The Alpha's Unknown Heir Comments

  • So So

    Is there a Chapter 87 coming or another book to continue?

    09/05/2021 22:32
  • THE ROYAL LOUNGE👑

    https://temitayosaka.wixsite.com/theroyallounge If you want to know when I’m updating all my books, that’s my website

    09/05/2021 21:52
  • ingrida dapkute

    just wondering how much of the book is left? is it will be done soon or there’s still lots chapters will be coming?

    09/03/2021 17:25
  • Stephanie Diekmann

    5 years and haven't slept together, wow I feel really sorry for Brennan... damn..

    09/02/2021 03:21
  • Githa Datadin

    hope your doing well. Is the story almost finished or is this the end with a upcomming sequel?

    08/30/2021 11:57
  • Aline Laurent

    When will the next update be or is this the end of this story and the lead on to the next??

    08/30/2021 06:53
  • Carolyn Miller

    I like this story so far. will keep reading it till the finish.

    08/28/2021 07:10
  • Jennifer Eggleton

    are you going to finish this story??

    08/25/2021 23:30
  • Kayla Bobo

    I’m rooting for Viola to come out on top. Without the help of Addilyn. Maybe her rejecting him, or finding love and having kids would serve him and her sister right. They’re so selfish it’s disgusting.

    08/24/2021 02:26
  • Kayla Bobo

    I think it’s extremely selfish of Asher and Imogen to have made that promise, they didn’t even think about the poor people who would be mated to them who would have to live life rejected because of them. Rejection kills.

    08/24/2021 00:47
  • brandi hogg

    I hope your feeling better

    08/19/2021 02:02
  • Nat

    what’s going on with this story? any timeline on updates? Perhaps an estimate?

    08/18/2021 02:06
  • Reader-953780

    omg is Jax dead☹️

    08/15/2021 23:13
  • THE ROYAL LOUNGE👑

    08/14/2021 08:19
  • Mrs.Hyde

    That's ridiculous what was the the point of giving Imogen a mate other than Asher if she was going to regret him anyway to be with Asher?

    08/07/2021 23:50
  • erin c

    Any updates soon? honestly starting to forget the book as it's been so long

    08/07/2021 00:10
  • brie pare

    I wish it was a little cheaper

    08/06/2021 00:32
  • Ellen Leibfrid

    I just noticed the story was updated. Thank you. your story is the only reason I keep this app. I didn't know you have been ill. I hope you get better in your own time. Do what your doctors tell you to do to recover.

    08/05/2021 14:34
  • Nita

    hopefully she’s run to her mate!

    08/01/2021 00:09
  • Regina Battle

    I hope you are doing better. I appreciate the update.

    07/31/2021 22:56
  • miasiacheyenne

    thank you baby Jesus! karma and Asher needs a reality check and move on with his destin mate

    07/31/2021 18:16
  • Diana Silburn

    they really need to go with there real mates would be so Much easier

    07/31/2021 03:46
  • Jasmine Hazelbaker

    yay! move on n be happy Asher… thank u little baby jesus

    07/31/2021 03:08
  • Githa Datadin

    when will you update?

    07/30/2021 09:45
  • Allison Kerpash

    I have a question. I notice that the writer uses "would" instead of "will". Is this just a quirk?

    07/21/2021 15:04
  • Omayra Gomez

    she slept with him because she knew her sister was his mate. what a b****. when is the update. it's been forever

    07/20/2021 16:47
  • Githa Datadin

    please update

    07/18/2021 07:11
  • Marlene

    I can’t stand Asher and Imogen. They are so selfish that it makes them annoying. I can’t understand why Asher would do that to his mate after what his mother went through. And how can Imogen treat her sister the way she does? That’s wrong.

    07/14/2021 02:46
  • Githa Datadin

    argg!! stupid Asher and Immy. they deserve every downfall. you can't fix everything with loving each other. He has a pack to run and is doing nothing. and whats up with Brea?! Viola should just reject stupid Asher. At least she could get a second chanch

    07/13/2021 21:05
  • Laura De Zolt

    ugh!!! I can’t stand Brea! why is she so awful. she’s some poor omega who gets completely bullied knocked up and told she’s not wanted by mate. then has someone be so extremely sweet to her and her son for 5 yrs. 5 yrs in a relationship with a man who she is not intimate with and doesn’t plan on it. and then her mate come back into her life; she is a raging bitch to her sweet Brennan and then gets mad at him for being upset! she sucks

    07/11/2021 05:36
  • Ellen Leibfrid

    thank you for your update!

