The Alpha's Unknown Heir Comments

  • Sheyrena

    I'm confused... I thought she turned 18 when she met her mate... now she's 16 and pregnant?

    05/29/2021 15:42

  • Aline Laurent

    does anyone know how we can get notifications of updates for stories?? the notifications button doesn't seem to work for me on this book and having to keep checking for updates, is just disappointing!!

    05/29/2021 05:57

  • cmcrobb

    Can't wait for the next update!

    05/28/2021 13:54

  • Tabitha Nichols

    if your into a weak female character this is so your story! anyone looking for a character with strength and not willing to play dead and let people abuse and degrade her (it’s the entire story) move on.

    05/28/2021 02:37

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    when the next update?

    05/27/2021 17:17

  • Wcha

    I'm not liking Brea right now she has Brennan who's been amazing to her and it's like she forgets it once Jax shows up it makes her look weak especially after everything Jax done to her

    05/25/2021 16:15

  • ingrida dapkute

    first I hope Asher eventually realise he’s meant to be with viola and will chose her, that Imogen will find her happiness . Noe I hope viola will find here happiness and those two will suffer from their actions. I can’t believe that Imogen knowing that he’s her sisters mate is behaving like this, like he belongs to her... he doesn’t!!! how can you do something like this to your sister... ughh, can’t wait to see what’s coming next, would be nice to finally know more about viola , what’s her actual thoughts about all this, does she care about Asher or only power..

    05/24/2021 06:01

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    I really hope Viola doesn't follow her aunts advice, I know how jealousy can make someone feel angry specially with the mate bond. I'm sure she feels helpless, what with Imogen having such a dream life and years of happiness with Asher, she must feel like Imogen had a life that was ment for Viola.

    05/23/2021 17:30

  • Simone Kitzinger

    I hope Viola gets her happy end and asher and imogen really Hit the rock bottom.

    05/23/2021 12:11

  • EMC

    Viola don’t stoop so low. reject his ass.. what’s worse he won’t have an hair... let them be and goddess eill reward you with second chance mate .. hopefully twin brothers lol

    05/23/2021 04:26

  • Melissa Cotis

    ok so love scorned viola is going to be soooo bad and I can’t wait. at this point, I don’t care if both packs go to hell.

    05/22/2021 17:31

  • Aline Laurent

    when are updates??

    05/21/2021 08:23

  • EMC

    when will the next update be up

    05/19/2021 20:20

  • Bonib2

    She doesn't do anything but sleep. No job mentioned, nor doing anything for the pack that adopted her, lives in Alpha's house, lives off him, in theory in love with him yet they haven't had sex in over 5 years because she's worried would hurt Alpha Jaxhole or she's not ready yet she thinks he is being unfair? 🤣🤣🤣. Yep, poor Brennon.

    05/19/2021 13:37

  • Bonib2

    Poor Brennon😭

    05/19/2021 11:39

  • Bonib2

    God it's painful to read this book.

    05/19/2021 11:37

  • Aline Laurent

    does anyone know how often updates are?

    05/18/2021 18:57

  • XO_XV

    Ajax is an A hole!

    05/18/2021 04:39

  • Karla Carlos

    I can't stand Asher and Imogen anymore😤 they're acting like victims when the truth is the opposite! they're selfish and Asher ughh I hate him even more now that he is aknowledging what his mothet went through when his dad slept with others women and still want to act like that against Viola 😤😤😤😤. they deserve whatever comes to them. dear author I'm so confused cause you're writing Viola's characters in the way to make us hate her which I don't understand and we are hating Asher and Imogen more. I hope you do some justice to Viola and the twins, cause clearly they don't deserve what they've been put through their whole lives. the lack of love from their parents and family.

    05/17/2021 20:11

  • ingrida dapkute

    I don’t understand why Asher hates viola so much, he doesn’t even know her for a fact. I understand that he loves Imogen, but Viola is his mate, there’s supposed to be mates pull between them right? wasnt he supposed to feel something for her, at least a bit, especially after he felt sparks from their touch. it’s so confusing...

