Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments
Nikki Davis
I really enjoy reading the first few chapters of this story and the writer is doing a great job on these chapter's its it's a page Turner wanting you to read more to see what happens next
09/04/2023 07:05Alis Sylvie
# " Alpha Kane " i love this book!! Well done ! Bravo 👏👏👏❤😊
09/04/2023 07:05Em S
the plot is well built and I've thoroughly enjoyed this reading. the way it flows was awesome!
09/04/2023 07:05
Dorien Shirley Sue
It's one of the best stories.. I like how it flows and some respect for the writer
09/04/2023 07:05
Bri_chan0
i just read the first chapter and this was like: Hey...That's pretty good I really like it. Good job. <3
09/04/2023 07:05かかし先生
I love!
09/04/2023 07:05Bri_chan0
i just read the first chapter and this was like: Hey...That's pretty good I really like it. Good job. <3
09/04/2023 07:05Sam Ting
called it 😄 had a feeling this girl had some balls she's way too good for that overinflated Alfa.
09/04/2023 07:05
SweetBaker
Darkness has come upon me. This beginning is so saddle, I feel bad yet I'm smoking up the mess. Remember me? For a start, I'm wow!!! But thirdly, I'm like get out of here. Lol
09/04/2023 07:05Cordelia Cara Mack
The writer liked the books I have read so she sent me sample chaps to read SO GLAD I DID
09/04/2023 07:05
HS55
Although I’ve only read the first few chapters, the beginning alone really drew me in. The descriptive details of every paragraph and the small splash ed of humor can conclude that this book is beautifully written. I’m really glad someone requested me to read this book ‘cause I enjoyed every minute of it. Thanks author for the amazin book!
09/04/2023 07:05Bri_chan0
i just read the first chapter and this was like: Hey...That's pretty good. I really like it. Good job. <3
09/04/2023 07:05Cam S
Beautifully written. Can't wait to read more. Definitely going to be recommending this😚
09/04/2023 07:05
Fathima Tasneem
the story line is quite good !!! the detailed explanation makes it really interesting to read more!!
09/04/2023 07:05Ikiru-no-life
the prologue was really Nice, it's not like other story I read and the writting is Nice too !
09/04/2023 07:05
Novitasari A
Good story! I love every detail of what character feels and do. But, the place setting is poorly explained. So, I can't imagine it. I will read the next chapter hohohoho
09/04/2023 07:05Ana
I really appreciate it. the story flows correctly and make you want more.
09/04/2023 07:05-LilNightmare-
I love this story already, it's writing is very detailed that you can actually imagine this! Author-chan you did an amazing job! (≧▽≦)
09/04/2023 07:05
Trashcan
This book has a good way of making you want more! it has a classic story with a great approach. I'm glad I was told about the story.
09/04/2023 07:05Ana
I really appreciate it. the story flows correctly and make you want more.
09/04/2023 07:05Ayesha Zahir
it's very interesting plot I think it will be a big hit story I will love story
09/04/2023 07:05
Serenity Vidal
I’ve only read a few chapters and I love it! It’s not often I come across a good supernatural book. One of the authors recommended this book to me and I’m absolutely loving it! Although I hope Kane has a good character development, he’s so frustrating but I couldn’t stop reading haha would recommend this 100% to anyone who loves supernatural books and a seemingly so far a strong female lead (she could use a little fierceness when it comes to her mate, so hopefully it’s shown later on in the book) other than that it’s a great book so far!!
09/04/2023 07:05NeverInTheFirstPlace
I must say I love the Ember and her friends like seriously she's strong but has a low self-esteem. but who can forget the Buzzfeed Unsolved reference? You have no idea how my eyes widens when I saw that. Overall this is Dope. Thank you for letting me review this book Author! ♡ -Venous_Mijorou
09/04/2023 07:05Frost Studios
I WOULD HAVE KICKED HIM SJJSJSJSJZJSJS
09/04/2023 07:05
Day Dreamer
he don't want her but still he is reminding that she is his. what the fudge he think he is doing!!
09/04/2023 07:05NeverInTheFirstPlace
I must say I love the Ember and her friends like seriously she's strong but has a low self-esteem. but who can forget the Buzzfeed Unsolved reference? You have no idea how my eyes widens when I saw that. Overall this is Dope. Thank you for letting me review this book Author! ♡ -Venous_Mijorou
09/04/2023 07:05
Jojo 3939
i am so glad the writer recommended this story
09/04/2023 07:05
Sneha Talwar
This book really deserves some attention, good work 👍👍
09/04/2023 07:05
Jeoniana
i didn't regret on reading this. its worth reading for. keep up the good work 💜
09/04/2023 07:05
unfxzed_szn
I've only read a few chapters but I can tell that I will really love this book. I absolutely love the way the author describes & the variety in vocabulary.
