The Unwanted Alpha Comments

Mz.thea

who was it that grabbed her . and said there you are???

Zeta84

the author is talented and creative to come up with such stories but her style of story telling is pretty bad, even irritating and annoying at times. hope she improves her story telling style. good luck.

Maria McRill

I dont get his mask.. Why does he have it? How does it look? How mutch of his face does it cover? Apperently not his mouth if he kan kiss?

Nattiya Thatset

this was really good and different that most werewolf books!

Ta1sha

I don’t trust the luna

Sonia Vaughn- Mcmiller

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm,.

Amanda L B

I’d like to know the order of these books please? 1st 2nd 3rd 4th and so on?

Lacey Skilling

could u tell me the books in this series so I can start them im already done with the other series I can't seem to put ur books down great job and doesn't matter what others say as long as ur heart is leading u in the right direction after all u did get to publish them that speaks louder than words 🙂

Kym Rampton

I have loved reading this story. but this is the second time now it has removed itself from me being able to read. This time I got to chapter 32 went to unlock the next chapter to nothing.

Jasmin Prunkl

I like this story but it sucks to me that everyone is keeping her and the baby away from Eros. I just don't get why??? Why would he hurt his baby??? He wants a family with Eve!!! Please... I'm scared that they never get back together or at least on good terms or whatsoever... I understand zhat Eros enemies aim for her and the baby to hurt him but that's no readon to keeop them away from him. He has a right to know... at least let them have contact by phone or letters or sth... maybe not tell him where they are... I'm scared to go on reading...

Charlotte Moore

I love this story but Its very inconsistent. It describes the history and love between characters then later the same characters are actually in an abusive/adulterous relationship or the relationship never existed? and where do the cousin & Gran fit in as relatives? Is the cousin related to the Luna? Surely the gran at least would be aware of the truth?

Bella Jersey 2

Eros life has not been all rainbow and unicorns

Bella Jersey 2

I swear something about him makes me want to pass out. I’m seeing if Eva is wanting to move. it didn’t give her any time line. can he force her?

Addison Winter

😮 wow, I am 😳 blushing. I love it. Great job.

Nicole Couchot

love ❤️

Olya Alexandrovna

do they ever mate? can't keep reading but curious? which chapter?

olimpia robinson

The story has absolutely no flow, a lot of parts make no sense and I found more bad grammar and misspellings thank in my kids homework.

Jenny Meador-Killinger

it doesn't make sense that He could not protect her. why would she leave and join jaxon? have him take her to were Eros was. I hope they find her quick and it doesnt mess with the story to long

Dusty Dakota

I would enjoyed the story a whole lot more if it was more organized. There are points in the storyline that didn't make sense. It was all over the place. I would recommend rereading the previous chapter before continuing to write the next. There are way too many things that were forgotten to even mention just one.

Alyssa

Eve is a jackass. She knows that there’s danger always lurking and the dumb asd always runs away as soon as there’s a problem with her mate. seriously??

Rule 30

spoiler, chapter 8: I don't get how he could prey on her the same way she almost got raped, with the tongue licking and all, and turned her on with that. this makes no sense in character construction and feels a bit weird imo

Rule 30

the weird mix of past and present temps in the writing is really putting me out of the story so far

Marisa Engelbrecht

Like the novel so far

Reese Kinkade

dear my Lord your very sexy beast vampire he sexy

Stephanie Schneider

I'm enjoying the story so far, but Eve seems too innocent for words. she was nearly raped and spent hours in the shower scrubbing herself raw, but she went to join a mating ceremony anyway? she should have stayed home, because she was not attacked Because the idiots were werewolves, she was in the wrong place at the wrong time, could have happened just as easily with human males just the same.

Bella Jersey 2

4: I am really scared for Eve. please don’t use the bond like a magical band-aide please

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 3: I don’t know if she can trust him or anyone. she was almost ra.ped there’s no way to sanitize that

Anastasia Ruiz

Wow!!! You've managed to make me hate this bish in the first 10 chapters...bravo

Wendy Sparks

its ok

Yael Oman

The story is all over the place, the main characters behavior is inconsistent, I just couldn't bring my self to continue reading it. So many commas (,) out of place too.. One minute he has a mask and it seems like a big deal, then it's as if it has been forgotten, then mask again for some unknown reason...

