Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments
ames0723
I was requested to read it by the author, and Iβm glad I did. itβs great!
09/04/2023 07:04
Megan
This story is well written with plenty of description but I am not a fan of the actual plot itself. The male rejecting his mate because she's a omega, and basically tries to control her life at school. He has already made her cry and feel depressed. So, I am not a fan of the main male character. He already seems toxic. And the female character is beating up people in her spare time?
09/04/2023 07:04
The Mistake
I need a friend like Aster. I'm the friend who is Aster, ready to kill, but I have a feeling my friends couldnt care less about me sometimes...πππ
09/04/2023 07:04Jophee Bejosano
My honest review on this chapter, well the feeling of the mc is on the first part is relatable you can feel her emotions of being a nobody but I've lost it on the ending part where she felt lost after being rejected. For me there is so much unecessary detail on the falling part but not much detail on the mc devasting part of rejection. Where the emotion should be focus on, it's just me but I think it would have been better if I felt more hollow or empty after rejection like something felt missing afterwards rather than feeling sadness and humiliation.So the feeling of being excited for the next chapter have this kinda foggy feeling whether should I or should I not. But overall atleast 70% of this chapter I like, please don't get mad it's my first time here so this is my non-bias review
09/04/2023 07:04L_gumo
hey i'm here ;))
09/04/2023 07:04
margareth 10
I'm glad the writer recommended me this, it's incredible
09/04/2023 07:04
Raeπ
This Just Got recommended to Me And a few Chapters and I already love itπ Keep up the good work!
09/04/2023 07:04Jasmin Sanchez
really well put together story itβs enjoyable and really well worded it really makes me want to move forward with the book and thatβs a good thing youβve got pretty great structure and Iβm sure many are gonna love your story
09/04/2023 07:04Lena McCalister
I love it so far it's really captivating and intriguing I would read it over and over aging I love it so much that it definitely makes it into my top five favorite books.
09/04/2023 07:04margareth 10
I'm glad the writer recommended me this, it's incredible
09/04/2023 07:04tiger lily
I actually really enjoy reading this book itβs really interesting
09/04/2023 07:04alexa Lamban
I love the story I didn't regret after reading this thanks to the one who recommended it to me I really enjoy it even though I just read a few chapters try to read it swear you will not regret reading this love this story <3
09/04/2023 07:04Aβjoyna N
Iβm so glad she said she no to him ππΎ. Ember deserves better than that so denying him the one thing he thought he was going to get made reading this chapter worth it
09/04/2023 07:04
Sungynah
some of the chapters in this story is lock so i can only read few of them but overall the story is really great. i really enjoy reading some of the chapter, continue on making this type of story as it gives more entertaining to the readers. the story itself is very wonderful.I only found this book by the recommendation of the editor and Author, and i really love the flow of it. I'm a fan of any fantasy stories and this book is one of the great story i read. Fantastic! 2 thumbs up for the great work!
09/04/2023 07:04Kaysper28
I'm glad the editor asked me to read and review this book, because so far it's great, it's easy to read and it's really entertaining..I really love how this story keeps you guessing and wanting to know more. I look forward to reading more ~Kaysper28
09/04/2023 07:04
Fubuki_Sumie 19
I love it π Iβm already on chapter 6
09/04/2023 07:04The Mistake
This chapter was also really good! Would I be correct in assuming, our girl, is a badass fighter, who can kick but, but is also an Omega at school?
09/04/2023 07:04Sasha Anggrahini
The story is amazing. I think there are too much complicated things in Amber's mind which is good for character building. But I think it's enough to explain about how Amber's family conditions and etc... and it would be more nice to focus on Amber-Kane Relationships, more desire things that could blown up the readers. Overall, this book could be an amazing recommendation for supernatural readers. Good job!
09/04/2023 07:04Audrey Davidson
The beginning caught my interest and it's really affect fascinating book to read. Its written, well versed, and it keeps you on the edge of your seat till the end and I can't wait to see what happens next.
