The Song in the Alpha's Heart Comments

  • Montana Kovac

    why can't I find dragons Heartsong????

    09/04/2023 19:12

  • Raven Dalziel

    you can see how you have matured as a writer. it's pretty awesome to feel the difference between a werewolf hesrtsong and this book. I love that you are more descriptive!

    09/04/2023 19:09

  • Frances Teeling

    I’m in the guide

    09/04/2023 19:09

  • Frances Teeling

    on our way

    09/04/2023 19:08

  • Alexandra Nala S

    I'd love to see this book in print! or at least on k*n*l ;)

    09/04/2023 19:07

  • Frances Teeling

    Darien was curious,so he peeked over Alora’s shoulder

    09/04/2023 19:06

  • Reader-787977

    and fyi, this section does not give AF how you spell, or composition…. no wonder for stilly errors…

    09/04/2023 19:05

  • Reader-787977

    lady…let the multiple couples that now have infinite bonds confront the BMC….don’t lay it all at their feet… the hope for the future should never relie on one soul…the love.. the pain..don’t make her responsible for it all…..build do not distroy… dark begets dark… it’s how they win……

    09/04/2023 18:46

  • Frances Teeling

    focus only on the announcement

    09/04/2023 18:44

  • Jeanet Watson

    locing the updates.......excited for more

    09/04/2023 18:43

  • Frances Teeling

    Kailua couldn’t help but tilt her head

    09/04/2023 18:42

  • Frances Teeling

    I will chain you up

    09/04/2023 18:41

  • Brittany Reaveley

    when will the next update be

    09/04/2023 18:41

  • Frances Teeling

    the incident Jaxon mentioned, most likely involved Arthur defending Dasha

    09/04/2023 18:40

  • Brittany Reaveley

    when is there going to be an update ?

    09/04/2023 18:39

  • RavenousReader

    I've loved reading the first few chapters from a different perspective. My heart aches for poor Alora, She's had to endure so much, but to hear how she was cared for, protected and loved by Zane and Damien at their first meeting is very sweet ❤ Only a few chapters in, but falling in love with the story all over again! #HeartsongSage

    09/04/2023 18:35

  • Frances Teeling

    johnathan not johnathen

    09/04/2023 18:35

  • Frances Teeling

    not letting

    09/04/2023 18:32

  • Angela Pickrem

    i cant wait for more chapters.. love all the stories. i have just started reading the witch song(i know, wrong name😉) but either way i have enjoyed all the stories so far. i do look forward to reading the Dragons Heartsong, when its finally out, and or finished. Hoping you put a spin on it like all the other “Heartsong Stories “… Keep up the great writing, id love to read more of your stories.. Merry Christmas to you , your family and all the readers here…

    09/04/2023 18:30

  • Frances Teeling

    north mountain

    09/04/2023 18:28

  • Djd1973

    WOW!! Some people need to get a grip when it comes to constant criticism. When people are constantly critical it comes across as demeaning. If people can't say anything nice the DON'T say anything AT ALL.

    09/04/2023 18:28

  • Katrina Burbridge

    I was just wondering when we can read more.😁

    09/04/2023 18:27

  • Frances Teeling

    carried her off between them

    09/04/2023 18:22

  • Frances Teeling

    into Luna Ember’s eyes

    09/04/2023 18:21

  • Indira Rama

    man your really draging it on before the fight

    09/04/2023 18:19

  • will there be anymore updates to version?

    09/04/2023 18:19

  • Reader-510706

    how often are updates?

    09/04/2023 18:16

  • Reader-754372

    how often are updates? this is a good book

    09/04/2023 18:15

  • Stephanie Prince

    i like this one but I’m going to have to say I like the original one a lot more.

    09/04/2023 18:14

  • Frances Teeling

    Sarah and her posse

    09/04/2023 18:14

  • Frances Teeling

    when she sat down her shorts rode up

    09/04/2023 18:12

  • Frances Teeling

    her long bushy tail waving languidly

    09/04/2023 18:12

  • Frances Teeling

    Serenity not serenity names should be capitalized

    09/04/2023 18:12

  • are there any updates?!!!

    09/04/2023 18:10

  • Natalie Jones

    loving this rewrite!! I loved the original but this one is phenomenal 😍 I can hardly wait for more

    09/04/2023 18:05

  • Scott Rogers

    why are chapters 12-24 locked. i have already unlocked and read them. i went back to reread and they are locked.

    09/04/2023 17:59

  • Ava

    I’m so excited for this new book. 🥰

    09/04/2023 17:58

  • Gemma Whiting

    just love this story. can’t wait to read more.

    09/04/2023 17:58

  • Frances Teeling

    one corner of Alora’s mouth lifted in a half smile

    09/04/2023 17:52

  • Frances Teeling

    Mason grimaced

    09/04/2023 17:46

  • Katrina Burbridge

    is there going to be any more

    09/04/2023 17:32

  • Frances Teeling

    principal not principle

    09/04/2023 17:29

  • Stephanie Gleason

    shes working on updates, cat keeps getting in the way

    09/04/2023 17:27

  • Katrina Burbridge

    anymore please

    09/04/2023 17:23

  • Geni Moss

    What happened to updating Witch' s Heartsong and Dragon's Heartsong?

    09/04/2023 17:14

  • Francesca Delacruz

    please don’t let us wait to long for Sarah’s fight, you know the first one is a set up and he will throw it for Sarah

    09/04/2023 16:57

  • Cat Scalfaro

    So is this the same story with just different details or is it a brand new story added on to the original?

    09/04/2023 16:36

  • Katrina Burbridge

    is there any more

    09/04/2023 16:22

  • Katrina Burbridge

    is there any more.

    09/04/2023 15:54

  • Katrina Burbridge

    is there any more coming

    09/04/2023 15:36

  • Sian Jones

    please finish writing this version to I loved the others and really want to read this one to

    09/04/2023 15:35

  • India Wasalaski

    definitely still good

    09/04/2023 15:33

  • Patty

    i feel let down. was hoping for more then just descrptions of the alpha and Luna.

    09/04/2023 15:31

  • Katrina Burbridge

    I was just wondering when any new chapters…..

    09/04/2023 15:29

  • Steph Ahmadu

    I love this🤗 This is Damien's side of the original heartsong

    09/04/2023 15:13

  • Devyn M. Greene Chrisner

    I'm so glad she's doing this!!!!

    09/04/2023 15:05

  • Jeanet Watson

    loved the new chapters

    09/04/2023 15:01

  • Sitsume

    Really love this new direction! Though, hope you don't take this badly, but you repeat the same words too close together. Maybe use other names or descriptors for things. Example: you say the full name of the pack and mansion each time and state the same things for 3 sentences in a row. Maybe change to "our packs gathering area" or just mansion. Stuff like that. Not the best examples...but I hope I'm not being rude by saying this! I do love the original a huge amount, but even reading in my head it gets too wordy and I end up changing the words as I think them. Rather it be so good that it isn't necessary! Because the story makes me so happy to read it!

    09/04/2023 14:54

  • Becky Bowers-Richardella

    how often will their be updates?

    09/04/2023 13:55
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