Bella Jersey 2

2: the mother is disgusting

Bella Jersey 2

2: is this the adult version of hunger games?

Bella Jersey 2

1: who was that mask stanger that gave me a raincoat and save from psy.cho shifters?

Felna Rebuelta

just finish chapter 3

Joyce Klager

I really do love the book, but Eve's mindset is getting so confusing and frustrating... The part when Eros is speaking with Balthazar about the coronation they talk about Ero's desire to have pups and be a father the only objection from Eve is that she's just not ready but generally wants pups. But yet when she finds out she pregnant and the Luna betrays her again. Instead of finding a way back to Eros like she should be doing like any logical or smart person would do since she should already know that Eros wants children. She decides to run away with a rogue who was originally ordered to kill either her, the child, or both. That she's known all but five minutes to have and raise the child on her own. When she can just find a way back to Eros bring the rogue with her where Eros, Balthazar, and Mary can protect her and the baby. The Luna and Alpha Xavier seem to be the only threat so once Eve gets back to him they could easily get rid of the threats since they're now royal. Then Eve can just convince Eros, Balthazar, and Mary to help the rogue return to his tribe and family since ya know, they're the freaking rulers of the whole damn place. But instead she decides to run a way and take the only chance Eros has to be a father.... yeah realy smart choices. But I guess you got to keep the drama going somehow. Because if common sense decisions were being made from the jump the story would probably end a lot quicker.

Ms Money

action is awesome the lilgirls wise

Christine Garam

I liked the first third, but after that the story goes the way the romance does, making less and less sense and being painfully rushed.

Ms Money

is this your sex or someone else lol just to real

Victoria Samulde

so far great storyline

Ms Money

great storyline

Tamara Hicks

ugh with the Luna and the failure to recognize danger

Kerry Smales

love this story, I’m up to book 3 now can’t wait to continue the journey.

Toni Wilson

so far

Tamara Hicks

This girl...its like the chick in the horror movie who keeps falling and screaming whose there

Jo Long

liked what I've read so far but it would cost 20 quid to unlock the whole book and I can read similar books on amazon for free!

Anna Meadows

l love the writer and love the story..

Natural Tendency

I like the story I do. but there's so much contradiction going on that I'm starting to be unable to ignore it.

Wcha

she actually came down 😒smh

Jasmine Hazelbaker

love this so much!! I reread it all the time

Reader-736702

This book reads like incel-dribble. The dialogue is unrealistic and gross, often enough and the woman lack any real sense of agency. The premise seemed promising but the longer I read, the more I cringe.

Lobos Fantasma

I believe she knows he saved her from being raped because of the mask. She just never saw his face

Shelby Williams

I’m super confused about this mask. I feel like that could be left out. but I’m not done so we shall see

Fari

I’m starting to feel like I’m missing a scene within the storyline.

Patricia Sue Reed

I thought it was strange that the beginning, how she all most got taped and then he showed up to safe her.

Tina LaVaque

I really like the book so far. I want to keep reading. ESPECIALLY to find out what is behind the mask

Shreelagna Mohanty

I came to the end of the book but I still don't know that Eros show his face or nah while having Sex with eve

Si Shra

yooooo FUCK the mom 😤 wtf

lolliedear

I loved the storyline enough to push through the poor grammar, but there seemed to be a lot of slut shaming and parts of the story that didn’t seem to line up quite right that made it confusing.

Cyra Wolfire

I love this story soooo much! I’ve read it like 10 times and I still cry and laugh and wish some things were different but all in all I love there love!

Armida Cudney

I'm glad that Eros stood up to his parents.

Stacey Jones

so cringe.

