The Alpha's Virgin Tribute Comments
Iris Georgia
#Thanksgiving! Excited to read this! I can hardly wait to finally have time to binge read the story
11/26/2023 12:50Paula Lewis
sometimes when the pain runs so deep you just have to start over without the same mistakes. then and only then you have you walked through fire together. this author is amazing I love her stories
11/18/2023 13:46Iris Georgia
#HalloweenVibe!
10/29/2023 13:42Iris Georgia
#HalloweenVibe The intro sounds so good! can’t wait to read it
10/28/2023 13:03
Reader-730383
why haven she rejected him
10/16/2023 14:58
Elizabeth Karr
At this point, she didn’t have a name yet …. He named her later in the original story. I came back to read it and this was new.
09/21/2023 11:53Marie
Why is no one mentioning the fact that the first chapters of Diemom and the alph’s virgin tribute are the same?
09/05/2023 05:11Divyanjali Yadav
Hey author! Can you please write a book on Tadeas ( son of Phobos and Thiea)? I really loved their beasty relationship.❤️🥰
09/05/2023 01:58Paula Lewis
this is my third time reading this book I still love it!
09/05/2023 00:53Barb Austin
3d4f Added and have read a bit so far it seems good will keep it for later ,Thinking it will be a very good read
09/05/2023 00:43Stacey Stratton
3d4f I’m only a couple chapters in and I’m loving it! who doesn’t love a staring female lead character?!
09/05/2023 00:18Reader-731248
3d4f 2w3e the first few chapters are good. it Will be interesting to see where the story goes
09/05/2023 00:18Joey Jojo
#3d4f# didn’t know what to expect from the title but once I started reading I couldn’t put it down. I just love strong female leads. definitely my type of book.
09/05/2023 00:15He's in a coma! Lumina will get better!
09/05/2023 00:03Nini A
3d4f I think I’m hooked , strong female lead even her pack. first three chapters and I love it , added to library
09/05/2023 00:02Emily
3d4f just added this to my library! only read the first chapter but am already hooked! excited to start
09/04/2023 23:51Kristen Tedrow Cope
3d4f A wonderful book! Simply couldn't put it down. Love Lumina and how she fights for his love!
09/04/2023 23:513d4f I'm adding this story into my list of books to read. the description of the book looks like I'll be hooked from chapter one
09/04/2023 23:41Gemma Butler
3d4f I am absolutely loving this book. only read the first few chapters and I’m already hooked. love a strong female lead. added to my library and can’t wait to keep reading
09/04/2023 23:343d4f An intriguing book, love there is a strong female lead character not keen on weak females needing male to save them. Hoping for a happy ending.
09/04/2023 23:27Kat Waters
3d4f well you never know if it heartbreak if you are going to find love u will want to read this great book injoy
09/04/2023 23:27Rafael
3d4f I love this characters. I have read first the book about Phobos and then this one. I didn't finish it yet but I like it. is very interesting.
09/04/2023 23:21Julie Mejia Zertuche
3d4f Just started this story and so far it's really good, I haven't been able to put it down. Worth the read!!
09/04/2023 23:20Ellyinne Blackburn
I wish I could buy this so i can keep it. so I can keep it forever I keep coming back to it 😀 your amazing Luna Liz
09/04/2023 23:17Christin Louth
#3d4f# Ooh I love when a book starts with a strong female! this one also has a female beta! I’m very curious to see how things go between the alpha lead and her mate. this book has me gripped already!
09/04/2023 23:00Dawn KO
3d4f I love a strong, female lead. Lumina has some really wonderful qualities. sometimes I wish strong women even in the were community would not necessarily have to fight for a male
09/04/2023 22:433d4f I got this book recommended once but you really have to have a strong stomach for this. its not for everyone.
09/04/2023 22:42Elisa Gonzalez Rivas
i see 4 books... how's the order i should Reed them?? tks!
09/04/2023 22:23Tammie Gooding
yeah ptsd. she has allowed love to weaken her
09/04/2023 22:17
ShelGregg
Great storyline! It does take a bit to get used to to Authors writing style but I wholeheartedly recommend this story. The beginning chapters are hard as the main characters are very hard to like but do not give up on it. I binged the entire story in one day!!
09/04/2023 22:09Tammie Gooding
why don't they just tell her what going on
09/04/2023 21:32Tammie Gooding
she is too stubborn!
09/04/2023 21:29Lynda McCormick
Amazing story, heartbreaking at times, but a must read. You won't be able to put it down. Loved it ♡♡
09/04/2023 21:19Marcia Francis Bryan
Buy can she run far enough
09/04/2023 20:43Jay Cater
wow. what a start 2 the book!
