Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments

  • Yin528 _Official

    this is amazing UwU

    07/17/2020 13:20

  • Kira Lambert

    Hello author I'm here through wattpad also I'm happy that you recommend this

    07/17/2020 12:50

  • TIA KHANNA

    I expected this to be normal clique 'werewolf story with conflict with vampires' but... I'm glad that it has more supernatural characters than just werewolves. Chapters length is quiet adequate not too short and not too long ,it starts to get indulging from the start that's a good thing. I also liked how it didn't start with the normal format of main female lead intoducing herself and telling all her life problems in the first paragraph of the very first chapter. Character development is good too. Omega, Ember shows at times like submission to the dominant ones and also at times shows us that she is not a weakling to be stepped on and is trying to get better and also she has morals which were depicted during 'saving the fairy friend of hers scene'.Also the inner turmoil of the Female character was expressed well. Alpha, Kane character kinda seems not so out of the norm as per the description : 'his cold orbs',' jet black hair', and as the 'most expressionless being'. I like the Female character friends they are good addition in this book but they seem a little too powerful as compared to the Female lead... well it's quite refreshing though.They are presented perfectly and are relatable. The plot was kept moving smoothly and the interest to read the next chapter was maintained well ... That's what made the book more indulging. And also the pace of the book was maintained-well in all the chapters. The writing is commendable it's beautiful written. One of the key points was the easy visualisation the old as well as beginner readers can perceive. The Prologue was a little on the dramatic side but was good as per to attract the reader's attention. Understandable decisions were made by the characters . It's really recommendable books for not only the werewolf fans but to the fantasy readers who like diversity and freshness in books.

    07/17/2020 12:26

  • Sonia Lucidi

    I was advised on wattpad to read this book I read other books on this type of genre, I liked the story and I am very excited to start it

    07/17/2020 10:26

  • Claire BLUE

    thank you to the editor for showing me this story and thank you to the author who created!!! I love the story plot and the characters!!!

    07/17/2020 09:58

  • Kailen Simpson

    I’ve read a few chapters and I’ve got to say this book is really good. I would love to read the whole thing it’s just that I don’t understand how the app works.

    07/17/2020 08:35

  • Royal cake

    I found this book when the writer sent me a few chapters in Wattpad. And I'm soo glad I came here to read it because this story is sooo Good. I promise you won't regret it !!!

    07/17/2020 07:59

  • Afifah Ula

    I know this story from dm on wp. I'm in love with the prologue and can't wait to read the chapters. its written well and its make me curious n excited at the same time. interesting 👍

    07/17/2020 06:31

  • Andrella Padilla

    i love this stories ❤❤❤

    07/17/2020 06:17

  • Minie-dinny

    it was funny the moment he glamoured into Kane, she screamed😂😂😂

    07/17/2020 06:12

  • GoitseModimo Montoedi

    The prologue is interesting and I was especially captivated by the diversity. It's the first wherewolve book I have come across with an interracial couple and I enjoyed this aspect. The plot is good and I enjoy the pace. I like how not everything is obvious and i can use my imagination to make my own little conclusions. ~~~

    07/17/2020 05:48

  • Infinityspace207

    This is such a good book .I am glad that I was recommended this book .A real winner for me

    07/17/2020 04:48

  • Esther Oyoo

    I love how it kind of has the whole supernatural world in it

    07/17/2020 04:43

  • Snehal Patil

    Its a great plot with dominant male character.. It hooks u up till end.Loved the plot.. Thank u writer..Ots an amazing story.

    07/17/2020 04:40

  • Esther Oyoo

    Personally I stopped reading wolf stories coz there was a phase where all fantasy was the classic wolf and vampire but this is awesome ...good job I really like it

    07/17/2020 04:39

  • Nanditha B

    the book is really interesting except for some mistakes in sentences i read till chapter 7 n really enjoyed

    07/17/2020 04:26

  • roseliee

    i like this 😳😳😳😳😳

    07/17/2020 04:19

  • Scarlett_Atalina_25

    I found out about this book through wattpad and I’m so glad the author recommended it. I only read the first chapter and I’m already in love with this story.

    07/17/2020 04:16

  • Shaidy Baadjies

    this book is good it's well written and I fine it interesting

    07/17/2020 04:16

  • Shaidy Baadjies

    this book is good it's not like most books where after a couple of pages you bored out of your mind ita well written

    07/17/2020 04:14

  • Ionna Wilson

    I am so glad the author recommended this for me the story is really good I wish everybody would read it it's a very lovely story and I hope the authors the best I think the plot is the best part about this and how it starts

    07/17/2020 04:02

  • Joyce Ilunga

    So Im not a fan of werewolf stories but this one had me captivated from the beginning. The story is great and intriguing. Once you start reading you just want to know what happens next. Definitely one of my top 3 books.

