PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

4amcripple

I love it so much, but the slow updates kill me!!!!

Slau Hope

she been skating on thin ice every since she said sum about sucking another dudes off🥴

I love that there are so many parts to each update. Most do not update but a day or two each week and when they do it isn’t a very long chapter. it’s frustrating because the story does not feel like it is progressing. you updating with multiple long chapters are wonderful. keep it up and no shortcuts. you have a really good story here

Reader-458723

i think the fact that she aimed her knife so precisely when throwing it at deimos is important. maybe she isn’t as incapable of fighting as everyone thinks she is.

Hi Luna Liz, in response to your questions… I personally love the slow burn style of your writing as it builds sexual tension. The length of the story is not an issue for me. However, I have noticed some other author chapters seem to be longer than yours, so I’m unsure why you’re required to break yours down into smaller ones - if I’m understanding that correctly. Love the new update!

Phobos relationship with Moira is strange, always keeping me guessing - still don’t like it though! Would like to see how he reacts if Theia did the same with an unmated male. Can see he adores Theia in his own weird way, but then he is reluctant to kiss her mixed signals! Drahko is the only good thing about this pack lol (so far anyway). Can’t get enough of the story all the details are amazing!

I loved the eye candy on the original cover but the new one represents the book better. Dude is still hot AF.

ok i gotta say I love this book but I still struggle to understand how can he go from such affection to nothing based on what we learned from Kael’ls Bday - because thr way she portraided there is almost as she had zero interaction with him which we now see to be untrue …. so I am still really confused specially to how did they hold together for a year without mating sleeping under the same roof … gosh I can’t wait for more… 😂😂

so is Argus Phobos son from the other woman? and is she the woman who Theia is talking about to Lumina of why he hasn’t marked her yet? I hope Theia starts to act more on her impulse instead of fear for her sake.

Samantha Johnson

I need all these on hardback copies. They are soooooooo addictive and thrilling omg

Misty Sweat

I love the book. what is your other book called?

Lucy Xiong

savoring every word to prolong my cravings of this book lol.

sorry my tablet kept stating comments were not sending si I just kept pushing 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Amber Todd

Why did you portray Theia as a homewrecker in The Alpha's Virgin Tribute if that was not the case? Why did Deimos nor Theia tell Lumina what really happened when she saw Theia in a negative light?

Helen Whyte

love love love this book can't wait for more don't want it to end

I want to read and enjoy the full story no short cuts 💜💜

Trisha Reynolds

Keep true to your story we have all been following for the ride and love it how it is

UGHHH my little heart! after reading some of the comments and replies… I feel as though my heart might give out with any chapter update 😭

Jazmine Pratt

loving! how often do you update?

Lisa Jackson Fernandez

love this when are updates

Queen M

Amazing writing Luna Liz, I love how you don’t leave plot holes...like I can see the path to why they where not together earlier. I can see why Theia reaction to Phobes in TAVT is more intense, she doesn’t have her wolf yet...she only feels the human part of the bond. I am excited for more. I will wait patiently and can’t wait for the TAVT epilogue.

What a bold move from Phobos to ruin the moment. Such an idiot. If he truly thinks that about her, then all of his cold shoulder behavior makes so much sense. I need more chapters, ASAP.

Shamira Johnson

Love your work can’t wait for the updates, plus are you writing about Alpha Cronus in another book

Reader-677247

This book is my favourite, I don’t care how many chapters there are, if anything the more the merrier, I’ll read till the end and probably still want more.

Reader-254912

wow is all I can say that was some serious reading I hope he changes and sees her the real her I’m so sad for her 😔

luna liz why does phobos walk out on her when she tries to get close to him during their meal? I am still puzzles by this is it because he doesn't want to loose control die to his hidden desire for her or does he really feel repulsed by her?

is this book a prequel to another book?

wow reading this Theia is nothing like Lumina had her pictured initially. wow beautifully written

reader2121

is Moira’s son his??

I loved it!!

this book is just wonderful so please keep writing and continue this book!

iamskylersis

who cares about it !! keep updating and making more chapters!! I love this book

Rachel Moye

I think it would be great if Theia's wolf came out on Moira's a$$. Get her girl, tell her Phobos is yours!!!

is anyone see multiples of their comments? I tried to post a comment earlier and it kept failing

as if the latest (Draha) was updated on here at 10:03pm UK time and I didn't realise until nearly half past 10! 😂🙈 love this! so excited to read slowly... savouring every word...until the next chapter... 💖💖💖 thank you Luna Liz 💖💖💖

you did NOT disappoint! this is soo good!! he’s looking out for her that’s for sure! I wonder what he has witnessed or seen to make him assume she’s unpure!!

