PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

Paula Lewis

please keep writing the full story as you wish to write it!

omg I couldn’t stop laughing about the chooks that was hilarious 😂 I’m definitely warming up to Theia she is definitely a character lol

Finally!!! I have been waiting for this crossover of the birthday party. I'm so happy for this unexpected update and the breakthrough. 💜💜💜

don’t change anything, I’m loving the book

don’t change anything, I’m loving the book

Reader-254912

it’s not enough 😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫I can’t wait to see the next chapter oh you definitely out did yourself this time wow is all I can say 🤤

Ashleigh Morton

so the men leave to hunt every year for 7 months… 😮

Aw that bit of affection from Phobos was beautiful. I need to stop thinking the worse about Vudce intentions with Theia (will give her the benefit of the doubt, hope she comes through 🤞🏽). Tiny Phobos/ her little beast haha now that was cute 🥰

BexyCL

we were doing so well!😩💔 Luna please! make the aching stop!😭❤️

I am up to no good

I am obsessed with your books! you are an amazing author!!! I am on the edge of my seat waiting for updates 💕💕💕 thank you for the surprise and I can’t wait for the next update.

BexyCL

Phobos is truly a pure male❤️ I love him with all my heart!🥰

I love that there are so many parts to each update. Most do not update but a day or two each week and when they do it isn’t a very long chapter. it’s frustrating because the story does not feel like it is progressing. you updating with multiple long chapters are wonderful. keep it up and no shortcuts. you have a really good story here

BexyCL

Luna, my heart aches and my eyes hold unshed tears! Phobos is one male who can evoke so many emotions from any female and he’s doing a good job of making me upset and in love all at the same time! ❤️

In response to your cover photo, it's great, but the one you had on Inkett was my personal fav.

Helen Whyte

love love love this book can't wait for more don't want it to end

Trisha Reynolds

I just get more pissed with Phobos it’s like he doesn’t care about her. always taking breakfast to Moira. what kind of relationship is between her and Phobos. I hate all the disrespect she is getting even though she is trying. she just needs to get out of there ugh

Destiny johns

Moira is a little to comfortable with Phobos, she needs to keep some distance between him and her. 😬

We are here to support you. I’m excited whenever I get a new chapter. Keep it up! ❤️

I want to read the full story no short cuts 💜

I am so deeply connected to your books Luna Liz 💖 they fill me with new hope and love and strength 🙏🤗🥰 in my own life. 💞 my male is Deimos Phobos and Cronus at different times of the day...don't know whether to throttle, Love or Laugh him at times...you are helping me understand his POV through your males. love it! I'm not done reading the first part /4 of the chappy...I'm savouring it all. x

I’m good with it too. I like the multiple chapters as well. i eagerly wait for the next chapters.

love the book. keep going!

this book is just wonderful so please keep writing and continue this book!

This is an amazing story. I want the full experience. I don't want to be cut short.Write away.

Anri Cenoz

I really like your attitude agains people and there comments warning them from the beginning so that tou dont waste any ones time i cant wait to read this book going to start today

finally💙💙 so glad they had that convo abt the rumors.

Ok….First of all 18 days? Oh hell naw 😂. Second of all who wouldn’t want to change clothes and wash there ass while traveling for 18 days tf. Third Thiea just punch his ass in the face one good time, I bet he won’t ignore you again. My poor Thiea, got her out here with these beast and they looking at like she crazy 😩😭.

we want the whole story. not a cut down version! Write as much as needed please!!! Don’t deprive us of the full story. Your writing is fantastic!

I hope Deimos & Lumina arrive for a visit…maybe Lumina will help Theia in putting the women in their places & teach her a little combat, considering Phobos thinks highly of Lumina 😁

Rachel Moye

Your work reads like poetry, bleeding heart, I can feel everything you pour into it! I love that you break it down into multiple parts, it gives us more. And a depth I just can't get anywhere else!! You're my favorite writer!! New age Anne Rice and I just can't get enough!! 👀

it's 22:41 GBT time... wondering if the update will be here by midnight 😬😁 so excited! 😍

Rachel Moye

Your work reads like poetry, bleeding heart, I can feel everything you pour into it! I love that you break it down into multiple parts, it gives us more. And a depth I just can't get anywhere else!! You're my favorite writer!! New age Anne Rice and I just can't get enough!! 👀

Rachel Moye

Your work reads like poetry, bleeding heart, I can feel everything you pour into it! I love that you break it down into multiple parts, it gives us more. And a depth I just can't get anywhere else!! You're my favorite writer!! New age Anne Rice and I just can't get enough!! 👀

Rachel Moye

💖 Your work reads like poetry, bleeding heart, I can feel everything you pour into it! I love that you break it down into multiple parts, it gives us more. And a depth I just can't get anywhere else!! You're my favorite writer!! New age Anne Rice and I just can't get enough!! 👀

Oh Winnie ❤️❤️❤️ I love this update so cute. From beginning to start I am dreading what to come that will tear them apart again 😢 Really annoyed though that Phobos can’t give her a simple kiss 💋??? Just the idea of him turning his face to her what so sad …. 🙁

Whittney Carie

I love that you are showing the slow burn of their relationship. I have always felt like he has loved her all along and doesn't know how to balance his packs expectations and her feelings. I don't believe he is intentionally cruel, and she wears her heart on her sleeve which makes it hard for them to communicate. I would love to see her open up about his slutty misconceptions of her though. Air out that laundry Theia!! Overall loving the story and of course just hanging out dying for the next update😁!!

