PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments
Tabitha Vickers
well I'm desperate to see them have a baby & with this see the king of beasts calm some what but the comment about him becoming even more cruel towards the end of this book makes me feel quite ill. He may love her in his beast way but I feel so desperate for Thiea. Will her life just be filled with the emotional roller coaster that he is? Will she ever have the love, peace & respect she deserves? I'm very conflicted with this last chapter.
09/04/2023 09:00
I’m sorry but no…Phobos knows he’s wrong he told Theia no other male should be in her room when she was a pup! But he can go to another female’s house andddd eat her food?! It’s not if you don’t like it I won’t do it. You shouldn’t be doing it!
09/04/2023 09:00I love how we can now comment on paragraphs and chapters now! Can’t wait for the next update 😊.
09/04/2023 08:59
WatUpG
I'm loving this read killing me waiting on updates 💜🙏
09/04/2023 08:59I think its a unanimous answer you just post away we will keep reading! We don't care we ALL luvs this book that much!!!! PLEASE post more I am struggling I need more!! 😂🤦🏼♀️ I keep reading the last chapters over and over till the new ones come out!!!
09/04/2023 08:59I love this story! Please continue!
09/04/2023 08:59I love to reread chapters. love the book. thank you so much
09/04/2023 08:59
Carol Dionne
How to tell a good book? I haven’t inquired about an update since chapters were posted. I’m still trying to recover from the last chaps..I’m just SHOOK🥺
09/04/2023 08:59Rodleen Dalli
keep writing looking forward to the story. it's going to get hot! finally!! do we have to wait another week!!
09/04/2023 08:59Rodleen Dalli
keep writing looking forward to the story. it's going to get hot! finally!! do we have to wait another week!!
09/04/2023 08:59Reader-458723
lord what good reason can he possibly have for refusing to kiss her
09/04/2023 08:59
BexyCL
such a breathtaking update!😭❤️
09/04/2023 08:59Rose Rodriguez
is this the end or is there more updates??
09/04/2023 08:58please keep writing Liz, I followed Deimos’ story all the way and will follow Phobos and can’t wait to see if you write 1 for Cronus!!!
09/04/2023 08:58Guurrlll feed your beast
09/04/2023 08:58run from him Theia let’s see how much attention he’ll give Moria then!
09/04/2023 08:58I will keep reading till the end!!! I get frustrated with the chapters that feel short, but love this story! will read it till the end, same as with Deimos’ story. love your writing Liz
09/04/2023 08:58I need more please do what you need to do but don't cut the book short I love when it shows this book has updated so please don't rush it x
09/04/2023 08:58yesss queen! love the update! can’t wait to see what happens.
09/04/2023 08:58Deanna Wilbur
loving this book, need to know how it ends, cant wait for future updates.
09/04/2023 08:58Inire
I’m here to support you! it’s an amazing story, keep writing the way you have!
09/04/2023 08:58
Bonnie Lancaster
I'll keep reading if you keep writing. I love story
09/04/2023 08:58Rachel Moye
woo-hoo! Thank you!!! 😘 lesson is things aren't always as they seem 😁
09/04/2023 08:58I want to see them shift already. Are they freaking werewolves or not? Theia barely acknowledges her wolf and it is basically irrelevant to the story at this point.
09/04/2023 08:58🔥🔥🔥what an update! so glad that they argued and got everything out in the open... it was endearing to see phobos stop theia and explain why sex had to wait... i agree with the other readers - keep writing. the story is worth the $$
09/04/2023 08:58can't wait for this week's update...🥰
09/04/2023 08:58You saved us with an update!!!🥰
09/04/2023 08:57omg can’t wait for Theia to get it on with the beast! 😁😊
09/04/2023 08:57Well, I guess I’ll stop waiting for this week’s update. I love this book so I won’t complain as long as the book isn’t abandoned as several others I was reading. I hate investing into books to have the author leave them unfinished. Please don’t do that with this book!!!
