The Songbird's Love Comments

  • Suryannie Sardjono Straume

    NO!!!! Not Loir:(

    09/04/2023 08:33
  • Christina Nevarez

    T_T I'm Crying so bad right now!

    09/04/2023 08:33
  • This is getting so emotional. I'm nervous for each chapter now

    09/04/2023 08:33
  • Christina Kay Maynard

    I love it

    09/04/2023 08:33
  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Please, DEAR JENNY, donโ€™t let Dante or Eden dieโ€ฆ We need more chapters with them ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

    09/04/2023 08:33
  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Eden and Dante are together at last! ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ

    09/04/2023 08:33
  • Mina

    I hope Eden finds another option ๐Ÿฅบ otherwise itโ€™s a gut wrenching choice ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜ญ

    09/04/2023 08:33
  • Missing Loir so much..๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ

    09/04/2023 08:33
  • Anita Mara

    Loir is the best! Love his character ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

    09/04/2023 08:33
  • Lior ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

    09/04/2023 08:33
  • Maureen Lawn

    Loir is fantastic. Hahahaha!

    09/04/2023 08:33
  • the fck... ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜ฑ loir really should only change the fan positions.. i mean, let the core feels all that carbon dioxide n give the oxygens to their part

    09/04/2023 08:33
  • Alicia Flores

    I think Core is trying to fool Eden with those images, they just saw how they manipulate the videos, it would be silly for her to think they are telling the truth.

    09/04/2023 08:33
  • Nikki

    ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธ

    09/04/2023 08:33
  • Reader-397104

    Wow Loir ! Crazy Genius! canโ€™t wait for next chapter!

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • 80 Charles already mentioned that PAN was her dad's best assistant. he can't also be her dad right?

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    So sad! Charles was a very brave manโ€ฆ Hope Dante can find Eden soon! ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • TheIdeliin

    I'd like to think that Pan isn't her dad but like a secret brother or something ๐Ÿ˜œ

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

    Fingers crossed...Let the suburbs win

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • Web Bookworm

    Iโ€™m re-reading again and what if PAN is her dad but in a computer? Like his body is gone but his mind and everything is still there & thatโ€™s why he could meet her in the Ether. I cannot wait for this book to finish!

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • RIP

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • Reader-555364

    Loved IT!!!! ๐Ÿ˜

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • Ludmila Bacova

    what a lovely chapter! โคโคโค

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • I can not even read this next chapters or the comments.. I just donโ€™t want it to end yet!

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • shanaaz shaz

    yaaay ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ‘ฐ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ‘ฐ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ‘ฐ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ‘ฐ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ‘ฐ๐Ÿ’

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • Love this story!! Thank you!

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • 90 everything is destroyed, everyone is dead, dying or about to die. what's the point of all of these?

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • I feel like itโ€™s the truth and also a trap! I hope Eden can decipher the two!!

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • Analee Deniz

    ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • Taina Iosefo

    Oh man.. thatโ€™s funny Dante was close to shooting people to get Eden out. Love that they can get into it so quick and love the possessiveness and love Dante has for Eden. Hoping Eden can get in and hope that list of people in the Core are trustworthy.

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • Reader-397104

    another great cliffhanger Jenny! is it a lie or the truth?

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • Penny A Foxie

    90 I just feel like heโ€™s lying to herโ€ฆ I really hope so. Why would she be forced to leave if he hadnโ€™t gone against the Coreโ€ฆ :/ So worried about Dante tooโ€ฆ :(

    09/04/2023 08:32
  • Katie

    did not see this coming!! Hope the other reader is right that they had foreseen this and had moved Loir somewhere

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • Tara Holland

    nooooo not Dante๐Ÿ˜ญ please please no not him

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • โ€œIโ€™ll get to be with her.โ€ Iโ€™m dying to know that backstory!! there is much more to Loir than we know yet

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • linda

    Breathing is overrated when reading this book, GOD. ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿ™ˆ

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • shanaaz shaz

    yes yes yes โคโคโคโค๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ‘ฐ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ‘ฐ๐Ÿ’

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • Psylocke

    Dante is dying ๐Ÿ˜ญ. I hope some of this technology will save him

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • Reader-555364

    Loved It!!!! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • Roseam

    It must be surreal for her.

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • Edits: the Edge should be the Core.

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • Ahlie

    tough choice for edenโฃ

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • My heart is racing every time there's an update now lol this is such a good story!

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • when everyone is dead, who will savour the victory?

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • hpearce15

    So so so good Jenny! I am loving this story! โ™ฅ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • Yes...Dante. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • ohh Dante โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ bless him

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • Auras Laura

    good Tiger๐Ÿ˜

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • Youvanne

    ooo i loveee dante ๐Ÿ˜

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • Alicia Flores

    oh noooo Adennis bleeding out ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • no spoilers, fellow readersโ€ฆ this story is too good any one wanting to comment and just starting out uou will take it away from them a bit!

