Unbreakable Comments

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Bad wolf... Bad bad wolf 😉 And Neron, did you... really regret looking? 😂🤣😅 Am I the only one who thinks they both are BIG FLIRTS? I hope not. Oh I am excited for the next chapters!!!

    09/20/2021 04:55

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Bad wolf... Bad bad wolf 😉 And Neron, did you... really regret looking? 😂🤣😅 Am I the only one who thinks they both are BIG FLIRTS? I hope not. Oh I am excited for the next chapters!!!

    09/20/2021 04:55

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Bad wolf... Bad bad wolf 😉 And Neron, did you... really regret looking? 😂🤣😅 Am I the only one who thinks they both are BIG FLIRTS? I hope not. Oh I am excited for the next chapters!!!

    09/20/2021 04:55

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Do you... truly regret looking? 🤣😂👀

    09/20/2021 04:50

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Do you... truly regret looking? 🤣😂👀

    09/20/2021 04:50

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Do you... truly regret looking? 🤣😂👀

    09/20/2021 04:49

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Do you... truly regret looking? 🤣😂👀

    09/20/2021 04:49

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Do you... truly regret looking? 🤣😂👀

    09/20/2021 04:49

  • Kecina_Janice

    “Smack that ass like a drum” mannnn I am CACKLING! I love Onyx and his cheekiness

    09/20/2021 03:10

  • Kecina_Janice

    “Smack that ass like a drum” mannnn I am CACKLING! I love Onyx and his cheekiness

    09/20/2021 03:10

  • Kecina_Janice

    “Smack that ass like a drum” mannnn I am CACKLING! I love Onyx and his cheekiness

    09/20/2021 03:09

  • Tiffy84

    hi

    09/20/2021 00:25

  • Tiffy84

    Soo... since Jiys is SO close to Being at this point, will she go I to heat at this conference? Cause that would be a whole new set of problems.

    09/20/2021 00:24

  • Tiffy84

    Soo... since Jiys is SO close to Being at this point, will she go I to heat at this conference? Cause that would be a whole new set of problems.

    09/20/2021 00:24

  • Christy G

    Oh my Onyx! Dirty wolfie. Lol!

    09/19/2021 21:24

  • Christy G

    Oh my Onyx! Dirty wolfie. Lol!

    09/19/2021 21:23

  • Githa Datadin

    i love onyx 🤣🤣🤣 he is so funny

    09/19/2021 21:13

  • Jael Brown

    Hahaha this chapter is a good one. I am glad Neron chose not to follow Oynx's advice or Kiya would have smacked them both into the middle of the Atlantic and have Violetta summon forth a great big hurricane to drown them. Goddess give them strength to make it through the next three days

    09/19/2021 20:56

  • Jael Brown

    Hahaha this chapter is a good one. I am glad Neron chose not to follow Oynx's advice or Kiya would have smacked them both into the middle of the Atlantic and have Violetta summon forth a great big hurricane to drown them. Goddess give them strength to make it through the next three days

    09/19/2021 20:56

  • Jael Brown

    Hahaha this chapter is a good one. I am glad Neron chose not to follow Oynx's advice or Kiya would have smacked them both into the middle of the Atlantic and have Violetta summon forth a great big hurricane to drown them. Goddess give them strength to make it through the next three days

    09/19/2021 20:56

  • Jael Brown

    Hahaha this was a cute chapter, will they be able to survive being this close to one another for three days. I glad he didn't follow Oynx's advice or Kiya would have smacked them both into the middle of the Atlantic and have Violetta summon forth a great big hurricane. Oh goddess give them strength!!!

    09/19/2021 20:53

  • Jael Brown

    Hahaha this was a cute chapter, will they be able to survive being this close to one another for three days. I glad he didn't follow Oynx's advice or Kiya would have smacked them both into the middle of the Atlantic and have Violetta summon forth a great big hurricane. Oh goddess give them strength!!!

    09/19/2021 20:53

  • Jael Brown

    Hahaha this was a cute chapter, will they be able to survive being this close to one another for three days. I glad he didn't follow Oynx's advice or Kiya would have smacked them both into the middle of the Atlantic and have Violetta summon forth a great big hurricane. Oh goddess give them strength!!!

    09/19/2021 20:53

  • Kirsten Burmeister

    haha gotta love Onyx 😁😁 raunchy little Wolfie

    09/19/2021 20:44

  • Bonib2

    lmao, poor Neron was made a parting offering gift to Selene 🤣🤣🤣

    09/18/2021 10:11

  • Nina072

    urgh that was soooooo cuuuuuute!!!! gawd my heart! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 tho, I wonder I'd that prescene was hecate or selene, hopefully not the lovecraftian horcrux.

