PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

  • Jennifer Andrus

    loving this!! please update soon

    07/15/2021 20:50

  • Anna Yocum

    I really like the style of this book. Even though I am looking forward to more chapters, I appreciate the quality of the writing.

    07/15/2021 17:11

  • Jordan Retzer

    when does the rest come?

    07/15/2021 03:58

  • Tiffany Moore

    I know this is probably premature but will there be a book about Coronus? I am in love with him and so want to see him with a mate!

    07/14/2021 21:02

  • A M Archibald

    Ok I'm about to start 'something is coming part 1,' but I have noticed that the story isn't matching what was stated in the prologue. In the Prologue it comes across as she had her first with Demios and didn't know Phobos was her mate until the present. Yet at this point in the story it is alluding to the fact her and Phobos has slept together yet it hasn't been shown. And Demios left and she hadn't seen him for a while until she does go and he met his mate. who then gets jealous and send her away. It's not consistent with what was said in the introduction. But I understand authors change their mind.

    07/14/2021 20:50

  • Nita

    Well after the way she flaunted herself with Deimos in front of Lumina I kind of don’t pitty Theia, but then the part where Phobos said those demeaning things to Theia I feel sorry for her there, but still doesn’t excuse her causing Lumina to feel the way she did at the time

    07/14/2021 03:05

  • Sky💕

    At what age can they start feeling the sparks from the mate bond? Did he know she was his mate but thought since she was to young she wouldn’t be able to feel it?

    07/14/2021 01:00

  • Angelica Monteon

    this is such a great story! eagerly await the updates! thanks for a great read

    07/14/2021 01:00

  • Nita

    I think out of both books Lumina is the only one who is outspoken it is frustrating how the others don’t speak out they dwell in their own insecurities & don’t communicate properly!

    07/14/2021 00:45

  • stacie williams

    I definitely like how this book is evolving. this series helps me understand Theia a bit more after the last book.I can’t wait to see some chapter from Phobos POV is silence and non Chaka to attitude is maddening. looking forward to the next chapters.

    07/14/2021 00:29

  • Nita

    Deimos was a real asshat for saying those demeaning things about his mate I’m glad she made him suffer when she set boundaries when the baby was born!

    07/14/2021 00:03

  • Nita

    it would be good to get more insight about Phobos instead of Theas POV because it’s hard to understand him & why he’s become this way towards her!

    07/13/2021 23:56

  • Elizabeth Karr

    This book is just as addictive as the 1st one.

    07/13/2021 21:54

  • Vanessa

    my nerves are on end again anticipating what's to come....I did not expect phobos to be so harsh in the way he extracted her from her pack!!!!! honestly I hope theia retains her softness while gaining strength....just from seeing how phobos reacts in these last chapters I think theias personality is needed to tame phobos and his pack!!! they would benefit from her strengths as well....are we going to see winnie reappear as well I bet he kept that bear as a constant reminder of hers all these years!!! also what is the significance of phobos pack language? ie why do they speak a diff language?

    07/13/2021 14:54

  • Carol Dionne

    I’m not slow by any means but geesh..I felt like I needed a dictionary to read these last 2 chapters 🥴

    07/13/2021 12:19

  • Lidiane Barros

    This is great!!! and here I was thinking they had reunited when he went to look after Deimos pack whilst they were in Italy but as I said I knew you would made it better!!! So much better…. amazing I love how he came for her out of the blue but I wonder what made him do that after so long ???? that must be a reason… also I know it’s part of his character but man … his silence drives me crazy 😂 wish we knew at least what goes on his head like his POV even if he doesn’t talk to her … anyway here I am already dying for the next chapter 😳😳😳😭😭😭 lol thank you for this Liz ❤️

    07/13/2021 08:03

  • TNB

    I looked at the notification in sheer excitement about being removed from that cliffhanger. it's now 1 am and here we are on yet another cliff. I'm clearly a glutton lol. I love the growth in Theia and how we get to see her being so selfless in comparison to the original view in the first story.

    07/13/2021 05:23

  • Ocey

    Aah the wait love the story praying for another chapter this week 😂, nervous to see what awaits beautiful gentle Theia at her new home and the challenges to come my heart hurts for her already (and to think I never liked her in TAVT, she has grown to be one of my favourite characters). TAVT was my fav but this is right up there with it amazing author.

