The Songbird's Love Comments

Patsy Leyva

wait wait wait. but I thought Adam was her brother?? isn't that incest?? or did she just call him her brother.

Katie Factor

Oh Loir, you crack me up! 😂 And I love Eden and Dante together 😍😍😍 They are so imperfectly perfect together!

And she is the owner of the Edge?

Miriam TG

I know the story is going through a kind of reboot, but I was loving it so much that I check daily to see if there is any update 😅, so I have read the intro like 7 times already! Can't wait to read again about Eden, Dante, Loir, and see the changes Jenny is working in.

Karine Provencher

😂 the way he kills Rose... shut up bang 😂

Psylocke

at first I thought no don’t tell him all your secrets, keep something to yourself... but then, as sad as it was for her to learn this I’m glad he told her.

Kelly Kearby

well didn't see that coming.

Taina Iosefo

It’s so crazy how things happen and it’s life. Please be patient and kind with Jenny redoing the story. Me, being a minority, I didn’t think anything was offensive or hurtful. I was just enjoying the book. As much as people like to tear down others, I think and believe if you don’t like it don’t read it. But with Jenny being an amazing author and person, she takes what people write into consideration, however it is to a point. We are all humans, so please be kind to any author because they work so hard to bring us stories for us to read. Have a great day everyone!!

Katie Factor

Dang... poor Eden. She just can't catch a break can she. Dante, give her all the love she needs and deserves!

Alicia Flores

chuky and godzilla mix hahaja Loir you crack me up 😂😂😂😂😂 Also so impress for Eden real look 😱😱😱 I wonder if Dante has seen her like that wen she was almost death 🤔🤔🤔 not that he is going to care that much I think 🤔

Satrupa Mohapatra

❤️❤️❤️❤️

Roseam

Dante's being sweet again, gotta love him. The Core is going down! Eden has spoken.

still the best in here I have read this far! and the only one of three that keeps me coming back!

SvS 🐝

Great work Eden! totally avoided the L word 😂😂

Beatriz Astorga Morales

So impressed!!! 😱😱😱 Can’t wait for Dante to get Eden! 🥰🥰🥰 Loir is just so adorable!!!

yesss i love the 2 of them ❤️

Reader-891000

I love this story!!! great job Jenny

Ahlie

who is C and hope eden and the girls will be alright... that's scary

Lei Kela

that non- animatronic is not accounted for. 🥺😲 I'm getting worried if their plan will succeed. I wonder who is "C" exactly. she looks suspicious 🤔

LittleGoldie

great story, HORRIBLE editing.

Katie Greco Cole

loving this story. your such a good writer. I love all the twists and turns always keeping us on our toes. can't wait for the next update! have a nice break.

Reader-397104

wow another great twist love your writing Jenny!

oh snaps! lmao I was smiling to myself like an idiot about jack’s situation. I hope he’ll be alright!

Alicia Rodriguez

this has been one of my fav Jenny’s stories. I love Dante

rosie

I’m here for jealous Dante 😍 lol and of course loir cracking me up as always 😂

Auras Laura

just love the story👏🥰

Maika Pertille

ohhh really? such an episode and cliff hanger there, love it!!!

Reader-575963

I absolutely love this book can’t wait for it to be back Jenny! Eden and Dante are my favs ❤️

Reader-397104

great chapter Jenny! can’t wait for the meeting

I wonder why Dante is so drawn to Eden. I feel like there is more to this. Also thank you for the tasteful make out/sex scenes

Carrie Jurgens

just loved it! every time I read a new story I say this ones my favorite love story! But then I think back on the others and realize that Jenny Fox is just that good a writer!

Alicia Flores

😮😮😮😮 this is intense.... I hope that information doesn't change the love they have for each other but make it stronger... happy to know they are not really related 🤔🤔🤔

Reader-986715

freaking Loir 🤣🤣

Cristin Ronqvist

Oh hoo dame what a chapter wow i so love it Jenny its amazing work and well wrighting as always 👍❤️🕊️

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Seriously, dear JENNY, I love ALL your stories!!! 🙏🙏🙏

shanaaz shaz

amazing

loir is the best 😂

Deanna Smith

Great story, I don't usually like 'Future' or 'Mafia books but this one is good Thankyou Jenny ❣❣❣

Maria Chi

holy moly !!! so good 😊 I can’t wait for the next chapter, nail bitter.

Hollstar

Loir is hilarious! 😂 I love how Dante and Eden are getting closer too! ❤️❤️❤️

Reader-555364

Very, very good 😁👍👍👍 This is going to be sooooo awesome!

Maria Rotir

I don't understand the fuss. I get that there are mayor issues in the world concerning racism, but this is just riddiculous. It's a story. And if all the Zodiacs are named after animals, why are you getting offended?! I don't know if you are aware, but gorillas are amazing, strong, smart, beautiful and powerful animals, yet you are offended that a mafia boss calls himself The Gorilla. It's as if there was an uproar because of M'Baku from Black Panther.

Taina Iosefo

oh man... cliffhanger.. hahaha can’t wait for the next update!!

Maria Patricia

I'm so glad for the couple!

OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!❤❤❤❤

Taina Iosefo

They should start planning what yo do about the Core. Love how Eden and Dante are with each other.

