PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

  • Lee

    As brutal as he is Phobos beast is smarter than his human.😂

    01/01/2022 22:43

  • Rhonda Fergie

    Phobos did all that for a whole fraud! A whole lie! A whole fake! I KNOW HE FEELS STUPID!

    01/01/2022 21:36

  • Rhonda Fergie

    Man! I didn’t want Moira to be so raggedy!

    01/01/2022 21:34

  • QueenKae

    Whoa Moira…you sneaky b!t(h. I knew something wasn’t right with her. I’m not bothered she took a chosen, I’m bothered that she lied about it. She used her friendship with Phobos in the wrong way. What was her real intentions? I can’t help but think all the times she got drunk and sought comfort from Phobos she knew what she was doing and wanted it. Theia also drunk a full bottle of liquor that night and was emotionally hurt andddddd knew exactly what she was doing. 👀 She weakened and caused so much stress among other things in P & T’s relationship it’s unreal. She messed up her and her son’s life at this point. He could’ve been a beta but now he can’t even stay. I hope Phobos gets all of this or at least his wolf brings him up to speed or something. He already knew things was fu(ked. 🙄 Pray for Dranko’s nasty a$$. Maybe his mate won’t send him to the moon just yet. I do feel bad that she will have to leave Lumina if she decides to stay but at least Theia will have someone.

    01/01/2022 20:50

  • Elizabeth Karr

    so itching for the next update

    12/31/2021 00:15

  • QueenKae

    Now they actually have to verbally communicate since he can’t read her emotions anymore. This should be interesting. Theia can’t hold back and he has to listen.

    12/29/2021 18:07

  • Alexandra Daniela Bonea

    Does anyone know when we will have an update of the story? Just asking..

    12/29/2021 14:57

  • Lee

    Phobos judgement is impaired. How can he not discern of what is right and what is wrong? He still believes comforting Moira was right because he made a promise🤦🏻‍♀️. 🤦 Ay! Dios mio!

    12/28/2021 06:13

  • Krystal Morgan

    I dont ever want this story to end.... like seriously the only book of the 5 I'm reading that I get super excited about when my phone notifies me of an update

    12/27/2021 02:42

  • Arnav Shetty

    what theia did was wrong...but phobos action cannot be justifiable... somewhere I felt there should be some changes ...like the movement theia found Moria kissing she should have brag inside and try to kill or harm Moria for her action...and so on...this whole chappy you made only theia wrong.. which I personally found not justifiable atleast for me....hence I'm sad☹️

    12/24/2021 18:44

  • QueenKae

    I’m so glad we went so far left 😂. It made what happened easier for me to deal with. I knew deep down they both were hurt and it would take time for them to get over everything and come back together. I’m hoping Theia and the baby will be able to “save” him this time. I hope he doesn’t fall asleep there and wake up in her bed to freak out/ run again. I’m interested to find out if the pack or Phobos punished M. The did have the tent open so others could’ve seen them. 🤷🏽‍♀️ We shall see.

    12/24/2021 16:11

  • Elle 🧿

    I’m glad they are making amends and I feel Theia and Baby pup will help both Phobos and his pup🤞🥰. For Moria, I don’t think anything will happen to her because of the scars we now know she has, Theia does see the friendship she has or had with Phobos from growing up and plus, Moria is a mum too. With Theia being a new mum she isn’t going to do anything that will make Argus lose his mum. What do you all think?

    12/24/2021 07:39

  • Tabitha Vickers

    I wish to say thank you Luna Liz I now believe they will grow together on equal ground & baby beast will let Daddy & Mummy know each time they stray apart from each other. Merry Christmas Luna Liz

    12/24/2021 04:15

  • Moonglowbeast

    I think you gave us all something unexpected Luna Liz. Amazing chapter.✨ Patiently waiting for more. Merry Christmas ❤️

    12/24/2021 01:57

  • Kayla Swick

    that went better than I expected it would

    12/24/2021 00:56

  • bisaayanna

    I think took out his anger or at least his wolf took out his anger on Moira for Theia missing and is why Moira is terrier around Theia. They both knew she was the cause of Theia leaving and the fact she had deep claw marks on her arms it has probably been that way the entire time Theia was gone....Phobos flipped out to the point his wolf took over AND since he and his wolf can operate singularly but in one body and his wolf was only ever totally controlled by Theia the wolf took it out on any and everyone with his ire being on Moira. Now Theia will have to bring both Phobos and his wolf back from the brink. ONLY the QUEEN OF BEASTS, THEIA, can do that...she's only ever bn the one who could...Phobos and his wolf live and breathe Theia.

