PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

  • rose

    thank you for the update!! love this story 🥰💗

    08/11/2021 03:55

  • Binge Reader

    I am not seeing the new chapter cover.

    08/11/2021 03:36

  • Samantha Cokuslu

    ahhh I love the new chappy I’m so happy to see Phobos showing her affection. I can’t wait for next one!

    08/11/2021 03:28

  • Reesons

    I find that Theia craves what he shows his friend Moira but in this chappy he's giving her way more than that.

    08/11/2021 03:03

  • Susan Pearson

    Phobos is showing affection!!! I love it 💘 But....I'm still not a fan of Moira. I hate that Theia sees them as a family, like she doesn't belong. I think Moira has feelings for Phobos since he resembles her male

    08/11/2021 03:02

  • BexyCL

    Luna Liz, I have tears in my eyes! Phobos was just…far too cute this chapter. He still has a long way too go but this make sure knows how too make a female all warm and fuzzy inside. 🥰

    08/11/2021 02:49

  • nataliealv5

    sooo excited to see their romance continue developing and for Phobos to open up more and be playful/ loving with Thea!!!

    08/11/2021 02:43

  • TNB

    I am so happy Phobos is using his words. moreover I'm happy they have communicated to ease some of her insecurities. Once again I was left screaming as I realized I had reached the end so you definitely remain my greatest addiction lol. I like the new cover

    08/11/2021 02:11

  • Anna Yocum

    How far along are we into the book approximately?

    08/11/2021 01:37

  • Madison Alexa Gomez Medina

    for a book that has some complex allusions to trauma, attachment and community, I would say the cover does it a disservice

    08/11/2021 01:37

  • Anna Yocum

    This book gives me anxiety, but I still check for updates regularly haha.

    08/11/2021 01:36

  • Angel Kowal

    In response to your cover photo, it's great, but the one you had on Inkett was my personal fav.

    08/11/2021 01:34

  • blocartil

    Great book! It sparks laughter, saddness, anger, and many other emotions.

    08/11/2021 01:29

  • sara moore

    I hope Moria is not bad . I see her as we saw Theia in the last book. I hope she becomes one of Theias favorite females.

    08/11/2021 01:28

  • sara moore

    thank you thank you thank you! perfectly timed progress ! your writing is amazing. my soul needed them to make some sort of progress. lol

    08/11/2021 01:26

  • Vanessa

    In previous chapter didn't theia tell moira that phobos mentioned moira to her when she was a pup? so wouldn't moira find out from that that theia and phobos knew each other since they were much younger?

    08/11/2021 01:16

  • Reader-458723

    the fact that moira is talking bout how phobus looks like her dead mate is giving me bad vibes

    08/11/2021 00:55

  • Nita

    Theia has every right to feel as she does! I want her to kickass and then kick Phobos ass aswell!!!

    08/11/2021 00:53

  • susanashley

    I loved the eye candy on the original cover but the new one represents the book better. Dude is still hot AF.

    08/11/2021 00:48

  • Carol Dionne

    Ahhhh these chapters just gave me life ☺️

    08/11/2021 00:41

  • Nita

    lol I can understand Theias frustration with Phobos sleeping soundly I had to laugh!

    08/11/2021 00:24

  • Katie Harrison

    when is the next update? I’m ready to get this book out of my library and look for a new one!

    08/10/2021 07:04

  • Tina

    hoping we get an update soon 🙏

    08/09/2021 18:13

  • Tabitha Vickers

    the update for this book is taking so long. I have to keep going back to read the previous chapter to remind me what is happening. Will it be much longer. it really puts me of reading until it's completely finished 😭

    08/06/2021 22:55

  • Sherry Lee Gay

    please hurry

    08/06/2021 05:54

  • stacie williams

    I literally check for an update everyday 😂😭…. so ready for the next chapters

    08/06/2021 01:01

  • blocartil

    Waiting for an update is TORTURE!

    08/05/2021 23:55

  • Carol Dionne

    🤪..This is me every time I check for an update 😂

    08/05/2021 22:57

  • Rachel Moye

    I am in it 😂🤣😂 hooked, line, and sinker!! I like that we haven't gotten a chappy with phobos' point of view, yet. In TAVT, we didn't get Deimos' point of view til later on in the book and I think that served the story well.

