PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

Elsa Rodarte

Hello my Luna! I love your writing, love these 2 stories! I can feel their emotions! Patiently waiting. 💕

Petr Kulfan

Just quick question. My male part 2: is it 'Můj' and 'Drahý' in Czech language they speak or did you miss type it? Just asking, it is my language and it surprised me

Julie Greenstreet

love the updates , Big Thank You,, Just goes to show communication in a relationship is everything . Loving this story so far ,great work x

Carol Dionne

Thank you for this Luna ☺️

Reader-371843

love the story! still angry at P though, T forgives him to easily… he needs to work for it! extremely hard!!

Trisha Reynolds

I’m so mad with Phobos for abandoning her. he is her mate and does not deserve her

make phobos work for it he needs to be put through some training on how to be a real mate

Jessica Miller

what's the update schedule?

natasha wakeford

theia is much stronger than she gives herself credit for. she was spoilt as a pup by her family and knows no different however it seems this pack will be the making of her and her wolf 💓💘

Liz, I truly love your writing. I am however having trouble with Theia not opeing het mouth the speak her truth and Phobos just using as a sex object. I know he and his beast are 1 but surely he wants her to know him…?

when will you update again?

Jordan Retzer

I think we get an update today 🙏 she said the king returns Monday!!! so excited

Jessica Mallow

just starting to read this book, I thought I remembered theia and lumina’s meeting going a bit differently in deimo’s book

Tracy Rolston

all this comments are making to read this now but I’m waiting a bit because I want a good bit of chapters to read before starting it 😆

Reader-402579

I came across this story only the other day. and have subsequently devoured it at speed. now I must wait as your updates come through. can’t wait to read more ♥️

Loved the update and getting to see Phobos have some flirtation with his female! i appreciate the slow build of the relationship too, they have a ways to go though! I can't help but wonder if Theia will invite Lumina to the pack one day? I would love to see Lumina's response to the Breeders, lack of respect towards a Luna, and the packs views of women in general. I think Lumina would be ticked! Anyway, thank you for the chappy Luna Liz! 😊

Great chapter! I’m still trying to figure out Moira. Girllll, don’t be glancing at Theia hut wishing you lived there lol. I’m still trying to figure out the “friendship” between her and Phobos. Theia just has to get use to a new way of life, but at least now she can season the food. I wouldn’t want bland meat either 🤣🤣

how often will Phobos be updated! I’m dying to find out what happens next 😬

natasha wakeford

loving this. will you be doing a book for chronus, he's so sweet I hope he gets his happy ending xx

Just got through the prologue and I really appreciate an author who sets my expectations. I need trigger warnings so seriously deeply appreciated.

enjoying this story so far!! so excited to read more

Rodleen Dalli

will we have another update this week pls? say that you do.🙏🙏🙏

Wow jealous Phobos. I would like to know if he was also bothered by the visiting Alpha’s and what they said about his mate…he better start talking or he will be using his hand a lot. I’m happy Theia stood up for herself, these wolves definitely want to try her. That female who put on a show is bold 👀.

As sexy as the cover is, shouldn't his arms be covered in tatts?? looking forward to this story, the 1st was good!

maybe Theia is stuck in the past & needs to bring her mind to the now & accept he has changed

Gosh how I waited for this thank you. You have managed to make this as captivating as Deimos. i do worry that he hasn’t waited for her and had been with Moira as is one thing when you haven’t met your mate like Deimos hadn’t but when you exactly who she is then thay would be different and he being angry with her about almost being with Deimos wouldnt be fair …. we shall see … so many questions and possibilities but I know you will make this wonderful as always Liz. ❤️

ok, I'm patiently waiting for the rest. I love your stories.

omg to take her virginity like that she is going to be more broken than Lumina. I’m not sure how she is going to survive or even if she will want to. so sad

Lucy Xiong

after reading it again, here merely put his scent on her. he didn’t want to harm her. he wanted to protect her at the same time controlling his beast. because Phobos knows his pack expects an heir and that they should mate. but he loves her and he would never want to harm his mate in any given situation. he still an alpha and wants to please his pack. he stayed away as much as possible but his pack wants their luna.... I’m just thinking and assuming.

