The Unwanted Alpha Comments

  • Cari Swanson Haney

    liking it so far

    07/27/2020 03:50

  • Cordelia Monroe

    wow her mother is a complete bitch!!!

    07/25/2020 12:03

  • Tracy Black

    Hi could you give me an idea of the strong violent abuse scene please, is it a sexual abuse scene, am interested in reading this book but if I come across a scene like that then it can put me off a book altogether if am not expecting it, what chapter is it in and is it what I've said above?? Thank you to anyone who answers this for me

    07/18/2020 15:26

  • Raylnn Almendarez

    just started reading The Unnwhanted Alpha... It’s pretty good so, far... That I like reading it...Hope that I will be getting my free coins and bouns soon so, I can keep reading it.. I just started reading on this site so, I am learning it so, The book is pretty good so, far...I can’t wait to see what happens next in the book

    07/18/2020 11:37

  • Karen Morairty

    I would also like to share that at this point (chapter 63), I’ve already spent more than $45.00 to read this book. Help please!!

    07/16/2020 09:11

  • Karen Morairty

    I am enjoying this book very much. However, each time I purchase coins to read more chapters, I get asked for more money. I was up to chapter 63, and the chapters locked up clear back to almost the beginning.. I would like to finish this book. Please contact me maynardfam2@gmail.com. Thank you!

    07/16/2020 08:31

  • Rebecca Crutcher

    thank you so much for this wonderful book , I so loved it and I can't wait for the sequel . keep up with the fantastic and fabulous working.

    07/14/2020 17:37

  • Cat Cruickshank

    When is the Sequl coming out and whats the name of it...? please??? im soo excited to for Eve ans Eros’ journey to continue

    07/14/2020 08:28

  • Katie Wright

    what is the second book called

    07/13/2020 23:47

  • Amie Mockler

    how do you unlock more chapters ?

    07/12/2020 22:31

  • Jaime Lynn Bucsis

    awesome book enjoyed it alot but pretty expensive. 20$ later and I cant read the final chapter :(

    07/12/2020 10:41

  • Kera Burke

    omg when is the sequel coming out.

    07/12/2020 03:20

  • Akkina Decker

    is there another one for this story? it's too good to be the only one!!!! πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

    07/11/2020 04:03

  • Ginger89

    please tell me there's a sequel??

    07/10/2020 14:58

  • Ginger89

    please tell me the sequel is coming?? I haven't been able to put this book down for days, now it's over I'm sad ☹

    07/10/2020 14:57

  • Sarah Willis Carpenter

    I just finished your book & it was amazing. I saw at the end it said that a sequel was coming soon, but I also read in the comments that the book was finished. I was wondering if there will be a sequel as stated or if it was a typo?

    07/10/2020 03:51

  • Lora Rachowicz

    Sorry i just noticed the other books.

    07/10/2020 00:33

  • Lora Rachowicz

    Sorry for your loss. Sending Love

    07/10/2020 00:31

  • Lora Rachowicz

    Loved This Book....! Stayed up reading all night.. when is the next book amd what will the name be so i can keep an eye out for it. Thank You

    07/10/2020 00:30

  • Ninna Hertha Post Jensen

    Soo love this story super happy it was in my library when I made my account ❀️ loved the conflicts between characters also reminds me how important open communication is in a relationship πŸ˜… looking forward number 2! Also a tip make it more clear which of your books are connected to each πŸ˜‰

    07/09/2020 19:50

  • Alexis Marquez

    love this book ☺️ it was amazing . was glued to it for the whole day

    07/09/2020 07:23

  • Eirini Zannetti

    I ve read up to chapter 33 and trying to pay to go forwars but it won't let me

    07/08/2020 18:10

  • Julie Thornton

    what the name of the next book

    07/08/2020 06:57

  • Clare Margaret Brougham-oconnor

    when does the sequel come out

    07/08/2020 06:55

  • Amanda Stefanka

    when is the next book to this one gonna come out I’m eager to know what happens next I love this book

    07/08/2020 04:06

  • Merissa Stephens

    ok, but what's the name of the sequel so I can download it when I see it

    07/07/2020 23:29

  • Reader-207821

    I enjoyed reading this book. Looking forward to the sequel.