    05/17/2021 13:12

  • Alma Statebriga

    First of all thanks a lot for your Books and the Updates :) I would love to read asher and viola feel the bond and the sparks and a first kiss.. Maybe the bond starts healing him.. 🤩 And there would be a chance for them ❤️ #team viola 😁 (sorry for that)

    05/16/2021 09:01

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    I think that Asher and Imogen are a very different type of couple. the mate bond is supposed to be all encompassing and just the very beat feeling ever, but Asher acts hateful and disgusted intact of Viola. ibthink Viola has every right to feel as she does. and Imogen has almost lived in a glass "fairy tale" box. But there seems to be skeletons in Ashers closet with all the self harm and whatnot....

    05/16/2021 08:07

  • Amy Nicholas

    what is gonna do rape Viola to give him heirs? she has a right to be a bitch. Why are they acting like they are victims here? They are not!

    05/15/2021 00:28

  • Nita

    I wonder if Viola ends up with her sisters mate! how the tables would change then!

    05/14/2021 22:30

  • Laur S

    when are the updates?

    05/14/2021 02:22

  • Vicki Trewella

    What an awful situation for them all... it's actually quite sad 😥

    05/13/2021 04:45

  • Ashley MacKenzie Etheridge

    this is stupid brea is dumb he true mate want nothing more than the heir he doesn’t and hasn’t ever cared for her if I were her I would have rejected him before I had the kid. JAX DOESNT CARE ABOUT ANYTHING BUT HIS HEIR HE CARES NOT FOR BREA

    05/12/2021 16:45

  • EMC

    why didn’t he reject Viola... now she will feel everything and be in pain because of his weak ass

    05/11/2021 17:58

  • Mawusi Ford

    Awww Imogen really didn’t know but rather her look bad than Asher she truly loves him. I knew Imogen was a good person who has been in love with him since she was a kid. I just hope her love for him won’t ruin her.

    05/11/2021 12:51

  • anaj13

    No, poor Asher! 😭😭😭 I don’t like that he’s hurting himself! I hope that when Imogen finds her mate; she does the same giving him up for Asher. I do wonder how Imogen discovered that Viola is Asher’s mate and why would she do that to her own sister?! Is Viola, a real bitch like she seems or is she putting up a front?

    05/10/2021 03:17

  • Nita

    I can’t wait for Imogen to find her mate!

    05/07/2021 23:25

  • Nita

    I think Asher needs to know Viola before he actually has an impression about her she maybe nicer then what we are actually know just very hurt!

    05/07/2021 23:23

  • Ellen Leibfrid

    chapter 77 (spoiler alert). Author. you are doing an excellent job regarding Asher and his cutting. I hope this develops into him getting professional help and cutting frequently is thought of as a female disorder whereas this is happening to a male. Thanks.

    05/07/2021 17:55

  • Andrea Aludden

    oh man asher is the worst..and immy too... 🤢

    05/07/2021 17:49

  • EMC

    if Imogen really loved him wouldn’t she notice how depressed and suicidal he is? #teamviola

    05/07/2021 13:22

  • Mawusi Ford

    thank you for the update. I really blame Jax and Brea for this mess they didn’t have to separate the kids like that. they should have been allowed to visit each other. Asher use to ask when he was younger and he still didn’t see his brothers. Naturally Liam and Levi would think Ashers life was perfect when it was not. So please don’t separate Imogen from Asher because she is really all he had growing up.

