The Alpha's Unknown Heir Comments

JamieHichew

ugh brennon is being such a jerk n pushing her away! at first I wanted her to be with him since he was with her thru it all. but now he’s being so mean. maybe Jax has changed 🙏🏻🙏🏻

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 1: how did a young girl kill her parents?

Judi Parra

I wish we could've read Jax and Brennans POV to see where they are coming from and how they feel with everything

Reader-616526

loving this so far but wish chapters were abit longer mut have to stop reading for a while so i can come bk and binge read when there’s more updates

Jasmine Hazelbaker

forgot to add... some Jax pov please please please

Nat

do you have an idea when this will be completed?

Nat

do you have an idea when this will be completed?

JamieHichew

enjoying the read so far! 💗

Melissa McWhorter-Asberry

please put Jax and brea back together and have her apologize please

Reader-984174

OMG sooo good I love this story !!!! can’t wait for the update

Lanie Knight

this book is just getting better and better the more I read and now I can’t wait to see what happens next keep up the great work

Ellie K

Oo, Jax must have felt the pain when the rogue kissed Brea!!

EMC

wow.. drama about to happen.how will rest of the family react? how will he deal with viola? how will this end?

Minnie Mouse

yassssss 😍😍😍

love the story !! it’s the first update I look for every day when I get done with work !! cant wait to see the story unfold

THE ROYAL LOUNGE👑

Hey there! So, I’ll be taking a break for a few days because I have a ton of assignments due this week/next week and my exams are approaching quickly, I hope you understand! Thank you!

cmcrobb

I'm so over Imogen and Asher! They are so selfish. They didn't even give their mates a chance. It would be another thing if they at least tried with their mates. The council may not doing anything to them due to favoritism but I hope all the other packs hear about what they are doing and break all alliances with them. they need to know their selfish actions have consequences. Asher is a bad alpha and Imogen will be a terrible Luna...she wasn't destined to be one!

Jess Renee

nice! glad the alpha and beta had the final words to Asher and Imogene. I’m glad more people are telling them they are being selfish dicks. the beta is right he deserves better. now if only V could get her own rejection instead of being strung along and kept away until Asher needs an heir. smh

HeatherM1

Love that Jax has worked to make the pack better. I’m confused as to why Brea hasn’t asked him about her marking him. I’m hooked on this story and hope Brea will step more into herself. can’t wait for the next update!!

Jasmine Hazelbaker

ok I hate Asher and imogen … to the point I don’t even really want to read it. I hope they break up n their mates reject them.

brea pregnant again 🤣🤣. l feel so bad for Asher and Imogen they love each other

kitty5127

how does Ajax know Brennon had sex with his “pack mate”?

terri4388

omg 😳 does he not realize what he was doing could hurt his true mate. he messed up big time

Ellie K

Thanks for the update 😊 Hope his mom will be a bit nicer 🤔 can't wait to see what happens next 😁😁

Sonia Punja

love this book

Sandra Aguayo

I know you have a reason for how Asher and Imogene story doesn’t end well for them but I know you will make this story well worth the end any ideas as to when the next chapter will be in

EMC

update?

Minnie Mouse

yasssss😍😍😍😍

do you have an update schedule??? I'm just curious so I know when to check back.....

why can’t remember who Jax and Brea is cuz I’m lost 😂🤦🏽‍♀️

Chevon Ann

I wish the chapters were a bit longer...and Asher definitely screwed up!

so I’m wondering if Viola feels the mate bond yet?? or is she still not 18 yet? it would be great to have a bit of insight about the twins & Viola at the other pack & what they’ve been doing 😊

I feel sorry for Imogen, ahead feels he is keeping secrets and he is! She has to take her mom advice and figure out whether she wants to know what he is keeping from her or not... Also, I know this is Ashers story but I would like a little bit of the twins story in real time. What is Asher going to do? wait untill Viola feels the bond and he can't keep it a secret anymore?

edisamc2

Brea needs to start trusting him and asking questions she wants answered too... relationship is build on trust , but trust is built overtime and not just given for few good deeds

Reader-092364

I feel so bad for viola. I hope she is not made the villain here. I would love to read her pov’s. I’m so mad at the way Asher and Imogen are acting. I also hope that the beta is her mate.

Jasmin Smith

she probably is, he didn't stay to watch her body be dismembered

fingers crossed beta is her mate and she dumps Asher!! it’s harsh but he deserves it, small hope that her mate won’t accept her either ... can’t wait for next chapter!!!

