PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

I am noticing what I think is a pattern here. in the deimos story whenever phobos and theia appear in public away from phobos pack, phobos maintains distance from theia as though he does not want to show in public his desire for her...that she has some power over her..does not want to show his weakness..when he is with his pack he however seems to want to pull her close to him...not sure if my observations are correct however it seems like a pattern

Queen M

@Luna Liz….thank you for The Weeknd surprise. I totally expected to have to wait until Monday or Tuesday. I loved Theia the warrior queen that is being birth. I need to know what the other journals say…does he still journal. Mora’s reveal about Phobos…so much meat in this small but might chapter. Excited for the Kings return

Madison Alexa Gomez Medina

for a book that has some complex allusions to trauma, attachment and community, I would say the cover does it a disservice

This book gives me anxiety, but I still check for updates regularly haha.

Katie Harrison

when do the updates happen?

uuugghhhh Phohos is an idiot...🤨🙄

Carol Dionne

the sexual tension in this story got me tense!😬

Great book! It sparks laughter, saddness, anger, and many other emotions.

what a great surprise! thank you so much for the update ❤️❤️❤️❤️ I’m so happy they finally spoke about this. can’t wait for next update!

This was such a significant chapter set since it allowed Theia the opportunity to prove some worth in this pack. First with the fish, they think she’s incapable of anything and ill prepared for their way of life but she has some skills. Second, the performance of the traditional dance is a big one. It must have some significance that will become clear later. Clearly Vudce was impressed. I’m anticipating that her tasks during the seven months of the winter hunt will have her becoming stronger, gaining some allies in the pack, and learning more about their way of life. I’m a bit frustrated that Theia hasn’t humbled herself to Vudce to show that she wants to learn from her and that she respects the position Vudce has in the pack.

Carol Dionne

Ok I have a stupid question but ummm…did he take her virginity or no? 🤔 Help a sister out please 🥴

What a wonderful surprise! Thank you for the updates 🥰 I’m glad Theia told Phobos her truth!!!

Thank you so much! You made my day a million times better! Can't wait to see how long she can last before she gives in to her love. Hopefully he is a completely different alpha when they get back and the pack can see open love and how it isn't a weakness!

Stacey Burrows

she needs to sack up and tell him that hes wrong to assume that she's not pure

Margarita 🍹

This whole story is well thought out and pieced together flawlessly. I know it takes time to update something this amazing and I'm willing to wait.... kind of lol.

Jennyjen

😍😍🤩🤩

Reader-254912

omg I just can’t wow this was awesome 👏 I can’t wait for the next day oh I know it’s gonna be good once again you out did yourself 🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼

Thank you for the update. And thank you for redeeming Phobos in my eyes. I was often puzzled how he couldn't see her normal reactions and emotions. Even made a comment about his intelligence. Never thought of some emotional disability.

Alright now I've been in Phobos corner but even I wanna smack words out of his *sigh*.

Dang…is he going to take her ass food everyday? Does she not have food or cook? Omg I’ve said this before but ima say it again. I love Drakho, I absolutely adore how he treats Thiea. I screamed at the chickens chasing her 🤣. They could have at least showed her first. Phobos to the rescue! Cronus is not feeling Phobos at all 🤣. Aww he kept the bear. I’m loving that he is being affectionate with her! ❤️

do what you must

Luna Liz please don't let us 'Phobos fasting' for the entire weekend :)

wow!! I’m so sad for Theia!! I hope she is able to overcome to sadness and she becomes to be the woman she needs to be for herself as much as she loves Phobos!

