PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

I will keep reading till the end!!! I get frustrated with the chapters that feel short, but love this story! will read it till the end, same as with Deimos’ story. love your writing Liz

I just started reading this and I love how you are putting their childhood in this. it’s not only telling Phobos and Theia’s story but it’s helping connect the unsaid parts about Deimos that Lumina may have not yet learned about him. I love it!

I enjoyed it!! thank you for sharing your talents!!

Amazing as always!!

when will this be completed im at a standstill cant wait

Inire

I’m here to support you! it’s an amazing story, keep writing the way you have!

Inire

Keep going the way you have! I love your books and they are worth it! I’m here to support you! you are an amazing writer!

Just a little feedback because it is quite off-putting in the latest three chapters but the writing is overly verbose. several unusual words appear very out of place (e.g. clemently, benevolently and succor to name a few). The words are uncommon and tend to become the focal point of the entire sentence thus losing the reader. Likewise, the use of -ing and -ly words should oft be kept to a minimum. For example, instead of ‘benevolently’ a better word choice would have been ‘warmly’ or ‘with warmth’ (if you want to avoid using -ly ending words). “I looked at her benevolently as…” “I looked at her with warmth (in my eyes) as…” I don’t mind the use of referring to eye color often but orbs and globes are somewhat overly fluffy. If you said eyes, it makes for a easier flow for the reader. The latest three chapters today have been the ones too focused on heavy and overly complicated prose. It seems unusual and makes the story less believable (because people talk simpler in every day life). I’m sorry but it seems a bit over the top (perhaps not for a period piece sent in medieval times). I hope you don’t mind the criticism but I have enjoyed your excellent variety of words in the previous chapters!

Alexis M.

was just me cracking up with the hen scene? I couldn’t stop laughing 😂

Contreras Lizzy

Your book is so good it is well worth every dime. I enjoy EVERY chapter. You’re very talented please don’t stop.

Amanda Caruana

yes don't stop I'm so invested in their story x

are we not getting an update this week or was the last one an early update?

Tasha Marie

I read about 2 books a week and so far I am so addicted to this story I can’t get enough. I love and hate the suspense of having to wait ....:.Ugggg. keep pushing I have a feeling you’re gonna blow up into a huge author that’s world known

Slau Hope

she been skating on thin ice every since she said sum about sucking another dudes off🥴

Lucy Xiong

I’m so excited to know their story!!! Makes me so eager to know what is next.

*flips table* come on can they just GET THERE already?!

Hi Luna Liz, in response to your questions… I personally love the slow burn style of your writing as it builds sexual tension. The length of the story is not an issue for me. However, I have noticed some other author chapters seem to be longer than yours, so I’m unsure why you’re required to break yours down into smaller ones - if I’m understanding that correctly. Love the new update!

Theia doesn’t understand that how Phobos is towards her is exactly how Deimos was towards Lumina & now it’s Theia on the other end of being scrutinised by her male

Hi Luna Liz, in response to your questions… I personally love the slow burn style of your writing as it builds sexual tension. The length of the story is not an issue for me. However, I have noticed some other author chapters seem to be longer than yours, so I’m unsure why you’re required to break yours down into smaller ones - if I’m understanding that correctly. Love the new update!

Queen M

Soo good, I was trying to train myself to wait until there where a couple updates but of course I lost…loved this chapter. Theia is strong, she never lets them see her weak. Phobos was dead wrong but I wonder if all he knows about being a mate is from his pack like…distance and no communication. poor Darkho…he just trying please his Luna and get some good food.

Yes! I can’t seem to get enough.

I love that there are so many parts to each update. Most do not update but a day or two each week and when they do it isn’t a very long chapter. it’s frustrating because the story does not feel like it is progressing. you updating with multiple long chapters are wonderful. keep it up and no shortcuts. you have a really good story here

Yes Luna with the warnings in the first chapter! 🙌🏾

Lucy Xiong

omg I love it!!! I’m going to read it over again. I can’t wait for more...😍

Trisha Reynolds

don’t stray from your story be true to the book. we have followed this far. I’m loving this book. keep true

while the early author’s notes are helpful, it’s disappointing that some of the information isn’t being conveyed in the actual text.

Trisha Reynolds

don’t stray from your story be true to the book. we have followed this far

I want to read the full story no short cuts it’s a great book

I want to read the full story no short cuts 💜 it’s to good of a book to be shortened 💜💜💜💜

Lucy Xiong

I had to read this update a second time. I love it!!!

Jordan Retzer

love this book sm. love the slow build up. all around love it.

Katie Whitmore

absolutely loving this, please update

👀what is coming? Phobos? Is Phobos coming for Theia?? I can’t wait to see what happens next!!

Angelica Monteon

this is such a great story! eagerly await the updates! thanks for a great read

Phobos told her not to have any other males in her room when she was a pup… how can he not understand? Not only is he with her alone (sometimes) he is eating her FOOD!