09/04/2023 08:57I absolutely love the way Vudci reassured her insecurities of belonging. I said I wasn't going to read this update but I was like a kid peeking at their presents before Christmas lol
09/04/2023 08:57I love that there are so many parts to each update. Most do not update but a day or two each week and when they do it isn’t a very long chapter. it’s frustrating because the story does not feel like it is progressing. you updating with multiple long chapters are wonderful. keep it up and no shortcuts. you have a really good story here
09/04/2023 08:57Cassienka
MORE PLEASE MORE!!!! I'M DYING lol.
09/04/2023 08:57Hi Luna Liz, in response to your questions… I personally love the slow burn style of your writing as it builds sexual tension. The length of the story is not an issue for me. However, I have noticed some other author chapters seem to be longer than yours, so I’m unsure why you’re required to break yours down into smaller ones - if I’m understanding that correctly. Love the new update!
09/04/2023 08:57ahhhh Phobos makes me so mad! ugh just when things were getting better 😭😭💔
09/04/2023 08:57y’all crying over rape for fiction, and I’m here asking for updates
09/04/2023 08:57Phobos was such a beautiful soul when he was a juvenile - so aware, intelligent, kind and in touch with his emotions. I feel so sorry for what he has become and how withdrawn he is. Makes my heart bleed!
09/04/2023 08:57oh Lizzy I truly adore you too and what a great start of the week it means so much to us thank you my precious author you are one of a kind. So happy that they talked and sorted the virtue issue but I still worry with if he stayed true to her after demanding the same of her in a way lets hope so. I agree she needs to address his closeness with Moira. and I loved seeing their side of Kal’s Bday ❤️ wouldnt be nice if they mated by their 🌲😂😂 I think I recall Deimos marking Lumina when they were away from the pack so why not hahha but I know its too soon for them ….I can’t wait for more I know there will still be struggles but hoping for some loving and 🔥🔥 moments too hahaha again thank you ❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 08:57don’t change anything, I’m loving the book
09/04/2023 08:57I love that there are so many parts to each update. Most do not update but a day or two each week and when they do it isn’t a very long chapter. it’s frustrating because the story does not feel like it is progressing. you updating with multiple long chapters are wonderful. keep it up and no shortcuts. you have a really good story here
09/04/2023 08:57don’t change anything, I’m loving the book
09/04/2023 08:57sorry my tablet kept stating comments were not sending si I just kept pushing 🤣🤣🤣🤣
09/04/2023 08:56not gonna lie though...I wish that super steamy intro was still there at the beginning...it got us all hooked! 😂
09/04/2023 08:56
Trisha Reynolds
don’t stray from your story be true to the book. we have followed this far. I’m loving this book. keep true
09/04/2023 08:56I really hope Phobos doesn’t retreat back from what they have accomplished. yes I know the beast is wild and he thinks he did good. but with Theia as his mate there has to be a reason. she had to be able to help him!?? I really hope the chapters to come don’t reverse and break my heart again
09/04/2023 08:56Awan you little sweethearted man! Theia, the sweethearted Luna will surely teach all the children to sign (and hopefully the adult wolves) so Awan feels included. 💖 XXX This quote comes to mind: For the strength of the Pack is the Wolf, and the strength of the Wolf is the Pack. - Rudyard Kipling, The Jungle Book
09/04/2023 08:56this book is just wonderful so please keep writing and continue this book!
09/04/2023 08:56Vanessa White
omg I can’t with this weekly update lol jk thank you for the surprise much thanks
09/04/2023 08:56WatUpG
They need to talk be truthful get it on
09/04/2023 08:56Katie Whitmore
absolutely loving this, please update x
09/04/2023 08:56Not her going in heat while he’s gone 😩💔.I hope they didn’t give her something that can cause problems with her getting pregnant later on down the line. They already don’t like her. Does Phobos feel the pain she’s going through? And Moria and the wicked lady are close, wondering if she wanted Phobos and Moria to mate? Is this why she gives my Thiea a hard time?
09/04/2023 08:56this book is just wonderful so please keep writing and continue this book!
