The Songbird's Love Comments
Ludmila Bacova
we are nearing the end of a great story...
09/04/2023 08:33Suryannie Sardjono Straume
NO!!!! Not Loir:(
09/04/2023 08:33
Christina Nevarez
T_T I'm Crying so bad right now!
09/04/2023 08:33
This is getting so emotional. I'm nervous for each chapter now
09/04/2023 08:33Christina Kay Maynard
I love it
09/04/2023 08:33
Beatriz Astorga Morales
Please, DEAR JENNY, don’t let Dante or Eden die… We need more chapters with them 🙏😥😭😭😭
09/04/2023 08:33Beatriz Astorga Morales
Eden and Dante are together at last! 🥳🥳🥳
09/04/2023 08:33
Mina
I hope Eden finds another option 🥺 otherwise it’s a gut wrenching choice 😔😭
09/04/2023 08:33Missing Loir so much..🥺🥺🥺
09/04/2023 08:33Anita Mara
Loir is the best! Love his character 👏🏻👏🏻
09/04/2023 08:33Lior 😭😭😭😭
09/04/2023 08:33Maureen Lawn
Loir is fantastic. Hahahaha!
09/04/2023 08:33the fck... 😂😅😱 loir really should only change the fan positions.. i mean, let the core feels all that carbon dioxide n give the oxygens to their part
09/04/2023 08:33Alicia Flores
I think Core is trying to fool Eden with those images, they just saw how they manipulate the videos, it would be silly for her to think they are telling the truth.
09/04/2023 08:33
Nikki
😍😁❤️
09/04/2023 08:33Reader-397104
Wow Loir ! Crazy Genius! can’t wait for next chapter!
09/04/2023 08:3280 Charles already mentioned that PAN was her dad's best assistant. he can't also be her dad right?
09/04/2023 08:32Beatriz Astorga Morales
So sad! Charles was a very brave man… Hope Dante can find Eden soon! 🙏🙏🙏
09/04/2023 08:32TheIdeliin
I'd like to think that Pan isn't her dad but like a secret brother or something 😜
09/04/2023 08:32Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma
Fingers crossed...Let the suburbs win
09/04/2023 08:32Web Bookworm
I’m re-reading again and what if PAN is her dad but in a computer? Like his body is gone but his mind and everything is still there & that’s why he could meet her in the Ether. I cannot wait for this book to finish!
09/04/2023 08:32RIP
09/04/2023 08:32
Reader-555364
Loved IT!!!! 😍
09/04/2023 08:32Ludmila Bacova
what a lovely chapter! ❤❤❤
09/04/2023 08:32I can not even read this next chapters or the comments.. I just don’t want it to end yet!
09/04/2023 08:32
shanaaz shaz
yaaay 💍👰💍👰💍👰💍👰💍👰💍
09/04/2023 08:32Love this story!! Thank you!
09/04/2023 08:3290 everything is destroyed, everyone is dead, dying or about to die. what's the point of all of these?
09/04/2023 08:32I feel like it’s the truth and also a trap! I hope Eden can decipher the two!!
09/04/2023 08:32Analee Deniz
🤯🤯🤯
09/04/2023 08:32Taina Iosefo
Oh man.. that’s funny Dante was close to shooting people to get Eden out. Love that they can get into it so quick and love the possessiveness and love Dante has for Eden. Hoping Eden can get in and hope that list of people in the Core are trustworthy.
09/04/2023 08:32Reader-397104
another great cliffhanger Jenny! is it a lie or the truth?
09/04/2023 08:32Penny A Foxie
90 I just feel like he’s lying to her… I really hope so. Why would she be forced to leave if he hadn’t gone against the Core… :/ So worried about Dante too… :(
09/04/2023 08:32
Katie
did not see this coming!! Hope the other reader is right that they had foreseen this and had moved Loir somewhere
09/04/2023 08:31
Tara Holland
nooooo not Dante😭 please please no not him
09/04/2023 08:31“I’ll get to be with her.” I’m dying to know that backstory!! there is much more to Loir than we know yet
09/04/2023 08:31linda
Breathing is overrated when reading this book, GOD. 🙈🤯🙈🤯🙈
09/04/2023 08:31shanaaz shaz
yes yes yes ❤❤❤❤💍👰💍👰💍
09/04/2023 08:31
Psylocke
Dante is dying 😭. I hope some of this technology will save him
09/04/2023 08:31Reader-555364
Loved It!!!! 😍😁
09/04/2023 08:31
Roseam
It must be surreal for her.
09/04/2023 08:31Edits: the Edge should be the Core.
09/04/2023 08:31
Ahlie
tough choice for eden❣
09/04/2023 08:31My heart is racing every time there's an update now lol this is such a good story!
09/04/2023 08:31when everyone is dead, who will savour the victory?
09/04/2023 08:31hpearce15
So so so good Jenny! I am loving this story! ♥️😍
09/04/2023 08:31Yes...Dante. 😍🤩
09/04/2023 08:31ohh Dante ❤️❤️❤️ bless him
09/04/2023 08:31Auras Laura
good Tiger😁
09/04/2023 08:31Youvanne
ooo i loveee dante 😍
09/04/2023 08:31Alicia Flores
oh noooo Adennis bleeding out 😱😱😱
09/04/2023 08:31no spoilers, fellow readers… this story is too good any one wanting to comment and just starting out uou will take it away from them a bit!
