PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

Carol Dionne

I never make suggestions for writers for I am not an author but I think it’s time for Theia to let her wolf lose on him to try and protect her. I have a deep feeling that her wolf is just as powerful to be mated to Phobos. What do you all think?

I hope she burns the whole pack down after rejecting his ass.

If this was a human story, it would read like a serious domestic abuse story, which only ends one of two ways - the female character stands up for herself or she ends up dead. I fear we are heading in the same direction here.

love this update

Laura McDonald

I’m literally devastated for her! she has been through so much and now this!! I’m praying Phobos does not start treating her differently 🙏🏻🙏🏻 If her suggests another woman to have his child, especially Moira I think I will chuck my phone off the wall!! 😡😡 No chance is he doing the dirty with any other woman, it would literally kill Theia!!

I literally can’t breathe after this

i still have hope that his vision of when she had the treatment comes true that she is pregnant of the second ❤️

Yolanda Padrnos

Thea was disrespectful to her Alpha male. She was dancing flirtatiously, grabbing and touching all over her friend.Right in front of him. I agree with other comments. She would have been beyond pissed if he did that with Moira.

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Laura McDonald

HELL YES PHOBOS!! 🙌🏻🙌🏻 I fully ship his treatment of her!!! In this instance she was acting like a child, getting blind drunk not knowing what she was doing and touching another male when she is mated! Foolish female!! How would she react if Phobos did this to her!! I’m all for her letting loose and enjoying herself but she took the piss!!

I’m really struggling with this book. I love it, but I hate it. There’s a ton of really unacceptable abuse happening in this story in the name of “alpha” behavior; emotional abuse, sexual abuse, gaslighting, isolation, abduction. And we have a female lead that is just taking it chapter after chapter.

Trisha Reynolds

by you saying to prepare. Phobos will leave her and truely break her or he will have Mira have his baby ugh. I can’t deal with it. so not fair for her

Carol Dionne

She is putting Lumina and Adeimos relationship at risk, Cronus and his pack at risk, Gio’s pack at risk and hundreds dead because she thinks she is the only one hurting. I have to say I liked Theia since the first book she seemed more mature but now..I almost want Phobos to let her go so he and his wolf can heal…

Katie Harrison

Luna Liz when is the next update? 😘

Queen M

I don’t know how I will make it to next week Monday. Thid chapter was excellent and so heartbreaking. I can’t help draw the parallels between Phobos words about interacting with her family because he is a Beast as well as the action the Beast toon in claiming her. He does so much to protect her yet he was unable to protector from this. Lunaliz I know Phobos chapters are potentially part of your plan but I hope it’s a reality because I need to understand him more in this moment.

Alexandra Daniela Bonea

Hi! Does anyone knows when the book will be updated?

Lee

It will be a miracle if she doesn’t have more than one pup.

Raychel-Reads

you are crazy talented Luna liz ❤️ I’m obsessed with his story just like I was with Deimos 👌🏻 I hope these 2 get the happy ending they deserve!!

does anyone know where to report previously purchased chapters that were unlocked and now showing locked...sorry it is off topic but was not sure where to. go thnks!

Carol Dionne

🥺 Phobos had to kill his friend..

Reader-254912

great update I’m so glad he laid it down and gave her what she wanted I love Phobos and I k ow he will have his heir 👏👏

Katie Harrison

OMG that Chappie was amazing! I am always left with one of two feelings after reading your latest update - 1. I am satisfied and will happily wait another week or 2. I am on the edge of my seat and need to know what happens next ASAP! today I need to know what happens ASAP 🤣🤣

Trisha Reynolds

seriously I already have not liked Phobos throughout the book but now even more cruel. Thia should have left at the start to avoid all this ugh. maybe it’s a good thing she does not have his child

This story has been a roller coaster of emotions, I find myself loving then disliking them both at different times especially Phobos…he can be a dream then he flips - as strong as he appears on the surface he has so much fear of what his beast might do instead of embracing/ trusting him as one! These two are going to break my heart all the feels right now for what’s to come…I wanted Theia to leave him at the start then I wanted her to stay, now I feel I’m back at the start wanting her to leave to protect her heart (and mine 😂).

