The Songbird's Love Comments

mona

Great work as always. Thanks Jenny. 💞

Reader-397104

Damn Dante dropped a bomb on Eden. I hope she eventually says yes!

love this story! completely different from her other stories. good work Jenny.

SuperWhoFly

Love the way this is unfolding.

fck.... i really can't move on from loir 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Can’t wait for Eden to get back to Dante’s place 🤪🤪🤪

I am not sure she should go alone...

Beatriz Astorga Morales

I’m so worried about Eden’s legs, she’s so vulnerable without her SIN on… 🙏🙏🙏

Jenny.... I'm screaming here. How? I can't wait for the next episode.

Anita Mara

love where the story is going!

Ieva Igaune

Dante 🤣 possessive but we love him

Ludmila Bacova

a perfect moment ❤

Andreea Melinda Mirza

Well done Jenny, another great story!

Auras Laura

we find out new things with every update👏👏

😢😢😢

Auras Laura

i suspect if something happens to her...hell will come over 😁😈

Penny A Foxie

I hope she’ll be ok over there! I worry about her legs not working when they’re close to war. I want her to get back to Dante ASAP! 😂

Ahlie

love this!

Nikki

Oh. My. God. 😳

so can we have another TWKF then lol

Beatriz Astorga Morales

My heart is in pain… but I want to think Loir is alive! He’s just distracting the Core for Eden, Dante and Circé going up… Please… 🥺🥺🥺🙏🙏🙏

Wcha

love loir

Elizabeth Smart

so the Gorilla became the Zebra, but he’s still a “bad monkey boy” 🙄

Jessica

honestly when I read the chapter I did think it was problematic to associate the black community with the gorilla because historically it was a way to degrade African Americans. I think it’s important to understand the feelings of others so although I’ll miss the story I think it’s for the best to reevaluate this decision.

Erin Ghio

omg what a twist.

Katie Factor

I love how sweet and soft Dante is with Eden, not just the hard Zodiac. #iwantadanteofmyown

no!!! I didn’t get to finish the last chapter!!!

PramG

OMG! Didn’t see that coming!!! what a twist. I hope Dante doesn’t know about it.

Karine Provencher

poor eden... 10 years for nothing!!! so sad 😞

We need Lori's humor!

Jessica

Dante loves her for sure

Lillianne Huntley

loir 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Alicia Flores

Loir you just crack me up hahaha Dante and Eden so in Love 😍😍😍💖💖💖

So happy to be back and my heart! That was such a sweet moment at the end 💜

Anita Mara

♥️♥️♥️

Maria Patricia

i just loved it 🥰

Reader-555364

Love Loir!!! 😂

miss them.

Mina

Ohh Eden 😢😭💔

Anita Mara

😱😱😱

nemone van Der bliake

Adam is Dante? I didn't expect that

Hilary

Wow... that’s an interesting twist

Reader-555364

very nice........ 😉

Lally Devon

So Adam was made into Dante wow 😯 was not expecting that 🤔

I’m sorry to hear that other readers are not liking this story. I’m enjoying it greatly.

Nancy

86.. oh Loir.. giving to Core the middle finger again 😄

SUSAN MORRIS

I love how this story is going. I wish I could read the whole book right now.

Christina Kay Maynard

Eden just can't catch a break....but at least she knows the truth now

Hollstar

oh poor Eden... 💔💔💔 how horrible!!!

This was so heartbreaking. Poor Eden, everything she sacrificed and all for nothing. Shes suffered so much. Really really hope Dante doesn't do anything to hurt her. So far he's been perfect expect for killing Rose.

Gabzzz Rodzzz

Dante has no memories before the shot. so what they told him about his past could be true

Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

So far so good! Great work Jenny....Let the action begin...Big babe Eden. Pan is definitely her Dad. He has been this close guarding her. It's a pity what they had to go through. Great imagination Jenny... hope you are enjoying Mamafox cooking...but don't gain extra pounds, it could be hard to lose.

rosie

❤️

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Oh, DEAR JENNY!!! Dante is melting my heart!!! 🥰🥰🥰

Reader-397104

great update ! I believe “they” are not dead, Loir last crazy idea the best!