Not complaining at all but new to the books! Curious if there is a schedule for new chapters?

so...the ceremony and Theia's seductive dance, I presume will be preceding the "I only want a taste..." the introduction we all read for Phobos...how exciting 🤩🤭🤫💖🐺🌓🐺💖

Bonib2

Thank you so much Luna Liz. This is a great chapter. ❤❤❤ I am glad Theia finally grow a ball and set him straight. ❤❤❤

Rhonda Pruitt

keep writing the book. I love it.

I'm so happy we had a moment of her standing up for herself and communicating her feelings....whew. Also I'm definitely looking forward to them progressing to full on steam, they both need it 😏

Michele Nettles

Please just keep writing!!!!! I really enjoy the book just hate that we wait so long for more.

Rebeca Sanchez Rivera

I love it!! Just keep going 😁

please please keep writing. I don’t not care how many chapters it is!!!

wouldn’t it be perfect if Cronus was Moira mate?

please please keep writing. I don’t not care how many chapters it is!!!

please please keep writing. I don’t not care how many chapters it is!!!

I’m in love with this story! please continue ASAP. I wish you could update sooner.

I don’t know if this will be answered but I have been dying since reading TAVT - why isn’t Phobos the alpha of alphas if he is first born and in a very strict society as Demios was always siting the rules?

if you have written more chapters I would love for you to just make them available all at once. I want to read the full story. You shouldn’t shorten it.

So I have one question. What female’s he got that he let old girl do as she pleases? Because last time I checked the old lady said he was a virgin and never once looked at another female. 👀

I look forward to every chapter I sincerely hope you keep writing ty so much

Luna Liz 💖 you are my favourite female 💖

Trish Chavez

Amazing work.

Victoria S

Thank you for the update, so good that Theia finally told Phobos the truth and so good we didn't have to wait until next week. 😊🥰

@luna liz including the journal entries in the chapter was just beautiful especially reading how phobos promised to remain loyal to theia...I get frustrated with phobos from time to time but these last chapters give more insight into his behavior....I have hope for him and theia's relationship....but thank you for including the journal entries it was a beautiful touch in the storytelling!!

Thanks so much for the update!!!! I was so sad when you said there wouldn't be an update this week but got so excited when I received the update notification, you made my day!!! loved the chapter

love the new cover, so much better!!!

Jordan Retzer

this was hot! leave me on the edge! grateful for the update! thank u Luna 🥰 I think he either has kissed another or is scared he will lose control. I don’t think it has anything to do with her, obviously or he would treat her differently all together, so excited for more as always! I’ll be a patient pup tho 🥺😋🤪❤️

Phobos is a moron. Even in modern western society what he did would be considered unacceptable. And he claims he wasn't aware it would be offending. I would much rather prefer an answer along the lines "you kicked me out, I intentionally made you angry while making myself comfortable"

Rodleen Dalli

keep writing looking forward to the story. it's going to get hot! finally!! do we have to wait another week!!

Whittney Carie

What a great way to start my week!! Luna Liz you teese!! I was fully prepared to wait, but I am so excited!! This chapter was everything I have been waiting for!!

Reader-371843

I am getting frustrated by Phobos’ actions. he is intelligent and knows the “normal” ways and can communicate. I need some communication and civilized behaviour now from Phobos and clarity on Moira’s role… because I feel de need to rip her head off.

thank you 💜💜💜💜💜

Stacey Burrows

she is making great strides phobos would be proud of her if he could get his head out of his ass for most of the time hehe

Yaaaaaaaay!!…. update 🥰

Bonib2

Attagirl Theia❤💃💃💃👌

love it! it’s worth it. keep doing what you are doing

I’m glad to see the high attraction and draw that Phobos and Theia have for each other. it’s clearly been there since adolescences, but I wonder when the communication will start. I feel like Phobos isn’t opening up because he thinks she’s been with others, I wonder why she won’t just tell him. plus he’s been watching her all this time I would think he’d know. whew it’s frustrating lol

Omgosh! this last chappy almost made me cry!! so much emotion!! this was soo good! thank you! can’t wait to read more! so glad Theia held her own with him!!

boh 7 months is too much, so the males stay at the pack only for 5 months, is not exaggerated?

