The Songbird's Love Comments

  • Sky Queen

    I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Mulenga Mwamba

    oh my goodness, when is the next update???? so excited

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • what is "strass"?

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Andreea Melinda Mirza

    I thought Dante was Adam when it was revealed that the old Tiger was using the memory technology but now I wonder if maybe just a part of Adam is in Dante. Dante is some kind of new age Frankenstine?

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • KJs Mom

    wow. this is amazing. Jenny you did it again, there’s not a book you’ve written that hasn’t completely taken over my life 🤦🏻‍♀️😂

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Hannah P

    wow! pan finally and it's awesome

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Bonib2

    And Loir🤣🤣🤣

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Roseam

    Yes! Dante is Adam!!!

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Poor Dante! He will be giving hell to his own people for Eden’s sake! 😂☺️😅😅😅 LOVE DANTE!

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Sheetu Zutshi Bhat

    Loir..

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Katie Factor

    Eeeekkk!!! I want Eden to say yes, but I have a feeling she's going to say no for now. Or she might just avoid the question for now, then after the battle she'll say yes... as long as they both make it out alive.

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Love the way Dante and Eden are doing it… A part of Dante would be Adam’s, the part which made him human and lovely… 🥰🥰🥰

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Jenny, love this story!!!

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • OMG can't wait for more.

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Dante is clutch!! I love him!

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • love it:) thank you for this story, even if I have to wait forever for five minutes at a time... I need more!

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Satrupa Mohapatra

    murdering boys to create his perfect hire... Don't get that properly

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • I hope she doesn't push dante away now!

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Kayla Elliott

    ohh I love this story!!

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • I'm so happy I started reading this finally! it's so different but still feels like you Jenny Fox!

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    “To parachute a choco nugget”!!! YOU ARE GREAT, DEAR JENNY!!! 😂😂😂

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Bonib2

    I love Dante and Eden❤❤

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Ludmila Bacova

    preparing for battle

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • linda

    oh hell no. 🙈👌 I reread the whole book, so worth it! ❤ but not the waiting again. 😂🤯🙈🙏

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Nancy

    chapter 68: whaaaaaaaaat?!?!?!? 🤭

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • i understand that we want to believe that they moved him somewhere else. But lets be honest Jenny is know for this kind of things. I was waiting for something like this to happen I didn’t know it was going to be Loir but yeah.

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Love it!!!! I so hope Jenny doesn't break our heart.

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Kathryn Ngatuakana

    dahaha just when i thought she will be ready to let her insecurties go, it ends up back at square one lmao.. cant wait for the day when she finally lets go and says she love him back😁😁😁

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • jen

    I coughed up rice too....and I'm eating chips!

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Julia Lehmann

    Damn, this was intense 😅😆

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Roseam

    Pan in the holographic flesh. A new Edge. The plot thickens.

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • DID OLD MAN LONG JUST OUT HER?!?! What is going on???

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Ieva Igaune

    Sooo cute 💞💞💞

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Anita Mara

    ready for the action!!

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Ahlie

    loving how dante is protective of eden and how eden thought of dante. so when pan was gone after making sure eden is okay, he went on to find members of the new edge😍

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Lally Devon

    Wow 😯 Brilliant Jenny Fox 🦊 Eden commander in chief 😘❤️❤️❤️

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • welcome back ate jenny, , , new chapters

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Alicia Flores

    I mis Loir 😢

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • rosie

    and there it is 🤯🤭

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Reader-397104

    can’t wait for next chapter! when is Pan going to show up? someone needs to kill the governor another character I love to hate! Hope Dante will be ok . what happened to C ?

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Auras Laura

    good beautyfull👏👏😊😊

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • OMG! a young Loir… is it too much to hope Pan was able to warn him in enough time to get him out of the building? I still can’t wrap my head around him being dead.

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • PoisonedPix

    aweeeeeeee ^_^

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Andrea Aludden

    great chapter, per usual. let the battle begin 💥

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • OMG! a young Loir… is it too much to hope Pan was able to warn him in enough time to get him out of the building? I still can’t wrap my head around him being dead.

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • What a loe bloe from th core, but not surprised. What an intense new chapter.

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Lisa

    love it 💘

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Katie Factor

    I really need my own Dante (just don't tell my husband)! 😉🥰

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Drawkser

    this is too good

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Dear Jenny! I can’t get tired of the perfect way you have to end a chapter… It’s beautiful!!! 🥰🥰🥰🙏🙏🙏

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Jesi

    Oh gosh, please don’t let Dante die…I have a bad feeling…I so wish for him and Eden to make it out! Eeeeee!