09/04/2023 07:05Frost Studios
wjustsjjsjsj. WOOOW
09/04/2023 07:05
narellereonard
Thanks Author for recommending your story to me. It's awesome . I'll read it 🥰
09/04/2023 07:05
aarya kurup
great plot❤
09/04/2023 07:05Frost Studios
HOLY 😻 THIS IS GREATTTT
09/04/2023 07:05narellereonard
Thanks Author for recommending your story to me. It's awesome . I'll read it 🥰
09/04/2023 07:05Fi Bi
When im reading the prologue and she got rejected, im already imagining that the female omega which is the alpha's mate is not just an ordinary omega... And i knew it when im continuing reading to chapter one 😍... Looking forward to read this all..
09/04/2023 07:05Maple
I'm just at the start of the story, but what is the name and gender or the MC?
09/04/2023 07:05
Taneia Hall
loveeee
09/04/2023 07:05narellereonard
Thanks Author for recommending your story to me. It's awesome . I'll read it 🥰
09/04/2023 07:05Queenzy Boo
I'm loving the book so much ❤️
09/04/2023 07:05אוראל צדוק
😁
09/04/2023 07:05
_manan_01
This is a well written work and the amount of words in each chapter are perfect. Did not wear me out while reading. The description was so amazing and the must cliffhanger was soo well.
09/04/2023 07:05
Lexi Munshaw
I honestly can say, just from reading the first 6 chapters, this book is amazing! I would highly recommend this to anybody who enjoys werewolf Fiction.
09/04/2023 07:05Karina Santos
This is my little note to the Author (Note: I have only read up to Chapter 7 and do plan on reading the rest!)! Hello lovely! I hope you're doing well. I just wanted to let you know that I've been reading Alpha Kane on AnyStories throughout the day. I am really intrigued from the story you're telling the audience. Typically, I don't read a lot of these types of stories, but I really did enjoy reading some of the chapters! Your writing style captivated me and I didn't want to start reading. The details you go into that describes the scene makes me imagine what's going on in my mind. This story really has me interested in what's going to happen in the next chapters. What relationships will form? Will there be any betrayals? I don't know! I'm really just excited to keep on reading what's going to happen. Usually, when I read these types of stories, I rarely see the female lead get rejected by the male lead. I don't know why, but that intrigued me. To me, stories here and there, get the coupe together too quickly. I'm interested in how the relationship between Ember and Kane will develop. I wonder what other supernatural creatures or events will take place. From what I read there aren't necessarily supernatural occurrences, but I'm pretty sure you have something planned. Supernatural/Paranormal stories are rare occurrences in my case, but I'm really enjoying what you have written down so far. It's captivating to me and curiosity develops when I go from chapter to chapter. To me, I relate to Ember. Being rejected and not wanted by the someone you like (or in this case your mate) is not the greatest feeling in the world. Having struggles is something that I can relate to. I guess that's another reason why I like Ember. I wonder how she will grow as a person and how she deals with everything that is going on. If I were to rate it, I would for now give it a 9/10. I know there is so much more development to the story in later chapters, but I really do enjoy reading the chapters provided on AnyStories.
09/04/2023 07:05
Mrw_03
Oh my life! This book is it and i’m living for it! I am so glad the writer recommended it to me because i. am. inlove!! I love how you really made me feel as if i was there. The detail is amazing! Will definitely carry on reading
09/04/2023 07:05M.M.L.K
I got asked to write a review on this book and I must say the prologue really got my attention, even though I only read some chaps, I like the way the story is going and I am certain the rest will be great as well. I enjoyed the book and I certainly will recommend it to others.
09/04/2023 07:05Queenzy Boo
I'm loving the book so far
09/04/2023 07:05Lexi Munshaw
I honestly can say, just from reading the first 6 chapters, this book is amazing! I would highly recommend this to anybody who enjoys werewolf Fiction.
09/04/2023 07:05ChumiChuu
I really enjoy the story so far. The plot is well described and it has interesting characters. The flow of the storu is smooth and not too fast nor slow. The girl mc has good traits for an omega though she is a bit too submissive but that is totally fine. The boy mc has good alpha traits and you can definitely tell he has dominance over others. I would like to continue reading the story but sadly I am... kinda broke. But keep up the amazing work!