    12/24/2021 00:29

  • DamarisGrace

    ah! I love this!! I think we can let Moira off the hook this one time. I think she has learned her lesson.

    12/23/2021 23:56

  • Harleyquinn 6980

    thank for your hard work and I think you need a somewhat of a vacation. I hope you also have a merry Christmas and just in case you didn't write for next week a happy new year. I will wait for the next chapter when you post it. 😁

    12/23/2021 23:43

  • Maria Larsson

    I hope she burns the whole pack down after rejecting his ass.

    12/22/2021 21:11

  • Rose Rodriguez

    just read a short snippet that she put on Facebook. I am so unhappy right now

    12/22/2021 20:03

  • bisaayanna

    I sure hope Theia keeps her backbone she showed the staff at Gio's home...I sure hope Theia shows Phobos just what QUEEN of Beasts means...I sure hope she shows Phobos what bowing down to her is and I sure hope she puts Moira in her rightful place...Theia is no longer the same woman she was in the beginning...she is a mother of a beast and she has to show Phobos she is strong and not ro be taunted, played with, disregarded, and disrespected. her response to Phobos needs to be "If I am no longer ur Theia then Moira will no longer exist on MY land nor yours. I am QUEEN."

    12/22/2021 01:04

  • orchids_purple

    I feel that, Theia will take punishments for Alpha Gio and Luna Ira. He wants some1 to bleed it will be theia who will bleed. Luna Liz pls give an synopsis on your FB page plsss

    12/20/2021 16:15

  • 196MARS196

    Hurt, betrayal, heartbreak is not easy to forgive. But remember a vision was shared that parapharsing now. "A child on my hip and another in my belly" ...so possibly there will be a happy ending. Only time will tell.

    12/20/2021 15:46

  • 13ang

    phobos damn it why are u such an complete idiot. I'm surprised if she doesnt kill herself this is a toxic relationship. I for one will wait to read the rest until its complete.

    12/20/2021 15:41

  • Jourdan Coleman

    this book makes me mad just 😐

    12/20/2021 12:53

  • Chelseasmile

    I’m literally reading the comments every week before I start reading the chapters 🙈 waiting for the heartbreak to be over before I read again haha

    12/20/2021 06:38

  • QueenKae

    I need to come back when the book is finished because this is 2 much for this pregnant momma!

    12/20/2021 00:27

  • Cleo1521

    Theia is in for heartbreak more than she has had already if she dose not dig deep and find her strength. she needs to take Moira out of the picture completely, for it is she who has disrespected her Luna. They wouldn’t be in this situation if it wasn’t for her. Moira has wanted Phobos all along….. I think she is his chosen, which is why she won’t show her neck. There is more to this triangle🤔🤔

    12/19/2021 23:43

  • Valerie Green

    Sunday update please

    12/19/2021 22:50

  • Jennah_63074

    this is a great book but very emotional, Luna Liz you’re doing a great job but please bring Phobos and Theia back together! I know Phobos loves Theia with everything he has but his actions hurt her. should she shouldn’t have abandoned him for so long. ❤️ I’m hoping things work out for Theia mainly!

    12/19/2021 22:05

  • BexyCL

    My dearest Luna Liz, you never fail to make me cry my beloved female😭❤️

    12/19/2021 21:54

  • Binge Reader

    If this was a human story, it would read like a serious domestic abuse story, which only ends one of two ways - the female character stands up for herself or she ends up dead. I fear we are heading in the same direction here.