Sammy Bunting

My heart breaks for theia... I know we are catching up book 1 when theia visits deimos.. I am looking forward to seeing her story play out an Di hope she finds her inner strength xx

Waiting for an update is TORTURE!

Reader-254912

well worth it keep writing 🙌🏼🙌🏼

Reader-254912

oh no Luna Liz your books are so worth it please write to your hearts content I love your story and I love Phobos so much 😊

I think Phobos probably kissed someone and hence, he has a problem with kissing her cause he didn’t keep his promise or something similar. Really don’t think Theia is the problem, here, and this could have been easily resolved if she would have just asked him why. Lol.

I hope Theia becomes an irresistible bad ass later in the book, would love to see her character shine and her feminist side rage.

keep to your original strategy for this story! I’m loving it! I feel if you shorten it then it may ruin the book.

Rachel Moye

💖 Your work reads like poetry, bleeding heart, I can feel everything you pour into it! I love that you break it down into multiple parts, it gives us more. And a depth I just can't get anywhere else!! You're my favorite writer!! New age Anne Rice and I just can't get enough!! 👀

Thank you Liz, I am so happy and was surprised by the update! I am proud of Theia for telling him the truth, he can really be a dull-witted beast!!! I was struggling with the last few updates because it felt like nothing was going to happen and she gets very depressed and just hides it. much love ❤️

I find that Theia craves what he shows his friend Moira but in this chappy he's giving her way more than that.

this book is great! so worth it ❤️

this book is great! so worth it ❤️

Michele Nettles

Please just keep writing!!!!! I really enjoy the book just hate that we wait so long for more.

Oh my GOSH!! I absolutely love these books and these brothers! They are very complex males that have emotional hardships. It's sad to see parts of what leads to Phobos being the way he is in TAVT. Phobos lobes Theia dearly, that's the reason he won't/can't take her to his pack. Deimos was a douchebag to Lumina from the beginning. ith brothers have communication issues that stemmed from their father and I hate that for them.

Thank you for the update! 2 months! She sulked for 2 months? I am glad she is showing Phobos some character, but at this point she either should start actively fixing their issues or just leave.

Christina Aldridge

omg yay! she finally stands up for herself! ahhhh this is the perfect way to start my week! #bossbabe

I’m am so hooked!! I love Phobos and Theia! ❤️‍🔥❤️

im dying 😂 I just read all from the beginning again

Rachel Moye

I am so happy after this one 😍 I love the way Moira regards her in a respectful, admiring way. The leader is older and she knows the road will be long and hard just as Theia expressed to Moira. I'm sure She will find a way to warm that old croans heart 🤭 thank you 💓

if you have written more chapters I would love for you to just make them available all at once. I want to read the full story. You shouldn’t shorten it.

Carol Dionne

I just keep telling myself ..I know she is going to update just wait Carol..Just wait…It’s just so hard😭 I feel Theia..JUST NEEDY 🥴

if you have written more chapters I would love for you to just make them available all at once. I want to read the full story. You shouldn’t shorten it.

Susan Pearson

always amazing

Oh my heart. I never thought I would empathise with Theia ❤️

oh yes Luna Liz, something IS coming and.. dare I say that I am quite excited 😇

Trisha Reynolds

wow my heart is literally breaking you brought me to tears with your words. please update soon you are an amazing writer

Rodleen Dalli

keep writing looking forward to the story. it's going to get hot! finally!! do we have to wait another week!!

Phobos is a moron. Even in modern western society what he did would be considered unacceptable. And he claims he wasn't aware it would be offending. I would much rather prefer an answer along the lines "you kicked me out, I intentionally made you angry while making myself comfortable"

Elsa Rodarte

Thank you, my Luna!! Excellent crappy! can’t wait for Theia to unload on the leader😂.

keep this going! absolutely love this book

sara moore

thank you thank you thank you! perfectly timed progress ! your writing is amazing. my soul needed them to make some sort of progress. lol

the others are doing this on purpose to get rid of her! is the old woman Phobos’s female friends mother? please let lumina & Deimos visit, they want to witness a female warrior I’m sure lumina will give it to them while supporting Theia

I'm still crying laughing over *distasteful* Theia saying to herself "this shall leave me mute for a few days..." 🤣🙈💖 bless her sweet innocent heart 💖 x

In previous chapter didn't theia tell moira that phobos mentioned moira to her when she was a pup? so wouldn't moira find out from that that theia and phobos knew each other since they were much younger?