Lee

Finally marked each other! no more misunderstandings or insecurities and next a health baby boy. Looking forward to less drama and more interesting adventures and gatherings with family and friends. ❤️

Carol Dionne

Lumina can do that with Deimos. it Phobos is a whole other animal! Him and his beast will not have it! PERIOD! Theia can take Luminas experience into consideration but Phobos will not stop till he finds her and once he find out she is pregnant there will be no living separately 😂

Cassi1234

I laughed at the part we’re lumina goes do you know how the pregnancy test works Theia oh loved it Luna Liz ❤️🙌🏽

4amcripple

I really hope she just goes to her birth pack and stays. poor baby

Elle 🧿

Anyone else can’t wait like me for their wolves to meet? 🐺🥰🐺

Bonib2

noooooo😭😭😭😭😭

gosh weirdly feel like haven’t had an update for weeks 😢

Trimble Claudia

The trash 🗑 can die now and the kid isn't needed now.THE QUEEN is PREGNANT. And he loss it all well done.

brilliant another chappie to enjoy after my hectic Manchester Market stress! Saturday 13th November 2021 has been a stressful day...now to enjoy a great book...x

@Luna Liz Babyyyyyy plsss updateeeeeee,

Contreras Lizzy

I love the chapter as I love all of them. Let’s not forget that Phobos is also his beast they are one and although I don’t agree with Phobos on the whole Moira situation I can see why Theia did what she did. When someone is upset jealous and heartbroken they tend to react irrationally wanting the other to feel the same and add alcohol to the mix and you’ve got yourself bad decisions. This is a story and in this story Phobos is King of Beasts his actions are beastly, possessive and domineering. If every story went with the…. “he messed up apologized, she understood and they lived a happily ever after” then what would be the point. the story itself describes the characters by their actions and shows you how they change. I LOVE YOUR STORY LUNA LIZ ❤️

Phobos punishment of Theia was brutal in this. Was it right?! No that isn’t how you treat your moon blessed, it was messed up. I am sure he will come to realise and regret this with time. I get that he is a beast an Alpha and possessive as f*ck, so I can see how the smell of Karel on her in her mouth (hands groping her ass, his d*ck rubbing up on his mate) and her immaturity made him crack! Theia in the past would make Phobos angry just to make him punish her she liked it, again not saying what he did was right but wanted to point this out! I think she was right to leave they both need a break. I hope it has only ever been a kiss from Moira (which Phobos never returns, just like in this chapter) and nothing more! Remembering Theia dancing up on Aegeus, didnt see Phobos go run off and grab her friend or another female to rub up on he handled the situation pretty good. Theia should have cut in and said something the moment Moira kissed him, she was wrong too!

Susan Pearson

❤❤❤❤❤❤ I did get nervous about not feeling the bond right away! beautiful chapter. I am hoping that Theia does become pregnant and we see how that plays put.

Zelda Zokan

wow.. i don’t know how to feel. Logically, i know this is werewolf fiction book & i know how Phobos is so i did not expect myself to feel panicked reading the chapters that i was most excited about. I’m a lover of dominance & even rape kink and although i kept trying to rationalize my panicked mind, i couldn’t help but feel my chest constrict every couple of sentences. I forced myself through cause of my great expectations in Liz but even reading the newest chapters where he’s taking her over & over, even though she wants it but knows she it too sore for it but he isn’t relenting.. it’s very hard to read and i haven’t been raped, i can only imagine what rape victims felt reading this, my heart goes out to them

Queen M

@lunaliz you would be proud, I like Phobos waited abs savored this update. I so emotional at this point so much joy and so much pain all at once. scared and excited for future updates

Dian Kurniawati

i cry when i read deimos story, i think i will continuous crying on Phohos too! my heart ache for them

Carol Dionne

you can write this story forever and I will continue to read. short, long I don’t care!! this book is amazing…It’s like I’m watching a movie 🥰

Gery

Noooooo….i think i am more heartbroken than Phobos is! Just when things were starting to go good for them 💔

Aww

Laura McDonald

I hope Phobos doesn’t hurt Theia to the point of no going back!!! how can he be crueler, what could he possibly do!!!😧

phobos keeps saying moira helped him deal with his parent's death.....I am wondering what type of "help" she administered!!!!! phobos do let us know the details because something smells fishy 🐟 around here!!!

Sydney Smelko

I think Theia is pregnant.. She will find out once she gets back to her old pack lands with Cronus.. this will reunite her and Phobos but im not sure if she'll want to go back with Phobos is things with Moira aren't ended

Zelda Zokan

oooh turn of events!! so excited for the next chapters!!

