Unbreakable Comments
Jael Brown
Damn it got hot in here!! Our baby girl is all growed up and about to become head (literally) of the class. I am so happy for her.
11/18/2021 02:07
Binge Reader
Oh my, I want more. Now we just need to get Kira and Neron on the same page. I just have this feeling that if they mark each other, they will draw more strength from each other. Glad to see their relationship developing.
11/17/2021 15:52
Meaghan Prue
@Nina072 Nina have you ever heard of diamond paintings if you go to Amazon and look up white and black wolf diamond painting u will see a couple that looks like our favorite wolf couple
11/17/2021 01:23Meaghan Prue
I do believe onyx had it wrong not the reincarnation of gnat no more like a pig and a snake and I'm sure the wolf wouldn't mind taking the pigs head and placing it on a pike where it belongs
11/17/2021 00:13
Lynora Crawford
I've always enjoyed reading from the guy's POV, but Onyx's POV takes things to a whole new level! His personality absolutely cracks me up!
11/15/2021 15:53Jael Brown
Best update ever, Oynx had me in here rolling. I was laughing so hard 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
11/15/2021 03:14
Nina072
this update was EVERYTHING!!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 "the reincarnation of a gnat"..."the human anus" I died!💀and eyyyyyy girl got her first nut. well... artemis did....but still; first pleasurable nut busted. noice.
11/15/2021 01:59Nina072
URGH I NEED IT TO BE TOMORROW LIKE YESTERDAY!!!!!!
11/13/2021 20:59Selene Murf
"... Divine protection from your psychopathic, zombie father.." Gold, just absolute Gold! 😁 🥇
11/12/2021 21:36Jael Brown
Kiya thought with her Kitty while holding her kitty for a minute there.🤗🤗🤗🤗 Goddess bless these avatars with the strength to take Jonathan down for good. None of them deserve to have their happy ending ruined by Jonathan's evil,wicked, butt
11/12/2021 05:46Lynora Crawford
Kiya's reaction to Nailah, was downright hysterical...ESPECIALLY with the audience surrounding her! Artemis' commentary was the icing on the cake, though!
11/12/2021 05:19Jody Reid
loving this... please update soon
11/12/2021 04:00Nina072
ohhhh lovely update. artemis is thirsteh!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 she is parched!
11/12/2021 02:48Githa Datadin
can't wait for the next update 🙈 this is so good
11/11/2021 11:27
Analiza
In supermoon pt 2 Selene had warned Neron that he knows the link. my guess that time was Jonathan Prince oh my God it is a chaos. I cant wait of another update...😂😁
11/10/2021 08:54Nina072
yall watching kiya and neron be surrogate parents to the girls is warming my cold, dead heart. its pretty cute.
11/10/2021 01:07
Reader-670952
Oh my when is the next update
11/09/2021 23:14Nina072
YOOOOOOOOOOOO I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!!! oh come on that's just not fair, of all people to bring back. I mean I get it, but forking shirt balls!!!! it's about to go down! so much worse than what I thought was going to happen. what a curve ball! I thought wed be rid of this pest for good.
11/09/2021 21:05Nina072
"go back in your FORKING kennel!!!!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I'm internally scream laughing, cackling like witch. Bahahahahahahaha!!!!!!
11/09/2021 20:58Lynora Crawford
Wow...I was looking forward to not having his vitriol in this installment, but now the intrigue has me enthralled once more. It also seems kind if poetic, that they have to go against him until the end. I'm really looking forward to seeing how they deal with it all! 🤩
11/08/2021 02:50Jael Brown
Oh, shite I can not believe it, but I believe it. Who I'm the Hades would dig up the ashes of that monster. The Pooh really just hit the fan
11/07/2021 23:50Selene Murf
JPrice is gonna make insane trouble, and Ariel better watch out... Well Mara. OMG SHITE.... JUST...... GOT...... 🤭 REAL......
11/07/2021 23:05Selene Murf
Um think i lost my comments, dam.. 🤠 ❤️ 🤠 Cant wait for more.
11/07/2021 23:03Meaghan Prue
omg that comment I made before about Jonathan and Odessa wait I better not say don't want to say too much but yeah this is disgusting what a word
11/07/2021 19:44Analiza
kiya and neron's love story just blossoming but they will face dangers.. who is this woman???
11/05/2021 04:41
Mez
WHY IS EVERYONE GETTING BLOWN UP? This brings a whole new meaning to ‘an explosive entrance’ 😂
11/04/2021 20:10Lynora Crawford
...and I'm back on the edge of my seat with this latest update! Marii, you truly know how to enrapture your audience!