    07/17/2020 03:48

  • priyanshib1304

    I'm so glad the writer recommend it to me I was trying to find a good omegaverse book but they helped me find this awesome books. yayyyyy!

    07/17/2020 03:47

  • Saumya Tripathi

    I found out about this book through wattpad. The plot is amazing and I am really enjoying the story.

    07/17/2020 03:46

  • K. K.

    I'm bamboozled, I'm hooked already! I'll conrinue reading 'til the end.

    07/17/2020 03:19

  • Eliza13499

    me too it was amazing

    07/17/2020 03:11

  • Eliza13499

    me too she introduced it to me from Wattpad she’s amazing 🤗🤗🤗

    07/17/2020 03:10

  • Ivy Mera Jaranilla

    a nerd at morning and a queen at night... this is what i l]ke for a heroine.. strong personality is what makes them beautiful.

    07/17/2020 02:54

  • Ivy Mera Jaranilla

    i got so hooked that i forgot to leave a comment...

    07/17/2020 02:41

  • Winter Keys

    I found out about this book on wattpad. I really do love this book if I new I had to pay for more chapters I wouldn't have spent all of my money. the story flows very well and I love the fact that Ember is handling her situation so maturely. it makes me want to actually know someone like her.

    07/17/2020 02:28

  • Kaylee Hong

    I found this book from wattpad when it was recommended to me and I really enjoyed it!! I got up to about chapter 12 and I was definitely sucked into this world that the author has built. Sadly I can’t afford anymore chapters, but super glad for the people who can cause it’s a great book with a great plot line! Wishing the author all the best :)

    07/17/2020 02:10

  • Kathy Nembhard

    loving this book already. definitely gonna add to my other werewolf collections

    07/17/2020 01:29

  • Maria Leone

    since ember and her mom are the only omegas and alphas love looking after anyone weaker, why doesn’t the alpha family make it their buisness? what is the relationship between the alphas of the pack and the omegas? you would think a responsible alpha would know the names of all the omegas out of habit because they obviously need to be checked in on.

    07/17/2020 01:26

  • Maria Leone

    I think the prologue and the first chapter should be switched. the fight is a great introduction to our main character and the thoughts that plagued in that chapter create a mystery to Kane. if it became a flashback at the end it would be even better. not all that much happened in the prologue- and there was no important aspect except “this is what Kane looks like and he’s an ass who called her omega.” then we can be shocked by the fact she’s an omega or we can be told before that.

    07/17/2020 01:11

  • Reader-165293

    you too nice sis

    07/17/2020 00:31

  • ShadowKnife

    This is a really good story, I wish to see more like it in the future :3

    07/16/2020 23:23

  • Estela Dela Torre

    so far one of my best reads it has a nice flow its not rushed at the beginning and you don get confused with the plot also u can actually imagine the scene and feel it i might not be a writer but i read alot and im enjoying this book thnks for sending me the link to this book to check it out👍👍👏👏📚📚📖📖

    07/16/2020 23:02

  • M.Lovely

    I was suggested to check this out through wattpad and although I could only read the first seven chapters I actually like the book. It’s intriguing and I couldn’t help but continue to scroll. I’ve had my fair shares of supernatural books and I have to say if your a fan I definitely recommend.

    07/16/2020 22:21

  • fera_somnia

    I am seriously loving the way certain things are explained in this book ❤️

    07/16/2020 22:05

  • Bridget Dargavage

    I haven’t finished reading this book but OH MY GOSH it is soooooooo good. I got recommended it from Wattpad and i am so happy to read this because of it. It is so eloquently written and i can not wait to continue reading it :)

    07/16/2020 22:02

  • Lilian Were

    spiffing

    07/16/2020 21:52

  • Dez Coleman

    The writer recommend it to me on Wattpad, and I'm so glad for it. They can create these images in my head, and hopefully everyone else, of the characters adventures. I have to say that this author did an amazing job with this book.

    07/16/2020 21:52

  • Sanjita Banerjee

    The plot is good, there are many werewolf mate rejected stories, but in this story the plot and characters are portrayed in a really good way, that just makes you love the story

    07/16/2020 21:24

  • Sanjita Banerjee

    The story is very entertaining and I'm glad the writer recommend this book. if I can access more chapters with time, I'm sure I'll be in love with it

    07/16/2020 21:21

  • Walaa Hussein

    very good story 👍

    07/16/2020 21:00

  • XxgrayxX05

    The author sent me a bit of the story on wattpad and honestly, one the best, if not the best, i’ve read! i read a lot of supernatural books and have even written a few, but this book is going the exact way i want it to! i’m excited to continue reading!