09/04/2023 20:37Vicky Redfern
imagine you are married to someone and you don't give them a child and they go off with someone to have kids but you are still expected to live as a married couple. how would you react?
09/04/2023 20:16Deborah B
unfortunately I wouldn’t bother. Views on characters aside, scenes just aren’t fully written out and just suddenly drop to new content after one character statement. if you expanded scenes out this would be mucb more enjoyable and easier to follow
09/04/2023 20:09lunabug
this is the same book of deimos but different title
09/04/2023 18:02Roza Pepdjonovic
@lunaliz are the two books Deimos and The Alpa's Virgin Tribute the same?
09/04/2023 17:07Enchantresss
What is the main character's name??
09/04/2023 16:10Personal pet peeve, but I'm so tired of writers referring to someone as "my male" 🙄 seriously it sounds awful. The words aren't interchangeable. My man, my mate, my love, my sexy beast sure but my male just sounds wrong.
09/04/2023 15:06Heba Ismail
what's with her being a crybaby. there isn't a single chapter that doesn't include her running and/or sobbing. then you make her claim she is a strong Alpha. I am getting soooooo bored with this.
09/04/2023 15:01Heidi Dalcin Day
Love ❤️❤️❤️❤️ this book. very emotional. I was brought to tears 😭 many times
09/04/2023 14:48
Roots
Interesting, this book is a tear jerker already.
09/04/2023 14:41Justine Lane
I'm sure her beta called her chris St the beginning of story.
09/04/2023 14:31Jeanice Selmon
finally a name
09/04/2023 14:21Moni Chowdhury
suleman Ahmed
09/04/2023 14:18Deanna Kamprad
ok that was unexpected
09/04/2023 13:37Helen Gordijn
ppp
09/04/2023 13:06
Iani328
is this book complete?
09/04/2023 13:00Alanda Escoe
what it the name of the book about a spare who found out she was the illegitimate daughter of her father
09/04/2023 12:58
Lady of Glencoe
The author isn‘t writing in their native language. It is mildly distracting mostly, but at times, completely incomprehensible. The lack of proper punctuation adds to the difficulty of understanding what is going on. The story itself has a decent, if predictable, premise. Unfortunately, the author seems confused about the difference between building tension between the characters & just plain building boredom, rewriting the same things over & over. They desperately want each other, but won‘t. They fight. They hurt each other. They want each other. But won‘t. They fight. They hurt each other. They desperately… You get the idea. The male protagonist is abusive & unlikable 67% of the time. Then „so sweet“ that it doesn‘t make sense. The female protagonist is an Alpha, who acts like an Alpha 23% of the time, when she isn‘t crying, writhing, or getting into a repetitive fight with the male protagonist. Characters need more substance. Story needs an actual storyline.
09/04/2023 12:54Amanda Neville
are your books part of a series or do they stand on their own I'm, about to start reading because they sound like great interesting stories I just wanted to make sure I start in the right in the right place
09/04/2023 12:51Victoria Aviles
why she so tough all of a sudden I'm sorry haven't really gotten Alpha vibes at all except right in the beginning of the book.
09/04/2023 12:49lunabug
I know this book underneath a different name on another app....its simply called Deimos
09/04/2023 12:11Amanda Gurganus-Rutherford
she seems weak and in an abusive relationship 😕
09/04/2023 12:07Louise
Thank you 😊 I've really enjoyed this first book! 📖 xxxxx 😘
09/04/2023 11:50Louise
💘 xxxxx 💕
09/04/2023 11:32Tasheka Moore
hope it continues to be good. great start for the first chapter. definitely going to finish this book
09/04/2023 11:21
Estela Delatorre
i hace read this book 2 times and it makes me want to scream get mad cry AND get annoyed its awsome
09/04/2023 10:28Delpha Williamson
I wander were this is going, should have let her fight,and then build the plot from there
09/04/2023 10:26Aloma Carey
kick him in his but
09/04/2023 10:24Cheri Schewaga
not worth the data it took to read this. A female alpha that is a weak ass trainwreck that is all over the place doesn't deserve the title of alpha. Shitty flat characters.
09/04/2023 10:20
Ella H
These female characters, whom are supposed to be Alpha, cries too much.
09/04/2023 10:06Brenda Hargett
For an Alpha Lumina wanting her strong status she’s is a freaking horney cry baby. King sexy he is an air headed Tarzan. Years this boring sex game was played like he was the virgin. Writer forgets that these werewolf’s are in human form 99.9 % of this story There inner wolf plays little part but their human part act like poodles in heat. I skipped most of it. same same same cry cry cry.
