Her Forbidden Alpha Comments
Trisha Reynolds
Are you kidding me you cannot leave me on the edge like that I need another update and they really need to rekindle their romance
08/01/2021 19:31Alex
I love this storyβ¦very well writtenβ¦you always keep me on edgeβ¦but also you making your points straightπ
08/01/2021 13:38Beyoutiful Gem
what a great story, good job author! please donβt separate jakson and jessica, they both have been through a lot the desreve to stay together
08/01/2021 04:01Cheyenne Goodrow
Elijah doesn't deserve the hurt. He didn't do what she is thinking!
07/31/2021 22:29NurseAimz18
I still think they are mates. Of they are there is nothing his dad can do.
07/31/2021 21:18Trisha Reynolds
yes itβs out but oh dear Scarlett what do you have planned.
07/31/2021 20:13Michelle Buckingham
Oh Scarlett! What are you planning now π. Poor girl. Elijah has a lot to prove!
07/31/2021 17:37Krystal Morgan
omg im loving the constant updates!! I read super fast so I have to still wait a bit but not to long here recently. ty soooo much
07/31/2021 16:59Trisha Reynolds
please let the cat out of the bag. dad should catch on and I hope she will accept his help
07/31/2021 01:24Cheyenne Goodrow
Will his dad catch on to what exactly he just said!?!?!
07/30/2021 21:57Sharla Johnson
β€β€β€ Patiently waiting to see what happens π₯°π₯° Love this story and check daily
07/30/2021 21:56Hernandez Giuliana
God woman you are killing me here!! they were reallly good and now is all broken π©
07/29/2021 21:01Trisha Reynolds
I know Scarlett is hurting but she should at least hear Elijah out. nobody should feel like they are alone and the love they have/had was something epic.
07/29/2021 20:50Johanna Martinez
I hope she gets him off her but I hope Elijah gets to the cave as well. she deserves a knight in shining armor.
07/29/2021 19:59Kim
I had to take a break from this app so I had some chapters to binge read! I was so excited to see so many new characters from you!!! Just read chapter 36 and YES would love to have a sequel!!
07/29/2021 16:57lolliedear
This is why I hate starting ongoing stories! I canβt binge the really good ones. π
07/29/2021 02:43Michelle Buckingham
Oh dear.... this could get messy!!!
07/29/2021 00:47Johanna Martinez
That was a great update looking forward to the next
07/28/2021 23:47Cheyenne Goodrow
That chapter was left thanking like the door to the cottage π€£ Cant wait for tomorrow's chapter!
07/28/2021 22:15Trisha Reynolds
holy cliffhanger donβt let that dirt bag hank by her
07/28/2021 19:26NurseAimz18
I hope he kills Hank. I know it is that tool. oh my this cliff hanger.
07/28/2021 18:07FiestyOne
absolutely loving this book! great job with character development and the storyline π looking forward to reading more
07/28/2021 08:59Cheyenne Goodrow
Sometimes older women just have a sense about things π
07/28/2021 05:12Zombierella DEATH
ππ»ββοΈππ»ππ»ββοΈππ»π€£π€ she is good π
07/28/2021 01:16Trisha Reynolds
poor girl my heart breaks for her. let the blood moon hurry up and get here lol
07/27/2021 21:34Hernandez Giuliana
OMG please donβt make them fight with each other .. she already suffer a lot in her life and deserves to be happy with Elijah .
07/27/2021 17:53Cheyenne Goodrow
This is the book I wish I could binge read all night!
07/27/2021 06:49Zombierella DEATH
ooohhh Elijah you in trouble π¬π¬
07/27/2021 03:06Trisha Reynolds
cliff hanger now I canβt sleep. please update soon and Elijah oh boy
07/27/2021 02:40Jessica Miller
so i originally was like noooo! now I'm like this has to b some sort of trick. like maybe to do with her hot flashes. maybe her dad has some witches working a spell through the mate mark???
07/27/2021 02:05EMC
oh no Elijah... hope ur taking shirt to put it on her so she is not almost naked in front of u
07/26/2021 20:02Alex
Go on Elijah clever alpha love it π
07/26/2021 19:23NurseAimz18
I feel some type of way about Fiona. She is a sneaky bitch. Elijah needs to stay away from her she is no good.
07/26/2021 18:58Anna Yocum
This is easily the best quality book I am reading currently on these apps. Characters and events are so clear but at the same time there is no endless unnecessary descriptions. Thank you for frequent updates, I look forward to it every day.
07/26/2021 12:54Cheyenne Goodrow
What happened? Will they all still go out together?
07/26/2021 07:56Cheyenne Goodrow
Yes to the sequel!
