The Unwanted Alpha Comments

  • lunar kiss

    noooooo. final chapter, ain’t ready for this story to end😭😭😭😭😭

    09/27/2020 22:36

  • AstarteLor

    ok, check 57.... how does he not notice the cheating hickey's????

    09/27/2020 08:03

  • lunar kiss

    what does the bad moon means?

    09/26/2020 22:04

  • lunar kiss

    who else want Luna dead?

    09/26/2020 19:48

  • lunar kiss

    noooo why did ahe run away!!! why about eros!!! he could protect her!!!!

    09/26/2020 17:50

  • Tamara Myers

    CH 62 actually made me cry! I’m in love with this book.

    09/26/2020 16:23

  • Devonie Boyer

    absolutely fell in love with each and every character! amazing writing!

    09/26/2020 02:52

  • Ma Bituin Defensor Babasol

    nice

    09/25/2020 12:29

  • Amy D

    I like the story so far but the incomplete and confusing sentences are ruining it. Most of the stories I've read on here have gramatical errors but they don't interfere too much with the story. Sadly, the errors in this one make it impossible to understand what I am reading most od the time.

    09/25/2020 05:52

  • Tamara Myers

    I’m completely obsessed with the way you write and how you take us through the story! I love the bond between Eros and Eve. I’m on CH30 I started this book last night. I’m hooked. I hope there are more stories about this couple in the future! ❤️

    09/25/2020 04:54

  • lunar kiss

    can humas get hazed?

    09/24/2020 23:08

  • QuonnieH

    I really enjoyed this story...can’t wait to read the sequel

    09/24/2020 01:07

  • lunar kiss

    chapter 30 left me like.. wtf?? lol I didn’t understand much hehe

    09/23/2020 23:23

  • lunar kiss

    i want xavier and luna pay so bad!!!!

    09/23/2020 23:12

  • lunar kiss

    and what or why ots so scary if eros gets more powerful?

    09/23/2020 18:28

  • lunar kiss

    i still dont understand why in the beginning eros was wearing a mask to hide himself

    09/23/2020 18:27

  • lunar kiss

    omg im loving it. i think im going to end up totally broke

    09/23/2020 15:34

  • lunar kiss

    who’s silver fox?

    09/23/2020 15:28

  • Tiffany

    Best one I've read yet!

    09/22/2020 23:06

  • Scarlett Rubinovich

    what’s your name account on Wattpad

    09/21/2020 14:30

  • Scarlett Rubinovich

    May I know what is your account name on Wattpad please dear author?

    09/21/2020 14:30

  • Tina Marie Kreuser

    I love it wish I could afford to read more

    09/21/2020 01:37

  • Kim Almendarez

    Loved this book!!

    09/17/2020 22:21

  • Jessica Deal

    I read a couple of books on this site and when I was done I was stuck on deciding what book to read next and I must say I'm so far pleaseed with choosing this one I'm only on chapter 8 and already hooked this book is a absolute must read the author did an amazing job not only with the characters so far but the layout and the suspense behind every chapter just increases great work again I don't know how all this comment stuff works but mad props to the author you did a great job keep writing

    09/15/2020 16:30

  • DeeDee

    why do I have to pay for chapters I’ve read twice?

    09/15/2020 05:11

  • Terrie Richards Culpepper

    i can't find thw next book promise princess

    09/14/2020 13:40

  • Damara

    next chapter please

    09/13/2020 16:54

  • Joeanne tyrie

    Can you get this book anywhere else ??

    09/13/2020 13:54

  • nitlit80@yahoo.com

    I’m on chapter 72 and I LOVE this book! I think that it could easily be made into a series tv show. I can’t wait to see how the rest of it goes! 😃

    09/13/2020 00:45

  • gem lover2

    This ceremony is similar to a hunt, or tag but you both get to choose who catches you.

    09/09/2020 17:43

  • gem lover2

    If my mom ever acted like that I'd be hating her for blaming me for being put through something like that. I'd probably shut her out if she's yelling me.😡😠🤬

    09/09/2020 17:42

  • gem lover2

    I kinda like how this guy actually looked up to find her. I like how he asks for her to come down instead of just climbing up there trapping her. He seems nice how he cares about if she's hurt. ☺️

    09/09/2020 17:39

  • gem lover2

    Epic✌️

    09/09/2020 05:28

  • Chelsea Dixon

    I don't normally comment but this"book" is a money sponge" if you've paid this far please know that this book keeps dragging out, fyi

    09/08/2020 20:37

  • Rose SB

    If Claudia is such a “ good friend” to Eve, she sure is evilly plotting against her friend.

    09/08/2020 20:07

  • SolarFlare_Autobot

    what if I’m broke as hell and can’t send anything to my friends to get coins

    09/08/2020 07:12

  • Amanda smith

    can you tell me why my comment keeps being taken off of her i have a valid point please

    09/07/2020 20:45

  • Amanda smith

    i have read this book and payed to finish it , decided to read it again and it’s telling me i need to pay again if this correct ?

