The Song in the Alpha's Heart Comments
Loving the new chapters. Can't wait for the next lot ☺️
09/04/2023 20:04TheODesha
loving the rewrite #heartsongsaga
09/04/2023 20:02
SJ Johnson
I’m loving the insight ur giving for these two.Absolutely loving this book.
09/04/2023 20:01Merry Christmas 🎄 Thank you for your awesome stories. I fell in love with Heartsong when it first came out. Love alora and Damian and the wonderful pack. 🎄🎄🎄🎄
09/04/2023 19:55Ashime
What is the difference between the rewrite and the original?
09/04/2023 19:54Rafael
I love the 2 books and I anxiously waiting for more updates for this one
09/04/2023 19:51
Raven Dalziel
while I'm a bit sad you had to re write. I'm glad I hadn't read to much of your other books that now I get a wonderful new story :)
09/04/2023 19:45Mari411
Loving the rewrite, can’t wait for more updates. Merry Christmas & Happy New Year! #HeartsongSage
09/04/2023 19:44Reader-345981
can wait until it’s a new update
09/04/2023 19:43Samantha Woolweaver
starting to get annoyed with the rewrite… she keeps putting Damien when it supposed to be Darien the brother/best friend.
09/04/2023 19:43I'm re-reading for the third time whilst I await more chapters...... I've lost count of the times I've read Werewolf's Heartsong. But don't want to reread it just now, since I've started this one.
09/04/2023 19:42Collin Parks
does anyone know what happened to dragons heartsong?
09/04/2023 19:42SJ Johnson
Loving the story. Anxiously and impatiently waiting for more.
09/04/2023 19:40Jennifer Haynes
.....9.
09/04/2023 19:40Angela Pickrem
still no updates. why
09/04/2023 19:39Candise Carter
okay so what is the older version I’d like to know it’s ending.
09/04/2023 19:37Frances Teeling
they reached
09/04/2023 19:36Burnadette Hooper
I love the rewrite, the increase in details and backstory are perfect! I only wish that the book would update more often but I understand that isn't possible sometimes, thanks for the great work so far and I can't wait for more updates! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to all
09/04/2023 19:31Marie
Why change a good story?
09/04/2023 19:30Rebecca Michael
i read a werewolf heart song and the one where matts mate helps her i loved them and will keep reading them over again keep up the fantastic work
09/04/2023 19:30kayce george
anyone know how often she updates
09/04/2023 19:29Queen Nique
I absolutely love this book, I’m definitely waiting for a sequel 🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾
09/04/2023 19:27Frances Teeling
with a growl Bettina stomped out
09/04/2023 19:26Frances Teeling
they wanted to know why Alora’s spoke of putting her desk chair under her doorknob
09/04/2023 19:25
Ava
Thank you for this update. I check several times a day waiting for the new exciting chapters. I still love the original book but this new version is out of this world. love ❤️ it
09/04/2023 19:24Frances Teeling
but she did not know what she could possibly say
09/04/2023 19:24Frances Teeling
her canines growing
09/04/2023 19:24Katrina Burbridge
is there any more
09/04/2023 19:23SJ Johnson
yes, yes, yes!!! FINALLY that little tramp got exactly what she deserved!!! Was sooo waiting for this fight and u did not disappoint! I am so loving this rewrite!!!!!
09/04/2023 19:21Frances Teeling
we’ll start the challenges
09/04/2023 19:19Reader-787977
umm, just why are you re writing this, I admit the original is filled with errors…and the re write has not changed…. you add color to the story, but sill can’t spell, and drop your standard on punctuation….your editor sucks and dowse not check their work…
09/04/2023 19:14lori murphy
💞❣️💞
09/04/2023 19:14Adele Rosencrance
this rewrite is SOOOOO MUCH BETTER, LOVE IT! Thank you for the re-do!!
09/04/2023 19:13Montana Kovac
why can't I find dragons Heartsong????
09/04/2023 19:12Raven Dalziel
you can see how you have matured as a writer. it's pretty awesome to feel the difference between a werewolf hesrtsong and this book. I love that you are more descriptive!
09/04/2023 19:09Frances Teeling
I’m in the guide
09/04/2023 19:09Frances Teeling
on our way
09/04/2023 19:08Alexandra Nala S
I'd love to see this book in print! or at least on k*n*l ;)
09/04/2023 19:07Frances Teeling
Darien was curious,so he peeked over Alora’s shoulder
09/04/2023 19:06Reader-787977
and fyi, this section does not give AF how you spell, or composition…. no wonder for stilly errors…
09/04/2023 19:05Reader-787977
lady…let the multiple couples that now have infinite bonds confront the BMC….don’t lay it all at their feet… the hope for the future should never relie on one soul…the love.. the pain..don’t make her responsible for it all…..build do not distroy… dark begets dark… it’s how they win……
09/04/2023 18:46Frances Teeling
focus only on the announcement
09/04/2023 18:44Jeanet Watson
locing the updates.......excited for more
09/04/2023 18:43Frances Teeling
Kailua couldn’t help but tilt her head
09/04/2023 18:42Frances Teeling
I will chain you up
09/04/2023 18:41Brittany Reaveley
when will the next update be
09/04/2023 18:41Frances Teeling
the incident Jaxon mentioned, most likely involved Arthur defending Dasha
09/04/2023 18:40Brittany Reaveley
when is there going to be an update ?
