The Song in the Alpha's Heart Comments
Patty
i feel let down. was hoping for more then just descrptions of the alpha and Luna.
09/04/2023 15:31Katrina Burbridge
I was just wondering when any new chapters…..
09/04/2023 15:29Steph Ahmadu
I love this🤗 This is Damien's side of the original heartsong
09/04/2023 15:13Devyn M. Greene Chrisner
I'm so glad she's doing this!!!!
09/04/2023 15:05Jeanet Watson
loved the new chapters
09/04/2023 15:01Sitsume
Really love this new direction! Though, hope you don't take this badly, but you repeat the same words too close together. Maybe use other names or descriptors for things. Example: you say the full name of the pack and mansion each time and state the same things for 3 sentences in a row. Maybe change to "our packs gathering area" or just mansion. Stuff like that. Not the best examples...but I hope I'm not being rude by saying this! I do love the original a huge amount, but even reading in my head it gets too wordy and I end up changing the words as I think them. Rather it be so good that it isn't necessary! Because the story makes me so happy to read it!
09/04/2023 14:54Becky Bowers-Richardella
how often will their be updates?
09/04/2023 13:55