    08/05/2021 17:05

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    This has to be my favorite of your books so far! I always look forward to new chapters!

    08/05/2021 08:36

  • A M Archibald

    she changes her mind so much. I would like to see her stick by her thoughts and earn a voice at some point. She doesn't say what she thinks and that is why she is weak. I hope to see some character development soon because at the minute we're just going round and around with her thoughts. They are the same in each chapter. Same with Phobos, he is a totally different character yet he is just as weak. He doesn't tell her what he thinks or communicates with her like he did before. There's no love here at all, whereas at the beginning of the book there was. If he doesn't love her he should reject her or if she is not happy she should reject him. His emotional abuse of her is frustrating. Making her feel like an object is disgusting. As you can tell I don't like Phobos. Theia is treated better by his Beta, he at least seems to like her.

    08/05/2021 05:52

  • Cindy Griffin

    Can't hardly wait to see what happens next! :-)

    08/05/2021 01:04

  • Jazmine Pratt

    loving! how often do you update?

    08/04/2021 18:47

  • EightiesBaby

    Not complaining at all but new to the books! Curious if there is a schedule for new chapters?

    08/04/2021 18:26

  • QueenKae

    I remember Phobos wanted her to be able to read emotions really well but she can’t read minds. I know she stopped training at around 16 (I think) was it because of the brazen males in her pack or will that be revealed in the book? I’m glad they are in the same living space. I’m going to take a wild guess Phobos and his friend help each other out. He was there for her and her son and she maybe helped out around the pack (thinking back to when she kept speaking up) and was probably hoping for more.

    08/04/2021 16:52

  • Reader-371843

    I am getting frustrated by Phobos’ actions. he is intelligent and knows the “normal” ways and can communicate. I need some communication and civilized behaviour now from Phobos and clarity on Moira’s role… because I feel de need to rip her head off.

    08/04/2021 16:38

  • Queen M

    Luna Liz I lost the battle. I was trying to hold out and read the next update and this one together. I lasted a day SMH. thank you for another beautiful chapter. I actually am starting to see P’s care for him to plan the building of the cabin in advance and the making of her clothes. I wonder why he didn’t just warn her like “I am coming to get you on this date be ready” she could have learned there lanauage and prepared herself. Also, I am still wondering how they will make it a year with out mating because this interaction are hot and heavy for real. I worry for Theia, she is going to suffer so much, she has such low thoughts of herself and of Phobos. I wonder if she will remember his beast trying to mark her when she was a child. I am excited for the next chappy. Thank you for your hard work.

    08/04/2021 13:43

  • Cassandra Smith

    I am so hooked on this story! I feel sorry for Phobos, I think he is misunderstood. he is trying to give Theia time to accept him but I think he struggles to communicate with her he also has the pressure of his pack accepting someone so different from themselves as their Luna, can't wait for the update 😁

    08/04/2021 13:14

  • stacie williams

    I’m glad to see the high attraction and draw that Phobos and Theia have for each other. it’s clearly been there since adolescences, but I wonder when the communication will start. I feel like Phobos isn’t opening up because he thinks she’s been with others, I wonder why she won’t just tell him. plus he’s been watching her all this time I would think he’d know. whew it’s frustrating lol

    08/04/2021 10:50

  • Sky💕

    Thiea has to toughen up a little. I love Drakho ❤️. I’m trying to figure this chick Moira out, I don’t get a bad vibe from her. I have to see how this plays out, but i do feel like she holds some type of feeling for him. But if that’s the case sis need to go find her second chance mate! 😂

    08/04/2021 00:56

  • Samantha Cokuslu

    ahhh, I can’t wait for more chapters. I love seeing what is unraveling between the two

    08/04/2021 00:36

  • Sky💕

    Why this app won’t let me be great and post long ass comment lol. I hate I have to break it up. Dang let a sister be great! 😂

    08/03/2021 23:55

  • Sky💕

    Ok, Thiea so you got a little freak in you? 😂 It went 0-100 real quick. From them riding on a horse to him jacking off and filling her up 😩🔥

    08/03/2021 23:54

  • Nita

    I hope Deimos & Lumina arrive for a visit…maybe Lumina will help Theia in putting the women in their places & teach her a little combat, considering Phobos thinks highly of Lumina 😁

    08/03/2021 23:15

  • Gery

    Liz, thank u for a wonderful story so far. I just feel like there is so much confusion & Theia is rather naive that I feel like they are getting nowhere anytime soon & it drags out a bit.