Anna Pesi

Here from the Alphas virgin tribute and I’m so excited to see Phobos and Theias journey! The first book had me in tears almost every chapter so I’m so excited for this book!! 😍

Mel

Is there gonna be more? I'm obsessed

Julie Greenstreet

confused by last chapter , so has Phobos mated Theia or just humped her , as comparing with other book when at Kala 1st birthday she’s still untouched ?

Reader-371843

hahaha jealous P… that is good! I still hope T makes him crawl and beg. I am tired of his behaviour. extremely tired

‘All in’ INDEED! Luna Liz is about hit us where it hurts *SO good* next update 😍🤤

A M Archibald

It would be best if you tried downloading a grammar extension. It would help you out a lot—something like Grammarly. You would learn the correct punctuation to use and help you with your wording. It will also make things flow better.

ooo!! this is getting good! love the discription on theses last four chapters. so glad Theia and Phobos are finally speaking up; hopefully soon to each other, so they both have some clarity!! Phobos shows his jealously…..does he understand or did he all this time understand how naive she is to this sex in general?

Hi Luna Liz, what is the age difference between Theai and Phobos? There is no mention of it in the story.

Kayla Irwin

amazing I am loving this story!

Rachel Moye

I love seeing Theia's strength 💖 Now, the Moira situation is unsettling... I agree with the anxiety comment 👆 I distinctly remember wanting Lumina to behead Theia like she did in the beginning with that one female. She also killed that one chic while she was pregnant. I guess you can't go around killing besties 😂🤣😂 Maybe this is Phobos' way of punishing her for being willing to be Deimos' luna if he didn't find his moon blessed? I know she felt betrayed when he lightweight rejected her at 18, too... idk if tit for tat is the way to go but I think I'd opt for transparency when it came to the pack. Who wants to be a fake luna? Like Phobos' you set me up for failure how many times? well 🤬 you, too! She's going to have to work hard and dive into learning their customs. at least with him gonna she will have time to grow without him. No more being blindsided 🤷‍♀️ And I like the old bat 😌

Read all available chapters and can’t wait for more!!

Yolanda Padrnos

I love this story. It’s said to read the way Theia is treated though. He doesn’t seem to have any regard for feelings. It’s like he doesn’t want her. I wonder why he just didn’t reject her officially. Also his bond with Moira seems sketchy. He talks to her so easily.

Will there be an explanation about why Phobos inherited a bunch of savages in the middle of nowhere while Deimos gets their father's pack? Is Phobos more at home with his pack since he has been going there most of his life? Or he had issues adjusting as well?

Queen M

I am so excited for the next chapter...like I understand Phobos abs I feel for Theia. When do the reunite, why does Deimos act surprised when he see’s Theia when he returns from Italy.

Reader-254912

omg I can’t wait I’m so super excited about the next chapters 👏👏👏👏

beautiful writing as always. I wanted to ask dies their have any other friends at all....a female friend perhaps? in the previous book it is said that she and deimos were lovers...I would like to think it was more of a boyfriend girlfriend innocent relationship without sex since I see them more like siblings or am I wrong in my interpretation? thanks again for the lovely storytelling!!!

oh my God liz you are truly gifted the way you write is so beautiful. i am in love with DEIMOS (which I liked better than the new edited version The Alpha’s Virgin T ) and now this one ... I am speechless I am roocked already and knowing the characters already before and getting a chance to know of their childhood was such a clever move!!! well done ... twice a week is not enough because its too good 🙏🏻❤️🙏🏻❤️🙏🏻❤️ thank you

sara moore

oh this book is amazing.

Sammy Bunting

I am hoping argus is not actually phobos son as according to the others he has not touched anyone and waited for his luna.... I don't think anything will be said between the two and they both will continue to suffer in silence. The waiting is killing me and I think I will wait til a few chapters have been uploaded but every time I see an update I can't resist and just have to read... Such excellent writing LL xx

Kelly Hamilton

I really love this… you are a great writer.. ❤️💕 can’t wait for the next update!!!

I had tears in my eyes reading how she was feeling 😭

Griselda Castro Lamas

I enjoy your writing; however, you rely on the thesaurus too much. Some of the words you are using do not fit the context. Sometimes the right word is simpler.

Carol Dionne

Will there be a weekend update treat?!? 😁

emily Stevens

absolutely I’m love with this book! I’m a very picky reader and so far I could binge read 100’s of chapters of this book!!!