    09/16/2021 05:33

  • Sherisa Weston

    Question: When mates sleep or mate with each other that is them solidifying their mate bond which then leads them to mark each other if they are both werewolves or a certain species or only one mark the other mate depending on what species they are which then results in them being officially bonded and mates? Mates can't casually sleep with each other without solidifying their mate bond?

    09/16/2021 05:02

  • Mrs.Hyde

    How does Nuria have all this "experience" to have sex with Phoebe? I didn't think in the three years she been on earth that she had been with anyone else?

    09/16/2021 00:59

  • Jael Brown

    I am so glad Phoebe accepted Nuria, I am over here balling my eyes out. This chapter was so sweet Marii, love the updates

    09/15/2021 23:36

  • Meaghan Prue

    damn thanks Marii now I gotta go find the husband 😍🥰

    09/15/2021 23:17

  • Jael Brown

    I am over here toppled over dying from laughing myself. But it's sweet how much Nuria cares for Phoebe, even in her overzealous, jealous rage.

    09/15/2021 23:00

  • Jemma

    so, I took Neron’s car. 🤣

    09/15/2021 22:21

  • wana blain

    Wow…. 😭😭 Neron and Nuria are really the same and I love the fact Nuria still think of Neron happiness too 🤧🤧🤧

    09/15/2021 22:17

  • Mrs.Hyde

    I love how affectionate Neron is with Kiya. And that she's comfortable and relaxed with him.

    09/15/2021 20:52

  • Mrs.Hyde

    I really love this story. I only come on this app to read it. I can't wait for more.😁

    09/14/2021 13:42

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Sentimental Mom, sentimental son and daughter (I'm referring to the tea)... indeed it's in their DNA. 🤣 I think Nuria had a vision again.I wonder if Neron did too.

    09/13/2021 07:13

  • Nina072

    aweeeeeeee all the luck to nuria!!!!! cant wait for that update.

    09/13/2021 03:11

  • Kecina_Janice

    Ahhhh I need more! I wish it was a double update, but I know you’re busy with school.

    09/12/2021 22:22

  • Jael Brown

    I can wait to see how things are going to go down between Nuria and Phoebe. Things certainly are heating up between Kiya and Neron, looks like the weather is not the only thing hot in Florida (because trust it's hot as hell in Florida). Marii do you think you will ever do some bonus content about what happened to Kiya's enemies when Selene pretty much banished them to the wolf underworld. Just curious to know how they are fairing.

    09/12/2021 21:53

  • Spectral Beauty

    For Ch 14: Why does it say Darien and Mara will get married and adopt? Can Mara not have kids or something?

    09/12/2021 19:58

  • Mrs.Hyde

    lol I want to know what Onyx was going to say.

    09/11/2021 20:09

  • Githa Datadin

    onyx is super 😆. lets see if they both lose control keeping other wolfs from kiya

    09/09/2021 11:24

  • Belle

    woooww I like everything that happened since the beginning of the book 😍😍 it’s funny sweet, beautiful, and a little bit “scary” with the snake thing 😅 And Nuria’s character I like her a lot🤣🤣 she is so funny and so cheerful, she is a good distraction 😅 she makes me think of Jackie somehow… I’m looking forward reading the next chapters! The gathering maybe? to see how Neron and Onyx will keep their control… or not 🤣

    09/09/2021 06:04

  • Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

    Onyx is this close to decapitating Wyston...lol

    09/08/2021 23:44

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    I enjoyed this update. Been laughing all through out. The punchlines are just... sold-out. And Wyston... I would love to see Kiya beating you up. 😂😂😂

    09/08/2021 19:53

  • Nina072

    great update, I understand kiya perfectly. wystan is already grossing me tf out, and I wanted to know what Onyx was gonna say!!!!

    09/08/2021 18:41

  • Jamie Berry

    😂❤ I love the update, please keep up the good work. I hope Neron and Kiya will finally get together.

    09/08/2021 18:25

  • Tahiti_650

    loved the update

    09/08/2021 18:06

  • Meaghan Prue

    that last line of chapter 14 haha but he is right neron lol

    09/08/2021 17:52

  • Nina072

    damn artemis! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 someone is thirsteh!!!! this was pretty sweet, ngl.

    09/06/2021 07:51

  • Mrs.Hyde

    I'm happy Onyx got to experience these intimate moments with Artemis

    09/06/2021 01:28

  • Mrs.Hyde

    Aww what a sweet and passionate chapter. I love seeing Artemis and Onyx together.

    09/06/2021 01:27

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    "And why wasn't it in between my legs?" 😂🤣😂 Oh Arty! Question, if ever Onyx and Arty, uhmmm, mate in their wolf form, will that affect their human body?