    07/07/2020 23:26

  • Tara Hogenbirk

    when will the sequel come out?? do you have a title yet?

    07/07/2020 20:48

  • Mineliz Pham

    omg no I don’t want the story to end !!! I’m so stuck on this book I can’t wait for the sequel!! so addicting to read !

    07/07/2020 20:07

  • Rachel A Mackey

    what happened with the watchers? did they join the pack house?

    07/07/2020 15:45

  • Tyra Pooh

    Ugh I just had to cry my eyes out cause I love this book so much just ugh and now my sister looking at me like I’m crazyπŸ˜‚β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ

    07/07/2020 05:23

  • Reader-643076

    loved this storey! can’t wait fir he second!!

    07/06/2020 23:43

  • Sarah Wilson

    Just too say that I loved this book ❀️you said that you were going to do a sequel after this book I just want to know when that will be?

    07/06/2020 23:37

  • Lisa Marie

    what is the title of the sequel?

    07/06/2020 23:12

  • Lisa Marie

    what is the title to the sequel?

    07/06/2020 23:02

  • Reader-945591

    oh man such a good book can’t wait till the sequel to read more!!

    07/06/2020 21:44

  • Bethan

    Amazing!!! I can't believe it's the end! I've loved every moment of it. Thank you so much! The last few chapters especially had me on the edge of my seat and tossing and turning at night wondering what would happen. I'll be keeping a close eye out for the sequel ❀️

    07/06/2020 20:36

  • Nikki Mo

    nice extra ending....her parents were icky since the being...grrrrr didn't like them good riddance....wonder if they make a cameo in book 2.... I'll keep a look out

    07/06/2020 19:42

  • Erika Wallace

    amazing last chapter I loved this book can’t wait for the second one to come out! great job

    07/06/2020 18:39

  • Cristin Ronqvist

    Thank you sooooo mutch for this extra chapter and I cant wait for the squel πŸ€©πŸ˜πŸ‘Œβ€οΈ

    07/06/2020 18:36

  • Destiny Skye

    I can't wait for the sequal!

    07/06/2020 17:50

  • Charonda Patterson

    The ending seemed rushed to me. What happened with the watchers? Where are Mary and Balthazar? What happened when Eros confronted the Luna about what Mary told him? I was enjoying the story until that point. More details please.

    07/06/2020 15:49

  • Leslie Lappen

    Awesome awesome awesome!!!!

    07/06/2020 13:55

  • Angela Little

    what will the name of the sequel be...im so excited this book was amazing and I can't wait to read the next one..

    07/06/2020 12:56

  • Lauren Ferrara

    what’s the sequel going to be called? I want to be sure to keep an eye out for it

    07/06/2020 11:00

  • Taina Iosefo

    YAY!! They are officially mated now... can’t wait for the sequel!! awesome book!! I. Ε ulca you’re truly talented with your stories!!

    07/06/2020 10:09

  • Zach Cook

    what will the 2nd be called? when will it release? Thanks in advance

    07/06/2020 09:41

  • Dahlia Mynd

    This book was sooooooo satisfying good!!!! Can't wait to read the sequel!! is there any way that you can update us on when the book will be out and what will the name is it be??

    07/06/2020 09:36

  • angie lawson

    I absolutely love this book. I really hope you make a seque. I was really hoping to read about her finishing the Mark and accepting the crown and everything.