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • Reader-555364

    Aaaaaarrrrggghhh!! I canโ€™t cope with the tension!! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜‚

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • nfau4714

    Yo in the car Dante?... while Rolf is still driving yous? My guyyy๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜… yes! hahahahhaha

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • Penny A Foxie

    82 ha ha ha she shot Dante! saw it coming, glad he seems ok! He seems bemused rather than hurt. Glad hes back at her side. Theyโ€™re better together!

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • Ahlie

    โฃโฃโฃ

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • Katie Greco Cole

    this is so interesting! I never would have thought he was the contact. I can't wait for her to meet pan.

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • hahha that's a nice bomb

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • SuperWhoFly

    I hope Dante stops being so obsessed and overprotective. A bit overbearing and creepy. Love hearing about the forming of the Edge.

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • PoisonedPix

    still super scared for Eden! canโ€™t move as normal and doesnโ€™t have communication! ๐Ÿ˜ฌ

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • Ieva Igaune

    Now that was a boom ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

    09/04/2023 08:31
  • PramG

    Dante is not going to let Eden go to the Core by herself. ๐Ÿ˜ He is so possessive of her โ€ฆ Love Dante!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • Big shot out to Lecky's husband for standing his ground lol but that was such an adorable scene ๐Ÿฅบ and I know Lecky said the people were trustworthy but idk....this is a whole system we're talking about taking down. I hope they come through

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • Roseam

    They're so cute together. i loved this chapter.

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • oh snap!

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • Ludmila Bacova

    The Tiger is missing his girlfriend ๐Ÿ˜‰

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • shanaaz shaz

    โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • nfau4714

    Loir is a roll-dawg forreal forreal!! When he realized his Kitty was in trouble he went all out on them! โค loved it!

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • omg.... i just can't imagine the horror of those hell bomb... i guess its nuclear right ..? fck... i just can't believe it ๐Ÿ˜ญ i got goosebumps all over

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • Sienna David

    One of the best books I've read here so far, I love how imaginative the author is! This book needs more recognition, every chapter is interesting and just in the right pace. I hope novels like this can adapt into a movie, it's really one of a kind, a masterpiece indeed ๐Ÿ’—

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • Christina Kay Maynard

    love it

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • Reader-299919

    oh noo๐Ÿ˜ฑ

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • i love this story!!

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • Michelle Hill

    what happened to Circe!?!?

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • I can't wait to hear about her father!

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • Gee Higgins

    oh yes get married love it and here I was expecting some bad news

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • b1gun3

    thank you Jenny! another cliff hanger but this story keeps getting more exciting

    09/04/2023 08:30
  • Psylocke

    hah! I knew it was about Dante when the phone rang ๐Ÿคฃ

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • Reader-555364

    It was sad because of Charles, but also a completely awesome chapter!

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • hpearce15

    Jenny this book is amazing and I am just on edge waiting for the next chapter!! โ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • Alicia Flores

    ahe shot Dante ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ or maybe he dodged it and the blood on his temple is from some other wound in battle... I really love Dante I want a Dante all for my self ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜˜

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • haha i was wondering when Big Kitty will start harrassing them to give his little kitty back ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • my heart! I feel so sad for the loss of our troops๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ!! I hope the core loses twice as much ๐Ÿ˜ 

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • Kat M

    Dante to the rescue!!

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • Julia Lehmann

    Interesting proposal ๐Ÿ˜…

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • Reader-555364

    Love it!!!

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • 96fairlady

    crash bandicoot!!

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • Kat M

    They better hurry before Dante goes crazy lol

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • I think there are mistakes wirh using "The Edge" instead of "The Core". It pulls me out of immersion when I read rhat "The Edge built a wall" or "sent assasin drones". Other than that a great chapter, as always.

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • Roseam

    Wow what an action packed chapter! I love all Loir's little comments. He named the bots ๐Ÿ˜‚. I'm glad our Kittie's are back together. ๐Ÿ’œ

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • Lei Kela

    my oh my ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • what????

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • SvS ๐Ÿ

    why do I have the feeling that they wonโ€™t sleep much this night ๐Ÿ˜‚

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • conso Africa

    that annoying thing ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • Drawkser

    did not see that one coming lol

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • Kat M

    They are the best!

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • Anet_CZ

    I just started reading yesterday and i sooo love it already ๐Ÿ˜„

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • Anita Mara

    ๐Ÿฅฐ

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • HeatherP312

    yessss pleaseeeeee .

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • Soph Hugh

    Please donโ€™t forget to leave several spaces if you are going to leave spoiler comments everyone!

    09/04/2023 08:29
  • Wcha

    wow didn't expect the kiss or her to react that way

    09/04/2023 08:29