Her Forbidden Alpha Comments

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    Whhhhhat?! Every chapter always leaves me on the edge of my seat!

    09/04/2023 08:40

  • Do Hank and Fiona have any other siblings? I kind of feel sorry for there parents.

    09/04/2023 08:39

  • This is torture. I need more.

    09/04/2023 08:39

  • omg what's happening to red?! is b/c of the mark😱

    09/04/2023 08:39

  • Stupid HankπŸ™„ it's like he want to die 🀣🀣🀣🀣

    09/04/2023 08:39

  • Hernandez Giuliana

    God woman you are killing me here!! they were reallly good and now is all broken 😩

    09/04/2023 08:39

  • NurseAimz18

    oh my, he just admitted how he feels. If they are true mates I wonder how that will work with the parents? I wonder how the sister feels about this? I have a lot of questions and don’t want to ruin it but I am ready for another update. LOL

    09/04/2023 08:38

  • 🎡into the thick of it🎢 πŸ˜‹πŸ˜†

    09/04/2023 08:38

  • Trisha Reynolds

    please let the cat out of the bag. dad should catch on and I hope she will accept his help

    09/04/2023 08:38

  • Vesna MatiΔ‡

    Happy birthday, dear author!! ⚘πŸ₯‚πŸŽ‚ Another great chapter! I love that Elijah is honest all the time. The best way to go about their situation is to be honest, at least when people already saw them.

    09/04/2023 08:38

  • Well that chapter sucked πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜­β€¦miracles can happen though right?! maybe not lol.

    09/04/2023 08:38

  • Trisha Reynolds

    yes it’s out but oh dear Scarlett what do you have planned.

    09/04/2023 08:38

  • Michelle Buckingham

    ooo!! Did Hank finally over step?!

    09/04/2023 08:38

  • BYE FIONA!!!

    09/04/2023 08:38

  • Really. That cliffhanger wasnt nice. I should have known by the way the chapter was dragging😒

    09/04/2023 08:37

  • they should make the defective child his mate since he has so much to say

    09/04/2023 08:37

  • Trisha Reynolds

    nooooooooo

    09/04/2023 08:37

  • ❀❀❀ Patiently waiting to see what happens πŸ₯°πŸ₯° Love this story and check daily

    09/04/2023 08:37

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    I was so excited for him to remove the mark! 😍

    09/04/2023 08:37

  • Trisha Reynolds

    when is the next update?

    09/04/2023 08:36

  • ooooooooo how else is at the edges of their seat bouncing up and down screaming ooooooooohhhhhh shots about to go downπŸ€£πŸ˜‚πŸ€ͺπŸ–€β€

    09/04/2023 08:36

  • Trisha Reynolds

    oh snap that was epic. now let the blood moon rise and bring my favorite lovers back together

    09/04/2023 08:36

  • Jessica Miller

    awe...that is so sad

    09/04/2023 08:36

  • Michelle Buckingham

    I'm glad your book got signed! We'll deserved ❀

    09/04/2023 08:36

  • Moonlight Muse

    A QUESTION FOR MY READERS: What song reminds you of Elijah and Scarlett’s relationship? I wanted to promote my story, but needed a good song to go with it! Thankyou in advance! πŸ–€β€πŸ€

    09/04/2023 08:36

  • EMC

    did Fiona sell them out? I feel like she did…

    09/04/2023 08:36

  • thank goddess for the old lady

    09/04/2023 08:36

  • What's it gonna take for Fiona to get it? Like does he have be balls deep in front of her for her to understandπŸ‘πŸ» heπŸ‘πŸ» don't πŸ‘πŸ»want πŸ‘πŸ»you πŸ‘πŸ»no more πŸ‘πŸ»Move on. (sassy finger snapping) 🀣

    09/04/2023 08:36

  • Nusrat Hussain

    Hi there this was an amazing story to read. Thank you. Where can I read the second one and what is it called? please. xx

    09/04/2023 08:35

  • Jessica Miller

    so i originally was like noooo! now I'm like this has to b some sort of trick. like maybe to do with her hot flashes. maybe her dad has some witches working a spell through the mate mark???

    09/04/2023 08:35

  • I like that the omega woman was able to help them get understanding and they were able to move forward. Wonder what happened to the last head omega though...πŸ€”

    09/04/2023 08:35

  • What a asshat! How dare he do that to his own daughter?! oohhh I can't wait until he gets what's coming for him!! love this story, My jaw dropped when it left me on a hip hangerπŸ˜… flash back please. Add more gasoline to the fire of fans that already want to jump into this story and rip him a new oneπŸ˜‚

    09/04/2023 08:35

  • Jessica Miller

    πŸ’˜ πŸ’˜ πŸ’˜ can't wait for blood moon so Jackson will b forced to eat his words n additute

    09/04/2023 08:35

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    SHE SAID WHAT NEEDED TO BE SAID! 😁😍🀩

    09/04/2023 08:35

  • β˜† Anita R β˜†

    I don't understand how Elijah didn't smell the guy sleeping under the tree

    09/04/2023 08:35

  • I cannot wait for the next chapter this one was good

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • Cynthy Babie

    Next chapter please. I'm literally checking every hour. I'm so addicted to the story.

