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  • LunaTic

    holy crap!!! Always knew Jisel was a sneaky traitor!

    08/05/2021 23:42
  • Jael Brown

    Jisel that traitorous bitch, I knew she couldn't be trusted. She was probably planning this from the beginning sleeping with Ashen was to learn of his weaknesses and how better to take him down. He had no weaknesses until Cessi

    08/05/2021 23:35
  • Ahlie

    oh my... ashen!

    08/05/2021 23:31
  • Christina Kay Maynard

    Oh no

    08/05/2021 23:17
  • Donna Grogan

    I think she is going to pick up a sword and fight.

    08/05/2021 23:01
  • SvS 🐝

    noooo! I actually hoped that Jisel would be one of the good guys

    08/05/2021 23:00
  • Latiffa K

    omg!! not Ashen🥺

    08/05/2021 22:41
  • Amber Cherry

    I knew Cessi should've killed that bitch ages ago!!

    08/05/2021 22:31
  • Stephanie Woerner Cooper

    Jisel's dad is from the Rain Tribe so it has to be her mom with the dragon blood....

    08/05/2021 22:22
  • PoisonedPix

    grrrrrrr! 😤😤

    08/05/2021 22:16
  • Danielle Salazar

    jisel should die! 😩

    08/05/2021 22:05
  • Lally Devon

    omg 😱 that wretched woman Jisel a traitor poor Yassim 🥲

    08/05/2021 21:59
  • Jasmin Prunkl

    Ohhhh nooooo...!!! FFS!!! You can't do this... 😱😱😱 Ashen noooooo!!! You can't let him die!!! I hope Cessi is going to fight no... she shouldn't hold back here and kill all the enemies...!!! She could easily do this. She could even erase that damn Yekara Clan, no one would miss them anyway, and Jisel has dragonblood too?! Must be of some of her dead uncles blood though... maybe daughter of one of all those mistresses?? She needs to die as well as Rohin does and she will take revenge for what they did to Ashen, I really hope!!! Great chapter and amazing story!!! 😍❤️😍❤️😍

    08/05/2021 21:53
  • Kim Nedelco

    omg a chapter every other day, I would like to read a book not a short story.

    08/05/2021 21:53
  • Mawusi Ford

    wow just wow they just woke up the dragon in Cessi for sure. I’m so glad she is a healer as well. Ashen will be fine. Hoping that we see her brothers soon

    08/05/2021 21:50
  • Reader-397104

    Ok Cessi need to kill Jisel or have her get eaten by the dragon. Great chapter!

    08/05/2021 21:29
  • Dahlia Mynd

    OMGGGG NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

    08/05/2021 21:29
  • Jessica Boyd

    fantastic chapter

    08/05/2021 21:16
  • Jessica Boyd

    I hope cessi fights and kicks some ass

    08/05/2021 21:15
  • Jacqueline Doss-Cola

    That Bitch Jisel! Cessi will skin her alive!

    08/05/2021 21:10
  • Jonelle Henrickson

    Aaaaasssshhhheeeennnnn!!!!!

    08/05/2021 21:05
  • Julia Lehmann

    You're killing us with this cliffhangers 🙊

    08/05/2021 21:03
  • Maria Patricia

    love 💕💕💕🥰😍

    08/05/2021 21:01
  • Josie McAllister

    as much as I love the updates it is taking way to long and just 1 chapter every update hmph!!

    08/05/2021 20:52
  • Kathy Apodaca

    OMG!!!!! I feel like Cessi needs to fight Rohin off before he kills Ashen. I hope her dragon comes to her rescue and swims through the cave and kills Jisel, but that would be too easy of a death. 😱

    08/05/2021 20:48
  • Ludmila Bacova

    what just happened?!?!?!

    08/05/2021 20:44
  • Victory Aires

    this is a cruel cliff hanger.. have some pity on us adicts!!! how am o supposed to sleep now?? I’ll be wondering about what happens all night!!

    08/05/2021 20:43
  • Cindy A

    omg how can she have dragon blood when her mom was the one from the dragon empire maybe her mom was one of the sisters the former king had.. wow so many traitors I guess Cessi is gonna have to fight after all. Can't wait for what comes next ty Jenny amazing chapter like always 🤍🤍🐉🐉🤍🤍

    08/05/2021 20:40
  • over it

    smh.. .I actually can't even

    08/05/2021 20:40
  • Bonib2

    I think Jesil might be one of Vrehan's bastards. 🤬🤬🤬

    08/05/2021 20:31
  • Bonib2

    Freaking Jisel🤬🤬🤬

    08/05/2021 20:28
  • Conni

    should maybe someone let Yebekh that Krai has a tendency to munch on anyone who threatens him or his humans? Krai hasn't has a snack in a while....🐉🐲😜

    08/05/2021 20:23
  • KitKat

    THIS IS WHY I NEVER TRUSTED JISEL!!!!!!! Her personality screams out Vrehan!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I swear, if she is one of Vrehan’s bastard children during his time in the Easyern kingdom, I’m gonna scream

    08/05/2021 20:14
  • Edie Gyorki

    seriously! you're ending the chapter like that? yikes.