    09/07/2020 20:42

  • Amanda smith

    i have read this book once and payed to read it. thought i have a second read and it wants to charge me again

    09/07/2020 20:38

  • Asia Cwill

    How can I get this book for my kindle?

    09/07/2020 19:26

  • Katrina Kimmel

    octopus sticks 😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣

    09/06/2020 16:46

  • Reader-632567

    for the love of Christ y the hell would she go with his mother

    09/06/2020 14:55

  • Reader-632567

    could she be any more ditzy like the Luna tried to kill her yet here she is having a conversation in the streets as if she did not try to basically feed her to some creature 🤦‍♀️

    09/06/2020 14:50

  • Katrina Kimmel

    so now they are running from eros, not running from his mom! if she would just contact him at tell him everything this would all stop! he would kill or imprison his mother!

    09/06/2020 08:03

  • Reader-632567

    ok I don’t get the part we’re she said that she loved her human husband and would give anything to have him back and that he was wonderful and a loving father yet she hates her son who is half human it just not adding up

    09/06/2020 06:34

  • Brittinae Cyprian

    loved this book

    09/06/2020 04:43

  • Katrina Kimmel

    why is she so stupid that she won't trust her own mate! this makes me so angry! all she needed to do was get to him!

    09/06/2020 04:04

  • Leo18

    Okay ... I’m close to finishing the book, but I will preface that I’m not at the end yet. I am loving the story - the territories, the different creatures, etc. BUT I am so frustrated and confused as to why Eros can’t be near Eve. she’s obviously deteriorating bc he’s not around, and he’s only gaining more enemies bc he’s taking over territories to find her. It wasn’t some extreme pack-plan to destroy Eve ... it was one person Eros could have easily Killed and Eve straight up thought “Eros could never protect us.” AND she had the phone in her handddd and she didn’t call Eros. Eve’s lack of trust in him is the most hair-pulling-eye-gauging frustrating part of this book. I love sooo soo much about it - the building up of the chapters, the changing of points of view, yada yada (by now, the writer knows they have a good thing going here). BUT GEEZUS I want to slap Eve so.damn.hard. Why couldn’t she have even had the wolf take her to Eros’s house? He surely would have been rewarded with freedom then. UGH. End rant. Actually, PS if I was Eros, I would destroy that whole pack who “protected” her.

    09/05/2020 05:30

  • Reader-632567

    I like the book but I feel like to many thing are unanswered like they never mentioned her friend that was working with the Luna to try and kill her and also y does she hate her son so much y because his dad was a human I find that weird because in the book it says that she herself choose her first mate so it just does not make sense also if her son is a pure blood Lycan then that make her a lycan as well so also y keep her son from the throne...anyways ye these things make it confusing however I think the book is still good

    09/04/2020 14:43

  • Tenesha

    This book was so good. I read in 1 night.

    09/04/2020 10:41

  • Jessy Odorico

    wow your Book is amazing have you thought it through if i should translate it into german for you for wattpad? big kiss Jessy 😉

    09/02/2020 21:24

  • Belinda Meharg

    omg I loved reading this 😍 I was soo engrossed in it literally made me laugh and sent shivers through my body!!!

    09/02/2020 10:48

  • Jibike Bolarinwa

    Can you please read my book?

    09/01/2020 12:07

  • Reader-632567

    she hates her son for no reason

    08/31/2020 03:38

  • Reader-632567

    that girl is obsessed

    08/30/2020 18:56

  • Marcia Nicolasen

    this sucks nobody told me I had to pay anything now I have to pay to read

    08/30/2020 01:55

  • Kaylin Joye

    also! what was up with the invisible person grabbing Eve in the apartment? after that happened, nothing else was talked about or mentioned or revealed. was that a forgotten tid bit? was it Anto? who was it?!

    08/26/2020 00:43

  • Kaylin Joye

    but what was the explanation for her health after Eros found her?? what happened to the watchers?? I loved this book so much! but those were two answers I was left hanging with. did they make eve think she was eating but she wasnt? like what happened? what was up with the weirdness of the scar on her belly? doctors couldnt see it was a c section scar? I mean what the heck.

    08/25/2020 23:40

  • Hayley Davidson

    I reached up into somewhere in chapter 50 or over but now it’s showing I’ve only unlocked to chapter 3. So I have paid for all the chapters and I can’t remember which chapter (in the 50’s) I’m up too! has this happened to anyone else?

    08/25/2020 12:18

  • Melissa Scobee

    excellent and wanting more

    08/25/2020 10:10

  • Bonnie Mann

    enjoyed this book so far

    08/24/2020 20:33

  • ash

    I hate how he cheated left marks that were said to last a week he gets her and then fucks her butbhe doesn’t see the marks of his supposed cheating

    08/24/2020 14:18

  • Allison-and Sammy Bachman

    pretty interesting so far!