11/04/2021 08:59Nina072
uh.......like.......so.......dude. like holy shirt balls.
11/04/2021 02:12Meaghan Prue
oh man uhm yeah no words right now just got nothing
11/04/2021 01:50
wana blain
DAMMMNNNNNNNN 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭😳😳😳😳😳😳
11/04/2021 01:32Analiza
when is the update? please im really excited of the love story of kiya and neron...
11/03/2021 11:59Meaghan Prue
you know I hope part of Odessa punishment is to watch kiya and neron get closer the nasty bitch would deserve it as well as watching Ariel be with her one true mate
11/01/2021 20:36Nina072
I laughed a lot at these two chapters. artemis took me by surprise, onyx didnt. lol a leave it to nuria to bet on them. great updates as always marii.
11/01/2021 01:42Jemma
omg Artemis and Nuria 😂😂😂😂😅
10/31/2021 20:38Analiza
wow, finally it is official... thanks for this chapter Mari...
10/31/2021 14:07
Bonib2
I love how straight forward Artemis is 🤣🤣. Oh and Aunt Essie is funny❤❤❤
10/31/2021 08:42Lynora Crawford
Aww, I love that Neron's whole family barged into their moment. 🥰
10/31/2021 02:00Meaghan Prue
u know though where is artemis I mean we hear from onyx but where's our wolf girl starting to miss her
10/29/2021 12:33Analiza
oh boy i love it....
10/28/2021 13:44Lynora Crawford
I love how close they're getting...and that Kiya has actually matured enough to analyze her feelings, and begin to accept them, instead of simply refusing to acknowledge anything! 😊
10/28/2021 02:07Binge Reader
This chapter was just the sweetest! I am so excited to see their relationship develop!
10/27/2021 23:43Jael Brown
Oynx is to funny, that cockblock joke had me rolling. I can't get enough of Kiya and Neron their relationship is really heating up
10/27/2021 23:31London Henderson
This has to be one of my favorite series yet. Can not wait to see where you take this!
10/26/2021 22:01Analiza
when is the next chapter? im excitrd to read...
10/26/2021 08:20
Marii Solaria
Hi, readers ❤️ I just wanted to update you all on something important. I’m pausing updates for Unbreakable for a week. I’ll be taking a break to rest and rejuvenate. Right now, I’m mentally, physically, and creatively exhausted from nursing school and my other commitments outside of writing. I’ll be back to my normal update schedule on Monday, October 25th. As a refresher, my updates are on Wednesdays and Sundays. Please go to my Instagram @ mariisolaria for a detailed explanation. Thank you for your support. I’ll see you all soon ❤️
10/19/2021 01:23Githa Datadin
i would love to have chapter with onyx alone. his mind is just awesome, the way thinks and says things 🤣😆
10/18/2021 14:34ShyShy
I loved this update as we got to meet the grandparents & a piece of weaponry for when the time is right!!!
10/18/2021 11:01Nina072
this was a cool update, how awesome that we met nerons grandparents. his grandmother is so cute and it will be cool to get more insight into their foresight and maybe even more their family history.
10/18/2021 07:03wana blain
Heyy @Marii! Hope your exams went smoothly. just bcuz I’m dead curious Are you gonna give us a peep at Neron’s session with the doc or I’m tripping?
10/15/2021 02:38wana blain
When Sunday is to far away 🥺🥺🥺
10/14/2021 20:07Nina072
"do you want another one?" hahaha onyx was behind that one, I know it.
10/14/2021 18:56Nina072
awe that's sad, they sere used to settle a debt. that hurts my heart the poor children, urgh alpha Jackson just needs to be yeeted into the sun. omg! no wait, not the sun but into a black hole at least 3 galaxies over. at least. I hope they can get liberty out, I cant imagine what hes done to her after they disappeared.
10/14/2021 02:10Meaghan Prue
to whoever made the cruel comment grow up and find someplace else for your horrible nonsense. mariis choices for kiya are not your concern this is HER book and what she chooses to write about her characters are not for u to decide Marii please keep up the good work u betterbeworking on a movie for this too cause thay would be awesome.
10/11/2021 18:11Nina072
if you dont understand the affects of trauma on an individual its fine but do not make cold and callous comments and think nothing of it just shows how little some people know about trauma. cold, callous, ignorant and so unbalibaly rude fictional character or not. person who made that comment, you deserve a knock upside the head for that. "it's been eight years....blag blah blah". unfrackingbelieable.
