The Unwanted Alpha Comments

  • momma bear

    oh my gosh I can’t wait until he figures out that’s his kid! :) the buildup to the family reunion is intense! such a smart little princess. thank you!! especially for the double update :D

    07/03/2020 07:12

  • Reader-254912

    such a great chapter I just can’t wait this is awesome πŸ‘

    07/03/2020 05:30

  • Reader-207821

    So hooked!!!! Next chapter me please!!

    07/03/2020 03:39

  • Mineliz Pham

    omg 😱 what a good turn out!!

    07/03/2020 02:55

  • Kimmy Zimmerman

    OH MY GOD YESSSS!!!! Let eve wake up with her kid and mate in the room all together 😳 eve is gonna lose it on the watchers, anto and crazies.

    07/03/2020 02:39

  • Melinda Burton

    I feel like Eve should know better then to think Eros would he could hurt his pup. that's all he's been wanting.

    07/03/2020 01:49

  • Melinda Burton

    they are all going to meet! it will be great!!!! please update I feel like a crazy person!!!

    07/03/2020 01:35

  • Amy Sendelbach

    i love this book. but i need more updates. Please.

    07/03/2020 00:22

  • Erika Wallace

    omg what a met up! πŸ’œπŸ’œ I just hope the watchers help her explain rather than kill Eros. love this book.

    07/02/2020 20:42

  • Reader-254912

    yessss I can’t wait fo eye next chapter πŸ™ŒπŸΌπŸ™ŒπŸΌπŸ™ŒπŸΌ

    07/02/2020 14:46

  • Nikki Mo

    aaaaaa..bbbbluppp.... speechless....they need to talk to each other. no need to hide her daughter anymore. tell him the danger and the fact of where and you stay...and straight up abduction of your mate without words...I get that your anxious and want her need you ..... uguushduh

    07/02/2020 12:37

  • Lilithrevised

    Druging Eve is the line for me. In my eyes Eros is irredeemable. No one who loves you drugs you and threatens to tie you to the bed to keep you with them. No excuse is good enough.

    07/02/2020 08:43

  • Kimmy Zimmerman

    oh my god!! finally she needs to tell him about ally ASAP cause those watchers are gonna be hunting her down to protect her. don’t want to mess with those crazies.

    07/02/2020 07:37

  • Kris Cooper

    head exploded....🀯🀯🀯😳 so good

    07/02/2020 04:59

  • Keva Gadomski

    omg don’t leave me hanging

    07/02/2020 03:59

  • Christina Depass

    so sorry for your loss your writing is superb and please know we will wait as loyal readers as long as it takes for the next chapter

    07/02/2020 03:58

  • Megan Urban

    I love this book and I'm dying for Eve to tell Eros the truth and get back together and everything be ok. Please tell them gwt back together I'm dying for another steamy scene from them.

    07/02/2020 02:52

  • Shayla Arhin

    omg is he crazy. he never even asked her side never let her explain

    07/02/2020 02:36

  • Candace Hays

    I need more!!!! that cant be how this chapter ends!! I really hope tomorrow gives something!. I've waited all day and now am in suspense!!

    07/02/2020 02:21

  • Ashley Brown

    omg I love it. I need more lol

    07/02/2020 02:20

  • Allira Turner

    I hope euros and eve meet soon

    07/01/2020 22:34

  • Sandy AuntSissy

    we need some new chapters please!

    07/01/2020 06:58

  • Monique Moses

    Your writing is awesome I COULDNT PUT IT DOWN IN STUCK . CANT WAIT OR MORE!!!!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜±πŸ˜±πŸ˜±

    07/01/2020 02:24

  • Cyra Wolfire

    omg yaaasss Eros trap her they think so alike I love it 🀣

    07/01/2020 01:58

  • Megan Crago

    At the end of chapter 79 You should jerk off... who was the unknown voice that spoke up? I hoped it was Anto, but that part wasnt brought back up

    06/30/2020 23:54

  • Anita DeLaHoz

    ..mmmm.mmmm.immjjjj...

