The Unwanted Alpha Comments
Kimberly Renee Scott
I love this. But wish more chapters would be added. I'mso sorry for your loss.
06/18/2020 20:51
Angel Fairey
I love the book but it would be nice to have more then a few chapters on a update. Having to spend my money just to wait makes me lose interest.
06/18/2020 19:43
Eva Jones
what is the update schedule? I am completely hooked.
06/18/2020 18:30Amy Sendelbach
More Updates please i need to know what happens
06/18/2020 17:59T Rich
How many times a day does everyone check for updates? Me: EVERYTIME I pick up my phone 😂
06/18/2020 13:12angie lawson
this book isn't over is it 😭
06/18/2020 09:31
Charlotte leeke
Great read so far. Really enjoying the storyline, looking forward to the chapters to come. While I'm waiting I have started on your other books. ♥️
06/17/2020 22:53
Hiro Hamada
this is all the same with other books, just the same erotica
06/17/2020 15:31Tez A Lee
really enjoying the book xx
06/17/2020 06:54Michelle Dawn Brookfield
the phrase is not "mumbled under his NOSE" but rather "mumbled under his BREATH" instead easy mistake.
06/17/2020 00:36Hayley Webster
Hey, just got to say I absolutely LOVE this book💜 Made me never want to put down my phone or do anything but continue reading, even purchased 3000 coins so I could read it in one go😂 Saving the remaining 900+ for when you update💜
06/16/2020 20:09
Marquita Douglas
amazing book I can’t wait to read more🙌🏽😊👍🏽
06/16/2020 20:04Michelle Dawn Brookfield
you often use the word felt where the word feel should be
06/16/2020 19:48
JenJen16
how do I get the new chapter updates? I did the little switch for notifications but I never get them 😭😭😭😭😭
06/16/2020 17:11Melissa Smith Skinner
how long do I have to wait for a chapter. I downloaded this app because THIS story cought my attention from Facebook. I've never read a book like this through an app. I'm new to this and would like to know how long I have to wait.
06/16/2020 16:49
K. K. Winter
‼ PLEASE READ THIS ‼
06/16/2020 09:55
Destiny Skye
I LOVE this book! The suspense is killing me! I love the characters and feel for Eros. I love how this story is written. I will never tired of this book.
06/16/2020 05:23Yori Kaori Rika Sora
can't wait for the next chapter I'm so glued to this book I wonder if I can buy it some where so I can read it over and over again
06/16/2020 05:10Lacey Knox Ledlow
this one is taking a strange turn! hope they’re back together before too much time passes.
06/16/2020 04:43
Shayla Arhin
grandma Mary clearly a fighter lol
06/16/2020 02:38
Maria Ferreira
o love all your book I read, just finished the Luna queen 👸🏻 ❤️❤️❤️
06/16/2020 02:37
Tabitha Balderas
I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS BOOK. I AM SORRY YOU LOST A RELATIVE YOU HAVE MY DEEPEST CONDOLENCES.
06/16/2020 02:08Holly Trejo
do we have to purchase to read more than the first few chapters? Does the author get the $ that we spend on opening new chapters? just downloaded last night and I am curious how this app works. can we just buy an entire story?
06/16/2020 01:20
Tiffani Howell
I am enjoying this book
06/16/2020 01:04Cyra Wolfire
omg was this 3 updates in one day??!!! my heart stopped beating for a minute!!
06/16/2020 00:58Michelle Muirhead
hi any ideas when the next chapter is coming plz I stayed up all day and nite reading this yesterday and completely gutted it finished the way it has so far. xx
06/15/2020 17:29
Nikki Mo
sooooooo anxious .... on the edge .... can't wait for more
06/15/2020 12:02Nikki Mo
no no no...find a way to contact eros. ....ahhhhhhhhhh
06/15/2020 11:12
Ileana Aymat
Is this book completed? I'm on the last chapter and freaking out! Its so freaking good!
06/15/2020 04:53
PriscillaPink
hoping the watchman still has his eyes on eve and that rogue
06/15/2020 03:08
Mrs.Hyde
I knew she was pregnant and I knew his mom couldn't be trusted. This really makes me mad.
06/15/2020 01:37Kara Gist
can we get like 10 more chapters at once
06/15/2020 01:19Mauricia Case
do you have a social media that we can follow? where you post update schedules/interact with your fans?
06/14/2020 21:57HK21
I can’t wait for more! I hope u are staying healthy and happy. thank you for the good entertainment 💕
06/14/2020 21:04Angela Little
I'm so sorry for your loss
06/14/2020 19:47
Eiyah
omfg I knew it. I freaking love this story so much. I can’t stop reading and rereading so I catch all the details. I applaud you for your writing skills. it’s so immersive that I’m sitting on the edge of my seat with each update.
