PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

  • Katie Harrison

    oh gosh - I do not agree with Phobos kissing Moira & definitely hated that Theia kissed Keral. I would have just left straight away. I’m saying that - when is the next update lol

    12/09/2021 02:11

  • Reader-148264

    omg I can’t even breathe ❤️❤️

    12/09/2021 00:01

  • Reader-371843

    I am with Thea. Phobos needs to let go of Moira. It is enough and he needs to respect her. If it was no big deal to him he would have taken Thea with him. Maybe Moira is for Cronos…

    12/08/2021 23:39

  • Carol Dionne

    Luna Liz PLEASE don’t scare me like that! O thought you had killed somebody off 😰 Now back the the last chappy’s Both of them was wrong..PHOBOS need to keep himself at the same standards he regards Theia with. I know Theia has insecurities where Moira is concerned but she should have checked Moira a long time ago 1 about calling him Phobos instead of Alpha and 2 IDC how drunk you get keep your hands to yourself! Theia went too far she should have walked in and stopped it instead of sitting there getting drunk and tongue kissing another man. She showed her immaturity in these chapters.

    12/08/2021 22:49

  • Vanessa

    OK at this point after all phobos has known regarding theia's concerns with moira and phobos's questionable friendship, he should be well aware not to allow moira to kiss him regardless of the excuse....I feel like. he takes one step forward and then just blows up all his progress....i don't blame theia for leaving he needs to learn how things are from her perspective!!!

    12/08/2021 22:41

  • Jessica D

    That last chapter was a tough one. Literally have chills. I am not sure how this will end but it seems as though there will be more equally emotional chapters ahead.

    12/08/2021 22:05

  • Carol Dionne

    I just read Luna’s intro 😩 Now I’m scared to read it 😰😭

    12/08/2021 21:46

  • Lee

    Thank you for the warning author. I usually skip those chapters as they are upsetting to me. Then I wait until the storm passes to read the Happy chapter first and THEN I go back to read the upsetting chapter. specially because we’ll be left on a cliffhanger until the next chapter. That’s how I cope with the sad chapters. I really appreciate your heads up as it allows me to plan ahead. ❤️✍️

    12/06/2021 05:14

  • Binge Reader

    Just a speculation- if Cronus is mates to Moria than Argus goes with Cronus and Phobos is once again left with no heir.

    12/04/2021 22:32

  • QueenKae

    I’m trying to be positive but idk. I hope everything goes well with the other packs coming.

    12/04/2021 21:10

  • Kristen Tedrow Cope

    I'm a little nervous about the next update and what will happen. Can u give us a hint as to how bad it will be or something?

    12/04/2021 18:54

  • Valerie Green

    love this update

    12/04/2021 18:01

  • QueenKae

    Hopefully the 360 change and cruelness comes from Phobos getting his pack in line with how they treat the Queen and his soon to be family. I feel like they have gotten a pass because a lot of things have been traditional for his pack. I think it’s a new day…at least a girl can hope 👏🏽 .

    12/03/2021 17:35

  • Carol Dionne

    🥺 Phobos had to kill his friend..

    12/01/2021 00:20

  • orchids_purple

    why it has to be Moria???? why??

    11/27/2021 10:22

  • Trisha Reynolds

    shame on Phobos once again shaming theia. I would be pissed too

    11/26/2021 06:46

  • Carol Dionne

    HAPPY THANKSGIVING 🍁🦃🍽 THANK YOU FOR THIS LUNA!! I am so happy not matter what Phobos is on her side 😭 The chapters were long but why do I feel like they were over so quickly? They were soooo good!!! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

    11/26/2021 01:48

  • QueenKae

    Whew I’m glad this was cleared up quickly! Theia said don’t play with me. She could’ve slapped him at home though 😂.

    11/25/2021 23:26

  • Reader-254912

    great update I’m so glad he laid it down and gave her what she wanted I love Phobos and I k ow he will have his heir 👏👏

    11/25/2021 20:43

  • Rhonda Hawkins Childers

    yes she has a pup. in deamos she and photos come to a birthday party and she is pregnant.

