PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

Kayla Swick

that went better than I expected it would

bisaayanna

I think took out his anger or at least his wolf took out his anger on Moira for Theia missing and is why Moira is terrier around Theia. They both knew she was the cause of Theia leaving and the fact she had deep claw marks on her arms it has probably been that way the entire time Theia was gone....Phobos flipped out to the point his wolf took over AND since he and his wolf can operate singularly but in one body and his wolf was only ever totally controlled by Theia the wolf took it out on any and everyone with his ire being on Moira. Now Theia will have to bring both Phobos and his wolf back from the brink. ONLY the QUEEN OF BEASTS, THEIA, can do that...she's only ever bn the one who could...Phobos and his wolf live and breathe Theia.

Fifi Fee

Luna Liz, when is the next update ?

just wow❤️

196MARS196

Hurt, betrayal, heartbreak is not easy to forgive. But remember a vision was shared that parapharsing now. "A child on my hip and another in my belly" ...so possibly there will be a happy ending. Only time will tell.

Elle 🧿

I’m glad they are making amends and I feel Theia and Baby pup will help both Phobos and his pup🤞🥰. For Moria, I don’t think anything will happen to her because of the scars we now know she has, Theia does see the friendship she has or had with Phobos from growing up and plus, Moria is a mum too. With Theia being a new mum she isn’t going to do anything that will make Argus lose his mum. What do you all think?

Arnav Shetty

what theia did was wrong...but phobos action cannot be justifiable... somewhere I felt there should be some changes ...like the movement theia found Moria kissing she should have brag inside and try to kill or harm Moria for her action...and so on...this whole chappy you made only theia wrong.. which I personally found not justifiable atleast for me....hence I'm sad☹️

Elizabeth Karr

so itching for the next update

please update

this is a great book but very emotional, Luna Liz you’re doing a great job but please bring Phobos and Theia back together! I know Phobos loves Theia with everything he has but his actions hurt her. should she shouldn’t have abandoned him for so long. ❤️ I’m hoping things work out for Theia mainly!

What do you think Vulce told Phobos the night Theia left? Do you think Theia was given something in the drink during her first heat now that we know what we know? What do you think Moira’s real intentions were? Was she missing her childhood sweetheart or did she want Phobos for herself? I just want to see where we’re at 😂. We have been so wrong lately! lol

I almost want to stop reading so my heart doesn’t have to break and I can just pretend everything is fine and fixed and all is well with them 😭

Sunday update please

Chelseasmile

I’m literally reading the comments every week before I start reading the chapters 🙈 waiting for the heartbreak to be over before I read again haha

please Theia stand up for yourself bring out Luna Theia Queen of Beasts! Show them who you are!

Carol Dionne

I knew this coming and for anyone who said it wasn’t ..😝 Lumina can do that with Deimos but Phobos is👏🏾 not 👏🏾to👏🏾be👏🏾played👏🏾with👏🏾!!!!!!

this book makes me mad just 😐

plzzzzz update soon we can't wait for one week😭

Cleo1521

Theia is in for heartbreak more than she has had already if she dose not dig deep and find her strength. she needs to take Moira out of the picture completely, for it is she who has disrespected her Luna. They wouldn’t be in this situation if it wasn’t for her. Moira has wanted Phobos all along….. I think she is his chosen, which is why she won’t show her neck. There is more to this triangle🤔🤔

Phobos did all that for a whole fraud! A whole lie! A whole fake! I KNOW HE FEELS STUPID!

oh I’m so happy we received another update! woohoo thank you so much

Crystal Ann Hopkins

I am torn I can understand both sides of theia and phobos. I am just trying not to make any judgment for they both are the different types that each other needs. whether they take time to find the real truth inside them self is it remains unclear.you are a kick ass writer and I have feel in love with both of your books. I can wait to read more.

Lmaoo @all of us being so emotionally invested in this story and getting mad on behalf of theia being weak and Phobos being thick skulled. we all annoyed at the lack of character development we thought would happen 😂 all of us need a drink after reading this latest chapter😭😂

ah! I love this!! I think we can let Moira off the hook this one time. I think she has learned her lesson.

dolly pit

yay 🎈 so happy for theia💕 i can't wait for the nect chapter

I’m so happy for Theia! This is something she really wanted. I know the road might be rocky moving forward with their time apart but I hope she does get sometime to deal with everything. She needs to make peace and figure out what she wants. List her damands for her mate, the pack, and what should happen with M before she goes back. I hope she does it quickly so she can enjoy her pregnancy. Also if someone did try to posion her womb I can’t wait for her to roll up very pregnant or with the newborn pup/pups and shock the sugar honey iced tea outta them! Now get to this other jet and get out of there!