Christy Starnes

quick question if a Phobos is 14 and there's a 9 years age gap how old is it Theia

I absolutely loved this chapter! I hope that she gets pregnant soon!

Missy

Thank you, thank you Luna Liz for the superb updates!

Carol Dionne

😢😢😢 His beast is going to cause them to separate 💔💔

I do hope you mean Phobos is cruel towrds someone else and towards Theia anymore??? I would have done the same thing as her and would have gone looking for him. this time he doesn’t deserve forgiveness quickly because he ran away… yes yes to control his beast but instead he could have tried to fix it with the help of Theia. I think she has finally gotten through to him and he will be different with her. I had to re-reas the first and 2nd parts as I only skimmed over it because I was not in the mood for Theia and her depressed mind and her low thinking, I see now it wasn’t like that this time

He’ll send her away for her own safety, she’ll find out she’s pregnant while gone.

please don't let them separate and let them get through this!

Reader-254912

heck yeah that’s what I’m taking about 🤩🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼you make that beast your own Theia 👏👏👏great chapter loved it 😊

so many misunderstandings between Phobos and Theia. Hopefully they will continue to get them all out into the open, so they can heal and love!!!

Sydney Smelko

I need a mini chappy before next Sunday.. I'm so upset for Phobos, you could feel his pain.. I hope they don't separate, but I think they will for her safety... Just when their relationship was starting to really come together!!

bub Moye

It's a Rollercoaster 😍😬 I do not understand the hatred that's spawned from this last chapter. A story of soul mates, people who complete one another, so I'll received. Being a survivor, myself, I assure you this is far from that!!!! Speaking of shame and glorification as if it actually applies is disconcerting. Im living in a country where our children's history books now say we peacefully acquired our land from the native Indians as if this country wasn't built on their blood. Everything being so sugar-coated (poo-painted gold) that everything is offensive and considered controversial 😶

Carol Dionne

Luna Liz PLEASE don’t scare me like that! O thought you had killed somebody off 😰 Now back the the last chappy’s Both of them was wrong..PHOBOS need to keep himself at the same standards he regards Theia with. I know Theia has insecurities where Moira is concerned but she should have checked Moira a long time ago 1 about calling him Phobos instead of Alpha and 2 IDC how drunk you get keep your hands to yourself! Theia went too far she should have walked in and stopped it instead of sitting there getting drunk and tongue kissing another man. She showed her immaturity in these chapters.

What is the frequency of updates for this book?

Julie Greenstreet

love this update , finally no more confusion between them . Heartwarming💞💞💞

Alison Eardley

noooooo I’m gutted how unlucky can a girl get, she cused, spelled got be to something?

I'm a little nervous about the next update and what will happen. Can u give us a hint as to how bad it will be or something?

Saydi Hunter

LOVED IT!!

Carol Dionne

I was so excited and then I saw the title of the chapter..Barren 😭😭 poor Theia can’t catch a break. Hopefully they don’t have that crazy rule like Deimos had with his pack..

Reader-254912

wow things are getting real I can’t wait until I read more I k ow they are gonna go through it but I also know they will overcome and be blessed 😊

I just wonder when and "if" Phobos will mark Theia!!! She's been waiting forever. I wonder of he will let her mark him!?!?!?!? 🤔😕

can we have an early update??????

loving this book! I can’t say this enough!!

Bonib2

@Luna Liz, I want a Phoby baby for me also🥰😘 Thank you for updating two days early. This chapter is so sweet❤❤❤

Laisha Naizeth Hiraldo Serraty

wow!!!

Reader-254912

I think people are failing to realize Phobos is half beast hes not like any other male wolf that is why he was scared to be with Theia it wasn’t rape she wanted him too she was scared because she didn’t know how his beast would be but she loves Phobos and she wants his pups and him also being a virgin how could he prepare her fully if he himself didn’t know either I mean come on you guys are being way to harsh. taking this way out of context. they love each other and he is trying just as she is too it’s normal to be scared .🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️

Hopefully the 360 change and cruelness comes from Phobos getting his pack in line with how they treat the Queen and his soon to be family. I feel like they have gotten a pass because a lot of things have been traditional for his pack. I think it’s a new day…at least a girl can hope 👏🏽 .