    11/22/2021 19:28

  • Queen M

    @lunaliz you would be proud, I like Phobos waited abs savored this update. I so emotional at this point so much joy and so much pain all at once. scared and excited for future updates

    11/22/2021 14:17

  • ssyl

    May I check when the happier parts will be? Will possibly hold on reading the more sad parts for now.

    11/22/2021 09:58

  • Lee

    I have hope that they’ll be blessed. Phobos will love her unconditionally. Maybe if they mate in wolf form there might be a possibility for them to conceive?….. I live it and know first hand the emotional turmoil of not being able to conceive and for my husband adoption was not an option. My husband is the oldest of 4 and the only one without a child. God smiled down on me after 5 years. I already had put it in the back of my mind and when we least expected we conceive. 8 months later we had a beautiful baby girl and 2 years later another one. I definitely have hopes for Theia and Phobos that the goddess will bestow a blessing upon them when they least expect it. who knows, maybe a double blessing 👫💕

    11/22/2021 04:47

  • Vanessa

    OK so is her condition permanent because I thought the healer gave her suggestions on how to reverse her condition? or did I interpret things wrong? I think she will have her pup it will just take longer for her to conceive

    11/21/2021 15:22

  • QueenKae

    I don’t even want to read the next update. I’m sure Phobos will probably pull away to process but she needs him right now. I hope she recalls what she was given to stop her heat and brings it up. I’m rooting for them but I can’t take much of Phobos not being supportive right now.

    11/21/2021 14:35

  • natasha wakeford

    didn't she birth the lining of her womb in her first heat? my guess is she's still healing and will have her miracle baby/babies

    11/21/2021 10:22

  • Trisha Reynolds

    by you saying to prepare. Phobos will leave her and truely break her or he will have Mira have his baby ugh. I can’t deal with it. so not fair for her

    11/21/2021 03:48

  • Paula Lewis

    omg nooooo oh please this will be so difficult to read. your right! it is emotional 🖤😭

    11/21/2021 02:31

  • Alison Eardley

    noooooo I’m gutted how unlucky can a girl get, she cused, spelled got be to something?

    11/21/2021 00:19

  • bisaayanna

    hopefully he doesn't hv a chosen like Deimos did.

    11/20/2021 23:43

  • T

    omg this is crazy I can't believe this 😭

    11/20/2021 23:14

  • Laura McDonald

    I’m literally devastated for her! she has been through so much and now this!! I’m praying Phobos does not start treating her differently 🙏🏻🙏🏻 If her suggests another woman to have his child, especially Moira I think I will chuck my phone off the wall!! 😡😡 No chance is he doing the dirty with any other woman, it would literally kill Theia!!

    11/20/2021 22:18

  • Ocey

    Thanks for the heads up Luna 😭…was so looking forward to Theia having her little beast 💔 it just won’t be the same if another she-wolf has to birth his heir. I hope Phobos meant what he said that she is his moonlight, if he turns his back on her or has a pup with another surrogate or not then his love was fake sorry about it! If Vudce did this during Theias heat then f*ck her..all the feels right now for poor Theia hoping for a miracle, for Phobos wish on the lantern to come true with Theia as the one and only to conceive/ birth his pups 🥺

    11/20/2021 22:11

  • Sydney Smelko

    I'm hoping Vudce can help them when they return back to their lands.. Phobos and Theia need to have a pup!!

    11/20/2021 21:22

  • Carol Dionne

    I was so excited and then I saw the title of the chapter..Barren 😭😭 poor Theia can’t catch a break. Hopefully they don’t have that crazy rule like Deimos had with his pack..

    11/20/2021 19:50

  • Zena Jass

    hii, how many more chapters are there left? loving this book as much as Deimos

    11/19/2021 20:50

  • Reader-698362

    can we have an early update??????

    11/18/2021 12:02

  • Katie Harrison

    Luna Liz when is the next update? 😘

    11/17/2021 16:18

  • Yolanda Padrnos

    Thea was disrespectful to her Alpha male. She was dancing flirtatiously, grabbing and touching all over her friend.Right in front of him. I agree with other comments. She would have been beyond pissed if he did that with Moira.