10/11/2021 14:54Nina072
and of course alpha Jackson is hurting people, old sac said he was buddies with johnathan in high school; absolutely no doubt that man is cut from the same abusive cloth. and there we go, we found the girls. I was half right, it was liberty who reached out but they arent his daughters. I mean.....they arent his daughters right? 😥
10/11/2021 05:41Nina072
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 omg onxy!!!! 🤦🏻♀️ why you torturing that man? that's not fair! lmao
10/11/2021 05:38Binge Reader
The last line is so powerful! Neron has grown so much!
10/10/2021 05:32
Leyla Charm
I just love, love, love kiya and Neron together. They have gone through so much; together and individually and they have both grown so much. Their relationship is so sweet. Kiya is super adorable when she is being shy and can then also be so strong and bad ass. And Neron is the pefect gentleman but can kill for his women. I get so excited everytime a new chapter is added!! I check almost eveyday lol you do such a great job its one of my favorite stories at the moment. I wish it was complete so I can just read all of it in one sitting but I also don’t want it to end ever!!! ❤️ its the best kind of predicament 😂
10/10/2021 02:36Nina072
me running to google translate to see if its dirty:😈🏃♀️ me when I find out its cute: 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 ohhhhmahgoodness
10/09/2021 19:28Meaghan Prue
@marii solaria marii how come we can't share the book
10/08/2021 15:21Selene Murf
Didn't think they would even make it to the main event! ❤️ 🤠 ❤️
10/07/2021 07:04
Sherisa Weston
Wait how were Lunas flirting with her when they have mates? Haha
10/07/2021 00:25Jael Brown
Damn for a minute there I thought I was going to have to a very long cold shower. Kiya you have a very strong resolve because honey once the fire is started it's best to put it out. A big part of me wanted them to complete the deed but that other part (you that small voice on the back of my head) was screaming not yet the timing is off. I mean was it the mate bond or her hormones acting up from the Supermoon that caused her to kiss Neron only time will tell. Wystan is so annoying and you know you are exuding some powerful pheromones when everyone wants you. Thank Goddess Neron and.her family are their to keep all of these alphas and Luna's at Bay otherwise Kiya would be in some serious trouble.
10/06/2021 23:23Leyla Charm
one thing get confused about. Does Kiya like women? or is she into both? or is Neron the only man she is attracted to because he’s her mate.
10/06/2021 23:02Analiza
i am hoping there is no twist that it is for real. Neron really loves Kiya. im so excited....
10/06/2021 15:47
Carol Hatton
OMG!! Kiya!!! I was NOT expecting her to do that! I’m like Neron…. IS THIS REALLY HAPPENING?!! BTW.. am I the only one checking every hour for an update?!! 😂
10/05/2021 20:35Reader-925504
love the step forward
10/05/2021 19:45Mez
Everyone is so excited that they’re jumping on the mating train 😂 While I am very happy those two finally kissed (with our girl initiating), I don’t want them to do the Devil’s tango right away. We need to remember that Kiya is a survivor of rape. I can imagine that’ll bring about fears involving intimacy as she stated earlier in the book. I don’t think she’d jump right away into sex if that part of her trauma hasn’t been addressed yet, in my opinion. I don’t think there has been a mention of her sexual trauma in this book so far. A lot of us want Kiya and Neron to fük, but we need to also think realistically about Kiya’s reactions to it. That’ll be the BIGGEST and HARDEST step she’s ever taken.
10/04/2021 01:29Binge Reader
Please keep this going… you two love and need each other. Please just finally give in!!!!
10/03/2021 23:19
MP14
Yes!!!!! Don’t mind me while I do the happy dance over here. Can’t wait to see how their relationship progresses.
10/03/2021 23:09Jael Brown
Yes,yes and yes!!! I am so excited and I just can't hide it. They kissed Oh my Goddess they finally kissed, I am freaking the freak out right now. I am so happy, I can not wait to see what develops between them. I mean was this Kiya finally accepting the mating bond and letting someone in. Or was she just caught up in the moment.I guess I have to wait for the next update 😁😁😁😁😁
10/03/2021 23:08Sherisa Weston
awww Kiya finally recognizes the extend to which Neron loves her and is willing to give into her emotions
10/03/2021 22:49Bonib2
Yay💃💃💃They kissed😍💞💗💗❤❤❤❤👌👌👏
10/03/2021 21:40wana blain
splendide splendide 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
10/03/2021 20:01
Kecina_Janice
That was a very beautiful update and the pace that they’re going is perfect! Keep up the great work!
