Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments
Alix Knight
I've only read the first few chapters so far, but this is definitely an awesome story. It goes well and really grabs attention. I'm so glad the author shared this with me!
09/04/2023 07:03Snowstorm Jinx
this is really good
09/04/2023 07:03
Lynda Dover
It's interesting and excellent job on the chapter. 🙂
09/04/2023 07:03Carolina Hernandez
i love the book its really good i could just image the characters as if i was watching a movie or a tv show
09/04/2023 07:03
mummajay05
so far I've enjoyed reading this story, very entertaining. thank you for the recommendation xx
09/04/2023 07:03Raluca Rn
It's a very captivating story, as much as I could read it I really liked. It's a beautiful story for my taste as well.
09/04/2023 07:03Ann Bastemeijer
hi i read this story on wp and told it is a great story and would love to read it again. I thank the writer for telling about this site and looking forward to more story.
09/04/2023 07:03
Rizka Amalia
This is my first time reading about werewolf, it's very interesting to me. Although I'm not very fluent in English, but I can understand and enjoy to read it. I've only read three chaps, but this storyline is amazing. Great job 👍
09/04/2023 07:03thu tran
Your story is very interesting and interesting. It's error book I can't stop reading. The characters are built very clearly. The plot is coherent and attractive. I enjoyed it and will recommend it to a few of my friends. Hope your work will be successful
09/04/2023 07:03
garoux_kitty
Adamou has woven a timeless new tale with werewolves and faeries in a modern mix. I am in love with the heroine and underdog, Ember! I am on Chapter 4, but cannot wait to read more!
09/04/2023 07:03Thandi Tia
i am hooked on this book it brought me back on my warewolf phase love how the whole story flows and how captivating it is
09/04/2023 07:03
Spikeed
When I was asked to read a review I was very pleased to read a very interesting prologue that immediately caught my attention. I was immediately hooked.
09/04/2023 07:03
Loki~Lovee
I found it through whattpad, someone private messaged me to proof read a couple of chapters and then said if I wanted the rest to come read it here
09/04/2023 07:03SpaceoutK
This is a pretty great and I wouldn’t mind returning to continue reading this. I really enjoyed how you used a lot of figurative language to describe the characters emotions. While reading more into into the story didn’t really understand Kane and the main characters dynamics. For example how come he wants her but she’s also not for him. Also I’m curious does it go more into detail of why the main character feels that she needs to be needed by an alpha like the benefits. I think overall from the chapters I was able to read I quite enjoyed it and I would recommend it to many other people. The style of the writing was really great and it made the text get to the point but with more details to filter everything into places.
09/04/2023 07:03Raluca Rn
It's a very captivating story, as much as I could read it I really liked. It's a beautiful story for my taste as well.
09/04/2023 07:03
angepersaud
Hi, I'm from Wattpad(angepersaud) An editor for this story recommended this book and reading the Prolog it was interesting... after reading some chapters it was well done and very captivating. I can tell you're a good writer keep up the good work.
09/04/2023 07:03
mUtegAlLonnyBB_2
I've just started to read this story because I was recommended by the author today. But I must say that I'm having a really good time, it's interesting. I've never tried anything outside WP before so I'm thankful to the author for this new change.
09/04/2023 07:03
anneissane
I'm enjoying the story. I like how the characters are imperfect and not all powerful even with all the magic and fantasy setting. It's refreshing.
09/04/2023 07:03thu tran
Your story is very interesting and interesting. It's error book I can't stop reading. The characters are built very clearly. The plot is coherent and attractive. I enjoyed it and will recommend it to a few of my friends. Hope your work will be successful
09/04/2023 07:03garoux_kitty
Adamou has woven a timeless new tale with werewolves and faeries in a modern mix. I am in love with the heroine and underdog, Ember! I am on Chapter 4, but cannot wait to read more!
09/04/2023 07:03
Kristen Geideman
thanks to the writer for bringing this book to my attention I got to read this delectable piece of writing. it had its quirks, some things that could probably be improved upon but all in all a solid great story.
