Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments

  • LunaNerraa

    Aaahhh I love this chap ... so my mind is also itching to read more... and yeah thank u for recommend me this story...

    08/18/2020 17:09
  • Chloe

    you sent me the first two chapters on wattpad so I came right here and I love it. I’m glad to find a paranormal book that isnt a typical story. it’s amazing -Chloe

    08/18/2020 17:07
  • Shan Babieboo Abigale Ellis

    this book is amazing, thanks for suggesting it.

    08/18/2020 17:03
  • Tarie

    wow. this had me from the prologue. the writing got me so immersed in the story, i felt all the emotions of the main lead. the writing is really well done. it's one of those books which can keep me captured and have me upset that its ended. writing is not messy and complicated. structured very well and easy to follow which character is talking. worth the read.

    08/18/2020 16:58
  • Silver King

    I found out about this book on wattpad when the writer recommended it to me. I'm so glad I said yes to reviewing it, the prologue captured my attention and I was eager to read more. I've read many books throughout the years and I can positively say that this is one of the best that I have ever read. It is so well thought out and put together, it really is one of the best Supernatural books I have read.

    08/18/2020 16:42
  • human

    I was contacted on Wattpad to see his work in Any stories according to the story, it has an exciting plot, brings the reader as if he is in the position of the book, is good and has the right word placement. wp : human_gaje

    08/18/2020 16:17
  • Sonia Boram

    I had the editor send me this book through wattpad and i am glad i checked it out

    08/18/2020 16:10
  • Reader-011670

    this book is really good so far

    08/18/2020 16:09
  • Tiana McKean

    the premise of the book is really good, a couple of the plotlines could be considered repetative but they added there own spin to it to make it there own and added there own twists to it witch does alot for the story.

    08/18/2020 15:39
  • Isabell Lumpkins

    I found this book through Wattpad, I'm glad because so far it's amazing. Good spelling and punctuation, which is what I like in stories I read.

    08/18/2020 15:39
  • Lili Sukenic

    I found out about this through Wattpad! I thank the writer for introducing it to me. not a lot of stories draw me in and this one really did. the writing is very good.

    08/18/2020 15:20
  • Sofia Araújo

    I’ve read a couple chapters and honestly it’s a really good book . Has great potential and is very enjoyable and captivating . Love it

    08/18/2020 14:52
  • Syliane

    I was worried that this was going to be a very generic werewolf story but I’ve been pleasantly proven wrong😌

    08/18/2020 14:04
  • Lottegum_park

    Found out about this book from Wattpad and I must say it was a blessing in disguise. The plot and the storyline are so amazingly descriptive making it easy to visualize the scenarios in our mind and making us feel as though we are part of the scene going on. Thanks to the author for recommending this to me. Happy reading ahead everyone. Do give this book a chance.

    08/18/2020 13:31
  • e_man

    it's so interesting and one of the rare once to always want one more chapter stories it's littttttt 🔥🔥♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

    08/18/2020 13:25
  • J_sozyar_J

    Oh.my.god, I'm not good at giving compliments but when I say it was amazing and I like it so much I truly mean it, I'll read all of it cause I can't wait YESSS

    08/18/2020 13:15
  • Sweet_QueenSerenity

    WOW nice Story nice plot infact I love stories like this. Keep it up:)

    08/18/2020 13:07
  • Chiara Kim

    As your request i came in and read some chap. I like the story, i enjoy to read. It's me (Chiisseee) from wattpad 😊

    08/18/2020 12:57
  • Demon Shadowkill

    I like it so far

    08/18/2020 12:47
  • jihanabati✨

    I found this story at wattpad and the writer was recommended to me. I'm really truly fall in love with this story :o

    08/18/2020 12:32
  • Juliane_Mae_Editz

    I cam here from Wattpad, because I got a message from the editor of this to review it, so here I am. For starters, I could see the potential of this book, it is a very creative and unique idea which I very much adore. The flow in the story is very good, it makes me calm while I'm reading it, which I love. Overall, a great story, I hope you continue on what you are doing, because if you do, you'll make a great author someday!