09/04/2023 08:56Paula Lewis
ok loving Phobos! I need more updates…… yeah I know I’m not very patient 😕
09/04/2023 08:56I was kind of hoping that Vudce would see her being a virgin, even though embarrassing to be found out that she wasn't mated yet, at least it would kick Phobos in the groin once Vudce told him. I was also really really afraid that another scenario would play out with Theia telling Phobos once he returned "So I lost my viriginity... to Vudce's fingers when she was helping me... during my heat... that you missed knowingly..."
09/04/2023 08:56Now that they’ve settled *that* little detail, can they have an honest discussion about Moira? I understand that Phobos is close to her and that even Moira and Theia get along well, but they need to have a conversation about his relationship with her and the impact it’s having on his relationship with his mate.
09/04/2023 08:56keep going! I love it! one of my favorite stories! also loved the new update 😍😍
09/04/2023 08:56
Billie Petersen
please keep writing this book. I love this book.❤
09/04/2023 08:56We want the the whole story, not a cut down version! Write as much as needed please!!! Don’t deprive us of the full story. Your writing is fantastic!
09/04/2023 08:55we want the whole story. not a cut down version! Write as much as needed please!!! Don’t deprive us of the full story. Your writing is fantastic!
09/04/2023 08:55Shona Collins
oh god I'm dieing for an update
09/04/2023 08:55im not pushing but when will we get an update I keep looking n hoping 🙏
09/04/2023 08:55Rachel Moye
💖 Your work reads like poetry, bleeding heart, I can feel everything you pour into it! I love that you break it down into multiple parts, it gives us more. And a depth I just can't get anywhere else!! You're my favorite writer!! New age Anne Rice and I just can't get enough!! 👀
09/04/2023 08:55Rachel Moye
💖 Your work reads like poetry, bleeding heart, I can feel everything you pour into it! I love that you break it down into multiple parts, it gives us more. And a depth I just can't get anywhere else!! You're my favorite writer!! New age Anne Rice and I just can't get enough!! 👀
09/04/2023 08:55Oh what a tender hearted chapter! it is so beautifully written. (as always) but the heart of Theia and the journal entries of Phobos make me feel for both of them. I can’t wait for Phobos’ return.
09/04/2023 08:55
Bonib2
Soooo basically it is okey for the males to sleep with the pack's village bicycles before they met their fated ones but the female should be pure and untouched? Isn't that a bit prejudiced and archaic?
09/04/2023 08:55YASSSS! I am so excited 🔥 😍
09/04/2023 08:55Yalita Jezája - Makaio
instead of walking away i would demand answers from him..
09/04/2023 08:55please please keep writing. I don’t not care how many chapters it is!!!
09/04/2023 08:55I want more….keep writing and I will keep reading
09/04/2023 08:55Great book. Does not matter how many chapters.Teell the story how you want. please just keep writing. don't make us wait.
09/04/2023 08:55I was so excited to see the new update for “Me”, I had just finished rereading a bunch of it and was thrilled. I’m ready for Phobos to return and things to progress for them.
09/04/2023 08:54
dr.penguin
this is the highlight of my week
09/04/2023 08:54sara moore
I am doing my best to leave this book alone so I can read chapters at a time but as soon as I see it has been updated I cannot help it. ❤️
09/04/2023 08:54Weird thought, why not just shift and allow their wolves to go for it? Then she and Phobos can have their own time together.
09/04/2023 08:54
Helena Darovaná
Czech is such harf language. I speak it and I hate it. I know more things about english then czech.
09/04/2023 08:54WatUpG
Yes keep writing I hate waiting for next update love your writing thank you
09/04/2023 08:54Carol Dionne
No update 😤😭
09/04/2023 08:54thank you so much
09/04/2023 08:54love it! it’s worth it. keep doing what you are doing
09/04/2023 08:54
Katie Harrison
I hope when Phobo’s comes back Theia has changed into a kick ass Luna who makes him work to woo her back! his attitude towards her is upsetting! I’m thinking Vudce will test her a lot making her really prove her worth
09/04/2023 08:54Thank you for finding the time to update for us 😍! I had a feeling Phobos had heard the rumors. I hate he believed them without even asking her or his brother. We know he cared for her because of some of the little things he did (not sexual) like taking her to the trade, getting the spices, eating with and feeding her, and him making that ring just to name a few. He cared for her but was struggling to except her because of what he thought to be true. He has some making up to do. I feel like Phobos is probably more emotional than we think and he had his guard up with her 🤔.