Rachel Moye

I reads like he had penetrated her with forceful thrusts but wouldn't he smell the blood when he took her virginity?

A M Archibald

she changes her mind so much. I would like to see her stick by her thoughts and earn a voice at some point. She doesn't say what she thinks and that is why she is weak. I hope to see some character development soon because at the minute we're just going round and around with her thoughts. They are the same in each chapter. Same with Phobos, he is a totally different character yet he is just as weak. He doesn't tell her what he thinks or communicates with her like he did before. There's no love here at all, whereas at the beginning of the book there was. If he doesn't love her he should reject her or if she is not happy she should reject him. His emotional abuse of her is frustrating. Making her feel like an object is disgusting. As you can tell I don't like Phobos. Theia is treated better by his Beta, he at least seems to like her.

Reader-254912

oh no Luna Liz your books are so worth it please write to your hearts content I love your story and I love Phobos so much 😊

I love the characters in this book and the storyline. I pretty much finished reading this in one seating and I’d like some more, please. How frequently are chapters updated here?

Reader-254912

oh no Luna Liz your books are so worth it please write to your hearts content I love your story and I love Phobos so much 😊

We want the the whole story, not a cut down version! Write as much as needed please!!! Don’t deprive us of the full story. Your writing is fantastic!

We want the the whole story, not a cut down version! Write as much as needed please!!! Don’t deprive us of the full story. Your writing is fantastic!

Cheyenne Goodrow

I'm in love with this book. I cant wait for the next chapter :)

keep to your original strategy for this story! I’m loving it! I feel if you shorten it then it may ruin the book.

I’m so excited 😆 I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!!

well i love the story but will love to see phobos POV

Michele Nettles

Please just keep writing!!!!! I really enjoy the book just hate that we wait so long for more.

Cassi1234

yas yas yas Luna Liz!!!! sooo gooooodddd! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Michele Nettles

Please just keep writing!!!!! I really enjoy the book just hate that we wait so long for more.

Carol Dionne

I’m not slow by any means but geesh..I felt like I needed a dictionary to read these last 2 chapters 🥴

if you have written more chapters I would love for you to just make them available all at once. I want to read the full story. You shouldn’t shorten it.

linda

after which chapter did the book lock? I don't know where I was anymore, HELP! 🙈🙏🙈🙏🙈

Luna Liz can you please add more chapters please

oh Liz I tried I really tried not to read the new chapters now - I promised myself I would wait for the weekend so I wouldn’t wait much longer for morr because I knew it would only make me crave more … and I of course failed !!!!! ahhhh these were so good I can’t wait for when Phobos comes back I guess is when he needs to look after Deimos’ pack but I wonder why was she there ?!!! I am getting ahead of myself I know 😂😂 but no matter what I imagine I know you will make so much better Liz 🥰🥰🥰🥰 thank you hope the next update will be soon 🙏🏻🙏🏻❤️❤️🔥🔥

Trisha Reynolds

so Phobos is just going to take his pack over his love for her. why doesn’t he just reject her now and let her move on. stupid men

great update! im hoping they talk soon & clear things up. i feel like phobos had sex with many women - in the beginning it said something abt waiting for Theia. then different encounters between pack members, other wolves & phobos point out that he’s had sex. i am repulsed by double standards & purity shaming — hopefully she gives him hell for putting her through all this. will theia’s wolf come out soon and how long will it take her to pick up on the language & culture? hope theia figures out what kind of relationship moira and phobos had before she came

Queen M

I am so excited for the next update. I hope it brings us to when Phobos and Theia reconnect. Can’t wait for another steamy interaction.

Queen M

@luna Liz you got me in knots…I love the update and see the budding love between Theia and Phobos. However, I feel like this is the honeymoon phase.’like the next update will break my heart. My theory is Phobos hasn’t matted either Theia because he wants her to know his soul, to not be driven by the bond to know and love him now rather then the male he was.

@LunaLiz I can't wait until Theia starts cooking her delicious food and changes things in Phobos and her pack. 💖 xxx

Saydi Hunter

My goddess Theia!! A simple “Why? Do you still find me distasteful, do you believe me to be impure? About that I’m not!!” This was a great chapter and return by the way! I love how much Phobos is communicating and I feel like had she not run away they could hve resolved this but now we have to draaaagggg it out lol!! oh well I’m here for it all!!