    08/18/2020 11:53
  • ilovewerewolves221

    The writer reached out to me on wattpad, recommending me to read a sample chapter. And to say the least I was quite interested. I've read my fair share of werewolve novels and this one stands out. I've read a couple of chapters and the plot line is really interesting and intriguing. Excited to see how the story unfolds :)

    08/18/2020 11:49
  • ilovewerewolves221

    The writer recommended me to read this book and so far I love it! I've read my fair share of werewolves novels and this one really does stand out. I love the writing and the plot line is really interesting and intriguing so thanks for recommending me to read this book :)

    08/18/2020 11:45
  • Eclipesia_Night

    This is amazing!!!!

    08/18/2020 11:42
  • SPrez95

    I just started really this book, it definitely got my attention, it’s interesting and very well written

    08/18/2020 11:40
  • Elesther Loraine

    A very interesting story which I enjoy reading it. The story just flows beautifuly which makes me enjoy each and every word that was written.

    08/18/2020 11:24
  • Hauwa Adam

    Nice one keep it up

    08/18/2020 11:02
  • fairy of shampoo

    uhmmm hi author! It's me @/beomgyuu_- (from wattpad)i just wanted to say that i actually enjoyed reading it but i'm still not not done with the chapters yet and also i wanted to say that the story is very well written and entertaining to read. Have a great day! :)

    08/18/2020 11:01
  • Tamara Limque

    I really like how it’s written, very well done. The pacing is good and the nearly all of the descriptive terms are used properly. The only few things I could think of that might be in need of reviewing is how you are describing his eyes. Orbs is not recommended term of description. It is a term that disrupts the flow and comes out awkwardly in my humble opinion. I have never seen it written in any published books. But overall, good job

    08/18/2020 10:51
  • Princess Jain Calaunan

    the story was nice

    08/18/2020 10:28
  • Reader-638463

    I am loving this book. It was recommended to me by someone on Wattpad. I’m glad I am getting the chance to read this brilliant book.

    08/18/2020 10:12
  • Lantsov

    Hello! Like a lot of people here, I was also asked by the editor from wp to give a review. I'm not really experienced with writing reviews but here you go: First off, the grammar is amazing! It's not often I find stories with such good grammar. (especially on wp hehe) The choice of words was also great, I can really feel myself being immersed in the story. It also sounds very intriguing, even though I don't read much about paranormal stories. The protagonist is also realistic and relatable. There's really nothing bad about it from what I can see. It's overall an interesting story, and I enjoyed reading the sample chapters.💕

    08/18/2020 10:12
  • veal____deal

    wowwwww~~~~ damn gooddddd

    08/18/2020 10:05
  • Silvia Lestari Wijaya

    I come from wattpad, I got to say this story is very intriguing and written well ❤ . I love Ember's character soooo much

    08/18/2020 10:04
  • Sheerah Chila

    This book was recommended to me by the author and I'm so glad I read it... A Lovely and interesting plot 💕

    08/18/2020 09:48
  • Syahirah Nabila Nasir

    i came here because the writer recommend it and asked me for a honest review. gladly, I agreed right away because i love the storyline. quite nice, entertaining and makes reader more curious on what will happen next. Actually, I already read a few chapter and still could not stop amazed from this masterpiece. The main points of storyline just flows like a river. So soft like its makes me not realise which chapter I read on tht time. Could not explain it very well because its just incredible story ever! good job!

    08/18/2020 09:46
  • lillullaby ༊*· ̊

    Sooo, I admit that books of this genre didn’t always drive me crazy, but from what I’ve read so far I’ve enjoyed it a lot! The way you write got me hooked. I don’t know what I’m going to do with the coins to read the other chapters, but I hope I’ll be able to read it till the end. ^^ //inzcmnia from wattpad

    08/18/2020 09:46
  • Tanvi Diwan

    Tnx for the recommendation I really like the story...its Really enjoyable and entertaining.