Tabitha Vickers

just wondering how often will there be updates please

Carol Dionne

I know Phobos really loves her and is trying to toughen her up and prepare her for his pack.. I just hope she does not get lost in the process…

Tabitha Vickers

the update for this book is taking so long. I have to keep going back to read the previous chapter to remind me what is happening. Will it be much longer. it really puts me of reading until it's completely finished 😭

WatUpG

They need to hurry up and get laid can't she see its only ever her now gotta wait another week for next update thank you 💜 🙏

Susan Pearson

An update!!! I can't wait to read it... I'm at work!!! Thank You ❤❤❤❤ I was completely ready to wait the week

Simone Zwick

Thanks for the updates! I love your stories. Looking forward for the next 😊

Rae Evans

I love this story. it’s dark but is much more to real life than some other books. being took from your home with someone you thought you knew, but seems so distant now and then ignored. not knowing if you’re coming or going. brilliant can’t wait for the next update.

I’m so curious to the fact that neither of them have shifted yet. We haven’t seen Theia in wolf form yet and how her wolf behaves.

Hi Liz… Regardless of your claims that these last chapters are “not rape scenes” I regret to inform you that they are, in fact, the legal definition of rape. Look it up if you don’t believe me. I re-read the chapters to see what I was misunderstanding. However, she clearly states “no”, and is sobbing/resisting him and he replies with “it’s my wolfs right” and continues. Your readers are supposed to know she wanted this and “read between the lines”??! What lines? There is no rational way to justify around this. If your intention is to not portray rape, but animalistic desire, do better. This distinction is not evident in your writing if you have to “clear up speculation” in the comment section. You have a true creative talent and I have enjoyed these books. I wish you the best - author - but will no longer participate in this journey.

Danny Rizzo

This is torture waiting for the chapters

Trisha Reynolds

I don’t think my heart can take much more. she needs to leave that place I would rather be alone than be treated like that. still don’t understand Phobos or his lack of communication

3 months and no kiss, that's ludicrous lol. please have them kiss before he departs 🙏

ninja

this story is starting to drive me crazy. I cannot wait to read more. so hooked on it! how often do you update?

I remember Phobos wanted her to be able to read emotions really well but she can’t read minds. I know she stopped training at around 16 (I think) was it because of the brazen males in her pack or will that be revealed in the book? I’m glad they are in the same living space. I’m going to take a wild guess Phobos and his friend help each other out. He was there for her and her son and she maybe helped out around the pack (thinking back to when she kept speaking up) and was probably hoping for more.

Paula Lewis

Luna Liz omg! your writing is amazing! I’m excited for the next chapters. I can’t wait to see how Theia grows as all females should.

Reader-371843

I don’t understand where the rumors are coming from?? am I missing something? He is such an asswhole. he does not deserve her. I hope he rots in hell or she makes him beg for forgiveness. how can someone change so much?

My dear Lizzy what an amazing weekend suprise I was starting to not enjoy my weekends enough because the wait for Tuesday was always in mind but last night I couldn’t be happier that I could go to bed and read the new chappies 🙌🏻❤️ Thank you so much. Having sad that what a beautiful update I love what she is doing with the pack I love Awan … I can’t wait to see how Phobos will react to these changes. I am though slightly worried about the kind of “support” Moira gave him when he lost his parents … I have said it before but I truly hope Phobos stayed true and pure to Theia as males usually dont nad this would be extremely special. Thank you again Lizzy ❤️🙏🏻❤️🙏🏻

Phobos 👀👀🤣

sara moore

as always , just when I need it ❤️

Sherry Lee Gay

suspense is killing me!! I need more lol!!

omg I loved this update!!! I can't wait for their second night

Carol Dionne

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Luna Liz, I have always loved your writing style, I was quite shocked on how long it took for Lumina and Demos to become Physical! specially since wolves are such sexual creatures! don't get me wrong men and even more so women (in my opinion!) are motivated by our carnal appetites and it is in all beings DNA to procreate. that being said I Def want more 🔥🌶🌶 crappies! but I am curious...Phobos "family" with Argus and Moria has been and is going to continue (even more so) to hurt Thiea, what tortures await her mind and soul???