Bonib2

I love the arguings

Makes sense the Architect’s daughter would lead the new army of hackers, The Edge 2.0. 👍🏽 He was responsible for the last assembly. I am hoping once the Zodiac meeting/plan is concluded, Eden has an opportunity to get more background from Pan in private. He made a promise to keep her safe, to who? ...and his similar looks, could he be related somehow? And why does “A” and the Dragon seem to know more about her past then she does? “A” can’t be her dead brother. Nope! why would he leave her to survive alone? He’s a Zodiac and hacker too. This story just keeps getting better though.

Cristin Ronqvist

Boom yes lori 😂👊 awsome 🙏❤️

Psylocke

I love love love these two 😍

Gotta love Loir!

Reader-875591

OMG so good 😍

Beatriz Astorga Morales

I’m so nervous!!! 😱😱😱

Gosh I hope Dante didn’t know... and I am scared that she is going to react badly about it and distance herself from him please dont let that happen 🙏🏻🥺❤️

Alicia Flores

Dante is her sage place 💖💖💖 that is so sweet😊 yes Eden you truly are on Love with the Tiger and he loves you back 😍😍😍

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Omg! So interesting!!! 👍👌☺️

Marija Marković

it's so stupid issue, I just can't believe it. I can't believe that people can find problem in anything! it's good story, without anything that cnn be such a issue. some people just imagine things even where theh don't exist. so sorry that you have to deal with this.

Psylocke

more...more...I need more!!!!

PoisonedPix

omg I can breathe!

Ieva Igaune

Hm... 🤔

Lattechia Powell-Minto

I think Eden lie about her mom being dead previous chapter state she is alive not to mention that she also sold her legs and become apart to help her mom with her sickness im not a hundred percent sure but her mom is alive

I can only imagine having all that news being told to Eden was like a hard painful slap to the face and with it, came a new fire to fuel her. another war and hopefully one that will crush the core and unite all the people into one again.

PoisonedPix

gawd I want the core’s end too.

shanaaz shaz

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bet she didn't see that coming!

Christina Nevarez

OMG!!! great work Jenny, loving ebery update, I am at the edge of my seat waiting for more!!!

Pey Phang

omg cliffhanger.. so good Jenny thanks for the update hope u had an amazing break

Est7711

I'm glad to read this story again, even from the beginning again. I just don't get it. This is a fiction story and amazing too, I think this story isn't racist and hello it's just fiction. If don't like it, just don't read it. But Thank you Jenny for up date this story. keep up writting a great and amazing story😍❤❤

Tessa Koekkoek

yesss some Dante Eden action

Jessica

I love a jealous Eden lol

Stephanie

Just when I couldn't love him anymore, he goes and does that! 😂

jen

😲😲😲

Ahlie

can't wait for PAN and Eden to meet in person

hpearce15

So excited it’s back!!! Can’t wait to read it again!!! Love this story 💕

cool bro

May be those people feel jealousy of ur craze , writings, fame so they r making trouble to u no matter what happens Jenny we will always with you.......

Christina Nevarez

so in love with this story! and all pf the characters!!! specially Beer and Bullet 😍

rosie

oh no! 🤭

totally read your comment and totally agree about spoilers… this is. great story and for once even if I could I would mot want to skip to the end:)

Sof1235 Djgyj

What the what to the what?!?!?! WHATTTTT?!?!?! LOVE IT

linda

Used to the dragons, werewolves and vampires but this was so new, in the beginning I didn't think I would get hocked the same way as to your other books, shame on me, it's like 3am and I need more! 😂😱🙈❤❤❤

Robin

Where did Circe go? She knows to much to leave

Reader-555364

Loved it!

Maria Rotir

I really wish for a chapter with pov. from Dante. Only to better understand his motives. I love him the way he is (tall, dark, mysterious), but I would like to know more about what is going on in his head.

nemone van Der bliake

poor Eden, that's so 😥 sad

Patricia Hooda

can not wait for next chapter!!! You did it again Jenny!

Reader-555364

Pooe Eden 😢

oh... can't wait to find out what happens next! This story is amazing!

shanaaz shaz

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Edina Owens

hahahahha dante seems better in pissing off eden nowadays 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 i love them!!! n i love jenny the most! ♥️

PoisonedPix

lol I can kill him after. so epic

SuperWhoFly

Chapter 15: Awesome! Love hearing about the history of The Core!

Sanah Soliman Lestat Hym

ohmygod! Eden finally meeting Pan!!

Me encanta esta historia!! por favor Jenny sigue escribiendo 😢😢

Taina Iosefo

Oh man... Dante’s really gonna be having fun pissing Eden off with Rose being there and willing to give Dante what he wants. But I know he won’t let her cause he really likes (maybe loves) Eden.

Reader-397104

watch out Loir kitty might sic C on you lol😅😂🤣

Gabzzz Rodzzz

Hope Circe turns to be useful. Glad Dante gave Eden a proper welcome

Alicia Flores

Interesting Loir part of the Edge... I wonder how is Dante going to make Eden not mad at him any more, is going to be hard with her being jelous of Rose

Psylocke

the plot thickens!

Sheetu Zutshi Bhat

Loved it 💕

Lally Devon

that was hot 🥵 Dante and Eden but need to get out of there quick and wonder what happen to C where did she go? 😘❤️❤️❤️