    07/10/2021 03:46
  • Nat

    Asher might be physically strong but he’s mentally weak - he needs help. Imogen is just an enabler. He and Imogen are both so selfish it hurts. I’m glad Darian woke her up a little. I was hoping Jax could get through to his son a bit. That Beta didn’t accept the rejection right? I hope he gives her a little taste of what rejection can really feel like. Can’t wait to see her sister really be the badass she was initially portrayed to be while still hoping that evil aunt doesn’t get under her skin. As always, can’t wait to read more!

    07/09/2021 19:23
  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    good update, pretty short but it gets the point across. Imogen wants to be happy with Asher because it's what she has always known and Asher does too but is struggling more than she is, his pack is suffering and also the future of his pack will suffer as well without an heir which the couple will neverbe able to produce.

    07/09/2021 15:28
  • Jasmine Hazelbaker

    I hope Asher n Immy die then their mates will be each other’s second chance mates… combine the packs the end… it’s sad Asher turned out to be such a bitchy lil boy n Immy is a thot

    07/09/2021 14:16
  • ingrida dapkute

    okey we all are eager to get updates faster, but let’s have a bit of understanding that written have health issues and not feeling well!! She no need more pressure from here, her health is more important than this! I’am sure she will update as often as she can, let’s be supportive and not bombing her with comments about updates. hope you feel better soon, take care of yourself! x

    07/09/2021 09:17
  • Ocey

    Hope he doesn’t reject his mate Viola

    07/09/2021 01:12
  • Essie Morgan

    when will this book be done I’ve waited 2 months for an update…I understand that you aren’t feeling well but geesh

    07/08/2021 22:51
  • Reader-312060

    okay I’m done with waiting for the author to release another chapter!

    07/07/2021 10:37
  • Rosin

    I’m not liking how Asher and Imogen’s story is turning and how it seems that they will eventually be using Viola to get a heir (as a baby breeder) and then what kill her and take the pup to raise as their own, that just seems so so wrong…. not saying that’s what’s going to happen but it just doesn’t seem to be any other way since he doesn’t feel anything for Viola and the Council, specially Asher’s mom is all about getting a heir for the pack.

    07/06/2021 03:36
  • brandi hogg

    I hope you are starting to feel better and are in better health ❤

    07/05/2021 03:18
  • LBP

    I'm loving the book thus far but would like to inquire when we can expect the next chapters to be uploaded. I get so caught up in the things I read that I just want to read it all the way through until the end. I genuinely love how you show both sides... the strength of the mate bond between Brea and Jax... and the strength to fight for true love between Asher and Imogen. Can't wait to read the rest. 🥰

    07/01/2021 15:22
  • Nat

    Honesly where’s Levi’s and Liam’s story? I here conjuring it up and they’re so fun!!! They sure tell Asher like it is.

    06/29/2021 03:14
  • Nat

    Ugggh. Asher and Imogen are so frustrating!!!! Asher is just like his mother and I was so frustrated with her too. Poor Viola. Poor reject beta. I hope Adalyn doesn’t get inside Viola’s head. Can’t wait for more!!!

    06/29/2021 03:11
  • Nat

    Am I the only one who sees Brea as ungrateful. I feel bad for Brennon - he was nothing but kind to her and all he is getting now is attitude from her. The man’s a Saint! Been with her and gave her space and love for 5 years. Damn! I believe he loves her but I don’t think she ever really loved him. poor guy! …so far anyway.

    06/28/2021 02:55
  • THE ROYAL LOUNGE👑

    Hello readers, as you all may have noticed, I haven’t updated in a while. that’s because I am battling with a lot of things right now that a 19 year old shouldn’t have to go through. As some of you might’ve remembered, I’ve been in and out of the hospital and as it turns out, it’s much more serious than I thought. I don’t feel comfortable discussing the details but I promise that once I’m better and stable, I will be updating. thank you for understanding

    06/25/2021 00:33
  • Jenny Fritsch

    it started out good...but now it's just disgusting and I hate this f*cken alpha!! I mean who takes a pup away from there mother just to make her come back??

    06/24/2021 21:17
  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    update?

    06/24/2021 20:59
  • EMC

    ok so they are in-love. why won’t ash reject Viola and put her out of her misery so that she can go find her own happiness

    06/24/2021 02:33
  • Nita

    I’m kind of disappointed with how these 2 are, i don’t know if I’m looking forward to reading about them! Jax & Breas story was great maybe I was thinking it would be just as good!

    06/20/2021 22:58
  • Jessica Carr

    I think it’s unfair to make Immy and Asher to be cruel simply because they are choosing to love who they want to love. Asher tried to reject his mate but is mom stopped him when he is an adult and can decide for himself. I truly want things to work out for them.