    09/06/2021 00:54

  • Jael Brown

    Poor Artemis and Oynx I am rooting for them to be together more than Kiya and Neron. Will love prevail and heal the wounds that plague all of them I can not wait to see.

    09/05/2021 23:07

  • Sherisa Weston

    Artemis and Kiya's feelings for Onyx and Neron are not on the same track. Onyx didn't do anything wrong in the past, it was all Neron but they are both one so he is suffering for what Neron did in the past. Artemis wants Onyx but Kiya is not quite their with Neron and Artemis doesn't want to cross any boundaries because her loyalty is with Kiya. I can only imagine how Kiya feels like she is holding Artemis back from the person she wants and is developing feelings for

    09/05/2021 20:54

  • Sherisa Weston

    Marii there are a few errors in the updated chapter, chapter 13. Just thought I should notify you in case you didn't realize

    09/05/2021 20:45

  • ShyShy

    Arti & Onyx are everything 🥰

    09/05/2021 20:23

  • Its Nakiesha

    is this the last book?

    09/03/2021 10:09

  • Jaclyn LeeAnn Patrick

    GO GET THAT HUNK OF AN ALPHA, KIYA!!!!

    09/03/2021 02:47

  • ShyShy

    Don’t resist Kiyah, please don’t!! I really hope Neron can work through & heal so he can become one w/her 😍

    09/03/2021 01:03

  • Karla Carlos

    I can't stop the smile on my face at the end of this chapter 😀😍 finally their bond is healed and please now give them the opportunity to experience it.

    09/02/2021 22:38

  • Jessica Mallow

    PLEEEEEEASE don’t resist it!!! I want both kiya and neron experience true happiness and the unconditional love ♥️♥️♥️

    09/02/2021 21:08

  • Mrs.Hyde

    I keep thinking it be nice to see Kiya have a loving passionate sexual experience because her introduction into sex was brutality & rape. It be good to see her have a loving experience with one who adores her.

    09/02/2021 16:28

  • Mrs.Hyde

    Heck yeah. Revitalize bond!

    09/02/2021 16:10

  • Jael Brown

    It's getting hot in here, let's see how long they can continue to hold back from the mate bond

    09/02/2021 14:09

  • Binge Reader

    Please don’t resist, please don’t resist, please don’t resist!

    09/02/2021 13:33

  • Becky Treadway

    ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    09/02/2021 11:58

  • Bonib2

    How many times Kiya gonna die in one story Marii? If Neron is having that vision will she stay dead? I know she asked the goddess not to give her a second chance mate. Will she and Neron reconciled before she meet her maker again?

    09/02/2021 08:30

  • Meaghan Prue

    guys let's not get too excited marii is known for plot twists and like Emeril Bam plot twist so don't get too comfortable with neron and kiya ending up together even Though it would be awesome maybe that was selenes plan hmm

    09/02/2021 08:10

  • Meryam Ahsan

    wait- didn’t miss Marii write an entire chapter on werewolves not being able to get drunk ?

    09/02/2021 06:48

  • Nina072

    🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 oh shirt! oh muda loving shirt! it's over! they eff'd and for some reason I cant stop laughing at the end of this chapter.

    09/02/2021 05:50

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    I am deeply happy at Kiya's healing. And now, it's Neron's turn. The bond also gives me an excitement. 🥰🥰

    09/02/2021 05:39

  • Holly Briant

    when does this story update?

    09/01/2021 08:58

  • Kelly Thompson

    After Neron's mother returned was there a confrontation between her and Kiya's birth parents?

    08/31/2021 01:57

  • Githa Datadin

    waiting for Neron and Kiya to come together. Both have come a long way. nuria is so funny🤣

    08/30/2021 11:55

  • Sonia McLeod

    Nuria is hilarious but it's true 😁😁😂😂

    08/29/2021 20:46

  • Jemma

    omg Nuria 😅😅😂😂😂😂

    08/29/2021 17:25

  • Nina072

    yeah, but that much tea cannot be good for you. js nuria. *sips my own tea*

    08/29/2021 05:52

  • Nina072

    urgh goddam nuria, chill! rofl geez, I feel kiya here. werewolves and their libidos, I mean the poor girl WALKED IN ON HER PARENTS! 🤣🤣🤣 But leave it to our favorite psychic siblings to be mated to avatars, what a blood line tho! But 3 days away together for kiya and neron? now that will be some novela style stuff I'm ready for! its gonna be interesting if she agrees. How cute is it that aunts essie has a boyfriend!😍 Marii what in the world is this sorcery that you're writing? I dont usually cheer for romance. 😳🤣🤣

    08/29/2021 05:49

  • Sherisa Weston

    Nuria is hilarious!!! I love her!

