PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

  • TNB

    h..how could you leave me with this cliffhanger?! 😫😫😫😫 Imma wait patiently though

    09/09/2021 03:13

  • Christine Monsour

    omg this chappy.. hot and steamy to a box of tissues... they really do need to communicate.. especially phobos!

    09/09/2021 02:45

  • blocartil

    Love reading this book! Thank you!❤❤❤

    09/09/2021 02:34

  • Reader-254912

    it’s not enough 😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫I can’t wait to see the next chapter oh you definitely out did yourself this time wow is all I can say 🤤

    09/09/2021 02:08

  • BexyCL

    we were doing so well!😩💔 Luna please! make the aching stop!😭❤️

    09/09/2021 01:50

  • Susan Pearson

    OoooMmmGgg!!! Luna!!! I thought they were getting better 😪😪 The struggle is hurting me and giving me anxiety. Phobos needs the silent treatment, no homemade food and a knife thrown at his face again. I'm about ready to say live with Moira. Plus, why can't we get poor Awan a mate 😕

    09/09/2021 01:48

  • Samantha Cokuslu

    ahhhh Phobos makes me so mad! ugh just when things were getting better 😭😭💔

    09/09/2021 01:47

  • LC9

    Omgosh!! what is it with Phobos kissing her!! she needs to ask him if he won’t tell her. this was so good!

    09/09/2021 01:21

  • WatUpG

    They need to talk be truthful get it on

    09/09/2021 00:51

  • 13ang

    make phobos work for it he needs to be put through some training on how to be a real mate

    09/09/2021 00:27

  • Stacey Burrows

    she needs to sack up and tell him that hes wrong to assume that she's not pure

    09/09/2021 00:20

  • WatUpG

    I'm loving this read killing me waiting on updates 💜🙏

    09/08/2021 22:48

  • Anna Yocum

    Are there people like this in real life so bad at communication? I would be hurt too, extremely hurt, but my immediate reaction would be to ask "why?!" and watch him closely. Even if he refused to answer his reaction would give her some answers. What's the point of living in a place you dislike, surrounded by people you dislike, and not try to clear the air at least with Phobos, the only reason she is there?

    09/08/2021 22:20

  • sara moore

    I am doing my best to leave this book alone so I can read chapters at a time but as soon as I see it has been updated I cannot help it. ❤️

    09/08/2021 22:09

  • 4amcripple

    no update next week and left on a cliffhanger. I'm starting to hate this app more and more.....

    09/08/2021 21:59

  • Reader-148264

    omg this is going to be a long frustrated week🤣🤣🤣🤣🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️

    09/08/2021 21:52

  • Helena Darovaná

    Czech is such harf language. I speak it and I hate it. I know more things about english then czech.

    09/08/2021 21:46

  • Reader-458723

    lord what good reason can he possibly have for refusing to kiss her

    09/08/2021 21:43

  • Jessica Mallow

    just starting to read this book, I thought I remembered theia and lumina’s meeting going a bit differently in deimo’s book

    09/08/2021 12:45

  • Krystal Morgan

    what days do u typically update? I'm trying to set up my schedule so ik what days to expect updates for each of the books im reading

    09/08/2021 01:22

  • Francesca Yepikhina

    I don’t know if this will be answered but I have been dying since reading TAVT - why isn’t Phobos the alpha of alphas if he is first born and in a very strict society as Demios was always siting the rules?

