Her Forbidden Alpha Comments

  • Johanna Martinez

    a good chapter I I'm glad Elijah confessed his feelings to her

    07/07/2021 23:54

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    Dad messed up if he thought he could come between them.

    07/07/2021 20:56

  • Jessica Miller

    living this book so vry much! can't wait for updates and am itching for the blood moon to see if they are mates

    07/07/2021 20:34

  • Areleen Torres

    He needs to mate and mark her to mess up whatever plans her father has for her!

    07/07/2021 19:12

  • Vesna MatiΔ‡

    I really like Elijah. He may be an ass and a fuckboy, but he knows it and holds himself responsible for his own deeds. He isn't making excuses for his actions and owns up to them. I like it. P.S. Just on a side note, as a (hopefuly) constructive critique. You have been a bit repetitive in a few scenes (Elijah throws Scarlet on a bed, she bounces off and he starts staring at her chest.) I'm not trying to nitpick, I truly love your writing stile, but I wanted to point that out in case you haven't really been aware of it.

    07/07/2021 18:42

  • Hernandez Giuliana

    Amazing how he express his feelings !! Cant wait for them to fully mate !!

    07/07/2021 17:13

  • Johanna Martinez

    thank goddess for the old lady

    07/06/2021 21:33

  • Anita Rotar

    Thank you Old Lady. At least Elijah has a third party to shed some light on the situation. I am wondering why those girls don't have their wolves.

    07/06/2021 17:15

  • Michele Holland

    Man, all that Alpha testosterone. I'm surprised that Scarlett was strong enough not time be to phased by it. But she if all people should have known her father would have been up to something no good. I love the boom boom room. that was crazy to trap an alpha, had drug induce him with the air and then still be able to give him a liquid blue pill. Lol. You are a great writer and I'm so glad I came across this story.

    07/06/2021 10:21

  • Dead Dolly

    She should know what her father is capable of. She’s being stubborn by not listening to Elijah and finding out what really happened.

    07/06/2021 01:51

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    its okay for men to be vulnerable to. I hope hendoesnt give up. Him fighting for her no matter what may just shine through!

    07/05/2021 22:14

  • Johanna Martinez

    I cannot wait for the next chapter this one was good

    07/05/2021 22:05

  • Zombierella DEATH

    You sure know how to tell a story! Damn I feel so bad for Elijah he stayed strong and I kinda wondered why he didn't just use his alpha voice to a stop to them or idk if it mean for me to say but kinda just brake an arm or kill them.. is that wrong for me to say? 😢 Either way I love this story. I love how it keeps you on your toesπŸ€—πŸ–€πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»

    07/05/2021 21:27

  • Anita Rotar

    I'm just relived that our boy Elijah resisted till the end. He shows character growth and consistecy in only a few chapters. I wish Scarlet would just let him explain what happened, and for him to actually put to words what went down.

    07/05/2021 17:34

  • Michelle Buckingham

    I actually feel bad for him! They're so head over heels for each other. very well written Sarah. Loving the story ❀

    07/05/2021 17:00

  • Johanna Martinez

    great new update can't wait for next chapter can't wait for them to figure out their mates

    07/05/2021 16:09

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    Don't go alone! Ahhhhh! Run get out of there now!

    07/05/2021 00:23

  • Areleen Torres

    Ughhhh no way I would have trusted for either of them to go anywhere alone!!!

    07/04/2021 19:36

  • Anita Rotar

    Nooo, come on, noo, I hope Elijah resists them somehow. This is the most frustrating way to end a chapter. God, I hate Scarlets dad so much. Ps. Great job, dear author, I wouldn't have gotten so worked up if it wasn't an amazing book.

    07/04/2021 18:24

  • NurseAimz18

    Enjoying the story.

    07/04/2021 00:34

  • Michelle Buckingham

    Ooo! Show down! So glad they're together visiting daddy dearest.

    07/04/2021 00:26

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    Great chapter! The testosterone is real. I look forward to learning what dear old dad has to say.

    07/04/2021 00:24

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    I look forward to hearing about the meeting with her father!

    07/03/2021 04:25

  • Johanna Martinez

    Wow great you are good, this was a awesome looking forward to the next chapter. 😊

    07/02/2021 18:07

  • Reader-270304

    loving the story!

    07/02/2021 01:01

  • Hernandez Giuliana

    Keep the good work !! you are very talent writer

    07/01/2021 17:16

  • Dead Dolly

    Loved this last chapter! Hopefully, it won’t be too much longer until they finally give in to each other. πŸ˜‰

    07/01/2021 16:36

  • Johanna Martinez

    well let's see how far this leads, good chapter

    06/30/2021 22:05

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    Aww the human was such a sweetheart. im sorry to hear how she lost him. it definitely explains why she could have such a sudden attraction to the soon to be alpha.

    06/30/2021 21:34

  • Manda TopiΔ‡

    I like the slower pace of their relationship so much. It's refresing to read about characters actualy acting like real people and taking their time to know eachother before acting on their attraction. I love your book so much and can't wait to read more!

    06/30/2021 09:09

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    Oh just enough spice to their bond. I cant wait to hear what she has to say. Or what will happen when they reach town!