09/04/2023 07:04Maria Jose Herrera Palomino
i loved Thank you very much to the writer for recommending me
09/04/2023 07:04
Lillylovee01
I am absolutely in LOVE with this book. the writer keeps you in suspense and everything fits together. I am so glad that the Writer got ahold of me to read this. I cannot stop reading this!
09/04/2023 07:04Yemili Uchiha
Thanks so much for asked muy opinion about this book, Because is fantastic. It's incredible the plot has slow and continued born, the story just captive your attention and you don't want to stop rearing. It's very enjoyed. I'm really want to congratulate the authors of this work, Is imaginably how you can understand and feel how the characters would act and why they would act that way. I would recommended this book for all muy friends who really would appreciated this beautiful, fantastic and incredible work! I wishes you the best for you and yours future works, you have the talent to make a world with words!
09/04/2023 07:04warwindy
2... college! no sense of time or age, still a rare main character without name or gender, at least werewolf but being bullied by choice? is he a fighter once in a blue moon unnoticed?? kane dont want an omega as a mate so can figure out erratic conduct but the main character... my inner unlicensed psychologist is protesting on the whole scene. So interessant story
09/04/2023 07:04
Monuoyo Tetsola
I don't usually read this kind of books but this story is intriguing and intresting. I am starting to find it like soooo entertaining
09/04/2023 07:04Maria Jose Herrera Palomino
i loved Thank you very much to the writer for recommending me
09/04/2023 07:04Hetvi chulawala
I GOT ASKED TO READ THE PROLOGUE AND GIVE A REVIEW BY THE AUTHOR AND BOY WAS A I HOOKED THE MOMENT TYE FIRST PARAGRAPH ENDED. I KNEW THAT THIS WAS A BOOK I COULD FINISH IN RECORD BREAKING TIME. I STARTED TODAY... LET'S SEE WHEN I FINISH
09/04/2023 07:04pikart _
I got the recommendation of this story from kristie_bratsch in Wp.my Wp account kim1930, I've read a few chapters on this story, I can't express what I feel but it's very amazing story and I love the fantasy story, make my imagination getting wild and increasingly curious about the next chapter. thank you so much
09/04/2023 07:04
Lily Jaden
just wow
09/04/2023 07:04Zenia
This story from what I can tell is a very incredible and complicated love story between the characters
09/04/2023 07:04Maria Jose Herrera Palomino
i loved Thank you very much to the writer for recommending me
09/04/2023 07:04
derek_hale
A very well written, thrilling book. after reading the first chapter, I can say: read this book. you won't regret. i just like how it all begins, the characters are well invented and the plot is highly enjoyable! i look forward to read more of it soon
09/04/2023 07:04
S M
This is a really well written story. the narration of the author actually sucks you in. As for the plot of the story, there is obviously character development throughout the chapters, especially when it comes to the main protagonist. Even though it says "The End" in the last chapter, the story somehow feels kinda incomplete, but maybe that's just me wanting more. The ending of the story is not to my liking, to be honest, but I can see how or why many others would like it. For me, I believe respect and faith are things that can't be earned very easily, and I would've liked a bit more of a character development on part of the male lead to actually earn those things from the protagonist. It shouldn't just fall into his lap, and he shouldn't be able to get away with anything. But apart from my personal beliefs, I think the book was a good read, if not for the romantic aspect, the protagonist's adventures definitely made up for it. It kept me hooked to read more of the story. So to conclude, even though some parts of the plot of the story is not really to my liking, the author's writing style, the character sketch of the protagonist, and the adventurous nature of the story made the story much more appealing, which is a big deal considering my displeasure for the the male lead. The author did a really good job. I can imagine them writing something with a plot more to my preference and I can see it being one of my favourites. So, dear author, you're doing a great job. This story obviously took some hard work and it can be seen in the writing style. Wishing you all the best for your future works.