    09/08/2021 00:58

  • Mintyjoon

    omg I can’t wait!! I love this book! 😫

    09/07/2021 11:16

  • Saydi Hunter

    Thank you for introducing us to Awan!! I knew you would soon, and you definitely did not disappoint! Thank you for Theia’s promise being kept and her learning to sign specially for Awan just like to told Phobos she would! I can’t help but imagine the beam that will light Phobos’ face when he learns her truth! He will be proud of his female! Thank you for the diary entries! I’m not sure how you could work it in but I would love to see more in the future seeing as it is like our only inside glimpse of Phobos’ soul. I love seeing him like that! I’m soooooo sad he lost that part of himself. This is what he meant when came for Theia and told her she did not understand what he had been through. Also why he could not dicern her emotions and asked her if she really wanted him to leave, he couldnt read her, and she communicated poorly and immaturely. Cronus said he left emotionless, but he had nothing to go off of, and thought that was her truth. Hence why he didnt fight for her! SO SAD!!! Sooooooo misunderstood! He was right to leave her both times. If they couldn’t even offer him solace during the death of his parents their is no way Theia could have made it in her younger years having not trained and even with training she needed the nuturing of her pack, parents, and brother. Phobos though being her mate could not have given her that nor her pack. but hes right her soul was burdened because he was mate and i believe her sould knew early on, hence her longing for him. However, Theia is slowly coming into her own, and I believe Vudce sees her as Phobos always has. Im not worried about Moira, she extremely genuine and kind to both Theia and Phobos! Is she lonely maybe, but thats nothing that Theia hasnt done. I trust Phobos and his promises to Theia for that was all he had of her. There is no honor in that, especially since he knew exactly who his moon blessed was and where she resided! I love Phobos and believe him to be an honorable male. I am so excited for his return and their budding realationship! Not excited about whatever truth is spilt/not spilt to keep them still at bay though. But as always you will make all the emotions worth the read! Can’t wait for the King to return!! 😍🥰

    09/06/2021 21:50

  • Alexus Winder

    what’s the update schedule?

    09/06/2021 18:10

  • Miss Moondust

    so excited to see them reunited once again and hopefully bonding and communicating their feelings to one another. the suspense is killing me. 😩

    09/06/2021 15:34

  • Jordan Retzer

    I think we get an update today 🙏 she said the king returns Monday!!! so excited

    09/06/2021 13:39

  • Sky💕

    Yes, Thiea! Warrior princess 💪🏾🙌🏾. Love how she’s coming up with fun stuff for the kids to do ❤️. Thiea can learn a lot from them, but they also can learn so much from Thiea. Aww, her friendship with Awan is cute! Theia is the sweetest! Not a Squirrel for a pet sis 😂. Lumina 🙌🏾,dang you left off where she was being a bitch to Demos. I couldn’t stand her for this. Aww, his diary entries are so cute. But that last one! Now she knows why he had to leave her.

    09/06/2021 03:50

  • Sky💕

    Not her going in heat while he’s gone 😩💔.I hope they didn’t give her something that can cause problems with her getting pregnant later on down the line. They already don’t like her. Does Phobos feel the pain she’s going through? And Moria and the wicked lady are close, wondering if she wanted Phobos and Moria to mate? Is this why she gives my Thiea a hard time?

    09/06/2021 02:12

  • Rodleen Dalli

    will we have another update this week pls? say that you do.🙏🙏🙏

    09/05/2021 22:13

  • Reader-119061

    can’t wait!

    09/05/2021 21:40

  • Sky💕

    I’m sick of this hot and cold. I get that he probably has a lot on his mind, but got damn can she get a hello or a good morning. I’m sick of the disrespect! Instead of speaking to his female first he speaks to Moria 😒. He never informs Thiea on what the hell is going on. Hell at this point Drakho is more her mate then Phobos 🤦🏾‍♀️. Oh hell naw me and the female leader would have been fighting. But this is all Phobos fault! Phobos wack! Don’t be mad that she’s trying to show off her skills to Drakho!

    09/05/2021 21:25

  • Ocey

    Gosh those diary entries 🥺🥰…but wonder how much he changed when his beast had control during that time of weakness - did he maybe forget any of his promises?! Cruel pack, how could they not console him when he lost his parents - but I guess they don’t know otherwise assuming they lack emotional awareness/ connection and love as Theia said earlier - makes sense, while Phobos showed affection with e.g. freesia scene the other couples were more animalistic/ sexual. Glad Moira was there to support him during that hard time, I have grown to like her but not completely on her side yet. I have my fingers crossed he did stay true to Theia 😬 (totally giving him the benefit of the doubt, and if he didn’t I don’t think it was ‘her’ Phobos rather it was his beast). Awan what a beautiful character, so is Drakho and Vudce I kind of like now too 😂. I love that Theia’s purpose for proving herself has changed. Overly nervous for the crash we know is coming!