    12/19/2021 16:13

  • Lidiane Barros

    i still have hope that his vision of when she had the treatment comes true that she is pregnant of the second ❤️

    12/19/2021 09:34

  • Moonglowbeast

    Omg how sad would that be if Phobos stopped looking because he was building the house he promised her on his land. Only to find out she intentionally left him and took away the time of watching his pup grow and be born. In away i understand Theia and her actions but I was really disappointed to see that she didn't return to him because she liked it in Italy. That kinda shows she still hasn't fully accepted her pack and their ways. I hoped for much growth from her but i dont see that much. She had every right to escape and have time for herself but it turned out kinda selfish keeping Phobos from their male. She should have thought she is not the only one who wanted a pup. Phobos wanted it too just as much as her. How will they heal from this. They have learned through pain before. Amazing chapter Luna Liz please update as soon as possible. 😢❤️✨

    12/19/2021 08:45

  • Vanessa

    I have to say I really like lumina in these last chapters how she stood up to phobos was bad a$$ed lol

    12/19/2021 08:36

  • Megsh826

    I’m really struggling with this book. I love it, but I hate it. There’s a ton of really unacceptable abuse happening in this story in the name of “alpha” behavior; emotional abuse, sexual abuse, gaslighting, isolation, abduction. And we have a female lead that is just taking it chapter after chapter.

    12/19/2021 08:36

  • QueenKae

    I understand he’s upset but the fact that he still haven’t even acknowledged what he did. I don’t see how he is coming to the light in just a few chapters. He doesn’t want her but is making her go back? If he take her pup in any kind of way she better let that beast out. Hopefully when they land she is healed enough and when she sees M she better let her beast out. An eye for an eye. I feel like some real sugar honey iced tea is coming up. All she has is her and her mate now. This is what she really wanted she better protect her male. She has to show them they got her f’ed up and she not taking this laying down. Phobos was never fully hers…only if she was doing what he wanted.

    12/19/2021 08:08

  • Kristen Tedrow Cope

    please Theia stand up for yourself bring out Luna Theia Queen of Beasts! Show them who you are!

    12/19/2021 08:05

  • Reader-047590

    I wish she would stand up for herself more. I can’t wait for the next chapters to see what happens. I hope they have a happy ending

    12/19/2021 07:43

  • planet blue

    I don’t really understand where this update is going. I thought this was the direction it needed to go in order for both the characters “to grow” and it feels in terms of character development like they went even more backwards....(?) I hope in the next update the author allows for Theia to grow a pair and stand up for herself. a little too emotionally invested in this story and if this conflict drags on and on w no payoff like they both don’t ever understand I don’t think I can finish this story. it would be borderline too misogynistic for me to read. men may be assholes but women are not this weak. And especially now if she’s somehow deemed Queen and developed strong maternal feelings.

    12/19/2021 06:16

  • planet blue

    Lmaoo @all of us being so emotionally invested in this story and getting mad on behalf of theia being weak and Phobos being thick skulled. we all annoyed at the lack of character development we thought would happen 😂 all of us need a drink after reading this latest chapter😭😂

    12/19/2021 05:58

  • Sintia

    literally heartbreaking for Theia!!!!

    12/19/2021 05:35

  • Reader-195702

    I kind of get why he is so angry. Like ye he kisses Moria but she deeply kissed sum dude too. They both did each other wrong. I understand that she wanted to go away and heal but 10 months were definitely not needed. She knows how Phobos is and she kept him from his son. Kept him thinking that she was taken against her will for 10 months. She could’ve said that she’s safe and will come back but she didn’t. Still I think that saying “u won’t be MY theia when we get back” is way too harsh. He had 10 grieving months to think about what he did. And him saying that is just bs. What he gon do? take Moria as his Luna? If he does that, then imma b truly disappointed. And Moria pisses me off too. She doesn’t know any boundaries at all. Actually All three of them. Theia dancing and letting her male friends touch her. Phobos having some kind of bond with Moria and letting them get in situations, that are not appropriate for not-mates and Moria for crushing on a man that has a mate.