09/04/2023 07:04Cygna Tasya 25
I already read a few chapters and I love the way Ember don't have a "weak heart" and independent. Normally in every story that I read, the omega always have too much problem that doesn't make sense to me or they'll resort to rejecting and moving away from the pack. But in this one, Ember face her problem and not running away. totally glad this piece of art got recommend to me(β‘ Ο β‘)
09/04/2023 07:04DarkBlondeWatch
omg why would you say something so mean to her
09/04/2023 07:04Blue Room Studio
I liiiike it !!! it's a really really good story, even though I haven't finished it yet π Anyway, thanks for recommending this to me, this is really good π€§π€§
09/04/2023 07:04ms._ diamond
I love it, enough I just started it
09/04/2023 07:04Toni Egginton
I read the first two chapters and was instantly hooked on the story
09/04/2023 07:04
rainbowhwa
i found about this book on wp! although this isnβt my preferred genre, the story is very captivating and the plot is detailed and beautifully built. i def recommend this to anyone who is looking for a read :) -rainbowhwa
09/04/2023 07:04saya Reid
oh..i love Ian hahahaha
09/04/2023 07:04DarkBlondeWatch
omg why would you say something so mean to her
09/04/2023 07:04
Elvianita 20
I like your story, the story is very interesting
09/04/2023 07:04ms._ diamond
I love it, enough I just started it
09/04/2023 07:04derek_hale
A very well written, thrilling book. after reading the first chapter, I can say: read this book. you won't regret. i just like how it all begins, the characters are well invented and the plot is highly enjoyable! i look forward to read more of it soon
09/04/2023 07:04
Reader-236319
I knew he cared about her
09/04/2023 07:04DarkBlondeWatch
omg why would you say something so mean to her
09/04/2023 07:04
boxer at heart
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09/04/2023 07:04Sabrina Marie
excellent job
09/04/2023 07:04derek_hale
A very well written, thrilling book. after reading the first chapter, I can say: read this book. you won't regret. i just like how it all begins, the characters are well invented and the plot is highly enjoyable! i look forward to read more of it soon
09/04/2023 07:04rawesstadrii
this is honestly a great book the author recommended it to me and iβm so glad i checked it out and started to read it ! i donβt usually read straight stories because i find it boring but this one will definitely get finished read!
09/04/2023 07:04Reader-011670
this book is really good so far
09/04/2023 07:04Yasmine Dicks
I'm sorry to say but I was confused throughout the whole book. Either chapters were missing or this is a squeal or something because I was confused the whole time. The plot felt rush and seemed to have parts misplaced, characters popped out of nowhere with no backstory or explanation, the world building wasn't too clear, and the main leads' relationship seemed to be full of cliques and dramatic on and off again scenes. Not hating on the book. just leaving a critique so the author can better themselves. The first chapter was writing amazingly, but from onwards it seemed like a lot was put into the plot. But small details to weave it all together were misplaced. So the main focus would be on pacing and making sure you add minor details to tie it all together π.
09/04/2023 07:04Frisca Koagouw
Thank you to the writer and the editor for recommended this story for me,honestly i really like this story. Really appreciate it.π
09/04/2023 07:04boxer at heart
I just want to let u know I think your book is amazing itβs everything I want it a book I just love it you did an amazing job you a very talented write :)
09/04/2023 07:04derek_hale
A very well written, thrilling book. after reading the first chapter, I can say: read this book. you won't regret. i just like how it all begins, the characters are well invented and the plot is highly enjoyable! i look forward to read more of it soon
09/04/2023 07:04Triangle Person
To: the author and editor Thank you so much for asking me to look at some sample chapters! I was simply enthralled by then!
09/04/2023 07:04
Katerina Kavouklis
Iβm so happy this book was recommended to me! such an amazing read!!! absolutely love how each sentence just flows into the other! definitely worthwhile π€© hope to see more from this spectacularly talented author!!
