The Songbird's Love Comments

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OK she referred to him as her brother metaphorically since he took care of her and taught her how to live in the suburbs. But she was born in the Core and he the suburbs & he is older so he can’t be her real brother. The Italians had the memory control tech so they used it to wipe out his previous memories to create the perfect heir. So he doesn’t remember her but his heart & body do. plus it’s probably why Eden’s body was doing the same thing & her heartbeat picked up every time he was around & her walls were brought down, she already trusted him. 💕 Amazing twist, Jenny! Childhood friends to lovers 😘 I hope Dante/Adam really didn’t know or Eden will never trust him again...

shanaaz shaz

I vote her dad

shanaaz shaz

💔💔💔💔💔💔💔

Anne Embery

say WHHHAAAAATTTTTTT, Wow, that is .....just wow, can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!

What?....What?!?!?!

Drawkser

wait what!? 😱😱

Bonib2

I want me a Dante! Beautiful chapter Jenny❤❤❤

Finally reached the current chapter. And ngl, Loir is literally my spirit animal 😂🤣 I love his personality so much. As for everything else happening, all I can say is HOLY SH** can’t wait for the war of Peace vs Control

Andreea Melinda Mirza

I knew we were going to see him again but I really wasn't expecting him to be the contact 🙂

Nina Khan

I hope your is not really dead but it's just his trick

love this story! Jenny you are a truly amazing author !

Ieva Igaune

We just love Loir 🤪

Wow, did not see this coming. Major plot twist. Did Dante know? Because I don't think Eden would handle that very well.

chapter 85 my heart is broken. this was seriously so unexpected. Loir …..

SuperWhoFly

What an interesting story. Different from her other stories. I'm looking forward to reading more of this! 💜

Reader-555364

aw……… that’s sad. maybe he makes it?……. I do like to be an optimist when I can…….. 💪

Shrut Keerti

why loir. m so sad 😞 😥 😢

Psylocke

I’m convinced Dante & Eden meeting is no accident either. He’s always wondered why his constant head pain is absent when he’s with her. Something to do with her SIM and his head “prewired” during the op maybe?

crazy genius!

Reader-555364

Aw……..

Jessica

I just love Dante!! I really was not expecting that at the end ❤️

Christina Nevarez

WTH!?!? what does he mean? what? I'm so confused, I really thought Dante was not him, but what the Dragon said... scary!

Taina Iosefo

Finally Eden knows more about her father, Pan and the Edge. I’m so loving this book more and more. Dante still worrying more about Eden than the Core. Love their little story together. 🥰

gemkeeper

great, but there seems to be places where you say the Edge instead of the Core. very distracting...

I knew he wouldn't like her being out of contact lol but the story of the first generation edge is so sad. It's amazing that they were able to come back so strongly. I'm just scared what's going to happen when Eden finally gets into the core

Lauren Fowler

Loir really is always listening eh 😂😂

wonder if he is a relative

Psylocke

I loved this chapter... nerve racking yet with light hearted humour at the same time! Loir is hilarious

HeatherP312

it’s getting so good and I love the kitty kouple

Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

Why am I not surprised . ..

Julia Lehmann

I love the conversation with Loir and Dante in the background 🥰

Ahlie

best wishes edwn and dante. keep safe❣

HeatherP312

love the big kitty

Auras Laura

the war is at the core's door😁

Gotta love Loir!

Ludmila Bacova

another mystery...

Ahlie

❣❣❣

Web Bookworm

I think Pan might be an uncle or grandfather. someone who was close with her dad & has the same skills. I can’t figure out A though...is it Adam since he pretended to be dead and created a new identity to hide who he was?

Auras Laura

straight to the point😜 well done Dante

Gee Higgins

love love love it Jenny

Ludmila Bacova

oh oh...

Mulenga Mwamba

patiently waiting for an update

Mia

Loved the last chapter 🔥🔥❤️🔥🔥 Anyway Again Happy birthday to youuuuu!! 🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊 🤗🤗🤗😘😘🤗🤗🤗🌈🍾🎂

Ieva Igaune

They are perfect 💞

oof, the plot just turns even more!! but I’m not even the slightest mad if Dante is Adam or has parts of Adam. if anything I’m glad she still has Adam to this day... does that make sense?!

Oh dayam. This is not what I expected. very good chapter!

Alyssa Ling

Changan- is not the name of the Chinese shirt. is cheong sum but only ladies will wear that.

So Pan just decided to show up? Excuse me sir! You owe Eden an apology, an explanation, another apology, and, and, and so much more! She's been through so much!

Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

just curious though, why was Loir's face not displayed when the edge was....? any link between Loir and PAN? and lastly I don't envy Eden, though choice to make

if only all people realized outbursts that sound like rejection by from the person across from them are really just the person being scared because they love them back! thanks for no dragging us into immature head games with them, makes me love this story even more!

SvS 🐝

Run little kitty, Loir is watching from above

omg!!! but how come she is regarded as the owner of The Edge? because she is the Architect's Daughter??? i can't wait.....😭😭

Happy Early Fourth everyone‼️🤍💙!!!

Alicia Flores

OMG 😱😱😱😱 how did the dragon knew she was gost? did Pan told him? how come she is the owner to the Edge? do they know she is the Architect daughter? how is Dante going to react? he is not going to like javing her in danger... but most important of all things... What is Loir going to say? 😂😂😂😂 so many questions I' going to die waiting for next update... Jeny you did it again you left us waiting for more... you never disappoint us 🤓🤓🤓🤓

Roseam

She actually said it! Like Dante I didn't think she would, at least not yet. Can't wait for the Zodiac's meeting.

Christina Kay Maynard

that was good

xian

woahhhhh

Shrut Keerti

so awesome and sweet!!!

Reader-555364

Loved it!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Anne Embery

OMG so exciting, don't fall for their lies

Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

Honestly I don't know what to think again

Bev Pearson

OMG!! How did they know?? Ahhh can’t wait for the next update!!

nemone van Der bliake

love loir❤

Sheetu Zutshi Bhat

can’t wait for more

Sheetu Zutshi Bhat

what..

Reader-397104

Great chapter! Some peace before the storm

Reader-397104

great update! is it really him? I wonder if Eden will find out more about her past/ father ?

Anne Embery

Nnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo he shouldn't have been killed. if he was, was he still doing stuff to help them. 🥺🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😪😪😪😪😪

If they destroy the core, they will destroy Pan.

Tamia Starkey

Major cliffhanger 😩

Beatriz Astorga Morales

I have a question!!! 🙋🏻‍♀️🙋🏻‍♀️🙋🏻‍♀️ If Prometheus Angel Newman is Pan… And Eden is Eden Newman, is Pan Eden’s father???

loved it, dante is so cute

minime_29

Oh I feel honored that Jenny used my name in one of her books. I love that Loir pick my name to name his new computer 😁

Penny A Foxie

77 Wall Loir!!! OMG I really hope his crazy genius doesn’t get them killed! 😂 Dante’s going to kill him later! 😂😂

My heart was pounding reading this but the side conversations are freaking hilarious 😂😂😂

Lauren Rendero

whatttttt

Reader-555364

Loved it!!

linda

lord 🥵🔥🔥🔥

jenny, please, please, please, let nothing happen to their love story. I don't mind all the danger and stuff but let there be a HEA. I'm pleading so badly. This chapter brought me to tears.

conso Africa

I just wanna know .... did Dante know this plan ? oh God !!!

Nikki

Omg... I don't know if I'm ready for this! 😱🙈 🤞

Nancy

chapter 92: just awesome! 👏👏👏

Marija Marković

I was thinking that Adam is her brother

Mina

oh gosh, how sad 🥺 I hope she doesn’t have to lose him too 😔

Karine Provencher

really love the story... different from others stories... its refreshing!!!

nemone van Der bliake

love it❤❤❤❤

Aqua the Unicorn

thanks for reloading the story. Except now I’m a little confused with some of the names. I thought you changed the horse to the Hare, but in chapter 44, A is still referred as the horse 🤔. anyhow, I really enjoy re-reading the first part, can’t wait to catch up to where I originally was :)

77. I think in some places it's supposed to be "Core" instead of "Edge" (ex "the Edge might not notice", "deactivate the Edge's control on SINs")

chapter 68: wow, what a surprising revelation! i love the story so much

Another piece of the puzzle

omgomgomgggg

Marija Marković

amazing, can't wait for more :)

HeatherP312

I did not see that coming!!! omg. hope she doesn’t push him away now. I love the big kitty

Bella Jersey 2

I am not trusting Dante at all

Kayla Elliott

another perfect cliff hanger chapter!! I swear every single book of Jenny’s will always leave you wanting more! ❤️❤️

Sky Queen

I'm crying

Nancy

aww.. she said it too 🥰🥰🥰

AA12345

Damn....Jenny u certainly know how to leave ur readers wanting more !

Nancy

Say yes Eden!!!

Michelle Hill

OMG the owner of Edge?? wouldn’t that be Loir? and Pan!!!!! how does A. know who it is!?