Deimos and Lumina’s agony when she found out about the chosen, and in particular the trauma Deimos endured was so raw and thus “captivating” for us as readers. I am looking forward to seeing if we will get to see (and feel) similar emotions with Phobos and Theia.

Harleyquinn 6980

thank for your hard work and I think you need a somewhat of a vacation. I hope you also have a merry Christmas and just in case you didn't write for next week a happy new year. I will wait for the next chapter when you post it. 😁

Cassi1234

Luna Liz I think because you smashed them Chapters out of the ball park we’re all as readers on this train for this next update asap! I love all the comments on who was right and who was wrong ! you got people dividing 🙌🏽

Reader-254912

I’m just happy because if anyone is going to show her how to make him bleed it’s gonna be lumina she has the right ally that’s for sure and Cronus he was there with lumina through it so he knows how to handle these brothers very well I can’t wait man it’s getting good 😊

Reader-047590

I wish she would stand up for herself more. I can’t wait for the next chapters to see what happens. I hope they have a happy ending

FloA

Luna Liz you have truly spoilt me with you story. I am trying to read some of the other stories out there and they fail to compare. I hope you keep writing more stories, because I am thoroughly hooked to your way of writing.

BexyCL

My dearest Luna Liz, you never fail to make me cry my beloved female😭❤️

Kim Coffey

I don't know...should I read this...I am not going to until someone will tell me it's gonna be okay...I will wait for the next update

I feel that, Theia will take punishments for Alpha Gio and Luna Ira. He wants some1 to bleed it will be theia who will bleed. Luna Liz pls give an synopsis on your FB page plsss

Theia should go to that remote village in Italy (I think) where Deimos and Lumina stayed when he was helping that young Alpha. She could get a break and not put any pack in danger.

ssyl

Can't wait for the next update! Been checking often

I need to come back when the book is finished because this is 2 much for this pregnant momma!

Moonglowbeast

Omg how sad would that be if Phobos stopped looking because he was building the house he promised her on his land. Only to find out she intentionally left him and took away the time of watching his pup grow and be born. In away i understand Theia and her actions but I was really disappointed to see that she didn't return to him because she liked it in Italy. That kinda shows she still hasn't fully accepted her pack and their ways. I hoped for much growth from her but i dont see that much. She had every right to escape and have time for herself but it turned out kinda selfish keeping Phobos from their male. She should have thought she is not the only one who wanted a pup. Phobos wanted it too just as much as her. How will they heal from this. They have learned through pain before. Amazing chapter Luna Liz please update as soon as possible. 😢❤️✨

Lisa Jackson Fernandez

omg. I am broken

bisaayanna

I knew it and I'm happy...now I only hope she gets to go through her pregnancy, gv birth to a happy healthy and live pup as well as be able to raise he or she to be strong, but caring...now for Phobos...it is like Lumina sd Phobos is already kneeling...that's what the howl was for...HIS loss...he knows now the full impact of what he did because it drove his female and now pup away...he is going to feel the abandonment he forced Theia to deal with for 18 years...it is on a different level now since she is with pup and he knows it...he will bleed for sure and Lumina will be there for Theia to show her just how to do it...ON HER TERMS...just love it.

Yalita Jezája - Makaio

he can’t be serious!!! 🤬 my god.. my heart is broken 🥺

Lee

Thank you for the warning author. I usually skip those chapters as they are upsetting to me. Then I wait until the storm passes to read the Happy chapter first and THEN I go back to read the upsetting chapter. specially because we’ll be left on a cliffhanger until the next chapter. That’s how I cope with the sad chapters. I really appreciate your heads up as it allows me to plan ahead. ❤️✍️

omg I can’t even breathe ❤️❤️

Elle 🧿

Now that the first shock has settled in me 😅 I have re-read the chapter. You can clearly see that there isn’t anything romantic on Phobos part because it says stuff like ‘he stiffened’ ‘his arms by his side, not moving’ ‘looking past Moria to the wall’ etc.... but it still doesn’t justify it 😅🙈. I hope, Phobos, Moria and Drako (don’t think he can get away with it as Beta) really see and feel the pain their actions have caused Theia.... their Luna... his mate.

