Unbreakable Comments

  • Rafael

    #w6g8# I like the introduction. it seems a interesting story and it is intriguing. but I think I will read the first book of the series .

    04/11/2023 22:07

  • Julia

    w6g8 i think the recommendations are random at best, why are they recommending a story that won't be updated?

    04/11/2023 21:51

  • Megan Phillips

    w6g8 the introduction to this story looks promising, I might need to look at the other books before I start this one.

    04/11/2023 21:24

  • Martial Flor

    w6g8 I started reading this as a standalone, so I'll probably stop and go back go read the first two books first. for what I've read so far, it's a really good idea! it's new and fresh, and totally not what I was expecting, to the point that at the beginning it's almost confusing. good!

    04/11/2023 19:07

  • Sumriti Singh

    w6g8 i will first read first two then i will definitely read this one as it peaked my interest and who am I to say no to a good book

    04/11/2023 18:36

  • Jeniffer Barnes Hurt

    #w6g8# "Unbreakable", I'm adding this one to my library. I'll have to read the other 2 first, but can't wait to get to it.

    04/11/2023 15:29

  • Jan T

    w6g8 #w6g8 the story seems interesting and addictive. good introduction. I will look at the first 2 books first before I start reading.

    04/11/2023 12:33

  • Selli Dang

    w6g8 another recommendation and as I started to read the start and I was instantly hooked on the story. I can't wait to finish work so I can continue with this

    04/11/2023 10:10

  • nasnas

    w6g8 seems like I missed a lot of backstory I will have to read the other books before I try this one, otherwise it won't make any sense.

    04/11/2023 10:05

  • Merle Langevoord

    w6g8 just started reading the first few chapters. I'm really looking forward how the story continue

    04/11/2023 05:48

  • Reader-350476

    w6g8 it’s really a good story to read and I’m looking forward to finish this book.

    04/11/2023 04:21

  • Debra Sykes

    w6g8 I am liking the book so far it's been added to my library hopefully author comes back

    04/11/2023 04:07

  • Me Myself

    w6g8 I am liking the book so far, it is well written and I have added it to my library

    04/11/2023 03:03

  • Reader-482443

    where can I find her

    07/13/2022 20:49

  • Alyssa

    just when I was starting to like Neron. smh

    06/24/2022 00:46

  • Sarah

    I’m seriously heartbroken that you won’t finish the books here. I’m sry that they’re disrespecting you too. I have joined patreon.

    04/12/2022 06:13

  • Sherisa Weston

    ohh geez I would be able to use Patreon. I am so disappointed but respect your decision. Maybe in the future you could try another reading site and notify us

    04/07/2022 23:58

  • Nysha Obannon

    omg no more chapters I can’t handle this

    04/06/2022 06:59

  • Marii Solaria

    Dear Readers, updates are SUSPENDED until further notice.

    03/31/2022 03:55

  • Nina072

    thank you for the update, two chaps were more than we were hoping for. these were great, enjoy the rest of break.

    03/26/2022 00:12

  • Reader-670952

    I know you’re busy but when will there be another update ?

    03/21/2022 16:30

  • Nina072

    well that's one way to redeem yourself and I dont think I need to repeat myself on how I feel about Vag- I mean Val. 🙄 urgh neron shoulve clocked him!!!!! I never wanted to go into a book so badly and do it myself.

    03/17/2022 03:31

  • Josephine Sullivan

    when will there be an update...?

    03/15/2022 19:54

  • Reader-670952

    when will there be an update?

    03/15/2022 14:32

  • Sassy

    I love the slow burn between them. I predict it’s going to be freaking awesome when they finally give in. I’m speaking for myself when I say that’ll be the most read chapter in this book

    03/13/2022 17:51

  • Reader-323329

    what is maras back story again I read the other book a while ago I remember she bonded with Ariel after Odessa but not much else

    03/11/2022 22:47

  • Reader-670952

    I’m on pins and needles when is the next update ?

    03/10/2022 13:13

  • Mrs.Hyde

    I'm asking myself the same question why she wouldn't let her heal her.

    03/09/2022 07:14

  • Analiza

    Oh my tears were falling.... hope Raina will be okay...