Hannah P

owner of the edge? can't wait for the next chapter to know more. excited to finally get to hear from pan as well

Satrupa Mohapatra

adorable chapter ❤️❤️

SvS 🐝

hahahhahaha he must be like “if you must use rogue, please say rogue married pair” 😏

Beatriz Astorga Morales

I’m so excited to discover more about Pan, Adam and Eden’s father... 😱🤔🙃

Lally Devon

Just finish reading the last update Omg 😳 now I’m freaking wow was not expecting that at all can’t wait for the next update 🙏😘❤️❤️❤️

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Love Dante!

Elisa Scalabrini

O M G

Sandra HO

I still feel this story isn't popular enough. this is SO GOOD !

Ahlie

goodness! PAN is there and Ghost is already compromised. Could A. be the Architect!

Anne Embery

such imagination, it's an awesome read

SvS 🐝

Love how Eden describes one of the most memorable moments of life as “the thing”

Wow did not see that coming. We're going to miss you crazy thing.

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Love Dante! 🥰🥰🥰 Love Eden and Dante to be so close! 🤗🙃☺️👍

Robin

I knew it. totally saw that coming. glad it’s been confirmed

Drawkser

omg I’m dead. You always do this !!! 😩😩 you left our sanity hanging by a thread. I want more !!! I’m loving this cliffhanger and at the same time I’m hating not knowing what is happening. 😭😭😭😭😭

Bella Jersey 2

oh interesting terms

Drawkser

I want so much more !!!

Alicia Flores

oooh Loir that crazy cat did it again 🙃 but I really hope he went to the basement or something with Jack and the pups to stay alive 🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞

Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

Teary! Jenny please bring them home safe

Jessica

I love this story!

Bella Jersey 2

this one dangerous world

Taina Iosefo

OMG OMG OMG ... He finally said those 3 words she’s been dreading to hear. I hope she’s okay and doesn’t ruin it. This is so exciting though... Jenny you’re the BEST!! 🥰❤️❤️❤️❤️

Alicia Flores

not only Loir but Jacky and the pups were there too 😰

Katarina Pavlovic

What a plot twist, didn't see that coming

Inu Ookami

hmm it is me or the whole book is gone except for the intro?

Auras Laura

congratulations🥳🥰

Reader-397104

Yes! Now Eden drops the bomb on Dante lol

caitmjoycm

it’s getting so intense!!!

Reader-299919

😍😍😍

Lissa Rothgeb Loiselle

This is such a fun book! Thanks, Jenny!

Wendy Pisani Hertel

desperate for an update!

I’m sooooo happy to have this book back! I honestly don’t remember how the beginning goes 🤣 I still love it ❤️

nfau4714

This is just getting so interesting!!!

Satrupa Mohapatra

I am being more curious to know more about her father

Satrupa Mohapatra

nooooo....... 😭😭😭😭😭😭 not Loir please spare my heart from all these deaths in LD u r killing the characters one by one and in this too ... Please Jenny grant mercy and let some of the crazy character live I really loved Loir's antiques

LMvdB

ohh no what happend 😱 love this story so much. hope the issue is solved soon! Succes Jenny, you are a awesome writer and I really love all your stories

monteange

is Pan an AI of the core itself? I have a feeling Pan is the Core and that's why he is stuck in it.

Mina

The Tiger is just a big Kitty indeed 🥰💕💕💕 love how he’s so protective of Eden ❤️‍🔥

Beatriz Astorga Morales

So exciting!!! 🥰🥰🥰 Love Dante and Eden together! Loir can make my day with all that stuff he says!!! 😂😂😂😅😅😅😅

Winter Rose Grablin

Oh that's so sad, I wasn't expecting a bomb like that

PramG

Love Dante and Eden… a prefect couple! Can’t wait for the next update!!!😍

Ratany Sieng

I tried to wait so I can read them all at once but I couldn’t wait anymore and read all 17 chapters in one sitting. this story is sooooo good!!! thanks for consistently giving us great content (:

Soph Hugh

love this story

he just needed one hug, tho. like one I live you from someone… maybe he is related to her some how..

I had completely forgot I had a hunch about this. It seems like so long ago when I read those chapters. I need to go back and refresh my memory cause I'm a little confused now. lol