09/04/2023 07:04Broke Army
the author or editor had actually recommended me reading this book Iβve only read a few chapters so far how ever the book flow wonderfully it is really captivating to read it like puts you in a trace they did really well on this and I hope they continue doing this I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys reading things like this or maybe anyone in general I think anyone would love reading these!!
09/04/2023 07:04
Lynn Martin
I found out about this book through a recommendation, and I wasn't disappionted at all! From the very beginning, this book pulls you in and you can't help from wanting to read more. A definite page-turner.
09/04/2023 07:04Alexis Thompson
I was approached through wp too read this. Glad I was. i was thrown for a spin a few times while only 3 chapters in. I just found out her name. I will continue to read for even though I am still early in the book I can tell it will be good. I hope the author does good with this book and is successful in any other possible future books written.
09/04/2023 07:04jeneiry andrada
I'm glad i read it. This story is well-written and the flow is good. I am not really into this genre but reading this made me interested. I want to discover a lot more of this genre, i can spare a few hours for this β€β€β€
09/04/2023 07:04
LostEchos291
This book is wonderful! So glad I was reached out to, to read it! Just wonderful! <3
09/04/2023 07:04Frisca Koagouw
Thank you to the writer and the editor for recommended this story for me,honestly i really like this story. Really appreciate it.π
09/04/2023 07:04
Elisia
Iβm only on chapter 3 and I absolutely love it so far! I am so glad the writer recommended it to me, I can already tell that itβs going to be a really good readπ
09/04/2023 07:04One_Galway_Gurl
I love this story so much! thanks for recommending me this story uwu~
09/04/2023 07:04Tiana McKean
the premise of the book is really good, a couple of the plotlines could be considered repetative but they added there own spin to it to make it there own and added there own twists to it witch does alot for the story.
09/04/2023 07:04Frisca Koagouw
Thank you to the writer and the editor for recommended this story for me,honestly i really like this story. Really appreciate it.π
09/04/2023 07:04
Friendsharktrash14
I've read this book, and it's awesome!
09/04/2023 07:04warwindy
A ton of contradictions on chapter 1 but it can be ok later...so is a He whith unknown name and a fighter who is at the bottom of his raze, unwanted and shy?? unexpected in a wood way
09/04/2023 07:04SilverAnimeWolf 2.0
I don't get it. How the story started? Who's Kane? Is the main character a werewolf as well or just a human?
09/04/2023 07:04
Ruth Matthew
the story is one of a kind
09/04/2023 07:04shelby rensel
very well with an incredibly wide range of vocabulary. not only that, but how the author describes such details, just grips your interest and keeps you on your toes, really making you feel as if you are in the story yourself. wonderful work
09/04/2023 07:04Carmela Espiritu Gasis
So I started reading this today. The few chapters I've read totally had me hooked!The story has very good pacing, u won't even have the time to think 'the story is dragging', cause ur probably scrolling for the next chapter already. The characters and settings are very well-written(not too much info dump/less words, enough details)enough for me to picture it really well in my mind. I like how the main character refuses to accept 'weakness' that was inherent for omegas as the world sees. This rebel-against-the-world kind of plot is a gem among other cliched alpha-omega stories that portrayed omegas as someone to be ALWAYS protected, u go girl.The slight touch of angst shot through my kokoro, i won't comment on the alpha's assholishness, bc we all know what lies behind that π. Overall, im broke af right now, but its a story worth coming back here for. Good Job Author-sama, kudos to youπ
09/04/2023 07:04
Amber Shaw
okay so first of all thanks a lot for recommending this book to me, its amazing although i really don't like romance stories but i really enjoyed reading this one, its superbi just read the first few chapters and i am already in love with it, keep up the good work i can't wait to read other chapters.
