The Alpha's Unknown Heir Comments

  • terri4388

    omg 😳 does he not realize what he was doing could hurt his true mate. he messed up big time

    04/01/2021 14:24

  • THE ROYAL LOUNGE👑

    Hey guys! I really cant tell what's been happening to me lately but I've been in and out of the hospital like it's my second house. I really wanted to update today and yesterday but once again I've been very ill🤦‍♀️ I will try to update sometime today though. Thank you!

    04/01/2021 00:49

  • Kim Dunlop

    #32 am I the only one wanting to know what jax did in the 5 yrs that brea was gone? Did he actually look for her?

    03/31/2021 13:27

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    ohmygosh whynsoes.Imogen wanna talk???

    03/31/2021 05:36

  • Zabrina L Pesqueira

    Omg, when is the next update???

    03/30/2021 23:53

  • anaj13

    Damn, Jax & Brea after all this time, ya’ll still reproducing?! 😂 I feel for Asher & Imogen! Imogen is going to be heartbroken when she finds out that her sister is mated to Asher! The Moon Goddess is really cruel for making that happen!

    03/30/2021 03:13

  • Victoria Brinson

    i really believe that this app needs to make it where the comments are on one specific chapter instead of a full thread bc just reading some of the comments, I already know what will happen now.. haha I know I could just not read the comments but it’s just a suggestion for this app is all 💕

    03/29/2021 17:28

  • Mawusi Ford

    brea pregnant again 🤣🤣. l feel so bad for Asher and Imogen they love each other

    03/29/2021 14:15

  • EMC

    is history going to repeat itself ????

    03/28/2021 19:37

  • supergirl

    more than a decade without seeing his brothers? totally unrealistic and takes away from the story

    03/27/2021 21:35

  • Mawusi Ford

    why omg 😭😭😭 this is so heartbreaking. poor Asher. I’m sure you have a reason for it but it’s hard to read lol. looking forward to more

    03/27/2021 12:41

  • EMC

    I had a feeling it was her sister

    03/27/2021 04:42

  • Twyla Sanders-Farley

    NO !!!!!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭🤮😭😭😭

    03/26/2021 22:09

  • Mawusi Ford

    well that is awful poor Imogen and Asher. I’m sure you have a reason author but this is heart breaking 😭😭

    03/26/2021 20:57

  • Jessica Carr

    I can’t believe it😭😭😭😭

    03/26/2021 18:51

  • Lilian Ching Salva

    so sad

    03/25/2021 03:07

  • anaj13

    I’m rooting for Asher & Imogen!! Hopefully once Imogen comes of age they find out that they are indeed mates!

    03/24/2021 02:48

  • Twyla Sanders-Farley

    Please 🙏 let them be together !!!

    03/24/2021 00:30

  • edisamc2

    did Jax smell Bree before she turned of age? don’t remember? I hope they do have happy ending and she is his mate

    03/23/2021 22:38

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    oh poor Imogene! I wonder if Ashers mate is her younger sister? wouldn't that cause some family trouble or what! or maybe they can't feel/smell it till she's 16?! so many things to ponder? surprising that Brea and Jax never tried for a girl...(still sad about how Brennon story ended 😥)

    03/23/2021 18:15

  • Reader-323329

    I’m really confused they sent their 7 year old sons away to live alone with the 7 year old daughter of the beta and haven’t seen them in 3 years? who is raising their other sons? how has he not seen his now only 10 year old brothers for 3 years? what kind of parent would send their 7 year olds away to rule a pack? they were supposed to rule the pack when the grew up and came of age which is 16! what kind of parent send their 7 year old away and doesn’t even have them come home for 3 years

    03/23/2021 05:12

  • Diana Silburn

    am a bit confused it’s not Brea and Jax book no more now it’s Asher???

    03/23/2021 03:51

  • anaj13

    Oh no poor Asher! He’s going to be heartbroken that Imogen is not his mate! I wonder who is going to be? What I don’t get why have they separated his brothers and him? I understand that the twins are going to be Alphas of Brennon’s pack (I forgot the name), but was it necessary for the siblings to grow apart? Aren’t the twins barely 10? Can’t wait for more!

