The Songbird's Love Comments
T.H.E. Miller.C
he just needed one hug, tho. like one I live you from someone… maybe he is related to her some how..
08/22/2021 07:34T.H.E. Miller.C
wow. just wow. in a good way. wow.
08/22/2021 07:32Mariah Johnson
end of chapter 85.... can we get the English translation please??
08/22/2021 03:18Florie Frane
Noooooooooooooooo! I'm heartbroken once more Jenny! Why do you keep killing people? But this story is so great!
08/22/2021 01:40
mandyk
😢😢😢
08/22/2021 00:44
Zaida
Excuse me while I go sob in the corner....
08/22/2021 00:39nfau4714
I know wexre all hoping for a lil plot twist for Loir, but honestly..... Miss Jenny don't let everyone live. She pulls the heartstrings forreal forreal. ❤RIP Loir❤
08/21/2021 21:06Auras Laura
let's go to war😈
08/21/2021 20:24Auras Laura
congratulations🥳🥰
08/21/2021 20:06
Mina Song
nooooo!!! I hope our loir didn’t die!! he’s one of the best hacker and if that’s how he goes out, I’d be sooo sad! I hope he was able to hack the Emerald tower or what it was called, from the distance(like how you can do a three way call. so in reality, he hacked the tower and made it seem like he was there but he’s actually not and somewhere else) I’d be super sad if we lost Loir 😭😭😭😭🥺🥺💔
08/21/2021 19:44
Tara Holland
😭😭😭😭 noooooooo
08/21/2021 19:25
Elite Knight
oh god... 😭 fck... he's one of my fav charas 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 no damnnn loir the weirdo!! 😭😭
08/21/2021 16:08
KrairedEyes
T_T I'm Crying so bad right now!
08/21/2021 14:55
Maria Patricia
no, no, no please.... he's the best! he'll manage to save his ass!
08/21/2021 11:25Pey Phang
chapter 85… * * * * * * * I hope Jackie was able to get him out if he was in the building ..
08/21/2021 10:36
Kathryn Ngatuakana
i dont know what to say!! there will never be another loir hacker in this story nooooooo, i really liked his character.. dang, guess we gotta push on guys
08/21/2021 10:16
Rasha Abed
so sad for loir, but the way it was written was so vivid I could clearly picture it in my mind and the song choice " non, je ne regrette rien by edith piaf" for the ending was legendary i was literally singing it with him in the end and i could hear the music in my head like the background in a movie scene.
08/21/2021 09:31Meg Roberts
oh.....
08/21/2021 09:15
Roseam
Not Loir! Warlock better have a trick or two up his sleeve.
08/21/2021 09:05Anne Embery
Nnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo he shouldn't have been killed. if he was, was he still doing stuff to help them. 🥺🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😪😪😪😪😪
08/21/2021 07:57
Adin Nahk
they are in the middle of it how can he just died
08/21/2021 07:04Youvanne
no noooo nooo loir
08/21/2021 05:52Sky Queen
I'm crying
08/21/2021 05:44jen
LOIR!!!!!😱😫😭
08/21/2021 04:32Silky Gupta
********* Noooooooooooo!! I don't want Loir to dieeee, plssssssssss
08/21/2021 04:17Lauren Rendero
noooooo....!
08/21/2021 04:07
Lei Kela
Loir..... who is "her"?
08/21/2021 03:48Sheetu Zutshi Bhat
Loir..
08/21/2021 03:22Anita Mara
😪 Loir! 💔
08/21/2021 02:58
Maura L Quezada
i understand that we want to believe that they moved him somewhere else. But lets be honest Jenny is know for this kind of things. I was waiting for something like this to happen I didn’t know it was going to be Loir but yeah.
08/21/2021 02:27
Katie
did not see this coming!! Hope the other reader is right that they had foreseen this and had moved Loir somewhere
08/21/2021 01:25
Em Gee
“I’ll get to be with her.” I’m dying to know that backstory!! there is much more to Loir than we know yet
08/21/2021 01:21Danielle Cuthbert
noooo!! not loir! but isn't Jac and the dogs there too or did they go to the slums?