Marriella Joyce

love the book so far at least it explains why Phobos is so mad and detached from Thea because Theia wanted to go after his brother and even when his brother found the mate she still didn't leave them alone her brother had to make her leave

Saydi Hunter

I think that everything Phobos does/doesnt do is always with his female in mind. Is it always the right way? Absolutely not, but I beleive his soul is entirely Theia minded. I would like to believe he is still fighting his wolf around her. She has not seen him (Phobos wolf) since he saved her in the alley and he seemed to relish in her company then so I do not beleive that he is repulsed by her. Also when they go to Deimos pack, Theia mourns but her wolf does not understand because the beast worships her. I think that Phobos is fearful of his beast coming out to mark Theia without her consent. Based off of the sea trip, and the past, he knows that Theia is terrified of that side of him. He doesnt want to scare her. Even their sexual postion in this chapter, with Theia on top, I believe that is startegic so that his beast would not come forth to pin Thiea down against her will. Theia was in control, in order to control his beast. Whatever it is, I’m here for it! I love Phobos, Theia, Vudce, Awan, Drahko, and Moira! All of em!

natasha wakeford

please continue love your writing always leaves us with our own thoughts of what might be.x

I feel like Phobos may have been debating whether to bring Theia out there or just make Moira the queen. I feel like he has a practical side battling against the mate bond.

Julie Greenstreet

how ofton are updates pleaseo

lol I can understand Theias frustration with Phobos sleeping soundly I had to laugh!

Heather Anne

loved the update ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Cheyenne Goodrow

This has to be my favorite of your books so far! I always look forward to new chapters!

Can someone please explain why Phobos does not want to kiss Theia before I bust a vein on my forehead?

Trisha Reynolds

still hate him what an ass. she was faithful to him and he believes lies. she needs to leave him and live her life

Thea knew her her moon blessed was, yet she allowed herself to develop feelings for Deimos. This explains the sentiments she expressed at the end of TAVT.

Gery

Liz, thank u for a wonderful story so far. I just feel like there is so much confusion & Theia is rather naive that I feel like they are getting nowhere anytime soon & it drags out a bit.

I only just finished hell |, but I’m so mad at Deimos for abandoning her, like I get it he has his mate but she’s like a sister to him and he just dropped her, and I hate Cronus for bossing her around and acting like she’s a baby, she isn’t! and Phobos left her when she was 18, I don’t care about the stupid mate bond I would’ve dropped his ass quicker than he could say sorry, and all of her friends are treating her like a baby aswell! she’s not a bloody baby! she can look after herself, and she just sits there and laughs at it, like can you not see everything that’s going on? are you blind?

Is Phobos disgusted by Theias lips, thinking she has kissed (and done worse) with his brother Deimos...? or is he scared of his beast wanting to claim her... I presume it's the first though... I love these books ❤️❤️❤️

Elle 🧿

I don’t see the new front cover, I’ve tried logging out and back in and it’s still not done it mehhh 😅😅. I love the new cover btw 👍👍.

Sherry Lee Gay

please hurry

Reader-119061

gahhhh!! I love this series so much! I check ever other day for updates and then read them so fast! 😭 Keep up the amazing work!!

Ariam Teklemichael

update please🙏🏽

Susan Pearson

So many emotions through the chapters! I was about to cry as she spoke of there past on the room. It brought me all the way back to the beginning. He has alot of making up to do! I also love that he had the ring on him 🥰

Kayla Swick

I love their back story. I feel it's really important because when he was introduced for the first time in Deimos' story, he didn't seem to care for her. you can tell that he loved her, STILL loves her. I can't wait to learn what happened and if maybe this incident was a catalyst to him distancing himself from her.

Reader-371843

loved it!!!! still waiting for their conversation about her being a virgin and his assumptions otherwise!!! loving the story!!!

I’m still not sure about Moira, but she seems helpful and gives Theia a little peace. perhaps they will become friends like her and Lumina was. Moria could just be wishing she had a mate like Phobos and not specifically him. We can be certain that Phobos will be a good dad. He is already practicing and seems to love Moira’s son. Ohhhhhh and Theia is right, his ass be lying 🤥 🤣🤣

Becky Cline

ugh I need more, always sitting on edge waiting for the next post to the story

love the diary entries! what a superb snippet of what's to come! x

Councillor Theona

Enjoying this book! Can't wait for the update. . :)

Reader-458723

i hope phobos stayed true to her even after she told him to leave when she was 18!

Omgosh!! what is it with Phobos kissing her!! she needs to ask him if he won’t tell her. this was so good!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! I hope they can continue to speak openly now and grow together. I love how she speaks to him - “you dim witted beast”. Isn’t this true of so many men! Love the update. You are a beautiful writer!

AHHHHH! Its about time he shows up! Now what… is he going to leave again, stay away for a few more years until HE thinks she’s “ready”??? hmmm

Angelica Monteon

so so very good! thank u for an amazing story

Elsa Rodarte

Hello my Luna! I love your writing, love these 2 stories! I can feel their emotions! Patiently waiting. 💕