The Unwanted Alpha Comments
aires
kinda messy storyline esp the first half, but i finished the book. overall okay, but i don't see myself re-reading it.
09/04/2023 07:29
Bella Jersey 2
chapter 1: let’s see where your adventures takes us
09/04/2023 07:28Linda Hughes
Great chapter author for the Halloween event!! I LMAO on the begin with Anto handing out candy.
09/04/2023 07:28Vernante Thelusma
omg it’s finished!!!
09/04/2023 07:28Rebecca Robinson
Also why does he always expect the worse from her?
09/04/2023 07:28
yowassup
im ngl that chapter made me feel bad for Luna
09/04/2023 07:28yowassup
NOOOO LET HER EXPLAIN PLEASE AHHH THE DRAMTIC IRONY IS KILLING ME AHHHHH
09/04/2023 07:28yowassup
😡😡all the homies hate eve's mother
09/04/2023 07:27Pat
this book has been the only book I was able to finish on all reading apps!! I loved it!!
09/04/2023 07:27
This is a VERY good story but confusing. The flashbacks aren’t recognized, I didn’t know that he killed his mother and it wasn’t proofread. it would be SO much more awesome if those things were fixed!
09/04/2023 07:27justine sabol
Also, why does her being afraid make him even more aroused??
09/04/2023 07:26@Janilleee
Hiiii
09/04/2023 07:26Mia
how many chances does Claudia keep getting?
09/04/2023 07:25
xhxkux
'' go home'' in a deeep voice 🔥🔥🤤🤤🤤
09/04/2023 07:25Denisa Tîrca
love it xx
09/04/2023 07:25City Girl
good
09/04/2023 07:25Taina Iosefo
Didn’t see that one coming with Eve getting kidnapped but loved the car scene.. hahaha
09/04/2023 07:25
Rebecca Shaban
nice one
09/04/2023 07:25
Diana Rosado
write more stories like that one
09/04/2023 07:25Amanda McKnight
I thought you were updating daily?
09/04/2023 07:25
Kim Cook Paige
Hellloooo ! ( mature content readers 😉 ) Really into it ! Liking this book. I read 13 chapters yesterday and thought I was going to have to keep a mop bucket with me ! Boooyeahhh 😂
09/04/2023 07:25
tina mason
the most recent Halloween one with Hunter has me totally confused about Eros... is this prior to the whole story??
09/04/2023 07:25Pamela K Burke
loved this story ❤
09/04/2023 07:25Roxy Zitterkopf
I love the story, It is very attractive, I hope you will be able to read It soon in my natal lenguage. greetings from Argentina.
09/04/2023 07:24Sophia Gooden
Claudia is definitely not a true friend to Eve and I hope she gets what’s coming to her real soon
09/04/2023 07:24Sarah Gervacio
PHILIPPINES!!!🇵🇭🇵🇭🇵🇭
09/04/2023 07:24Sharon Aronovitch
The story is getting more interesting. I hope Eros is able to help Eve overcome her fear following the’almost’ rape. Good start.
09/04/2023 07:24
darkbeauty32
love the story
09/04/2023 07:24Neva Dat
yyaaaaaaaaay ik Amor n baka was ment to be😁😁😁😁😁😁
09/04/2023 07:24
missrum29
love this series! I’ve read both books a few times ❤️
09/04/2023 07:24Patricia Rogers
chapter 37 is completely missing...
09/04/2023 07:23Cyndy Leonard
love love love this i really felt like we actualy went on a detailed emotional jurney with these charectors thank you so much
09/04/2023 07:23Malinda Hoffman
regardless of your two drama you lost me in chapter 13, I have tried to pick it back up several times and just lost my liking of it.
09/04/2023 07:23
kathydor
I love the story. I just would like it will be more organized next time. Too much back and for. But really nice. Thank you for such a nice book. Waiting for the next one.