08/21/2021 01:12
Katie Factor
Loir!!! 😭 I'm hoping Dante and Loir, or Pan, assumed something like this would happen and either moved Loir after they all left Dante's place, or made it look like he was somewhere he actually wasn't, and that he's just playing dead. Maybe this is why Pan hasn't shown up yet. I hope he's OK and comes back later perfectly fine and helps Eden again. 🤞🤞🤞🤞
08/20/2021 23:29Reader-397104
Oh Loir! Who will take his place? I’ll miss your craziness! Great update!
08/20/2021 22:59
Mina
Noooooooooo!!! 🥺😭😭😭
08/20/2021 22:25
Satrupa Mohapatra
nooooo....... 😭😭😭😭😭😭 not Loir please spare my heart from all these deaths in LD u r killing the characters one by one and in this too ... Please Jenny grant mercy and let some of the crazy character live I really loved Loir's antiques
08/20/2021 21:48
Reader-555364
aw……… that’s sad. maybe he makes it?……. I do like to be an optimist when I can…….. 💪
08/20/2021 21:23
Shrut Keerti
why loir. m so sad 😞 😥 😢
08/20/2021 21:19Robin
Noooooo. I can’t believe Lori is gone. Damn Jenny. This is too much. I can’t believe I’m actually crying for that crazy character 😭😭😭😭😭
08/20/2021 21:15Myrianthe Marton
no way he is dead :-)
08/20/2021 21:06Stephanie Messner Smith
I didn’t think that would bring me to tears like it did 😭
08/20/2021 20:57Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma
Why am I not surprised . ..
08/20/2021 20:53
Tabitha Groves
Poor Loir.... 😞 I love his craziness.
08/20/2021 20:39Alicia Flores
o noooopp not Loir.... I like Loir 😰😰😰 please tell me that he had a back up plane all along 😵😵😵
08/20/2021 20:31Ludmila Bacova
oh oh...
08/20/2021 20:24Alison Johnson
oh no! I hope Loir managed to pull off something crazy and get out! :-(
08/20/2021 20:19Suryannie Sardjono Straume
NO!!!! Not Loir:(
08/20/2021 19:56Maria Patricia
so intense! can't wait for the next chapter 💕
08/20/2021 10:41
SvS 🐝
ufffff I hope she can ignore the mind games (if they actually are games)
08/20/2021 04:56
Beatriz Astorga Morales
Love this story!!! 👍👍👍
08/20/2021 01:38Beatriz Astorga Morales
I’m waiting for PAN to make his appearance!! 🤜🤜🤜
08/20/2021 01:38Beatriz Astorga Morales
Whaaaat! Oh! it would be possible! But I’m afraid it’s just a cruel joke of the Core… 🙄🙄🙄
08/20/2021 01:37Drawkser
wait what!? 😱😱
08/19/2021 22:38Satrupa Mohapatra
it's the illusion core is trying to form for her
08/19/2021 20:58Ludmila Bacova
so the mind games begin...
08/19/2021 16:55Elite Knight
dmnnnnnn i got chills.... seriously.... this give me the crazy thriller vibe.... & ugh I'm so bad with anything horror, thrill or gore & blood & excessive violence or torture etc..... 😖😖😖😖 gosh... i love action tho.. 😂
08/19/2021 13:15Lei Kela
oh is this the truth? can Eden trust the Core? most likely no, but what if they're telling the truth for once? Eden has to be stronger to not fall for the trap
08/19/2021 07:59Mina Song
I feel like it’s the truth and also a trap! I hope Eden can decipher the two!!
08/19/2021 03:56Reader-397104
another great cliffhanger Jenny! is it a lie or the truth?
08/19/2021 03:49Ieva Igaune
I hope she won't beleve it, or Dante will pull her through this.. They are a team..
08/19/2021 03:39
Ahlie
true lies😪
08/19/2021 00:32
Kat M
Mind games, Dante will pull her through
08/19/2021 00:04Roseam
If her mother is really alive it's only so they can manipulate Eden. Don't believe anything they say.