    09/05/2021 15:01

  • Sky💕

    Dang…is he going to take her ass food everyday? Does she not have food or cook? Omg I’ve said this before but ima say it again. I love Drakho, I absolutely adore how he treats Thiea. I screamed at the chickens chasing her 🤣. They could have at least showed her first. Phobos to the rescue! Cronus is not feeling Phobos at all 🤣. Aww he kept the bear. I’m loving that he is being affectionate with her! ❤️

    09/05/2021 14:23

  • Reader-402579

    I came across this story only the other day. and have subsequently devoured it at speed. now I must wait as your updates come through. can’t wait to read more ♥️

    09/05/2021 12:34

  • Lidiane Barros

    My dear Lizzy what an amazing weekend suprise I was starting to not enjoy my weekends enough because the wait for Tuesday was always in mind but last night I couldn’t be happier that I could go to bed and read the new chappies 🙌🏻❤️ Thank you so much. Having sad that what a beautiful update I love what she is doing with the pack I love Awan … I can’t wait to see how Phobos will react to these changes. I am though slightly worried about the kind of “support” Moira gave him when he lost his parents … I have said it before but I truly hope Phobos stayed true and pure to Theia as males usually dont nad this would be extremely special. Thank you again Lizzy ❤️🙏🏻❤️🙏🏻

    09/05/2021 08:04

  • Queen M

    @Luna Liz….thank you for The Weeknd surprise. I totally expected to have to wait until Monday or Tuesday. I loved Theia the warrior queen that is being birth. I need to know what the other journals say…does he still journal. Mora’s reveal about Phobos…so much meat in this small but might chapter. Excited for the Kings return

    09/05/2021 04:23

  • Serrah Stambaugh

    This is by far my favorite happy Luna❤😍 As if I couldn't fall in love with Phobos and Theia any more, you prove there is room for so much more! I truly love this story so much❤🙏🏽😘

    09/05/2021 04:22

  • Sky💕

    Thiea cooking for him so cute! Lmao “your meat” 😩😂. Aww, him sharing and feeding her ❤️. I’m not feeling this female leader. Not sharing my food with the bitch I think has feelings for you. Oh hell naw! See at this point Thiea just need to cut straight to the point and ask him who the hell she is and what’s really going. Couldn’t be me! 😩 And these females are disrespectful! I would have put them in there place!

    09/05/2021 03:58

  • ireadpastmybedtime

    will you have a chapter on Phobos point of view? I am ALWAYS EAGERLY awaiting updates too. great story!!

    09/05/2021 03:35

  • Ashleigh Morton

    so the men leave to hunt every year for 7 months… 😮

    09/05/2021 01:12

  • Elsa Rodarte

    thank you my Luna.

    09/05/2021 00:54

  • BexyCL

    Phobos is truly a pure male❤️ I love him with all my heart!🥰

    09/05/2021 00:44

  • B Beau L

    love the diary entries! what a superb snippet of what's to come! x

    09/05/2021 00:38

  • Reader-458723

    i hope phobos stayed true to her even after she told him to leave when she was 18!

    09/05/2021 00:05

  • B Beau L

    not gonna lie though...I wish that super steamy intro was still there at the beginning...it got us all hooked! 😂

    09/04/2021 23:54

  • B Beau L

    I am so deeply connected to your books Luna Liz 💖 they fill me with new hope and love and strength 🙏🤗🥰 in my own life. 💞 my male is Deimos Phobos and Cronus at different times of the day...don't know whether to throttle, Love or Laugh him at times...you are helping me understand his POV through your males. love it! I'm not done reading the first part /4 of the chappy...I'm savouring it all. x

    09/04/2021 23:51

  • B Beau L

    Awan you little sweethearted man! Theia, the sweethearted Luna will surely teach all the children to sign (and hopefully the adult wolves) so Awan feels included. 💖 XXX This quote comes to mind: For the strength of the Pack is the Wolf, and the strength of the Wolf is the Pack. - Rudyard Kipling, The Jungle Book

    09/04/2021 23:47

  • Anna Yocum

    I think at this point if Phobos and Theia have a huge fight Awan and Drakho will be torn who to support. Their lifelong loyalty lies with Phobos, but Theia's kindness is plowing its way into their hearts. I feel like Moira will always stand by Phobos but female solidarity will make her support Theia in some aspects.