    07/16/2020 19:31

  • Nestelaine Sanchez

    This book was recommended to me by the editor. I really love this book so far. It's got me hooked, I really need to get me some coins to keep on reading!! It has a little bit of everything( from suspense, action, drama hopefully romance I didn't get that far yet), definitely good concept. Overall great book.Soo glad for the recommendation. Kudos to the author keep up the good work!!

    07/16/2020 19:31

  • MeMe P.

    I loved the plot and the words used within this story to describe how she felt it honestly felt like a book I could get on paperback and completely read I only got to chapter 10 and I know that I want to keep reading to see how it'll end

    07/16/2020 19:23

  • Svannah Miller

    I'm on Chapter 11. So far, this story is enjoyable; however, the flashbacks aren't lead into very well. The transition is too abrupt, and can be really confusing.

    07/16/2020 19:10

  • Shannia Serrano

    I love thisss ❤️❤️❤️

    07/16/2020 18:14

  • Amelia Bratchley

    Absolutely loved the book. Amazing plot and had me on the edge of my seat a lot😊

    07/16/2020 17:48

  • Catcatcatcatcatcatme

    ok it's official this book need to be on the new York times dude this is fucking amazing

    07/16/2020 17:37

  • Neha Gupta

    This story was recommended to me by 160_edith_coric and iam glad i did follow through because the story is really different and keeps you hooked .keep writing and loved the story so far.

    07/16/2020 17:29

  • Oizysss

    This book was recommended to me by the editor, and I’m so glad I said yes it reading it. Usually it takes a couple chapters for me to get hooked but after reading the first one, I’m not gonna lie, I was really excited. I’ve only read up til chapter 6 and I really enjoy it so far. To be honest though, I don’t really read much on here and I was quite disappointed when I found out you had to pay for the rest of the chapters. Besides the paying part I’d definitely recommend this book to read, especially if you like werewolf stories. When I’m not broke I’ll definitely comeback and finish it!

    07/16/2020 17:05

  • Hassatou Diallo

    Thank you author for recommending this book it's so good? even I only read a few chapters I know it's going to turn out great!

    07/16/2020 16:46

  • Tyler_Sayanne

    omg! I was recommended this story, and let me just say, before I went on to reading the recommendation, I was already interested. And I love me some fantasy werewolf/alpha books. I can already tell this is going to be good. I can’t wait to continue reading!💟

    07/16/2020 16:11

  • Catcatcatcatcatcatme

    This book is so good

    07/16/2020 16:05

  • Monica Famuagun

    so far, I'm enjoying this book kudoz to the author

    07/16/2020 16:01

  • Lily Johnson

    This story might be my new favorite one

    07/16/2020 14:44

  • fera_somnia

    The rejection is not something that you can see coming, which is much more refreshing than an obvious one, and adds to the drama of the story.

    07/16/2020 12:42

  • Nika Thara

    thanks to the author that he suggested the book to me ... I already love it🥰

    07/16/2020 12:35

  • carla Dela Cruz

    I really like this story so far! Thank you for recommending this to me but I'm so broke huhu I guess I'll try to invite others so that I could gather some coins tho 😂

    07/16/2020 12:15

  • nourkhaled632

    i really like it thank you

    07/16/2020 12:10

  • Anjolaoluwa Sobogun

    I love the story line, the plot, everything about it. I'm very happy the writer sent me a few bits of the story on wattpad.looking forward to more books from you.

    07/16/2020 11:58

  • Owethu

    I like the story, it's well written and the story flows well. So far there aren't any plot holes and confusion twists. In simple words this story is juicy!!

    07/16/2020 10:25

  • Ilikehorsesandcake

    Well, this is diffeeent to the typical werewolf story, I must say. I was recommended by the editor, through Wattpad. Interesting plot, good characters, and it flows really well! If it weren’t for the fact that I’m broke, then I’d be buying some coins without hesitation to see how it plays out! Keep up the good work, Author (and editor), and I hope those who are able—and willing—to pay, will give it a shot!

    07/16/2020 10:03

  • Karthika T

    This story is turning very interesting.

    07/16/2020 09:06

  • NotintheSameWay

    I'm just upset that I have to pay money to get coins to carry on😔 lovely story tho!

    07/16/2020 08:57

  • NotintheSameWay

    Really enjoying this story so far! It's really well written and I love the characters

    07/16/2020 08:57

  • Nntx

    I was asked if I could try out this book and give a review on it through a dm on wattpad and I have got to say that I was Glad to have been recommended this book. I found the book was really intriguing and entertaining despite only being able to read the first few chapters as the rest needed to pay. Every chapter was well written with the expection a few minor mistakes but overall, it was great!

    07/16/2020 08:44

  • Caz Gartner

    loving this book. Very well written, can't stop reading.