Tina

when will the next update can wait sitting on the edge of my couch 🛋😫

Cassi1234

THANK YOU LUNA LIZ!!! I have been sweating on this! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

so good 💜💜

natasha wakeford

love love loved it still loving it.. so enjoying the joining of these two. although they have got closer quicker than lumina and Deimos. xx

I guess my book has not updated yet because I cannot see the new book cover 😔

Excited for the next chapters, hope Theia leaves Phobos and goes home even just to prove a point - he needs to work hard for her as well, Theia is trying so hard to prove herself for someone who really isn’t sure about her yet, she deserves better! Phobos is a bit selfish he doesn’t want her fully but doesn’t want anyone else to have her either 🤦🏽‍♀️..it’s like he’s at a cross road his pack first or Theia first - if he truly loves her then he would put her above the pack and not care if they accept her or not!! Can he not give up his Alpha position if they won’t accept her? Honestly he should have left her with her own pack until he was 100% sure about it…or just take someone his pack deems worthy as his Luna like Moira and let Theia live as she was (yes she would not have been truly happy like with her mate, but at least she had found peace after Phobos broke her heart the first time). Clever author I know we are meant to feel frustrated with Phobos but so sad to see Theia treated this way…not like his ‘beloved’. Love your stories though I am sure there will be a happy ending 💗❤️

Becky Thompson

OMG!!! pleeaasssee dont leave us hangin for weekend lol. ive been so addicted to this whole series!! absolutely love it by the way. i do have to say that i was hesitant to read this because i really did not like theia in diemos n luminas story. im seeing her POV and I'm begining to see.

more more! can’t wait to find out what’s next.

Tabitha Vickers

please keep going as you are. l really appreciate having 4-5 parts to read. I wish we could have extra updates to this book. It has me totally obsessed & I reread chapters just to get my fix. thank you

Jasmineflower

we will buy it just post

Ugg - I love this book and hate it all at the same time. I just want to sit the two of them down and make them talk it out!!!

Jasmineflower

we will buy it just post

Jasmineflower

what days is the story updated?

OMG this new update has me!! Why has Phobos changed his mind? How many years has it been since she’s seen him when she was 18? AHHHH 😲

Taylor McMullen

Luna Liz I’m obsessed! I need more! When is the next update? I always forget how long it’s been since the most recent one.

FloA

I am dying to read Phobos' point of view. I need to know what he is thinking.

this book is breaking my heart and that's a lot considering these apps are plagued by books about cruel alphas acting like jerks to their mates.

Elle 🧿

I have just started this story, I’m about to read ‘Goosebumps’ 😊. It’s great to know the back story. As I am very new into the story, so I maybe completely wrong and off the mark 🙃, but I feel that everything Phobos has trained and taught Theia will come into play during this story... her journey... for example; the story of the Hare and what she learnt from that, the training with knives and what she learnt from that and the learning to recognise emotions (so much that she wants to surprise Phobos at how good she is). As I said I maybe completely wrong but I feel there will be more to her than just her shyness. Cant wait for the rest of her journey 🐺🥰. Thank you Luna Liz ❤️

Well after the way she flaunted herself with Deimos in front of Lumina I kind of don’t pitty Theia, but then the part where Phobos said those demeaning things to Theia I feel sorry for her there, but still doesn’t excuse her causing Lumina to feel the way she did at the time

sara moore

I am so excited for them to talk!!! it’s easy to see that they are both thinking the worse about each other’s feelings ! I cannot wait to see Theia realize the good she is doing for her pack. I need her wolf to speak their language to help her along. lol

Angelica Monteon

such a great story!

I find it so confusing. I get that it is fantasy and a made-up period of time but I don’t understand why they ride horses to get places, still milk by hand nor do they have heat and yet, they have trucks and cars. lol! It’s driving me crazy!

I really like the style of this book. Even though I am looking forward to more chapters, I appreciate the quality of the writing.