    08/18/2020 09:32
  • D'licious Wheelchair

    This story was recommended to me by the author and I'm glad the author did. I love this story. I have read many werewolf stories (the cliche one's) in which one is alpha and other is omega then they are mate and then they fall in love etc... but this one is different and I'm definitely enjoying it.... so thanks to the author for recommending it I will also recommend this story to some of my other friends

    08/18/2020 08:55
  • aniqah khan

    it's rlly great!!!

    08/18/2020 08:20
  • Shaina Pruitt

    read a few chapters and wish I could read more it really does have a ice flow going on with it

    08/18/2020 08:02
  • Euaen Dela Merced

    tbh its so good-

    08/18/2020 07:49
  • Vinix Urufuwa

    Even tough i am not a to big fan of original works, because there is somwere something i dont like, i have to say this story i quite captivating. The chapters are not to long and even if they are short they are not too short. Even better is that this story was proof read and gramma free, the most stories i read are not written properly, i have no fun reading these. Soooo my veredict is: Please continue to write such good stories you are quite gifted. And good job to your editor too. People who can do gramma are the best (XP I am not one of them XD).

    08/18/2020 07:43
  • chynnns

    Wow! Tbh, I'm kinda picky when it comes to genre but although I have only read a few chapters. It really caught my attention and it's very interesting. I wanted to thank the editor for approaching me on wattpad and the author for creating a worderful piece <3

    08/18/2020 07:42
  • Lovely_Little_Human

    I found this book that's to the writer, that recommended it to me and asked me for a review and I'm really glad I did! I haven't read much but I already love it! I'll sure suggest it to my friends, great story!

    08/18/2020 07:29
  • Rayna_ Sia

    So, im the type who likes fictional Stories involving anime. But i wanna say this story was the first one that caught my attention and pulled me away from the anime. When the writer sent me a message on WP i wasnt sure at first but when i read part of the story i was immediately curious and downloaded this app just for this story. I would give this story a 10/10.

    08/18/2020 07:22
  • Sapphire_Ravenclaw

    The Story is amazing. I have read only few chapters and i am already captivated by the plot. I have read several alpha stories, but this one is a nice change.

    08/18/2020 07:16
  • snub scrub

    The author recommended me this and I feel so happy they did like WOW I fell in love when I read those few sample chapters sent !!!

    08/18/2020 07:09
  • Anya Sireniale

    I found this book through wattpad because the author sent me a message, and I am so glad I got that message! I’ve only read a bit of this book but it’s great, I love how it flows and the plot seem very well built thought out. Keep it up!

    08/18/2020 07:00
  • 12342234344334

    The story prologue caught my attention and my curiosity to the story to continue to read.Thanks to the writer that recommended it to me.

    08/18/2020 06:53
  • Ashlin Raime

    When the author of this book messaged me on Wattpad asking me to review her book I was a bit skeptical, but this book astounded me. I’ve read a few chapters and it’s very well written. I am very impressed and will be recommending this book to my friends!

    08/18/2020 06:48
  • King Taehyun

    so uh, this one person on wattpad told me to review this story and im honestly confused???? why do they need me to review a book thats already popular and finished?????

    08/18/2020 06:30
  • Nur Waheeda

    it's just 2 chapter, but enough making me hate Kane to the bone

    08/18/2020 06:25
  • Ronellie Rivera

    A whole package! Warewolves, hybrids, trolls, faeries and the Russians in one fighting scene! What could I ask for more?!

    08/18/2020 06:09
  • Rupsa Majumder

    a person from wp recommend this to me, And now after reading few chapters I'm really enjoying this book.🖤😊

    08/18/2020 06:06
  • Crunchy Cucumber

    i came from wp and HOLY CRAP this is so good, i love how this is going so far!

    08/18/2020 06:06
  • reallazy_

    So glad the author reached out to me and let me read a few samples. I’m very intrigued by this book. I will gladly read the whole thing! THANK YOU!!!