Sintia

literally heartbreaking for Theia!!!!

Katie Harrison

oh gosh - I do not agree with Phobos kissing Moira & definitely hated that Theia kissed Keral. I would have just left straight away. I’m saying that - when is the next update lol

Kayla Swick

here we go. the "she's selfish" comments. I remember these from Lumina's story. yall said the same about her too.

@Luna Liz Here are my thoughts Phobos might have marked moria unknowingly when his parents died, that why he is always concern about her. Moria has fallen in love with him, but never told him. It is also possible, it was all planned by pack and moria so they could get rid of her. Now, I just feel if I would be her would have not returned cz it was vis a versa.🙄🙄🙄

Just a speculation- if Cronus is mates to Moria than Argus goes with Cronus and Phobos is once again left with no heir.

Reader-254912

all I can say is WOW 😮 what the heck is happening here man I felt her pain and I dont blame her one bit I probably would have killed them both man this is all bad 🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️🤦🏽‍♀️

I was actually more upset about Deimos and the chosen one than I am about Phobos mishaps. I would have made him suffer but probably wouldn’t have left and knowingly sent him on a man hunt knowing he would probably kill anyone who got in his way. Its like theias growth takes 1 step forward and 10 steps back sometimes

We asked for Lumina and she delivered 🙌🏼 gosh I’ve missed her

Morgan McKee

loved this…. how am I suppose to wait for another chapter…. I love Cronus coming to her rescue! Phobos crossed so many lines - Moira, that poor guy, than the punishment. He should be angry at himself. great job on this chapter I couldn’t read it fast enough!

also why follow Moira's downfall? liquor did her no favours...as it does no one in vast amounts... Theia needs to feel secure in her own right. she should not feel the need for her male to always pacify her. she's got to grow a backbone. stop being jealous natured. it serves no purpose. other than to cause trouble. playful teasing is okay...but not being jealous of your loved one having friends outside of you. Theia needs her own friends in the pack. she needs to grow and have them help her better understand her male and their ways, whether to agree with them or not, it is important to see another's perspective before taking action. (but I say this with hindsight and no one is perfect!) can't wait to see them both put changes in place and move forward and upwards... then let the pups begin! 💖👑💖👑

Reader-254912

yesss👏👏👏👏I’m so happy for her and I bet he knows that’s what they called to tell him ?? hummm probably 🧐I can’t wait love it 🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼

Lee

Phobos judgement is impaired. How can he not discern of what is right and what is wrong? He still believes comforting Moira was right because he made a promise🤦🏻‍♀️. 🤦 Ay! Dios mio!

Whew I’m glad this was cleared up quickly! Theia said don’t play with me. She could’ve slapped him at home though 😂.

OK at this point after all phobos has known regarding theia's concerns with moira and phobos's questionable friendship, he should be well aware not to allow moira to kiss him regardless of the excuse....I feel like. he takes one step forward and then just blows up all his progress....i don't blame theia for leaving he needs to learn how things are from her perspective!!!

Yolanda Padrnos

I do love this book. However it’s rough. Theia continuously goes through hell. I feel terrible for her. She is now going to have a child without Phobos. That’s all she wanted was to be a mom to his child. Now she’s on her own. Terrible events one after another. Theia and Phobos will never be able to be together.

I hope the next chapters give us clear answers

Tabitha Vickers

I wish to say thank you Luna Liz I now believe they will grow together on equal ground & baby beast will let Daddy & Mummy know each time they stray apart from each other. Merry Christmas Luna Liz

I’m so glad we went so far left 😂. It made what happened easier for me to deal with. I knew deep down they both were hurt and it would take time for them to get over everything and come back together. I’m hoping Theia and the baby will be able to “save” him this time. I hope he doesn’t fall asleep there and wake up in her bed to freak out/ run again. I’m interested to find out if the pack or Phobos punished M. The did have the tent open so others could’ve seen them. 🤷🏽‍♀️ We shall see.