Phobos is supposed to be this amazing leader, so he HAS to be intelligent. How can he not predict these things? Shouldn't he prepare her for all these rituals to make sure his pack accepts her? He KNOWS she is a foreigner and needs help being their true Luna. Same with welcoming ceremony, then their mating ceremony, then welcoming Alphas of other packs... It seems like he is either not intelligent or intentionally wants her to fail.

Susan Pearson

Anxiety!! Thats what I felt at the beginning. I was literally feeling what Theia was saying talking about Moira. like when you suspect a partner cheating or the ending of your relationship... I still do not like Moira for some reason. Breathtakingly Perfect that Theia performed the Knives Dance and threw it at Phobos head!!! He deserved it and I'm glad she spoke back to the Female Leader. I'm excited to get into the Spicy Chapters but I do feel they need to talk and she needs answers about Moira Thanks Luna for the updates!!! I think the book is going at a perfect pace and I appreciate the multiple chapters

if you read the Alpha Virgin's tribute Phobos behavior towards Theia is similar to Deimos.

I read way to fast to wait for updates.. I have got to start reading books that r complete!!

Susan Pearson

So which book do you read first? I thought this was first but yet its not complete. If I read the other book will.it conflict or be confusing? Does it have Theia & Phobos story in it?

it's almost as though Lina would have been a great match for Phobos and of course Thiea, and Diemos got along well so they should have been mates. the moon goddess messed up in mating!

Tiffany Moore

I know this is probably premature but will there be a book about Coronus? I am in love with him and so want to see him with a mate!

Ugh - I wish for her sake there would have been some blood on her dress so he would have felt like the ass that hes being to her.

gosh I know I already commented earlier today on the new chapters but I am so worried about the pup and the whole year that has passed without they mating - Liz please dont let the pup be his son and dont let him take another just because he thinks she did. it will be so beautiful of for once the male is also a virgin when they mate cause they usually aren’t…. 🙏🏻❤️

Reader-477922

when is next update?

Female Alpha Skye

oh my-this story has definitely got me!!!! as always, you are an absolutely brilliant and eloquent writer 💕

Trisha Reynolds

thank you so much for this update it’s a great birthday gift. absolutely loving this journey

Ellen Leibfrid

prolog: if anyone complains about your story, I hope you have the authority to just delete their comments. you did a wonderful job explaining!

Whittney Carie

This book is an emotional Rollercoaster that I just cannot get off of!! I just sit around waiting on the next update just to be heart broken for Theia again!! I really don't think he is as bad as we are reading, but he has so many misconceptions of her that they are never going to get anywhere at their current pace.

BexyCL

Luna Liz, I’ve read ‘Slay Me’ to many times today and I must confess that I can’t help the tears that threaten my eyes each time. I connect with our female Theia and I know that all this will make her stronger, even more worthy than she is now. For she’s everything a strong and a humble woman possesses and that, is far more than dominance or any form of violence.

Beckyboone1

Love the insight to their childhood! Looking forward to what is next. I hope we can eventually get a Cronus story too!

I swear, I check at least 3 times a day to see if Phebos and Theias story has been updated!! 😂 We all can’t wait to see what happens next! 💕

Rachel Moye

I am so happy you chose to delve more into this 🌎 you have created! Illuminating more characters in the same realm is something I am very fond of. I wonder 🤔 will you shine light on Cronus and his moon blessed in the future? I absolutely love his character! He has been my favorite 🤫 And I'm not even going to lie, I really thought Theia was going to die at Lumina's hands 😂

Lucy Xiong

okay I’ve been reading all the comments🤣 I’m so glad I can talk about the book here and especially with you Luna. not sure if my females understands my love for this book. but I know this is the place where females can relate to my love of the stories here.💕

Queen M

Erant thought…@lunaliz I wonder if Cronos mate will be from Phobos pack…how crazy would that be

Britos

I absolutely adore this book! this is one of those books for me that I have to see through to the end. Do you have an update schedule? cause I would be here everytime a new chapter drops ❤️🥺

At what age can they start feeling the sparks from the mate bond? Did he know she was his mate but thought since she was to young she wouldn’t be able to feel it?

I definitely like how this book is evolving. this series helps me understand Theia a bit more after the last book.I can’t wait to see some chapter from Phobos POV is silence and non Chaka to attitude is maddening. looking forward to the next chapters.

Deimos was a real asshat for saying those demeaning things about his mate I’m glad she made him suffer when she set boundaries when the baby was born!