10/03/2021 19:39Githa Datadin
what a beautiful update marii. Finally they kiss😊
10/03/2021 19:15Meaghan Prue
sorry marii won't be reading this much longer and it has nothing to do with you I hope I will be able to buy the book on Amazon its just because of that stupid PayPal crap good book so far though
10/01/2021 13:01Reader-457826
would be good to see Kiya and Nerons relationship move along a bit. either do it or leave it. this tap dance between them is getting a bit old considering the 2nd book was the same. they get close, they move apart, they get close, they move apart…
10/01/2021 06:46
Aobakwe Monaise
Sunday is too far away... 😭This story is so good Marii.
09/30/2021 13:34Jael Brown
Something wicked this way comes, I don't know who or what followed her out there but whatever it is it is not good. My question is did Selene really beckon for her to come or is this Apopis's behind playing tricks on her to get her alone. I can't wait for the next update!!!
09/30/2021 05:31Meaghan Prue
what if selene is toying with them in some way. after all she destined them as partners what if this was her way of bringing them together
09/27/2021 08:57Jael Brown
I am glad both of them kept their composure and didn't rush into doing something that their wolves wanted. It was cute how they played with one another. Who are the two girls named in the letter and why was the letter given to Kiya and Neron. Wystan is a tool, and he better back down before he gets smacked down.It would do Neron some good if he would talk about his visions. Why did this ability of his emerge now and not before, what was blocking it from being activati?
09/27/2021 01:50
Pupu
what if Kiya goes into heat now ? will Kiya resist? I am sure Neron would do anything ...unless Kiya asks.....team Kiya and Neron here....love the updates so far though
09/24/2021 15:44Sherisa Weston
I really believe another avatar is in the building hmm
09/23/2021 13:13Sherisa Weston
Alpha Jackson made me boil and it seemed like he might be abusing his mate hmm. Is Alpha Eirik running some sort of slavery underground business? My mind immediately went someplace dark when Kiya kept sensing something strange and the children seemed frightened hmm
09/23/2021 13:09Cata Deveza-Yap
Who could they be? 🤔
09/23/2021 05:44Mez
🧐 The rush of power can be from anything! Could be from Apophis, somehow, poking around? Or maybe it’s from a reaction to something of some sort? Another avatar in the vicinity? Or because Kiya is connected to the moon, could it be from that? Ahhhhhhh so many questions! Wystan is a douchenugget and Alpha Jackson has me side-eyeing. Boooy Neron is really being tested now 😂
09/23/2021 03:07
Britta Doolan
I’m really hoping that Neron and Kiya don’t get together. How can you have a healthy relationship with someone who abused you that much. No matter how much they change
09/23/2021 02:52Nina072
WATCH SOMEONE IS WORKING WITH THE LOVECRAFTIAN HORCRUX GOD! (mad god)OOOOOOHHHH😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱 DUUUUUDE!
09/23/2021 02:51Nina072
there is a powerful supernatural I'm there, only a powerful could detect another powerful; I'm definitely thinking another avatar, the end there makes me think someone is using another supernatural to spy, or maybe kids. either way, neither is good. ohhhhhhh what's going on!!!! and poor liberty, dont even know and I already feel for her; Alpha jackson is a ding dong, probably just as bad as Johnathan. urgh wystan, just urgh someone step on this roach already. *shutters*
09/23/2021 02:51Saki J. Gibson
That rush of power she keeps feeling is concerning. I think it’s an Alpha who will eventually try to claim her… Or it could be the Egyptian God
09/23/2021 02:34Jael Brown
I hope the glitch got fixed, great update Marii. I really thought Kiya was going to slap the taste out of the alpha douchenozzle's mouth for a minute there
09/23/2021 01:52Meaghan Prue
why is everyone comments getting repeated like 3 and 4 times
09/20/2021 23:18Meaghan Prue
why is everyone comments getting repeated like 3 and 4 times
09/20/2021 23:18Bonib2
That rush of power is a suspect I have a bad feeling. Oh and Wystan too.😂
09/20/2021 11:18Sherisa Weston
I wonder what that weird rush of power was? Another avatar? I feel like there is going to be danger and her instincts felt it
09/20/2021 06:54Sherisa Weston
I wonder what that weird rush of power was? Another avatar? I feel like there is going to be danger and her instincts felt it
09/20/2021 06:53Nina072
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Onyx!!!! bad puppy! bad! oh lawddy this pup is gonna be the end of neron. altough I too have been wondering if shell go into heat again.
09/20/2021 05:30Nina072
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Onyx!!!! bad puppy! bad! oh lawddy this pup is gonna be the end of neron. altough I too have been wondering if shell go into heat again.
09/20/2021 05:30Nina072
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Onyx!!!! bad puppy! bad! oh lawddy this pup is gonna be the end of neron. altough I too have been wondering if shell go into heat again.
09/20/2021 05:30