Trisha Reynolds

shame on Phobos once again shaming theia. I would be pissed too

ssyl

May I check when the happier parts will be? Will possibly hold on reading the more sad parts for now.

bisaayanna

I sure hope Theia keeps her backbone she showed the staff at Gio's home...I sure hope Theia shows Phobos just what QUEEN of Beasts means...I sure hope she shows Phobos what bowing down to her is and I sure hope she puts Moira in her rightful place...Theia is no longer the same woman she was in the beginning...she is a mother of a beast and she has to show Phobos she is strong and not ro be taunted, played with, disregarded, and disrespected. her response to Phobos needs to be "If I am no longer ur Theia then Moira will no longer exist on MY land nor yours. I am QUEEN."

wonderful writing, heart wrenching, gut wrenching… now fix em Luna Liz 🥰

natasha wakeford

didn't she birth the lining of her womb in her first heat? my guess is she's still healing and will have her miracle baby/babies

I have to say I really like lumina in these last chapters how she stood up to phobos was bad a$$ed lol

OK so is her condition permanent because I thought the healer gave her suggestions on how to reverse her condition? or did I interpret things wrong? I think she will have her pup it will just take longer for her to conceive

Whoa Moira…you sneaky b!t(h. I knew something wasn’t right with her. I’m not bothered she took a chosen, I’m bothered that she lied about it. She used her friendship with Phobos in the wrong way. What was her real intentions? I can’t help but think all the times she got drunk and sought comfort from Phobos she knew what she was doing and wanted it. Theia also drunk a full bottle of liquor that night and was emotionally hurt andddddd knew exactly what she was doing. 👀 She weakened and caused so much stress among other things in P & T’s relationship it’s unreal. She messed up her and her son’s life at this point. He could’ve been a beta but now he can’t even stay. I hope Phobos gets all of this or at least his wolf brings him up to speed or something. He already knew things was fu(ked. 🙄 Pray for Dranko’s nasty a$$. Maybe his mate won’t send him to the moon just yet. I do feel bad that she will have to leave Lumina if she decides to stay but at least Theia will have someone.

yes she has a pup. in deamos she and photos come to a birthday party and she is pregnant.

I understand he’s upset but the fact that he still haven’t even acknowledged what he did. I don’t see how he is coming to the light in just a few chapters. He doesn’t want her but is making her go back? If he take her pup in any kind of way she better let that beast out. Hopefully when they land she is healed enough and when she sees M she better let her beast out. An eye for an eye. I feel like some real sugar honey iced tea is coming up. All she has is her and her mate now. This is what she really wanted she better protect her male. She has to show them they got her f’ed up and she not taking this laying down. Phobos was never fully hers…only if she was doing what he wanted.

I don’t even want to read the next update. I’m sure Phobos will probably pull away to process but she needs him right now. I hope she recalls what she was given to stop her heat and brings it up. I’m rooting for them but I can’t take much of Phobos not being supportive right now.

now I feel bad for all of the innocent people from other packs that were killed because of theia running away...I think she should have hashed it out with him and forced him to give her space.....they never seem to handle things appropriately ugh hope it gets better but I regret the bloodbath!!

Lee

I have hope that they’ll be blessed. Phobos will love her unconditionally. Maybe if they mate in wolf form there might be a possibility for them to conceive?….. I live it and know first hand the emotional turmoil of not being able to conceive and for my husband adoption was not an option. My husband is the oldest of 4 and the only one without a child. God smiled down on me after 5 years. I already had put it in the back of my mind and when we least expected we conceive. 8 months later we had a beautiful baby girl and 2 years later another one. I definitely have hopes for Theia and Phobos that the goddess will bestow a blessing upon them when they least expect it. who knows, maybe a double blessing 👫💕

I’m trying to be positive but idk. I hope everything goes well with the other packs coming.

These good wolves getting unworthy mates. It's the weak alpha he needs to set stuff straight the moon made no mistake pairing him. she needs to lay down the law in these lands these wolves are not worthy.

Elle 🧿

I just don’t see how this can end well for both of them now. I won’t lie, I really want a happy ending with them both together and Moria GONE! Theia speak up!! His words cut deep.

she so selfish at this very moment

Achovia Jones

This was so good…. I love all the chapters oh my God!!!

Kim Coffey

What is the freaking point of going through all this if he doesn't know why she left

Carol Dionne

So what are you going to do now Theia? This has turned into my favorite story EVER! 🥰🥰🥰

Susan Pearson

Oh no!!! He is going to get crueler...that makes me nervous. Im hoping she let's her wolf out in the next Chapter. I so want them to meet.