    11/16/2021 03:45

  • Saydi Hunter

    Now come on Theia! If that had been Phobos and Moira bumping and grinding on the dance floor (friend or not) there would have been bloodshed lol! Whew Phobos! You held it together my male lol! 😅🤩

    11/15/2021 18:00

  • Laura McDonald

    HELL YES PHOBOS!! 🙌🏻🙌🏻 I fully ship his treatment of her!!! In this instance she was acting like a child, getting blind drunk not knowing what she was doing and touching another male when she is mated! Foolish female!! How would she react if Phobos did this to her!! I’m all for her letting loose and enjoying herself but she took the piss!!

    11/15/2021 10:51

  • LC9

    loving this book! I can’t say this enough!!

    11/15/2021 01:00

  • T

    😍😍😍

    11/14/2021 22:15

  • Carol Dionne

    Phobos said don’t play with him!!😂😂

    11/14/2021 03:09

  • Reader-254912

    I love it he don’t play when it come to his Luna that’s my Phobos 👏👏👏

    11/14/2021 00:55

  • QueenKae

    I can’t believe him 😂. I would lay in the bed beside him and finish myself 🤣🤣. Let’s see if he can take that.

    11/13/2021 22:06

  • B Beau L

    brilliant another chappie to enjoy after my hectic Manchester Market stress! Saturday 13th November 2021 has been a stressful day...now to enjoy a great book...x

    11/13/2021 21:31

  • Raychel-Reads

    you are crazy talented Luna liz ❤️ I’m obsessed with his story just like I was with Deimos 👌🏻 I hope these 2 get the happy ending they deserve!!

    11/11/2021 15:04

  • Raychel-Reads

    maybe her not being pregnant was due to her needed to accept his wolf an him mark her to bring her wolf out for the mating to work properly.. my heart can’t take it if he’s cruel to her even more, but if he is I hope she stands up for herself an fights for him since he is more beast then man she needs to keep showing him the error of his ways but I hope he does not do something he can’t come back from an if he goes with moira I’ll kill him myself !!!

    11/11/2021 15:04

  • 4amcripple

    I really hope she just goes to her birth pack and stays. poor baby

    11/10/2021 13:58

  • Reader-441520

    At the end of the latest update I was pleased with how it ended, feeling it was progress for Theia and Phobos(and of course their wolves)... But after reading your comment Luna Liz, about Phobos becoming more cruel towards the end of the story, has me shocked and apprehensive! About the speculations of Theia not being able to have children and him taking another mate, well that would just make me very disappointed😢! Are they to Never be happy and settled together in their relationship?! And what is it with Moria anyways,… what exactly was their relationship

    11/10/2021 02:40

  • Ocey

    This story has been a roller coaster of emotions, I find myself loving then disliking them both at different times especially Phobos…he can be a dream then he flips - as strong as he appears on the surface he has so much fear of what his beast might do instead of embracing/ trusting him as one! These two are going to break my heart all the feels right now for what’s to come…I wanted Theia to leave him at the start then I wanted her to stay, now I feel I’m back at the start wanting her to leave to protect her heart (and mine 😂).

    11/09/2021 10:33

  • natasha wakeford

    could it be that he becomes more cruel towards his pack though since we don't know what happend to him while theia was recovering and he was in those woods when his family passed he loves her he said that I doubt he would betray her with someone else. He may well be in those woods to build there home he spoke about.. there is a gap of 2 months we don't know what happened so be interesting to find out as I believe she's his weakness and strength x

    11/09/2021 06:39

  • Mel West

    I do hope you mean Phobos is cruel towrds someone else and towards Theia anymore??? I would have done the same thing as her and would have gone looking for him. this time he doesn’t deserve forgiveness quickly because he ran away… yes yes to control his beast but instead he could have tried to fix it with the help of Theia. I think she has finally gotten through to him and he will be different with her. I had to re-reas the first and 2nd parts as I only skimmed over it because I was not in the mood for Theia and her depressed mind and her low thinking, I see now it wasn’t like that this time

    11/09/2021 05:11

  • Queen M

    I just reread the chapter. I feel so bad for Phobos…whatever he delivers I feel will be justified. he is not cruel for no reason and I think what Theia did was selfish abs childish.

    11/09/2021 01:38

  • Tabitha Vickers

    well I'm desperate to see them have a baby & with this see the king of beasts calm some what but the comment about him becoming even more cruel towards the end of this book makes me feel quite ill. He may love her in his beast way but I feel so desperate for Thiea. Will her life just be filled with the emotional roller coaster that he is? Will she ever have the love, peace & respect she deserves? I'm very conflicted with this last chapter.