    05/07/2021 11:33

  • MirahLove

    thank you for the updates! despite what others are saying and being unhappy I’m just glad to get regular updates as I love this book 🥰 keep up the good work, I always look forward to the updates 😊

    05/07/2021 10:25

  • Reader-323329

    I’m shocked at breas behavior after what she went though to be so cruel?! viola is Imogens sister and grew up with her other sons how can she be so evil? honestly viola had been treated so horribly I don’t get it she still really just a kid it’s sad and so messed up

    05/07/2021 07:04

  • Heather Otis

    I actually pissed at Brea the most. she should have supported her son waiting for his mate. Then when he wanted to reject her proper so Viola can move forward she was selfish and said not too so he could force her to make him an heir.

    05/07/2021 05:37

  • Faith777

    I don't think I'll be readying this book base on the comments 🤔

    05/07/2021 05:04

  • Tabitha Nichols

    I’m confused... this seems to be a 2nd book? why didn’t the 1st book end and sequel begin? plus the sequel is another weak main character

    05/07/2021 02:51

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    it seems like we aren't supposed to like Viola or something like she is mean cussing Imofen out but I feel for her! her sister knew and didn't care that it would hurt her younger sister(the one tossed away from her family) and in the end hurt Asher (and the pack) too because he wont have an heir or a change to feel a true mate bond in its fullest!

    05/06/2021 22:47

  • cmcrobb

    When will there be another update?

    05/06/2021 12:46

  • miasiacheyenne

    I seriously hope imogen isn’t paired with one of the twins. they shouldn’t have to suffer because of imogen and asher’s selfishness and they should be able to have pups, unlike Asher. Asher does not deserve the right to it

    05/06/2021 03:22

  • Sam Weed

    I feel like I need more chapters. Impatiently waiting for more

    05/06/2021 00:52

  • miasiacheyenne

    I hope Viola makes it has painful as possible for Imogen and Asher. the selfishness is astounding. I hope she gets nasty with it as well.

    05/05/2021 18:10

  • ingrida dapkute

    teamviola!!! how cruel of her sister, she knew this whole time, seems absolutely no one cares about violas feelings, feel sorry for her..

    05/05/2021 18:09

  • cmcrobb

    #teamviola! She's only that way because of how she was treated growing up. Imogen is a bitch! How dare Brea! She's a hypocrite. She wants Asher to use Viola for heirs and then what..just take the kid from Viola so he and Imogen can raise the kid. Thats cruel! How is that any different from when Jax threatened to take Asher away from her.

    05/05/2021 17:21

  • Amy Sabatino

    I hope viola attacks and gets killed and Imogen turns out to be his 2nd chance mate. Asher has loved immy since they were kids there is no way he can mate her sister.

    05/05/2021 17:08

  • Alma Statebriga

    Thank you for the Update.. Can't wait for more :-)) iam shocked how Brea become such a bitch.. Try using viola just for an heir.. It sucks.. I hope that Viola reject him and Imogen reject Asher for her mate. Karma

    05/05/2021 13:55

  • terri4388

    the way viola and his brothers are treated by their parents is awful. for his mother to suggest they use viola so he can get heirs is horrible. she knows how it feels to be cheated on. viola is only this way because of her family. I hope she rejects him and finds her happiness else where.

    05/05/2021 13:19

  • Regina Battle

    Good for Asher and Imogen. I hope Viola finds someone to love her and she can reject Asher. I want him to feel what she will feel every time he is with her sister. No heir for him! #teamviola 😈

    05/05/2021 13:17

  • nicg20

    I hope viola doesn’t stay an awful person because of this. I hope she rejects him and moves on. using her for an heir is worse than what his father did to his mother. His brother should be Imogens mate and end up with viola instead. just waiting for some karma to kick in

    05/05/2021 12:53

  • Mawusi Ford

    l don’t like Viola at all l hope she doesn’t get Asher. She doesn’t deserve him mate or not

    05/05/2021 11:24

  • Amy Sabatino

    I've checked 100 times today for the update

    05/05/2021 00:37

  • J Schmidt

    Are you still updating today?

    05/04/2021 23:32

  • Amy Sabatino

    when is there going to be an update

    05/03/2021 10:26

  • MirahLove

    omg I love this!