09/04/2023 07:23Sophia Gooden
I hope he doesn’t believe her about Eve running
09/04/2023 07:23Diana Rosado
why it didn't ended with them taking the kingdom and became king and queen
09/04/2023 07:22Rachel Caseja
...i think it should be "can i BORROW your shirt"
09/04/2023 07:22Cyra Wolfire
I can’t tell you how many times I’ve read this book! it’s just as addicting to read it as the first time I love Eros!!!!! Especially how they grow together 💗
09/04/2023 07:22Tiffany Garcia
I love this story!!!!!❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:21
Tico Odum
this is a great book but Eve is way too immature are they going to mate or not? is she going to grow up? or keep acting like a toddler?
09/04/2023 07:20Aurelia Pinder
I wished he could change her though so she doesn't consider herself just a weak human and can join him fully
09/04/2023 07:20Dingo Baby
why omg seriously why does the it you body it's you choice always ruin such a good since in the book dude I was reading this book get all emotional about the scene and out of nowhere I stop because of that ....like leave that stuff out of a great moment we dont need a secret agenda
09/04/2023 07:20dee brack
I love the story. Did you mean to make Eve so frustrating? If you did then kudos she pissed me off several times throughout the story😂 But not to the so much as to reading. Great writing👍🏽!
09/04/2023 07:20lunar kiss
omg it was about time they got mated!!!!
09/04/2023 07:20Linda Hughes
Knew his mother was up to no good. Eve get yourself back to Eros. Eve think you're a special person with some special powers that you don't know about yet
09/04/2023 07:19Suzanne Scott
amazing story, loved it so much I couldn't stop reading till the end
09/04/2023 07:19Rubbab Jafri
craved* not carved
09/04/2023 07:19Alyssa McCabe
only on the second chapter and I’m hooked
09/04/2023 07:19Rashi Malik
please.. eve along with innocent is also is little bit idiot
09/04/2023 07:19Josseline Burgos
what i have read is good, just trying to figure out how to get points to keep reading it
09/04/2023 07:19
kariaqu
this is interesting. keep fighting!🙋
09/04/2023 07:19Reader-297262
can I read this book without having to read the sequel?
09/04/2023 07:18Amy Manning
l'm enjoying the book so far, I the rest is as good
09/04/2023 07:18Anne Thompson
looking forward th each chapter
09/04/2023 07:18Aurelia Pinder
I'm enjoying the story so far. I do have one comment though. In english, a cabinet is a storage unit in the kitchen. You use this word to describe a room I think.
09/04/2023 07:17S. Alkinbee
You use the word Cabinet for Office. Are you French?
09/04/2023 07:17Reader-586470
I miss the chapter on what happend to Anton who supposed to be responsible for the Queen safety and the crazies. Also it could be good to have a chapter on the luna’s death.
09/04/2023 07:16lunar kiss
noooooo. final chapter, ain’t ready for this story to end😭😭😭😭😭
09/04/2023 07:16S. Alkinbee
what is a Dinosaur Naggie? the only thing I could find was Scottish. A naggie being a wooden cup with a handle.
09/04/2023 07:15S. Alkinbee
If the Watchers get burned if they leave their boarders without an order from The King, why was Anto in town? Why was Aaraya able to follow Claudia around?
09/04/2023 07:15
AstarteLor
ok, check 57.... how does he not notice the cheating hickey's????
09/04/2023 07:15S. Alkinbee
Ch 59 Eros and Eve are against a wall, her legs around his waist. Ch 60 starts with them still having the same argument but now she is able to walk backwards away from him. I think there needs to be a transition sentence that has Eros putting Eve down
09/04/2023 07:14lunar kiss
noooo why did ahe run away!!! why about eros!!! he could protect her!!!!
09/04/2023 07:14AstarteLor
Finally finished reading! love the story, great job! quick ending though. I wish the watchers were able to figure out where Eve was after they figured out where Ally was
09/04/2023 07:14AstarteLor
ch 84, not liking the 4yr old. I get that she grew fast or whatever, but she's taking and acting way, way too old. Also bratty. I wish she acted like a 4yr old
09/04/2023 07:14Tamara Myers
CH 62 actually made me cry! I’m in love with this book.
09/04/2023 07:14Devonie Boyer
absolutely fell in love with each and every character! amazing writing!
09/04/2023 07:13lunar kiss
can humas get hazed?
09/04/2023 07:13
Kim Almendarez
Loved this book!!