    07/16/2020 08:23

  • Tamaira Panton

    found out about this from a message on Wattpad

    07/16/2020 08:16

  • Fiza Amir

    Ooohhhhhh fiery... I like the sound of it

    07/16/2020 08:14

  • Lazer 360

    i found out about this recently and it seems very interesting. i enjoy the vivid picture that the author paints while writeing.Also the way they describe the characters is a nice way to invision what they would look like in real life. and it seems like the story has a nice flow to it.

    07/16/2020 08:08

  • Reader-042335

    thé boooks is just wow I have no words to describe how amazing it is

    07/16/2020 07:24

  • Reader-042335

    amazing book good going just loving it

    07/16/2020 06:46

  • Reader-042335

    the story is amazing and the start is very good and juste exited toh know what it is next hope to have lot of fun while reading the story is amazing

    07/16/2020 06:44

  • Sierra Cantrell

    I don't like how she is questioning her worth because a stupid boy but overall tge book is good. I'm only on chapter 4

    07/16/2020 05:40

  • hualian_hoe

    Well, I'm also here from Wattpad and this seems like such an interesting story, I really like it

    07/16/2020 05:31

  • Julianne Bustamante

    I actually found out about this book through wattpad and I'm so glad that the writerwriter recommended it because it is really enjoyable and super entertaining.. I really loved how the whole story just flows! The sad thing is some of them are lock :(

    07/16/2020 05:08

  • Shl Villamor

    I discovered this story through wattpad as well and I really love it, it was recommended to me by the writer. It's a really good book and very well written as well, congrats to the writer/s of this story and thank you for making this wonderful work of art <3

    07/16/2020 04:47

  • Denise Wiggs

    I like it! it’s light hearted yet it leaves you feeling something big is on the horizon.

    07/16/2020 04:32

  • chanmi novenya

    This book is really good. I was surprised because no one never ask me to read their work and give a review, but I am glad they ask me because this really catch my attention. I already read a lot of werewolf book and let me say this book best.💟💟 PS- sorry for my grammar😖😖

    07/16/2020 04:06

  • Lynn Baggott

    I am feeling it.

    07/16/2020 03:51

  • Somi Jha

    The introduction got me hooked I don't read much werewolf stories but I would love to read it

    07/16/2020 03:11

  • Reader-934267

    love this book!!! i hope there’s more in the future!!

    07/16/2020 03:04

  • Harriet Mumbi

    I really loved this book

    07/16/2020 02:53

  • LilyBlackPotter

    love your story and would have loved to continue it but can’t afford it and highly doubt I will be able to afford it because of bills and everything but great story and good luck to you on this app I love how the reading is on it instead of Wattpad but it costs to much!!

    07/16/2020 02:40

  • Jessica Boryszewski

    from what I have read this book is really good

    07/16/2020 02:23

  • almond milk :)

    girl you are worthy!! kane is just being a dick

    07/16/2020 02:22

  • Jess

    ok this is frustrating now. If a motherfckr talked to me like that, I’d be like “bitch who the fck do you think you are, I can fckn talk to whoever I wanna fckn talk to. You ain’t the boss of me so shut the fck up and sit the fck down bitch” lmao sorry got a bit carried away 😂 a little emotionally invested here

    07/16/2020 02:18

  • witch1432

    yo! it's me witch1432❤️ thank you for recommending this to me it's a very interesting story I love it. I'm sad because I have to pay to read the whole story😔.

    07/16/2020 01:49

  • Maranda Lyn Hickman

    totally was enjoying this untill it starts asking for me to pay.. sadly i cant continue the story now.

    07/16/2020 01:15

  • Ariah Brooks

    this book is amazing but i need to finish it i dont knw how to get coins

    07/16/2020 01:12

  • b3cca_mari58

    I’m glad you reached out to me on Wattpad I’m about to get started on this

    07/16/2020 00:55

  • Sanaya Kapoor

    I came across this book because of wattpad. I would just like to say that this is a very good book which is written in a neat manner. Since, I can't go beyond the free chapters, I would just say that the story is quite fascinating and enjoyable!

    07/16/2020 00:22

  • Tony Ciroc

    Like most of the readers heard it from wattpad but yeah it's a pretty sensation

    07/15/2020 23:49

  • Rae'ven Barker

    I was asked to do a review and the first chapter had me hooked i didn't know this was a app where you had to purchase the coins straight out so unfortunately I won't be able to buy the coins for this book wish I had the money for that but it was such a great book, super interesting i love mythical books and this was right up my alley i wish I could read the rest you guys are doing an amazing job 10/10

    07/15/2020 23:47

  • Peyton Gentry

    I'm here from wattpadd and it's great so far.

    07/15/2020 23:09

  • summer

    man I’m glad I answered that DM on wattpad

    07/15/2020 22:31
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