09/04/2023 10:04Debbie Dunn
can’t wait for the next chapter
09/04/2023 10:01Jennifer Hancock
forgive my ass! he’s an asshat and she deserves better
09/04/2023 09:59
Rebecca Krizan
I'm getting really annoyed at how hard headed Luminia is becoming... it is sad that she doesn't open her eyes knowing the battles Demios has had as well as herself I think she could be way more understanding but also the traditions of the pack should have been made clearer to her in the beginning
09/04/2023 09:55who could love such a man, but of course she will love him and forgive him anyway. isn't that how the books always goes 😠
09/04/2023 09:54
Lilly Flor
this is so self degradation, humiliation and disrespectful. why is she taking all of this?? Come on... this is ridiculous. I know there are a lot of relationship bated with abuse, but then keep writing this and making this female character so weak and worthless it's disgusting seriously 😥
09/04/2023 09:50one minute they outside swimming next minute they in the bed having sex.
09/04/2023 09:50Catherine Patrica Blakey
should be rises not riles
09/04/2023 09:45
sweet Ali
wow love ❤️ love it 😍
09/04/2023 09:43i dont like that Deimos dies
09/04/2023 09:35Jennifer Campbell
I c U. Do you C you? Who are you? oh now I C. A and B. A cup of tee for 3.
09/04/2023 09:35sorry the man is a asshole and yes she is an alpha
09/04/2023 09:34The Spud Squad
A wolf's yearning, she honestly needs to stop... the way she's acting is truly stupid. I understand the initial feelings and disappointment and hurt, but come on... kinda just being a b**ch at this point... like, he's trying. He's literally begging for forgiveness.
09/04/2023 09:31Robin Austin Haas
when can she grow up and act like a mate and Luna? the man has done so much because of his guilt, but she acts as if he so hard to get over,oh well why don't she just leave not like she hasn't left before
09/04/2023 09:31Catherine Kabat
why is it always the male that rejects the female? how about the other way around.make the female stronger and him wonder why. so predictable.
09/04/2023 09:31this is his beliefs, the way he was raised. How is following your upbringing so wrong. It's not like he cheated on her or followed through with the arrangement. He has yet to hold her ways and beliefs against her.
09/04/2023 09:29Robin Austin Haas
yeah I'm so happy
09/04/2023 09:28
Bubbie
" you are no Alpha, if you cannot do your female, " BOOM!!! Take that, Deimos!!! 1, Lumina, - 0, Deimos, DANMMMM!!!! take that, Deimos!😂😂😂
09/04/2023 09:14awesome job loved this story!!!! I was enthralled and couldn't put it down. I laughed I cried and thoroughly enjoyed it
09/04/2023 09:12Yes this is definitely definitely the way to start a book so ready to read the next chapter
09/04/2023 09:12Catherine Patrica Blakey
shall shall shall it’s so annoying
09/04/2023 09:11Catherine Patrica Blakey
you keep using shall it should be will x
09/04/2023 09:09Ellen Shazel
1 minute he's bare chested and the next she's scratching him through a shirt🤔
09/04/2023 09:09linda
It ends here, I Think this is so sad, I can't understand the sudden brake-up, yes she feels betrayed but to just cut all ties at this point feels like overreacting, hormone overdose. 😢🤷♀️
09/04/2023 09:00beautiful story
09/04/2023 08:59Ebai Agbor
ok
09/04/2023 08:58chapter you brought some tears
09/04/2023 08:55just whating to hear what happens next
09/04/2023 08:55Ebai Agbor
hahaha
09/04/2023 08:54
WatUpG
She needs to get over it forgive him for their traditions he didn't sleep with his chosen
09/04/2023 08:52Maricarmen Rivera
Loved this story ❤
09/04/2023 08:51Michelle Alvarado
Also, is Deimos autistic or something..?? All of a sudden he started acting like rain man. I'm not trying to be mean to the author because I do like her writing I just feel the female is weak and Deimos character took a weird turn of sorts
09/04/2023 08:50Reader-254912
I loved this story he may have been bad at first but just like life everyone has reasons as did Deimos so this book was very well written both character we let amazing and in the end love endures thank you Luna Liz and yes I’m enjoying Phobos as we speak it’s awesome too 👏👏👏💪🏼
09/04/2023 08:50
Gigi
I’m so done with this book. she has become so spoiled that she treats him like he is nothing to her. but he is wrong if he treated her that way. she needs to truly grow up.
09/04/2023 08:49I loved this story
09/04/2023 08:49💙💙 ...deimos’s pov was amazing. thank you Luna Liz
09/04/2023 08:48