    08/03/2021 23:10

  • Mel West

    Liz, I truly love your writing. I am however having trouble with Theia not opeing het mouth the speak her truth and Phobos just using as a sex object. I know he and his beast are 1 but surely he wants her to know him…?

    08/03/2021 19:03

  • Vanessa

    I am noticing what I think is a pattern here. in the deimos story whenever phobos and theia appear in public away from phobos pack, phobos maintains distance from theia as though he does not want to show in public his desire for her...that she has some power over her..does not want to show his weakness..when he is with his pack he however seems to want to pull her close to him...not sure if my observations are correct however it seems like a pattern

    08/03/2021 17:18

  • Megsh826

    I love the new chapters but Moje Part IV ended on such a specific note and there is no mention of that in the new chapters. It feels a little disjointed and needs some better transition. I kept waiting for it to be visited in some kind of flashback or something and it never came. That chapter did *not* end with a resolution it needs one.

    08/03/2021 17:08

  • Grace Willoughby

    Ugh Phobos 🤤🤤🤤♥️

    08/03/2021 14:21

  • Reesons

    I think much of Theia's misunderstanding comes from the lack of communication. Drakho gives explains when he's around but he's not around Theia much. Plus it's almost like she refuses because the pack isn't ideal or what she's use to. She's a bit unaccepting.

    08/03/2021 11:14

  • olliesea_bengals

    I worry for Theia’s mental well-being. She’s trying hard to communicate her feelings and the huge fact that Phobos was wrong in assuming she’s slept around. Yet, Phobos either ignores her or toys with her emotions like a dog with a new toy. She needs to pull a Lumina and go visit another pack, Cronos or Deimos or another friend or hell go to a hotel, call up her pack friends and decompress and let her emotions out. 😩💔😭

    08/03/2021 10:56

  • Trisha Reynolds

    I don’t think my heart can take much more. she needs to leave that place I would rather be alone than be treated like that. still don’t understand Phobos or his lack of communication

    08/03/2021 07:05

  • Cassi1234

    yas yas yas Luna Liz!!!! sooo gooooodddd! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

    08/03/2021 05:17

  • BluezCluez

    great update! im hoping they talk soon & clear things up. i feel like phobos had sex with many women - in the beginning it said something abt waiting for Theia. then different encounters between pack members, other wolves & phobos point out that he’s had sex. i am repulsed by double standards & purity shaming — hopefully she gives him hell for putting her through all this. will theia’s wolf come out soon and how long will it take her to pick up on the language & culture? hope theia figures out what kind of relationship moira and phobos had before she came

    08/03/2021 03:57

  • Ready Reader 1

    Great chapter! I’m still trying to figure out Moira. Girllll, don’t be glancing at Theia hut wishing you lived there lol. I’m still trying to figure out the “friendship” between her and Phobos. Theia just has to get use to a new way of life, but at least now she can season the food. I wouldn’t want bland meat either 🤣🤣

    08/03/2021 02:02

  • sara moore

    I am so excited for them to talk!!! it’s easy to see that they are both thinking the worse about each other’s feelings ! I cannot wait to see Theia realize the good she is doing for her pack. I need her wolf to speak their language to help her along. lol

    08/03/2021 00:21

  • Vanessa

    ah just noticed another chapter..things are about to get interesting!!!! I am really going to have to practice self restraint to not check for updates constantly!!!!

    08/03/2021 00:19

  • Shea

    Just smiled from ear to ear seeing that there was an update. 😊 Thank you Luna Liz!!!

    08/02/2021 23:39

  • Nita

    maybe Theia is stuck in the past & needs to bring her mind to the now & accept he has changed

    08/02/2021 22:47

  • Nita

    oh Theia you keep looking for faults in Phobos! the other male was prepared to harm you & insult you!

    08/02/2021 22:44

  • Vanessa

    liz also wanted to ask if the end of more part 4 will be revisited the scene where the phobos steps in to shield theia from the other woman?