    12/19/2021 04:56

  • Reader-195702

    i

    12/19/2021 04:55

  • Kayla Swick

    not saying that Theia shouldn't have womaned up and bitch slapped tf outta Phobos, but her leaving wasn't selfish. I do see it as childish; she could have voiced her thoughts. however I do not think or feel it was selfish of her to leave especially if she felt like she was floundering. that being said, I understand Phobos' anger, his betrayal; however, it is beyond cruel as he has already been so cruel to Theia from the beginning to say she will no longer be his. does that mean he'll start sleeping with other females? some will probably think Theia will deserve it. they were both in the wrong and instead of trying to mend things when he found her like Deimos tried to when Lumina was angry with him and refused to allow him that at the birth his son, he further hurt her. now THAT is selfish.

    12/19/2021 01:12

  • Carol Dionne

    Luna Liz I was paying attention I knew this was coming if she had just reached out to him and then didn’t let him see the birth of his SON!?!! Theia went to far…She is going to have to grow up real fast now because she don’t know hurt feelings now but wait till that plane land….bless her heart…

    12/18/2021 23:33

  • Carol Dionne

    I knew this coming and for anyone who said it wasn’t ..😝 Lumina can do that with Deimos but Phobos is👏🏾 not 👏🏾to👏🏾be👏🏾played👏🏾with👏🏾!!!!!!

    12/18/2021 23:30

  • Kim Coffey

    I don't know...should I read this...I am not going to until someone will tell me it's gonna be okay...I will wait for the next update

    12/18/2021 23:23

  • Elle 🧿

    I just don’t see how this can end well for both of them now. I won’t lie, I really want a happy ending with them both together and Moria GONE! Theia speak up!! His words cut deep.

    12/18/2021 23:00

  • Alexis M.

    seriously so upset about this last chapter. I cannot even word my discomfort over what he just said. Damn it Theia! why did you do this and damn it Phobos why can you not work with her!

    12/18/2021 22:44

  • Grace Willoughby

    I literally can’t breathe after this

    12/18/2021 22:11

  • Lisa Jackson Fernandez

    omg. I am broken

    12/18/2021 21:56

  • YAB

    he can’t be serious!!! 🤬 my god.. my heart is broken 🥺

    12/18/2021 21:12

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    12/18/2021 12:30

  • Achovia Jones

    This was so good…. I love all the chapters oh my God!!!

    12/17/2021 00:52

  • Kayla Swick

    here we go. the "she's selfish" comments. I remember these from Lumina's story. yall said the same about her too.

    12/15/2021 19:02

  • Desire

    she so selfish at this very moment

    12/15/2021 14:54

  • Jennah_63074

    oh I’m so happy we received another update! woohoo thank you so much

    12/15/2021 01:40

  • Vanessa

    now I feel bad for all of the innocent people from other packs that were killed because of theia running away...I think she should have hashed it out with him and forced him to give her space.....they never seem to handle things appropriately ugh hope it gets better but I regret the bloodbath!!

    12/14/2021 23:35

  • Carol Dionne

    She is putting Lumina and Adeimos relationship at risk, Cronus and his pack at risk, Gio’s pack at risk and hundreds dead because she thinks she is the only one hurting. I have to say I liked Theia since the first book she seemed more mature but now..I almost want Phobos to let her go so he and his wolf can heal…

    12/14/2021 22:04

  • Kim Coffey

    What is the freaking point of going through all this if he doesn't know why she left

    12/14/2021 20:45

  • Maria Megalogeni

    Deimos and Lumina’s agony when she found out about the chosen, and in particular the trauma Deimos endured was so raw and thus “captivating” for us as readers. I am looking forward to seeing if we will get to see (and feel) similar emotions with Phobos and Theia.

    12/14/2021 20:06

  • Alexandra Daniela Bonea

    Hi! Does anyone knows when the book will be updated?

    12/14/2021 09:15

  • ssyl

    Can't wait for the next update! Been checking often

    12/14/2021 01:26

  • Kim Coffey

    Not trying to argue or beat a dead horse...but Theia is a 20 something spoiled brat, not a mature woman, she has been thrust into a culture she has no clue and no one to advise her plus her mate instead of helping does nothing but to encourage the disrespect of his pack...even though it might be unintentional

    12/13/2021 17:40

  • Yolanda Padrnos

    I do love this book. However it’s rough. Theia continuously goes through hell. I feel terrible for her. She is now going to have a child without Phobos. That’s all she wanted was to be a mom to his child. Now she’s on her own. Terrible events one after another. Theia and Phobos will never be able to be together.