Prentella Wilkerson

I'm just waiting on the "beast" to fall in love and be tamed.. Theia is his mate for a reason 😈🔥🔥

When he found out Theia is a freak 😋💦🔥🥵😂! Loved it!

I have been following this story from the other book! I love it. please update!! We are just at the good point-they finally talked!

While most seem to be unhappy about the never delicate Phobos handling of Theia, I'm excited at her matching his energy and her finally acting out on her sexual energy. Theia has been giving us peaks of her sexual nature she is still bashful and Phobos has NEVER been delicate as he battles with his beast constantly. I'm excited for the shift and her becoming a little vixen 😏

Carol Dionne

HAPPY THANKSGIVING 🍁🦃🍽 THANK YOU FOR THIS LUNA!! I am so happy not matter what Phobos is on her side 😭 The chapters were long but why do I feel like they were over so quickly? They were soooo good!!! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

Carol Dionne

I’m so happy 😭😭😭

Lei savini

🔥🔥🥰🥰

I love a bit of kink, dominance, and spice but these last chapters need to come with a warning at the beginning. These were rape scenes - plain and simple- and crossed a moral line. Toxic behaviors and lack of consent should not be normalized as “entertainment.” I’m very disappointed in this author for her role in perpetuating sexual violence and abuse as “erotic” and equally disgusted with the readers that paise this and see no wrongdoing. Feeling sick for the victims and survivors of domestic violence. Think that’s my cue to stop reading this book - which I originally adored 😢

Missy

Thank you Luna Liz for the brilliant chapters. You never disappoint your readers.

Lee

Theia get ready for tomorrow At least Phobos will be more gentle than his wolf. then you’ll get used to it.

I really love this book… I’ve started reading it from the beginning again!!…. 🥰🥰

so sweet 🥲

Trisha Reynolds

just a quick question now that they have mated. have they officially marked each other as well?

why it has to be Moria???? why??

love love love this book so much! The most recent chapters are so lovely! I’m waiting on Theias wolf to meet his wolf!

Paula Lewis

omg nooooo oh please this will be so difficult to read. your right! it is emotional 🖤😭

Liz these last chapters were just beautiful how phobos opens up to theia..expresses his dreams, his love for her since their childhood.....and his desire to build her a home it was just all soo beautiful and moving!!!

omg this is crazy I can't believe this 😭

Henrietta Blessing Ebokaiwe

OMG, Luna you are doing a very good job, can't wait for Phobos and Thia to be one one....... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Sydney Smelko

I'm hoping Vudce can help them when they return back to their lands.. Phobos and Theia need to have a pup!!

Tricia Johnson

hurry up and mate

Yolanda Padrnos

These two struggle constantly.Will they ever be able to be together. It seems that there have been so many horrible incidents between them that will never allow them to have a real relationship. This story is good but complicated and sad also.

Kayla Swick

it's so heartbreaking to see Phobos break down like that. I wasn't his fault. he did try to fight his beast. I agree with Meg though. he'll send her away and she'll find out she's pregnant. not every pregnancy has symptoms; it's a proven fact. sometimes women can go through their first pregnancy with no symptoms then their second, they can have every grievous symptom for pregnancy out there. I think that's what's happening to Theia.

Saydi Hunter

Now come on Theia! If that had been Phobos and Moira bumping and grinding on the dance floor (friend or not) there would have been bloodshed lol! Whew Phobos! You held it together my male lol! 😅🤩

Rose Rodriguez

update????

so my fellow wolves 🐺 I was hasty with my excitement of the new chappy coming out Monday! it's getting updated by our Luna Liz 💖 MONDAY 11TH OCTOBER (NEXT WEEK! 6 DAYS AWAY!) ITS GOING TO A LONGER CHAPTER 😍😍😍 OH MY GOODNESS HOW EXCITING FOR US ALL! SO fill your boots with Deimos...re read some Phobos and in the comment section write what you loved about each chappy, what got you fuming, what you can't wait for in their love and life story. 💖💖💖

Those of you who would try to shame me into silence by demanding I “stop whining and crying”… you have no idea how strong and resilient I am. What I have survived in “the real world” would bring you to your knees. I am fearless, and as as such, I will use my voice to speak my truth. As a daughter of a survivor of spousal sexual violence, as a granddaughter to a survivor of incestuous rape, as a professional who works with women/children in shelters, as an educator and ally for women’s rights - this topic is NOT debatable. So, no, I will never “shut up.”