    08/05/2021 20:10
  • Raluca Iolanda Dragoi

    OMG THIS WAS ....WHAT? ...I'M WITHOUT WORDS!!!

    08/05/2021 20:07
  • Kenniesha Lovelace

    I wish all the book was released at once

    08/05/2021 20:05
  • YA 😍

    smh .. this cliffhanger is something I must say.

    08/05/2021 19:59
  • Stephanie Woerner Cooper

    Hate Jisel!

    08/05/2021 19:44
  • MReinanda

    Bloody hell

    08/05/2021 19:43
  • Alicia Flores

    I knew that b***h Jisel was trouble and I had a feeling she was a d****n too 😡😡😡 I really do hate her

    08/05/2021 19:37
  • Marija Marković

    vrehan had a red dragon

    08/05/2021 19:28
  • Glenda Boone

    waiting for next chapters love the book

    08/05/2021 15:26
  • SuperWhoFly

    Plot twist! 💜

    08/05/2021 11:24
  • Trisha1

    Cessi is a very intriguing character...i wonder why she broke her parents' trust in the past???

    08/05/2021 09:46
  • nfau4714

    Love that the chapyer was titled "War Goddess" because hell yeah girl! A beautiful nod to the 1st book as well as a testament to Cessi👏🏽👏🏽❤⚔💁🏽‍♀️

    08/05/2021 09:23
  • CK Babies

    ohhhh so Cessilia and Ashen have history???? I'm sooo eager to know!!!

    08/05/2021 07:16
  • CK Babies

    I'm a bit pissed with Yassim...he shouldn't be Yassim the Wise, but Yassim the Trickster...tsk tsk

    08/05/2021 07:11
  • CK Babies

    errr it's an insult for Cessilia to join that competition...with a meager prize, a poor kingdom, and a cold king???

    08/05/2021 07:11
  • Wendy Virginia

    still floating on cloud 9 from your stories! thank you so much!

    08/05/2021 06:10
  • CK Babies

    how poor is the Eastern Republic??? it's sad especially compared to the Dragon Empire....

    08/05/2021 05:22
  • Shedrika Frinks

    I really love this chapter can't wait to see what happened next

    08/04/2021 23:42
  • Bonib2

    Jenny I noticed this chapter is supposed ro be 59 but you went back 10 chapters down and wrote #49 😊

    08/04/2021 21:11
  • Victoria Murray

    Has anyone else wondered if Jisel has a dragon?

    08/04/2021 15:54
  • Ms Honey South

    Oh the suspense!!! 😒

    08/04/2021 15:52
  • oh no.

    Kiera has a dragon, but how come Cessi doesn't have one??? i mean, in book 1, only males are supposed to have dragons, but here, even females have dragons???

    08/04/2021 14:39
  • TrishaReads

    ohhh so Anour and Missandra did end up together...how wonderful!

    08/04/2021 07:41
  • Trisha1

    it's good to know Glahad is well and very much alive..guarding Shareen this time...

    08/04/2021 06:34
  • Trisha1

    wooow...so Cassie is a Water Goddess now?😍

    08/04/2021 06:33
  • Nicole Fisher

    Why do these lovely novels take me to other worlds?! I'm really enjoying your book.

    08/04/2021 04:11
  • Selene Murf

    Yes Jenny!! Keep it coming! ❤️ 🤠 ❤️ Vacation is doing wonders

    08/04/2021 02:51
  • Jonnie Hisel

    It sounds very intriguing.

    08/04/2021 00:10
  • Reader-073830

    loving the story. but jisel, what’s her agenda? caught believe I’m all caught up in LD and TWKF. now I have to wait patiently. love your writing xx

    08/03/2021 16:53
  • Mina

    Oooh what a great chapter! 🤩Thank you, Jenny! I appreciate you still updating while you are on vacation! ❤️🙏🏻😁

    08/03/2021 13:46
  • Lola A. Bynum

    rating dropped because chapters are coming to slow 🐌

    08/03/2021 09:18
  • BluezCluez

    plot twist!

    08/03/2021 03:30
  • Hollstar

    ooooh wow! that’s a nice twist! 🤠

    08/03/2021 03:03
  • jortiz64

    I like be it!!! what a surprise and it’s kind of strange Jisel is back?! where has she been?

    08/03/2021 01:05
  • dianisz

    I was not expecting that!

    08/03/2021 00:53
  • Ree Noomaara

    Love this story... 😀❤

    08/02/2021 23:54
  • Katylynn Prack

    damn it jenny. with the cliffhangers I don't think my heart can handle the suspense

    08/02/2021 23:14
  • Latiffa K

    What a twist in the story! Awesome!❤ love it

    08/02/2021 23:13
  • LJ Lim

    Majes me wait for more chapter. Love it Jenny

    08/02/2021 23:04
  • Elise Bailey

    Omg! the brother is alive. What a twist. I can't wait for the next chapter.

