The Songbird's Love Comments

Ingrid Ncube

the only way to destroy the core is to kill Pan. maybe that's why he led them there, since is also human he has feelings and is tired of being used. The hackers have uploaded all they needed to start over and they won't need Pan anymore. the poor guy is ready to die or maybe to just communicate with his sister through the new Sin.

Sky Queen

I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!

Mulenga Mwamba

oh my goodness, when is the next update???? so excited

what is "strass"?

Andreea Melinda Mirza

I thought Dante was Adam when it was revealed that the old Tiger was using the memory technology but now I wonder if maybe just a part of Adam is in Dante. Dante is some kind of new age Frankenstine?

KJs Mom

wow. this is amazing. Jenny you did it again, there’s not a book you’ve written that hasn’t completely taken over my life 🤦🏻‍♀️😂

Hannah P

wow! pan finally and it's awesome

Bonib2

And Loir🤣🤣🤣

Roseam

Yes! Dante is Adam!!!

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Poor Dante! He will be giving hell to his own people for Eden’s sake! 😂☺️😅😅😅 LOVE DANTE!

Sheetu Zutshi Bhat

Loir..

Katie Factor

Eeeekkk!!! I want Eden to say yes, but I have a feeling she's going to say no for now. Or she might just avoid the question for now, then after the battle she'll say yes... as long as they both make it out alive.

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Love the way Dante and Eden are doing it… A part of Dante would be Adam’s, the part which made him human and lovely… 🥰🥰🥰

Jenny, love this story!!!

OMG can't wait for more.

Dante is clutch!! I love him!

love it:) thank you for this story, even if I have to wait forever for five minutes at a time... I need more!

Satrupa Mohapatra

murdering boys to create his perfect hire... Don't get that properly

I hope she doesn't push dante away now!

Kayla Elliott

ohh I love this story!!

I'm so happy I started reading this finally! it's so different but still feels like you Jenny Fox!

Beatriz Astorga Morales

“To parachute a choco nugget”!!! YOU ARE GREAT, DEAR JENNY!!! 😂😂😂

Bonib2

I love Dante and Eden❤❤

Ludmila Bacova

preparing for battle

linda

oh hell no. 🙈👌 I reread the whole book, so worth it! ❤ but not the waiting again. 😂🤯🙈🙏

Nancy

chapter 68: whaaaaaaaaat?!?!?!? 🤭

i understand that we want to believe that they moved him somewhere else. But lets be honest Jenny is know for this kind of things. I was waiting for something like this to happen I didn’t know it was going to be Loir but yeah.

Love it!!!! I so hope Jenny doesn't break our heart.

Kathryn Ngatuakana

dahaha just when i thought she will be ready to let her insecurties go, it ends up back at square one lmao.. cant wait for the day when she finally lets go and says she love him back😁😁😁

jen

I coughed up rice too....and I'm eating chips!

Julia Lehmann

Damn, this was intense 😅😆

Roseam

Pan in the holographic flesh. A new Edge. The plot thickens.

DID OLD MAN LONG JUST OUT HER?!?! What is going on???

Ieva Igaune

Sooo cute 💞💞💞

Anita Mara

ready for the action!!

Ahlie

loving how dante is protective of eden and how eden thought of dante. so when pan was gone after making sure eden is okay, he went on to find members of the new edge😍

Lally Devon

Wow 😯 Brilliant Jenny Fox 🦊 Eden commander in chief 😘❤️❤️❤️

welcome back ate jenny, , , new chapters

Alicia Flores

I mis Loir 😢

rosie

and there it is 🤯🤭

Reader-397104

can’t wait for next chapter! when is Pan going to show up? someone needs to kill the governor another character I love to hate! Hope Dante will be ok . what happened to C ?

Auras Laura

good beautyfull👏👏😊😊

OMG! a young Loir… is it too much to hope Pan was able to warn him in enough time to get him out of the building? I still can’t wrap my head around him being dead.

PoisonedPix

aweeeeeeee ^_^

Andrea Aludden

great chapter, per usual. let the battle begin 💥

OMG! a young Loir… is it too much to hope Pan was able to warn him in enough time to get him out of the building? I still can’t wrap my head around him being dead.