    12/12/2021 18:17

  • Carol Dionne

    Lumina can do that with Deimos. it Phobos is a whole other animal! Him and his beast will not have it! PERIOD! Theia can take Luminas experience into consideration but Phobos will not stop till he finds her and once he find out she is pregnant there will be no living separately 😂

    12/12/2021 16:05

  • Carol Dionne

    So what are you going to do now Theia? This has turned into my favorite story EVER! 🥰🥰🥰

    12/12/2021 16:02

  • FloA

    Luna Liz you have truly spoilt me with you story. I am trying to read some of the other stories out there and they fail to compare. I hope you keep writing more stories, because I am thoroughly hooked to your way of writing.

    12/12/2021 14:39

  • QueenKae

    I’m so happy for Theia! This is something she really wanted. I know the road might be rocky moving forward with their time apart but I hope she does get sometime to deal with everything. She needs to make peace and figure out what she wants. List her damands for her mate, the pack, and what should happen with M before she goes back. I hope she does it quickly so she can enjoy her pregnancy. Also if someone did try to posion her womb I can’t wait for her to roll up very pregnant or with the newborn pup/pups and shock the sugar honey iced tea outta them! Now get to this other jet and get out of there!

    12/12/2021 13:50

  • Dian Kurniawati

    i cry when i read deimos story, i think i will continuous crying on Phohos too! my heart ache for them

    12/12/2021 13:33

  • Grace Willoughby

    I was actually more upset about Deimos and the chosen one than I am about Phobos mishaps. I would have made him suffer but probably wouldn’t have left and knowingly sent him on a man hunt knowing he would probably kill anyone who got in his way. Its like theias growth takes 1 step forward and 10 steps back sometimes

    12/12/2021 09:36

  • Grace Willoughby

    We asked for Lumina and she delivered 🙌🏼 gosh I’ve missed her

    12/12/2021 09:33

  • Cassi1234

    I laughed at the part we’re lumina goes do you know how the pregnancy test works Theia oh loved it Luna Liz ❤️🙌🏽

    12/12/2021 09:27

  • Trimble Claudia

    The trash 🗑 can die now and the kid isn't needed now.THE QUEEN is PREGNANT. And he loss it all well done.

    12/12/2021 07:29

  • orchids_purple

    @Luna Liz Here goes the though. You are love mannnn, amazing Lumina has to knock some senses into him. Hope they would be together, when she gives birth. As Moria time for her to exist, I guess Crouns would end up bwing with her. Now the question is Argus??

    12/12/2021 05:54

  • dolly pit

    yay 🎈 so happy for theia💕 i can't wait for the nect chapter

    12/12/2021 01:39

  • bisaayanna

    I knew it and I'm happy...now I only hope she gets to go through her pregnancy, gv birth to a happy healthy and live pup as well as be able to raise he or she to be strong, but caring...now for Phobos...it is like Lumina sd Phobos is already kneeling...that's what the howl was for...HIS loss...he knows now the full impact of what he did because it drove his female and now pup away...he is going to feel the abandonment he forced Theia to deal with for 18 years...it is on a different level now since she is with pup and he knows it...he will bleed for sure and Lumina will be there for Theia to show her just how to do it...ON HER TERMS...just love it.

    12/12/2021 00:04

  • Reader-254912

    I’m just happy because if anyone is going to show her how to make him bleed it’s gonna be lumina she has the right ally that’s for sure and Cronus he was there with lumina through it so he knows how to handle these brothers very well I can’t wait man it’s getting good 😊

    12/11/2021 22:27

  • Reader-254912

    yesss👏👏👏👏I’m so happy for her and I bet he knows that’s what they called to tell him ?? hummm probably 🧐I can’t wait love it 🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼

    12/11/2021 21:31

  • Ocey

    Phobos punishment of Theia was brutal in this. Was it right?! No that isn’t how you treat your moon blessed, it was messed up. I am sure he will come to realise and regret this with time. I get that he is a beast an Alpha and possessive as f*ck, so I can see how the smell of Karel on her in her mouth (hands groping her ass, his d*ck rubbing up on his mate) and her immaturity made him crack! Theia in the past would make Phobos angry just to make him punish her she liked it, again not saying what he did was right but wanted to point this out! I think she was right to leave they both need a break. I hope it has only ever been a kiss from Moira (which Phobos never returns, just like in this chapter) and nothing more! Remembering Theia dancing up on Aegeus, didnt see Phobos go run off and grab her friend or another female to rub up on he handled the situation pretty good. Theia should have cut in and said something the moment Moira kissed him, she was wrong too!