    08/18/2020 06:03
  • Sangay Dema

    I wouldn't compare this story to any other supernatural stories because it have its own unique features on supernatural being. Other than werewolves troll, faerie are included which I haven't found in any other stories. Hunter are given unique features as Russian. story flows are whole new which can't help wondering what will happen in next chapters.

    08/18/2020 06:01
  • Janiyah Daniel

    I also among multiple people got this book from watt pad when a nice editor asked if i could read her and her friends book, I never had this happen to me before so I was like well it would be nice if I read someone’s book and comment, I absolutely love this story it’s written and told in a way that just makes you want to read and know more. if I can put a scale on it would be ten out of ten.

    08/18/2020 05:57
  • Madison rose

    this book is amazing! I’m hooked!😍

    08/18/2020 05:56
  • Winnie Tubiera

    just reading the prologue is already interesting,thank u for the link ,,i aapreciate it very much

    08/18/2020 05:51
  • ZOUISRAINBERRY

    came here per writer's recommendation i dont regret it one bit, i love how the story flows and how the main character is a poc and not just another white girl with blonde hair. The plot is enjoyable and i cant wait to read more, keep up the good work :)

    08/18/2020 05:48
  • Reality_Escaper

    Alpha Kane written by Amina Adamou was recommended to me by the editor of the book through Wattpad. I've honestly read so many books about werewolves and mates, I wasn't positive if this one would stand out from all the others but I'm happy to say that so far it does. I'm only a few chapters in but I can tell that this is going to be an interesting story with great main characters. I'm excited to see where this is going.

    08/18/2020 05:40
  • Arwen Sebolino

    I really love it I just read the few chapters and it’s really good I got to say thank you for the writer who recommended me this..... Thank you I already love your story

    08/18/2020 05:35
  • Kashmala Farooq

    I really really really really really liked it

    08/18/2020 05:27
  • Esha Smiley

    I love this book

    08/18/2020 05:21
  • Emma Magno

    I came here from wattpad, I don’t have the slightest idea that this kind of platform exists and I am beyond glad the author reached out to me to check out this out. I found the very first chapters so engaging. There’s something special, an element that keeps you lured in and it makes me want to know more about this story. Here’s to staying up all night reading this book. I really applaud the writers though. You are creating something beautiful. This could be big! Sending lots of love! ❤️

    08/18/2020 05:20
  • Ronellie Rivera

    First part almost made me stop reading, I thought this was another "Im rejected because Im an omega and Im gonna go sulk in the corner" type of story. The unveiling of the story in the first chapter made me turn the pages. I want to read more.

    08/18/2020 04:53
  • Namki Teroll

    I found this book because the editor asked me to read several chapters. Now I stopped reading such books, but I have to admit that this story is quite interesting. I love the dialogues, the conflict and how the story is presented in general. But sometimes the pace is too quick, but maybe it's just seems to me. Therefore, a solid 9 out of 10.

    08/18/2020 04:40
  • Ala Ahamad

    to be honest I was little hesitant but I don’t I regret reading it I actually loved the prologue but I’m not a huge fan of fairytal vibes or sappy romance. I’m a person who likes a little bit of everything but I actually really enjoyed this thank you for recommending this 😁😁

    08/18/2020 04:39
  • Naphilahun Biam

    I'm really glad the editor recommended me this amazing story. I was filled with amazement with the passing of each chapter. I really love the plot and the way the story flows smoothly.

    08/18/2020 04:33
  • jeongsanjeon97

    I found this book through wp and I already read a few chapters and it is really interesting and can’t wait to read the rest 😄

    08/18/2020 04:21
  • Mimi Queen

    It's one of of the best books I have ever read. There are no grammatical mistakes and the story unraveles at a brisk pace. It's overall an amazing book and I'm going to recommend it to other people.