    06/30/2020 23:28

  • Nikki Mo

    ahhhhhhh... 81....😭😒...Anto go get eros so they can TALK....ok just my rant as a real person....soooooo not telling you how to write the story.... can't wait to find out. thank you for writing n sharing

    06/30/2020 20:22

  • Nikki Mo

    sad that may didn't see or hear about eve... even if she thinks it may be her. and the impending doom of blood moon. I so want eros and eve back together. ..patiently waiting...not trying to be annoying. ..thank you for writing and sharing

    06/30/2020 19:58

  • Nikki Mo

    be a watcher...be a watcher.. I want the 2 back together so they can still face all the drama but together...

    06/30/2020 19:46

  • Eiyah

    I love Anto and the harpies.

    06/30/2020 01:23

  • Taina Iosefo

    Will Eros see Eve and his daughter soon?? Please please please tell me yes?? πŸ€—

    06/29/2020 22:32

  • Jessica Flowers Althoff

    When will new chapters come out? I’ve been so excited to read what happens next but it’s been days.

    06/29/2020 22:09

  • Candace Hays

    loving the story, when might the next update be?

    06/29/2020 20:41

  • Cynthia Cardenas

    I need an update 😭 lmfao this book is so good I'll be waiting not so patiently πŸ˜‚ 80 chapters down

    06/29/2020 18:11

  • Christina Kay Maynard

    when is the next update

    06/29/2020 16:50

  • Reader-945591

    cannot wait til the next update! I loved the last chapter.

    06/29/2020 16:21

  • Shlina Oxendine

    when is there going to be more added to this book!! I read the whole thing in one day!! I need more! πŸ₯°πŸ™ŒπŸ½

    06/29/2020 05:26

  • Robyn Wight

    Off to a good start

    06/29/2020 05:21

  • Robyn Wight

    Off to a good start

    06/29/2020 05:21

  • Kimmy Zimmerman

    oh my gosh lil baby is here. but I still miss Eros and eve being together 😭 I need them back together

    06/29/2020 01:09

  • jessica critcher

    loving it so far

    06/29/2020 00:47

  • Reader-210867

    I am really enjoying the story. but I swear I want to kick Eve’s ass for trusting people so blindly

    06/29/2020 00:41

  • mauzi2

    hahahahah I can’t deal with him

    06/28/2020 23:01

  • Sunshine Shelnutt

    how often do you update? is there a schedule that you keep as far as updating?

    06/28/2020 20:53

  • Cyra Wolfire

    omg it’s soooo good!! but I need Eros back with her it breaks my heart πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ˜©πŸ˜©πŸ˜­πŸ˜­ they’re made for each other and he missed that beautiful part awww I can’t wait for more I swear this is my favorite story ever.

    06/28/2020 18:10

  • Sera Davenport

    When does this update?

    06/28/2020 06:14

  • Christina Kay Maynard

    when is the next update

    06/28/2020 02:23

  • Megan Crago

    OMG please dont make Eros wait until the baby is 1... my heart cant take it πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

    06/27/2020 10:34

  • Mrs.Hyde

    So I'm confused here. Eros is supposed to be such a powerful werewolf and with Eve as his true mate he's suppose to be even more powerful....well when they actually complete the mating ritual, but you have Eve & other so terrified of Eros mother why? You telling me Eros really can't protect his mate & child including the numerous watchers as well????

    06/27/2020 08:00

  • Tyaira Schofield

    ohmygoshh!!! her β€œlost” situation is giving me anxiety!! Mary was right there!!!!! Ahhhh!!!! I am freaking out!!!! Eros needs to hurry up and find her, I can’t wait for the reunion and the meeting of his daughter. I swear I will combust if it is not soon. I literally was yelling ask her for the name! The description she’s giving you matches Eros & Eves situation Mary!!! oh this is killing me lmao

    06/27/2020 05:25

  • Tam Ratima

    I love this story 😊😊😊

    06/27/2020 01:20

  • shona king

    loving this book, the description of characters is fantastic, great story aswell :)

    06/27/2020 00:19

  • Mineliz Pham

    awwww I wish they were together! so sad 😭

    06/26/2020 18:36

  • KayKovo

    if this is a physical book I'd literally buy it. this is super amazing I am hooked

    06/26/2020 15:01

  • Alicia Fuller

    I love this book and now me and my friend are hooked. reading it over wine. your steamy chapters are our favoriteπŸ’―πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

    06/26/2020 09:16

  • Nikki Mo

    you absolutely stopped my heart...with the impending doom....