    12/11/2021 09:05

  • Elle 🧿

    Now that the first shock has settled in me 😅 I have re-read the chapter. You can clearly see that there isn’t anything romantic on Phobos part because it says stuff like ‘he stiffened’ ‘his arms by his side, not moving’ ‘looking past Moria to the wall’ etc.... but it still doesn’t justify it 😅🙈. I hope, Phobos, Moria and Drako (don’t think he can get away with it as Beta) really see and feel the pain their actions have caused Theia.... their Luna... his mate.

    12/11/2021 06:14

  • murphy90

    can we discuss the possible Easter eggs in these last chapters about moira and her mark? the way she dismissed theia when she spoke about pulling up her hair? am I overthinking it or is this going to be more explored?

    12/10/2021 22:36

  • Crystal Ann Hopkins

    I am torn I can understand both sides of theia and phobos. I am just trying not to make any judgment for they both are the different types that each other needs. whether they take time to find the real truth inside them self is it remains unclear.you are a kick ass writer and I have feel in love with both of your books. I can wait to read more.

    12/10/2021 20:40

  • Cassi1234

    Luna Liz I think because you smashed them Chapters out of the ball park we’re all as readers on this train for this next update asap! I love all the comments on who was right and who was wrong ! you got people dividing 🙌🏽

    12/10/2021 19:21

  • bisaayanna

    Ok so I had to re-read this a couple times because it does take one through ALL the emotions and had I responded the first time I read it then my response wld hv bn a hot headed response...so I read it a 2nd time put it down, slept on it and now I'm responding...1st I'll say this abt Phobos's actions...ALL the way wrong because knowing how territorial and extremely possessive he is in no way would he have been OK with Theia doing what he did...simply put he didn't even want her wearing the dress she chose and then stated any male who looked at her too long was signing a death warrant...next Theia was wayyyyy too impulsive and unfortunately a lot of people would h. agreed with her actions as payback, but when ur a mature woman that is not what u do...PERIOD...it never ends well and the lessons trying to be relayed never mk it to their destination...so as a mature woman I wouldn't hv done that. I also would h. addressed it as soon as it happened right there in front of Moira with Phobos

    12/10/2021 14:52

  • Trimble Claudia

    his nothing but trash 🗑

    12/10/2021 07:23

  • QueenKae

    Theia should go to that remote village in Italy (I think) where Deimos and Lumina stayed when he was helping that young Alpha. She could get a break and not put any pack in danger.

    12/10/2021 00:17

  • Vanessa

    phobos keeps saying moira helped him deal with his parent's death.....I am wondering what type of "help" she administered!!!!! phobos do let us know the details because something smells fishy 🐟 around here!!!

    12/10/2021 00:01

  • Mel West

    I hope the next chapters give us clear answers

    12/09/2021 21:06

  • Sydney Smelko

    I think Theia is pregnant.. She will find out once she gets back to her old pack lands with Cronus.. this will reunite her and Phobos but im not sure if she'll want to go back with Phobos is things with Moira aren't ended

    12/09/2021 19:57

  • Elle 🧿

    So 😅....Phobos didn’t want to kiss Theia because he thought she’d been with other males, but in the meantime he allowed his friend (when tipsy) to kiss him on multiple occasions over the years🧐? Why, because her mate looked like Phobos or had similarities that reminds her of her mate? That’s no excuse, even after Theia talked about her insecurities surrounding Moria 🤷‍♀️. How do they come back from this? Surely if Theia was to return Moria and her son couldn’t stay? Also, did the pack know of this, if it happened over the years when Moria was tipsy because that’s also not fair if they did. 👀😅😅