    08/18/2020 04:19
  • johnny seo

    i was approached by the editor on WP and i've to say, this story definitely worth to read. im kinda the picky person when it comes to genre but i'd only read few chaps and this story is very interesting and enjoyable to the point that i'll recommend this book to all of my friends. keep up the good work author, god bless you!

    08/18/2020 04:16
  • Laweengeen Khaan

    thanks to the author who recommended me this book, even tho ive read the first four chapters only, its still so enjoyable and i can really imagine things happening like the way author described everything was amazing, and the storyline of course the storyline so far is really good. so people im loving this.

    08/18/2020 04:13
  • Maithreyi My3

    that was fab

    08/18/2020 04:10
  • Sonia Rodriguez

    This book is actually so great!! I like the plot and storyline. Very well written and definitely recommend!!!

    08/18/2020 04:07
  • Margaret

    Hiya! The editor messaged me on Wattpad and asked me to take a look at this story. I've read the first few chapters- the ones that are free. I have really enjoyed. what I've read so far and the point of view it is written in. I really like how complex the universe is that the story takes place, it's not just one type of supernatural being but whole communities. Having a college they all go to is very interesting, especially since it offers normal human degrees and courses. It is already evident that there will be some good character development since the prologue. Ember is a very intriguing character with her weak demeanor around her pack and strong demeanor in cage fighting, but also has an artistic side. She has the strength to bring others to their knees but with a hierarchy of dominance in wolf packs she is unable to do so. I always like to see how authors present the types of supernatural creatures, and which ones are portrayed. With this story being centered around werewolves, mates/mating is one characteristic that has slight variations in the way they work and is a way for authors to be unique. One thing I always like to see, and this is just a personal preference, is multiple POVs. It could be just the two main characters or expand further. I think it can give more depth to the stories and a deeper connection between the characters, reader, and storyline. Some readers do not like this as it can make the story hard to follow if there are too many POVs to follow, but in complex universes I it gives a lot of insight into the world the author has created. As I said earlier I only read the first few chapters so my review obviously does not reflect the whole story and therefore is subjective only to what I have read. I in no way mean to cause offense to anyone and am only representing my views and opinions. I hope this review is helpful to the author and editor.

    08/18/2020 04:06
  • Sofi Rose

    The author asked me to check this out, and I am so so glad they did because this is so good! Just from the few chapters I have read, I can tell it’s gonna be amazing all the way through.

    08/18/2020 04:01
  • Huda Rehman

    like so many other people i also found out about this book through whattpad. the writer asked me to review it and i said yes, and I'm glad i did this story is really good almost addictive. props to the writer :)

    08/18/2020 04:01
  • Em S

    the plot is well built and I've thoroughly enjoyed this reading. the way it flows was awesome!

    08/18/2020 03:23
  • loctatomlinson

    I've got a recommendation for this story through Wattpad from the editor and so far it is incredibly interesting. The characters are well described from time to time and it makes me want to read more and more. Amazing story 💙

    08/18/2020 03:05
  • Fathima Tasneem

    the story line is quite good !!! the detailed explanation makes it really interesting to read more!!

    08/18/2020 03:05
  • -LilNightmare-

    I love this story already, it's writing is very detailed that you can actually imagine this! Author-chan you did an amazing job! (≧▽≦)

    08/18/2020 02:59
  • elaine smith

    as a fellow writer on wattpad (my username is @elaine11111) I am absolutely hooked into this story already. having only read the first few chapters, I can’t wait to see where this story goes!

    08/18/2020 02:37
  • 1SHAWNSGIRL1

    This book was very interesting, I don’t know what I was expecting but it fits with what I like to read. I like how the characters are developed and I guess the only down side is that I have to pay to read it. I hope the author has some luck. I just wouldn’t pay for it at the moment.

    08/18/2020 02:36
  • Maple

    I'm just at the start of the story, but what is the name and gender or the MC?

