The Songbird's Love Comments
Sky Queen
I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!
09/04/2023 08:22Mulenga Mwamba
oh my goodness, when is the next update???? so excited
09/04/2023 08:22what is "strass"?
09/04/2023 08:22Andreea Melinda Mirza
I thought Dante was Adam when it was revealed that the old Tiger was using the memory technology but now I wonder if maybe just a part of Adam is in Dante. Dante is some kind of new age Frankenstine?
09/04/2023 08:22KJs Mom
wow. this is amazing. Jenny you did it again, there’s not a book you’ve written that hasn’t completely taken over my life 🤦🏻♀️😂
09/04/2023 08:22Hannah P
wow! pan finally and it's awesome
09/04/2023 08:22Bonib2
And Loir🤣🤣🤣
09/04/2023 08:22Roseam
Yes! Dante is Adam!!!
09/04/2023 08:22Beatriz Astorga Morales
Poor Dante! He will be giving hell to his own people for Eden’s sake! 😂☺️😅😅😅 LOVE DANTE!
09/04/2023 08:22Sheetu Zutshi Bhat
Loir..
09/04/2023 08:22Katie Factor
Eeeekkk!!! I want Eden to say yes, but I have a feeling she's going to say no for now. Or she might just avoid the question for now, then after the battle she'll say yes... as long as they both make it out alive.
09/04/2023 08:22Beatriz Astorga Morales
Love the way Dante and Eden are doing it… A part of Dante would be Adam’s, the part which made him human and lovely… 🥰🥰🥰
09/04/2023 08:22Jenny, love this story!!!
09/04/2023 08:22OMG can't wait for more.
09/04/2023 08:22Dante is clutch!! I love him!
09/04/2023 08:22love it:) thank you for this story, even if I have to wait forever for five minutes at a time... I need more!
09/04/2023 08:22Satrupa Mohapatra
murdering boys to create his perfect hire... Don't get that properly
09/04/2023 08:22I hope she doesn't push dante away now!
09/04/2023 08:22Kayla Elliott
ohh I love this story!!
09/04/2023 08:22I'm so happy I started reading this finally! it's so different but still feels like you Jenny Fox!
09/04/2023 08:22Beatriz Astorga Morales
“To parachute a choco nugget”!!! YOU ARE GREAT, DEAR JENNY!!! 😂😂😂
09/04/2023 08:22Bonib2
I love Dante and Eden❤❤
09/04/2023 08:22Ludmila Bacova
preparing for battle
09/04/2023 08:22linda
oh hell no. 🙈👌 I reread the whole book, so worth it! ❤ but not the waiting again. 😂🤯🙈🙏
09/04/2023 08:22Nancy
chapter 68: whaaaaaaaaat?!?!?!? 🤭
09/04/2023 08:22i understand that we want to believe that they moved him somewhere else. But lets be honest Jenny is know for this kind of things. I was waiting for something like this to happen I didn’t know it was going to be Loir but yeah.
09/04/2023 08:22Love it!!!! I so hope Jenny doesn't break our heart.
09/04/2023 08:22Kathryn Ngatuakana
dahaha just when i thought she will be ready to let her insecurties go, it ends up back at square one lmao.. cant wait for the day when she finally lets go and says she love him back😁😁😁
09/04/2023 08:22jen
I coughed up rice too....and I'm eating chips!
09/04/2023 08:22Julia Lehmann
Damn, this was intense 😅😆
09/04/2023 08:22Roseam
Pan in the holographic flesh. A new Edge. The plot thickens.
09/04/2023 08:22DID OLD MAN LONG JUST OUT HER?!?! What is going on???
09/04/2023 08:22Ieva Igaune
Sooo cute 💞💞💞
09/04/2023 08:22Anita Mara
ready for the action!!
09/04/2023 08:22Ahlie
loving how dante is protective of eden and how eden thought of dante. so when pan was gone after making sure eden is okay, he went on to find members of the new edge😍
09/04/2023 08:22Lally Devon
Wow 😯 Brilliant Jenny Fox 🦊 Eden commander in chief 😘❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 08:22welcome back ate jenny, , , new chapters
09/04/2023 08:22Alicia Flores
I mis Loir 😢
09/04/2023 08:22rosie
and there it is 🤯🤭
09/04/2023 08:22Reader-397104
can’t wait for next chapter! when is Pan going to show up? someone needs to kill the governor another character I love to hate! Hope Dante will be ok . what happened to C ?
09/04/2023 08:22Auras Laura
good beautyfull👏👏😊😊
09/04/2023 08:22OMG! a young Loir… is it too much to hope Pan was able to warn him in enough time to get him out of the building? I still can’t wrap my head around him being dead.
09/04/2023 08:22PoisonedPix
aweeeeeeee ^_^
09/04/2023 08:22Andrea Aludden
great chapter, per usual. let the battle begin 💥
09/04/2023 08:22OMG! a young Loir… is it too much to hope Pan was able to warn him in enough time to get him out of the building? I still can’t wrap my head around him being dead.
09/04/2023 08:22What a loe bloe from th core, but not surprised. What an intense new chapter.
09/04/2023 08:22Lisa
love it 💘
09/04/2023 08:22Katie Factor
I really need my own Dante (just don't tell my husband)! 😉🥰
09/04/2023 08:22Drawkser
this is too good
09/04/2023 08:22Beatriz Astorga Morales
Dear Jenny! I can’t get tired of the perfect way you have to end a chapter… It’s beautiful!!! 🥰🥰🥰🙏🙏🙏
09/04/2023 08:22Jesi
Oh gosh, please don’t let Dante die…I have a bad feeling…I so wish for him and Eden to make it out! Eeeeee!