    07/13/2021 04:50

  • Megsh826

    Seems like the writing style has changed a bit and some of the word choices feel forced in this newest chapter.

    07/13/2021 03:55

  • Reesons

    I feel like the abruptness of her departure could have been avoided if she had confided in someone. I understand her anger when Phobos spoke his truth about her not being worthy and although I believe Cronos knew they were moon blessed, I think he wanted Theia to admit it but she didn't. Her sudden departure would've been something that was expected even though unprepared for.

    07/13/2021 03:06

  • Queen M

    Luna Liz…how can you do this to me…so good, I am always left yearning for more.

    07/13/2021 02:58

  • sara moore

    as always , just when I need it ❤️

    07/13/2021 02:47

  • LC9

    I enjoyed it!! thank you for sharing your talents!!

    07/13/2021 02:15

  • Sky💕

    Aww…Him and Theia’s friendship is so cute when they were younger! ❤️

    07/13/2021 02:05

  • Trisha Reynolds

    thank you so much for this update it’s a great birthday gift. absolutely loving this journey

    07/13/2021 01:22

  • plazy

    OMG this new update has me!! Why has Phobos changed his mind? How many years has it been since she’s seen him when she was 18? AHHHH 😲

    07/13/2021 00:54

  • BexyCL

    I shall hold my breath for the journey that awaits our female. Luna Liz, I have faith in you.❤️

    07/13/2021 00:18

  • Sky💕

    Yes Luna with the warnings in the first chapter! 🙌🏾

    07/12/2021 02:08

  • Carol Dionne

    Luna Liz do you have a schedule you follow when you update? it helps so I won’t check every hour for an update 😩

    07/11/2021 12:24

  • Danny Rizzo

    This is torture waiting for the chapters

    07/11/2021 03:09

  • Ready Reader 1

    Sounds like Cronus is speaking of another prophesy Luna. Will Phobos finally come for his female. Put poor Theia out of her misery and false happiness.

    07/11/2021 02:36

  • Anna Yocum

    is this book a prequel to another book?

    07/11/2021 00:57

  • Lucy Xiong

    okay I’ve been reading all the comments🤣 I’m so glad I can talk about the book here and especially with you Luna. not sure if my females understands my love for this book. but I know this is the place where females can relate to my love of the stories here.💕

    07/10/2021 21:25

  • Tina

    Luna Liz I think u should publish this book so I Can have a hard copy on my book shelf!!! can't wait for more

    07/10/2021 17:34

  • Vanessa

    Luna Liz phobos and theias encounter was better than I could have imagined...loved the chapters and the way they were written!!!! your cliffhangers are going to make me insane because I just keep checking the app for updates lol...are we going to learn why he has the scar across his eye and why does he barely talks? he has really changed from when he saw her at 18 years of age...

    07/10/2021 16:33

  • Samantha Johnson

    I need all these on hardback copies. They are soooooooo addictive and thrilling omg

    07/10/2021 16:15

  • Bria Kanuho

    how old is theia in this.?.

    07/10/2021 15:35

  • BluezCluez

    caught up on the last 12 chapters 🔥🔥🔥 i was happy to see that deimos and Theia didnt have a sexual relationship like i assumed in Deimos’s book. i feel for her because of how Phobos treated her. i’m glad she found friends. i feel like the stirm is when Phobos’s beast will claim her.

    07/10/2021 15:25

  • Lidiane Barros

    Liz !!!!! I have no words ❤️ I apologise you must be tired of me but just so you understand my love and appreciation for your work because believe me I am not like this normally 😂 here I am waking up at 2am UK time to have water and I see a notification of nee chapter I am like “yesss that was quick amazing I will read tomorrow / Saturday “ lay in bed after 15min I realised I wouldn’t be able to sleep anymore until I read the new chapters 😂😂😂 I am such a loser! thank you for the amazing updates but what a cliffhanger 😢 can’t wait for more 🙏🏻❤️ !

    07/10/2021 11:02

  • LC9

    👀what is coming? Phobos? Is Phobos coming for Theia?? I can’t wait to see what happens next!!

    07/10/2021 07:22

  • TNB

    Will we see Cronus story next? No rush at all, I absolutely love the character development and how we get to see each ones pain and motivations.

