The Alpha's Unknown Heir Comments
Minnie Mouse
OMG! smh and he fell for the trap and left the child outside like what?! I’m so excited for the next update I hope she ends up with Jax. Also just want to say really like the book and always looking forward to the updates 😊
09/04/2023 07:37
Snowflake
I ship Brea and Jax!! I love how he has to work for it n that she doesnt give in as soon as she starts getting attention Love it when the protagonists can hold their ground! Oh and I love this book! Can't wait for the next update!
09/04/2023 07:37hcarp
This story is so good! I can't wait to see how it pans out. I think that Brennan had a good run, but he completely lost me when he left Asher outside by himself to play hide the sausage. I have a feeling both Jax and Brea are going to have words with him in the next few chapters.
09/04/2023 07:37Jazmin Conn
when will next update be out
09/04/2023 07:37Zuleika Boekhoudt
5 years no sex. That's a bit too much. If he's not getting it from you he's getting from somewhere else
09/04/2023 07:37
Eiyah
This chapter was a heavy hitter for a co parent like myself. it’s not always easy to share custody.
09/04/2023 07:36Reader-671139
it looks like Jax might be a decent father but I really don’t like him!!!
09/04/2023 07:36Minnie Mouse
Omg things are starting to take a turn 🤔 such a great job can’t wait to get more updates ☺️
09/04/2023 07:36RaeRae Farris
when will the next update be?
09/04/2023 07:36love this book
09/04/2023 07:35Eiyah
This is sweet. I hope you continue it.
09/04/2023 07:34
Alyssa
I am anxious to see what will happen when she meets up with the pack members, her former tormentors 😱😱
09/04/2023 07:34Amanda Caruana
wow!!! this is SO good
09/04/2023 07:34Reader-671139
I love my girl Brea!!!
09/04/2023 07:33
edisamc2
I’m happy the ya re get to along. hope the parents don’t give her too much trouble ... but glad Jax doesn’t care about their opinion
09/04/2023 07:33josie toparea
Brea is being batch right now, she makes it out Brennons being unreasonable,she's selfish. She's the one who's changed. The love and patience that Brennon is showing her is true, and he's willing to wait for her.But she's pushing him away more and more. I feel so sad 😥 fri Brennon 😢
09/04/2023 07:33Jasmine Hazelbaker
thanks for the update
09/04/2023 07:33
Ellie K
Now Brennon blew it 😤 men.. When the story goes back to Brea's POV it says that she left Asher with Jax, but I guess that's suppose to say Brennon?!? 😉
09/04/2023 07:33
Brittney Allen
this book is not very realistic who is with someone for 5 yes without doing the do...🙄😳
09/04/2023 07:33RaeRae Farris
when's the next update
09/04/2023 07:32
Brea Cheadle
it's my name being in a story for me but it's a good story tho😂🖤💕
09/04/2023 07:32edisamc2
did Jax smell Bree before she turned of age? don’t remember? I hope they do have happy ending and she is his mate
09/04/2023 07:31Ellie K
I believe this is the point I'd smack Brennon in the face 😅 Jeez.. grow up man! This is not how you fight for your woman!
09/04/2023 07:31Minnie Mouse
just started it and omg so good
09/04/2023 07:31Eiyah
I want so badly for her to be with Brennon
09/04/2023 07:31Ellie K
Now I really want the next chapter!! 😱😂
09/04/2023 07:30Really enjoying the book... Jax is right in saying you think weak u will be weak change Brea's mind set and they will work it out, glad to see her training keep it up 😀and then to see the fight between her and Katlyn 👍 👏 please update soon
09/04/2023 07:30
Rainz World
that was short lol
09/04/2023 07:30edisamc2
please let them find him and let her and Jax go back to his pack
09/04/2023 07:29Ellie K
So stubborn!! She's going to get in trouble 😓😅
09/04/2023 07:29Tabitha Nichols
🤦🏼♀️
09/04/2023 07:29Zuleika Boekhoudt
Ugh BRENNON you're such a B****
09/04/2023 07:29Dayummmm. 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
09/04/2023 07:29Reader-671139
Maybe she gets Asher back and then leaves both Jax and Brennon???