    03/08/2022 08:55

  • wana blain

    Wow… okay ….. you sure you were having a writer block because girlllllllllllll Im still at the end of my seat 😳😳😳😳😳😳👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

    03/07/2022 18:44

  • Reader-670952

    No pressure because I know you’re busy but when will there be other updates

    03/02/2022 05:09

  • Nina072

    awwwww fiddlesticks what now!!!! urgh I need my fix!!! and YOU(marrii) YOU'RE MAKING ME FEEL THINGS! IM NOT USED TO FEELING THESE FEELS!!!

    02/19/2022 03:29

  • Analiza

    omg. i do they are okay....

    02/18/2022 09:58

  • Analiza

    amazing.... hope jomathan will banished for good....

    02/18/2022 09:52

  • Sherisa Weston

    Author was Asir and the Selene's first avatar mates?

    02/16/2022 22:25

  • Lynora Crawford

    I just read 47, and had to fight to not laugh out loud, and wake my husband! This chapter was phenomenal!

    02/10/2022 04:42

  • Marii Solaria

    1/29/2022 Hello my readers! Quick update. Due to exams next week for both my Pharmacology and Intergrated Health Care classes (both on the same day 😵), updates will be pushed until next weekend. Writing is the last thing on my mind right now 😅

    01/30/2022 04:10

  • ShyShy

    Great chapter! I just love me some Onyx 🥰

    01/23/2022 14:26

  • Sonia McLeod

    omg I am dying more please 😁😁🇬🇧

    01/23/2022 05:15

  • Meaghan Prue

    omg please want more of this 😍

    01/23/2022 02:48

  • Reader-670952

    Is chapter 46 the last update ?

    01/17/2022 14:15

  • Nina072

    damn, I really let the chapters stack up. lol I'm curious as to how it doesn't affect onyx. thank god I was already home for the spicy bits. lmao well done as always and can't wait for the next update.

    01/14/2022 05:15

  • Jael Brown

    I am so ready for Jonathan to just die. When will his evil reign of terror end. Why does the curse effect Neron and not Oynx and does the curse effect Neron's visions as well.l?

    01/14/2022 01:36

  • Shannon Deviney

    waiting patiently for new updates… will it be soon? I sure hope so amazing book

    01/14/2022 00:45

  • Meaghan Prue

    so marii did Angelo come back to life too

    01/13/2022 14:10

  • Sonia McLeod

    omg I want Jonathan to die for good this time with all the knowledge and power they have why can't they get rid of him I can't believe he took over neron body how cruel is he I hope they find the map and the answers they need😘😘🇬🇧

    01/05/2022 15:29

  • Analiza

    i am hoping they remember about the map and they will finish jonathan for good

    01/05/2022 11:54

  • Reader-670952

    When will there be an update beyond chapter 40

    01/03/2022 03:49

  • Meaghan Prue

    Happy new year everyone let's toast to another miserable and painful death for the asshole and the skank and kiya and neron be together forever

    01/01/2022 01:02

  • Meaghan Prue

    I know this is kiya and nerons story but I do miss Jackie she was such a fun character. I am so glad that kiya and neron are making good progress its amazing how they began as enemies in a way more like neron made her an enemy and has grown as a man and sees that his father was the jerk. Keep up the good writing Marii

    12/30/2021 11:47

  • Meryam Ahsan

    I honestly hope that Neron doesn’t leave the pack lands, and they use the witchcraft phoebe has and asims help to figure out how to stop apophis …

    12/29/2021 17:52

  • Heather Shay

    I'm loving the fun, sexy, light hearted moments in this book. Honestly Unhinged was a little too dark and heavy for me (still awesome) I love seeing Neron and Kiya find their way back to each other. I feel like they have both worked so hard to heal and deserve this moment.

    12/29/2021 09:18

  • Jael Brown

    Loved this soft core porn and I love how they are taking their time. Jonathan really is an ass I hope they kill him soon. Quick question is the thunder cunt still stuck in the wall. Neron really did throw her ass into hell or dangerously close to it.