    03/23/2021 02:11

  • Twyla Sanders-Farley

    No!!!!!!!!! I'm so heartbroken for Asher and Imogen 😭😭💔💔😭😭

    03/23/2021 01:41

  • edisamc2

    oh so sad. I wonder who his mate is? how will he act

    03/22/2021 18:50

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    I'm not too far into the book but I am so sad for Brennon, it's not fair he lost his mate and seems to be loosing his choosen mate to that ass hat Jax. and 5 years and they never got physical?!!! oh come on! not fair not fair at all!

    03/22/2021 17:00

  • Brea Cheadle

    it's my name being in a story for me but it's a good story tho😂🖤💕

    03/22/2021 02:05

  • THE ROYAL LOUNGE👑

    Hey guys! I’m really sorry for not updating for the past few days, things have been hectic but I promise that I’m working on a good chapter for you guys! thank you for still staying with me!

    03/19/2021 15:39

  • Reader-217547

    absolutely love this book I was skeptical at first and when I say at first I just skipped the first chapter and now haven’t put the book down! I am in love

    03/14/2021 13:36

  • THE ROYAL LOUNGE👑

    Hey there! So, I’ll be taking a break for a few days because I have a ton of assignments due this week/next week and my exams are approaching quickly, I hope you understand! Thank you!

    03/12/2021 00:40

  • Marika Young

    I promise despite the jax behavior in the beginning of their relationship he is my favorite.

    03/08/2021 22:52

  • Reader-671139

    My man Jax is a badass:-)

    03/06/2021 03:02

  • Psylocke

    such an insensitive thing for him to say given his cheating history. he’s a dick!

    03/01/2021 06:55

  • A'smile Alexander

    she is a waste!!! total waste

    02/27/2021 00:51

  • Rainz World

    that was short lol

    02/26/2021 01:49

  • Tabitha Nichols

    well thought she was getting a back bone... sadly disappointed

    02/24/2021 20:15

  • sunshine

    love this book

    02/24/2021 02:04

  • edisamc2

    she can’t blame him for this one. this was before her

    02/22/2021 21:18

  • Sonia Punja

    love this book

    02/21/2021 08:51

  • Sonia Punja

    what is the next update?

    02/21/2021 08:51

  • Tabitha Nichols

    🤦🏼‍♀️

    02/19/2021 22:15

  • Reader-671139

    Love the story, was liking Jax up til he said ‘try to make her happy no matter how inconvenient it was for him’. Inconvenient? Seriously? I like Jax but he isn’t perfect and neither is she...

    02/19/2021 14:34

  • Psylocke

    valid question in my opinion! if he loved her, missed her and truly believed in the mate bond would he have screwed those other she-wolves like he did? It could be that he realised he’s a stronger alpha with his mate & Luna. Doesn’t undo the way he treated her. He still has a lot to prove!

    02/19/2021 03:20

  • edisamc2

    Brea needs to start trusting him and asking questions she wants answered too... relationship is build on trust , but trust is built overtime and not just given for few good deeds

    02/19/2021 02:09

  • Danica Degrave

    love the story !! it’s the first update I look for every day when I get done with work !! cant wait to see the story unfold

    02/18/2021 22:24

  • Laureanne Johnson

    I'am hooked on this story. I wanna know if Brea is going to ask him about marking him. What is going to happpen with her bully. What is the sex of the baby and what the pack members going to think and if they are welcoming. Hope the next chapter's updates are soon.

    02/18/2021 01:50

  • HeatherM1

    Love that Jax has worked to make the pack better. I’m confused as to why Brea hasn’t asked him about her marking him. I’m hooked on this story and hope Brea will step more into herself. can’t wait for the next update!!

    02/18/2021 01:20

  • Alyssa

    I am anxious to see what will happen when she meets up with the pack members, her former tormentors 😱😱

    02/16/2021 21:24

  • Reader-121776

    Brennon did not cheat . They were on a break.

    02/15/2021 17:53

  • what

    was actually into the book then finding she hadn't slept with Brennon and they were together for 5 years so I stopped reading. I hate when the females can't sleep with someone else but their mate sure. Just plain stupid.

    02/15/2021 01:13

  • Alyssa

    I don’t trust her. I don’t believe she’s really dead. what if they put her heart back in its chest or something??

