The Song in the Alpha's Heart Comments

  • Djd1973

    I've lost count of how many times I've read Heartsong, Werewolf's Heartsong and The Song In The Alpha's Heart. All 3 of them are so very good.

    12/30/2022 09:04

  • Candise Carter

    okay so what is the older version I’d like to know it’s ending.

    12/29/2022 22:25

  • Sumriti Singh

    is this new version complete or there will be more chapters to come.......

    12/29/2022 10:13

  • lori murphy

    💞❣️💞

    12/28/2022 03:39

  • Angela Pickrem

    so just wondering when new chapters are coming out for The Alphas Heartsong???

    12/28/2022 02:37

  • TheODesha

    loving the rewrite #heartsongsaga

    12/27/2022 04:54

  • Gillian Gee

    oh cool!! I had no idea there were sequels! #heartsongsage

    12/27/2022 01:08

  • Diana

    I like the rewrite & the extra details. I also like the subtle changes in words that really allow the characters different personalities to shine. #heartsongsage

    12/25/2022 19:26

  • Angela Pickrem

    i cant wait for more chapters.. love all the stories. i have just started reading the witch song(i know, wrong name😉) but either way i have enjoyed all the stories so far. i do look forward to reading the Dragons Heartsong, when its finally out, and or finished. Hoping you put a spin on it like all the other “Heartsong Stories “… Keep up the great writing, id love to read more of your stories.. Merry Christmas to you , your family and all the readers here…

    12/24/2022 20:11

  • Mlga0

    Merry Christmas 🎄 Thank you for your awesome stories. I fell in love with Heartsong when it first came out. Love alora and Damian and the wonderful pack. 🎄🎄🎄🎄

    12/24/2022 19:04

  • Corne Thiart

    really good story can't wait it read is Finnish.

    12/24/2022 18:52

  • Burnadette Hooper

    I love the rewrite, the increase in details and backstory are perfect! I only wish that the book would update more often but I understand that isn't possible sometimes, thanks for the great work so far and I can't wait for more updates! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to all

    12/24/2022 13:35

  • RavenousReader

    I've loved reading the first few chapters from a different perspective. My heart aches for poor Alora, She's had to endure so much, but to hear how she was cared for, protected and loved by Zane and Damien at their first meeting is very sweet ❤ Only a few chapters in, but falling in love with the story all over again! #HeartsongSage

    12/23/2022 11:49

  • Jennifer Groller

    so far so good I love these types of books

    12/23/2022 02:30

  • Connie Gonzales

    wow love this story. what is better than a love story that is about a love so great that is spans across time and space. A love so strong that if one dies the other dies as well even if they have never met in that lifetime. love this story their love is definitely relationship goals. Isnt this the kind of love everyone dreams and hopes for? #HeartsongSage

    12/23/2022 02:03

  • Stephanie Breedlove McKee

    I love the new rewrite but really don't think it was necessary but that could me being impatient for witch's heartson and dragon heartsong to be completed....😆 #HeartsongSage

    12/23/2022 00:11

  • Mari411

    Loving the rewrite, can’t wait for more updates. Merry Christmas & Happy New Year! #HeartsongSage

    12/22/2022 23:42

  • Sumriti Singh

    i love the writing done by the writer in heartsong saga looking forward to read the whole story hw she wins and joins all creatures under her roof....

    12/22/2022 19:15

  • Reader-345981

    thanks for the update

    12/22/2022 00:55

  • Louise Williams

    Loving the new chapters. Can't wait for the next lot ☺️

    12/22/2022 00:45

  • Louise Williams

    I'm re-reading for the third time whilst I await more chapters...... I've lost count of the times I've read Werewolf's Heartsong. But don't want to reread it just now, since I've started this one.

    12/21/2022 19:30

  • gurlscout

    when will there be a new update?

    12/21/2022 01:40

  • Reader-345981

    can wait until it’s a new update

    12/20/2022 01:09

  • Louise Williams

    Might be an idea to check. I've found a couple of times you have mixed up Darien and Damien's names. Otherwise I am thoroughly enjoying this rewrite. Having read Werewolf's Heartsong many times, to see it from a slightly different angle with more detail is very pleasing. Especially the stuff with Damien at University..... I would happily buy both these books if they were in paperback.....