    08/02/2021 22:22
  • abobda’sgirl

    damn

    08/02/2021 20:04
  • Nicolette

    every time there's an update I'm at the edge of my seat.. I love this author!!! her first book was amazing and this is turning out to be spectacular as well. not only is her writing amazing but what I love about it is how unconventional it is. when reading alot of other books it gets tiring having the same stories told over and over. This is completely original!! cannot wait for the next chapter... PS.. Jisel "hell hath no fury like a woman's scorn" she is definitely the instigator here.. and PLEASE let those tingly sensations in Cessi's hands mean her Dragon has started to awaken from being suspended in time for healing like with what happened to her mother.

    08/02/2021 19:31
  • Anita Mara

    i know Jisel is involved. I’m sure she is the one that send the dart that injured Cessi and killed

    08/02/2021 19:01
  • nv4

    They just walked right into a trap. Poor Cessi is trying her hardest to be accepted by these people and fighting her trauma that she walked straight into it. Can't wait for more.

    08/02/2021 16:55
  • Wcha

    geez lord yebekh is annoying they need to get rid of him and I wonder which brother that is

    08/02/2021 16:43
  • Ludmila Bacova

    what just happened?!?!?!

    08/02/2021 14:46
  • Jael Brown

    Oh wow, talking about dropping the mic and crap getting real!!! Damn Jenny this is so good

    08/02/2021 14:34
  • Kayee Tee

    don’t want to fight???? giiiiiiiiiirlllllllllll if you don’t pick that blade up and get ready to collect them heads on your way out cessi you better 🙄🙄🙄

    08/02/2021 14:33
  • PoisonedPix

    no way!

    08/02/2021 13:47
  • Roseam

    Every chapter is intense and riveting.

    08/02/2021 13:40
  • Reader-671139

    Is it possible that the prick that Cessila felt and what probably killed Istsis (sp) was shot from Jisel?? We know Jisel knows about poisons, right?

    08/02/2021 13:27
  • Justine Hedman

    Love the story. can't wait to see what happens with the half brother coming in to play!

    08/02/2021 11:43
  • Abackpack 01

    So? What if he is the half brother? Ashen got the throne coz he earned it and not because he is the son of the previous King. Might as well that ugly brother fight him. We will see.

    08/02/2021 10:10
  • Penny A Foxie

    59. Holy cow. Well isn’t this about to get interesting. Jenny you always have the best twists!!! 😯

    08/02/2021 07:45
  • Nymeria Evo

    FYI this chapter says 49 but it's 59.

    08/02/2021 07:02
  • Nymeria Evo

    oh just kill the Yebekh leader already, no body will be upset.

    08/02/2021 07:00
  • Fatema Bhattacharya

    Looks like Jisel injected Cessi with something which distracted her and the Yekara candidate took advantage to injure her throat. Plus now a civil war may start again with a new claim to the throne. Interesting indeed.

    08/02/2021 06:49
  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    I’m so intrigued!!! 😱😱😱 Oh! please, dear Jenny, it’s killing me not to read more and more! 😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏 As always, WONDERFUL CHAPTER! 👌👍☺️

    08/02/2021 06:36
  • Carmen Reif

    damn. That tribe is nasty!! I can't believe this is where we gave to wait. I'm on the edge of my seat here, Jenny!!! it's so damn good!!! bravooooooo I need more!! ❤❤❤❤

    08/02/2021 04:51
  • becca favela

    woooooow!!! ever chapter tops the last cliff hangers at its finest

    08/02/2021 04:06
  • nfau4714

    Cessi!!!😢😢😢 I knew she would wreck Istis but I never thought about all the horrible feelings it would bring up for her! Even more of an explanantion why Tessa is so protective of her❤❤ love that Dragon Family bond.

    08/02/2021 04:04
  • BookDragon

    WOW Jenni!! You sure know how to write a cliffhanger 😳!!! Like one reader commented “I was NOT expecting that”!!! Ashen’s half-brother is alive? I have to read back and refresh my memory if this guy is a full or half brother! But pretty sure he is a half brother, because he sounded like he wasn’t there for a “happy” family reunion!! I think as well that what killed Istis and also caused that red mark on Cessilia’s back was a poisonous dart or something that someone shot them with & Istis died from that. It didn’t affect Cessilia much at all because of her Dragon skin! I can’t wait to read the next update to find out what happened to Istis and see why all of a sudden long lost brother showed up??

    08/02/2021 03:44
  • Julia Lehmann

    okay...? wait... what?

    08/02/2021 03:42
  • Sniderin

    I have a sneaking suspicion that Jisel may not be the bad guy everyone is believing her to be. She may be involved with the badies to some degree, but I speculate she will redeem herself down the road.

    08/02/2021 02:52
  • Linds Allana

    was NOT expecting that!!!!

    08/02/2021 02:32
  • miasiacheyenne

    I don’t know if cuz updates are so long in between or what but this is starting to feel dragged out

    08/02/2021 02:18
  • Kathryn Ngatuakana

    oh cause jisel is part of this stupid return of a brother.. all of a sudden she shows face when its convenient too her.. I hope ashen and cessi thrash both these noble d**ks.. Together both ashen and cessi got this, she may just have to pick that sword up and stand strong by her man.. Team work guys, team work..

    08/02/2021 02:00