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    Elijah doesn't deserve the hurt. He didn't do what she is thinking!

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • You sure know how to tell a story! Damn I feel so bad for Elijah he stayed strong and I kinda wondered why he didn't just use his alpha voice to a stop to them or idk if it mean for me to say but kinda just brake an arm or kill them.. is that wrong for me to say? 😢 Either way I love this story. I love how it keeps you on your toesπŸ€—πŸ–€πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • Michelle Buckingham

    Thank you so much for a wonderful read - your story was strong until the end and kept me hooked the entire time. I loved the daily updates as it gave me something to look forward to. Can't wait for the next part! But until then I'm going to binge read His Cage Princess as I got behind on some of the chapters!

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • there's gonna b a book 2?!?!?

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • I think Liam will b her mate

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    I hope there is more!

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • Alex

    I’m confused here, is he dancing with his sister Angela or Scarlet? πŸ€”

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • NurseAimz18

    Ready for the Blood Moon. I think Jackson is upset because deep down he knows they may be mates and he is in the wrong and not his son. Elijah has grown a lot and his dad knows that Scarlett is good for him.

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • Trisha Reynolds

    yes please let them be true mates loving the chemistry and she deserves true love

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • Hernandez Giuliana

    amazing history!! you are so talented!! Please , Please they have to find out they are mates!! and they need to kick Vincent ass!!

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • Go Elijah! I'm so happy she gets to see how much he needs her. Can't wait for the blood moon!!!

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • NurseAimz18

    can we get a double update? lol I need to know.

    09/04/2023 08:34

  • Can I get an Amen!! Scarlett you magnificent Queen!!Β°Λ–βœ§β—(⁰▿⁰)β—œβœ§Λ–Β°

    09/04/2023 08:33

  • Woke up to a new chapter and was so excited....now I'm a bawling mess and heartbroken!!!πŸ˜±πŸ˜­πŸ’”

    09/04/2023 08:33

  • Trisha Reynolds

    oh snap

    09/04/2023 08:33

  • So happy!!! Great chapter, as always!πŸ₯°πŸ”₯❀

    09/04/2023 08:33

  • I can’t wait for the next update!

    09/04/2023 08:33

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    Yes! I want to know all the little secrets! what did hank do? Will they bond and spill their secrets on this trip? Will they find they are more than they thought they could ever be? p.s. I dont know what was up with the first paragraph. Something off in it. Otherwise loved the newest addition!

    09/04/2023 08:33

  • ok I take my comment back this chapter was to painful! Liam such a sweetheart I feel so bad for him 😭😭

    09/04/2023 08:33

  • NurseAimz18

    I wonder who was watching them????

    09/04/2023 08:33

  • Great story so far…. can’t wait for more. Really like the characters and the secrecy from their pasts and the almost dual powers. tired of the female protagonist being a scared helpless weakling most of these stories portray. it’s a welcomed strong female lead despite her demons past and present. Applause darling. take care.

    09/04/2023 08:33

  • Yes, yes, yes! That you for the double character release! πŸ€—β€

    09/04/2023 08:33

  • I get so excited when I see that there is a new update for this book. Thank you for trying to post them daily!

    09/04/2023 08:33

  • Jessica Miller

    living this book so vry much! can't wait for updates and am itching for the blood moon to see if they are mates

    09/04/2023 08:32

  • Moonlight Muse

    πŸ“£SMALL COMPETITIONπŸ“£ For a chance to this competition, all you have to do is answer one question: πŸ–€WHO IS THE FEMALE LEAD IN BOOK 2? We all know who the male lead is, so i thought this one will be interesting! Remember take a wild guess, think outside of the box! πŸ–€Those who get it right, I will add thier names in a draw and pull one out. πŸ–€PRIZE: Winner will get to choose a character for book 2 Name, hair & eye colour and if they want this character to know the ML or FL. πŸ₯° πŸ–€(ANSWER MUST BE SENT TO ME BY DM ON INSTAGRAM AT AUTHOR.MUSE)πŸ–€ A lovely friend of mine came up with this idea and i thought it was a good idea and a bit of fun!

    09/04/2023 08:32

  • darn that's one kinda hurt πŸ˜• I feel so bad for Liam πŸ™the dude been in love with her for who knows how long only to get completely blindsided by his best friend who treated her like she was nothing πŸ’” Ok I'm gonna go and cry in the corner for a bit then go back to wishing the best for Scarlett πŸ₯°

    09/04/2023 08:32

  • Trisha Reynolds

    poor girl my heart breaks for her. let the blood moon hurry up and get here lol

    09/04/2023 08:32

  • I'm so happy she's talking about it.. maybe now she'll finally feel less stressed knowing people are planning on helping her in only she let herself be helpedπŸ₯²

    09/04/2023 08:32

  • Heartwarming chapter. My heart breaks for Angela and Liam though. I hope he finds a mate in Zidane's pack when they take over. As for Angela I wonder if she will reject Cassandra. It wouldn't even be homophobic in my opinion, if she doesn't feel it she shouldn't be forced into it.

