The Songbird's Love Comments

  • Reader-397104

    great update! love learning more about the past nice break from the action but hard choice coming for Eden. love your writing Jenny 💙❤️💜!

    09/18/2021 04:35

  • Florie Frane

    Missing Loir so much..🥺🥺🥺

    09/18/2021 03:21

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    So good chapter! Thank you so much, dear Jenny! 🙏🙏🙏

    09/18/2021 02:26

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Poor Eden if she needs to choose between destroy the Core or kill his older brother 😭😭😭

    09/18/2021 02:25

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    So Pan wants to help Eden… 🥰🥰🥰

    09/18/2021 02:23

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    I hope Loir is alive!!! I miss him! 🥺🥺🥺

    09/18/2021 02:23

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    My god!!! what a sad story about Pan… 😭😭😭 But I like the way he has taken care of Eden… 🙏🙏🙏

    09/18/2021 02:22

  • Karine Provencher

    i think Loir is not dead…

    09/18/2021 01:09

  • Ahlie

    tough choice for eden❣

    09/17/2021 23:35

  • Mina Song

    I knew it! I really hope they can destroy the core without killing Pan!

    09/17/2021 21:40

  • Nancy

    chapter 92: just awesome! 👏👏👏

    09/17/2021 20:48

  • Ludmila Bacova

    a great chapter! so looking forward to the next one. ❤

    09/17/2021 20:21

  • Stephanie Messner Smith

    Lior 😭😭😭😭

    09/17/2021 20:11

  • Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

    I knew Loir was special. I miss him

    09/17/2021 19:55

  • Reader-555364

    Loved it! Love the truth unravelling! 💪

    09/17/2021 19:50

  • Alicia Flores

    I mis Loir 😢

    09/17/2021 19:41

  • Nikki

    Wow... It's heartbreaking, yet amazing at the same time

    09/16/2021 22:15

  • SvS 🐝

    pan is already my hero ♥️

    09/16/2021 21:41

  • Soph Hugh

    I am on a roller coaster of emotions

    09/16/2021 20:59

  • Soph Hugh

    noooooo 😭

    09/16/2021 18:11

  • Ingrid Ncube

    the only way to destroy the core is to kill Pan. maybe that's why he led them there, since is also human he has feelings and is tired of being used. The hackers have uploaded all they needed to start over and they won't need Pan anymore. the poor guy is ready to die or maybe to just communicate with his sister through the new Sin.

    09/16/2021 09:45

  • Youvanne

    heart breakening

    09/16/2021 05:28

  • T.H.E. Miller.C

    I can not even read this next chapters or the comments.. I just don’t want it to end yet!

    09/16/2021 04:44

  • Analee Deniz

    🤯🤯🤯

    09/16/2021 04:40

  • Roseam

    All I can say is WOW! Amazing and incredibly sad at the same time.

    09/16/2021 01:38

  • Nancy

    chapter 91: my heart breaks for Pan 😢

    09/15/2021 23:33

  • Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

    just curious though, why was Loir's face not displayed when the edge was....? any link between Loir and PAN? and lastly I don't envy Eden, though choice to make

    09/15/2021 23:11

  • Penny A Foxie

    91 The governor is a monster and her father isn’t much better… I had a feeling Pan was just a consciousness in the machine. Hopefully this means they can bring it down together.

    09/15/2021 22:37

  • xian

    woahhhhh

    09/15/2021 22:29

  • Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

    Honestly I don't know what to think again

    09/15/2021 22:28

  • KrairedEyes

    I knew it!!! .... ... ... ... they have to kill Pan to destry the core, T_T Omg!! I never would've guessed who Pan was. :( ... Now, Please let Dante be ok and safe, I'm so anxious about his wellbeing

    09/15/2021 22:03

  • MReinanda

    If they destroy the core, they will destroy Pan.

    09/15/2021 21:58

  • MReinanda

    Wow, Pan, This is so incredibly sad.

    09/15/2021 21:58

  • Bethany Newsom

    Is Pan part of the core

    09/15/2021 21:46

  • Kat M

    that's so sad!

    09/15/2021 21:27

  • Kelly Kearby Berger

    my mind is completely blown!!!

    09/15/2021 21:23

  • Reader-397104

    love the update! what’s going to be next?

    09/15/2021 21:06

  • Mina

    oh gosh, how sad 🥺 I hope she doesn’t have to lose him too 😔

    09/15/2021 20:47

  • Ludmila Bacova

    my brain keeps exploding with the new revelations...

    09/15/2021 20:41

  • Tabitha Groves

    I was crying for sure. Didn't want to hut couldn't help it. I have a feeling she's going to have to kill him 🥺 On a side note, maybe he's fixed her SIN so she can communicate with everyone again.

