The Unwanted Alpha Comments

  • Rebecca Robinson

    I don't understand why Eve always does something stupid without giving him half a chance. it makes women look ignorant.

    01/11/2021 01:27

  • Kaitlyn

    I truly enjoyed this book! I read it in two days. I could not pit it down

    01/08/2021 08:10

  • Mayra Sanchez

    the way he looks at her gawd๐Ÿ˜ I wish someone would love and look at me like that

    01/08/2021 03:36

  • NBA.KAYKAY

    do I have to pay with coins just to read the whole thing?

    01/04/2021 09:06

  • Geraldine Ferraren

    is this story complete or ongoing?

    01/04/2021 02:08

  • Pat

    this book has been the only book I was able to finish on all reading apps!! I loved it!!

    01/03/2021 22:20

  • Malinda Hoffman

    regardless of your two drama you lost me in chapter 13, I have tried to pick it back up several times and just lost my liking of it.

    01/03/2021 00:47

  • Haley Casteel

    I hate how I'm so into it and can't read further into the boom because of no coins๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

    12/31/2020 01:48

  • Dianna Phelps Carter

    I loved this book. This is one of the better books that I have read. thank you. I am starting the sequel now.

    12/29/2020 16:27

  • Deb Warren

    I love this book. is there going to be a sequel!!! love the characters.

    12/25/2020 22:04

  • Stacy Jefferson

    This book is one of my favorites on the app love it!!!

    12/24/2020 00:16

  • AmO_06

    I paid and read the book once. I wanted to read it again but itโ€™s locked again. How long before they lock once they are unlocked? Itโ€™s disappointing.

    12/19/2020 15:38

  • Kelly Rohrer

    This is my favorite love story ๐Ÿ’œ Every woman needs an Eros and Aries in their lives ๐Ÿฅฐ

    12/19/2020 14:09

  • Cyra Wolfire

    I canโ€™t tell you how many times Iโ€™ve read this book! itโ€™s just as addicting to read it as the first time I love Eros!!!!! Especially how they grow together ๐Ÿ’—

    12/18/2020 23:16

  • kathydor

    I love the story. I just would like it will be more organized next time. Too much back and for. But really nice. Thank you for such a nice book. Waiting for the next one.

    12/18/2020 19:07

  • Pamela Barbato

    write books ill buy.we get to a certain point as if being shifted i dont like just write the damn books an sell them v. ill buy 4 or 5 right away

    12/16/2020 01:50

  • Wendy Virginia

    love this series but I do have a question.. whatโ€™s up with the grandma hidden in the woods that Eros kept safe?! did I miss something there?

    12/10/2020 09:38

  • missrum29

    love this series! Iโ€™ve read both books a few times โค๏ธ

    12/10/2020 02:48

  • Amy Cimmino

    love it

    12/10/2020 02:36

  • Tiffany Garcia

    I love this story!!!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

    12/08/2020 03:55

  • Kelly Rohrer

    This is by far my favorite story! I love the characters, the story is awesome I find myself reading it and rereading it constantly!

    12/07/2020 21:45

  • Sophia Gooden

    I hope he doesnโ€™t believe her about Eve running

    12/05/2020 17:27

  • tinika griffin

    chpt5

    12/01/2020 05:45

  • Alicia Vincent

    I can read chapters 79-81 can that be fixed?

    11/29/2020 01:03

  • Diana Rosado

    write more stories like that one

    11/27/2020 22:08

  • Diana Rosado

    you could have ended it like that but other than it was really great I loved it beautiful story great work I loved every detail

    11/27/2020 22:08

  • Diana Rosado

    why it didn't ended with them taking the kingdom and became king and queen

    11/27/2020 22:06

  • Femwithedge

    I just finished your book!!! You're an absolutely amazing writer ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ I loved Eros and Eves journey๐Ÿฅฐ I've laughed and cried throughout this story. I just had to comment and let you know!! I can't wait to read more from you. worth every penny spent๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿค‘

    11/24/2020 16:21

  • Doretha Jackson

    I am on Chapter 81 and I cannot purchase. more coins. Can ghat be fixed? Who should I contact?

    11/23/2020 16:26

  • Latasha Totten

    love this book is there any way I can get a hard copy

    11/22/2020 17:43

  • Marlene

    Is it going to be out for Kindle?

    11/21/2020 15:34

  • JustMee

    This is the second time this app has closed itself and Iโ€™ve lost a complete chapter. Fix this issue!!!!!!!!! Love the book btw ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜…

    11/18/2020 20:32

  • Nadrienne Hunter

    Are there more books after this book?

    11/18/2020 19:37

  • XYZ

    I am on chapter 15 and unable to purchase coins to move forward with the story. The app isn't allowing me to purchase coins either. Anyone else facing the same issue?

    11/17/2020 16:15

  • Reader-519627

    I donโ€™t understand why she keeps going with strangers like what? also why wonโ€™t she go back to Eros after the Luna betrayed her AGAIN?