Reader-121776

Brennon did not cheat . They were on a break.

Justmee

Nope! Who's he going to run into at the bottom of those steps? He was just to happy to be 'done' 😬

EMC

Viola don’t stoop so low. reject his ass.. what’s worse he won’t have an hair... let them be and goddess eill reward you with second chance mate .. hopefully twin brothers lol

Tiffany Bryant

I love this book, it sucks that Jax didn't full blown reject her cause a mate bond is strong at, however, I think been on deserve a second chance mate maybe do Brea can go back to hers 🤷🏽‍♀️

anaj13

Aww Jax! Admit it Brea, you’re falling for him and is not just because of the mate bond! I laughed when he kicks Brennan out of his own office and calls him beta! 😂 I hope they find Asher soon! Jax, keep winning Brea over!! Love this story so much!! ❤️❤️

Andrea Aludden

oh man asher is the worst..and immy too... 🤢

anaj13

I’m loving this book!! I love that Brea is not giving in so easy; she has to make Jax work for it! But, I also love that he is showing another side of him to her and being honest with her. Now, I want to see them working together to their son back and hopefully in the process get closer to each other and fall in love!!

Bonib2

She doesn't do anything but sleep. No job mentioned, nor doing anything for the pack that adopted her, lives in Alpha's house, lives off him, in theory in love with him yet they haven't had sex in over 5 years because she's worried would hurt Alpha Jaxhole or she's not ready yet she thinks he is being unfair? 🤣🤣🤣. Yep, poor Brennon.

Reader-671139

Seems like something is off with Brennon...Maybe Brea looks like his deceased mate? Maybe he needs an heir? Seems like Jax and Brennon knew each other in a previous setting? This book is SO good. Thank you for all the updates!!!

EMC

I love the story ... part of me what’s her to end up with J, even tough he doesn’t deserve her for what he has done.

Melissa McWhorter-Asberry

I want her with Brennon and I think Brennon needs to stop acting stupid and take control and put Jax in his place and she should just reject Jax and co parent with him like they are now

Melissa McWhorter-Asberry

please do not let Jackson be dead she needs him.

Reader-671139

This story is so GOOD!! Can’t wait for the next update!!!

EMC

if Imogen really loved him wouldn’t she notice how depressed and suicidal he is? #teamviola

immortalbeauty18

is there specific days that you update or is it based off when you finish writing?

I hope Viola makes it has painful as possible for Imogen and Asher. the selfishness is astounding. I hope she gets nasty with it as well.

Ellie K

Seeing all those negative comments I felt like saying this: Good job! Keep it up! It is your story, so go with what you have planned for it! Don't let the negativity put you down, a small update is better than none at all 😉 There will always be people complaining, because everyone has a different taste

RaeRae Farris

when's the next update going to be

Amy Sabatino

I hope viola attacks and gets killed and Imogen turns out to be his 2nd chance mate. Asher has loved immy since they were kids there is no way he can mate her sister.

Desray Allison

I love this book so far!!!

Curious

i love that shes falling for jax again Yes he did her wrong but brennon f’d up BAD I could never with him again lmao win her over Jax!

Curious

this book is my favorite Top 2 and it aint 2 😂😂😂😂

Ellie K

Liking the story so far! 😊 Happy I found it, sad I can't binge read it though 🤣

Legend of Gru

I’m just wondering why she never rejected him all this time?

I actually pissed at Brea the most. she should have supported her son waiting for his mate. Then when he wanted to reject her proper so Viola can move forward she was selfish and said not too so he could force her to make him an heir.

Reader-671139

Love this book so far, thank you. It might be MY pessimism but I have never found anyone as perfect as Brennon -wonder if something is behind the scenes that we don’t know about him yet (hmm...)

EMC

don’t push Jax away he is trying to fix things. B on the other hand she needs to stay as far away from her

Daisyona Williams

so this is kind of frustrating I get the matting bond and all that but she to weak and keeps thinking she’s strong. first she can’t be mad at that brennon had sex with someone else while she thinking about her mate and her mate has her heart she knew from the start. I understand her mate threatened to take her son forever but a real mother regardless mate or not omega or alpha would throw down and still reject his ass. I mean the book cool but she been weak sauce from the beginning and it just continues on its kind of really frustrating to keep reading know she going to cry and go back to the abuse

Eiyah

oh man my heart.