09/04/2023 07:03Dria Poulson
I seen Seattle and all i could think was Quilutes🤯🤣🤣🤣🤣
09/04/2023 07:03
Books_Lover
With the chapters I’ve already been reading, it’s been hard to put the story away. I’m glad the writer asked me, if I would check it out. I’m sure the rest of the story is going to be fascinating.
09/04/2023 07:03
Rio Joy Cruz
Hahaha omg so cute chapter 4. I need a friend like Ian hahaha
09/04/2023 07:03Brooklyn the Sherlockian
I love this book! The writing is very creative and brings out a sense of imagination and feeling with every word. I am actually quite glad to have been given the opportunity and knowing to read this book. It's quite a story!
09/04/2023 07:03Daniela Armas
brutal 💓💓 i really loved it💓💓💓
09/04/2023 07:03babyy koo
so happy the writer recommended this book. it’s so hard to find good omega verse books and this one is the best one i’ve read yet ☺️❤️
09/04/2023 07:03
Roserina Draw
I honestly love it! I loved how it flows, entertains and keeps you hooked!
09/04/2023 07:03
Hauwa Adam
Nice one keep it up
09/04/2023 07:03
han_j.one
I got asked to read the story from the editor and give it a review. They sent me the prologue and my interest was immediately picked when I read it. I've only read the prologue in here but I am really looking forward to the rest of the story. I love how the point of view of the female main character is written, it's amazing!
09/04/2023 07:03KinginQueenz
I was loving it... until this point... her falling for him is pissing me off honestly. no offense intended
09/04/2023 07:03
Wolf Shanahan
so far, I am really enjoying this book. Typical werewolf stories don't usually spiral around other supernatural beings. I'm glad to see the author is indulging in more supernatural races^^
09/04/2023 07:03thu tran
Your story is very interesting and interesting. It's error book I can't stop reading. The characters are built very clearly. The plot is coherent and attractive. I enjoyed it and will recommend it to a few of my friends. Hope your work will be successful
09/04/2023 07:03garoux_kitty
Adamou has woven a timeless new tale with werewolves and faeries in a modern mix. I am in love with the heroine and underdog, Ember! I am on Chapter 4, but cannot wait to read more!
09/04/2023 07:03Jessica Flanagin
I like the story too
09/04/2023 07:03
fer_bartra_15
I found this book through wp when the author messed me and ask me to read this book and I’m glad I did. I only read a few chapters and so far is incredible. I really enjoy the storyline and the writing it self.
09/04/2023 07:03
Golden Mockinjay
I'm reading this currently and finding it very interesting. great work
09/04/2023 07:03Roserina Draw
I honestly love it! I loved how it flows, entertains and keeps you hooked!
09/04/2023 07:03Mia Granite
This was recommended to me and this book looks amazing already and I am sure this will be as amazing as it looks!😊
09/04/2023 07:03thu tran
Your story is very interesting and interesting. It's error book I can't stop reading. The characters are built very clearly. The plot is coherent and attractive. I enjoyed it and will recommend it to a few of my friends. Hope your work will be successful
09/04/2023 07:03Blessing Sunday
it's cliche but interesting you want to know what's going to happen next even if you can guess it... but at the end reading the book gives a fulfilling type of desire...like I'm happy I chose to read it
09/04/2023 07:03Franchesca Espinal
the writer recommend it to me and I'm so glad she did. it's really an amazing book! I love it already🤩
09/04/2023 07:03Vanessa Rodriguez
the book is interesting and I love it
09/04/2023 07:03Roserina Draw
I honestly love it! I loved how it flows, entertains and keeps you hooked!
09/04/2023 07:03thu tran
Your story is very interesting and interesting. It's error book I can't stop reading. The characters are built very clearly. The plot is coherent and attractive. I enjoyed it and will recommend it to a few of my friends. Hope your work will be successful
09/04/2023 07:03
rubymichelle_
Thank you the writer from recommending this book to me. The first chapter draws you in, that’s for sure. I like how she said ‘mine’ instead of the usually demanding alpha 😭
09/04/2023 07:03thu tran
Your story is very interesting and interesting. It's error book I can't stop reading. The characters are built very clearly. The plot is coherent and attractive. I enjoyed it and will recommend it to a few of my friends. Hope your work will be successful
09/04/2023 07:03
Hummingbird 🐦
❤️
09/04/2023 07:03Topaz1958
Your writing in incredible. You have such a poignant voice, and I love your attention to character and detail. Thanks for the recommendation!