09/04/2023 08:54spoazzy1
please keep writing!!!
09/04/2023 08:53Rachel Moye
Your work reads like poetry, bleeding heart, I can feel everything you pour into it! I love that you break it down into multiple parts, it gives us more. And a depth I just can't get anywhere else!! You're my favorite writer!! New age Anne Rice and I just can't get enough!! 👀
09/04/2023 08:53Lucy Xiong
I love the part where he kiss her wrist where her pulse is at. so meaningful! it so cute.Phobos is kissing up to me.
09/04/2023 08:53Theia needs to bloody say something - she is a Luna after all and it’s about time she bites back. Love her gentle and playful nature but want to see more of that 🔥 in her! Maybe his reason is genuine, if not kick him in the balls 😂. Phobos 🤦🏽♀️…he also needs to communicate with her. Bit sad how he is ok to use her for sexual pleasure but hah when it comes to a more intimate action he pushes her away. What is he waiting for…Hmm wonder if he thought something of when he saw Aegeus comfort Theia..but he must know she is innocent and inexperienced especially after this last chapter her shyness and questions. Aah can’t wait to read more my favourite story 💗
09/04/2023 08:53I like to see their growing bond, just wish the communication was more clear for the both of them. I think a lot of Theia’s overreacting would be calmed down if Phobos expressed himself more. Also a little concerned about this 7 month leave and Theia not being marked. Doesnt a females heat happen sooner if they find their mate and don’t get marked soon. what would happen if she went into heat during his 7 months away. I wonder if he will mark her before he departs.
09/04/2023 08:53Jordan Retzer
we got ANOTHER UPDATE😱😱😱 my day is made!!!!!! love u Luna
09/04/2023 08:53more! more! I love how you gift us with so many chapters at once, but it’s never enough! thank you for your amazing writing!! 😻😻😻
09/04/2023 08:53I think its a unanimous answer you just post away we will keep reading! We don't care we ALL luvs this book that much!!!! PLEASE post more I am struggling I need more!! 😂🤦🏼♀️ I keep reading the last chapters over and over till the new ones come out!!!
09/04/2023 08:53Thank you for the update! Loved it!!
09/04/2023 08:53I still do not understand why phobos did not tell her he was leaving when all of the other women knew??? he did not explain it well...also why was he behaving weird around her giving her the silent treatment????
09/04/2023 08:53Reader-254912
yessss your the best 🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼I love it finally I’m so happy he could love her like he should have from the start 😊😊😊
09/04/2023 08:53Rodleen Dalli
We have to wait another week! 😭
09/04/2023 08:52Susan Pearson
OMG... when is the next update!!! I can't wait.
09/04/2023 08:52Carol Dionne
I wonder if Theia now understands why Lumina felt that way about her as she feels that way about Moira.. 🤔 then again we do t know Moira like we know Theia..
09/04/2023 08:52This is by far my favorite happy Luna❤😍 As if I couldn't fall in love with Phobos and Theia any more, you prove there is room for so much more! I truly love this story so much❤🙏🏽😘
09/04/2023 08:52will you have a chapter on Phobos point of view? I am ALWAYS EAGERLY awaiting updates too. great story!!
09/04/2023 08:52Rodleen Dalli
we want rhe whooe.book. looking forward to the next chappy.
09/04/2023 08:52Cass Birch
well this just made my whole Monday!!! 💕💕💕
09/04/2023 08:52Here is what I want to know more about…..how did he figure out such a young child was his mate. Yes you state he was special and his wolf developed earlier. I’d love to read the scene. Was it at an Alpha banquet or party? I’d love to know how his breath hitched and instantly wanted to follow the little heart breaker around!
09/04/2023 08:52
Shannon Hart
thank you for the update. greatly appreciate it
09/04/2023 08:52