Brea has amazing deflecting skill, and everything is about me complex. she’s thick with it

l don’t like Viola at all l hope she doesn’t get Asher. She doesn’t deserve him mate or not

Tabitha Nichols

I’m confused... this seems to be a 2nd book? why didn’t the 1st book end and sequel begin? plus the sequel is another weak main character

EMC

drama is about to start.. feel bad for viola and Imogen.. and Asher this is all on him. he could have been better person and confess.. 7 years... he deserves everything coming his way .. still feel like Imogen will forgive him , she’s blinded by their love

soo the mate bond has no effect on him at all? so he needs to just reject her. I really am starting to hate him.

GoddessNike

I am loving this story. I just hope she doesn’t take Jax back. She should reject him and stay with Brennon

Jennifer Wilson-Stoner

loving it so far!! Brennan fan😊

edisamc2

oh so sad. I wonder who his mate is? how will he act

Lanie Knight

I have a feeling that Brea has an inner strength that is about to come out please keep the chapters coming I can’t wait to read more

Terri

no I think it's from her turning brennon down all the time for sex but sleeping with him.

Rainz World

I am sorry you are sick hope you feel better soon... thanks for the update

Reader-671139

wow, thank you for the update. I understand Brea is an emotional wreck but I feel like Jax needs to be a little understanding that her world has been turned upside down since he showed up. Sometimes you just need to suck it up, put your own needs aside and support your partner. Love this story. Thank you!!!!

Marquita H

I understand that Brea is pregnant but she is really childish. She hated it that he treated her bad and now she feels like a better person to do it to him? Not to mention you want to put your unborn child at risk going after a very angry trained rogue female alpha, yeah not bright at all.

Marquita H

Thenk you for updating even being extremely sick. I hope you get better

Reader-671139

Wow!! Sucha a great cliffhanger. Thank you for the update!!

Ellie K

I knew it!! Sort of happy and sad now though.. 😢

Ellie K

omg Brea 😓😓 that's not the way to go!! Thanks for the update!! 😊

Tabitha Nichols

good for you Brennon! pointing out the obvious

Tabitha Nichols

ummm did you forget you have a missing child? or are you horny to think straight with your weak a@@.

so far the story is good but it would be great to have more than 1 chapter updates that take a few minutes to read

THE ROYAL LOUNGE👑

Hey guys! I'm not sure when I'll be able to update because I have been really sick lately and I am currently in the hospital on admission

edisamc2

it’s happy to know she has her baby boy back. part of her felt like that was goodby with and that’s why she told him she was pregnant . Breanne is dead

Reader-835461

like the story but haven’t read in 3-4 days and only one chapter has been added. quite frustrating. think I will have to stop reading.

Minnie Mouse

😱😱😱

JamieHichew

oh my gosh!!! so good!!!!

Mrs.Coffee Lover

well, I’ll read this bad boy when it’s finished I can’t stand it when it’s ongoing because I hate cliff hangers lol

Reader-935715

I had to stop reading it. She got on my nerves.

Minnie Mouse

omg so good l! I’m so torn I think she should end up with Jax but brennon deserves to be happy too!

Readjusts Crown

well, the comments have discouraged me tbh seemed nice but oh well back to Disenchantment

Videtta Rhodes

I like this book however Brea should not be so WEAK....after having her baby and being with Brennen she should have gotten some guts and self respect....not sure if I'm gonna finish this book

Minnie Mouse

🤔 I think there is more to Brennon then we are getting no beta and now that Jax is in the picture giving up on Brea...

Marquita H

Why is Brea displayed so weak. I know omegas are last on the respected position but it just that a state on position. All she does is cry and whine, treats others poorly that treated her with care and concern. It’s like she likes to be mis-used. not really feeling that.

anaj13

I’m liking this story so much! I would like if we got both Jax and Brennon perspectives to read their thoughts too. I don’t want Brea to forgive Jax so easily, she has to make him work for her forgiveness. Even if it is true that he went looking for her and was depressed that she was gone he still slept with other women knowing that she could feel the pain because they haven’t properly rejected each other! Now, I think there is more to Brennon. I agree with one of the comments 5 years without sex, he must be getting it somewhere else because he even said that he has needs. I have a feeling that he’s not as sweet and kind as he being portrayed, hopefully I am wrong! Can’t wait for the next update!!

J C

I'm gonna try this story, I hope im not disappointed by her returning to that asshole that rejected her, I hate when people are that weak.