I think her cooking for him and making his plate put him at ease. He probably didn’t even know where to start after he left her high and dry all those years ago. I’m loving their development but I’m just waiting for $hit to hit the fan. Its a few things that’s not sitting right with me. 1. His relationship with Moira- He told Theia that was his friend but she (Theia) was his best friend…I can’t tell! They could’ve bonded through trama (when his parents died he didn’t even come back), he was going to take her as his mate, or she wanted/thought he would. So many possibilities. I just hope it isn’t to bad with her getting close to Theia and him letting her. Also since Moira wants to be nice she could give her a heads up and tell her of the packs ways in advance. 2. This old head (female leader) gots to go! I’m getting lone wolf vibes not pack vibes. They don’t have to wait on Theia hand and foot but I don’t feel like she expects that. I could go on but I think this is a good stopping point! 😂

I am not seeing the new chapter cover.

I low key didn’t like Theia in the first book and now, especially these last few chapters, make me see Theia in a new light and I feel bad for her. She just wanted to be loved and instead is left feeling rejected and dejected. it makes her affair with Deimos make more sense - she just wanted to be love for who she is and Phobos broke her heart and spirit in more ways than one.

Reader-458723

what if phobos has another brother besides deimos or just like a close family member, and that person was moira’s mate. maybe he’s taking care of argus in an uncle sort of way.

Susan Pearson

Phobos is showing affection!!! I love it 💘 But....I'm still not a fan of Moira. I hate that Theia sees them as a family, like she doesn't belong. I think Moira has feelings for Phobos since he resembles her male

omg I am feeling the same desires as phobos but my desire is for more chapters!!!! lol I read these last 3 four times over!!!! it is like an addiction!! lol

Reader-731690

ok so I loved the virgin tribute and I’m digging this book BUT I have questions lol …. in the first part of the book with the backstory of their childhood it seems as those Phobos was more articulate and spoke, used his words lol. now he barely speaks and I feel he just does a lot of grunting nodding and one word answers, like he reverted to a caveman. is there a reason for this change? the suspense of his lack of language or response to theia is so frustrating lol I would want to smack him around 🤣🤣🤣 but that’s just my temperament

I am so happy Phobos is using his words. moreover I'm happy they have communicated to ease some of her insecurities. Once again I was left screaming as I realized I had reached the end so you definitely remain my greatest addiction lol. I like the new cover

Rachel Moye

totally engulfed! so happy you have been updating it more frequently 😘 thank you!!!

love your warning!!

How far along are we into the book approximately?

Tina

amazing!! Can't wait for the update!!! 🥰😍

I love the new cover 😍

well once again Liz amazing and please never apologise for long chapters its the opposite when I saw there were 3 almost cried of joy !!! thank you … ans like everyone said already we can now see why both of then reacted the way they did and the reasons behind it sadly hurting each other - I feel deeply for Phobos for she only discovered he his her mate but he has known for almost 10 years or so and could never act on it … now he just realised he won’t be able to take her and we know it will take a few more years until they reunite again and still wont be a loving reunion gosh Phobos 😭 poor you not being able to be with his mate for so long…. can’t wait for more I know you busy but please try to not make us wait much 🙏🏻🥰🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️ thanks

Hey Liz just finish Demios and Lumina story... ohhh myyyy I just loved it so much it brought me laughs,, sadness, joy so many emotions I can not wait to read Phobos and Theia story but I will wait the story gets a little bit further because I get to anxious waiting 🤣🤣🤣 but I have the book in my personaly library just waiting for more chapter firts. Just want to tell you, you are amazing!

Reader-458723

the fact that moira is talking bout how phobus looks like her dead mate is giving me bad vibes

Thoroughly enjoying the details on the backstory hopefully we get to the present plot soon!!

Carol Dionne

Ahhhh these chapters just gave me life ☺️

I'm so in love with their story! And I love the way Phobos loves Theia❤❤❤ Thank you Luna Liz, this happy will get me through til the next😍😍😍

I love you stories! this is such a great idea to to back story first and show before to tie with previous information from other book! Love it! can't wait for the next chapter!

love the new cover. enjoyed the update.

I have no idea how I’m so addicted to this book!! thank you for the update!! I cannot wait for Phobos to appear!! 🙏🏻❤️‍🔥

ah so now I see why she feels phobos will never accept her. her first qas not him but deimos!