    11/17/2020 14:42

  • Ann Baskerville

    love the suspense

    11/15/2020 15:28

  • Victoria Coleman

    thank you for your information on getting the book on amazon, I have ordered it, I have read all the comments, and mostly they are praise for your amazing story, canโ€™t wait๐Ÿ˜

    11/14/2020 08:44

  • @Janilleee

    Hiiii

    11/13/2020 13:18

  • Rashi Malik

    please.. eve along with innocent is also is little bit idiot

    11/13/2020 04:23

  • Mia

    how many chances does Claudia keep getting?

    11/11/2020 21:55

  • Rachel Caseja

    ...i think it should be "can i BORROW your shirt"

    11/11/2020 12:49

  • BritLee

    anyone else have a problem with getting to chapters?? I finished chapter 73 and tried to keep going and it keeps sayin oops network isnโ€™t there try again. any ideas??

    11/11/2020 09:52

  • Sarah Gervacio

    PHILIPPINES!!!๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ๐Ÿ‡ต๐Ÿ‡ญ

    11/11/2020 08:25

  • Josseline Burgos

    what i have read is good, just trying to figure out how to get points to keep reading it

    11/10/2020 20:28

  • Pamela K Burke

    loved this story โค

    11/10/2020 00:38

  • Roxy Zitterkopf

    I love the story, It is very attractive, I hope you will be able to read It soon in my natal lenguage. greetings from Argentina.

    11/09/2020 18:44

  • Alyssa McCabe

    only on the second chapter and Iโ€™m hooked

    11/09/2020 03:24

  • Sophia Gooden

    Claudia is definitely not a true friend to Eve and I hope she gets whatโ€™s coming to her real soon

    11/08/2020 17:11

  • xhxkux

    '' go home'' in a deeep voice ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿคค๐Ÿคค๐Ÿคค

    11/08/2020 14:41

  • Sharon Aronovitch

    The story is getting more interesting. I hope Eros is able to help Eve overcome her fear following theโ€™almostโ€™ rape. Good start.

    11/06/2020 01:14

  • Sharon Aronovitch

    Iโ€™d like to read more without having to buy coins. Iโ€™m enjoying the story.

    11/06/2020 00:51

  • Leanne Andrews

    this book is so confusing to read, there are so many spelling mistakes amd words but in the wrong spots. I had to give up reading it.

    11/04/2020 19:22

  • City Girl

    good

    11/04/2020 03:56

  • Amanda McKnight

    I thought you were updating daily?

    11/04/2020 02:44

  • Patricia Rogers

    chapter 37 is completely missing...

    11/02/2020 23:53

  • Irene Ardueser

    this book is exactly the kind of books I like. I just would love to read more of the chapters without having to buy coins

    11/02/2020 06:40

  • Kim Cook Paige

    Hellloooo ! ( mature content readers ๐Ÿ˜‰ ) Really into it ! Liking this book. I read 13 chapters yesterday and thought I was going to have to keep a mop bucket with me ! Boooyeahhh ๐Ÿ˜‚

    11/02/2020 04:52

  • kariaqu

    this is interesting. keep fighting!๐Ÿ™‹

    11/01/2020 23:27

  • Cyndy Leonard

    love love love this i really felt like we actualy went on a detailed emotional jurney with these charectors thank you so much

    11/01/2020 11:14

  • Kera

    Typos and even the awful grammar in this story can be forgiven but can we stop with the repetitive "mouth opening and closing like a fish"? That was written at least 5 times by now.

    11/01/2020 02:20

  • Reader-297262

    can I read this book without having to read the sequel?

    10/31/2020 20:44

  • Rubbab Jafri

    craved* not carved

    10/30/2020 20:33

  • tina mason

    the most recent Halloween one with Hunter has me totally confused about Eros... is this prior to the whole story??

    10/30/2020 18:14

  • Jess Booth

    how can I get more coins to read without purchasing them?! ugh I need to keep reading lol

    10/30/2020 04:41

  • Taina Iosefo

    Didnโ€™t see that one coming with Eve getting kidnapped but loved the car scene.. hahaha

    10/28/2020 12:02

  • Taina Iosefo

    Hahaha nice Halloween addition ... cool to see Anto trying to be civil.. ๐Ÿ˜‚ but cool that Anto and Baka got together finally.

    10/28/2020 12:00

  • aires

    kinda messy storyline esp the first half, but i finished the book. overall okay, but i don't see myself re-reading it.

    10/28/2020 09:40

  • Linda Hughes

    Great chapter author for the Halloween event!! I LMAO on the begin with Anto handing out candy.

    10/27/2020 00:09

  • Texaspurplerose72

    I absolutely loved this book. I am now reading the Promised Princess, I anxiously await the updates. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    10/27/2020 00:06

  • Denisa Tรฎrca

    love it xx

    10/26/2020 11:47

  • Neva Dat

    yyaaaaaaaaay ik Amor n baka was ment to be๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    10/26/2020 02:37

  • Rebecca Shaban

    nice one

    10/25/2020 07:59

  • Amy Manning

    l'm enjoying the book so far, I the rest is as good

    10/23/2020 11:28

  • Mitzi Schaper Rivas

    why won't it let me purchase more coins?