    06/26/2020 02:34

  • Mineliz Pham

    it’s becoming so sad , I feel like I can’t read anymore unless I want my heart broken. πŸ₯Ί but at the same time I can’t stop

    06/26/2020 01:34

  • Tina

    waiting patiently for the next chapter to be add πŸ₯°πŸ˜Š so hooked!!!

    06/25/2020 22:36

  • Taina Iosefo

    Man this book is making me hate waiting for the upcoming chapters cause I want to know more and what happens next. Such an amazing book!! Thanks so much @I. Šulca!! 😊

    06/25/2020 14:30

  • Nikki Mo

    *squeal* does Mary get the truth?....on the edge of my seat

    06/25/2020 11:52

  • Kimmy Zimmerman

    oh my gosh. hopefully Mary sees eve. I want eve and Eros to get back together ASAP 😭

    06/25/2020 02:49

  • Crystal Cluck

    when can we see the book and all jlchapters uploaded?

    06/25/2020 00:53

  • Crystal Cluck

    Super amaz ed d on how each chapter has me on my toes. I check every day to see if a new chapter has beebeen added. when a new chapter has been added I have to read it right then I cant wait, I just want to read. Please tell me Eve reunited with Eros soosoon just so on my toes with this book.

    06/25/2020 00:52

  • Abbey Capps

    omg I just love this book! I can't wait to read more!

    06/24/2020 23:23

  • Tina Gunseor

    Well, I'm officially addicted to this story. Only downloaded the app so I could read it, and now I'm checking multiple times a day for an update. I often lose interest in shows our stories if I have to wait, but I'm totally invested in finding out how things go with Eve and Eros. Great story so far, can't wait to see how it ends! πŸ₯°

    06/24/2020 22:05

  • Destiny Skye

    Thus book is giving me anxiety......... I a good watch. I'm like an excited puppy when I see the chapters update. I love this book so so much. I never that that I can experience so many emotions in one chapter and feel connections to the characters. You my dear are an amazing writer. I support you all the way!

    06/24/2020 19:51

  • Rita Barnette

    I’m on chapter 68 but when I open for update everything I paid for is locked again. almost like I never read it. That would be a waste of money.. anything you can do about this?

    06/24/2020 18:41

  • Kimmy Zimmerman

    oh snap is Mary going to find her!!! I need them back together 😭 2 updates yesssss

    06/24/2020 17:14

  • HK21

    god I’m in love with this story! I can’t wait till Eros and Eve get back together and I wonder how they will react when they meet again! πŸ’—πŸ’— and I want him to finally claim her!!! gah that was driving me nuts! with all the sex they had and her getting pregnant, how did he not claim her yet!?!!?!?!

    06/24/2020 05:20

  • Nikki Mo

    why wo t the watcher go get eros....for 2 or 3 chapters I've been wondering this... I'm sad that eros has no faith in eve

    06/23/2020 21:05

  • Ashley Brown

    omg chapter 73. I love it. I really want to know what is going to happen to Eve and Eros. I love that Claudia is getting her just desserts she deserves it

    06/23/2020 20:37

  • Reader-254912

    thank you I can’t wait until they find Eve I hope he still will love her and realize the truth πŸ™ŒπŸΌπŸ™ŒπŸΌπŸ™ŒπŸΌ

    06/23/2020 18:30

  • SugaBear Crafting Organization

    He kept telling her to not believe his mother, but then he blindly believes she just left him and will hurt the baby. Just because, instead of trying to find her. πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’

    06/23/2020 15:44

  • Erika Wallace

    ugh I hope Eve gets her shit together here soon and goes back to eros! loving this book but can’t wait till they are back together! πŸ’œ

    06/23/2020 15:02

  • SugaBear Crafting Organization

    Boo to him saying something was wrong with the brown girl and right with the pale girl... I found like her, fine, but this colorism shit is a bit much.

