The Songbird's Love Comments

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    I hope that just part of that technology can heal Dante and Eden before they destroy everything! 🙏☺️

    09/04/2023 08:47

  • I'm a glutton for punishment that's why I keep coming back to Jenny's stories. why why why. 😭😭😭

    09/04/2023 08:47

  • Ludmila Bacova

    oh oh oh, my poor heart...

    09/04/2023 08:47

  • shanaaz shaz

    no f**King way 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

    09/04/2023 08:47

  • Auras Laura

    interesting...

    09/04/2023 08:47

  • love itt

    09/04/2023 08:47

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Love this story!!! 👍👍👍

    09/04/2023 08:47

  • Analee Deniz

    😭😭😭

    09/04/2023 08:47

  • enough talking already let's end this.

    09/04/2023 08:47

  • Mina

    Oh noooo 🙈 great chapter, Jenny! you had me on the edge of my seat!

    09/04/2023 08:47

  • Roseam

    Such heartbreak and hope at once.

    09/04/2023 08:47

  • Lei Kela

    I didn't realize that I like dystopian stories until I read this. been following this masterpiece for several months. I'm totally converted.

    09/04/2023 08:47

  • Nancy

    85.. crying 😔

    09/04/2023 08:47

  • Satrupa Mohapatra

    Loir.....It was the heart wrecking chapter for me ...Loir was my fevorite characters of all ... the crazy Genius I must say ..

    09/04/2023 08:47

  • Ludmila Bacova

    so the mind games begin...

    09/04/2023 08:46

  • Christina Nevarez

    I knew it!!! .... ... ... ... they have to kill Pan to destry the core, T_T Omg!! I never would've guessed who Pan was. :( ... Now, Please let Dante be ok and safe, I'm so anxious about his wellbeing

    09/04/2023 08:46

  • Bethany Newsom

    Is Pan part of the core

    09/04/2023 08:46

  • shanaaz shaz

    oh gosh

    09/04/2023 08:46

  • Marie hollend

    no !!!!! my heart just shattered he has to live he just has too

    09/04/2023 08:46

  • my mind is completely blown!!!

    09/04/2023 08:46

  • shanaaz shaz

    ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

    09/04/2023 08:46

  • Luz Castro

    I started reading it a week ago and I can't put it down!!! I love the book so far, you're a great writer Jenny!!👏👏👏

    09/04/2023 08:46

  • shanaaz shaz

    ❤❤❤❤

    09/04/2023 08:46

  • Roseam

    Loir really was a crazy genius!!!

    09/04/2023 08:46

  • Penny A Foxie

    86 Omg this chapter had me in tears. One last hurrah for Loir. He knew exactly what he was doing. The government have lost their edge! No pun intended! 😭😂

    09/04/2023 08:46

  • Tabitha Groves

    I was crying for sure. Didn't want to hut couldn't help it. I have a feeling she's going to have to kill him 🥺 On a side note, maybe he's fixed her SIN so she can communicate with everyone again.

    09/04/2023 08:45

  • SvS 🐝

    And here she goes again: killing hundreds of people within a second 🙈🙈 Jennyyyyyy

    09/04/2023 08:45

  • Mina

    Noooooooooo!!! 🥺😭😭😭

    09/04/2023 08:45

  • One of the saddest heartbreak ever.. Missing Loir already..😭😭😭

    09/04/2023 08:45

  • Christina Nevarez

    oh my goodness!!! what's gonna happen!!! 😫

    09/04/2023 08:45

  • Wow very intense chapter

    09/04/2023 08:45

  • Nicole R

    I am enjoying this book very much. Better then many on this site, and fewer spelling/grammar errors. Thank you to the Author. :)

    09/04/2023 08:45

  • Roseam

    Completely effing unhinged dictator! There's always someone who thinks they know better than everyone else.

    09/04/2023 08:45

  • Mina

    Ugh 😣 I want to throat punch that governor 😑 so nervous for Dante and the rest of their allies! great writing, Jenny! 💕

    09/04/2023 08:45

  • 85.......... Losing Loir is like losing one of the ML, he was a great character with more potential till the end of the story, and the fun, sadness and crazyness of this novel.

    09/04/2023 08:45

  • wow. just wow. in a good way. wow.

    09/04/2023 08:45

  • L Mo

    matrix is back in fashion.

    09/04/2023 08:45

  • cindy bruneau

    I'm not crying....

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Youvanne

    heart breakening

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    I hope Loir is alive!!! I miss him! 🥺🥺🥺

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

    The rogue pair indeed!

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Ludmila Bacova

    OMG OMG OMG!!! My head is spinning, where are we heading?!?!?!

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Still crying, I just love Lior so much!

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • OMG! a young Loir… is it too much to hope Pan was able to warn him in enough time to get him out of the building? I still can’t wrap my head around him being dead.

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Mina

    Ahhh Dante 😍🥰🥰

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Wcha

    loir cracks me up

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Shrut Keerti

    I hope pan is not linked physically and can't get out stuff. that will b really sad 😥

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Alicia Flores

    o noooopp not Loir.... I like Loir 😰😰😰 please tell me that he had a back up plane all along 😵😵😵

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Satrupa Mohapatra

    Governor is the scum who did all this

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Kat M

    Mind games, Dante will pull her through

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Roseam

    If her mother is really alive it's only so they can manipulate Eden. Don't believe anything they say.

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Luna_Lothal

    😪 such a beautiful ending. thank you Jenny for a other wonderful story.

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Rasha Abed

    so sad for loir, but the way it was written was so vivid I could clearly picture it in my mind and the song choice " non, je ne regrette rien by edith piaf" for the ending was legendary i was literally singing it with him in the end and i could hear the music in my head like the background in a movie scene.