09/04/2023 07:13QuonnieH
I really enjoyed this story...can’t wait to read the sequel
09/04/2023 07:13
AJMann
I'm currently on chapter 66 and I love it!! I understand everything you are trying to say even though it's not the English I use here in the USA. You are so talented. Thank you for sharing your gift with us! I've always wanted to write but I can never make it flow smoothly. Keep writing and sharing your amazing talents with the world!!
09/04/2023 07:12Ma Bituin Defensor Babasol
nice
09/04/2023 07:12
Tiffany
Best one I've read yet!
09/04/2023 07:12S. Alkinbee
on Ch 50. I wish you had added Zander earlier to the story.
09/04/2023 07:12S. Alkinbee
Is Evangeline a curvy not skinny woman or is she someone so tiny the Luna can pick her up and hold her on her lap like a child. Ya cant have it both ways
09/04/2023 07:12lunar kiss
just one more question: will the sequel talk about eve and eros life after they gor mated? i would really love to hear about them again!!!
09/04/2023 07:12lunar kiss
girl, i loved this story, I ate it whole in just a few days. cant wait to read the sequel!
09/04/2023 07:12lunar kiss
and what or why ots so scary if eros gets more powerful?
09/04/2023 07:11lunar kiss
i still dont understand why in the beginning eros was wearing a mask to hide himself
09/04/2023 07:11lunar kiss
omg im loving it. i think im going to end up totally broke
09/04/2023 07:11lunar kiss
who’s silver fox?
09/04/2023 07:11
Amy D
I like the story so far but the incomplete and confusing sentences are ruining it. Most of the stories I've read on here have gramatical errors but they don't interfere too much with the story. Sadly, the errors in this one make it impossible to understand what I am reading most od the time.
09/04/2023 07:11lunar kiss
what does the bad moon means?
09/04/2023 07:11
Katrina Kimmel
so now they are running from eros, not running from his mom! if she would just contact him at tell him everything this would all stop! he would kill or imprison his mother!
09/04/2023 07:10Tamara Myers
I’m completely obsessed with the way you write and how you take us through the story! I love the bond between Eros and Eve. I’m on CH30 I started this book last night. I’m hooked. I hope there are more stories about this couple in the future! ❤️
09/04/2023 07:10lunar kiss
who else want Luna dead?
09/04/2023 07:10Reader-632567
ok I don’t get the part we’re she said that she loved her human husband and would give anything to have him back and that he was wonderful and a loving father yet she hates her son who is half human it just not adding up
09/04/2023 07:10Rose SB
If Claudia is such a “ good friend” to Eve, she sure is evilly plotting against her friend.
09/04/2023 07:10
gem lover2
Epic✌️
09/04/2023 07:10Brittinae Cyprian
loved this book
09/04/2023 07:10Jessica Deal
I read a couple of books on this site and when I was done I was stuck on deciding what book to read next and I must say I'm so far pleaseed with choosing this one I'm only on chapter 8 and already hooked this book is a absolute must read the author did an amazing job not only with the characters so far but the layout and the suspense behind every chapter just increases great work again I don't know how all this comment stuff works but mad props to the author you did a great job keep writing
09/04/2023 07:09Katrina Kimmel
why is she so stupid that she won't trust her own mate! this makes me so angry! all she needed to do was get to him!
09/04/2023 07:09Terrie Richards Culpepper
i can't find thw next book promise princess
09/04/2023 07:09Amanda smith
can you tell me why my comment keeps being taken off of her i have a valid point please
09/04/2023 07:09
Belinda Meharg
omg I loved reading this 😍 I was soo engrossed in it literally made me laugh and sent shivers through my body!!!
09/04/2023 07:09Damara
next chapter please
09/04/2023 07:08
nitlit80@yahoo.com
I’m on chapter 72 and I LOVE this book! I think that it could easily be made into a series tv show. I can’t wait to see how the rest of it goes! 😃
09/04/2023 07:08Katrina Kimmel
octopus sticks 😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣
09/04/2023 07:08Bonnie Mann
enjoyed this book so far
09/04/2023 07:08Reader-632567
for the love of Christ y the hell would she go with his mother
09/04/2023 07:08