07/26/2021 07:44Zombierella DEATH
omg what's happening to red?! is b/c of the markπ±
07/26/2021 01:36Michelle Buckingham
ooo!! Did Hank finally over step?!
07/25/2021 14:13Michelle Buckingham
I love how perceptive Amelia is! Crafty old lady π€£.
07/25/2021 13:59NurseAimz18
I wonder who was watching them????
07/25/2021 13:37Zombierella DEATH
Who's Liam again? o.O
07/24/2021 07:24Michelle Buckingham
omg! Hank is just a piece of work! As if Scarlett doesn't have enough on her plate as it is!
07/23/2021 14:04Zombierella DEATH
Stupid Hankπ it's like he want to die π€£π€£π€£π€£
07/23/2021 08:40Cheyenne Goodrow
It feels like the world is always going against reds happiness.
07/22/2021 23:21β Anita R β
I don't understand how Elijah didn't smell the guy sleeping under the tree
07/22/2021 19:44Trisha Reynolds
I know itβs that one girls brother I wanna say itβs the Alphas Beta heβs going to be big trouble how heβs going to blackmail Scarlet now hopefully we can fast forward to the blood moon and find out
07/22/2021 19:01Michelle Buckingham
I like how straight forward he is with her.... will be interesting to see what her reaction is!
07/22/2021 13:41Cheyenne Goodrow
Yes I am so glad he told someone!
07/22/2021 00:37Trisha Reynolds
yes please let them be true mates loving the chemistry and she deserves true love
07/21/2021 20:43NurseAimz18
oh my, he just admitted how he feels. If they are true mates I wonder how that will work with the parents? I wonder how the sister feels about this? I have a lot of questions and donβt want to ruin it but I am ready for another update. LOL
07/21/2021 19:35Vesna MatiΔ
Happy birthday, dear author!! βπ₯π Another great chapter! I love that Elijah is honest all the time. The best way to go about their situation is to be honest, at least when people already saw them.
07/21/2021 18:16Alex
Great chapter again, love itβ¦ and happy birthday although itβs late wish π
07/21/2021 17:13Zombierella DEATH
Happy belated birthday ππ₯³
07/20/2021 22:23Zombierella DEATH
Indigo you cock block.. π€£
07/20/2021 22:23Lindsay Hoyt
oh snap the little sisterβ¦
07/20/2021 19:20Cheyenne Goodrow
π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£ Power to her for being the first to find out their dirty little secret
07/20/2021 00:26Michelle Buckingham
Oh dear!! Well no going back now! π€£. Happy Birthday! β€
07/19/2021 23:58Trisha Reynolds
oh snap cats out of the bag.
07/19/2021 21:49NurseAimz18
Happy early birthday. Enjoy your day.
07/19/2021 21:15Cheyenne Goodrow
Some people are just stubborn. Its not always easy to let someone in to help when you have been hurt. Being marked seems more intense than a marriage. To find out your parents might be be tied in such a way... making you more realistically siblings... Its got to wreak havoc on Elijah's emotions. What can he do now?
07/19/2021 07:05Trisha Reynolds
I love the chemistry between them. Why is elijah so hell bent about the marking? Looking forward to the next update
07/18/2021 19:55Trisha Reynolds
she should have let her mother know if the abuse and Iβm hoping the full moon will show they are mates. boy that will really get everyoneβs knickers in a bunch
07/17/2021 23:01Trisha Reynolds
this book is amazing. I wish there was a way for them to know they are truely mates because deep inside they know. Iβm loving this story canβt wait for more
07/16/2021 15:16Cheyenne Goodrow
The truth is going to come to light eventually. They cannot hide it forever no matter how much it will be nice to stay blissful in their embraces. The trials they face are going to make them stronger! I never want to put this book down thank you!
07/16/2021 06:17Cheyenne Goodrow
Such an amazing thing hes there and doesnt care about the mark
07/15/2021 04:52Jessica Miller
i really wish his wolf would just lose control n mark her. i know they r mates n it would make her father's mark disappear
07/14/2021 19:14NurseAimz18
I am so upset at her father. Can they do a hand cut to get the link back where she becomes part of Elijahs pack and denounce her dads pack.
07/14/2021 18:07Kim
OMG this book is amazing! I feel so much for our star crossed lovers. They have so much to wage through within their own pack and now add her sadistic fatherπ© Wonderfully written story, can't wait for updates!!! I read all available chapters overnight lol
07/14/2021 17:10Hernandez Giuliana
Please donβt make it longer for them to find they are mates . Thanks
07/14/2021 16:50Michelle Buckingham
I'm glad your book got signed! We'll deserved β€
07/14/2021 01:14Cynthy Babie
why are the chapters suddenly locked?