    09/04/2021 22:13

  • olliesea_bengals

    Oh what a tender hearted chapter! it is so beautifully written. (as always) but the heart of Theia and the journal entries of Phobos make me feel for both of them. I can’t wait for Phobos’ return.

    09/04/2021 22:01

  • Anna Yocum

    Thank you for the update. And thank you for redeeming Phobos in my eyes. I was often puzzled how he couldn't see her normal reactions and emotions. Even made a comment about his intelligence. Never thought of some emotional disability.

    09/04/2021 21:57

  • Vanessa

    @luna liz including the journal entries in the chapter was just beautiful especially reading how phobos promised to remain loyal to theia...I get frustrated with phobos from time to time but these last chapters give more insight into his behavior....I have hope for him and theia's relationship....but thank you for including the journal entries it was a beautiful touch in the storytelling!!

    09/04/2021 21:35

  • Katie Harrison

    please update tomorrow 😄😄😍😍

    09/04/2021 21:31

  • Megsh826

    I was so excited to see the new update for “Me”, I had just finished rereading a bunch of it and was thrilled. I’m ready for Phobos to return and things to progress for them.

    09/04/2021 21:26

  • Reader-148264

    awwww understanding a little more, such a great story💜

    09/04/2021 20:30

  • Megsh826

    I’m so curious to the fact that neither of them have shifted yet. We haven’t seen Theia in wolf form yet and how her wolf behaves.

    09/04/2021 19:52

  • Angela Russell

    how often will Phobos be updated! I’m dying to find out what happens next 😬

    09/04/2021 04:36

  • olliesea_bengals

    Will we get a chapter of Phobos on the hunt and how he’s feeling about Theia? or will it be like Virgin Tribute and we get his POV at the end?

    09/02/2021 12:28

  • Gigi

    I really enjoyed the book with Deimos I was frustrated but I stayed with it and finished the book and truly loved it. thank you for bringing this book and I look forward to this one and Cronus book. I hope he finally finds his mate. keep up the good work you keep me on my toes. I feel all the emotions.

    09/01/2021 23:45

  • YAB

    Omg i read all of This chapters in 1 day!! in am so hooked This is unbelievable… im also frustrated with the bond between moira And phobos.. like what is the deal with them… she needs to find out real soon.. when are you going to update? ♥️

    09/01/2021 11:31

  • A M Archibald

    It would be best if you tried downloading a grammar extension. It would help you out a lot—something like Grammarly. You would learn the correct punctuation to use and help you with your wording. It will also make things flow better.

    08/31/2021 23:22

  • Stephanie Foster

    I know you take your time to give the story full in detail and I love that. It does however make waiting for the next update hard!! ❤️❤️❤️

    08/31/2021 12:24

  • TNB

    I absolutely love the way Vudci reassured her insecurities of belonging. I said I wasn't going to read this update but I was like a kid peeking at their presents before Christmas lol

    08/31/2021 11:43

  • Lidiane Barros

    Lizzy ❤️❤️❤️ I am so anxious for his return … love this update and his affection but extremely worried as in what will happen to make his return a sad one when they have departed in such good terms 🤔🤔🥺🥺 I can only think that she will find out something about him ( maybe that he did not save himself for her ? although I truly hope this is the first where the male saves himself for his female as it seems to always be a female duty to be pure ) or another secret… ir maybe she thinks they will mate once he is back but he holds back again ? urghh I know I shouldn’t try to predict and just enjoy the journey but it is arduous doing so when you love something so much as I love your story …. as Theia I am trying to be strong while I wait 😂❤️

    08/31/2021 07:09

  • QueenKae

    I said I was going to wait a week to read so I could read 2 updates… that so didn’t happen. 😂 Excited to see what happens next!

    08/31/2021 03:54

  • Stacey Burrows

    she is making great strides phobos would be proud of her if he could get his head out of his ass for most of the time hehe

    08/31/2021 03:53

  • Reader-104306

    I just read goosebumps | and I kinda wish that theias dad would’ve trained her or she knew hot to fight instead of crying

    08/31/2021 01:30

  • B Beau L

    QUEEN 👑 loved it! 🥰 bit grim at the end...but I can see where it's going... hopefully that green concoction wasn't the equivalent to what Lumina took during her time away with Deimos... I hope not! x

    08/31/2021 00:35

  • Lucy Xiong

    I love the part where he kiss her wrist where her pulse is at. so meaningful! it so cute.Phobos is kissing up to me.