09/04/2023 07:05
Sam
i found this on wattpad...n i really loved this story...I anyway love to read supernatural stories n this is one of the best i read
09/04/2023 07:05Simran Singh
when book's editor send prologe i read it nd i just loved story line❤❤❤
09/04/2023 07:05Lexi Munshaw
I honestly can say, just from reading the first 6 chapters, this book is amazing! I would highly recommend this to anybody who enjoys werewolf Fiction.
09/04/2023 07:05Erika Finch
okay, I'm confused... this is my first time reading this and I don't understand who or what the speaker is. can anyone help?
09/04/2023 07:05wild_spirit06
omg I’m barely 10 chapters into it and I already love it
09/04/2023 07:05ChumiChuu
I really enjoy the story so far. The plot is well described and it has interesting characters. The flow of the storu is smooth and not too fast nor slow. The girl mc has good traits for an omega though she is a bit too submissive but that is totally fine. The boy mc has good alpha traits and you can definitely tell he has dominance over others. I would like to continue reading the story but sadly I am... kinda broke. But keep up the amazing work!
09/04/2023 07:05rmia xr
OMG... THE STORY IS INCREDIBLE. Finally, I wasn't lonely during quarantine!!....I'm very happy... I found something amazing!! Thank you very much for your recommendation....
09/04/2023 07:05
itssydney
Thanks for the recommendation! I just read a whole chapter and I already hooked by your book. I only read a book that has a really good choice of words and this book is definitely one of them. I literally love how you tell the readers from a different perspective. The plot also unpredictable, it makes me curious. I'm surely gonna read the whole book, thanks again!
09/04/2023 07:05Lexi Munshaw
I honestly can say, just from reading the first 6 chapters, this book is amazing! I would highly recommend this to anybody who enjoys werewolf Fiction.
09/04/2023 07:05
fate du preez
ahh I see she's getting there I'm kind of proud of her she's a smart girl that's for sure and to think kane's being indifferent hmm yup spit on his grave again grr jackass I'm happy to see she's regarding herself as more then what people perceive her to be she's not weak not by a long shot
09/04/2023 07:05Erika Finch
okay, I'm confused... this is my first time reading this and I don't understand who or what the speaker is. can anyone help?
09/04/2023 07:05
DXddY1MAttIA9
I can tell this book is amazing already just by reading this one chapter.
09/04/2023 07:05
Zoya Shaikh
amazing
09/04/2023 07:05
Nacht eule
I think this book is very good and it is not like the other books, that are about this sort of thing.
09/04/2023 07:05Lexi Munshaw
I honestly can say, just from reading the first 6 chapters, this book is amazing! I would highly recommend this to anybody who enjoys werewolf Fiction.
09/04/2023 07:05fate du preez
ahh I see she's getting there I'm kind of proud of her she's a smart girl that's for sure and to think kane's being indifferent hmm yup spit on his grave again grr jackass I'm happy to see she's regarding herself as more then what people perceive her to be she's not weak not by a long shot
09/04/2023 07:05
Thato Phiri
This book is amazing!! @Amina Adamou, you've got serious potential and I'm looking forward to more of your books!!
09/04/2023 07:05Elle Grace
I’ve only read seven chapters but I’m already addicted! So thankful the author told me about it. Ember is easy to empathize with but clearly a strong character who’s easy to fall in love with. However Ian is definitely a quick favorite, between his magic and personality I instantly was attached. I can’t wait to read more!
09/04/2023 07:05Lexi Munshaw
I honestly can say, just from reading the first 6 chapters, this book is amazing! I would highly recommend this to anybody who enjoys werewolf Fiction.
09/04/2023 07:05
Sheneadra
this book seems very good so far. I think I'm going to enjoy this.
09/04/2023 07:05Nacht eule
I think this book is very good and it is not like the other books, that are about this sort of thing.
09/04/2023 07:05
Reader-042878
Very detailed I love it
09/04/2023 07:05fate du preez
ahh I see she's getting there I'm kind of proud of her she's a smart girl that's for sure and to think kane's being indifferent hmm yup spit on his grave again grr jackass I'm happy to see she's regarding herself as more then what people perceive her to be she's not weak not by a long shot
09/04/2023 07:05Nacht eule
I think this book is very good and it is not like the other books, that are about this sort of thing.