    08/02/2021 22:41

  • Vanessa

    luna liz the whole use of the horse scene was very clever :-) I also found it interesting that the horse was comfortable with theia is this because of the whole soul aspect where theia and phobos share the same soul each a part of the other and the horse can sense this so he is accepting of her?

    08/02/2021 22:17

  • Carol Dionne

    lol with Luna Liz going back to work and having to wait on updates I’m going to be checking this app like a crackhead needing CRACK😂🤣

    08/02/2021 22:13

  • Carol Dionne

    the sexual tension in this story got me tense!😬

    08/02/2021 22:11

  • plazy

    ‘All in’ INDEED! Luna Liz is about hit us where it hurts *SO good* next update 😍🤤

    08/02/2021 22:05

  • TNB

    Alright now I've been in Phobos corner but even I wanna smack words out of his *sigh*.

    08/02/2021 21:47

  • Reader-254912

    omg I can’t wait I’m so super excited about the next chapters 👏👏👏👏

    08/02/2021 21:06

  • Carol Dionne

    Still no update 😰

    08/02/2021 18:00

  • Cassi1234

    so I’m loving this just as much!

    08/02/2021 04:24

  • Jordan Retzer

    him and his pack reminds me of Khal Drogo from Game of Thrones!

    08/01/2021 01:06

  • BluezCluez

    poor theia - my heart hurt for her when phobos uttered his first sentence to her. hopedully his walls go down and he learns to communicate with her. i’m glad he felt something when theia was watching the 3 women. im more ecstatic that he claimed theia when that female wanted her to have sex with her. looking forward to the next update

    07/31/2021 20:23

  • Desire

    when will you update again?

    07/31/2021 18:31

  • Jordan Retzer

    this is the best book on this app 💯

    07/31/2021 02:24

  • Anna Yocum

    what's the language used in PHOBOS' pack? I speak Russian and some Ukrainian and can recognize the slavic language but not sure.

    07/31/2021 00:17

  • Reader-270304

    more more! can’t wait to find out what’s next.

    07/30/2021 23:12

  • Carol Dionne

    only one update this week..I’m dying here 😩…

    07/30/2021 22:41

  • Kiera J

    Just got through the prologue and I really appreciate an author who sets my expectations. I need trigger warnings so seriously deeply appreciated.

    07/30/2021 03:17

  • YanyRose

    Luna Liz! just finished the last epilogue on TAVT… and I’m over here checking for updates 🤣 sorry… I feel bad with all the pressure we put on you… you’re just amazing! But I have to admit, Phobos is my favorite ♥️ can’t wait for the next update! 🥰

    07/30/2021 02:12

  • Jennifer Larimer

    I absolutely love your rules! yoy ho Luna Liz!!

    07/28/2021 17:50

  • Carol Dionne

    Waiting for updates is killer 😩

    07/28/2021 14:12

  • B Beau L

    @LunaLiz I can't wait until Theia starts cooking her delicious food and changes things in Phobos and her pack. 💖 xxx

    07/28/2021 13:02

  • Christie Schaapveld

    I love this book so far! thank u! can't wait to read some more!

    07/28/2021 05:20

  • Ashleigh Morton

    Why the sudden/scheduled visits to Phobos’ pack when they were children?

    07/28/2021 00:28

  • Sky💕

    So I have one question. What female’s he got that he let old girl do as she pleases? Because last time I checked the old lady said he was a virgin and never once looked at another female. 👀

    07/27/2021 23:41

  • ninja

    need more of this story 😫😫

    07/27/2021 21:07

  • Elle 🧿

    I have just started this story, I’m about to read ‘Goosebumps’ 😊. It’s great to know the back story. As I am very new into the story, so I maybe completely wrong and off the mark 🙃, but I feel that everything Phobos has trained and taught Theia will come into play during this story... her journey... for example; the story of the Hare and what she learnt from that, the training with knives and what she learnt from that and the learning to recognise emotions (so much that she wants to surprise Phobos at how good she is). As I said I maybe completely wrong but I feel there will be more to her than just her shyness. Cant wait for the rest of her journey 🐺🥰. Thank you Luna Liz ❤️