    12/29/2021 04:44

  • Sonia McLeod

    Beautiful how they are getting to know each other and not just jumping into sex I love them both I hope they can find the book and get the answers they need to Defeat his father😘😘🇬🇧

    12/29/2021 03:47

  • Humairah Mahomedy Rangila

    can someone reshare violetta’s back story with me again. I read the other two books but can’t recalls

    12/27/2021 09:55

  • Jael Brown

    Merry Christmas Marii to you and your family and thank for the update. How did you know I asked Santa for one 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

    12/25/2021 17:52

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Merry Christmas Ms. Marii. Again, thanks for creating such wonderful stories. 💕❤️🎉

    12/24/2021 13:35

  • Meaghan Prue

    marii will you be taking a break this weekend from updating

    12/22/2021 12:09

  • ShyShy

    Another great chapter!

    12/20/2021 12:00

  • Githa Datadin

    Hope you are doing well Marii. just loved the update. How Neron and Kiya just forgot about Asim in the room 😆. Nuria little tease with her mate 😂

    12/20/2021 07:24

  • Jaclyn LeeAnn Patrick

    Asim is a VERY smart man 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

    12/20/2021 06:42

  • Jael Brown

    Why does it feel like it's not the end. I mean Jonathan and his lackeys are wounded and injured but I have a funny feeling we will be seeing them again.

    12/20/2021 04:19

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Hello Ms. Author, Approximately, how many more chapters does this book would have? 😁 I am not sure if you have mentioned it before.

    12/16/2021 03:37

  • Nina072

    for someone who says she has a hard time writing action you seem to be doing a damn good job marii.

    12/15/2021 22:22

  • Jael Brown

    You know Marii really has knack for setting up a good battle man when I tell you it's about to go down. Hopefully all of Apophis's puppets will perish in this battle and our avatars can finally have a happy life. You can not run from your past because it has a way of catching up to you.

    12/15/2021 07:31

  • Kecina_Janice

    My heart literally broke for Nuria 😤😭 I can’t wait for Johnathan to be off’d and never come back because his evilness and stupid minions all have to go!

    12/15/2021 00:36

  • Meaghan Prue

    marii what color are artemis eyes

    12/14/2021 22:44

  • Nina072

    Johnathan's second death will be even sweeter than the first time around.

    12/09/2021 17:52

  • Jael Brown

    Damn Jonathan is just so evil, I feel like Nuria and wish he had stayed dead. I can't believe he slapped her that asshole. His mind is warped if he thinks his family wants anything to with him. I hope the avatars send him back to hell where he belongs.

    12/09/2021 13:41

  • Meaghan Prue

    damn you Jonathan

    12/09/2021 10:03

  • Mrs.Hyde

    Damn I love Violetta. Smart thinking.

    12/06/2021 22:06

  • Nina072

    oh thank god, I was worried about liberty.

    12/06/2021 21:29

  • Lynora Crawford

    Kiya's turned into a strategist...I like it!

    12/06/2021 07:24

  • Nina072

    so I've been thinking.....obviously apophis brought back a person for each one who took part in his avatars death. we've got bumfuck johnathan for neron, psycho Odessa for kiya, Rhea (who we've all come to same conclusion of phoebe having a sibling. I'm thinking jealous twin, big blow out happened, stronger twin won. my theory) for phoebe now I wonder who's coming back for violetta and osiris's brother who's name is drawing a complete blank right now but yall know who I mean. every single one a person who by their hands is through back, souls consumed by revenge. this is gonna be interesting.

    12/05/2021 17:42

  • Nina072

    so i let 4 chapters stack up so heres my reaction..... the first two: ohhhhhh girl get it! bust that nut! discover that kink! about time you felt that good good. yeeeeeeeeaaaaaahhhhhhhh I dont think I've ever been so happy to see a character experience that. it's so different when you feel safe with the person you're with. that was sweet. the last two: what in the actual frack marii?! how could you stab me in the heart like this!?! Odessa? now that was a massive twist! now.....wait a minute.....what's going on with phoebs??? am I smelling a lost sibling or a magical ego death? *gasp* hecate is usually symbolized as 3 people......we talking triplets? but someone would have to be the Crone. holy hell!!! I mean I know kiya is alive because then the book would end but holy frack! what a wrench you threw in here. we're back in action yall!