09/04/2023 07:05Lexi Munshaw
I honestly can say, just from reading the first 6 chapters, this book is amazing! I would highly recommend this to anybody who enjoys werewolf Fiction.
09/04/2023 07:05
loneOldDusty
very good. story. i can tell this is going to be one i read over and over
09/04/2023 07:05
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Not even finished it and I already love the way the plot is going and and the characters developments. These are the kinda books that I could read for days on end.
09/04/2023 07:05Lexi Munshaw
I honestly can say, just from reading the first 6 chapters, this book is amazing! I would highly recommend this to anybody who enjoys werewolf Fiction.
09/04/2023 07:05
Wolfpup_00
I'm so glad that the writer and editor of this book recommends this too me. I can't wait to read the rest of this book
09/04/2023 07:05Reader-042878
Very detailed I love it 😊❤️😊❤️
09/04/2023 07:05Aurelia Price
I read like two chapters but I'm honestly enjoying reading it. it is well written. :)
09/04/2023 07:05
Not Important
I would recommend reading this book after reading the first few chapters I can say that I'm already into the book,as some will think this would be a cliche so far it is not.Thank you for recommending me this book I will continue reading.
09/04/2023 07:05-_-_-_-_-_-
Not even finished it and I already love the way the plot is going and and the characters developments. These are the kinda books that I could read for days on end.
09/04/2023 07:05
Shruti Jha
i really loved the story so far .
09/04/2023 07:05
Saray Beltran
poor: '(but the emotion he had at the beginning was gone:' 0
09/04/2023 07:05Sammy_Waanjai
Gonna whipped Kane's as*.
09/04/2023 07:05Makaykay Holmes
one of the amazing stories I ever read in awhile. I glad I read this book.
09/04/2023 07:05-_-_-_-_-_-
Not even finished it and I already love the way the plot is going and and the characters developments. These are the kinda books that I could read for days on end.
09/04/2023 07:05
_Rachel-Lycan_
This book is amazing! It really brings the reader in!
09/04/2023 07:05Trepa, thanos peppa Pig
I found this book threw wattapad and I've only recently started reading it, but so far its really interesting!
09/04/2023 07:05Nacht eule
I think this book is very good and it is not like the other books, that are about this sort of thing.
09/04/2023 07:05E. WH.
Five chapters in and I have no doubt that this story is amazing in all ways! The author(s) of this wonderful story clearly know how to provoke emotions and make their characters seem real and relatable! Never mind being one of my favorite genres (slow-burn, angsty romance with werewolves? Sign me up!) this story is so diverse, which brings me to my favorite part of the book so far. POC main characters, specifically Black main characters are few and far in between. When the authors described Ember, her goals, her motivations, it felt like I was Ember! As a Black reader and author, it is liberating to see Black characters written well without racism or stereotypes. I look forward to reading the rest of this magnificent story, and I hope my fellow fantasy and supernatural fans will enjoy this book!
09/04/2023 07:05
Kazzie_xx
Honestly, this book is absolutely amazing and has great flow. I really really love the characters so far. I'm excited to read more!
09/04/2023 07:05LaurensStar
i love this story <3 thank you to the writer to send me this, the narrative is soooo good ♡
09/04/2023 07:05Otseven Ritz
This is my first time reading an alpha story,.. it's gud👍..and someone recommended me this, I was going to read only some chapters coz I have an exam soon but I find it interesting so kept reading it😭😅😅
09/04/2023 07:05Aurelia Price
I read like two chapters but I'm honestly enjoying reading it. it is well written. :)
09/04/2023 07:05LaurensStar
i love this story <3 thank you to the writer to send me this, the narrative is soooo good ♡
09/04/2023 07:05
♥︎book._.ish♥︎
okay I’ve started the prologue and I’m officially HOOKED! Gosh! I looove supernatural stories especially werewolves🥺 ugh I swear I have a weak spot for these kinds of stories. ESPECIALLY those that talk about mates🥴 wouldn’t it be nice knowing that someone is your mate so that you don’t have to go through the trouble to date and stuff? apparently NOT that’s what the story says😂 can’t wait to read more! you can expect more comments like this in the future🥴♥️
09/04/2023 07:05Mariva Taylor
I love this book already. It's really interest and mysterious
09/04/2023 07:05
LaYoonmin_shipper
Wow, I really like how you write
09/04/2023 07:05YukiRobin
um,, I'm Yukiribinson. The story is interesting. Not the tyoe I would read, but it's good.
09/04/2023 07:05