08/18/2021 23:52Anne Embery
OMG so exciting, don't fall for their lies
08/18/2021 23:01Penny A Foxie
84 Oh they are playing dirty! Its got to be a total fake. They are disgusting. 😡
08/18/2021 22:19Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma
mind games to buy time! Dante please do something to bring her out
08/18/2021 21:25Mina
Another great chapter, Jenny! ❤️ hope Eden doesn’t fall for their tricks 😐 looking forward to the next chapter, love this story! ❤️❤️❤️
08/18/2021 21:22Alicia Flores
I think Core is trying to fool Eden with those images, they just saw how they manipulate the videos, it would be silly for her to think they are telling the truth.
08/18/2021 19:56Web Bookworm
I’m re-reading again and what if PAN is her dad but in a computer? Like his body is gone but his mind and everything is still there & that’s why he could meet her in the Ether. I cannot wait for this book to finish!
08/17/2021 03:44
Soph Hugh
I like Eve’s character more and more
08/16/2021 19:58Lei Kela
I didn't realize that I like dystopian stories until I read this. been following this masterpiece for several months. I'm totally converted.
08/16/2021 03:36Nicole R
I am enjoying this book very much. Better then many on this site, and fewer spelling/grammar errors. Thank you to the Author. :)
08/14/2021 19:44T.H.E. Miller.C
still the best story on this entire app. I’ve recommended this story to several people. if you don’t already have a publisher I’ll help you!
08/13/2021 16:38Beatriz Astorga Morales
So intense! So sad! But that’s war… 🤷🏻♀️🤷🏻♀️🤷🏻♀️ Dear Jenny, I love your stories!!! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👍👍👍☺️🤗
08/13/2021 15:43Luz Castro
I started reading it a week ago and I can't put it down!!! I love the book so far, you're a great writer Jenny!!👏👏👏
08/13/2021 01:00Alicia Flores
those dam core bastards 😡 go and theach them Eden 😈 kick their core butts
08/12/2021 23:42Ludmila Bacova
oh oh oh, my poor heart...
08/12/2021 16:13MReinanda
What a loe bloe from th core, but not surprised. What an intense new chapter.
08/12/2021 14:12Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma
I so love this story, but please save Eden and Dante for me
08/12/2021 11:31Roseam
Far out. So many casualties. Here's hoping for better news next chapter.
08/12/2021 10:20Maria Patricia
o feel sorry for the heroes that we lost! I'm staying positive for the rest of!
08/12/2021 09:51Penny A Foxie
83 He’ll bomb Eek! I hope they can do some serious damage now! Can’t believe they resorted to an illegal weapons. can’t wait to see what happens in the tower. Dante 💕
08/12/2021 07:52Mina Song
my heart! I feel so sad for the loss of our troops🥺🥺!! I hope the core loses twice as much 😠
08/12/2021 06:51Kayla Elliott
ohh I love this book!! Jenny you are the BEST!! as always 😏
08/12/2021 02:48Anita Mara
this book is the best!!
08/12/2021 01:50Kelly Kearby Berger
RIP
08/12/2021 01:33Gee Higgins
great chapter the hell bomb was just sad 😥😔 but Eden, Dante and Loir they got this
08/11/2021 23:48SvS 🐝
And here she goes again: killing hundreds of people within a second 🙈🙈 Jennyyyyyy
08/11/2021 23:39hpearce15
Soooo good Jenny!!! I Love Love Love this story!!! looking forward to the next update!!
08/11/2021 23:27Ahlie
❣❣❣
08/11/2021 23:18Elite Knight
omg.... i just can't imagine the horror of those hell bomb... i guess its nuclear right ..? fck... i just can't believe it 😭 i got goosebumps all over
08/11/2021 22:39Christina Kay Maynard
love it
08/11/2021 22:15Reader-555364
Awesome chapter! As always! 😁👍💪💪😍
08/11/2021 21:55Reader-397104
great update! sad for the casualties but this is war. Go Eden!
08/11/2021 20:45
Bonib2
I just love Dante and Eden. He is so protective of her.
08/11/2021 19:35Mina Song
my favorite duo 😭🖤🖤🖤🖤 I hope Dante is ok!
08/11/2021 09:16hpearce15
Jenny this book is amazing and I am just on edge waiting for the next chapter!! ♥️♥️♥️
08/10/2021 22:36Reader-284557
more please!
08/10/2021 21:41
Wcha
loir cracks me up
08/09/2021 18:50