09/04/2023 07:28anaj13
Ugh Brennan! I was rooting for your ass, but you had to go and ruin it!! Seriously, at it took was for a girl to smile at you to make you break! Brea is not going to forgive now especially because of his illict activities Asher is missing. Bet you anything they sent her as a distraction. I wonder who took Asher... Jax is going to be mad! Can’t wait for the next update!
09/04/2023 07:28
Giu Castellano
i mean, their kid are still disappeared and their playing couple?!?! Im just confused, where is Asher??
09/04/2023 07:28
EMC
don’t give up on her Jax. fight for her and don’t leave her sight
09/04/2023 07:28Reader-870190
am loving this story but so fustaratrd that it’s a tiny chapter update a few times a week
09/04/2023 07:28edisamc2
I hope Jax comes out of this unharmed ....
09/04/2023 07:28Alyssa
How often does the author update? This looks like a great story but I don’t want to get all hooked on the story and be left hanging lol
09/04/2023 07:28Minnie Mouse
omg so good!!!!
09/04/2023 07:28Tabitha Nichols
easy way out. kill brennon. she still needs to grow a spine
09/04/2023 07:27Reader-671139
Thank you for the chapter. Happy New Year!! Excited for what happens next. I hope Brea rejects Jax officially and shows how much she wants to be with Brennon.
09/04/2023 07:27anaj13
Noooo!! Jax can’t be dead!!! Not now when they working on things and Brea is going to need him the most!! I’m glad Asher is safe!! Why you gotta leave us hanging like that?!
09/04/2023 07:27Reader-671139
Men suck!!! Thank you for the update although I wanted to scream knowing Brennon was going to show his weakness and screw up!!! Seems a little convenient hmm...
09/04/2023 07:27Reader-671139
You go girl!!! Don’t let Jax off too easy!!!
09/04/2023 07:27
Curious
go get yo son girl i got yo back!!!!!
09/04/2023 07:27
Gabby van der Westhuizen
please don't kill Jax she needs him and the kids make him service please I can't stand it 😢 somehow please
09/04/2023 07:27Ellie K
Thanks for the new chapter! Always happy to see one 😁😁
09/04/2023 07:26Eiyah
So good. just caught up and thoroughly loving it
09/04/2023 07:24Curious
daaaaaaamnnnnnnn
09/04/2023 07:24Tammy Hertz
when is the next update to be released
09/04/2023 07:23
Elizabeth Edmondson
I was wondering if the Beta's sister would have any consequences. Seems suspicious she showed up at that moment to distract him from the child.
09/04/2023 07:23hcarp
This story is so good! I can't wait to see how it pans out. I think that Brennan had a good run, but he completely lost me when he left Asher outside by himself to play hide the sausage. I have a feeling both Jax and Brea are going to have words with him in the next few chapters.
09/04/2023 07:23sooo.. I get it. she’s tortured and kind- but real kindness, would definitely not have let her hang onto the man for 5 years. 5. giving him hope with her “I love you” and make-out sessions but never anything more. she gets more benefits out of their relationship and still is stringing him along. she may not have asked him to admit he liked her, and yeah he could’ve broke it off sooner (seeing as he is a man and clearly neither of them are asexual) but he obvi held on because she gave him hope. and the whole time. the whole time. she gave him only a part of herself because she didn’t want to hurt her mate? and that makes her kind? she deserves Jax. they’re both assholes. if a guy did that to a woman he’s all kinds of messed up & owed a few slaps- but she’s... kind? foh. I hope Brennan finds his second chance mate and is happy. I hope Asher is able to maintain at least a good friend/second father figure/mentor relationship with Brennan. he’ll need the balance- seeing how both his parents are assholes and cowards. that’s my opinion on the characters- not the story. obvi the story is good, seeing as how it managed to rile up an opinion as if the people are real.
09/04/2023 07:23
Chassielashes D
the book sounds good so far but I'm very curious will we get more than one chapter update to actually see what really happens
09/04/2023 07:22Ellie K
Well, he is not that bad after all 😁 Love how is all shifts, the one I liked is an idiot, and the idiot is just a lovely idiot 🤣🤣
09/04/2023 07:22