@Luna Liz Monday🙈🙈🙈🙈

Liz !!!!! I have no words ❤️ I apologise you must be tired of me but just so you understand my love and appreciation for your work because believe me I am not like this normally 😂 here I am waking up at 2am UK time to have water and I see a notification of nee chapter I am like “yesss that was quick amazing I will read tomorrow / Saturday “ lay in bed after 15min I realised I wouldn’t be able to sleep anymore until I read the new chapters 😂😂😂 I am such a loser! thank you for the amazing updates but what a cliffhanger 😢 can’t wait for more 🙏🏻❤️ !

Trisha Reynolds

I’m still not liking this relationship with moira and the fact he gave her theia s hard cooked meal and Moira never thanked her so I’m guessing he didn’t tell her. Phobos is still an ass

Rachel Moye

I don't see a new cover 🥺

keep going love it

Carol Dionne

I was really praying for a surprise update this weekend ..it is sooooo good 🤪🤩

Amber-lee Stewart

will you be releasing several chapters or just one once a week?

Just keep writing do as many chapters as needed

good she spoke her truth! now she needs to make him grovel hard!!!!!

I understand Deimos and Theia’s relationship. They we’re each other’s support system, there for one another. And it’s nice to get her POV of how things was when she went to vist Deimos. And yes to us finally knowing what Lumina looks like! 😍 ❤️

Trisha Reynolds

I’m almost wanting theia to become strong and when Phobos comes again for her to treat him the same and sent him. who needs a man anyway. she has been through so much hurt and may never have trust in men again but that is what may give her her strength

Michelle Lupo

Hii, I just read all of whats been posted for this book and Im wondering when updates usually happen so Im not driving myself crazy wondering when itll be updated 🙃😅 I want to know whats to happen next 🤗

Hey just curious how frequent are the updates? This is an awesome story. I particularly like the broad range of terms and prose. It’s really well written!

can’t wait!!!!

loving this story. Phobos shouldn’t have made promises he couldn’t keep. He’s an amazing character, I feel sorry for him. He adores her.

I think out of both books Lumina is the only one who is outspoken it is frustrating how the others don’t speak out they dwell in their own insecurities & don’t communicate properly!

This is great!!! and here I was thinking they had reunited when he went to look after Deimos pack whilst they were in Italy but as I said I knew you would made it better!!! So much better…. amazing I love how he came for her out of the blue but I wonder what made him do that after so long ???? that must be a reason… also I know it’s part of his character but man … his silence drives me crazy 😂 wish we knew at least what goes on his head like his POV even if he doesn’t talk to her … anyway here I am already dying for the next chapter 😳😳😳😭😭😭 lol thank you for this Liz ❤️

Reader-119061

Ahhh! we are getting so close to the ending of the first books story. can’t wait to see what comes next! also, when will we be able to see from Phobos perspective?! Can’t wait to see what goes through his mind when he looks at her 🥰♥️

I loved this … cant wait to see more how their dinamic will evolve… I know he is not supposed to speak a lot but at least one word here and there I think it’s necessary so this chappy was great - but she needs to be more direct not ask him what do you mean about that night but say who told you I had been with others ans how dare you not ask me yourself. cant wait for more 🌶 too just frustrated cause I know it will be an year before anything happens 😭 but at least if they keep “doing” stuff lol I wonder how does he manage to hold his beast now that she is always there - I assume the beast is craving to at least mark her he is always seeking her neck etc … Anyway thanks Lizzy today is my Bday so I wait until this morning to read with my coffee to celebrate best way ever to start the day …. hope we get more soon xx ❤️

love the new update, but ugh Moira is pissing me off and so is Phobos. I’m going to be mad if there is something more there than friends and he betrays Theia, especially when she is trying so hard to prove herself in this new pack. 😭😭

Luna Liz! just finished the last epilogue on TAVT… and I’m over here checking for updates 🤣 sorry… I feel bad with all the pressure we put on you… you’re just amazing! But I have to admit, Phobos is my favorite ♥️ can’t wait for the next update! 🥰

Theia has every right to feel as she does! I want her to kickass and then kick Phobos ass aswell!!!