😍😍😍

murphy90

can we discuss the possible Easter eggs in these last chapters about moira and her mark? the way she dismissed theia when she spoke about pulling up her hair? am I overthinking it or is this going to be more explored?

natasha wakeford

could it be that he becomes more cruel towards his pack though since we don't know what happend to him while theia was recovering and he was in those woods when his family passed he loves her he said that I doubt he would betray her with someone else. He may well be in those woods to build there home he spoke about.. there is a gap of 2 months we don't know what happened so be interesting to find out as I believe she's his weakness and strength x

@Luna Liz Here goes the though. You are love mannnn, amazing Lumina has to knock some senses into him. Hope they would be together, when she gives birth. As Moria time for her to exist, I guess Crouns would end up bwing with her. Now the question is Argus??

That last chapter was a tough one. Literally have chills. I am not sure how this will end but it seems as though there will be more equally emotional chapters ahead.

Samantha

What ever happened to the promises Phobos made to Theia when they originally hashed out the Moira issue? Okay, great, he kept the door cracked while he was inside with her…while👏🏽he👏🏽allowed👏🏽Moira👏🏽to👏🏽kiss👏🏽him👏🏽?!?!?! But I think the bigger issue Theia has is that Phobos was throwing around the intimacy of providing intense emotional support to a female that isn’t his female. With the female Theia is already insecure about because of their history; because of her current barrenness insecurities WITH THE MOTHER OF THE PUP PHOBOS DECIDED TO MAKE HIS HEIR. That crosses a deeper boundary than the physicality of the kiss itself. Poor Theia. I love Phobos and what Theia did was childish but the dude needs to grow up on the whole mates thing. Mates can’t be “do as I say not as I do” blah blah blah.

Kim Coffey

Not trying to argue or beat a dead horse...but Theia is a 20 something spoiled brat, not a mature woman, she has been thrust into a culture she has no clue and no one to advise her plus her mate instead of helping does nothing but to encourage the disrespect of his pack...even though it might be unintentional

Carol Dionne

I just read Luna’s intro 😩 Now I’m scared to read it 😰😭

Queen M

I just reread the chapter. I feel so bad for Phobos…whatever he delivers I feel will be justified. he is not cruel for no reason and I think what Theia did was selfish abs childish.

Thanks for the heads up Luna 😭…was so looking forward to Theia having her little beast 💔 it just won’t be the same if another she-wolf has to birth his heir. I hope Phobos meant what he said that she is his moonlight, if he turns his back on her or has a pup with another surrogate or not then his love was fake sorry about it! If Vudce did this during Theias heat then f*ck her..all the feels right now for poor Theia hoping for a miracle, for Phobos wish on the lantern to come true with Theia as the one and only to conceive/ birth his pups 🥺

At the end of the latest update I was pleased with how it ended, feeling it was progress for Theia and Phobos(and of course their wolves)... But after reading your comment Luna Liz, about Phobos becoming more cruel towards the end of the story, has me shocked and apprehensive! About the speculations of Theia not being able to have children and him taking another mate, well that would just make me very disappointed😢! Are they to Never be happy and settled together in their relationship?! And what is it with Moria anyways,… what exactly was their relationship

Elle 🧿

So 😅....Phobos didn’t want to kiss Theia because he thought she’d been with other males, but in the meantime he allowed his friend (when tipsy) to kiss him on multiple occasions over the years🧐? Why, because her mate looked like Phobos or had similarities that reminds her of her mate? That’s no excuse, even after Theia talked about her insecurities surrounding Moria 🤷‍♀️. How do they come back from this? Surely if Theia was to return Moria and her son couldn’t stay? Also, did the pack know of this, if it happened over the years when Moria was tipsy because that’s also not fair if they did. 👀😅😅

Reader-371843

I am with Thea. Phobos needs to let go of Moira. It is enough and he needs to respect her. If it was no big deal to him he would have taken Thea with him. Maybe Moira is for Cronos…

Zena Jass

hii, how many more chapters are there left? loving this book as much as Deimos

natasha wakeford

phobos needs to make peace with his wolf it seems as though neither one wants to share theia. I'm also wondering if theres more to to it as to why she's not pregnant yet. didn't Deimos wolf bite lumina in appreciation for her sacrifice to him. phobos needs to take responsibility for his actions and how it's effecting his female ..

Trimble Claudia

his nothing but trash 🗑