    09/04/2023 08:32

  • Wow great you are good, this was a awesome looking forward to the next chapter. 😊

    09/04/2023 08:32

  • Indigo you cock block.. 🀣

    09/04/2023 08:32

  • NurseAimz18

    ooooooo this chapter was everything. 😍😍😍😍😍

    09/04/2023 08:32

  • Beyoutiful Gem

    i love this story it’s so different and full of surprises. I will definitely be looking for more stories to read from you

    09/04/2023 08:32

  • T Morris

    β€˜I think Liam is the male lead in book 2.

    09/04/2023 08:32

  • I like pretty much every chapter you post. The writing style is so interesting, it's mostly dialogue and events, almost no descriptions and thoughts. It keeps story so fresh and fast paced. I don't mean this as disrespectful, but may I suggest polishing punctuation and some grammar. Things like the difference between "you're" and "your", or breaking dialogue into proper sentences instead of putting commas. Interesting book and writing otherwise.

    09/04/2023 08:31

  • Michelle Buckingham

    Oh Scarlett! What are you planning now πŸ˜”. Poor girl. Elijah has a lot to prove!

    09/04/2023 08:31

  • I was thinking Liam until this recent chapter, now I totally want Alejandro for Book 2.

    09/04/2023 08:31

  • Rosie

    LOVE it!!!

    09/04/2023 08:31

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    Such an amazing thing hes there and doesnt care about the mark

    09/04/2023 08:31

  • That was a great update looking forward to the next

    09/04/2023 08:31

  • Moonlight Muse

    Announcement: Book 2 Cover and Title is up on my instagram for anyone who is curious! This book will not begin until Her Forbidden Alpha is completed which will be by the end of this month. IG: author.sarah.muse

    09/04/2023 08:31

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    I love that you only gave a little slice of what their passion can be like. I cannot wait to watch their relationship grow and change no matter how this turns out!

    09/04/2023 08:31

  • OMG this book is amazing! I feel so much for our star crossed lovers. They have so much to wage through within their own pack and now add her sadistic father😩 Wonderfully written story, can't wait for updates!!! I read all available chapters overnight lol

    09/04/2023 08:31

  • Beyoutiful Gem

    what a great story, good job author! please don’t separate jakson and jessica, they both have been through a lot the desreve to stay together

    09/04/2023 08:31

  • Who's Liam again? o.O

    09/04/2023 08:31

  • Hernandez Giuliana

    OMG please don’t make them fight with each other .. she already suffer a lot in her life and deserves to be happy with Elijah .

    09/04/2023 08:30

  • shonnalata Lundy

    I'm loving this I would prefer you not add the flashbacks we can see that he's crazy and deranged just by his actions just continue with the bits and pieces like you were doing

    09/04/2023 08:30

  • ❀❀❀

    09/04/2023 08:30

  • Trisha Reynolds

    cliff hanger now I can’t sleep. please update soon and Elijah oh boy

    09/04/2023 08:30

  • More PLEASE!! πŸ€žπŸ™

    09/04/2023 08:29

  • Great update I hope she tells him about Hank and the others

    09/04/2023 08:29

  • oh snap the little sister…

    09/04/2023 08:29

  • Michelle Buckingham

    "Then you're going to have to kiss me...." 🀣 love it! So different from your other story but still soooo good. ❀

    09/04/2023 08:29

  • Matija Ε egmanoviΔ‡

    I saw a few comments about how they want Zidane to be tortured for a long time before dying, but I dissagree. I think the best thing would be to kill him without mercy and without giving him any time to even realise what is going on. Trash like that doesn't deserve a second of time from any of the other characters, even to torture him. He deserves to be killed and forgotten. To a piece of scum who wishes to be a god, that would be the gratest punishment. No grave, no mention of his name, nothing. Only his rotten soul burning in hell.

    09/04/2023 08:28

  • Anita Rotar

    Nooo, come on, noo, I hope Elijah resists them somehow. This is the most frustrating way to end a chapter. God, I hate Scarlets dad so much. Ps. Great job, dear author, I wouldn't have gotten so worked up if it wasn't an amazing book.

    09/04/2023 08:28

  • I hope she gets him off her but I hope Elijah gets to the cave as well. she deserves a knight in shining armor.

    09/04/2023 08:28

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    Oh just enough spice to their bond. I cant wait to hear what she has to say. Or what will happen when they reach town!

    09/04/2023 08:28

  • Trisha Reynolds

    2 more chapters til the blood moon then off with her daddy’s head

    09/04/2023 08:28

  • Great chapter, looking forward to the next.

    09/04/2023 08:28

  • Michelle Buckingham

    I love how perceptive Amelia is! Crafty old lady 🀣.

    09/04/2023 08:28

  • Alex

    Great chapter again, love it… and happy birthday although it’s late wish 😊

    09/04/2023 08:28

  • Tanya Cannon

    no flash back but he better have his ass hand to him in hell

    09/04/2023 08:28
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