    07/10/2021 06:37

  • TNB

    😫😫😫 you torture me so good!

    07/10/2021 06:16

  • Angel Kowal

    I wish the something that was coming was more chapters 😭😁

    07/10/2021 03:53

  • Cindy Griffin

    👏👏👏

    07/10/2021 03:28

  • Trisha Reynolds

    wow what a cliffhanger.

    07/10/2021 03:23

  • Susan Pearson

    always amazing

    07/10/2021 03:14

  • plazy

    oh yes Luna Liz, something IS coming and.. dare I say that I am quite excited 😇

    07/10/2021 03:00

  • Rachel Moye

    totally engulfed! so happy you have been updating it more frequently 😘 thank you!!!

    07/10/2021 01:06

  • Cat Ann

    Just a little feedback because it is quite off-putting in the latest three chapters but the writing is overly verbose. several unusual words appear very out of place (e.g. clemently, benevolently and succor to name a few). The words are uncommon and tend to become the focal point of the entire sentence thus losing the reader. Likewise, the use of -ing and -ly words should oft be kept to a minimum. For example, instead of ‘benevolently’ a better word choice would have been ‘warmly’ or ‘with warmth’ (if you want to avoid using -ly ending words). “I looked at her benevolently as…” “I looked at her with warmth (in my eyes) as…” I don’t mind the use of referring to eye color often but orbs and globes are somewhat overly fluffy. If you said eyes, it makes for a easier flow for the reader. The latest three chapters today have been the ones too focused on heavy and overly complicated prose. It seems unusual and makes the story less believable (because people talk simpler in every day life). I’m sorry but it seems a bit over the top (perhaps not for a period piece sent in medieval times). I hope you don’t mind the criticism but I have enjoyed your excellent variety of words in the previous chapters!

    07/10/2021 00:39

  • LC9

    I just started reading this and I love how you are putting their childhood in this. it’s not only telling Phobos and Theia’s story but it’s helping connect the unsaid parts about Deimos that Lumina may have not yet learned about him. I love it!

    07/09/2021 08:09

  • LC9

    love your warning!!

    07/08/2021 20:15

  • Mawusi Ford

    wow reading this Theia is nothing like Lumina had her pictured initially. wow beautifully written

    07/08/2021 19:04

  • Lidiane Barros

    oh Liz I tried I really tried not to read the new chapters now - I promised myself I would wait for the weekend so I wouldn’t wait much longer for morr because I knew it would only make me crave more … and I of course failed !!!!! ahhhh these were so good I can’t wait for when Phobos comes back I guess is when he needs to look after Deimos’ pack but I wonder why was she there ?!!! I am getting ahead of myself I know 😂😂 but no matter what I imagine I know you will make so much better Liz 🥰🥰🥰🥰 thank you hope the next update will be soon 🙏🏻🙏🏻❤️❤️🔥🔥

    07/08/2021 15:11

  • Queen M

    I am so excited for the next update. I hope it brings us to when Phobos and Theia reconnect. Can’t wait for another steamy interaction.

    07/08/2021 14:22

  • Trisha Reynolds

    I’m almost wanting theia to become strong and when Phobos comes again for her to treat him the same and sent him. who needs a man anyway. she has been through so much hurt and may never have trust in men again but that is what may give her her strength

    07/08/2021 12:26

  • Miss Moondust

    Oh my heart. I never thought I would empathise with Theia ❤️

    07/08/2021 09:12

  • Serrah Stambaugh

    I love that we finally get a description of Lumina and I am so loving this book so far as I am still madly in love with ATVT

    07/08/2021 08:53

  • Astridoll Tips

    alright, everything good with a innocent theia but, Deimos confessed lumina that he gave her that ring as a present for her preparation as his Luna, because the pack needed one and he hadn’t found his mate. She went there knowing about her being the possible Luna of the pack, which means she was going to BE with Deimos. Now all of a sudden they’re just friends and Theia never knew she was being prepared to be Deimos’ Luna. -.-

    07/08/2021 05:44

  • Angel Kowal

    Chapter 25-26 hit a nerve for me and my feminist side resurfaced. Why must a woman always feel the need to prove their worth to a man, no wonder so many of us are broken. Ugh, I'm so over the male species. lol

    07/08/2021 05:28

  • YanyRose

    and to think that in Deimos’ story we saw Theia as someone who was bitter and trying to make Lumina jealous … definitely two sides to everything! LOVE THIS STORY!! ♥️

    07/08/2021 04:12

  • susanashley

    Amazing as always!!