    05/03/2021 03:02

  • Mawusi Ford

    🤣🤣 Go Imogen she wasn’t fooled but she loves Asher l don’t blame her 🤣🤣🤣. Asher was wrong for not telling her to begin with

    05/02/2021 18:43

  • EMC

    so did Imogen know?

    05/02/2021 16:47

  • nicg20

    I am new to your books and I am hooked! the story progression and character building is amazing! on another note.

    05/02/2021 16:09

  • EMC

    wow.. drama about to happen.how will rest of the family react? how will he deal with viola? how will this end?

    05/02/2021 15:47

  • Mawusi Ford

    lord Asher why wait 7 years to tell 🤦🏾‍♀️ well l hope Imogen will forgive him. Maybe Viola won’t like him 😬. His brothers will be upset too

    05/01/2021 21:48

  • EMC

    drama is about to start.. feel bad for viola and Imogen.. and Asher this is all on him. he could have been better person and confess.. 7 years... he deserves everything coming his way .. still feel like Imogen will forgive him , she’s blinded by their love

    04/29/2021 15:07

  • Trisha Reynolds

    this book is amazing. looking forward to the next update hopefully it’s soon

    04/29/2021 14:25

  • Desray Allison

    I love this book so far!!!

    04/29/2021 05:56

  • Ingrida Dapkute

    love this so far, can’t wait for violets pow!!! things must go nuts when she knows what’s going on!!

    04/28/2021 08:06

  • Ona M. Lester

    I love this book just wish it was updated more often..... them damn teenage hearts just always get in the way lol

    04/27/2021 14:50

  • Anita

    Chair 46, end paragraphs, when they're out of the car, Jax says he left the air conditioning on but when they get back in the car, he starts the ignition. May need review.

    04/27/2021 00:22

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    so he was Jenkins to Imogen?! and had been off the radar because he secretly doesn't want to be Alpha, he just wants to be happy and have babies with Imogen?! oh who cares! I'd he really felt so strongly for Imogen it wouldn't matter about having an heir. one of his brothers could become alpha there, and he could resign and be beta. but he needs to reject Viola before it hurts Imogen and Viola any further.

    04/25/2021 05:11

  • nicg20

    how can he not feel anything at all knowing viola is his mate. if he feels this way for her sister then he needs to man up and reject her now and not years down the line after having a full blown sexual relationship with Imogen. I hope viola finds someone else and I hope Imogen finds her mate and leaves his ass.

    04/25/2021 03:36

  • Amy Nicholas

    soo the mate bond has no effect on him at all? so he needs to just reject her. I really am starting to hate him.

    04/25/2021 02:20

  • EMC

    fell like he will start having and imagine Viola more ... time to come clean with Imogen . if truly loves her tell her truth anc come up with plan how to reject Viola and be fair to both sisters.. less heartbreak

    04/25/2021 01:44

  • anaj13

    What the hell was Asher doing? I hope he was not with someone else, but the fact that she’s wasn’t mad to what she walked in; I’m assuming he was pleasuring himself! I hope Imogen realizes soon that she is better off finding her mate and also Asher has to be upfront with her and tell her that Viola is his mate before he hurts her even more!

    04/23/2021 21:11

  • EMC

    was he with someone else or just pleasuring hinself

    04/22/2021 03:15

  • Ona M. Lester

    do you have an update schedule??? I'm just curious so I know when to check back.....

    04/22/2021 02:37

  • miasiacheyenne

    why can’t remember who Jax and Brea is cuz I’m lost 😂🤦🏽‍♀️

    04/22/2021 02:36

  • misty

    oh man nooooo how sad not jax. poor guy jist got to know his boy.

    04/22/2021 02:20

  • Mawusi Ford

    Asher l have questions 🤣🤣🤣 and why have you been missing.

    04/22/2021 00:39

  • nicg20

    as the book progresses I’m finding myself hoping Viola rejects Asher and never looks back.