06/14/2020 18:23Taina Iosefo
Oh man Luna better stop acting like this. why does she hate Eros her son so much??? I’m glad he did that. She keeps playing games with his life, his love, his mate and unborn pup. I was wondering if Eve would get pregnant with how much sex they had. hahaha Can’t wait for the upcoming chapters!! 🥰
06/14/2020 17:35
CTD
Thoroughly OBSESSED with this book-such good content and detail-I can only hope this might be a movie in the future. Just a thought 😊
06/14/2020 01:53Reader-588076
i can’t wait for more chapters!!!!!!! i’m stuck in suspence!!!!!!!!!
06/14/2020 01:35zireonda pando
omg is she pregnant??😄
06/13/2020 06:12Amanda Bowman
i was reading chapter 16 and now its just blank. ps looove the story so far
06/13/2020 06:11Bethany Watters
what is the first book in the Alpha series?
06/13/2020 01:50Ashley Brown
I am in love with this book.
06/12/2020 23:10Bri Evans
This book is my favorite of all the Werewolf novels I've read. I love criminal types of books but recently started reading this type of book. I've only read 9 so far but this 10th one is by far the best. I would love to hear more from the human Grandmother but otherwise the story is perfect. I love Mary. Eve is like an onion you have to peel her to get to the best part of her. The luna is definitely up to something but I cant speculate what it is yet. I hope she let's him mate her fully soon. I'm excited. Thank you for this excellent story.
06/12/2020 08:56
Shay Brown
Absolutely love this story!
06/11/2020 17:13Taina Iosefo
WTH... why does it end like that. what do the Luna see or hear???? What’s going on???
06/11/2020 02:01Sofia Lizbeth Fraijo Nuñez
cómo puedo en español
06/11/2020 01:30Elva Rangel
how often does this update?
06/10/2020 20:55Mrs.Hyde
Curious as to the real reason the mom changed so quickly? And I don't get how even Eve herself trust the mom so easily after she tried to lure her to her death. I don't blame Eros for his mistrust when hes had years and years to deal with the disgust and neglect from his own mom. I don't think that should be something so eastly forgotten.
06/10/2020 19:41
Christina Polidore
I love it!!!
06/10/2020 16:00Diosana Tugade
getting hook I'm started loving the story
06/10/2020 15:03Christie Banister
I love this book.
06/10/2020 02:46
Millicent Crooks
loving this so far more chapters please pretty please
06/10/2020 00:05Tara Hogenbirk
when will the next update be??
06/09/2020 21:51Amy Sendelbach
sorry one more question are you books only on this app?
06/09/2020 20:05Amy Sendelbach
i love this book so far. i am on edge waiting for more chapters. i think i have hit the next chapter at 15 times in the laat 2 days. hope you are able to do more chapters soon. Sorry for the lost of your loved prayers sent your way to help you get thur it
06/09/2020 20:02Chantal Bronwyn Phillips
love this book. finished all chapters in a day lol. you are talented. I cant wait for the next chapters plssss ☺️ I would buy the paperback books definitely.
06/09/2020 17:38Sunny Brunt
I just started reading this one it got meinterested. love books that hook you in the first chapter. great writing.
06/09/2020 02:45Maria Ferreira
more chapter pleaseee 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
06/09/2020 01:53Ashley Brown
I love it. I can not wait for more chapters
06/09/2020 00:36
Cristin Ronqvist
Love this storie so mutch and cant wait for more chapters please update soon agen ❤️👌🌹 Great work and well wrighting, amazing 🥰
06/08/2020 22:03
Keva Gadomski
I’m going insane m, where is the update 🥴 I can’t get enough of this book.
06/08/2020 15:27
Estefania077
holy crap this book is like 50 shades of grey it needs a movie lmao!!
06/08/2020 12:27Jen Courter
Seriously get someone, anyone, to edit this. The glaring mistakes make this book almost painful to read.
06/08/2020 11:53Danielle Early
Azra?
06/07/2020 16:40
ahar40w
great story
06/07/2020 15:33Nikki Mo
all caught up. now the waiting game. she is almost talking about feeling and everything but not quite I want her to fully embrace him so they can face all the other problems that I'm sure are in store
06/07/2020 14:17Nikki Mo
Luna is evil....even now....she is going to say things without knowing. ...btw...I didn't finish the chapter I'm in...but eros needs to explain the luna is evil...even if acting nice right
06/07/2020 09:57Mrs.Hyde
Well worth the wait
06/07/2020 01:44Keva Gadomski
omg I need more.
