PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

Female Alpha Skye

As always, I am smitten with your writing💕

Bonib2

Ohhh I can't wait for Theia and Phobos' reconnecting.

Ashleigh Morton

Why the sudden/scheduled visits to Phobos’ pack when they were children?

these males and their stupid pack traditions… first Deimos now Phobos. neither deserve their females!

Anna

ooo Luna Lyz you’ve done it again ….Mojie…. Phobos not matter how thick or tall your wall is Theia will tear it down one brick at a time. Loved this chapter, thank you 🙏

poor theia - my heart hurt for her when phobos uttered his first sentence to her. hopedully his walls go down and he learns to communicate with her. i’m glad he felt something when theia was watching the 3 women. im more ecstatic that he claimed theia when that female wanted her to have sex with her. looking forward to the next update

Queen M

Luna Liz, please write a Chapter from Phobos point of view of the moment Theia feels the bond as an 8 year old there is so much there

so ready for more of this!!!

is anyone having an issue where u purchased the chapters and now it is asking you to repurchase?

Tina

I need to read slower 😩😫😭

I literally check for an update everyday 😂😭…. so ready for the next chapters

Yessss!!! I love all of those so much!! so glad we got so many chapters and that he is letting her in!!! :D

Susan Pearson

How does this time frame relate to Deimos's book? In his book Theia and Deimos have feelings for each other etc. Yet Deimos is still here in there pack yet to have his own pack.

oh nooo 😭😭 that’s was hard to read I don’t think my heart is ready for what must be coming... he is gonna distance himself from her i know 😭😭 ❤️

Mel

I CAN NOOOOOT WAIT, this is literally my favourite book right now, waiting for updates is killing me, I literally look every single day 😓🥰

Cruel Luna for leaving us with such a tantalizing cliff hanger 😘💚

ah just noticed another chapter..things are about to get interesting!!!! I am really going to have to practice self restraint to not check for updates constantly!!!!

Luna you naughty naughty female you almost had me thinking Argus was his love child, lol. I really hope Theia finds her voice and this story doesn't become the werewolves version of 'Normal People' that series was so frustrating, to a point that I loathed it.

I don't remember the last time I enjoyed a story this much!! I adore Theia - she's not a typical pushover female character but she still has a good heart.

oh Theia you keep looking for faults in Phobos! the other male was prepared to harm you & insult you!

Amber-lee Stewart

is it me or the writing has changed. I’m finding it hard to read and fallow now.

Phobos also said basically the pack would choose his mate. I’m wondering if he told Theia that because he felt she wasn’t ready yet. It’s holes in his story 👀. Theia is down to try anything once she is definitely getting in where she fits in.

luna liz the whole use of the horse scene was very clever :-) I also found it interesting that the horse was comfortable with theia is this because of the whole soul aspect where theia and phobos share the same soul each a part of the other and the horse can sense this so he is accepting of her?

Monica Prouty

I love reading theia’s POV and comparing it to demios and lumina’s story

Joseph W. Chuck

i cant wait for the next chapter . soon please

I just gotta say I love the choice of names. Greak God twin brothers. One meaning dread and terror and the other fear and panic.

Rizza Bess

I am loving this plot! I was explaining it to my husband. he’s still confused as too why I’m so intrigued...men🙄. I can wait for the updates!

Cassi1234

so I’m loving this just as much!

Carol Dionne

Luna Liz…I just love how you address and answer everyone’s questions with such calmness and understanding..A TRUE Luna👸🏽!!!

Trisha Reynolds

I’m really at a loss for words. still not a Phobos fan

gosh!!! when is the next update??!! Does anyone know how often LL updates? I’ve only just started reading this book and am desperate already!!!

Sounds like Cronus is speaking of another prophesy Luna. Will Phobos finally come for his female. Put poor Theia out of her misery and false happiness.

my nerves are on end again anticipating what's to come....I did not expect phobos to be so harsh in the way he extracted her from her pack!!!!! honestly I hope theia retains her softness while gaining strength....just from seeing how phobos reacts in these last chapters I think theias personality is needed to tame phobos and his pack!!! they would benefit from her strengths as well....are we going to see winnie reappear as well I bet he kept that bear as a constant reminder of hers all these years!!! also what is the significance of phobos pack language? ie why do they speak a diff language?