    08/31/2021 00:14

  • B Beau L

    I haven't read queen yet...can't wait...(have a washing machine issue so I'm stuck trying to solve that)gonna savour it as I don't know if that's the update for the week! excited either way! 🥰

    08/30/2021 23:46

  • Susan Pearson

    OMG... when is the next update!!! I can't wait.

    08/30/2021 21:09

  • Ocey

    Aw that bit of affection from Phobos was beautiful. I need to stop thinking the worse about Vudce intentions with Theia (will give her the benefit of the doubt, hope she comes through 🤞🏽). Tiny Phobos/ her little beast haha now that was cute 🥰

    08/30/2021 21:04

  • Lucy Xiong

    that was three chapters… so do we get another update this week? I’m not being ungrateful I’m so Excited!!!!!!! hehe Luna I’m so excited for Mondays now. not for work but Phobos updates. thank you for your work. it’s amazing!

    08/30/2021 20:43

  • Anna Yocum

    I was kind of hoping that Vudce would see her being a virgin, even though embarrassing to be found out that she wasn't mated yet, at least it would kick Phobos in the groin once Vudce told him. I was also really really afraid that another scenario would play out with Theia telling Phobos once he returned "So I lost my viriginity... to Vudce's fingers when she was helping me... during my heat... that you missed knowingly..."

    08/30/2021 20:06

  • Pam Burke

    are there updates to this story im not getting getting them so want to read more

    08/30/2021 15:29

  • starbutterfliy Bye

    i found this book on another app and it stopped updating was super happy to find it here ! but i had also found the other two books or so i thought I know one is about chronos but what was deimos book called? and where can i find them if not on here?

    08/30/2021 13:57

  • Alexis M.

    oh man crap just got real! Theia’s old self will come back in no time she is going to be that little bad ass that Phobos trained as a child just wait! lol

    08/30/2021 13:37

  • Katie Harrison

    I hope when Phobo’s comes back Theia has changed into a kick ass Luna who makes him work to woo her back! his attitude towards her is upsetting! I’m thinking Vudce will test her a lot making her really prove her worth

    08/30/2021 04:27

  • Anna Pesi

    Here from the Alphas virgin tribute and I’m so excited to see Phobos and Theias journey! The first book had me in tears almost every chapter so I’m so excited for this book!! 😍

    08/30/2021 02:27

  • B Beau L

    oh my days Luna Liz! I'd make every one wait another week before you update...some highly over critical people out there who don't deserve to read another chappy let alone the rest of the book. it's so unfair to you! I'm so excited to see what you have in store for our Female Theia while she misses her Male Phobos...I'm learning patience with your updates. 🌒🐺😁💗💕💖💞

    08/29/2021 19:35

  • NurseRatchet

    I am in desperate need of an update. You have drawn this out long and slow enough. The Deimos book has concluded. We need you to write more and faster. Have her kiss the man already! We can’t even get a damned mouth kiss. I understand the slow burn…but this is barely a puff of smoke. We need more…soon!!!

    08/29/2021 14:39

  • Ocey

    Excited for the next chapters, hope Theia leaves Phobos and goes home even just to prove a point - he needs to work hard for her as well, Theia is trying so hard to prove herself for someone who really isn’t sure about her yet, she deserves better! Phobos is a bit selfish he doesn’t want her fully but doesn’t want anyone else to have her either 🤦🏽‍♀️..it’s like he’s at a cross road his pack first or Theia first - if he truly loves her then he would put her above the pack and not care if they accept her or not!! Can he not give up his Alpha position if they won’t accept her? Honestly he should have left her with her own pack until he was 100% sure about it…or just take someone his pack deems worthy as his Luna like Moira and let Theia live as she was (yes she would not have been truly happy like with her mate, but at least she had found peace after Phobos broke her heart the first time). Clever author I know we are meant to feel frustrated with Phobos but so sad to see Theia treated this way…not like his ‘beloved’. Love your stories though I am sure there will be a happy ending 💗❤️

    08/29/2021 05:11

  • Carol Dionne

    Will there be a weekend update treat?!? 😁

    08/29/2021 01:49

  • Pam Burke

    when will this be completed im at a standstill cant wait

    08/28/2021 20:04

  • Yolanda Padrnos

    I love this story. It’s said to read the way Theia is treated though. He doesn’t seem to have any regard for feelings. It’s like he doesn’t want her. I wonder why he just didn’t reject her officially. Also his bond with Moira seems sketchy. He talks to her so easily.