    02/15/2021 00:22

  • Jasmin Smith

    she probably is, he didn't stay to watch her body be dismembered

    02/14/2021 23:44

  • Terri

    no I think it's from her turning brennon down all the time for sex but sleeping with him.

    02/14/2021 22:13

  • Amanda Caruana

    wow!!! this is SO good

    02/14/2021 11:03

  • Justmee

    Nope! Who's he going to run into at the bottom of those steps? He was just to happy to be 'done' 😬

    02/14/2021 00:53

  • Alyssa

    How often does the author update? This looks like a great story but I don’t want to get all hooked on the story and be left hanging lol

    02/14/2021 00:06

  • edisamc2

    finally

    02/13/2021 21:49

  • Minnie Mouse

    yasssss😍😍😍😍

    02/12/2021 15:53

  • Jasmine Hazelbaker

    thanks for the update

    02/12/2021 03:09

  • edisamc2

    I hope Jax comes out of this unharmed ....

    02/12/2021 02:38

  • wana blain

    Dayummmm. 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

    02/11/2021 01:09

  • Jasmine Hazelbaker

    love this story... can’t believe that their mates and not having sex though.... especially now that Asher is back n the realization that brennon wanted to die... just saying... it would also be nice if a promise on his authority about not hurting brea or sleeping around ever again came from jax... I just know as a mother I would reject his ass to make sure he didn’t harm my unborn child or me this time around.

    02/08/2021 21:27

  • Ellie K

    Thanks for the update 😊 Hope his mom will be a bit nicer 🤔 can't wait to see what happens next 😁😁

    02/08/2021 21:06

  • edisamc2

    I’m happy the ya re get to along. hope the parents don’t give her too much trouble ... but glad Jax doesn’t care about their opinion

    02/07/2021 02:54

  • Tabitha Nichols

    well that was a short chapter... 😡 if we have to pay it should be worth more than a few lines

    02/06/2021 04:25

  • Melissa McWhorter-Asberry

    please put Jax and brea back together and have her apologize please

    02/05/2021 15:45

  • edisamc2

    I hope she apologizes and they have ❤️2❤️ conversation and make up. they need to be together as family and live together potentially even move ASAP to old pack

    02/05/2021 03:02

  • Rainz World

    I am sorry you are sick hope you feel better soon... thanks for the update

    02/03/2021 20:14

  • anaj13

    What the fuck is wrong with you, Brea? I get that you’re grieving and hurt because Brennan is gone, but Jax has been there for you, asked for forgiveness and win you over!! I get he made mistakes in the past, but has own up to them and has been working to make things better between y’all! Jax, don’t give up Brea! She’s hurting, so please understand and even if she’s afraid to admit she needs you as much as you need her! They both need to let the past go and look to their foward to their future together with their children.

    02/01/2021 03:14

  • HeatherM1

    I pray Brea and Jax can both forgive each other and themselves. They need each other and their children need them.

    01/31/2021 20:41

  • edisamc2

    she is grieving and is hurt.. hope Jax doesn’t give up on her and at the same time she needs to snap out of it... own up to her insecurities and fears ...

    01/31/2021 20:02

  • Reader-671139

    wow, thank you for the update. I understand Brea is an emotional wreck but I feel like Jax needs to be a little understanding that her world has been turned upside down since he showed up. Sometimes you just need to suck it up, put your own needs aside and support your partner. Love this story. Thank you!!!!

    01/31/2021 18:56

  • Marquita H

    I understand that Brea is pregnant but she is really childish. She hated it that he treated her bad and now she feels like a better person to do it to him? Not to mention you want to put your unborn child at risk going after a very angry trained rogue female alpha, yeah not bright at all.

    01/31/2021 17:40

  • Marquita H

    Thenk you for updating even being extremely sick. I hope you get better

    01/31/2021 17:37

  • Ellie K

    omg Brea 😓😓 that's not the way to go!! Thanks for the update!! 😊

    01/31/2021 14:26

  • THE ROYAL LOUNGE👑

    Hey guys! I'm not sure when I'll be able to update because I have been really sick lately and I am currently in the hospital on admission

    01/29/2021 08:10

  • anaj13

    Well I wasn’t expecting that after how she reacted at the end of the last chapter. I would have love for Brennan to have met a second chance mate, but oh well shit happens! Now, Jax better hurry to Brea, so they can be reunited!!