    10/23/2020 04:51

  • Aurelia Pinder

    I wished he could change her though so she doesn't consider herself just a weak human and can join him fully

    10/21/2020 00:55

  • Aurelia Pinder

    I liked the book, though I didn't expect to spend almost $20 on it. That's more than I spend on a hard copy! That hit my pocket a little hard but I had to finish lol.

    10/21/2020 00:54

  • Aurelia Pinder

    I'm enjoying the story so far. I do have one comment though. In english, a cabinet is a storage unit in the kitchen. You use this word to describe a room I think.

    10/18/2020 17:21

  • dee brack

    I love the story. Did you mean to make Eve so frustrating? If you did then kudos she pissed me off several times throughout the story๐Ÿ˜‚ But not to the so much as to reading. Great writing๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿฝ!

    10/13/2020 00:22

  • Suzanne Scott

    amazing story, loved it so much I couldn't stop reading till the end

    10/12/2020 03:59

  • Linda Hughes

    Knew his mother was up to no good. Eve get yourself back to Eros. Eve think you're a special person with some special powers that you don't know about yet

    10/11/2020 19:14

  • Tico Odum

    this is a great book but Eve is way too immature are they going to mate or not? is she going to grow up? or keep acting like a toddler?

    10/11/2020 07:33

  • darkbeauty32

    love the story

    10/10/2020 13:14

  • Anne Thompson

    looking forward th each chapter

    10/10/2020 05:12

  • Dingo Baby

    why omg seriously why does the it you body it's you choice always ruin such a good since in the book dude I was reading this book get all emotional about the scene and out of nowhere I stop because of that ....like leave that stuff out of a great moment we dont need a secret agenda

    10/09/2020 07:56

  • Brandi Lynn Barth

    This book has a good story, enough to make me keep reading to find out what happens next. Iโ€™m glad to see there are very few typos and errors like other books on this app. Sometimes i feel people are typing these stories on their phones and it auto corrects and puts a totally different word. Keep them stories coming!

    10/07/2020 15:24

  • Lani

    i love the chapters all of them. this book is so gritty compared to the flowery shit you see all the time!

    10/05/2020 10:35

  • AJMann

    I'm currently on chapter 66 and I love it!! I understand everything you are trying to say even though it's not the English I use here in the USA. You are so talented. Thank you for sharing your gift with us! I've always wanted to write but I can never make it flow smoothly. Keep writing and sharing your amazing talents with the world!!

    10/04/2020 17:40

  • Kami

    Horribly written, so scattered, and the grammar leaves much to be desired. Maybe try editing before making it available for the readers?

    10/04/2020 11:47

  • Reader-586470

    I miss the chapter on what happend to Anton who supposed to be responsible for the Queen safety and the crazies. Also it could be good to have a chapter on the lunaโ€™s death.

    10/02/2020 05:29

  • S. Alkinbee

    what is a Dinosaur Naggie? the only thing I could find was Scottish. A naggie being a wooden cup with a handle.

    09/30/2020 02:21

  • S. Alkinbee

    If the Watchers get burned if they leave their boarders without an order from The King, why was Anto in town? Why was Aaraya able to follow Claudia around?

    09/30/2020 02:07

  • S. Alkinbee

    You use the word Cabinet for Office. Are you French?

    09/29/2020 19:01

  • S. Alkinbee

    Ch 59 Eros and Eve are against a wall, her legs around his waist. Ch 60 starts with them still having the same argument but now she is able to walk backwards away from him. I think there needs to be a transition sentence that has Eros putting Eve down

    09/29/2020 16:17

  • S. Alkinbee

    on Ch 50. I wish you had added Zander earlier to the story.

    09/29/2020 05:58

  • S. Alkinbee

    Is Evangeline a curvy not skinny woman or is she someone so tiny the Luna can pick her up and hold her on her lap like a child. Ya cant have it both ways

    09/29/2020 05:37

  • AstarteLor

    Finally finished reading! love the story, great job! quick ending though. I wish the watchers were able to figure out where Eve was after they figured out where Ally was

    09/28/2020 09:13

  • AstarteLor

    ch 84, not liking the 4yr old. I get that she grew fast or whatever, but she's taking and acting way, way too old. Also bratty. I wish she acted like a 4yr old

    09/28/2020 07:51

  • lunar kiss

    just one more question: will the sequel talk about eve and eros life after they gor mated? i would really love to hear about them again!!!

    09/28/2020 00:42

  • lunar kiss

    girl, i loved this story, I ate it whole in just a few days. cant wait to read the sequel!

    09/28/2020 00:37

  • lunar kiss

    omg it was about time they got mated!!!!

    09/28/2020 00:36
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