind wolf who has read and enjoyed my work from the beginning to the end. Thank you, truly 🙏🏽💕 If you wish to read more of my works please do show some love and support to PHOBOS (King of Beasts) here on AnyStories! Hope you shall enjoy Phobos’s and Theia’s journey 🥰 Happy reading, Liz

    08/07/2021 22:06

  • Lora Plummer

    💕 this book, wild and beautiful ride

    08/07/2021 11:15

  • Kayla Swick

    omg I cried. I am so happy he has a daughter. so very happy. I can also understand why he is strict. it's hard to go from one lifestyle to another because you are trying to do better than your father before you. I understand him. I'm so glad they are happy. this is so amazing and if you ever decide to publish this whether it be self published or through a publishing company, I would buy it in a heartbeat!

    08/07/2021 02:44

  • Fiso Tusitala

    enjoying the beautiful story

    08/06/2021 18:20

  • Julia Ramsey

    This chapter broke my heart.

    08/05/2021 20:33

  • Tiffany Liu

    30+ chapters and I don't really see an Alpha female in this story so far. I don't get the feeling I would too. It's a good love story, but there isn't really any alpha to her besides some strength and pride. I don't see wisdom, control, or a leader. She was raised in blood and violence, but she doesn't act like it at all besides some display in strength. Too easily does she cry from being hurt. She gets swayed by her emotion much too often. We can take Deimos for example, being raised in the darkness should really harden someone destined to be Alpha. At first, she was written very well as an Alpha when dealing with the cold Deimos, but then she became this whimpering mess. I don't see the leadership, self control, and logic Alphas demonstrate. She doesn't have any mental strength. She just cries and cries, and screams and thrash when things go south with Deimos. She doesn't know how to have a discussion. Her anger always boil over, shes always hurt. very hurt. Was this really an Alpha, born from blood and torment? At this point I couldn't differentiate her between just another female wolf with some feist and spunk and an Alpha. As the story continues, I even start wondering maybe she wasn't a worthy Alpha. I have to get reminded that she was one! it's a decent story, but I don't think this is the strong, female lead some of you are looking for.

    08/05/2021 07:11

  • Mey Volcy

    I don't get that 🙄🙄. he said he's not gonna take as for he's saving this for when he can mark her at. and here he is with is cock thrusting deep in her? is there another take i don't know about or the writer mistaken to have us read that this is all being done with hand???

    08/04/2021 06:11

  • Lucy Xiong

    hehe I was hoping for a peek of phobo and theia story here lol

    08/03/2021 20:26

  • Lucy Xiong

    info that was so good. awww he loves his little girl so much already. there was so much pride.

    08/03/2021 20:25

  • Theresa Parent

    I love the story here. did anyone else get super confused with the time jumps? did I miss it saying that it was jumping ahead?? I'm not mad about it at all I just got confused lol I kinda like that it takes them time to become a couple. to accept the bond. in most books they accept the bond quickly and move on. i like that it's essentially saying it took them time to accept it and even more to mate. this is a good read! I'll def be looking for more of your work!

    08/03/2021 12:24

  • Mishy

    just finished and love every moment! thank you for allowing us to read your work. I think the ending was amazing and I do hope to get a glimpse of her male's point of view! well be reading Phobos next for sure!

    08/03/2021 06:53

  • Cass Birch

    best decision I made today was taking the day off work so I could read this book. I loved it, and that ending! 🥰🥰🥲🥲 can't wait to start reading Phobos. You're an amazing story teller, thank you for sharing 💕

    08/02/2021 13:01

  • Sara Rastellini

    her own mate sees her as weak....

    08/02/2021 06:42

  • Cindy Griffin

    I love this book! 💗💗💗😍

    08/02/2021 06:10

  • Shannon Paterno

    That last chapter,so beautiful!!😫😭🥰🥰

    08/02/2021 05:43

  • Nita

    I will be looking forward to reading about “King Kal” & his sister when they grow up 😁😁

    08/02/2021 05:04

  • Hanna Crawford

    yes please continue to write more POV

    08/02/2021 03:10

  • Lidiane Barros

    oh Lizzy I was sobbing with him 🥺 what a beautiful way to end their journey thank you so much for this you are truly amazing 🙏🏻❤️ now back to wait anxiously for Phobos which somehow has barely started but its keeps getting better and better 🤗🙌🏻🥰

    08/01/2021 08:42

  • Astridoll Tips

    I’m waiting for Phobos sooooo impatiently

    08/01/2021 06:00

  • Sky💕

    This brought me to tears. So happy it’s a girl and mini Lumina. Lord he’s going to spoil and adore her. Her and Kal is going to be fighting over there daddy, because she definitely will be a daddy’s girl 😂. I’m so happy he got to see and deliver his second born. 💖

    07/31/2021 16:14
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