07/13/2021 18:22Hernandez Giuliana
amazing history!! you are so talented!! Please , Please they have to find out they are mates!! and they need to kick Vincent ass!!
07/13/2021 17:22NurseAimz18
All I can say is come on Blood moon.
07/13/2021 17:12Moonlight Muse
A QUESTION FOR MY READERS: What song reminds you of Elijah and Scarlettβs relationship? I wanted to promote my story, but needed a good song to go with it! Thankyou in advance! π€β€π€
07/12/2021 22:34Cheyenne Goodrow
I am glad you put the warning in there. I have to say that was so brutal for such a little girl. I dont always comment but I promise I am always here everyday to read the next chapter! I hope Elijah is able to replace it with his own mark and that she will have an incredible bond with him!
07/12/2021 21:53Zombierella DEATH
wow Sarah you weren't joking when you said I was gonna hate him on a whole another level... damn... are you ok after writing this chapter?
07/12/2021 20:16Claudine Gaffar
just love this story! ladies let's vote! 2 chapters a day!!ππππ.......πme pls!
07/12/2021 20:13Jessica Miller
cruel heartless POS deserves to hv his heart riped out n shoved down his throat
07/12/2021 19:22Michelle Buckingham
Oh man! Hoping Scarlet is able to butcher the bas@$@d! He deserves so much worse but a quick death I'd just safer... less opportunity for him to escape. Well written π
07/12/2021 17:06Matija Ε egmanoviΔ
I saw a few comments about how they want Zidane to be tortured for a long time before dying, but I dissagree. I think the best thing would be to kill him without mercy and without giving him any time to even realise what is going on. Trash like that doesn't deserve a second of time from any of the other characters, even to torture him. He deserves to be killed and forgotten. To a piece of scum who wishes to be a god, that would be the gratest punishment. No grave, no mention of his name, nothing. Only his rotten soul burning in hell.
07/12/2021 16:44Trisha Reynolds
when is the next update?
07/12/2021 12:57Trisha Reynolds
flashbacks are good just not after a cliffhanger chapter lol
07/12/2021 06:23Tanya Cannon
no flash back but he better have his ass hand to him in hell
07/12/2021 03:29Zombierella DEATH
What a asshat! How dare he do that to his own daughter?! oohhh I can't wait until he gets what's coming for him!! love this story, My jaw dropped when it left me on a hip hangerπ flash back please. Add more gasoline to the fire of fans that already want to jump into this story and rip him a new oneπ
07/11/2021 22:39shonnalata Lundy
I'm loving this I would prefer you not add the flashbacks we can see that he's crazy and deranged just by his actions just continue with the bits and pieces like you were doing
07/11/2021 22:37Lindsay Hoyt
flashbacks are good too see just how crazy this guy isβ¦π
07/11/2021 21:57Hernandez Giuliana
mmmm I guess Elijah will mark her and that will be when they find out they are mates since she will heal !!
07/11/2021 21:53Allyson Murry
ooo yes do flashbacks!
07/11/2021 19:51Pam Peacy
should be Scarlett not Elijah when referring to removing her mark
07/11/2021 18:01Manda TopiΔ
I kind of had a feeling that he would mark her since it would be the only logical way to force her to listen to him and not kill her wolf and he is deranged enough to go through with it. I'm not mad about the chapter, it is nerve- wrecking but it adds to the quality of the story. I think you should add a chapter about Scarlets past, but put a trigger warning before it so that people can choose to skip it or read it.
07/11/2021 17:53NurseAimz18
How could her own father mark her. I hope the moon goddess burns him with all the fire in hell.
07/11/2021 17:48Reader-270304
wow that was hot!
07/10/2021 23:04Anita Rotar
Oh, I can't wait for them to get the hell out of there. The story gets better and better, I love it!
07/10/2021 18:14Claudine Gaffar
I love this story please update more chapters soooooo!! I need my fix π
07/10/2021 17:14Areleen Torres
Grandmother maybe?
07/09/2021 19:48Nadima Zen
A very good story loving it
07/09/2021 19:07Dead Dolly
They finally made it happen! Such a great chapter.
07/09/2021 18:15Sharla Johnson
I like that the omega woman was able to help them get understanding and they were able to move forward. Wonder what happened to the last head omega though...π€
07/09/2021 12:31NurseAimz18
I think they are mates. She canβt tell because something her dad did when she was young.
07/08/2021 18:56Eunice d
yay!!! they finally gave in and it was beautiful!! Iβm loving the story! initially I thought it would be just sexy but itβs also a really good story! That is also sexy! lol
07/08/2021 17:34