    09/04/2023 08:22
  • Paula Anna

    I'm betting PAN is her father!

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • This is by far her best one I have read so far. While the last few chapters started to get a little repetitive at times on her thoughts and feelings thT is my only negative really.. , I love the story line and the twists are actually really well thiught out. I it is not easy to find a story with romantic science fiction and then read until I am bummed it is already at the end!

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • PoisonedPix

    yes war!

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    I’m so so excited!!! Eden, please, say “yes!” 🥰🥰🥰

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • I love Dante! he is so intense but I don't think he would ever hurt Eden!

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Lizelle Nel

    I wonder if she is not going to fall pregnant 🤔

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • 96fairlady

    hahahaha Loir gave her a kitty outfit for the dive. makes me crack up every time I read that part

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Gabzzz Rodzzz

    mmmm shooting men when they are late was never hotter 😍

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • another great chapter.

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Alicia Flores

    OMG 😱😱😱😱 he loves her 💖💖💖💖💖💖 that smart tiger waited until she had no place ti run heheje .... I Love you too Dante 😍😍😍😍😍

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Alena O Barry

    well didn't see that one coming.

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • oh my goodness! he got pan there and admitted she was the ghost !

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • wow! he loves her!💋🤩

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Kayla.southerland88

    oh Jenny!! your writing is perfect! as always!! ❤️

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Alicia Flores

    those dam core bastards 😡 go and theach them Eden 😈 kick their core butts

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • PramG

    Loir is so funny! Love the chemistry between Dante and Eden.

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • awesome

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Taina Iosefo

    OMG... she better say YES!! Super excited!! 🥰🥰🥰

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • SuperWhoFly

    Awesome chapter, as usual. 😘 💜

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • nemone van Der bliake

    lovely ❤❤❤❤❤

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Love how protective is Dante!!! 🥰🥰🥰 Can’t wait for the next chapter!!! ☺️😅

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • cindy bruneau

    what!!!!!!!!

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • I've missed this book so much! I love Dante and Eden!

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Elizabeth Hurtado

    God! A want a Dante for myself!!!

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • nemone van Der bliake

    love it! a wedding❤❤❤❤

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • OMG! awsome story!!!! started reading and can't stop!

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Love Dante and Eden! 🥰🥰🥰

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Katie Factor

    So Dante IS Adam... or at least partially him!!!

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Ieva Igaune

    She did say I love you 💞💞

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • I'm not crying!!!!

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Christina Nevarez

    aww!!! ❤❤ Dante!!! what does Eden's name mean though!? I bought your cards from Ko-fi, did we know Eden's last name before!? I have questions!!! 😅

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Jenny I know you think the cliffhangers are great but please throw us a bone or two every so often... this is so frustrating

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • so glad this story is back I missed it! note for editing-when Dante and Eden go back to the elevator after seeing Loir, Eden pulls on Dante’s shirt, but he wasn’t wearing one

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Drawkser

    I can’t get enough of this book 😍😍😍😍😍😍

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Roseam

    Pan and Ghost..... interesting. The Dragon looks set to take the Core down.

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Pinkear

    possible spoiler theory * * * * * * * * I'm so convinced that Pan is going to be Eden's mother

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Loir is hella funny!!!! 😂😂😂

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Erin Ghio

    my favorite love story . 👏👏👏

    09/04/2023 08:21
  • Bonib2

    lmao, spoiler comments. lol. On serious note: Great chapter Jenny. I hope they make it ❤❤❤

    09/04/2023 08:20
  • shanaaz shaz

    ❤❤❤❤❤

    09/04/2023 08:20
  • I can not ever get bored of reading this story! it really has to be my favorite!! I love Dante! I love Eden! I love Loir!!

    09/04/2023 08:20
  • Ahlie

    crazy loir! hahaha

    09/04/2023 08:20
  • Julia Lehmann

    So... Dante is literally a zombie? 😂

    09/04/2023 08:20
  • Soph Hugh

    lovely chapter

    09/04/2023 08:20
  • Ahlie

    can't wait for eden and pan to meet

    09/04/2023 08:20
  • Reader-555364

    Ooooo it’s all about to kick off! 😁💪

    09/04/2023 08:20
  • Hollstar

    hahaha I love Dante! 😂

    09/04/2023 08:20
  • Nikki

    Oh sh*t!

    09/04/2023 08:20
  • PoisonedPix

    hehe surprised the tiger lasted so long

    09/04/2023 08:20