The Songbird's Love Comments

  • shanaaz shaz

    I vote her dad

    09/04/2023 08:25

  • shanaaz shaz

    💔💔💔💔💔💔💔

    09/04/2023 08:25

  • Anne Embery

    say WHHHAAAAATTTTTTT, Wow, that is .....just wow, can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!

    09/04/2023 08:25

  • What?....What?!?!?!

    09/04/2023 08:25

  • Drawkser

    wait what!? 😱😱

    09/04/2023 08:25

  • Bonib2

    I want me a Dante! Beautiful chapter Jenny❤❤❤

    09/04/2023 08:25

  • Finally reached the current chapter. And ngl, Loir is literally my spirit animal 😂🤣 I love his personality so much. As for everything else happening, all I can say is HOLY SH** can’t wait for the war of Peace vs Control

    09/04/2023 08:25

  • Andreea Melinda Mirza

    I knew we were going to see him again but I really wasn't expecting him to be the contact 🙂

    09/04/2023 08:25

  • Nina Khan

    I hope your is not really dead but it's just his trick

    09/04/2023 08:25

  • love this story! Jenny you are a truly amazing author !

    09/04/2023 08:25

  • Ieva Igaune

    We just love Loir 🤪

    09/04/2023 08:25

  • Wow, did not see this coming. Major plot twist. Did Dante know? Because I don't think Eden would handle that very well.

    09/04/2023 08:25

  • chapter 85 my heart is broken. this was seriously so unexpected. Loir …..

    09/04/2023 08:25

  • SuperWhoFly

    What an interesting story. Different from her other stories. I'm looking forward to reading more of this! 💜

    09/04/2023 08:25

  • Reader-555364

    aw……… that’s sad. maybe he makes it?……. I do like to be an optimist when I can…….. 💪

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Shrut Keerti

    why loir. m so sad 😞 😥 😢

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Psylocke

    I’m convinced Dante & Eden meeting is no accident either. He’s always wondered why his constant head pain is absent when he’s with her. Something to do with her SIM and his head “prewired” during the op maybe?

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • crazy genius!

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Reader-555364

    Aw……..

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Jessica

    I just love Dante!! I really was not expecting that at the end ❤️

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Christina Nevarez

    WTH!?!? what does he mean? what? I'm so confused, I really thought Dante was not him, but what the Dragon said... scary!

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Taina Iosefo

    Finally Eden knows more about her father, Pan and the Edge. I’m so loving this book more and more. Dante still worrying more about Eden than the Core. Love their little story together. 🥰

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • gemkeeper

    great, but there seems to be places where you say the Edge instead of the Core. very distracting...

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • I knew he wouldn't like her being out of contact lol but the story of the first generation edge is so sad. It's amazing that they were able to come back so strongly. I'm just scared what's going to happen when Eden finally gets into the core

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Lauren Fowler

    Loir really is always listening eh 😂😂

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • wonder if he is a relative

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Psylocke

    I loved this chapter... nerve racking yet with light hearted humour at the same time! Loir is hilarious

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • HeatherP312

    it’s getting so good and I love the kitty kouple

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

    Why am I not surprised . ..

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Julia Lehmann

    I love the conversation with Loir and Dante in the background 🥰

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Ahlie

    best wishes edwn and dante. keep safe❣

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • HeatherP312

    love the big kitty

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Auras Laura

    the war is at the core's door😁

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Gotta love Loir!

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Ludmila Bacova

    another mystery...

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Ahlie

    ❣❣❣

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Web Bookworm

    I think Pan might be an uncle or grandfather. someone who was close with her dad & has the same skills. I can’t figure out A though...is it Adam since he pretended to be dead and created a new identity to hide who he was?

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Auras Laura

    straight to the point😜 well done Dante

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Gee Higgins

    love love love it Jenny

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Ludmila Bacova

    oh oh...

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Mulenga Mwamba

    patiently waiting for an update

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Mia

    Loved the last chapter 🔥🔥❤️🔥🔥 Anyway Again Happy birthday to youuuuu!! 🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊 🤗🤗🤗😘😘🤗🤗🤗🌈🍾🎂

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Ieva Igaune

    They are perfect 💞

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • oof, the plot just turns even more!! but I’m not even the slightest mad if Dante is Adam or has parts of Adam. if anything I’m glad she still has Adam to this day... does that make sense?!

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Oh dayam. This is not what I expected. very good chapter!

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Alyssa Ling

    Changan- is not the name of the Chinese shirt. is cheong sum but only ladies will wear that.

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • So Pan just decided to show up? Excuse me sir! You owe Eden an apology, an explanation, another apology, and, and, and so much more! She's been through so much!

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

    just curious though, why was Loir's face not displayed when the edge was....? any link between Loir and PAN? and lastly I don't envy Eden, though choice to make

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • if only all people realized outbursts that sound like rejection by from the person across from them are really just the person being scared because they love them back! thanks for no dragging us into immature head games with them, makes me love this story even more!