09/04/2023 07:03Maira Heart
Very unique and wonderful story. I just read prologue but I enjoyed. Nice author huh.
09/04/2023 07:03Tomura’s Player 2
I’m glad I found out about this book
09/04/2023 07:03
Reader-887546
I’ve read a few chapters so far and it’s safe to say the beginning caught my attention and I will definitely add this on my list! great work 😊
09/04/2023 07:03Keyanna T. K.
This is one of those stories that you can't stop reading lmao, esp i really like the characters!! thanks to whoever recommending this, i enjoyed this very much :)
09/04/2023 07:03Ahydreahna Teika
Hiii! Amina it's Faith15 I had a read of some of the chapters and although I have not yet to read the others. From what I did read this book is eye catching, entertaining, compelling and hope that others will find it to be as well so well done. Hope to see more of your work. GOOD LUCK!!!
09/04/2023 07:03
Simplicity Dliso
Interesting story, I really enjoyed reading it. the characters are fun and interesting. There are some blank spots in the story that took me a while to understand. Not a bad read but the ending leaves a lot to be desired.
09/04/2023 07:03Adrianne McKenzie Rabbitass Short
I haven't read very many books about werewolves but I quite enjoy the way they are portrayed in your writing
09/04/2023 07:03Ashita Kunjadia
I just read few chapters but it's quite interesting 👍🏻keep it up
09/04/2023 07:03Dria Poulson
I am Aster with my friends tho lmao 🤣 😂
09/04/2023 07:03
knbllllll
The editor recommended me to read this story and every chapter is fascinating.
09/04/2023 07:03Zee
I love that she mentioned buzzfeed unsolved:)
09/04/2023 07:03
D'vorah Kingsley
i’m happy someone recommended me it’s a really good book
09/04/2023 07:03raven D
this is definatley a good read! i recommend anyone who likes supernatural things to try it out!
09/04/2023 07:03
Z_Aufhum07
to someone, who recommended me this story. hi! here i am, already reading it :D
09/04/2023 07:03Rio Joy Cruz
I knew there were vampires and werewolves based on the tag at the start never knew there were other creatures as well hahaha (i thought when it said "Giant" earlier it meant just a really bulky and tall guy never knew it was the real deal hahaha HAHAHA)
09/04/2023 07:03
Luckystar751
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 yes imagine it and it will give you strength. good
09/04/2023 07:03
TheRevivedWriter
got a hint for this book and I'm actually glad!
09/04/2023 07:03luul adan
literally the same, definitely enjoying the story so far and will continue to read on!!
09/04/2023 07:03
Huglife148
this book is amazing, love the content so far
09/04/2023 07:03Shuyang’s Wife Heheh
it’s really good
09/04/2023 07:03Huglife148
this book is amazing, love the content so far
09/04/2023 07:03
GrumpyCat1305
An editor for this story recommend it and personally I'm not into books like this but just after the prolog I was hooked wanting to see what would happen. You have done an amazing job with this story, it gets readers hooked just from the prolog.
09/04/2023 07:03Shuyang’s Wife Heheh
I really like it
09/04/2023 07:03
Sophie swadil
lovely!!
09/04/2023 07:03Kats Emeraldz
(Chapter 4) I appreciate the buzzfeed unsolved reference. lol
09/04/2023 07:03
greenwolf0824
this is an amazing book and I feel like it could be made into a series or something if not continuing on with Kane and Ember directly then possibly giving Jett, Darius or one of the other main characters while giving updates on what is happening with the mains through the interactions the other would have during their story or even if continued with the two mains it feels like there may be room for a continuation of their story but I would love reading more of this story it’s very well written
09/04/2023 07:03GrumpyCat1305
An editor for this story recommend it and personally I'm not into books like this but just after the prolog I was hooked wanting to see what would happen. You have done an amazing job with this story, it gets readers hooked just from the prolog.