09/04/2023 18:39RavenousReader
I've loved reading the first few chapters from a different perspective. My heart aches for poor Alora, She's had to endure so much, but to hear how she was cared for, protected and loved by Zane and Damien at their first meeting is very sweet ❤ Only a few chapters in, but falling in love with the story all over again! #HeartsongSage
09/04/2023 18:35Frances Teeling
johnathan not johnathen
09/04/2023 18:35Frances Teeling
not letting
09/04/2023 18:32Angela Pickrem
i cant wait for more chapters.. love all the stories. i have just started reading the witch song(i know, wrong name😉) but either way i have enjoyed all the stories so far. i do look forward to reading the Dragons Heartsong, when its finally out, and or finished. Hoping you put a spin on it like all the other “Heartsong Stories “… Keep up the great writing, id love to read more of your stories.. Merry Christmas to you , your family and all the readers here…
09/04/2023 18:30Frances Teeling
north mountain
09/04/2023 18:28Djd1973
WOW!! Some people need to get a grip when it comes to constant criticism. When people are constantly critical it comes across as demeaning. If people can't say anything nice the DON'T say anything AT ALL.
09/04/2023 18:28Katrina Burbridge
I was just wondering when we can read more.😁
09/04/2023 18:27Frances Teeling
carried her off between them
09/04/2023 18:22Frances Teeling
into Luna Ember’s eyes
09/04/2023 18:21Indira Rama
man your really draging it on before the fight
09/04/2023 18:19will there be anymore updates to version?
09/04/2023 18:19Reader-510706
how often are updates?
09/04/2023 18:16Reader-754372
how often are updates? this is a good book
09/04/2023 18:15Stephanie Prince
i like this one but I’m going to have to say I like the original one a lot more.
09/04/2023 18:14Frances Teeling
Sarah and her posse
09/04/2023 18:14Frances Teeling
when she sat down her shorts rode up
09/04/2023 18:12Frances Teeling
her long bushy tail waving languidly
09/04/2023 18:12Frances Teeling
Serenity not serenity names should be capitalized
09/04/2023 18:12are there any updates?!!!
09/04/2023 18:10
Natalie Jones
loving this rewrite!! I loved the original but this one is phenomenal 😍 I can hardly wait for more
09/04/2023 18:05
Scott Rogers
why are chapters 12-24 locked. i have already unlocked and read them. i went back to reread and they are locked.
09/04/2023 17:59Ava
I’m so excited for this new book. 🥰
09/04/2023 17:58Gemma Whiting
just love this story. can’t wait to read more.
09/04/2023 17:58Frances Teeling
one corner of Alora’s mouth lifted in a half smile
09/04/2023 17:52Frances Teeling
Mason grimaced
09/04/2023 17:46Katrina Burbridge
is there going to be any more
09/04/2023 17:32Frances Teeling
principal not principle
09/04/2023 17:29Stephanie Gleason
shes working on updates, cat keeps getting in the way
09/04/2023 17:27Katrina Burbridge
anymore please
09/04/2023 17:23Geni Moss
What happened to updating Witch' s Heartsong and Dragon's Heartsong?
09/04/2023 17:14Francesca Delacruz
please don’t let us wait to long for Sarah’s fight, you know the first one is a set up and he will throw it for Sarah
09/04/2023 16:57Cat Scalfaro
So is this the same story with just different details or is it a brand new story added on to the original?
09/04/2023 16:36Katrina Burbridge
is there any more
09/04/2023 16:22Katrina Burbridge
is there any more.
09/04/2023 15:54Katrina Burbridge
is there any more coming
09/04/2023 15:36Sian Jones
please finish writing this version to I loved the others and really want to read this one to
09/04/2023 15:35India Wasalaski
definitely still good
09/04/2023 15:33Patty
i feel let down. was hoping for more then just descrptions of the alpha and Luna.
09/04/2023 15:31Katrina Burbridge
I was just wondering when any new chapters…..
09/04/2023 15:29Steph Ahmadu
I love this🤗 This is Damien's side of the original heartsong
09/04/2023 15:13Devyn M. Greene Chrisner
I'm so glad she's doing this!!!!
09/04/2023 15:05Jeanet Watson
loved the new chapters
09/04/2023 15:01Sitsume
Really love this new direction! Though, hope you don't take this badly, but you repeat the same words too close together. Maybe use other names or descriptors for things. Example: you say the full name of the pack and mansion each time and state the same things for 3 sentences in a row. Maybe change to "our packs gathering area" or just mansion. Stuff like that. Not the best examples...but I hope I'm not being rude by saying this! I do love the original a huge amount, but even reading in my head it gets too wordy and I end up changing the words as I think them. Rather it be so good that it isn't necessary! Because the story makes me so happy to read it!
09/04/2023 14:54Becky Bowers-Richardella
how often will their be updates?
09/04/2023 13:55