    08/23/2020 21:23

  • An_angel_21

    the story is amazing! thanks! can I ask you can we find this book in wattpat also?

    08/23/2020 16:25

  • JoJoDoll13

    Finished the book and it's awesome! Kudos to the Author, great job

    08/20/2020 12:05

  • Dawn Michels

    he is do going to regret what he is doing to her.

    08/19/2020 23:48

  • Lisa Michelle Tucker

    I am so sad for Eros

    08/19/2020 17:21

  • Priscilla Guerra

    why cnt i read anymore chapters ugh

    08/17/2020 23:13

  • writercarolinesmith

    really love this book great work would everyone do me a favour if you don't mind amd click my profile to read my first book give me feedback if you like it please?

    08/16/2020 21:57

  • Jessica Kitts-Harr

    your book is sooooo good thanks for writing such a intriguing book!

    08/16/2020 17:15

  • Kelly Jennings

    so a question ... who is his human grandmother that raised him if the entire family story was a lie?

    08/15/2020 02:25

  • Melissa Buchta

    I love the story, but Eve is driving me nuts. she makes the stupidest decisions over and over again. I'm trying to hang in there, but seriously 😐

    08/13/2020 13:38

  • Lucy Jordan nee Byrne

    do you get any free chapters? I’ve spent £6 so far, it’s starting to get expensive!

    08/12/2020 05:23

  • Larry

    chapter 16 sounds a lot like rape.

    08/09/2020 23:38

  • Gracemarie Yates

    I love how you use parts from when I’m gone 😊

    08/09/2020 21:57

  • Larry

    how is everyone pronouncing eros? I say [ear-Ross] is that right?

    08/08/2020 03:31

  • Larry

    wait...on chapter 6 and 7 is he wearing a mask?? I can’t make out if he is or if it’s a coat. if yes then how can they see his facial expressions

    08/08/2020 00:49

  • Sarah Bearer

    #Spoiler alert! I really loved this book! I really want to know more! did they have more kids? what happened to the watchers? I feel like Eve must have freed them. did Eros take the throne?? I need answers lol.

    08/07/2020 12:07

  • DanielleNala

    why can’t Eve and Eros just be truthful and honest with one another?! And why won’t he listen to his mate when she’s in fear... I know it ends up being pleasurable for her but so disrespectful and him always dominating her harshly.... but in saying all that I am intrigued to keep reading to see if it comes out and works together for them.

    08/07/2020 10:00

  • Fia Gab

    I’m new to this and I see a new and interesting story to read🤔 based off the comments here I’m going to like this 🤗😊

    08/05/2020 20:08

  • Jennifer Sims

    I am really enjoying this book

    08/05/2020 01:31

  • Jannae Pascual

    I love the book, but how is it so expensive I have already spent 1,000 coins on it. not sure if should keep spending to finish it. Are you selling at a top seller price at book store $30aus?

    08/04/2020 10:08

  • Taylor Jones

    so far I love this story can't wait to read the rest of it

    08/04/2020 07:19

  • Chantal Phillips

    all my chapters are locked again after I paid and read the book . I should be able to go read the book again. I already paid for it. 🙁

    08/03/2020 16:46

  • Joy Niy

    it’s the rape for me 🤢

    08/03/2020 03:37

  • Sheilay

    beautiful story

    08/02/2020 18:37

  • Christine Manning

    I am hooked! normally I am reading several books at once, but once I started this one I have let the others slide the last two days! can’t wait to see how this wraps up!

    08/02/2020 02:17

  • Sheilay

    yea

    08/01/2020 00:18

  • Sheilay

    the plot thickens

    07/31/2020 20:55

  • Sheilay

    wow, they need to communicate definitely!

    07/31/2020 05:07

  • Sheilay

    I hope Claudia gets what is coming to her as well as Euos mother

    07/31/2020 04:02

  • Sheilay

    what is sad is he never gave her a chance to explain, he jumped to conclusions.

    07/30/2020 18:48

  • Sheilay

    ughhhh why

    07/30/2020 16:09

  • Reader-649947

    how does this work? do I actually have to buy coins to read the rest?

    07/30/2020 06:26

  • Sheilay

    I do not like Eve’s so called friend, with friends like that who needs enemies, I sure hope the Luna kills her! I hope Eve sees thru her friends lie in time to be with her mate!

    07/30/2020 04:30

  • Sheilay

    I’m so glad he’s there, love this book

    07/30/2020 04:03

  • Samantha Livinlife Henderson

    this is so far a good read

    07/30/2020 03:15

  • Sheilay

    awesome he told him!

    07/29/2020 06:31

  • Sheilay

    mmm interesting beginning

    07/29/2020 05:15

  • Tamara

    Why can't I read the next chapter?!?!? I finished reading chapter 16, then NOTHING! says it's loading then oops sorry try again later... So I did... & NOTHING AGAIN!!! WTF I need to finish this book 😭😭😭

    07/28/2020 08:56
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