I feel like the abruptness of her departure could have been avoided if she had confided in someone. I understand her anger when Phobos spoke his truth about her not being worthy and although I believe Cronos knew they were moon blessed, I think he wanted Theia to admit it but she didn't. Her sudden departure would've been something that was expected even though unprepared for.

Queen M

Luna Liz…how can you do this to me…so good, I am always left yearning for more.

Ok, so Phobos two shadows I think is the friends he spoke about to Thiea when they were little and the guy she said didn’t speak to her is the guy who can’t speak at all and she has to use sign language to communicate. There is a girl as well, I wonder if she is the one Thiea was talking about his heart belongs to someone else when her and Lumina was talking. Because he did say they was the closest. Just thinking lol 🙃

I’m assuming that Phobos has heard the rumors too 😔 I feel soo bad for her for he is treating her unfairly. - Impure

Aww…Him and Theia’s friendship is so cute when they were younger! ❤️

Jennifer Andrus

loving this!! please update soon

No he didn’t threatened my Cronus! And how you mad because she don’t want to go with you. I’m glad Theia is standing strong by her choice. He mad his and said she was not worthy. Not make him work for it Thiea girl.

A M Archibald

Ok I'm about to start 'something is coming part 1,' but I have noticed that the story isn't matching what was stated in the prologue. In the Prologue it comes across as she had her first with Demios and didn't know Phobos was her mate until the present. Yet at this point in the story it is alluding to the fact her and Phobos has slept together yet it hasn't been shown. And Demios left and she hadn't seen him for a while until she does go and he met his mate. who then gets jealous and send her away. It's not consistent with what was said in the introduction. But I understand authors change their mind.

Poor Theia has been through a lot. That long ass travel time, then she get there and the older lady treating her like a piece of meat. Just prepping her to be bedded and not answering any questions. That place is barbaric! Phobos was just going to treat their first night together as if it’s a one night stand. No foreplay, no kisses, and nothing romantic. I’m glad she slapped him and spoke her mind. He should ask her if she has been with someone else. not assume that she had.

So her parents wasn’t aware that he was her mate, but he and his father knew. I wonder how they knew. I’m sure I will find out lol. Also is the age gap between them 9 years apart?

BexyCL

I shall hold my breath for the journey that awaits our female. Luna Liz, I have faith in you.❤️

oh my god! I’m sooo glad Theia stood up for herself! 🙏🏻 I have a feeling Theia is A LOT stronger than we think!!! 💃🏻

A M Archibald

Chapter 10: Still with the childhood. The thing with this, it makes the story seem relatively slow and can make a reader enjoy this relationship. The slowness can make it boring. There's nothing wrong with age gaps, but at the moment in time the girl is 8, and the boy is 17. It is uncomfortable to know that he is of a different mindset right now. I think the saving grace is that it is all in her POV. I believe if the blurb were different and gave more mystery, then it would feel different. Thanks to the blurb, we know Pronos is her mate, which lets us know that what he has at the moment is romantic feelings for an 8yr old.

Whew give a tissue warning! I felt that slap and it was well deserved.

Will we see Cronus story next? No rush at all, I absolutely love the character development and how we get to see each ones pain and motivations.

😫😫😫 you torture me so good!

Carol Dionne

Luna Liz do you have a schedule you follow when you update? it helps so I won’t check every hour for an update 😩

A M Archibald

I'm on chapter 5, and it's still set in the past. How long will this continue for? Usually, things like this last maybe a chapter or two or are put as a flashback in a scene.

Poor Demios! It seems he had it worse as a kid. Now I know why he was the way he was. You can't love if you have never been loved. And that's not to say his parents didn't love him, but he was only taught to be tough and not to be weak. Sadly, he went through that, but it made him a great father. Because he learned what not to do with his son! ❤️

ninja

I am loving this book way more than the first. looking forward to see how the story goes!!! cannot wait for an update ♥️

Chapter 25-26 hit a nerve for me and my feminist side resurfaced. Why must a woman always feel the need to prove their worth to a man, no wonder so many of us are broken. Ugh, I'm so over the male species. lol

Missy

Hello Luna Liz. When is the next update please?