    11/09/2021 00:31

  • QueenKae

    If he gets more cruel by the end of the book 👀. What kind of ending are we looking at 😓. Ughhhhh this book has me stressed in real life! 😂

    11/08/2021 22:17

  • Katie Harrison

    OMG that Chappie was amazing! I am always left with one of two feelings after reading your latest update - 1. I am satisfied and will happily wait another week or 2. I am on the edge of my seat and need to know what happens next ASAP! today I need to know what happens ASAP 🤣🤣

    11/08/2021 21:50

  • Trisha Reynolds

    seriously I already have not liked Phobos throughout the book but now even more cruel. Thia should have left at the start to avoid all this ugh. maybe it’s a good thing she does not have his child

    11/08/2021 21:30

  • Laura McDonald

    I hope Phobos doesn’t hurt Theia to the point of no going back!!! how can he be crueler, what could he possibly do!!!😧

    11/08/2021 21:08

  • Vonnie

    I really love this book… I’ve started reading it from the beginning again!!…. 🥰🥰

    11/08/2021 20:57

  • natasha wakeford

    phobos needs to make peace with his wolf it seems as though neither one wants to share theia. I'm also wondering if theres more to to it as to why she's not pregnant yet. didn't Deimos wolf bite lumina in appreciation for her sacrifice to him. phobos needs to take responsibility for his actions and how it's effecting his female ..

    11/08/2021 18:37

  • Susan Pearson

    Oh no!!! He is going to get crueler...that makes me nervous. Im hoping she let's her wolf out in the next Chapter. I so want them to meet.

    11/08/2021 18:33

  • Carol Dionne

    you can write this story forever and I will continue to read. short, long I don’t care!! this book is amazing…It’s like I’m watching a movie 🥰

    11/08/2021 17:08

  • Carol Dionne

    How to tell a good book? I haven’t inquired about an update since chapters were posted. I’m still trying to recover from the last chaps..I’m just SHOOK🥺

    11/07/2021 23:47

  • Pooja Gaikwad

    What is the frequency of updates for this book?

    11/06/2021 23:37

  • Yolanda Padrnos

    These two struggle constantly.Will they ever be able to be together. It seems that there have been so many horrible incidents between them that will never allow them to have a real relationship. This story is good but complicated and sad also.

    11/02/2021 21:55

  • QueenKae

    His wolf is hell! I know there is a major disconnect but my goodness. I know he might send her away but I would go to his brothers pack. Her family really will hate him if she shows up like this.

    11/02/2021 16:23

  • Zelda Zokan

    oooh turn of events!! so excited for the next chapters!!

    11/01/2021 23:37

  • Queen M

    I don’t know how I will make it to next week Monday. Thid chapter was excellent and so heartbreaking. I can’t help draw the parallels between Phobos words about interacting with her family because he is a Beast as well as the action the Beast toon in claiming her. He does so much to protect her yet he was unable to protector from this. Lunaliz I know Phobos chapters are potentially part of your plan but I hope it’s a reality because I need to understand him more in this moment.

    11/01/2021 20:09

  • Mel West

    I really hope Phobos doesn’t retreat back from what they have accomplished. yes I know the beast is wild and he thinks he did good. but with Theia as his mate there has to be a reason. she had to be able to help him!?? I really hope the chapters to come don’t reverse and break my heart again

    11/01/2021 19:46

  • Gery

    Noooooo….i think i am more heartbroken than Phobos is! Just when things were starting to go good for them 💔

    11/01/2021 19:41

  • Sydney Smelko

    I need a mini chappy before next Sunday.. I'm so upset for Phobos, you could feel his pain.. I hope they don't separate, but I think they will for her safety... Just when their relationship was starting to really come together!!

    11/01/2021 17:00

  • Prentella Wilkerson

    Well damn! First, Theia and Phobos need to tame the beast. Both need to be accepted of whom he is and truly learn how to deal with him. Secondly, he need to have him under control before they have pups!! What if Theia have a little beast of her own? If Phobos doesn't have common ground with his beast, how will he help is son?