Lee

That was intense. Theia had Phobos sweating bullets trying to restraint himself 🔥😂🔥❤️

ninja

need more of this story 😫😫

I love this book! I thought for sure this last update would be at least the mating update when I saw the mild content warning then I was like “oh”. The update wasn’t disappointing (at all) but know that their mating and marking is highly anticipated. I have no doubt that beast man will deliver something epic. I have a feeling those 1:1 night trainings will be steamily difficult but I know Phobos has the restraint of a monk. This book is so interesting! oh my! I can’t stand waiting for updates but as soon as I see one I must read asap 🤣

Kayleen Ivers

awesome!!! thanks for the update! made my Monday!

Reader-119061

omg I can’t wait!!

I just read goosebumps | and I kinda wish that theias dad would’ve trained her or she knew hot to fight instead of crying

Alexis M.

I seriously just love this book cannot wait for more chapters and for Phobos to realize just how faithful Theia is! the ceremony chapter made me want to slap him too just saying lol

Tabitha Vickers

Thank you

h..how could you leave me with this cliffhanger?! 😫😫😫😫 Imma wait patiently though

oh my gosh...is Moira getting a girl crush on Theia? (I yet again, accidentally missed the first part of Distasteful! 🙈 I swear my pup pawed my screen as I was talking to her and it went forward a section!)Theia interrupted what Moira was replying to her... I'm probably totally off kilter but hey... you never know!

Rachel Moye

I am in it 😂🤣😂 hooked, line, and sinker!! I like that we haven't gotten a chappy with phobos' point of view, yet. In TAVT, we didn't get Deimos' point of view til later on in the book and I think that served the story well.

Love reading this book! Thank you!❤❤❤

Cindy Griffin

Can't hardly wait to see what happens next! :-)

Oh what a glorious long chapter! the last part makes my heart happy for both of them! Seeing the growth in both their characters (and not forced or rushed as some writers do) is perfect. Thanks for the update Luna Liz! 🥰🥰🥰

Katie Harrison

when is the next update? I’m ready to get this book out of my library and look for a new one!

Rachel Moye

heart warming 💓 I can't wait to see what her wolf is like and how it surfaces 😁

thank you for the update!! love this story 🥰💗

Reader-254912

omg 😱 I can’t wait !!!!!

ahhh I love the new chappy I’m so happy to see Phobos showing her affection. I can’t wait for next one!

I love Theia. I also don't see anything wrong with Phobos sharing that breakfast with his friends. It seemed like he wanted to brag about his mate's cooking AND treat his friends. After all, all their cuisine isn't very refined. And if the other 2 guys are unmated it only makes sense that Moira's home would be the central spot. I feel bad for Phobos. Unlike other pack members he has known another life for almost 20 years but he had to leave that life behind. And I think Theia is not only a mate to him but for a decade those little souvenirs from her like the hair tie were his last connection to that old life. Is Phobos his parents' biological son? Why such an age difference between him and Deimos? Why is he different as in his wolf? I love Cronus. He is a good Alpha to his pack, amazing brother, cheerful and smiling, handsome... Oh and Theia's bond to Phobos is such a downgrade for Theia. Her living conditions, societal status, emotional stability, being loved, having friends and even food have plummeted. Eventually Phobos and his pack will benefit from having a Luna like Theia, but I don't see what she will gain.

natasha wakeford

👏❤️🎉 omg love love love it 🌟

Brandi Jones

Yes! I love that she threw the knives at his face

SydDavis

My heart is aching. I'm dying. Luna Liz has smote me emotionally AGAIN! Ugh. Phobos is KILLING me! Theia is in emotional turmoil and he just blatantly calls her s*** without saying the word. Ugh.. I love this book! I'm dying.

Just smiled from ear to ear seeing that there was an update. 😊 Thank you Luna Liz!!!

Lucy Xiong

that was three chapters… so do we get another update this week? I’m not being ungrateful I’m so Excited!!!!!!! hehe Luna I’m so excited for Mondays now. not for work but Phobos updates. thank you for your work. it’s amazing!

Now that’s cute! He kept the bear 🐻 But when he gone talk to her about Moira. She has no problem sharing the food, but he could say something to let her know. I love his beta. I hope he gets him a nice moon blessed. Someone different like Theia. He is very welcoming. ❤️

Kim Hanny

do you have an eta on when more chapters will be completed?. I am dying to finish the story.

Yalita Jezája - Makaio

Omg i read all of This chapters in 1 day!! in am so hooked This is unbelievable… im also frustrated with the bond between moira And phobos.. like what is the deal with them… she needs to find out real soon.. when are you going to update? ♥️

I am noticing what I think is a pattern here. in the deimos story whenever phobos and theia appear in public away from phobos pack, phobos maintains distance from theia as though he does not want to show in public his desire for her...that she has some power over her..does not want to show his weakness..when he is with his pack he however seems to want to pull her close to him...not sure if my observations are correct however it seems like a pattern