    07/06/2020 09:07

  • Cynthia Cardenas

    Is there a second book? I'm so in love with the story πŸ₯°

    07/06/2020 08:16

  • Sam Mcguinness

    loved this book, can’t wait for the next one🀩 hope it’s not a long wait πŸ˜‰πŸ₯°

    07/06/2020 07:33

  • AmΓ©lie Senioris

    loved that book can't wait for the sequel

    07/06/2020 07:16

  • Megan Urban

    OMG! how is it over??? Noooooo....... seriously this is my favorite story I read each update daily, I'm about to freak out! I'm so happy will the ending thank you so much!! When will the sequel be coming out? I'm so excited!!!!!! Oh I cant wait!!!!!!!!!

    07/06/2020 05:59

  • Reader-254912

    I love this book so much I can’t wait fo ether sequel you did an awesome job πŸ™ŒπŸΌπŸ™ŒπŸΌ

    07/06/2020 05:39

  • Shannon Woody

    the ending WAS OFF THE HOOK! WHAT'S THE SEQUELS TITLE? AND WHEN WILL IT BEGIN? I know your struggling right now so I'm not trying to rush. just curious so I don't miss it.

    07/06/2020 05:33

  • Shannon Woody

    WOOOOOW!!!! I HAVE NEVER BEEN THIS SO IN-DEPTH WITH A BOOK IN MY HOLE LIFE. I WANT EROS! DAMN!

    07/06/2020 05:30

  • Peta Jones

    loved this book. looking to the sequel

    07/06/2020 05:08

  • xICExGIRLx

    Gahh! I can't believe it's over! 😭 thank you so much for such a great read! I absolutely loved this! I can't wait for the sequel!

    07/06/2020 04:11

  • Melinda Burton

    man now I have to put more money on this thing and get the sequel. I love it tho keep going!

    07/06/2020 03:48

  • zireonda pando

    wow that was a great book πŸ‘

    07/06/2020 03:38

  • Amy S

    Will There Be Another book? to find out about his life as king?

    07/06/2020 00:14

  • Cyra Wolfire

    omg best update ever!! I teared up 😭 sooooo good!!!!

    07/05/2020 20:38

  • Tyaira Schofield

    Is it seriously over???! please tell there is more coming!

    07/05/2020 20:06

  • Kayla F

    Please give an epilogue to REALLY cover all bases....and to just entice us more. Felt a little rushed, and would love to know what happens in the near future. (unless there’s gonna be a second book)

    07/05/2020 18:16

  • Nikki Mo

    yayyyyyyyy. ..... 3 questions. what happen to the watchers? what's happening with the thone/or at least mary and balthazar? is there another book?

    07/05/2020 14:45

  • Reader-659559

    I have enjoyed this book! I couldn’t stop reading until I got to the last completed chapter. I was happy to find updates this morning. keep up the good work!

    07/05/2020 12:35

  • Tam Ratima

    I love it.. Reunited at last πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

    07/05/2020 09:51

  • Sam Mcguinness

    got to say I loved this story....little displointed with the ending. was hoping for a few chapters....feels like their should of been moreπŸ˜• great read, would recommend!!! will their be a second book?? I hope so!

    07/05/2020 08:52

  • Kimmy Zimmerman

    yess finally 😭😭 but seriously when they mate or have sex again legit Eros is gonna be busting her vagina up πŸ˜‚

    07/05/2020 05:36

  • HeatherM1

    wonderful update!!! I’m in love with Ally!!

    07/05/2020 04:20

  • Reader-207821

    Great read!! I hope this is not the end of their story.

    07/05/2020 04:09

  • Melinda Burton

    that was beautiful!!!

    07/05/2020 04:07

  • redbone 1840

    omg 😱 I love that last chapter I’m so happy they finally come together I was crying 😭 can’t wait for the rest of the chapters.