09/04/2023 07:04
Mahi Dilz
It's so sad that i was able to read only 6 chapters. even though this is a amazing story. The curiosity was killing me entire time. Anyone who are wishing to read this, please don't hesitate. At the beginning it seems to be rushed.bt don't worry it will definitely interesting.
09/04/2023 07:04Helena Cattherine
The plot of the story is really good and the way it flows just shows how good the writing is. Iβve read many werewolf books but this has definitely got to be one of the better few
09/04/2023 07:04Kerri Kobe
I absolutely love this book the author sent me some chapters to review and I immediately read all of it. I love everything about this story
09/04/2023 07:04Reader-828776
so far what I have read its so good. it caught my attention right away. I recommend it 100% π
09/04/2023 07:04
Dandra Green
This book is great and I would recommend anyone to read it. You can obviously see that it's well thought out and structured and I'm glad that the editor had recommended this book me and hope you and the author continue the good work. God bless you all and have a wonderful day.
09/04/2023 07:04Ally Forrest
I love this so much.... its thrilling and draws you in so much π
09/04/2023 07:04ryanne balbin
i read few of the chapters of this story itβs so good i really love reading this book i really enjoyed it im glad that someone recommended this to meππ
09/04/2023 07:04Kayla Jessee
really like this story
09/04/2023 07:04
Sarah Ichi
This story is great,you did an amazing job.
09/04/2023 07:04Packlover
the creator asked me to review this book, after reading the first chapter I can say its really good, it leaves you wanting more. thats something every writer wants to accomplish.
09/04/2023 07:04April Borchers
love love this story is there a sequel
09/04/2023 07:04
Doritos
Im glad the writer told me to check it out.
09/04/2023 07:04Packlover
the creator asked me to review this book, after reading the first chapter I can say its really good, it leaves you wanting more. thats something every writer wants to accomplish.
09/04/2023 07:04Adrielle Fernandes
oh my god congratulations on history I loved it I love this context this plot I am wattpadd's drikalovecalzona I really loved your story
09/04/2023 07:04Reader-668329
this is a great book! Iβd give it a 10/10!
09/04/2023 07:04
nor adiba nadia
This book is very interesting, I really like the storyline of this book ,love it very much and I really mean it... thanks to the author for recommending, by the way I'm @noradibanadia
09/04/2023 07:04
Ayu-chan
I'm kinda picky when it comes to genre. Tbh, I'm not into vampires/werewolves genre but, I'd only read few and I'm looking forward for more because it's really interesting! I wanted to thank the editor recommending me a good story. I would recommend this to my friends too. To the author of this story, thumbs up for you!
09/04/2023 07:04darkcat j
I honestly think this book is really interesting so far. I'm glad I learned about it, I don't usually read books like this but honestly I'm glad I read this!
09/04/2023 07:04Packlover
the creator asked me to review this book, after reading the first chapter I can say its really good, it leaves you wanting more. thats something every writer wants to accomplish.
09/04/2023 07:04
Sendy Sen23
someone from wp is recommend me to read this story. and it's such a good story, because it well written, the characters are likeable because the writer make me understand the reason of their action and the flow of the plot is enjoyable . I think this story has an excellent potential. good luck!!
09/04/2023 07:04Diana Akenzua
wow, I love this story so much. I hope I can read all your chapters. :D
09/04/2023 07:04icha maysa maya
thank you for your recomended me this story. i feel nice to read this story.
09/04/2023 07:04Reader-668329
this is a great book! Iβd give it a 10/10
09/04/2023 07:04
Uptothesky π
I'm really happy that I agreed to read the book, it's totally worth it!
09/04/2023 07:04Shaniqua Green
the intro is so good im already hooked on to the book
09/04/2023 07:04Hawin Ceran
have the editor been writing this with another person cause the person that sends me it said that to me
09/04/2023 07:04Packlover
the creator asked me to review this book, after reading the first chapter I can say its really good, it leaves you wanting more. thats something every writer wants to accomplish.
09/04/2023 07:04