Trisha Reynolds

why didn’t she tell him how the females are treating her and why hasn’t he marked her. I cry every chapter for her and my hatred remains for Phobos. I think she needs to go home. they are not going to treat her good while they are gone. this is not love and I’d rather remain single only than have a mate like that. I truely don’t understand him. god you writing is so good

Susan Pearson

seriously... I cant get enough of this book

Missy

I’m still convince that Phobos and Moira are more than friends 😁

I love to reread chapters. love the book. thank you so much

I’ve been SO excited to get a glimpse of Phobos’s pack and see what they would be like. I think it’s definitely shown why his behaviours have changed with Theia as he’s been living such a different way of life among them. Can’t wait to read more!

LRWood

I don’t think he took her virginity. I think he was about to, but Theia told him to just do it and she would lay still.

Jordan Retzer

him and his pack reminds me of Khal Drogo from Game of Thrones!

Aw! Phobos is warming up to her! I think he’s trying to get her not to be scared of him! Phobos to me seems very private, maybe not to much for PDA. Drakho is very kind to her as well. I have a feeling he will be her support there.

Missy

waiting for updates 😊

Carol Dionne

🤪..This is me every time I check for an update 😂

Ok. So I get it. His pack has been waiting years for there Luna to the point where they had to tell him ok it’s time. They want there heir. But this is where communication comes in on Phebos part. Talk to her and let her know what’s about to happen and why. Help her understand! This is definitely not how her first time should be. Oh hell naw, he tried it! Bluntly called her a hoe. Disrespectful ass! If I was Theia we would have been fighting! Naw stay your disrespectful ass away! 🙅🏾‍♀️

BexyCL

When he Phobos said those words, it was like a shot to the heart Luna Liz, I won’t even try to deny my pain. 😭

BexyCL

Luna Liz, I have tears in my eyes! Phobos was just…far too cute this chapter. He still has a long way too go but this make sure knows how too make a female all warm and fuzzy inside. 🥰

Christie Schaapveld

I love this book so far! thank u! can't wait to read some more!

please keep writing Liz, I followed Deimos’ story all the way and will follow Phobos and can’t wait to see if you write 1 for Cronus!!!

Shona Collins

please keep writing this is the highlight of my week I'm so excited to read this book all the way to the end

Here is what I want to know more about…..how did he figure out such a young child was his mate. Yes you state he was special and his wolf developed earlier. I’d love to read the scene. Was it at an Alpha banquet or party? I’d love to know how his breath hitched and instantly wanted to follow the little heart breaker around!

Roberta Schumacher

keep writing the story is so worth the $

Carol Dionne

Luna Liz is there somewhere else I can view the nee cover for the book? I still have the old one.

I am up to no good

ugh I wish this was completed. I want to read all of it in one sitting. I’m obsessed with your writing and can not wait for the next update.

I absolutely love your rules! yoy ho Luna Liz!!

Obsesssed with Phobos 💗💗 Thank you Lims Liz your chapters are everything!!! Last weeks surprise update made my week 😃

Ok, Thiea so you got a little freak in you? 😂 It went 0-100 real quick. From them riding on a horse to him jacking off and filling her up 😩🔥

Saydi Hunter

@ Luna Liz I will continue to read it regardless!! Keep going the way you intended!

hold on..... is the alphas Virginia tribute the book i need to read b4 this or after.... I nvr read it oh no

sara moore

I hope Moria is not bad . I see her as we saw Theia in the last book. I hope she becomes one of Theias favorite females.

I like Theia so much. Lumina was supposed to be badass Alpha but was so weak and submissive. Theia despite being pampered princess, much younger than Phobos, experiencing cultural shock, left in the dark about daily events, still stands up for herself to an entire pack of savages AND to their beast Alpha. Please keep Theia as strong.

Elizabeth Karr

This book is just as addictive as the 1st one.

I think much of Theia's misunderstanding comes from the lack of communication. Drakho gives explains when he's around but he's not around Theia much. Plus it's almost like she refuses because the pack isn't ideal or what she's use to. She's a bit unaccepting.

Sydney Smelko

Can we please get an update??!! Just a few chapters..please!! I can't wait to see how things change, and will Phobos finally tell Theia why Moira is "important" to him...

Cheyenne Goodrow

This is one of my absolute favorites!