    06/23/2020 06:30

  • Stephanie Diekmann

    Not sure why Eros so easily believed his mother. Piss me off....

    06/23/2020 00:48

  • HeatherM1

    my hope is that Eve realizes finally how much she needs Eros and goes back to him. they need each other and their baby needs it’s father. Please let the Luna get what is coming to her. It is obvious she is jealous of Eve and Eros and only wants power. I am on the edge of my seat!!

    06/22/2020 23:55

  • Karessa Kaleka Dozier

    I hope he fiends her in the next chapter or the watcher makes contact

    06/22/2020 23:10

  • Reader-254912

    is there any updates soon ?? I miss you

    06/22/2020 22:31

  • Kimmy Zimmerman

    oh no. hopefully Mary can find eve. I hope eve has a good pregnancy considering she is human and the baby isn’t. hopefully they can get back together.

    06/22/2020 22:24

  • buse bulut

    Eros if you dont go get your damn mate and your baby i will smack the Jesus out of you.

    06/22/2020 22:22

  • Ashley Brown

    I can not wait for more. I’m obsessed. Eve is pissing me off a little bit. I really hope she comes around and Eros doesn’t really kill her. I really hope he lets her explain, and tell him how much she really does love him.

    06/22/2020 22:03

  • Isabel Rodriguez

    love it πŸ˜€

    06/22/2020 20:12

  • Reader-207821

    waiting patiently for an update

    06/22/2020 17:09

  • Susan Nicole Page

    love love the book !!! Can't wait gor the next chapter !!

    06/22/2020 14:51

  • Kimmy Zimmerman

    I binge read this all. can’t wait for a update. hopefully Eros finds eve and they can talk this through. 😭 they need to be together for this baby.

    06/22/2020 04:14

  • Reader-927814

    is purchasing coins the only way to unlock chapters

    06/21/2020 18:18

  • Reader-081845

    need more chapters it going slow

    06/21/2020 15:59

  • Reader-007196

    I have got to chapter 68 and already paid Β£10 it’s now asking for more coins, I do think Β£15 is a lot of money to read a book, I am really enjoying the book it absolutely brilliant, I can feel. the charictars how they feel, it’s extremely well written & breath taking, im just upset at how much it’s costing to read xx

    06/21/2020 10:49

  • Cynthia Redden

    So sorry for your lost we all love your story so if we have to wait a few days then so be it... family is always comes first ! prayers to you and your love ones

    06/21/2020 01:43

  • Tyra Pooh

    Does this AMAZING book have a specific update schedule?πŸ€—

    06/21/2020 00:01

  • Cristin Ronqvist

    Loved the chapter, Great work and well wrighting cant wait for more chapters please update soon agen πŸ˜πŸ€©πŸ‘ŒπŸ’•

    06/20/2020 19:53

  • Gillian Sarrou

    how often does this update?xx

    06/20/2020 19:43

  • Shannon Woody

    YES!

    06/20/2020 16:42

  • Amy Sendelbach

    do you have any more books? i have read both of the alpha books?

    06/19/2020 12:34

  • Tyra Pooh

    When they find eve and Eros start blaming her for running off and so called trying to kill their child she should snap and curse him making him stare in shock at her words which will be hilarious but I love this book soooo freaking much I check my phone every hour seeing if it updatedπŸ’˜πŸ’œπŸ’ž

    06/19/2020 12:22

  • HK21

    I need more!!! keep up the good work, we appreciate u and ur story!

    06/19/2020 07:10

  • Shouston M Graf

    I could not stop reading this. I took a break from all my other books to focus on this one and man was is worth it. I can’t wait to see where it goes from here.

    06/19/2020 04:43

  • zireonda pando

    ugh! that mother needs to go. she is so hateful..😬 i looove this story im addicted

    06/19/2020 02:58

  • Ward

    I adore Ares!

    06/19/2020 01:40
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