06/06/2020 23:47
Flawless
ok, I think this book has the wrong name lol.... lol. it should have been EROS THE SEX GOD 😝🥵🥵🥵. amazing again ❤️❤️❤️❤️
06/06/2020 23:15Shayla Arhin
so long live the Queens not the last chapter right? read the book in 24 hours was a great read that you. I also im confused about who the figure was that appeared I? the room then disappeared. I dont feel that was explained
06/06/2020 21:59ewallace821
been on edge waiting for a new chapter to come out can’t wait. loving this book!
06/06/2020 20:36Ashley Brown
is there a new update coming out soon?
06/06/2020 19:50Taina Iosefo
Omg omg.... this is so getting better. why does Eve not except Eros... he’s been treated different from those that should’ve lived him but respected by those he met growing up. So can’t wait for the upcoming chapters. Love love love this book!! ❤️
06/06/2020 05:23Nikki Mo
for 13 issues I needed to know what happened a forced kiss, caused her that much pain...and she was across the boundary. .. wonder how this goes
06/05/2020 21:09Nikki Mo
ok seriously every free moment I have I'm reading this story. I was called back to work so I can't get as far as fast as I want....it's sooooooooooo gooood. .... thank you for writing
06/05/2020 20:42Kristen Kuyper
there such great stories
06/05/2020 02:53
giselle caraballo
are you writing other books?
06/04/2020 21:32
brandi hogg
I read this whole book so far in 24 hours I hope you update soon
06/04/2020 07:13Autumn Dancer
This is AMAZING!!! So good! You're awesome
06/04/2020 04:39
Laura B
This book is soo good. I started reading it yesterday and I've finished every chapter so far. I can't wait for more to come!
06/04/2020 01:16Kara Gist
I have also already read Alpha Azreal and the alphas daughter cannot wait for more
06/03/2020 22:52Kara Gist
I am truly in love with this book at this point. the story line is so different from other werewolf stories. I can see that this will probably go on for a while and I cannot wait for more!
06/03/2020 22:51Cyra Wolfire
omg newest update was amazing! I’m glad I re-read the whole thing again there were parts I misunderstood so now as this update rolls out I’m so in love with them stronger then ever god I love Eros/ares mmmmmhhhmmm can’t get enough need like 10 updates a day and then a second book when this is finished lolz
06/03/2020 20:31JenJen16
I spent $ to read this book which I never have before and let me tell you I don’t regret the decision xD I read thru all ur chapters in one day
06/03/2020 16:27
SUPER CRAZY
I hope this is not the end and more chapters will follow. Still need to know when Eros saw Eve first, as it feels like he knew her before the mating game. Also who scared Eve in the apartment and what had caused her the cheating pain.
06/03/2020 13:02Zoany P East
why the chapters can not unlocked for me to read the story please unlock it for me
06/03/2020 11:55Tina Haynes Richmond
great read
06/03/2020 08:45Neida E. Rodriguez
I really like this just finished all of it in one day
06/03/2020 02:06Nikki Mo
so I thought it would be a "really good" idea to read some of the chapter titles... never read the chapter title. then I was like I need to understand the inner titled "little cheating fucker" completely out of context just going by the other titles... worst idea EVER. now I'm back to my place some 13 chapters back.... I hate myself for doing that
06/03/2020 00:02
buse bulut
im already sooo ready for the next chapter!!! can not wait!!
06/02/2020 23:31Maria Ferreira
I need more chapter pleaseeeeee 🙏🏻 I love love love this history very much
06/02/2020 17:50Alyssa Downing
I get so excited to see this story update. Highlight of the day
06/02/2020 16:27
Clarisa Acosta
I would like to read your alpha series but want to read them in order. can you tell me what that is?
06/02/2020 00:23Nikki Mo
again in the middle of a chapter and I have to comment. ...I hope he comes to his senses. ...
06/01/2020 21:56Nikki Mo
ooooo....nooooooo.....I'm on the edge here....thank you for writing
06/01/2020 20:15Karen Bailey
I am enjoying your book. How often do you plan to provide updates?
06/01/2020 20:01Nikki Mo
awwwww....why....tear....needed top CV comment didn't even finish ch 8. almost like I don't want to...sad face.... most push through... I'm really liking the writing and the chapters
06/01/2020 19:38Rita D Barnette
completely caught up in 2 days! excited for an update but take your time!! great read ☺️
06/01/2020 06:08