    06/20/2021 00:55
  • Aline Laurent

    Its been ages, but Asher didn't even reject his mate, because his mother wouldn't let him. Now Imogen has rejected hers. Hopefully, Xavier gets a better mate then Imogen!!

    06/19/2021 08:23
  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    oh man, they chose each other over their mates, but is a one sided reject even enough to stop the mate pull? Asher father rejected his mom but then regretted it and started looking for her all over the place till he found her, so will Imogen truly be OVER Xavier just because she rejected him....he didn't reject her back?

    06/17/2021 15:39
  • Alma Statebriga

    Asher and Imogen 🤮 if he is happy with his Imogen y cutting himself and be depressed? They don't choose each other In a way because the parents push them togheter. Y should he be with her but his mother couldn't be with brennon? 🤔

    06/17/2021 14:31
  • Ona M. Lester

    I love this book but am also getting frustrated with the updates maybe write when you can and then update them together....

    06/17/2021 11:36
  • Ellen Leibfrid

    👍👍👍👍

    06/17/2021 05:58
  • Stacy Butler

    hmm why has he never rejected viola then? why keep her hamging if he loves immy SO BADLY??

    06/17/2021 00:21
  • NeNe30😘

    why are you making Asher out to be an ass? Also, why are we waiting weeks to a month for updates? if we have to wait that long AND we're paying for it, at least update multiple chapters. Not 1-2🙄😒

    06/16/2021 22:47
  • Reader-092364

    omg poor beta but he handled that nicely. all I hope is that viola does not become the villain in this story. and why won’t Asher reject her? Won’t she be suffering every time Asher and imogen have sex because of the mate bond and because he hasn’t rejected her?

    06/16/2021 22:08
  • ingrida dapkute

    with each chapter I hate Imogen and Asher more and more… where is karma!?! why their mates has to suffer from their selfishness?! beta is right!! he deserves someone much better than Imogen!! I hope he will end up with Viola!! they deserved to be happy

    06/16/2021 20:12
  • Diana Silburn

    They got to be the stupidest of them all. they are so selfish V needs to reject ashers ass he deserves the pain . he is not even happy with Imogen because if he was he wouldn’t be cutting like he does

    06/16/2021 17:52
  • L. Danielle Williams

    I'm still reading this because I've come so far but I'm VERY disappointed. This story has dragged on long enough going in the wrong direction. The once cute boy is an asshole and his "love" is a bitch. At this point I hope her Aunt and sister do destroy his pack and his twin brothers who obviously see him for the loser that he really is take over...

    06/16/2021 14:34
  • miasiacheyenne

    the selfishness is astounding 😒 I hope absolutely everything falls apart for Imogen and Asher and they do not get a happy ending

    06/16/2021 14:28
  • cmcrobb

    I'm so over Imogen and Asher! They are so selfish. They didn't even give their mates a chance. It would be another thing if they at least tried with their mates. The council may not doing anything to them due to favoritism but I hope all the other packs hear about what they are doing and break all alliances with them. they need to know their selfish actions have consequences. Asher is a bad alpha and Imogen will be a terrible Luna...she wasn't destined to be one!

    06/16/2021 13:32
  • Jess Renee

    nice! glad the alpha and beta had the final words to Asher and Imogene. I’m glad more people are telling them they are being selfish dicks. the beta is right he deserves better. now if only V could get her own rejection instead of being strung along and kept away until Asher needs an heir. smh

    06/16/2021 13:30
  • Mawusi Ford

    Great job author. I’m actually a fan of Imogen and Asher. I hope they can stay together. There parents put them together as children in hopes they were mates. so what they aren’t mates but love each other deeply. they have been together since childhood leave them alone and let them be happy those people who are bashing the author you can always stop reading no need to be rude. this is the authors story and she can tell how she see it.

    06/16/2021 12:53
  • Jasmine Hazelbaker

    ok I hate Asher and imogen … to the point I don’t even really want to read it. I hope they break up n their mates reject them.

    06/16/2021 11:57
  • Trisha Reynolds

    please when is the next update

    06/15/2021 00:30
  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    yessssd! I knew it! beta ... Imogen we will see howbit turns out. but I am voting Imogen can't handle the mate pull and Asher looks like a fool because he basically reject Viola.

    06/13/2021 03:21
  • Diana Silburn

    I just can’t stand Imogen. they both annoyed me how much they fight to be together and they aren’t even meant to be I don’t think she will be able to fight the pull with her mate. why can’t they just accepted it and be with who they really want to be with

    06/12/2021 01:28
  • Trisha Reynolds

    oh boy hurry with next chapter can’t wait to see if she rejects him

    06/11/2021 13:25
  • Melissa Cotis

    ah hahahahahhaaaaaaaa!!!! oh man! how hilarious!!!