    12/05/2021 03:01

  • Karla Carlos

    wait Neron is in a cave... could it be the map that his grandpa gave him the way out of the cave?

    12/02/2021 15:31

  • Lynora Crawford

    NO! Poor Neron... he's suffered so much. 🥺

    12/02/2021 14:32

  • Analiza

    it is like osiris done to kiya, but LOVE will prevail...

    12/02/2021 06:01

  • Meryam Ahsan

    there you go people - Phoebe’s evil lookalike is called rhea

    12/02/2021 05:40

  • Meaghan Prue

    marii if in that twisted mind of yours this story is going in the direction I think it is is there a chance that neron and Nuria due to some very evil magic will be forgetting there mates cause that does seem the type for the nasty skank to do use magic to get neron all to herself

    11/29/2021 22:30

  • Kecina_Janice

    So so good! Can’t wait to see what they do to the fam bam when they have them all together

    11/29/2021 02:04

  • Jael Brown

    Damn Marii you did it again these cliffhangers, though. Well Odessa is still crazy delusional, Jonathan needs to let it go, and who the hell is evil Phoebe. It seems like Apophis has brought back someone to torment each of our favorite characters, so I wonder who will be resurrected to torment the other avatars that destroyed Osiris. As always great update Marii.

    11/28/2021 12:45

  • Githa Datadin

    must say marii, great update and cliffhanger again! can't wait for the next one 😊

    11/28/2021 10:30

  • Lynora Crawford

    Damn...I suspect this must be why Phoebe never talks about Oregon. Truly Marii wouldn't be so cruel as to bring us through this while journey, just to have them fail now, but I am practically on the edge of my seat with angst!

    11/26/2021 15:14

  • Analiza

    oh sweet selene please help nerion and kiya

    11/26/2021 09:28

  • Jael Brown

    Wait now Phoebe has a twin sister and Odessa the thundercunt is back, damn these cliffhanger updates are killing me but on a good way

    11/26/2021 04:47

  • Githa Datadin

    I wish you could update everyday Marii. I'm so in the story. The trills, the hotness. 😜

    11/22/2021 11:31

  • Analiza

    will neron and kiya mate?

    11/22/2021 08:39

  • Jael Brown

    Damn Kiya and Neron, for them not to have actually done the deed this was very hot

    11/22/2021 03:59

  • Kristi RÕUK

    I absolutely loved it! The way Neron helped her see past her insecurities and pain replacing every bad memory with a good one... with love. I mean how many men would even do that! I can only imagine how tough it must have been for Kia. Being scared and jet craving it. It took immense trust for all that to happen and I'm so happy for her. She goy her fireworks 😁

    11/20/2021 22:54

  • kathydor

    I have love all three books so far, but I would like to see more more love and less war.

    11/20/2021 03:17

  • Nina072

    holy heck..........that was extra spicy. thank god for masks in public, marii this update deserves at least two extra chili peppers. soooooo NSFW!!! great update tho

    11/19/2021 21:39

  • Binge Reader

    I absolutely love the way this was written, and even more, I love the way Neron loved away her insecurities.

    11/19/2021 02:38

  • Nina072

    "we dont do that here" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

    11/19/2021 02:36

  • Meaghan Prue

    the songs of miss Toni Braxton come to mind for the last two chapters

    11/19/2021 01:23

  • Lynora Crawford

    It took them long enough to get to this point (that is NOT a criticism in ANY way!), but good grief that was incredibly well-written!!! I'm glad Kiya finally realized she was worth it!

    11/18/2021 22:27

  • Sonia McLeod

    dam brilliant 😘😘🇬🇧

    11/18/2021 18:16

  • Meaghan Prue

    dang marii don't leave on the good part sigh def gonna need the husband right now

    11/18/2021 16:56

  • Sherisa Weston

    This was such an empowering beautiful sexual scene. I am so glad Kiya was able to recover and experience new things. The way Neron helped her was wonderful. Such lovely writing my dear author, Mari

    11/18/2021 04:11

  • Kecina_Janice

    I’m loving the communication but the mirror scene with his positive affirmations…whew I might’ve shed a tear because it was simply beautiful 😍

    11/18/2021 03:33
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