09/04/2023 08:31Reader-555364
Aaaaaarrrrggghhh!! I can’t cope with the tension!! 😮😮😬😬😂
09/04/2023 08:31nfau4714
Yo in the car Dante?... while Rolf is still driving yous? My guyyy😅😅 yes! hahahahhaha
09/04/2023 08:31Penny A Foxie
82 ha ha ha she shot Dante! saw it coming, glad he seems ok! He seems bemused rather than hurt. Glad hes back at her side. They’re better together!
09/04/2023 08:31Ahlie
❣❣❣
09/04/2023 08:31Katie Greco Cole
this is so interesting! I never would have thought he was the contact. I can't wait for her to meet pan.
09/04/2023 08:31hahha that's a nice bomb
09/04/2023 08:31
SuperWhoFly
I hope Dante stops being so obsessed and overprotective. A bit overbearing and creepy. Love hearing about the forming of the Edge.
09/04/2023 08:31
PoisonedPix
still super scared for Eden! can’t move as normal and doesn’t have communication! 😬
09/04/2023 08:31Ieva Igaune
Now that was a boom 🤣🤣
09/04/2023 08:31
PramG
Dante is not going to let Eden go to the Core by herself. 😍 He is so possessive of her … Love Dante!😍😍😍
09/04/2023 08:30Big shot out to Lecky's husband for standing his ground lol but that was such an adorable scene 🥺 and I know Lecky said the people were trustworthy but idk....this is a whole system we're talking about taking down. I hope they come through
09/04/2023 08:30Roseam
They're so cute together. i loved this chapter.
09/04/2023 08:30oh snap!
09/04/2023 08:30Ludmila Bacova
The Tiger is missing his girlfriend 😉
09/04/2023 08:30shanaaz shaz
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
09/04/2023 08:30nfau4714
Loir is a roll-dawg forreal forreal!! When he realized his Kitty was in trouble he went all out on them! ❤ loved it!
09/04/2023 08:30omg.... i just can't imagine the horror of those hell bomb... i guess its nuclear right ..? fck... i just can't believe it 😭 i got goosebumps all over
09/04/2023 08:30Sienna David
One of the best books I've read here so far, I love how imaginative the author is! This book needs more recognition, every chapter is interesting and just in the right pace. I hope novels like this can adapt into a movie, it's really one of a kind, a masterpiece indeed 💗
09/04/2023 08:30Christina Kay Maynard
love it
09/04/2023 08:30Reader-299919
oh noo😱
09/04/2023 08:30i love this story!!
09/04/2023 08:30Michelle Hill
what happened to Circe!?!?
09/04/2023 08:30I can't wait to hear about her father!
09/04/2023 08:30Gee Higgins
oh yes get married love it and here I was expecting some bad news
09/04/2023 08:30b1gun3
thank you Jenny! another cliff hanger but this story keeps getting more exciting
09/04/2023 08:30Psylocke
hah! I knew it was about Dante when the phone rang 🤣
09/04/2023 08:29Reader-555364
It was sad because of Charles, but also a completely awesome chapter!
09/04/2023 08:29hpearce15
Jenny this book is amazing and I am just on edge waiting for the next chapter!! ♥️♥️♥️
09/04/2023 08:29Alicia Flores
ahe shot Dante 😱😱😱😱😱 or maybe he dodged it and the blood on his temple is from some other wound in battle... I really love Dante I want a Dante all for my self 😝💕😘
09/04/2023 08:29haha i was wondering when Big Kitty will start harrassing them to give his little kitty back 😜😜😜
09/04/2023 08:29my heart! I feel so sad for the loss of our troops🥺🥺!! I hope the core loses twice as much 😠
09/04/2023 08:29
Kat M
Dante to the rescue!!
09/04/2023 08:29Julia Lehmann
Interesting proposal 😅
09/04/2023 08:29Reader-555364
Love it!!!
09/04/2023 08:2996fairlady
crash bandicoot!!
09/04/2023 08:29Kat M
They better hurry before Dante goes crazy lol
09/04/2023 08:29I think there are mistakes wirh using "The Edge" instead of "The Core". It pulls me out of immersion when I read rhat "The Edge built a wall" or "sent assasin drones". Other than that a great chapter, as always.
09/04/2023 08:29Roseam
Wow what an action packed chapter! I love all Loir's little comments. He named the bots 😂. I'm glad our Kittie's are back together. 💜
09/04/2023 08:29
Lei Kela
my oh my 💕💕💕💕
09/04/2023 08:29what????
09/04/2023 08:29
SvS 🐝
why do I have the feeling that they won’t sleep much this night 😂
09/04/2023 08:29conso Africa
that annoying thing 😀😃😁🤣😂😂
09/04/2023 08:29Drawkser
did not see that one coming lol
09/04/2023 08:29Kat M
They are the best!
09/04/2023 08:29
Anet_CZ
I just started reading yesterday and i sooo love it already 😄
09/04/2023 08:29Anita Mara
🥰
09/04/2023 08:29
HeatherP312
yessss pleaseeeeee .
09/04/2023 08:29
Soph Hugh
Please don’t forget to leave several spaces if you are going to leave spoiler comments everyone!
09/04/2023 08:29