    01/28/2021 02:50

  • Tabitha Nichols

    easy way out. kill brennon. she still needs to grow a spine

    01/28/2021 01:58

  • Ellie K

    I knew it!! Sort of happy and sad now though.. 😢

    01/27/2021 21:52

  • Gabby van der Westhuizen

    send the chapter's ease have to know is he safe with his mate please 🙏 stop with the suspense 😬 😉 she needs him will make a great ending

    01/27/2021 16:27

  • Gabby van der Westhuizen

    please don't kill Jax she needs him and the kids make him service please I can't stand it 😢 somehow please

    01/27/2021 16:23

  • Minnie Mouse

    😱😱😱

    01/27/2021 10:00

  • Ellie K

    Now I really want the next chapter!! 😱😂

    01/27/2021 07:20

  • Reader-671139

    Wow!! Sucha a great cliffhanger. Thank you for the update!!

    01/27/2021 02:25

  • anaj13

    Noooo!! Jax can’t be dead!!! Not now when they working on things and Brea is going to need him the most!! I’m glad Asher is safe!! Why you gotta leave us hanging like that?!

    01/27/2021 00:40

  • Melissa McWhorter-Asberry

    please do not let Jackson be dead she needs him.

    01/27/2021 00:17

  • Twyla Sanders-Farley

    Holy Crap what a cliffhanger !!!

    01/26/2021 22:49

  • edisamc2

    it’s happy to know she has her baby boy back. part of her felt like that was goodby with and that’s why she told him she was pregnant . Breanne is dead

    01/26/2021 22:37

  • edisamc2

    please let them find him and let her and Jax go back to his pack

    01/26/2021 00:45

  • Ellie K

    Thanks for the new chapter! Always happy to see one 😁😁

    01/24/2021 21:43

  • Reader-671139

    Thank you for the update-love this story. I don’t know if Jax really knows how much he hurt Brea (how much she hurt when he was having sex, how she went unconscious for days while in labor, how she lost her wolf). Not a fan of Brennan but at least he was there for her during those dark times (but his lies and actions are not necessarily forgiveable).

    01/24/2021 02:00

  • Jasmine Hazelbaker

    forgot to add... some Jax pov please please please

    01/24/2021 00:21

  • Jasmine Hazelbaker

    I can’t get enough of this!!!! I understand her not being able to go look for Asher bc of the dangers. Jax is working on it... they can’t charge blindly out looking or it would be all for not... I mean in real life parents have to keep going when their kid is missing so why not in a story? how many search parties in real life are fruitless ? also I really hope that it works out for Brea n Jax... I would like clarification if he knew she would be physically hurt when he had sex when she was gone? I feel like that would be a game changer for me bc if he did then he is a hard and definite nope... but Brennon is not the choice either... he should work it out with his own mate or have a 2nd chance mate after they kill her. finally thanks for a steamy scene!I would love more smut! also a revision on their first encounter with more details would be greatly appreciated.... well it would satisfy my pervert self🤪... thanks keep it up!!!

    01/24/2021 00:19

  • YukiRobin

    wow 😲 I'm glad she is somewhere safe

    01/23/2021 15:06

  • anaj13

    Ugh fucking Brennan! Way to go and ruin things between Brea & Jax! I’m glad that Brea is not letting either off the hook, but I don’t want her to push Jax just when things are getting better between them! I get that their kid is missing, and they’re doing everything to get him back, but I don’t see anything wrong with them taking some time for themselves!

    01/23/2021 03:36

  • Tabitha Nichols

    good for you Brennon! pointing out the obvious

    01/23/2021 03:22

  • Tabitha Nichols

    ummm did you forget you have a missing child? or are you horny to think straight with your weak a@@.

    01/23/2021 03:15

  • Zuleika Boekhoudt

    Ugh BRENNON you're such a B****

    01/23/2021 00:04

  • Zuleika Boekhoudt

    Petty queen 🙃🙃🙃

    01/22/2021 23:57

  • Reader-671139

    Love the update, thank you!! I am glad Brea is not letting either of them off the hook.

    01/22/2021 22:33
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