What a loe bloe from th core, but not surprised. What an intense new chapter.

Lisa

love it 💘

Katie Factor

I really need my own Dante (just don't tell my husband)! 😉🥰

Drawkser

this is too good

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Dear Jenny! I can’t get tired of the perfect way you have to end a chapter… It’s beautiful!!! 🥰🥰🥰🙏🙏🙏

Jesi

Oh gosh, please don’t let Dante die…I have a bad feeling…I so wish for him and Eden to make it out! Eeeeee!

Paula Anna

I'm betting PAN is her father!

This is by far her best one I have read so far. While the last few chapters started to get a little repetitive at times on her thoughts and feelings thT is my only negative really.. , I love the story line and the twists are actually really well thiught out. I it is not easy to find a story with romantic science fiction and then read until I am bummed it is already at the end!

PoisonedPix

yes war!

Beatriz Astorga Morales

I’m so so excited!!! Eden, please, say “yes!” 🥰🥰🥰

I love Dante! he is so intense but I don't think he would ever hurt Eden!

Lizelle Nel

I wonder if she is not going to fall pregnant 🤔

96fairlady

hahahaha Loir gave her a kitty outfit for the dive. makes me crack up every time I read that part

Gabzzz Rodzzz

mmmm shooting men when they are late was never hotter 😍

another great chapter.

Alicia Flores

OMG 😱😱😱😱 he loves her 💖💖💖💖💖💖 that smart tiger waited until she had no place ti run heheje .... I Love you too Dante 😍😍😍😍😍

Alena O Barry

well didn't see that one coming.

oh my goodness! he got pan there and admitted she was the ghost !

wow! he loves her!💋🤩

Kayla.southerland88

oh Jenny!! your writing is perfect! as always!! ❤️

Alicia Flores

those dam core bastards 😡 go and theach them Eden 😈 kick their core butts

PramG

Loir is so funny! Love the chemistry between Dante and Eden.

awesome

Taina Iosefo

OMG... she better say YES!! Super excited!! 🥰🥰🥰

SuperWhoFly

Awesome chapter, as usual. 😘 💜

nemone van Der bliake

lovely ❤❤❤❤❤

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Love how protective is Dante!!! 🥰🥰🥰 Can’t wait for the next chapter!!! ☺️😅

cindy bruneau

what!!!!!!!!

I've missed this book so much! I love Dante and Eden!

Elizabeth Hurtado

God! A want a Dante for myself!!!

nemone van Der bliake

love it! a wedding❤❤❤❤

OMG! awsome story!!!! started reading and can't stop!

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Love Dante and Eden! 🥰🥰🥰

Katie Factor

So Dante IS Adam... or at least partially him!!!

Ieva Igaune

She did say I love you 💞💞

I'm not crying!!!!

Christina Nevarez

aww!!! ❤❤ Dante!!! what does Eden's name mean though!? I bought your cards from Ko-fi, did we know Eden's last name before!? I have questions!!! 😅

Jenny I know you think the cliffhangers are great but please throw us a bone or two every so often... this is so frustrating

so glad this story is back I missed it! note for editing-when Dante and Eden go back to the elevator after seeing Loir, Eden pulls on Dante’s shirt, but he wasn’t wearing one

Drawkser

I can’t get enough of this book 😍😍😍😍😍😍

Roseam

Pan and Ghost..... interesting. The Dragon looks set to take the Core down.

Pinkear

possible spoiler theory * * * * * * * * I'm so convinced that Pan is going to be Eden's mother

Loir is hella funny!!!! 😂😂😂

Erin Ghio

my favorite love story . 👏👏👏

Bonib2

lmao, spoiler comments. lol. On serious note: Great chapter Jenny. I hope they make it ❤❤❤

shanaaz shaz

❤❤❤❤❤

I can not ever get bored of reading this story! it really has to be my favorite!! I love Dante! I love Eden! I love Loir!!

Ahlie

crazy loir! hahaha

Julia Lehmann

So... Dante is literally a zombie? 😂

Soph Hugh

lovely chapter

Ahlie

can't wait for eden and pan to meet

Reader-555364

Ooooo it’s all about to kick off! 😁💪

Hollstar

hahaha I love Dante! 😂

Nikki

Oh sh*t!