Unbreakable Comments

  • Christy G

    Please let them get together and have a happy ever after. I also want this for Phoebi and Nuria.

    08/23/2021 00:26

  • Becky Treadway

    ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    08/22/2021 23:23

  • Nina072

    The book has been amazing do far, you never disappoint; you really have a talent for it and I cannot wait for the rest of this book and the spin off books. Good luck starting nursing school, I'm sure you'll do great; and I cant wait to find out more about aunt essie's new main squeeze. haha😁😁😁😁

    08/22/2021 23:21

  • Nina072

    well......definitely wasnt expecting all this gushiness, between these two particularly hmm. But let's talk about Nuria and Phoebe!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍 how cute is that pairing!!!!!!! oh yes they are mates! I'm way excited for those two, I'm also super curious about our boy Darien; There was still something about a secret Mara was keeping. 🙃 I'm also curious as to how Abigail's cousin came to live in the pack; The developments have been great.

    08/22/2021 23:18

  • Cassandra

    Welcome back.. I’m glad to see you return love your writing. I was wondering how often will you be updating? love the chapter so far it’s like I’m addictive to you writing skills love the books need more BWWM books not enough on this site that are worth reading.

    08/22/2021 19:50

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    My guess is that Neron would act like a shy teenager infront of his crush... 🤦 Such a puppy! 😁 What's your guess?

    08/22/2021 15:03

  • Nina072

    so many emotions, so many wonderful things happening. I can hardly contain my own excitement.

    08/22/2021 01:40

  • Nina072

    damn it!!!! I was so into it and the BAM! end of chapter. makes me wanna cry!!!!

    08/22/2021 01:39

  • Mrs.Hyde

    Oh I can't wait until Kiya & Neron see each other again. I wonder if Valerian still has that stick up his butt. I curious the interaction Kiya will have with all of them....

    08/21/2021 23:44

  • Meaghan Prue

    marii why did u have to put in the cake details now I WANT CAKE

    08/21/2021 12:42

  • ShyShy

    Those two ending statements by Neron/Onyx made me smile ☺️

    08/21/2021 11:51

  • Meryam Ahsan

    @Marii just thought you’d want to know about a typo in there “Lust” green leaves instead of lush.

    08/21/2021 07:35

  • Githa Datadin

    I wonder wat Nuria is planning for Kiya and Neron?

    08/21/2021 07:23

  • Sherisa Weston

    Just to clarify Kiya is now 23 right and Neron about 25?

    08/21/2021 02:33

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    I remember in the last book, Phoebe said to Neron... "The owl's special" 🥰

    08/19/2021 01:08

  • Jemma

    “I don’t miss that puppy” 😂😂😂 Artemis 🤍

    08/18/2021 18:10

  • Mrs.Hyde

    I'm very interested into seeing Nuria get her mate. I'm interested to know how Darien is doing with Mara.

    08/18/2021 12:01

  • FireeFlii53684

    Aww Phoebe and Nuria are so cute with this flustered thing going on lol

    08/17/2021 22:21

  • Jael Brown

    Why did Nuria run away clearly Phoebe is her mate and they both have strong feelings for each other. I hope Phoebe accompanies Kiya to Oynx Moon

    08/17/2021 22:12

  • Mrs.Hyde

    I like that Neron can see glimpses of the future...wondering if he has premonitions like that when Kiya was still being blamed for the deaths of Celeste and Nuria. I don't blame Neron for thinking the way he does about Kiya and not sure he should invite her to his mom birthday party. He still holds an innumerable amount of guilt. I'm excited to see their in person exchange after 3years.

    08/17/2021 15:33

  • Meryam Ahsan

    Iike this chapter mainly because it sort of explains why Neron & Kiya are mates. As an avatar , her mate also had to be a special person.,

    08/15/2021 14:23

  • Jemma

    that last little bit with the texts made me smile….. who better to help with the gift of foresight than a witch….. 😉 Nuria and Pheobe 😁🤞🏻 I like getting to know more of the mums family line. 🤍

    08/15/2021 12:25

  • Jael Brown

    Do Nuria and Neron have powers? Damn these cliffhangers

    08/14/2021 23:28

  • Jemma

    maybe the mum has the dream premonitions also and it runs from her side of the family 😅 did say we will get to find out more about her family line in this book. 🙈 I so hope I was right that Nuria and Pheobe are mates 🙊

    08/14/2021 12:22

  • Humairah Mahomedy Rangila

    fantastic writing as usual. I am so eager to go on this journey with this amazing grouo of characters. Neron has grown so much! I

    08/14/2021 07:46

  • Sherisa Weston

    ohhh Nuria and Neron have the power of Precognition? This is exciting!!