09/04/2023 08:22Paula Anna
I'm betting PAN is her father!
09/04/2023 08:21This is by far her best one I have read so far. While the last few chapters started to get a little repetitive at times on her thoughts and feelings thT is my only negative really.. , I love the story line and the twists are actually really well thiught out. I it is not easy to find a story with romantic science fiction and then read until I am bummed it is already at the end!
09/04/2023 08:21PoisonedPix
yes war!
09/04/2023 08:21Beatriz Astorga Morales
I’m so so excited!!! Eden, please, say “yes!” 🥰🥰🥰
09/04/2023 08:21I love Dante! he is so intense but I don't think he would ever hurt Eden!
09/04/2023 08:21Lizelle Nel
I wonder if she is not going to fall pregnant 🤔
09/04/2023 08:2196fairlady
hahahaha Loir gave her a kitty outfit for the dive. makes me crack up every time I read that part
09/04/2023 08:21Gabzzz Rodzzz
mmmm shooting men when they are late was never hotter 😍
09/04/2023 08:21another great chapter.
09/04/2023 08:21Alicia Flores
OMG 😱😱😱😱 he loves her 💖💖💖💖💖💖 that smart tiger waited until she had no place ti run heheje .... I Love you too Dante 😍😍😍😍😍
09/04/2023 08:21Alena O Barry
well didn't see that one coming.
09/04/2023 08:21oh my goodness! he got pan there and admitted she was the ghost !
09/04/2023 08:21wow! he loves her!💋🤩
09/04/2023 08:21Kayla.southerland88
oh Jenny!! your writing is perfect! as always!! ❤️
09/04/2023 08:21Alicia Flores
those dam core bastards 😡 go and theach them Eden 😈 kick their core butts
09/04/2023 08:21PramG
Loir is so funny! Love the chemistry between Dante and Eden.
09/04/2023 08:21awesome
09/04/2023 08:21Taina Iosefo
OMG... she better say YES!! Super excited!! 🥰🥰🥰
09/04/2023 08:21SuperWhoFly
Awesome chapter, as usual. 😘 💜
09/04/2023 08:21nemone van Der bliake
lovely ❤❤❤❤❤
09/04/2023 08:21Beatriz Astorga Morales
Love how protective is Dante!!! 🥰🥰🥰 Can’t wait for the next chapter!!! ☺️😅
09/04/2023 08:21cindy bruneau
what!!!!!!!!
09/04/2023 08:21I've missed this book so much! I love Dante and Eden!
09/04/2023 08:21Elizabeth Hurtado
God! A want a Dante for myself!!!
09/04/2023 08:21nemone van Der bliake
love it! a wedding❤❤❤❤
09/04/2023 08:21OMG! awsome story!!!! started reading and can't stop!
09/04/2023 08:21Beatriz Astorga Morales
Love Dante and Eden! 🥰🥰🥰
09/04/2023 08:21Katie Factor
So Dante IS Adam... or at least partially him!!!
09/04/2023 08:21Ieva Igaune
She did say I love you 💞💞
09/04/2023 08:21I'm not crying!!!!
09/04/2023 08:21Christina Nevarez
aww!!! ❤❤ Dante!!! what does Eden's name mean though!? I bought your cards from Ko-fi, did we know Eden's last name before!? I have questions!!! 😅
09/04/2023 08:21Jenny I know you think the cliffhangers are great but please throw us a bone or two every so often... this is so frustrating
09/04/2023 08:21so glad this story is back I missed it! note for editing-when Dante and Eden go back to the elevator after seeing Loir, Eden pulls on Dante’s shirt, but he wasn’t wearing one
09/04/2023 08:21Drawkser
I can’t get enough of this book 😍😍😍😍😍😍
09/04/2023 08:21Roseam
Pan and Ghost..... interesting. The Dragon looks set to take the Core down.
09/04/2023 08:21Pinkear
possible spoiler theory * * * * * * * * I'm so convinced that Pan is going to be Eden's mother
09/04/2023 08:21Loir is hella funny!!!! 😂😂😂
09/04/2023 08:21Erin Ghio
my favorite love story . 👏👏👏
09/04/2023 08:21Bonib2
lmao, spoiler comments. lol. On serious note: Great chapter Jenny. I hope they make it ❤❤❤
09/04/2023 08:20shanaaz shaz
❤❤❤❤❤
09/04/2023 08:20I can not ever get bored of reading this story! it really has to be my favorite!! I love Dante! I love Eden! I love Loir!!
09/04/2023 08:20Ahlie
crazy loir! hahaha
09/04/2023 08:20Julia Lehmann
So... Dante is literally a zombie? 😂
09/04/2023 08:20Soph Hugh
lovely chapter
09/04/2023 08:20Ahlie
can't wait for eden and pan to meet
09/04/2023 08:20Reader-555364
Ooooo it’s all about to kick off! 😁💪
09/04/2023 08:20Hollstar
hahaha I love Dante! 😂
09/04/2023 08:20Nikki
Oh sh*t!
09/04/2023 08:20PoisonedPix
hehe surprised the tiger lasted so long
09/04/2023 08:20