PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

His wolf is hell! I know there is a major disconnect but my goodness. I know he might send her away but I would go to his brothers pack. Her family really will hate him if she shows up like this.

I feel like he could’ve done more to prepare her or waited until she was in heat and maybe it wouldn’t have been so bad. Theia threw me off 2. I’m not sure what she learned in her pack but what does she expect as far as foreplay. I mean if I have to take all that d yes! Eat me Alpha 😋😂. This chapter was cringy for me. I know they knew what was coming and that it would be rough with him and his beast but yeah…

It took him long enough to tell her she did good but he knows she could do so much more and about his relationship with Moira. Once he found out about her relationship with his brother he should’ve been more open with her about his. He knew it was bothering her. He said he wouldn’t reject her for Theia I mean how was she supposed to feel?! He’s slowly getting it. I’m trying not to pull my hair out here 😂. IDC what anyone says after a year of being so near your mate and not mating you would be a train wreck, dumpster fire, $hit show 2. 🤣🤣

Jazmine Pratt

when will the next update be?

bisaayanna

hopefully he doesn't hv a chosen like Deimos did.

Theias next heat must be close, surely Phobos won’t be able to resist her then…also wonder if there are traditions in this pack like TAVT that will cause issues for Theia and Phobos - I am hoping not but still a lot of chapters to go so have a feeling there is still something else to come 😩. The way Phobos opened up in this chapter loved it 💗

When is the next update for this book? It’s been too long

WatUpG

Loved this read thank you 💜 🙏

Trimble Claudia

it's just rape

Hira Arif

😍😍

Finally… I’m dying of thirstiness here lol

Rhonda Pruitt

come on Phobes!!!! Finally 😜😀

Am I the only one who got excited at him f*king her senseless? Yes....ummok lol. I'm so glad he FINALLY addressed his relationship with Moria. While I love Theia her jealousy with starting to grate my nerves.

that was so worth the wait 💜💜 amazing writing

Rodleen Dalli

So looking forward, make this chapter long and don't leave us hanging pleeaaaassseee I beg you Luna.

Carol Dionne

I have re-read these last chapters at least over 10 times..I can’t get enough🥰🥰🥰

yay! so excited! looked ALL day for an update and here we is! 😜 😍💥🔥

this was so so good !!! I can wait for more … poor Phobos I feel for him … his first time and he didn’t even get to finish himself 🤣🤣🤣

Jasmineflower

we will buy it just post

do what you must. we need to know how this ends.

Carol Dionne

Phobos said don’t play with him!!😂😂

Luna Liz 💖 thank you! I needed this chappy so bad right now...X

I can’t believe him 😂. I would lay in the bed beside him and finish myself 🤣🤣. Let’s see if he can take that.

Rodleen Dalli

pls update a new chappy 👀 we want more 🙏 keep it up.

Trish Chavez

The book is worth it. Please continue writing.

Going to be honest – I don’t really know how I felt about this chapter. I am trying to think rationally and balance the fact that this is a werewolf book and what I know about Phobus with my natural human reaction to what I just read.

Hello little wolves ♥️ Let me be CLEAR on the last few chappies to avoid confusion and speculation. 1. Phobos is not normal. I have warned you all of this so many times to prepare you all for these chapters. His beast is an ANIMAL not a human but with animal instincts and he sees Theia simply as how a male wolf will see a female wolf. Phobos has no control over this male. 2. Theia when she says ‘NO’ it is not the kind of no where a she’s saying she doesn’t want to mate for as you all know she rushed the mating when Phobos chose to wait because he knew this is what she will undergo. She says no because he is unable to give her time to adjust to the new experience. She’s scared/ highly innocent just like one would be during their first time. You will see in next chappies the change in her demeanor how her fear is settled and she welcomes their mating.