I looked at the notification in sheer excitement about being removed from that cliffhanger. it's now 1 am and here we are on yet another cliff. I'm clearly a glutton lol. I love the growth in Theia and how we get to see her being so selfless in comparison to the original view in the first story.

sara moore

you are my new favorite writer. Thank you so much for today’s update. I needed something good today and you delivered. Your talent is beyond so many others I have read on these apps. Please never stop writing !

loving ALL the characters and the way you make them out to be Luna Liz! everything is falling into place with the way the story is evolving so far. theia was perceived a little different in TAVT but now we see her true intentions and feelings. ♥️ this book is my new addiction and I can’t get any work done because I tend to check for updates every half hour 😅

oh my WORD!!! Liz, I cannot believe that you can write with so much passion and empathy! I cried for Theia and I also understand some of what Phobos is going through, I just wish he would explain to her in actual words what is going on. And I also think that she is a little clueless with somethings, but I feel that is her parents’ fault for sheltering her. I can’t wait for the story to unfold! you truly are a talented writer. Amazing

Trisha Reynolds

my heart is breaking for her please send her someone to love her a second chance mate. why hasn’t Phobos just rejected her instead of leaving her like this.

omg I love it 😍 will there be more this week? 🥺 I don’t know if my soul can wait till next week 🥵🤭

and to think that in Deimos’ story we saw Theia as someone who was bitter and trying to make Lumina jealous … definitely two sides to everything! LOVE THIS STORY!! ♥️

Elle 🧿

Whoop about to start this story 💗. Just wondering, it says that it has 22 chapters in total, please tell me this isn’t the length of the story and it will be longer 🙊🤭? If so, do you think you’ll make it a similar length as TAVT? Thanks, a greedy reader 😂🤭😂

caught up on the last 12 chapters 🔥🔥🔥 i was happy to see that deimos and Theia didnt have a sexual relationship like i assumed in Deimos’s book. i feel for her because of how Phobos treated her. i’m glad she found friends. i feel like the stirm is when Phobos’s beast will claim her.

what is the update schedule? I can’t wait!!!

I wish Phobos was the one to take Theia's virginity, but based on the previous book sounds like it will be his brother instead. 😞🙁

rocknrollqueen91

Is this story happier than your other book? I just want to have some warning before I start

I know I shouldn’t but I am. genuinely checking at least 3 times a day for another chappy 😂😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️

Missy

Did Deimos and Theia had a sexual relationship with each other? As I remember, Ragon told Lumina that they were lovers. If they were, no wonder Phobos deemed Theia unworthy 🤭

so if so am readi g tho correctly Thia now understands that she is Phobos’ mate but feels rejected by him, this eventually leading her to turn to Deimos.

G2 love 💖 it, can't wait for the next chapter xxx

Nowiba

I love the way you explained their beginnings. It’s all finally making sense now. looking forward to updates weekly daily hourly. At this stage I’ll take what I can get as I’m so hooked🤣🤣

AHHH! I can’t wait to read what happens next! How will they meet again, under what circumstances, who might be around…ahhh 🤯

D. Feeney

is that phobos finished ?x

The care and attention that you always place into developing your characters has me completely spellbound . I didn’t think I’d find Theia and Phobos’s story as engaging as Deimos and Lumina’s, but I was so very, very wrong!

natasha wakeford

love the books. although I'm sure Phobos didn't wait for his mate, I'm sure something with Moira whom he stated he is closest too must of happened. 🤫

♥️ by far one of my favorite books!! ♥️

Robin

Phobos leaving has me in tears. Poor Theia. She lost her best friend. 8 years and no contact. So sad

sara moore

I am so happy I found your books. it’s been a while since I was excited about a series again!

is there another book that goes along with this story? 😃

I love it! back story for the first book! brilliant 🥰

I nearly screamed when I came around this book 😭👏🏻 my favorite Luna Liz is back with Deimos brother and I couldn’t be more excited

Anna Perez

im excited and looking forward to reading this book! reading the comments have definitely peaked my intrest!🙂

Bonib2

I'm addicted to Deimos and now Phobos😍😍. Excited for the next update!!❤❤❤

Shannon Paterno

I am loving this book too! I just love the way you write!!

Nikita

Any update on when you will continue this book