    04/21/2021 13:17

  • EMC

    looks like all of the younger siblings have resentment of being abendunded by their parents.Imogen and Asher were spoiled by their parents ... wonder how this will end. how long will this book be

    04/19/2021 20:18

  • Mawusi Ford

    aww man l feel sorry for Asher and Imogen why is he mated to the mean sister maybe he can ignore the bond 🤣🤣

    04/19/2021 17:59

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    I feel sorry for Imogen, ahead feels he is keeping secrets and he is! She has to take her mom advice and figure out whether she wants to know what he is keeping from her or not... Also, I know this is Ashers story but I would like a little bit of the twins story in real time. What is Asher going to do? wait untill Viola feels the bond and he can't keep it a secret anymore?

    04/17/2021 07:04

  • miasiacheyenne

    well I saw that with the twins...it’s obvious they favor Asher. I am disappointed that Asher is so childish, like his character could’ve been so much better

    04/15/2021 11:58

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    poor Levi and Liam! it's sound logic, they must feel pushed away or at least neglected. And Asher IS acting like a big man baby! I really like Imogen and don't want to see her get hurt! is she 18 yet? hopefully she finds her mate and leaves Asher so that she doesn't get hurt by Asher

    04/14/2021 22:34

  • Nita

    so I’m wondering if Viola feels the mate bond yet?? or is she still not 18 yet? it would be great to have a bit of insight about the twins & Viola at the other pack & what they’ve been doing 😊

    04/14/2021 04:16

  • Sarah

    who the jell is kane?? are you getting your own characters wrong or was that someone else??? 🙄🙄🙄

    04/11/2021 16:37

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    seems like she feels the mate bond and Liam is a bit jealousaybe he love Violia and is posswd with Asher

    04/09/2021 15:57

  • Chevon Ann

    I wish the chapters were a bit longer...and Asher definitely screwed up!

    04/08/2021 23:40

  • EMC

    what a jerky ass of and Alpha ... hurting his mate on purpose even after he know how it has been for his mom ....

    04/08/2021 23:39

  • miasiacheyenne

    well Asher seriously takes after his dad in stupid decisions 😩🤦🏽‍♀️

    04/08/2021 23:07

  • miasiacheyenne

    bad move Asher bad move

    04/08/2021 22:41

  • Reader-323329

    I feel like Imorgen is going to get killed by rogues and that is why he is mated to her sister they are going to avenge her death together why else would the moon goddess pair them they both love Imogen it will be there love of her that will bring them together

    04/08/2021 20:04

  • miasiacheyenne

    Brea has amazing deflecting skill, and everything is about me complex. she’s thick with it

    04/08/2021 04:31

  • miasiacheyenne

    I just started and this book gives me anxiety. like I don’t understand all the drama so early

    04/08/2021 00:03

  • ingrida dapkute

    is update coming any time soon? I’am dying to know what happened next, and tyres of checking everyday for update ☘️

    04/07/2021 13:09

  • Nita

    Great read looking forward to the next chapters, would be great to hear about the twins aswell!

    04/06/2021 04:51

  • THE ROYAL LOUNGE👑

    hey guys, I’m so sorry I’ve not updated in a while. I’m having a major episode of writer’s block which ends with me starring at my laptop screen for hours. I’m trying to figure out things and would hopefully be ending the book this month

    04/05/2021 17:54

  • anaj13

    Oh Asher, what are you doing? You’re only hurting yourself, Imogen & your real mate Viola! Ugh, I blame the moon goddess for putting them in this predicament!

    04/01/2021 21:22

  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    Really Asher, that's so messed up! He knew this was gonna end up hurting Imogen and Viola and yet he still thought with only his member. He has to end up with his mate or he will never have his own Heir! I bet he he is gonna be super jealous and possessive if Viola starts dating let alone mating with someone else. I hope she does just to put him in his place!!

    04/01/2021 19:40
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