    07/27/2021 19:20

  • Lidiane Barros

    I loved this … cant wait to see more how their dinamic will evolve… I know he is not supposed to speak a lot but at least one word here and there I think it’s necessary so this chappy was great - but she needs to be more direct not ask him what do you mean about that night but say who told you I had been with others ans how dare you not ask me yourself. cant wait for more 🌶 too just frustrated cause I know it will be an year before anything happens 😭 but at least if they keep “doing” stuff lol I wonder how does he manage to hold his beast now that she is always there - I assume the beast is craving to at least mark her he is always seeking her neck etc … Anyway thanks Lizzy today is my Bday so I wait until this morning to read with my coffee to celebrate best way ever to start the day …. hope we get more soon xx ❤️

    07/27/2021 06:44

  • QueenKae

    Phobos also said basically the pack would choose his mate. I’m wondering if he told Theia that because he felt she wasn’t ready yet. It’s holes in his story 👀. Theia is down to try anything once she is definitely getting in where she fits in.

    07/27/2021 03:22

  • olliesea_bengals

    Another phenomenal update! But once again I feel so bad for Theia. Hooray for her standing her ground and slapping Phobos when he basically called her a hoe. If he doesn’t start communicating with Theia properly (and soon) he’ll lose her like Deimos almost lost Lumina. I love your writing style so much Luna Liz.

    07/27/2021 03:07

  • Sky💕

    Deimos would never! 😂❤️

    07/27/2021 02:00

  • Sky💕

    Ok. So I get it. His pack has been waiting years for there Luna to the point where they had to tell him ok it’s time. They want there heir. But this is where communication comes in on Phebos part. Talk to her and let her know what’s about to happen and why. Help her understand! This is definitely not how her first time should be. Oh hell naw, he tried it! Bluntly called her a hoe. Disrespectful ass! If I was Theia we would have been fighting! Naw stay your disrespectful ass away! 🙅🏾‍♀️

    07/27/2021 01:59

  • Sky💕

    I like Drakho! He might just be the Cronus of this book. Damn Phobos at least explain what the hell is going on. As far as him lying about the sheep and why she’s crying, I feel it’s to protect her. Because had she spoke up it would have went 0 to 100 real quick. Argus is to cute! ❤️

    07/27/2021 00:47

  • Sky💕

    Ok….First of all 18 days? Oh hell naw 😂. Second of all who wouldn’t want to change clothes and wash there ass while traveling for 18 days tf. Third Thiea just punch his ass in the face one good time, I bet he won’t ignore you again. My poor Thiea, got her out here with these beast and they looking at like she crazy 😩😭.

    07/27/2021 00:18

  • GALINTHEVAN

    Awwwwe Ms. Luna Liz... reading your work is like gliding on an ice rink. Superb in so many ways. I love the story and the emotions it makes me feel. Humm, is Phobos working her up on purpose to get the young feisty Theia back?? lol ❤

    07/26/2021 23:17

  • Anna

    ooo Luna Lyz you’ve done it again ….Mojie…. Phobos not matter how thick or tall your wall is Theia will tear it down one brick at a time. Loved this chapter, thank you 🙏

    07/26/2021 21:58

  • Becky Cline

    ugh I need more, always sitting on edge waiting for the next post to the story

    07/26/2021 21:50

  • Tina

    I need to read slower 😩😫😭

    07/26/2021 20:59

  • natasha wakeford

    theia is much stronger than she gives herself credit for. she was spoilt as a pup by her family and knows no different however it seems this pack will be the making of her and her wolf 💓💘

    07/26/2021 20:52

  • QueenKae

    Wow jealous Phobos. I would like to know if he was also bothered by the visiting Alpha’s and what they said about his mate…he better start talking or he will be using his hand a lot. I’m happy Theia stood up for herself, these wolves definitely want to try her. That female who put on a show is bold 👀.

    07/26/2021 17:52

  • Queen M

    Luna Liz you did it again such vivid writing. I am so intrigued by Phobos pack and there customs. QQ: why do packs have breeders? one day I hope you have a guide book for the world you created in your stories. I look forward to Theia strength showing through. I can’t wait to understand Phobos thinking.

    07/26/2021 16:36
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