    12/09/2021 19:29

  • QueenKae

    Theia was wrong for how she reacted. Her actions caused that mans death. It will probably bother her later once she reflects. Phobos is wrong as well and it really gets to me that he doesn’t believe he has done anything. The relationship with Moira is inappropriate and has been from the beginning. Even if this was the basis of their relationship before Theia’s arrival it should’ve been nipped in the bud when she stepped foot on their lands. She asked him about Moira and expressed how she felt several times. If you remember he told her he would not reject Moira for her. Look back at all the time they spent together…he was at her hut, eating there, playing with her pup, joking and laughing while she did her duites. All while his mate was watching, struggling to adjust, and dealing with that. He really broke her trust. She should go to Deimos and Lumina…maybe Phobos won’t kill first and think later there.

    12/09/2021 17:54

  • B Beau L

    also why follow Moira's downfall? liquor did her no favours...as it does no one in vast amounts... Theia needs to feel secure in her own right. she should not feel the need for her male to always pacify her. she's got to grow a backbone. stop being jealous natured. it serves no purpose. other than to cause trouble. playful teasing is okay...but not being jealous of your loved one having friends outside of you. Theia needs her own friends in the pack. she needs to grow and have them help her better understand her male and their ways, whether to agree with them or not, it is important to see another's perspective before taking action. (but I say this with hindsight and no one is perfect!) can't wait to see them both put changes in place and move forward and upwards... then let the pups begin! 💖👑💖👑

    12/09/2021 14:29

  • Samantha

    What ever happened to the promises Phobos made to Theia when they originally hashed out the Moira issue? Okay, great, he kept the door cracked while he was inside with her…while👏🏽he👏🏽allowed👏🏽Moira👏🏽to👏🏽kiss👏🏽him👏🏽?!?!?! But I think the bigger issue Theia has is that Phobos was throwing around the intimacy of providing intense emotional support to a female that isn’t his female. With the female Theia is already insecure about because of their history; because of her current barrenness insecurities WITH THE MOTHER OF THE PUP PHOBOS DECIDED TO MAKE HIS HEIR. That crosses a deeper boundary than the physicality of the kiss itself. Poor Theia. I love Phobos and what Theia did was childish but the dude needs to grow up on the whole mates thing. Mates can’t be “do as I say not as I do” blah blah blah.

    12/09/2021 11:18

  • Morgan McKee

    loved this…. how am I suppose to wait for another chapter…. I love Cronus coming to her rescue! Phobos crossed so many lines - Moira, that poor guy, than the punishment. He should be angry at himself. great job on this chapter I couldn’t read it fast enough!

    12/09/2021 08:05

  • Contreras Lizzy

    I love the chapter as I love all of them. Let’s not forget that Phobos is also his beast they are one and although I don’t agree with Phobos on the whole Moira situation I can see why Theia did what she did. When someone is upset jealous and heartbroken they tend to react irrationally wanting the other to feel the same and add alcohol to the mix and you’ve got yourself bad decisions. This is a story and in this story Phobos is King of Beasts his actions are beastly, possessive and domineering. If every story went with the…. “he messed up apologized, she understood and they lived a happily ever after” then what would be the point. the story itself describes the characters by their actions and shows you how they change. I LOVE YOUR STORY LUNA LIZ ❤️

    12/09/2021 07:04

  • orchids_purple

    @Luna Liz Here are my thoughts Phobos might have marked moria unknowingly when his parents died, that why he is always concern about her. Moria has fallen in love with him, but never told him. It is also possible, it was all planned by pack and moria so they could get rid of her. Now, I just feel if I would be her would have not returned cz it was vis a versa.🙄🙄🙄

    12/09/2021 04:58

  • Reader-254912

    all I can say is WOW 😮 what the heck is happening here man I felt her pain and I dont blame her one bit I probably would have killed them both man this is all bad 🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️

    12/09/2021 04:42

  • Zora Parker

    wonderful writing, heart wrenching, gut wrenching… now fix em Luna Liz 🥰

    12/09/2021 04:11
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