    08/13/2021 04:54

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    "What I saw had my eyes screaming for holy water" 😂🤣🤣🤣🤣

    08/12/2021 07:50

  • Cata Deveza-Yap

    "That position got her pregnant" 😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣

    08/12/2021 07:19

  • Kiara Thomas

    I am loving this! I'm on the edge of my seat. 😀😆❤️👍🏽💯

    08/12/2021 05:55

  • dailyLimz

    this should be a movie series 🥰 although it won’t be as detailed as the book itself but it’s worth a try..

    08/11/2021 22:41

  • Sherisa Weston

    omg I am calling it Phoebe and Nuria are mates. I remember thinking about this since the previous book after she returned hahah

    08/11/2021 21:05

  • Kecina_Janice

    I’m not crying you are 😭 aww Neron I just want him to not feel guilty anymore and to reach out more. Ay yi yi. In due time.

    08/11/2021 01:58

  • Nina072

    app wont let me comment....

    08/10/2021 23:38

  • Jael Brown

    Damn Neron is like Usher and he got it bad, I hope he makes that call but I have a funny feeling, call or no call they are going to see each other real soon

    08/10/2021 14:18

  • wana blain

    Wow!! That was the most beautiful chapters I ever read. got me a lump in my throat. I love how you made Neron emotions so real wow 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

    08/10/2021 13:30

  • Bonib2

    #TeamKiyaNeronforever, well, when he find the courage to see Kiya. But I get and feel him. ❤

    08/10/2021 11:46

  • Lynora Crawford

    Aww...poor Neron, he's come such a long way. This third chapter actually made me tear up a little...

    08/10/2021 04:27

  • Jamee Moore

    oh the third chapter just pulls at the heart strings! we'll get there eventually.

    08/10/2021 04:04

  • AstarteLor

    Oooohhhhh this is going to be so good!!!

    08/10/2021 04:00

  • Lynora Crawford

    I'm so glad to see you back! Great opening for this one - as always. it immediately caught my interest, and now has me jonesing for more! 😊

    08/10/2021 00:32

  • julia nicole

    so happy to get into this last book. was just curious what the updating schedule will be

    08/09/2021 23:44

  • Sherisa Weston

    uhmm who is Aisha?

    08/09/2021 15:15

  • Autumn Harvey

    seeing the new book come out has made my Monday! yay Kiki!!!!

    08/09/2021 13:24

  • Tina Lacy

    I am very excited to finally get to read what I finally hop will bring Kira and Neon together as true fates mates

    08/09/2021 03:15

  • Christy G

    Ya!!! I'm so excited for this book. I can't wait to see how it will turn out. So happy to have you back. ❤❤❤

    08/08/2021 23:05

  • Jael Brown

    Wow, can't wait to see how the rest of her friends are doing. welcome back Kiya and Marii

    08/08/2021 22:28

  • kyra

    Marii’s back! Marii’s back!Marii’s back! YAAAY! Can’t wait to get lost in your stories again!

    08/08/2021 21:42

  • Crystal Jordan

    where can i find books one and two?

    08/08/2021 21:14

  • Githa Datadin

    welcome back! I love it allready 🤗

    08/08/2021 20:10

  • Jael Brown

    Yes she's back, love it

    08/08/2021 14:44

  • wana blain

    Whewwww! She’s ready to be blown away 🤓🤓🤓 Welcome back!!

    08/08/2021 11:54

  • Bobbie Neal

    Yaaayyy. Thank you so much. You are truly a talented writer. I love your books ❤️❤️❤️.

    08/08/2021 09:39

  • Sherisa Weston

    Welcome back!!! The final journey begins

    08/08/2021 07:32

  • Moonlight Muse

    i love it these 2 chapters and the synopsis i really cant wait for the next chapter and to read more of this book!

    08/08/2021 06:01

  • Kecina_Janice

    omg it’s finally here!!! ahhhhhh I’m going crazy in the best way possible! 💕💕💕

    08/08/2021 02:08
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