    12/19/2022 17:49

  • Burnadette Hooper

    Love this book, please right more soon!!!

    12/17/2022 21:54

  • Rebecca Michael

    i read a werewolf heart song and the one where matts mate helps her i loved them and will keep reading them over again keep up the fantastic work

    12/16/2022 14:42

  • Maffie Flaviano

    pls update more chapters. i like this

    12/15/2022 08:08

  • Raven Dalziel

    you can see how you have matured as a writer. it's pretty awesome to feel the difference between a werewolf hesrtsong and this book. I love that you are more descriptive!

    12/14/2022 04:14

  • Raven Dalziel

    while I'm a bit sad you had to re write. I'm glad I hadn't read to much of your other books that now I get a wonderful new story :)

    12/14/2022 03:14

  • kayce george

    anyone know how often she updates

    12/11/2022 02:47

  • SJ Johnson

    Loving the story. Anxiously and impatiently waiting for more.

    12/09/2022 20:44

  • SJ Johnson

    yes, yes, yes!!! FINALLY that little tramp got exactly what she deserved!!! Was sooo waiting for this fight and u did not disappoint! I am so loving this rewrite!!!!!

    12/09/2022 17:48

  • Jeanet Watson

    locing the updates.......excited for more

    12/09/2022 17:20

  • SJ Johnson

    I’m loving the insight ur giving for these two.Absolutely loving this book.

    12/09/2022 17:08

  • Samantha Woolweaver

    starting to get annoyed with the rewrite… she keeps putting Damien when it supposed to be Darien the brother/best friend.

    12/09/2022 14:52

  • Ava

    Thank you for this update. I check several times a day waiting for the new exciting chapters. I still love the original book but this new version is out of this world. love ❤️ it

    12/08/2022 16:29

  • Reader-754372

    how often are updates? this is a good book

    12/05/2022 18:50

  • Reader-510706

    how often are updates?

    12/02/2022 22:10

  • Jennifer Haynes

    .....9.

    11/30/2022 01:20

  • Brittany Reaveley

    when is there going to be an update ?

    11/23/2022 15:43

  • Marie

    Why change a good story?

    11/22/2022 21:59

  • Montana Kovac

    why can't I find dragons Heartsong????

    11/18/2022 16:51

  • Djd1973

    WOW!! Some people need to get a grip when it comes to constant criticism. When people are constantly critical it comes across as demeaning. If people can't say anything nice the DON'T say anything AT ALL.

    11/15/2022 21:38

  • Reader-787977

    umm, just why are you re writing this, I admit the original is filled with errors…and the re write has not changed…. you add color to the story, but sill can’t spell, and drop your standard on punctuation….your editor sucks and dowse not check their work…

    11/10/2022 23:51

  • Alexandra Nala S

    I'd love to see this book in print! or at least on k*n*l ;)

    11/05/2022 17:36

  • Reader-787977

    and fyi, this section does not give AF how you spell, or composition…. no wonder for stilly errors…

    11/05/2022 02:14

  • Reader-787977

    lady…let the multiple couples that now have infinite bonds confront the BMC….don’t lay it all at their feet… the hope for the future should never relie on one soul…the love.. the pain..don’t make her responsible for it all…..build do not distroy… dark begets dark… it’s how they win……

    11/05/2022 02:12

  • Stephanie Prince

    i like this one but I’m going to have to say I like the original one a lot more.

    11/04/2022 04:33

  • Natalie Jones

    loving this rewrite!! I loved the original but this one is phenomenal 😍 I can hardly wait for more

    11/02/2022 19:46

  • Brittany Reaveley

    when will the next update be

    10/29/2022 16:58

  • Adele Rosencrance

    this rewrite is SOOOOO MUCH BETTER, LOVE IT! Thank you for the re-do!!