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 1: let’s see where your adventures takes us

Shreelagna Mohanty

did no one tell her that if Eros puts his D in herb deep inside then that's called taking virginity😑

Lucille Wickliffe-Ewetuga

chap. 63. aww she feels used? shes been using Eros the whole time. she wants total fidelity from him but when he want the commitment in return shes not ready. but some other woman wants him , she plays victim.You either want him or you dont.

Annette Blossom

love it so far

Tabitha Kinstler

she leaves without telling him shes with child because of danger. Shes the one who keeps putting herself in danger. wow

Tabitha Kinstler

so your mom treated you badly and tried to kill me...well I'm still going to trust and go hang out her. really??

Kayelyn Talbot

such a good story!

dr.penguin

her mom is tripping

R.L. Marcelain

You should connect the books. Have Eros meet his Grandfather Azrael or Alpha Snow on Katos side of the family. Cause it is looking like the books are connected. Lukas was the Hybrid King and Kato (Granddaughter of the Alpha Snow Blood Warrior Pack). It was stated that the Blood Warrior pack is Lycanthrope blood. Seriously people read "The Alphas daughter". In the end she becomes queen, her mate is a Hybrid King and their son is named "Eros".

R.L. Marcelain

did anyone realize that the ghostly figure that reached out to grab Eve and said "There you are" when she was sleeping in the bed, might have been "Darius" or Wrath from the second book? He did mention about following Eve while she was pregnant. the book never said when exactly she got pregnant and they did start having unprotected sex right before she felt the Heat. I just realized that after reading the book again that ghostly male voice that said there you are and tried to grab her but was never mentioned again and seem like someone took her photo off of the bedroom dresser. how possible is it that that is Wrath??

Denise Scott

I love this book!!

Donna Blackerby

I'm really enjoying this book..i just started and its drawing me in.

dragon 134172

like this story so far

Dianne Duncan

Good story just not long enough

WENDY RODRIGUEZ

how do I unlock the next chapter

yowassup

NOOOO LET HER EXPLAIN PLEASE AHHH THE DRAMTIC IRONY IS KILLING ME AHHHHH

Alan Mcdonald

yowassup

yoooo wait what omg this book ahhh whats happening this is so exciting

yowassup

Geez the tea is too hot, someone turn off this kettle.

yowassup

im ngl that chapter made me feel bad for Luna

yowassup

wtf just happened-

yowassup

i don't trust the cousin

Diana Powell

good so far

yowassup

eros be trippin😂

yowassup

he said he would leave😡

yowassup

😡😡all the homies hate eve's mother

Kathy Williams

this is the first time reading this book and so far it sounds very interesting...

Reader-327298

Remind me who Anto and Baka are ? it’s been awhile since I have finished the book - and just came back and read the Halloween bonus chapters

Eric plays

Why just why do everyone of these books have to keep the fathers from being around where there mates give birth to their babies. Its getting ridiculous that the fathers cant see the babies till they are 1 or 3 years of age. How fair is that for the babies fathers its bull crap and its getting old

Eric plays

I'm sick of just about every book where babies are born without there fathers being around. That stuff needs to stop. Fathers should be able to see there children be born too

Eric plays

Personally I think that Eve is a bitch and that Eros deserves so much better then her. All she does is play with his emotions and it's crazy. He deserves to be treated better then the way that Eve treats him.

Modiggy

This is a VERY good story but confusing. The flashbacks aren’t recognized, I didn’t know that he killed his mother and it wasn’t proofread. it would be SO much more awesome if those things were fixed!

justine sabol

Also, why does her being afraid make him even more aroused??

justine sabol

I dont think I like how being "mated" means being fucked in a cruel way. Being mated to your mate means being marked and completed through sex...hmm..

Vernante Thelusma

omg it’s finished!!!

Lana Braun

I do not like how little you get to read before you have to buy coins.

justine sabol

So is he still wearing his mask to hide his face? Like whats going on there, are we ever going to find out?

Rebecca Robinson

why does each conversation drag out so long.

Rebecca Robinson

Also why does he always expect the worse from her?