Elle 🧿

I wonder when Theia shall meet Awan? I wonder if she shall form a friendship with him and learn sign language? I do hope that she also forms more female friends, even if it’s just 1 female friend. Someone who she can talk to - let’s be honest, a girl always needs to have her best friend hehe ☺️💗☺️

Finally!!!! I can’t wait

I totally love this chappy Distasteful! I'm taking this Thursday 9th September 2021 update as next week's update...so I'm gonna just re read the whole lot to keep me satisfied. hopefully all you lot do the same to keep yourselves happy (and patient!) I'm going to read a bit of Deimos / TAVT too. That's my go to book when I want to get lost somewhere else while I patiently await for an update 💖💕

Contreras Lizzy

I am truly impressed with your writing skills I have never loved a book this much except for just another but not as much as yours. even though Phobos frustrates me I know it’s because he is meant to show us his current self as a king of beast, I’m sure Theia will take him and show him how wrong he is. I also understand that word must have gotten around and he misinterpreted and that is why he now believes Theia is impure. I am really hoping Argus isn’t his pup specially since Phobos is pure I don’t know how it would be possible but some how I feel he might be his pup but it has to do with his beast although I hope not. BEST BOOK ON THIS SITE!

Female Alpha Skye

Luna Liz, I love your writing, your stories, the character development—-ALL of it! I can’t get enough! The Alpha’s Virgin Tribute had me in tears-both of joy and sorrow. I am excited to read this book and Cronus’s story next! Thank you for sharing your gift with us💕

Queen M

Luna Liz you did it again such vivid writing. I am so intrigued by Phobos pack and there customs. QQ: why do packs have breeders? one day I hope you have a guide book for the world you created in your stories. I look forward to Theia strength showing through. I can’t wait to understand Phobos thinking.

respect! life is not a bed of roses without the thorns. you can not satisfy everyone. through hardships come strength self awareness and love for other and yourself. “Tribute” hit home in a lot of ways for me in my own personal life forgiveness is a slow and brutal process if you truly love someone. Thank You

Jazmine Pratt

cant wait for the next update!

liz also wanted to ask if the end of more part 4 will be revisited the scene where the phobos steps in to shield theia from the other woman?

I love the build up of their relationship and showing that Phobos does care for her deeply. I think Theia wants to shut him out or move to anger quickly as soon as she doesn’t like his perceived thoughts. with all this sexual tension it’s going to be interesting of how they handle the situation when she goes into heat. without them officially mating o feel like it’s coming.

Susan Pearson

OoooMmmGgg!!! Luna!!! I thought they were getting better 😪😪 The struggle is hurting me and giving me anxiety. Phobos needs the silent treatment, no homemade food and a knife thrown at his face again. I'm about ready to say live with Moira. Plus, why can't we get poor Awan a mate 😕

Elsa Rodarte

thank you my Luna.

Trisha Reynolds

wow what a cliffhanger.

Viki_Royale13

I love it! 💘

oh my! so Phobos stayed pure and of course Theia did to, but why doesn’t anyone believe her? I truly love this story, but I am also afraid that this will be stretched out and torturously slow to him finally accepting her 🙁

I loved the chapter!! It was refreshing to see Phobos say more than one single word during a "conversation". It was nice to see him being affectionate with Theia. It's like he wants to be like he used to be with her, but the pack history is stopping him from being completely how he wants to be. I don't like the leader. 😒 She knows that Theia grew up differently. I get that Theia has to be a certain way to survive that area, the leader still doesn't have to be a nasty witch to Theia. She just comes off as disrespectful. But I also feel that she will show Theia great respect when Theia learns their ways because Theia is a pampered princess and her getting dirty is completely different from what she's v used to. Moira? The jury is still out on her. Like, she would be a nice friend for Theia to have, yet I'm still drawn back to TAVT and at Kal's party, Theia says that Phobos shows emotions to another and he's warm with her like no one else. So that makes me think that Phobos still treats Moira as more than a friend, but definitely not like a sister! So yeah, I want to know about that further. I also want Theia to talk to Phobos about her virginity. Yes it's great she finally talked to him about how he feels about her as far as her protection and all but that virginity conversation needed to be talked about like yesterday! And apparently he doesn't mark her for QUITE some time so that bothers me too. I know that markings happen when they mate and all, which goes back to the virginity thing. Ugh!! Like I know it takes time, but my fangirl side of me wants it to hurry, lol. I love the progression though Luna Liz. Continue doing a great job!!

oh my goodness luna liz!!! can things get any worse for Theia!!!! it seems to be going from bad to worse....I feel soo bad for her!! when phobos accused her of sleeping around I was furious, I wished she would have done more than given him a slap!! I feel like she is completely shattered!!