    06/29/2021 21:36

  • Johanna Martinez

    great new update nice little curve ball with her first boyfriend being a human

    06/29/2021 14:05

  • Adrienne Carter

    I never go for stories like this but after reading your other story, I knew I had to take a chance! I’ve catch myself checking everyday. I can’t wait to see what happens between the two of them.

    06/29/2021 11:54

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    Yes! I want to know all the little secrets! what did hank do? Will they bond and spill their secrets on this trip? Will they find they are more than they thought they could ever be? p.s. I dont know what was up with the first paragraph. Something off in it. Otherwise loved the newest addition!

    06/29/2021 03:46

  • Moonlight Muse

    I realised i posted my unedited version of chapter 11 first πŸ₯΄ sorry had less sleep last night! but ive corrected it now πŸ€¦πŸ»β€β™€οΈ

    06/28/2021 22:10

  • Ana Rotar

    I love how it's not just wham-bam the two of them are having sex.There is solid world building, conflicts, mistery, etc. And this is one of the few books on this platform where a strong female lead actually acts like a strong woman and is not a pushover when it comes to the male lead. I really hope the rest of the book is as good as it's begining. 😊

    06/28/2021 13:21

  • Eunice d

    I love the story!! In really curious about the mystery and Amelia’s dream now too! it’s a really good story that is definitely pulling me in!

    06/28/2021 01:35

  • Sharla Johnson

    I am looking forward to seeing what happens during the road trip πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

    06/27/2021 22:50

  • Michele Holland

    I love that you comment to your readers. To me it makes the story more interesting. I love Scarlett. She is not weak. I'd love to see her kick Hank's butt to show him she's a force not to b reckoned with.

    06/27/2021 21:58

  • Vesna MatiΔ‡

    Nice update. I already love Amelias character, she reminds me of my own grandma. I was just wondering, how can we wote for this book in the competition?

    06/27/2021 20:53

  • Johanna Martinez

    Great update I hope she tells him about Hank and the others

    06/27/2021 15:16

  • Alex

    I’m confused here, is he dancing with his sister Angela or Scarlet? πŸ€”

    06/27/2021 15:14

  • Nadima Zen

    Great story so far…. can’t wait for more. Really like the characters and the secrecy from their pasts and the almost dual powers. tired of the female protagonist being a scared helpless weakling most of these stories portray. it’s a welcomed strong female lead despite her demons past and present. Applause darling. take care.

    06/27/2021 09:08

  • Dead Dolly

    I get so excited when I see that there is a new update for this book. Thank you for trying to post them daily!

    06/27/2021 08:02

  • Pam Peacy

    a fish sandwich is not a burger, it is a sandwich

    06/26/2021 23:53

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    I love that you only gave a little slice of what their passion can be like. I cannot wait to watch their relationship grow and change no matter how this turns out!

    06/26/2021 21:55

  • Vesna MatiΔ‡

    I can't belive this is your first book! You had me completly invested within the first 4 chapters. If the whole book is as good as its begining, it might easily become one of my favourites. I can't wait to read more πŸ˜€

    06/26/2021 16:22

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    I get so absorbed!

    06/25/2021 22:32

  • Hernandez Giuliana

    OmG can’t wait ! be the blood moon comes soon !!

    06/25/2021 12:48

  • Sharla Johnson

    ❀❀❀

    06/24/2021 22:39

  • Hernandez Giuliana

    love the chapter ! how he is gonna know she is his mate ? I can’t wait for that moment

    06/24/2021 19:56

  • Johanna Martinez

    Great chapter, looking forward to the next.

    06/24/2021 18:11

  • Dead Dolly

    I can’t wait for the next update!

    06/24/2021 15:53

  • Hernandez Giuliana

    Love your story!!

    06/24/2021 02:48

  • Michelle Buckingham

    "Then you're going to have to kiss me...." 🀣 love it! So different from your other story but still soooo good. ❀

    06/24/2021 01:53

  • Holly Cannon

    love it, already really hot!

    06/23/2021 21:41

  • Sharla Johnson

    ahhh! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    06/23/2021 21:29

  • Alex

    naughty girl piping on hisβ€¦πŸ€­

    06/23/2021 17:17

  • Lindsay Hoyt

    love the story so far!!! πŸ˜†

    06/23/2021 16:39

  • Johanna Martinez

    Great chapter.

    06/23/2021 13:58

  • Jessica Miller

    this is a really great story i am loving it so far. cant wait for updates πŸ˜˜πŸ’•

    06/23/2021 13:45

  • Cheyenne Goodrow

    This is great so far! I added this and look forward to the updates! Keep up the great work!

    06/23/2021 06:36

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    06/22/2021 18:40

  • Johanna Martinez

    Good chapter I am loving the story

    06/22/2021 18:26

  • Sharla Johnson

    Love the story so far. Can't wait to read more :)

    06/22/2021 12:43

  • Johanna Martinez

    loving the story can't wait for your next update

    06/22/2021 05:55

  • Michele Holland

    This is a great story. I can't wait to read more chapters.

    06/21/2021 14:11

  • Perrti Ven Bills

    interesting definitely adding it to my library

    06/21/2021 09:21

  • Alex

    It’s in my library now...I love your stories ☺️

    06/20/2021 18:33

  • Streeter Shaquita

    need a new chapter like yesterday

    06/20/2021 14:01
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