😍🥰🤩

Rachel Moye

Your work reads like poetry, bleeding heart, I can feel everything you pour into it! I love that you break it down into multiple parts, it gives us more. And a depth I just can't get anywhere else!! You're my favorite writer!! New age Anne Rice and I just can't get enough!! 👀

yes Phobos don’t you dare eat at another females table again or enter her hut!!!! •\/•

Trimble Claudia

That was great written peace ✌

Cathy Garrett

Luna, I have totally enjoyed reading Deimos and now Phobos. There are very few on here that I have found that have kept my interest. Several stretched out their work to where it made no sense as to why. Those books I have dropped. However I anxiously await your updates! i have fallen for your characters and want to know everything I can about them! please write their stories - and follow your heart! ❤️ I, for one, will be waiting!

Reader-254912

I love it he don’t play when it come to his Luna that’s my Phobos 👏👏👏

I will keep reading till the end!!! I get frustrated with the chapters that feel short, but love this story! will read it till the end, same as with Deimos’ story. love your writing Liz

I will keep reading till the end!!! I get frustrated with the chapters that feel short, but love this story! will read it till the end, same as with Deimos’ story. love your writing Liz

Elle 🧿

Are the messages glitching because what I can see it a lot of duplicate messages in the chat?

I will keep reading till the end!!! I get frustrated with the chapters that feel short, but love this story! will read it till the end, same as with Deimos’ story. love your writing Liz

I will keep reading till the end!!! I get frustrated with the chapters that feel short, but love this story! will read it till the end, same as with Deimos’ story. love your writing Liz

Raychel-Reads

maybe her not being pregnant was due to her needed to accept his wolf an him mark her to bring her wolf out for the mating to work properly.. my heart can’t take it if he’s cruel to her even more, but if he is I hope she stands up for herself an fights for him since he is more beast then man she needs to keep showing him the error of his ways but I hope he does not do something he can’t come back from an if he goes with moira I’ll kill him myself !!!

I need more please do what you need to do but don't cut the book short I love when it shows this book has updated so please don't rush it x

I need more please do what you need to do but don't cut the book short I love when it shows this book has updated so please don't rush it x

Roberta Schumacher

keep writing the story is so worth the $

I need more please do what you need to do but don't cut the book short I love when it shows this book has updated so please don't rush it x

Obsesssed with Phobos 💗💗 Thank you Lims Liz your chapters are everything!!! Last weeks surprise update made my week 😃

Queen M

There is so much I want to stay…LunaLiz thank you for such a beautiful chapter. I loved every min of it. Ita was hot, emotional, caring and so revealing. I loved how much Phobos has been preparing for Theia…truly making a place for her and working hard for her.

Obsesssed with Phobos 💗💗 Thank you Lims Liz your chapters are everything!!! Last weeks surprise update made my week 😃

are we getting update today?

ssyl

Nice update! Thanks! You mentioned another update soon - May I check when it would be? :)

Obsesssed with Phobos 💗💗 Thank you Lims Liz your chapters are everything!!! Last weeks surprise update made my week 😃

ugh I've been unpatiently stalker for updates N realized u said not until the 11th... I'm dying here 😭 🤣 💀

If he gets more cruel by the end of the book 👀. What kind of ending are we looking at 😓. Ughhhhh this book has me stressed in real life! 😂

Elle 🧿

Simply beautiful throughout this chapter ❤️❤️.

Hello my little wolves ♥️ Thank you so much for your love and support shown on PHOBOS! I just wished to inform you there will be NO update this week! I am taking this weekend off from writing I hope you can understand 😭 The next update I will publish maybe in the middle of the week or next Sunday/Monday! Stay tuned ♥️ Happy reading, Liz

Reader-254912

thank you for the pleasant very welcoming surprise!! very good chapter I can’t wait fir more I absolutely love this book 🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼👏😊

Contreras Lizzy

Your book is so good it is well worth every dime. I enjoy EVERY chapter. You’re very talented please don’t stop.

I love your style of writing, and have no problem if the chapters are longer. keep going! 😊

Dior Jackson

mmm theia Is kind of pissing me off😪

Hi Luna Liz, in response to your questions… I personally love the slow burn style of your writing as it builds sexual tension. The length of the story is not an issue for me. However, I have noticed some other author chapters seem to be longer than yours, so I’m unsure why you’re required to break yours down into smaller ones - if I’m understanding that correctly. Love the new update!

Cassienka

MORE PLEASE MORE!!!! I'M DYING lol.