    08/18/2020 02:28
  • Karina Santos

    This is my little note to the Author (Note: I have only read up to Chapter 7 and do plan on reading the rest!)! Hello lovely! I hope you're doing well. I just wanted to let you know that I've been reading Alpha Kane on AnyStories throughout the day. I am really intrigued from the story you're telling the audience. Typically, I don't read a lot of these types of stories, but I really did enjoy reading some of the chapters! Your writing style captivated me and I didn't want to start reading. The details you go into that describes the scene makes me imagine what's going on in my mind. This story really has me interested in what's going to happen in the next chapters. What relationships will form? Will there be any betrayals? I don't know! I'm really just excited to keep on reading what's going to happen. Usually, when I read these types of stories, I rarely see the female lead get rejected by the male lead. I don't know why, but that intrigued me. To me, stories here and there, get the coupe together too quickly. I'm interested in how the relationship between Ember and Kane will develop. I wonder what other supernatural creatures or events will take place. From what I read there aren't necessarily supernatural occurrences, but I'm pretty sure you have something planned. Supernatural/Paranormal stories are rare occurrences in my case, but I'm really enjoying what you have written down so far. It's captivating to me and curiosity develops when I go from chapter to chapter. To me, I relate to Ember. Being rejected and not wanted by the someone you like (or in this case your mate) is not the greatest feeling in the world. Having struggles is something that I can relate to. I guess that's another reason why I like Ember. I wonder how she will grow as a person and how she deals with everything that is going on. If I were to rate it, I would for now give it a 9/10. I know there is so much more development to the story in later chapters, but I really do enjoy reading the chapters provided on AnyStories.

    08/18/2020 02:23
  • Jeon Serenity

    I really liked this book, Actually the editor of this book message me and recommended this book to me, I enjoy reading it but the other book is locked and I dont have anycoins but its okay

    08/18/2020 02:21
  • itssydney

    Thanks for the recommendation! I just read a whole chapter and I already hooked by your book. I only read a book that has a really good choice of words and this book is definitely one of them. I literally love how you tell the readers from a different perspective. The plot also unpredictable, it makes me curious. I'm surely gonna read the whole book, thanks again!

    08/18/2020 02:18
  • Tracy Amante

    the writer sent me a sample chaps on wattpad. I've read the chapter and I was hooked. It led me wanting to read what happens. I'm not a big fan of werewolf stories but this changed my mind. kudos to the writer for sharing the story to me and for their good work.

    08/18/2020 02:09
  • Reader-042878

    Very detailed I love it

    08/18/2020 02:01
  • Reader-042878

    Very detailed I love it 😊❤️😊❤️

    08/18/2020 02:01
  • Luna Lovegood

    I’m on the third chapter already and I can’t get enough of this. I found about about this book from Wattpad and I’m so glad about it because I love this.

    08/18/2020 01:50
  • Emmma_H

    I really like this story and I’m glad I found out about it.

    08/18/2020 01:47
  • Daniela Andradre

    It's a good story, very interesting and intriguing, it keeps you glued to what happens. I'm happy that the writer recommended to me Thanks you so much.

    08/18/2020 01:27
  • Daniela Andradre

    It's a good story, very interesting and intriguing, it keeps you glued to what happens. 100 out of 100.

    08/18/2020 01:27
  • tennacie jones

    Hey I am happy you picked me as one 🙂 of your readers to review this book. The beginning is really good n when I go down more into it I realized it's not like the others but I read it before on wattpad and it's one of the few that brings out my emotions 😃 so I'll say that it's a good book n I am looking forward to more books from you.N picky me just thank God 🙏 it's not like all the rest that takes that huge turn and sounds the same like every other werewolves book.

    08/18/2020 01:15
  • Brandy Anton

    Whoa:0 This book has got a really good plot! I also love how the main female character is dark skinned. Not every day you find books like these. Truly worth reading!!:) Being approached on Wattpad to read this story, definity worth it! *thumbs up* I'm definitely gonna keep reading this book!!

    08/18/2020 01:09
  • Vanessa Blair

    it's a good book.

    08/18/2020 01:08