09/04/2023 07:03Do Kyung So Tata
My advice is that you shouldn't use a school background because I think it's been used too often by other writers. It's good for you to make omega and alpha meet when they were kids and be friends but because there is a problem with one of their parents that requires them to separate and then meet when They grow up at a work meeting or something, when the Alpha is looking for a partner he marked as a child that's all my complaint as a new reader😂😂 moreover I really enjoy reading this story really
09/04/2023 07:03Huglife148
this book is amazing, love the content so far
09/04/2023 07:03
LoveAnime5891
this has more depth and sentimentality in this story. 💜 I can't wait to read this book.
09/04/2023 07:03
Rifqah Dollie
Thanks for recommending the story,I really like it
09/04/2023 07:03Arria the Dragon
Catches you write at the start and follows through. Amazing writing and a great story right off the bat! Can't wait to see how this turns out.
09/04/2023 07:03Shan Brown
Just started reading and love it so far
09/04/2023 07:03Cakepopalice
The editor sent me here and I already love this story!!!!
09/04/2023 07:03Lara Gabriel
I will be honest, I've read too many of these kind of stories to still enjoy them but from what I can tell, the story is interesting, the Authors writing style is very nice and the grammar is very accurate too. I can recommend it to those who like to read this kind of books and those who want to try something like that.
09/04/2023 07:03
Eylaf Neyaz
I really like it it's amazing 😍
09/04/2023 07:03Tasha Chimz
😂😂😂😂Woooooow I am in love with this story. This should really be on Wattpaf. The descriptions are good, you can really picture this sort of world. I love it
09/04/2023 07:03fairy of shampoo
uhmmm hi author! It's me @/beomgyuu_- (from wattpad)i just wanted to say that i actually enjoyed reading it but i'm still not not done with the chapters yet and also i wanted to say that the story is very well written and entertaining to read. Have a great day! :)
09/04/2023 07:03
nivea roper
Just Got recommended to read this book and to be honest I don't want to stop reading. This story has me hooked right now
09/04/2023 07:03Ugnė Kundrotienė
Hooked from first sentence. I don't really like werewolf stories, but this One was fast read, and I realy enjoyed it. Characters were real likeable and funny, over all Good story. But some places was to fast, and I got confused when the memory started, but still not bad for gendre that I dont like 😅
09/04/2023 07:03Tasha Chimz
😂😂😂😂Woooooow I am in love with this story. This should really be on Wattpaf. The descriptions are good, you can really picture this sort of world. I love it
09/04/2023 07:03
Tamara Limque
I really like how it’s written, very well done. The pacing is good and the nearly all of the descriptive terms are used properly. The only few things I could think of that might be in need of reviewing is how you are describing his eyes. Orbs is not recommended term of description. It is a term that disrupts the flow and comes out awkwardly in my humble opinion. I have never seen it written in any published books. But overall, good job
09/04/2023 07:03Marielle Tocmo
just reading the first paragraph makes me addicted to the story! good job on making it!
09/04/2023 07:03Wolf Shanahan
I want Ms Jessica to be my teacher xDDD
09/04/2023 07:03Beniko
I've read all the accessible chapters and so far I love it! It's original, and it feels good to see something that changes from all the other werewolf stories! I’m so lucky that the author recommended it to me!
09/04/2023 07:03Rose Marie Pliego
I like this story I love reading alpha stories nice 😊
09/04/2023 07:03NarissaChambers
I don't really like Werewolf stories, but this is so good. I really like all the wording and you should thank for editor for promoting this. Signed- NarissaChambers
09/04/2023 07:03
IceWolfQueen
I received a few chatpters through the editor and I’m so glad I accepted. The story had me hooked from the beginning honestly I’m looking forward to other books from this author as well. At the beginning found it a bit hard to follow but as I got deeper into the story it just keep getting better and better. Really enjoyed the characters and as well how the story line developed. Totally recommend it.
09/04/2023 07:03Shauna Quirke
love this story so much , so glad it was recommended to me ! would tell anyone else to read it !!!
09/04/2023 07:03Michelle Alston
this is a really good book I'm happy that the editor contacted me about it ... I love it
09/04/2023 07:03
Stellou DDV
Hello, I'm StellouDDV from Wattpad. So. Good start for the book. I will say more things during my reading, of course ;)
09/04/2023 07:03