    07/08/2021 03:25

  • sara moore

    you are my new favorite writer. Thank you so much for today’s update. I needed something good today and you delivered. Your talent is beyond so many others I have read on these apps. Please never stop writing !

    07/08/2021 02:15

  • olliesea_bengals

    I’m really enjoying Phobos so far! I also like the 2-3 chapter updates! I love your method of storytelling a lot too.

    07/08/2021 01:25

  • plazy

    UGHHH my little heart! after reading some of the comments and replies… I feel as though my heart might give out with any chapter update 😭

    07/08/2021 00:41

  • Angel Kowal

    I feel like Haunted - Part II should be conclude with this song. Cannons - Fire for you. ❤ https://youtu.be/DVOmxLxmXuY

    07/07/2021 15:50

  • Queen M

    I so thirsty for a new Chapter…I am have to go back a read TAVT but I think we are in the present timeline now…great work Luna Liz…the story is developing beautiful and with the right pace…I appreciate you not rushing and sweating the small details and deep character insight. I understand Theia so much more now and understand why she did what she did.

    07/06/2021 23:22

  • Sammy Bunting

    My heart breaks for theia... I know we are catching up book 1 when theia visits deimos.. I am looking forward to seeing her story play out an Di hope she finds her inner strength xx

    07/06/2021 22:58

  • Vanessa

    how old is theia now? also darn even cronus does not think her and phobos are a good match that is sad :'(

    07/06/2021 19:16

  • Trisha Reynolds

    my heart is breaking for her please send her someone to love her a second chance mate. why hasn’t Phobos just rejected her instead of leaving her like this.

    07/06/2021 18:12

  • Lisa Jackson Fernandez

    love this when are updates

    07/06/2021 16:48

  • 123456

    Hey Liz just finish Demios and Lumina story... ohhh myyyy I just loved it so much it brought me laughs,, sadness, joy so many emotions I can not wait to read Phobos and Theia story but I will wait the story gets a little bit further because I get to anxious waiting 🤣🤣🤣 but I have the book in my personaly library just waiting for more chapter firts. Just want to tell you, you are amazing!

    07/06/2021 14:10

  • Elle 🧿

    Whoop about to start this story 💗. Just wondering, it says that it has 22 chapters in total, please tell me this isn’t the length of the story and it will be longer 🙊🤭? If so, do you think you’ll make it a similar length as TAVT? Thanks, a greedy reader 😂🤭😂

    07/05/2021 20:13

  • Cat Ann

    Hey just curious how frequent are the updates? This is an awesome story. I particularly like the broad range of terms and prose. It’s really well written!

    07/05/2021 04:14

  • linda

    after which chapter did the book lock? I don't know where I was anymore, HELP! 🙈🙏🙈🙏🙈

    07/04/2021 12:31

  • Misty Sweat

    luv it so far. can't wait for updates

    07/04/2021 00:09

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    ah so now I see why she feels phobos will never accept her. her first qas not him but deimos!

    07/03/2021 17:40

  • Sofia Ricci

    Thanks Luna for these wonderful books, I love the way you write and develop the characters. I loved the first book, but now I really very very intrigued by Phobos, I can't wait for the next chapter. Big hug

    07/01/2021 17:23

  • Angel Kowal

    I wish Phobos was the one to take Theia's virginity, but based on the previous book sounds like it will be his brother instead. 😞🙁

    07/01/2021 02:24

  • Elsa Rodarte

    Hello my Luna! I love your writing, love these 2 stories! I can feel their emotions! Patiently waiting. 💕

    07/01/2021 02:15

  • Binge Reader

    so if so am readi g tho correctly Thia now understands that she is Phobos’ mate but feels rejected by him, this eventually leading her to turn to Deimos.

    07/01/2021 00:40

  • Bianca Yetzke

    what is the update schedule? I can’t wait!!!