    08/28/2021 13:08

  • Mel West

    Hi Liz, I am very confused with Phobos’ attitude. Why not talk to Theia. She is saying what is making her sad but only when she is at n breaking point. And then that woman Moira, what is their deal. I love your writing and you stories, but I am struggling with Phobos, I hoped he would be different. I almost forgot that at Kal’s birthday party where he turns 3 he has still not excepted her, am I wrong? I think I am getting ahead of myself and probably overthinking, was just wondering.

    08/28/2021 05:24

  • Kim Hanny

    do you have an eta on when more chapters will be completed?. I am dying to finish the story.

    08/27/2021 17:50

  • Tabitha Vickers

    just wondering how often will there be updates please

    08/27/2021 10:30

  • Carol Dionne

    I wonder if Theia now understands why Lumina felt that way about her as she feels that way about Moira.. 🤔 then again we do t know Moira like we know Theia..

    08/26/2021 01:07

  • A M Archibald

    he is emotionally abusing her, that is all u see here and it's upsetting that other readers don't see this. He stays aeay from her, does not show any affection towards her. Treats her less than Moira but rewards her when she makes him proud. That is a an abusers pattern and it needs to change. He's basically sent the message of 'keep making me proud and I will reward you,' which is how you treat a dog.

    08/25/2021 22:44

  • TNB

    I'm so happy we had a moment of her standing up for herself and communicating her feelings....whew. Also I'm definitely looking forward to them progressing to full on steam, they both need it 😏

    08/25/2021 20:21

  • Jordan Retzer

    I don’t see Moria as a threat.. on the other hand vuduce needs to learn to stop pushing my Theias buttons! she is not weak! I’m ready for theia to kick her butt

    08/25/2021 19:52

  • QueenKae

    I’m glad Phobos and Theia are progressing in their communication. I feel like a good deal was addressed here and they resolved it quickly (faster than Deimos & Lumina 😂). I’m so glad Theia was able to not only showcase her cooking skills but also show she knows her way around a fish. They probably didn’t expect her to be able to gut it. And the dance 🙂! All I could think was you better throw that knife! I’m sure if she could get past the blood and everything she probably could hunt some small things if someone showed her. The beta just wants his Queen and Luna to feel as comfortable as possible. He knows her transition hasn’t been smooth. I’m still on the fence with Moira. From what we’ve seen even with them growing up together she’s a little 2 comfortable. Its a lot of smiles, laughs, and she gets pretty close to someone who doesn’t like being touched. I just hope we’re reading this wrong because she is the only female being nice to Theia.

    08/25/2021 17:29

  • Reader-458723

    i think the fact that she aimed her knife so precisely when throwing it at deimos is important. maybe she isn’t as incapable of fighting as everyone thinks she is.

    08/25/2021 08:22

  • Reader-119061

    omg I can’t wait!!

    08/25/2021 05:14

  • Margarita 🍹

    This whole story is well thought out and pieced together flawlessly. I know it takes time to update something this amazing and I'm willing to wait.... kind of lol.

    08/25/2021 01:08

  • blocartil

    if you read the Alpha Virgin's tribute Phobos behavior towards Theia is similar to Deimos.

    08/24/2021 19:02

  • Binge Reader

    Theia needs to speak openly to Phobos that she saved herself for him and ask why he continues to send such MIXED signals!!!!

    08/24/2021 18:49

  • Destiny johns

    Moira is a little to comfortable with Phobos, she needs to keep some distance between him and her. 😬

    08/24/2021 18:25

  • Lidiane Barros

    Lizz will they at least share a kiss before he leaves 🤗🥰

    08/24/2021 16:50

  • Angel Kowal

    3 months and no kiss, that's ludicrous lol. please have them kiss before he departs 🙏

    08/24/2021 16:35
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