    07/05/2020 03:48

  • Cristin Ronqvist

    Love it cant wait for more chapters please update soon agen πŸ™πŸ‘ŒπŸ₯°πŸŒΉβ€οΈ

    07/04/2020 23:08

  • Cyra Wolfire

    holy fucking octopus sticks is right! I laughed so hard 🀣 idk how he could ever think Eve would do what the Luna said she’s not a monster and loves him I mean come on Eros! she’s not your mom omg I love this book soooo much! I couldn’t tell Eve was deteriorating like that! that was a shock to me with the drs but I guess when your not with your love and constantly anxiety worries that’s what will happen >_<

    07/04/2020 18:00

  • Sam Mcguinness

    I can’t wait for the a next chapter, Eros is just perfect😍 Eve has grown in the last few chapters....l really like her! (please hurry with the next chapter 😫πŸ₯°πŸ€€)

    07/04/2020 17:31

  • Nikki Mo

    ooooo...flash back got me a little jumbled...poor eros...horrible luna what a wretch of a woman. wonder if eve will be calm when awakened. ...cant wait to find out

    07/04/2020 15:10

  • Emily Flanders

    This story could go on for the rest of my life and I would continue reading. You are truly gifted!

    07/04/2020 12:59

  • Taina Iosefo

    OMG.... finally Eros will know the truth and be happy Eve did not kill their child. She’s a spitting image of him. Can’t wait for the next update.

    07/04/2020 12:36

  • Tam Ratima

    Awesome chapters.. Thank you so much 😊

    07/04/2020 10:33

  • XScarlet Amelia Bella

    please hurry up and finish the book keep waiting everyday for new chapters love this book just wish I could find out what happends next instead of having to wait have really enjoyed reading it so much

    07/04/2020 09:04

  • Alaire

    FINALLY

    07/04/2020 08:01

  • Clarisa Acosta

    love it geez I was losing my mind with those two being appart!! So what now with the watchers??? omgeeeee

    07/04/2020 06:16

  • Destiny Skye

    Chapter 87- and the drama continues. I can't stress again how much I LOVE this book! I check for updates as soon as I wake up as I have to know happens. Keep up the fab work!

    07/04/2020 05:21

  • Scarlet_V

    When will the next update be?

    07/04/2020 05:00

  • Reader-254912

    wow I can’t wait for eve to wake up man this is getting better and better 😊

    07/04/2020 04:53

  • Shannon Woody

    I'm so sorry for your loss😟

    07/04/2020 03:48

  • Shannon Woody

    YES!!!!!!

    07/04/2020 03:47

  • Kimmy Zimmerman

    YESSS!!! Eve is gonna lose her mind when she wakes up πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    07/04/2020 02:51

  • Reader-643076

    yay!!

    07/04/2020 02:27

  • Melinda Burton

    ally is do cute. can we set a trap to get me a daddy. shoot if it was only that easy.

    07/04/2020 02:23

  • momma bear

    YESSSSSS!!!!!! Thank you!

    07/04/2020 02:22

  • Melinda Burton

    omg omg now all we gotta do is get eve up so they can be a happy family.

    07/04/2020 02:22

  • Lini Vaiangina

    when will there be an update? i finished all chapters. i looooooove this book ❀️

    07/04/2020 01:36

  • Nikki Mo

    eeeeeekkkkkk.....okay....I except things are going down in the next chapter. ... I thought it would end with 1 of them realizing who the other way

    07/03/2020 22:40

  • HeatherM1

    Great story. I love that Ally is like her Dad and now they are going to see her mom. Cannot wait for the next chapter!!

    07/03/2020 15:34

  • Carol Davis

    lovely story so far but how do you read the rest of the book

    07/03/2020 15:33

  • Bethan

    Honestly just sped read the last two chapters with my heart in my mouth oh my days!! I'm going to have to read them again πŸ˜‚ I can't wait for them to reunite!!! Thank you for creating something that had had me on the edge of my seat eagar to find out what happens next ❀️

    07/03/2020 14:53

  • Candace Hays

    cant wait for a new chapter! I hope he figures out that shes his baby!!I hope zander might see the resemblance! I cant wait! I really hope a chapter comes out tonight 😁

    07/03/2020 14:10

  • Tam Ratima

    God I love this book 😍😍😍

    07/03/2020 11:19
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