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • my favorite duo 😭🖤🖤🖤🖤 I hope Dante is ok!

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Roseam

    Not Loir! Warlock better have a trick or two up his sleeve.

    09/04/2023 08:44

  • Julia Lehmann

    poor Charles... I hope this helps Eden

    09/04/2023 08:43

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    I think Pan is going to cheat Eden so she can destroy the Core but she’s going to kill him too… 😭😭😭

    09/04/2023 08:43

  • Soph Hugh

    wow!

    09/04/2023 08:43

  • Robin

    ❤️❤️❤️

    09/04/2023 08:43

  • end of chapter 85.... can we get the English translation please??

    09/04/2023 08:43

  • Lol she shot him

    09/04/2023 08:43

  • what's Adam's role in all these? or the testing on children bought by the Italians? or her ability to sing? these things have been nagging me. like what's the significance.

    09/04/2023 08:43

  • Soph Hugh

    noooooo 😭

    09/04/2023 08:43

  • Auras Laura

    👏👏👏🥰🥰🥰🥰

    09/04/2023 08:43

  • Ludmila Bacova

    Circe in fighting mode 😉

    09/04/2023 08:43

  • Drawkser

    that hurt! it’s a really bitter sweet feeling! he is gone but we left something he will be remembered for. Gosh I wasn’t ready for this dosis of sadness. thank you for the chapter.

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • Lei Kela

    oh is this the truth? can Eden trust the Core? most likely no, but what if they're telling the truth for once? Eden has to be stronger to not fall for the trap

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • more please!

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • Ana Morales

    🤧😥😢😭💕💕💕

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • Reader-397104

    As always great update! and great cliffhanger!

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • Tamara Bennett

    absolutely loved the closure and ending. very sad, but such a good book!!

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • Maria Patricia

    i don't know if I'm ready to let this story ... i don't want to come to an and! i had a hard time reading it ❤️ but i love it so much! Jenny Fox 🦊 you are so talented! don't ever stop writing! thank you for all these magical worlds you create for us to escape!

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • Silky Gupta

    ********* Noooooooooooo!! I don't want Loir to dieeee, plssssssssss

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • Sh Ae

    great writing. imaginative. inventive. creative. ...so jealous of your brain...

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • HeatherP312

    Big Kitty to the rescue!!

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • Ieva Igaune

    Ending of this chapter was sad..

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    I’m waiting for PAN to make his appearance!! 🤜🤜🤜

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Whaaaat! Oh! it would be possible! But I’m afraid it’s just a cruel joke of the Core… 🙄🙄🙄

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

    it's getting real....

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • woooooooo! that was crazy!

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • Ludmila Bacova

    it's getting more and more intense...

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • oh what a great ending!! definitely a bit very sad but I loved it 😭🖤

    09/04/2023 08:42

  • Penny A Foxie

    87 It’s about time Pan showed up! I really hope he can help her bring them down! also Dante, adorable. keeping his lady happy! :)

    09/04/2023 08:41

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Such an amazing story!!! Thank you so much, dear JENNY!!!

    09/04/2023 08:41

  • Meg Roberts

    love the epilogue... little songbird may have made me tear up.. Thankyou Jenny

    09/04/2023 08:41

  • Happy and Sad at the same time. Great Book.

    09/04/2023 08:41

  • Khadijah Rivera

    I wish Dante could've lived to know his baby. This was an awesome story. Can't wait foe the epilogue.

    09/04/2023 08:41

  • Danielle Cuthbert

    noooo!! not loir! but isn't Jac and the dogs there too or did they go to the slums?

    09/04/2023 08:41

  • Jennifer L. Giambrone

    thank God he made it...

    09/04/2023 08:41

  • I liked Charles

    09/04/2023 08:41

  • xian

    I really hope Loir jack and pups r alive

    09/04/2023 08:41

  • Beth Wiles

    glad Dante finally made it to Eden. can’t wait to see how the rest of the war goes

    09/04/2023 08:41

  • Mia

    #88 Thank you Jenny for another amazing story! Can’t believe I’ve all caught up ☺️ I started this one waiting for LD, letting chapters gather to binge read and it worked, but now I’m here… Hard to find another author that writes as good as you Jenny, picky reader here 😅, but I’ll try some of your writer friends that you mentioned in one of your live on Fb. So, so, so excited to find out what happens next with Eden and Dante!! xx

    09/04/2023 08:41

  • absolutely loved the ending.

    09/04/2023 08:41

  • Winter Rose

    Such s good end

    09/04/2023 08:41

  • Gee Higgins

    great chapter the hell bomb was just sad 😥😔 but Eden, Dante and Loir they got this

    09/04/2023 08:40

  • Anthony

    I've been thinking, wondering and hoping for a while now if Pan was Eden's father.

    09/04/2023 08:40

  • Kayla Elliott

    I still can’t imagine loir actually being gone!! I think maybe he did this to fake his life and end “warlock” get off the raider so to speak….at least I hope!! I love him too much! this was an amazing chapter!

    09/04/2023 08:40

  • Katie Factor

    Loir!!! 😭 I'm hoping Dante and Loir, or Pan, assumed something like this would happen and either moved Loir after they all left Dante's place, or made it look like he was somewhere he actually wasn't, and that he's just playing dead. Maybe this is why Pan hasn't shown up yet. I hope he's OK and comes back later perfectly fine and helps Eden again. 🤞🤞🤞🤞

    09/04/2023 08:40

  • Alicia Flores

    hahaha Dante never missin the oportunity to tell every one they are married 💕💕💕

    09/04/2023 08:40
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