    06/30/2021 15:04

  • Queen M

    Amazing writing Luna Liz, I love how you don’t leave plot holes...like I can see the path to why they where not together earlier. I can see why Theia reaction to Phobes in TAVT is more intense, she doesn’t have her wolf yet...she only feels the human part of the bond. I am excited for more. I will wait patiently and can’t wait for the TAVT epilogue.

    06/30/2021 14:39

  • Lidiane Barros

    well once again Liz amazing and please never apologise for long chapters its the opposite when I saw there were 3 almost cried of joy !!! thank you … ans like everyone said already we can now see why both of then reacted the way they did and the reasons behind it sadly hurting each other - I feel deeply for Phobos for she only discovered he his her mate but he has known for almost 10 years or so and could never act on it … now he just realised he won’t be able to take her and we know it will take a few more years until they reunite again and still wont be a loving reunion gosh Phobos 😭 poor you not being able to be with his mate for so long…. can’t wait for more I know you busy but please try to not make us wait much 🙏🏻🥰🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️ thanks

    06/30/2021 14:01

  • Tiffy84

    Oh my GOSH!! I absolutely love these books and these brothers! They are very complex males that have emotional hardships. It's sad to see parts of what leads to Phobos being the way he is in TAVT. Phobos lobes Theia dearly, that's the reason he won't/can't take her to his pack. Deimos was a douchebag to Lumina from the beginning. ith brothers have communication issues that stemmed from their father and I hate that for them.

    06/30/2021 05:11

  • olliesea_bengals

    I low key didn’t like Theia in the first book and now, especially these last few chapters, make me see Theia in a new light and I feel bad for her. She just wanted to be loved and instead is left feeling rejected and dejected. it makes her affair with Deimos make more sense - she just wanted to be love for who she is and Phobos broke her heart and spirit in more ways than one.

    06/30/2021 01:34

  • 4amcripple

    I love it so much, but the slow updates kill me!!!!

    06/30/2021 00:50

  • Vanessa

    omg I am feeling the same desires as phobos but my desire is for more chapters!!!! lol I read these last 3 four times over!!!! it is like an addiction!! lol

    06/30/2021 00:50

  • Rachel Moye

    I love it!! I love how beastly he is!!! 😍 cannot wait for more 😁

    06/30/2021 00:21

  • Mìtsy

    omg I love it 😍 will there be more this week? 🥺 I don’t know if my soul can wait till next week 🥵🤭

    06/30/2021 00:00

  • Mel West

    oh my WORD!!! Liz, I cannot believe that you can write with so much passion and empathy! I cried for Theia and I also understand some of what Phobos is going through, I just wish he would explain to her in actual words what is going on. And I also think that she is a little clueless with somethings, but I feel that is her parents’ fault for sheltering her. I can’t wait for the story to unfold! you truly are a talented writer. Amazing

    06/30/2021 00:00

  • Roni S

    Thea knew her her moon blessed was, yet she allowed herself to develop feelings for Deimos. This explains the sentiments she expressed at the end of TAVT.

    06/29/2021 23:53

  • plazy

    AHHHHH! Its about time he shows up! Now what… is he going to leave again, stay away for a few more years until HE thinks she’s “ready”??? hmmm

    06/29/2021 21:25

  • Petr Kulfan

    Just quick question. My male part 2: is it 'Můj' and 'Drahý' in Czech language they speak or did you miss type it? Just asking, it is my language and it surprised me

    06/29/2021 20:58

  • Lucy Xiong

    omg I love it!!! I’m going to read it over again. I can’t wait for more...😍

    06/29/2021 20:42

  • Trisha Reynolds

    so Phobos is just going to take his pack over his love for her. why doesn’t he just reject her now and let her move on. stupid men

    06/29/2021 19:38

  • TNB

    Listen Luna Liz, at this point I love you so I'm fully comfortable saying you're teasing me and I don't like it. I just spent my lunch break reading the update and am now upset that I don't have anymore to read.

    06/29/2021 18:57

  • Zora Parker

    these males and their stupid pack traditions… first Deimos now Phobos. neither deserve their females!

    06/29/2021 18:35

  • Missy

    Hello Luna Liz. When is the next update please?

    06/29/2021 08:54

  • Lucy Xiong

    I’m so excited to know their story!!! Makes me so eager to know what is next.

    06/29/2021 02:50

  • ty_die04

    I’m so excited 😆 I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!!

    06/29/2021 01:02
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