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • SvS 🐝

    Run little kitty, Loir is watching from above

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • omg!!! but how come she is regarded as the owner of The Edge? because she is the Architect's Daughter??? i can't wait.....😭😭

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Happy Early Fourth everyone‼️🤍💙!!!

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Alicia Flores

    OMG 😱😱😱😱 how did the dragon knew she was gost? did Pan told him? how come she is the owner to the Edge? do they know she is the Architect daughter? how is Dante going to react? he is not going to like javing her in danger... but most important of all things... What is Loir going to say? 😂😂😂😂 so many questions I' going to die waiting for next update... Jeny you did it again you left us waiting for more... you never disappoint us 🤓🤓🤓🤓

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Roseam

    She actually said it! Like Dante I didn't think she would, at least not yet. Can't wait for the Zodiac's meeting.

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Christina Kay Maynard

    that was good

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • xian

    woahhhhh

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Shrut Keerti

    so awesome and sweet!!!

    09/04/2023 08:24

  • Reader-555364

    Loved it!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Anne Embery

    OMG so exciting, don't fall for their lies

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

    Honestly I don't know what to think again

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Bev Pearson

    OMG!! How did they know?? Ahhh can’t wait for the next update!!

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • nemone van Der bliake

    love loir❤

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Sheetu Zutshi Bhat

    can’t wait for more

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Sheetu Zutshi Bhat

    what..

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Reader-397104

    Great chapter! Some peace before the storm

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Reader-397104

    great update! is it really him? I wonder if Eden will find out more about her past/ father ?

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Anne Embery

    Nnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo he shouldn't have been killed. if he was, was he still doing stuff to help them. 🥺🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😪😪😪😪😪

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • If they destroy the core, they will destroy Pan.

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Tamia Starkey

    Major cliffhanger 😩

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    I have a question!!! 🙋🏻‍♀️🙋🏻‍♀️🙋🏻‍♀️ If Prometheus Angel Newman is Pan… And Eden is Eden Newman, is Pan Eden’s father???

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • loved it, dante is so cute

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • minime_29

    Oh I feel honored that Jenny used my name in one of her books. I love that Loir pick my name to name his new computer 😁

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Penny A Foxie

    77 Wall Loir!!! OMG I really hope his crazy genius doesn’t get them killed! 😂 Dante’s going to kill him later! 😂😂

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • My heart was pounding reading this but the side conversations are freaking hilarious 😂😂😂

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Lauren Rendero

    whatttttt

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Reader-555364

    Loved it!!

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • linda

    lord 🥵🔥🔥🔥

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • jenny, please, please, please, let nothing happen to their love story. I don't mind all the danger and stuff but let there be a HEA. I'm pleading so badly. This chapter brought me to tears.

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • conso Africa

    I just wanna know .... did Dante know this plan ? oh God !!!

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Nikki

    Omg... I don't know if I'm ready for this! 😱🙈 🤞

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Nancy

    chapter 92: just awesome! 👏👏👏

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Marija Marković

    I was thinking that Adam is her brother

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Mina

    oh gosh, how sad 🥺 I hope she doesn’t have to lose him too 😔

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Karine Provencher

    really love the story... different from others stories... its refreshing!!!

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • nemone van Der bliake

    love it❤❤❤❤

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Aqua the Unicorn

    thanks for reloading the story. Except now I’m a little confused with some of the names. I thought you changed the horse to the Hare, but in chapter 44, A is still referred as the horse 🤔. anyhow, I really enjoy re-reading the first part, can’t wait to catch up to where I originally was :)

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • 77. I think in some places it's supposed to be "Core" instead of "Edge" (ex "the Edge might not notice", "deactivate the Edge's control on SINs")

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • chapter 68: wow, what a surprising revelation! i love the story so much

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Another piece of the puzzle

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • omgomgomgggg

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Marija Marković

    amazing, can't wait for more :)

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • HeatherP312

    I did not see that coming!!! omg. hope she doesn’t push him away now. I love the big kitty

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I am not trusting Dante at all

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Kayla Elliott

    another perfect cliff hanger chapter!! I swear every single book of Jenny’s will always leave you wanting more! ❤️❤️

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Sky Queen

    I'm crying

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Nancy

    aww.. she said it too 🥰🥰🥰

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • AA12345

    Damn....Jenny u certainly know how to leave ur readers wanting more !

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Nancy

    Say yes Eden!!!

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Michelle Hill

    OMG the owner of Edge?? wouldn’t that be Loir? and Pan!!!!! how does A. know who it is!?

    09/04/2023 08:23

  • Ingrid Ncube

    the only way to destroy the core is to kill Pan. maybe that's why he led them there, since is also human he has feelings and is tired of being used. The hackers have uploaded all they needed to start over and they won't need Pan anymore. the poor guy is ready to die or maybe to just communicate with his sister through the new Sin.

    09/04/2023 08:22
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