    11/01/2021 13:10

  • Carol Dionne

    I never make suggestions for writers for I am not an author but I think it’s time for Theia to let her wolf lose on him to try and protect her. I have a deep feeling that her wolf is just as powerful to be mated to Phobos. What do you all think?

    11/01/2021 02:03

  • Kayla Swick

    it's so heartbreaking to see Phobos break down like that. I wasn't his fault. he did try to fight his beast. I agree with Meg though. he'll send her away and she'll find out she's pregnant. not every pregnancy has symptoms; it's a proven fact. sometimes women can go through their first pregnancy with no symptoms then their second, they can have every grievous symptom for pregnancy out there. I think that's what's happening to Theia.

    11/01/2021 00:55

  • Megsh826

    He’ll send her away for her own safety, she’ll find out she’s pregnant while gone.

    10/31/2021 21:21

  • Kristen Tedrow Cope

    please don't let them separate and let them get through this!

    10/31/2021 21:16

  • Reader-254912

    wow things are getting real I can’t wait until I read more I k ow they are gonna go through it but I also know they will overcome and be blessed 😊

    10/31/2021 19:54

  • Bonib2

    noooooo😭😭😭😭😭

    10/31/2021 19:40

  • Carol Dionne

    😢😢😢 His beast is going to cause them to separate 💔💔

    10/31/2021 18:14

  • orchids_purple

    @Luna Liz Babyyyyyy plsss updateeeeeee,

    10/29/2021 04:41

  • Lidiane Barros

    gosh weirdly feel like haven’t had an update for weeks 😢

    10/28/2021 19:52

  • Lee

    It will be a miracle if she doesn’t have more than one pup.

    10/27/2021 19:54

  • Lei savini

    🔥🔥🥰🥰

    10/26/2021 19:21

  • Vanessa

    does anyone know where to report previously purchased chapters that were unlocked and now showing locked...sorry it is off topic but was not sure where to. go thnks!

    10/26/2021 15:35

  • Carol Dionne

    I have re-read these last chapters at least over 10 times..I can’t get enough🥰🥰🥰

    10/25/2021 23:00

  • Elle 🧿

    Anyone else can’t wait like me for their wolves to meet? 🐺🥰🐺

    10/25/2021 18:17

  • Reader-689814

    love love love this book so much! The most recent chapters are so lovely! I’m waiting on Theias wolf to meet his wolf!

    10/25/2021 10:42

  • Saydi Hunter

    LOVED IT!!

    10/25/2021 04:02

  • Elle 🧿

    Simply beautiful throughout this chapter ❤️❤️.

    10/24/2021 18:28

  • Vanessa

    Liz these last chapters were just beautiful how phobos opens up to theia..expresses his dreams, his love for her since their childhood.....and his desire to build her a home it was just all soo beautiful and moving!!!

    10/24/2021 16:25

  • Queen M

    There is so much I want to stay…LunaLiz thank you for such a beautiful chapter. I loved every min of it. Ita was hot, emotional, caring and so revealing. I loved how much Phobos has been preparing for Theia…truly making a place for her and working hard for her.

    10/24/2021 15:03

  • Reader-254912

    thank you for the pleasant very welcoming surprise!! very good chapter I can’t wait fir more I absolutely love this book 🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼👏😊

    10/24/2021 14:40

  • Prentella Wilkerson

    I'm just waiting on the "beast" to fall in love and be tamed.. Theia is his mate for a reason 😈🔥🔥

    10/24/2021 13:59

  • Missy

    Thank you, thank you Luna Liz for the superb updates!

    10/24/2021 10:07

  • Ocey

    That chapter was on loved it 🥰…can’t wait for some pups but nervous as hell what if the pup is female?! Hope they don’t have traditions like Deimos pack.

    10/24/2021 05:48

  • Desire

    so sweet 🥲

    10/24/2021 03:43

  • QueenKae

    When he found out Theia is a freak 😋💦🔥🥵😂! Loved it!

    10/24/2021 01:50

  • Susan Pearson

    ❤❤❤❤❤❤ I did get nervous about not feeling the bond right away! beautiful chapter. I am hoping that Theia does become pregnant and we see how that plays put.

    10/24/2021 01:47
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