Bonib2

I can't wait for the mating ceremony or the wilderness, whatever comes first1😁🍑🍽🥂 Thanks for the update @Luna Liz ❤❤❤

First off, another amazing update that leaves me wanting more.

I just wanna read more…now 😆. I love the book. This is the turning point I’ve been waiting for. Gimme more! Please ☺️

Anna

waiting please

Reader-677247

This book is my favourite, I don’t care how many chapters there are, if anything the more the merrier, I’ll read till the end and probably still want more.

Katie Whitmore

absolutely loving this, please update x

Helen Whyte

love love love this book can't wait for more don't want it to end

We are here to support you. I’m excited whenever I get a new chapter. Keep it up! ❤️

no update this week??

Trisha Reynolds

don’t stray from your story be true to the book. we have followed this far

Trisha Reynolds

don’t stray from your story be true to the book. we have followed this far

...and I dropped my phone on my face 🤣 brilliant chappy ending! short and hot! as per! brilliant! gonna re read the last few chaps to keep me sane until the next update! 🙏🐺🌓🐺🙏

this book is just wonderful so please keep writing and continue this book!

WatUpG

Omgosh we're getting there I love how playful they are now he knows she kept it all for him crack up dirty male 🤣🤣🤣🤣 thank you for the double update Monday seems like an eternity away difinitely reading this again once completed. Can't wait for the next update 💜 🙏

I’m good with it too. I like the multiple chapters as well. i eagerly wait for the next chapters.

Tabitha Vickers

please keep going as you are. l really appreciate having 4-5 parts to read. I wish we could have extra updates to this book. It has me totally obsessed & I reread chapters just to get my fix. thank you

I think I’d feel exactly how Theia feels! moira occupies to much of Phobos attention as far as I see!

Katie Whitmore

absolutely loving this, please update x

do what you must. we need to know how this ends.

iamskylersis

who cares about it !! keep updating and making more chapters!! I love this book

Jasmineflower

we will buy it just post

is anyone see multiples of their comments? I tried to post a comment earlier and it kept failing

Jasmineflower

we will buy it just post

That chapter was on loved it 🥰…can’t wait for some pups but nervous as hell what if the pup is female?! Hope they don’t have traditions like Deimos pack.

please finish very invested in this story ❤️

Jasmineflower

we will buy it just post

Cassi1234

Luna Liz I don’t think my heart can wait out that long for an update 🥺😭🥺😭😂

Jasmineflower

we will buy it just post

natasha wakeford

I'm thinking his rejection in kissing her is probably to do with his wolf as he appeared last time they kissed at 18

Sydney Smelko

yes, update please!!

Rachel Moye

Your work reads like poetry, bleeding heart, I can feel everything you pour into it! I love that you break it down into multiple parts, it gives us more. And a depth I just can't get anywhere else!! You're my favorite writer!! New age Anne Rice and I just can't get enough!! 👀

this is a great book, please write til the end

Shona Collins

I wait anxiously for the update I've read both books so far and I love them so much in adicted I couldn't even begin to make any fault I love the fact hes starting to open his stubborn eyes to her

Great update! Gotta ask though, why are the chapters so short and broken up like that? Other author chapter updates on this site are much longer so I’m confused about the word count claim.

I love the nose nudging...my fella and me do this 😍🥰💖

Michele Nettles

Please just keep writing!!!!! I really enjoy the book just hate that we wait so long for more.

I needed her to ask him what the hell his problem is?! Ain’t no way you about to keep using me to help you release and you shooting me looks of disgust 🤬🤬👊🏽🔪🔫🏹

write as much as you want! worth every penny!

I’m in love with this story! please continue ASAP. I wish you could update sooner.

I’m in love with this story! please continue ASAP. I wish you could update sooner.

Tabitha Vickers

well I'm desperate to see them have a baby & with this see the king of beasts calm some what but the comment about him becoming even more cruel towards the end of this book makes me feel quite ill. He may love her in his beast way but I feel so desperate for Thiea. Will her life just be filled with the emotional roller coaster that he is? Will she ever have the love, peace & respect she deserves? I'm very conflicted with this last chapter.