    10/21/2022 21:29

  • Frances Teeling

    the incident Jaxon mentioned, most likely involved Arthur defending Dasha

    10/21/2022 17:27

  • Frances Teeling

    Mason grimaced

    10/21/2022 17:15

  • Frances Teeling

    when she sat down her shorts rode up

    10/21/2022 16:21

  • Frances Teeling

    her long bushy tail waving languidly

    10/21/2022 16:17

  • Frances Teeling

    Darien was curious,so he peeked over Alora’s shoulder

    10/21/2022 16:11

  • Frances Teeling

    they wanted to know why Alora’s spoke of putting her desk chair under her doorknob

    10/21/2022 00:18

  • Frances Teeling

    but she did not know what she could possibly say

    10/21/2022 00:10

  • Frances Teeling

    her canines growing

    10/21/2022 00:00

  • Frances Teeling

    we’ll start the challenges

    10/20/2022 23:56

  • Frances Teeling

    one corner of Alora’s mouth lifted in a half smile

    10/20/2022 23:55

  • Frances Teeling

    focus only on the announcement

    10/20/2022 23:41

  • Frances Teeling

    I’m in the guide

    10/20/2022 23:13

  • Frances Teeling

    carried her off between them

    10/20/2022 23:08

  • Frances Teeling

    on our way

    10/20/2022 23:01

  • Frances Teeling

    with a growl Bettina stomped out

    10/20/2022 22:50

  • Frances Teeling

    Kailua couldn’t help but tilt her head

    10/20/2022 22:47

  • Frances Teeling

    into Luna Ember’s eyes

    10/20/2022 22:40

  • Frances Teeling

    I will chain you up

    10/20/2022 22:26

  • Frances Teeling

    Serenity not serenity names should be capitalized

    10/20/2022 19:29

  • Frances Teeling

    johnathan not johnathen

    10/19/2022 23:39

  • Frances Teeling

    north mountain

    10/19/2022 21:52

  • Frances Teeling

    principal not principle

    10/19/2022 20:57

  • Frances Teeling

    Sarah and her posse

    10/19/2022 20:45

  • Frances Teeling

    not letting

    10/19/2022 18:49

  • Frances Teeling

    they reached

    10/19/2022 18:42

  • Ava

    I’m so excited for this new book. 🥰

    10/17/2022 15:37

  • Francesca Delacruz

    please don’t let us wait to long for Sarah’s fight, you know the first one is a set up and he will throw it for Sarah

    10/09/2022 00:54

  • Cinn Merriss

    i want to know why. if i have all ready payed for these books WHY. am i REPAYING for the same books with updates !!!!!!

    10/08/2022 17:45

  • norg

    man your really draging it on before the fight

    09/28/2022 02:32

  • Scott Rogers

    why are chapters 12-24 locked. i have already unlocked and read them. i went back to reread and they are locked.

    09/20/2022 23:13

  • Gemma Whiting

    just love this story. can’t wait to read more.

    09/18/2022 19:26

  • Katrina Burbridge

    I was just wondering when we can read more.😁

    09/17/2022 23:54

  • Stephanie Gleason

    shes working on updates, cat keeps getting in the way

    09/06/2022 07:34

  • Geni Moss

    What happened to updating Witch' s Heartsong and Dragon's Heartsong?

    09/03/2022 18:56

  • Danica Degrave

    will there be anymore updates to version?

    08/30/2022 09:23

  • Katrina Burbridge

    is there going to be any more

    08/28/2022 20:17

  • Katrina Burbridge

    anymore please

    08/23/2022 15:49

  • jortiz64

    are there any updates?!!!

    08/21/2022 01:44

  • Katrina Burbridge

    is there any more

    08/15/2022 05:26

  • Cat Scalfaro

    So is this the same story with just different details or is it a brand new story added on to the original?

    07/28/2022 03:02

  • Katrina Burbridge

    is there any more coming

    07/24/2022 19:17

  • Katrina Burbridge

    I was just wondering when any new chapters…..

    07/18/2022 20:20

  • Jeanet Watson

    loved the new chapters

    07/16/2022 03:29

  • Sian Jones

    please finish writing this version to I loved the others and really want to read this one to

    07/01/2022 14:10

  • Patty

    i feel let down. was hoping for more then just descrptions of the alpha and Luna.

    06/25/2022 07:50

  • Katrina Burbridge

    is there any more.

    06/20/2022 17:49

  • Virginia Cunningham

    not paying again for the same book.

    06/18/2022 18:41

  • Becky Bowers-Richardella

    how often will their be updates?

    06/17/2022 01:11

  • Steph Ahmadu

    I love this🤗 This is Damien's side of the original heartsong

    06/15/2022 21:40
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