    06/11/2021 08:08
  • ingrida dapkute

    finally things moving somewhere!!!! can’t wait for next chapter !!

    06/11/2021 08:00
  • Jasmine Hazelbaker

    be great if viola n the beta get together ! then Asher n imogen can keep each other bc neither is really happy... why would Asher be a cutter if so? n imogen... well she is a whiny lil Karen

    06/11/2021 03:23
  • EMC

    let’s see how she fights it off? will she reject him or will he reject her? will she be able to resist at all?

    06/11/2021 00:39
  • Jess Renee

    I knew it!!

    06/11/2021 00:15
  • miasiacheyenne

    ha! yessss I knew it. I hope tho blows up for them big time

    06/11/2021 00:10
  • Nita

    I’m glad Imogen’s mate has appeared! teach Asher a lesson!

    06/10/2021 23:21
  • Sniderin

    Muah ha ha!!! Bye Imogen!!!!

    06/10/2021 23:17
  • Trisha Reynolds

    when is the next update

    06/10/2021 13:00
  • kitty5127

    how does Ajax know Brennon had sex with his “pack mate”?

    06/09/2021 03:15
  • Jasmine Hazelbaker

    ok I hope this starts moving with a good plot now...

    06/07/2021 20:34
  • Anthony

    Is the Beta going to be Imogen's mate?

    06/06/2021 03:37
  • miasiacheyenne

    I hope the visiting Beta is Imogen’s mate

    06/05/2021 18:20
  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    finally this story plot is gonna go somewhere! patiently waiting for another update, I hope you can update a bit more frequently or at least post a couple chapters at a time, it is an agonizing long wait between chapters. But I do appreciate you and the story yiu have been building!

    06/05/2021 15:46
  • Reader-092364

    I feel so bad for viola. I hope she is not made the villain here. I would love to read her pov’s. I’m so mad at the way Asher and Imogen are acting. I also hope that the beta is her mate.

    06/05/2021 12:08
  • Nita

    Bring on the Beta mate!!!!!!

    06/05/2021 09:13
  • ingrida dapkute

    fingers crossed beta is her mate and she dumps Asher!! it’s harsh but he deserves it, small hope that her mate won’t accept her either ... can’t wait for next chapter!!!

    06/05/2021 07:53
  • EMC

    beta is her mate... see if she can resist.. feel like she might be weak or he might reject her...

    06/05/2021 07:49
  • Diana Silburn

    I feel that imogen mate is his cousin Beta. I am not happy how they want to be together and don’t care about there mates feelings like the moon goddess gave you that mate for a reason, not for you to come and decide you just don’t want it and worse yet is your sisters other half don’t be selfish

    06/05/2021 04:53
  • Simone Kitzinger

    I hate them both right now

    06/05/2021 04:49
  • Ona M. Lester

    i don't think viola will be a villain I bet she will save all them dumb s.o.b's who seam to have their heads in the clouds.....

    06/05/2021 04:35
  • Jess Renee

    oh snap. I have a feeling Imogenes mate is about to show up! muhuhahaha hoping I’m right. I feel like all this is going to blow up in Ashers face. Or.... we’re setting up for a double rejection and V and the beta can be second chance mates and the other two can get on with playing house 🤷🏼‍♀️ I hate that I can’t like those two. They remind me of spoiled kids always getting their way not caring about anything else.

    06/05/2021 00:25
  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    Viola can't be the villain! its just not fair! viola has had it hard while Imogen has been treated as a princess. Asher self harms so is he truly happy or is part of his heart missing???

    06/03/2021 16:36
  • EMC

    update?

    06/02/2021 23:49
  • Ravinder Thandi

    the female lead(s) are so demeaning. who does that and who wants someone who treats them like that. this story is so repetitive as well. you get updates that don't mean anything, just re-hashing the same thing over and over

    05/31/2021 20:56
  • Viola Cordell

    I understand they're in love. yet Imogen should of told her sister as Asher. I hope you don't make viola the villain. pls after my sister did that and had my mate I wouldn't want him with me thinking of her. I hope something bites them in the ass.

    05/30/2021 22:08
  • miasiacheyenne

    the more I read the more I get pissed off with Asher and Imogen

    05/30/2021 18:36
  • ᛋᚫᚺᚱᚫ ᚹᚫᛚᛏᛖᚱᛋ

    I like how he reminisced about his childhood with Imogen, but boy it was a short chapter!

    05/30/2021 16:28
  • Reader-312060

    when would chapter 81 be available..? respectfully please don’t say tomorrow!

    05/30/2021 05:41
  • EMC

    when is the next update

    05/29/2021 16:19