    08/29/2021 04:55

  • Tahiti_650

    I loved the reunion. 🥰🥰

    08/28/2021 20:54

  • Mez

    All in favor for some smutty chapters of our favorite couples, say I 😃🤚 Our favorite author writes scenes so beautifully so I can only imagine the sex scenes 😼

    08/26/2021 22:36

  • Jemma

    how do you vote for this series please? I really want to vote for the books but don’t know how?

    08/26/2021 16:27

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    And Kiya said earlier, it's exasperating to watch Nuria and Phoebe avoid each other when, clearly, they like each other. ,😂 Now, look at Neron. Hopeless 🤦. My, my... It runs in the blood, eh? 😅😅 Good thing our girl Kiya here is brave enough to clear things up. You go girl!

    08/25/2021 20:11

  • Perla G.

    nnot for being a perv but I hope thwy mate be4 the serpent comes to their realm unmated they are a powerhouse mated yeesh I can only hope & wonder I adore Kiya & Neron ..so looking foward to their development🤗🤗🤗😍😍😍🤨🤨

    08/25/2021 16:41

  • Meryam Ahsan

    male or female, I find I have come to object anyone thinking they are not worthy of anyone else. They should move past this by now. Neron shouldn’t think he doesn’t deserve her, but that maybe he wishes she loves him . (Which I believe she does, but just won’t admit it)

    08/25/2021 12:15

  • Meaghan Prue

    ooh Marii will we get a judgement chapter on the lanes I mean we got one on the triple threat but I would love too see the dynamic duo get one for their crimes

    08/25/2021 12:07

  • Jael Brown

    Will Neron ever forgive himself. Nuria is by far one of my favorite characters, Kiya and better watch out because Nuria is definitely stealing the show. Sorry to hear about the Lanes, even though they were crappy parents. May Selene have mercy on their souls. Nuria, sip on this tea and call your girl. Both Nuria and Neron need to own to their feelings and let their significant others know how they feel.

    08/25/2021 06:26

  • Nina072

    omg nuria it's just tea!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

    08/25/2021 05:47

  • Spectral Beauty

    My favorite chapter so far. I still love Neron lots ❤️ He’s so tormented and scared, it’s heartbreaking

    08/25/2021 04:05

  • Sonia McLeod

    so emotional but no kiss 😘😘🇬🇧

    08/24/2021 19:10

  • Meaghan Prue

    question though marii I know you had previously said that tweedle see and tweedle dumb weren't gonna be in the book but what did happen to them did Neron banish them or what

    08/24/2021 01:14

  • Humairah Mahomedy Rangila

    I love this book series. Written with such emotional depth and character development . please release these in paper back.

    08/23/2021 19:52

  • Mrs.Hyde

    I've read alot of abuse/mate rejection stories. But what I love about this one and what makes it so different from all the others is that Neron changed drastically. His growth into the person he is today is amazing. I feel like he proved to and showed Kiya over and over and over again that he wouldn't hurt her again. He even put in the work and protected her and even though she forgave Raina and such you don't really see the growth there. Yes i feel like she had guilt but i feel like Neron has shown he's changed that's why I can see Celeste and Nuria embracing him so wholeheartedly and I was happy to watch him transform which I've never gotten to see in any other book. You get to read and see his transformation at every stage. I'm glad he went through therapy another first for me to see. It's one of the many things that makes this story so unique.

    08/23/2021 14:01

  • Christina Johnson

    This really made me cry in a nice way! Kiya meeting her neice and then Onxy! then Kiya and neron! marii you really are the best writer to stir up emotions lol! I read a lot and nothing usually makes me cry! but this from book one has literally had me from tears of sadness to happiness! You are an amaz9ng writer. xxx

    08/23/2021 05:52

  • Mez

    Onyx over here really being jealous of Lupin 🤣 God, I love him so much. Oh, and him tackling Kiya to the ground to lick her face is so like him. The big puppy missed her the most!

    08/23/2021 04:46

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    Awwwww 🥰🥰🥰

    08/23/2021 04:30

  • Mrs.Hyde

    Aww!!!😍😍😍

    08/23/2021 01:31

  • ShyShy

    I’m not crying 😢, you are 😭😭😭 The build up in this chapter was excellent!!! I just love how you connect your readers with the emotions of your characters 🥰 Bravo 👏 I’m looking forward to reading more about the reunification Neron/Kiya/Onyx/Artemis.

    08/23/2021 01:13

  • Jael Brown

    Reunited and it feels so good, Neron and Kiya are reunited hey, hey!!! Finally I have been waiting to see them back together. I can't wait to see what happens at Essie's party and I am glad Kiya got to meet her neice. I hope Raina's parents won't be in attendance at this birthday party

    08/23/2021 01:05
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