    09/15/2021 20:30

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Now, what are really Pan’s intentions? To destroy or protect the Core??? 😱😱😱

    09/15/2021 20:20

  • Mina Song

    damn. the chapters just get more and more sad as it goes on 😭😭 I think… if Eden was to destroy the core, maybe it’s linked to PAN and she would have to kill her brother to bring them down. what if PAN is the key? like if he knew all the answers and how to destroy the core, it would mean killing him because he survives in there only and if the place is destroyed, he dies too? this is making me soooo sad 💔💔

    09/15/2021 20:20

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    So sad! So terrible way to know about his older brother… 🥺🥺🥺

    09/15/2021 20:19

  • Alicia Flores

    I feel so bad for Pan 😢 I really hate the Govenor 😡 I hope Eden finds a way to end these madness but maybe Pan wil be no more 😰😰😰

    09/15/2021 19:56

  • shanaaz shaz

    damn just damn

    09/15/2021 19:55

  • Soph Hugh

    heavy chapter! poor Eden doesn’t catch a break

    09/15/2021 19:02

  • Alicia Flores

    I wonder where is Pan 🤔 is he the one who does the experiments? is he a prisoner there? did the Core colect only his brain or something ceepy like that?😲😵 I need an update 😬

    09/15/2021 17:20

  • MReinanda

    Wow very intense chapter

    09/13/2021 20:03

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    I hope that just part of that technology can heal Dante and Eden before they destroy everything! 🙏☺️

    09/13/2021 14:49

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    I’m in shock just to believe Eden’s father would create something like that 😱😱😱 But my feel is that he was so clever to tell the Core about the Edge in the way the Core couldn’t suspect about them to be able to destroy it 👊👊👊

    09/13/2021 14:47

  • laterseen

    what's Adam's role in all these? or the testing on children bought by the Italians? or her ability to sing? these things have been nagging me. like what's the significance.

    09/13/2021 14:12

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    😱😱😱😱😭😭😭

    09/13/2021 05:14

  • Kelly Kearby Berger

    how do you even try to process this!

    09/12/2021 23:06

  • L Mo

    matrix is back in fashion.

    09/12/2021 22:03

  • T.H.E. Miller.C

    no spoilers, fellow readers… this story is too good any one wanting to comment and just starting out uou will take it away from them a bit!

    09/12/2021 14:47

  • T.H.E. Miller.C

    for me, the best cliff hanger of all your stories yet!

    09/12/2021 14:46

  • Reader-561

    I can’t wait for the next chapter! so intense. great writing Jenny!!!

    09/12/2021 02:19

  • Nikki

    Well damn

    09/11/2021 19:09

  • SvS 🐝

    uffff I really hope he’s lying because the alternative would be pretty messed up

    09/11/2021 17:02

  • laterseen

    90 everything is destroyed, everyone is dead, dying or about to die. what's the point of all of these?

    09/11/2021 12:13

  • Penny A Foxie

    90 I just feel like he’s lying to her… I really hope so. Why would she be forced to leave if he hadn’t gone against the Core… :/ So worried about Dante too… :(

    09/11/2021 11:36

  • shanaaz shaz

    wow ok that messed my mind

    09/11/2021 09:45

  • Roseam

    Wow he was either brilliant or brilliantly f###ed up! It's 50/50 whether the Governor is lying or not.

    09/11/2021 07:14

  • Web Bookworm

    Anyone think the Governor is her father?

    09/11/2021 03:38

  • Kat M

    I hope she doesn't believe him

    09/11/2021 01:03

  • PramG

    I hope what the Governor saying is not true! Please don’t let Dante died. My heart can’t take it. Hope Eden will find a way to stop it all.

    09/11/2021 00:25

  • Robin

    Jenny you’re about to drop a bomb in us and break our hearts again. aren’t you? I have a sick feeling about everything going on. Please don’t do that to us. The loss of Loir was enough 😢

    09/11/2021 00:19

  • Mina

    Ugh 😣 I want to throat punch that governor 😑 so nervous for Dante and the rest of their allies! great writing, Jenny! 💕

    09/10/2021 23:35

  • Mina Song

    omggg I can’t stop this feeling of nervousness!!! I’m soooo worried about Dante! I swear if he dies, I’m dying too 😭💀 I swear if Eden loses him, it will be a heart break like no other 😭💔💔

    09/10/2021 22:53

  • Nancy

    Something tells me that Pan’s brain is in one of those tanks and his consciousness is trapped in the core 😢

    09/10/2021 21:48

  • Ludmila Bacova

    OMG OMG OMG!!! My head is spinning, where are we heading?!?!?!

    09/10/2021 21:44

  • Reader-397104

    can’t wait for next chapter! when is Pan going to show up? someone needs to kill the governor another character I love to hate! Hope Dante will be ok . what happened to C ?

    09/10/2021 21:34

  • Jesi

    Oh gosh, please don’t let Dante die…I have a bad feeling…I so wish for him and Eden to make it out! Eeeeee!

    09/10/2021 20:43

  • Meg Roberts

    oh damn. i though daddy had redeemed . mayb not...

    09/10/2021 20:41

  • Satrupa Mohapatra

    Governor is the scum who did all this

    09/10/2021 20:35

  • Bonib2

    Darn, cannot wait for the next update Jenny. I hope they make that governor eat his words.

    09/10/2021 20:01

  • Reader-555364

    Wow. This is going to be one HELL of an ending! 😮😬

    09/10/2021 19:49

  • Kelly Kearby Berger

    oh snap!

    09/10/2021 16:50

  • KrairedEyes

    oh my goodness!!! what's gonna happen!!! 😫

    09/10/2021 14:10

  • laterseen

    when everyone is dead, who will savour the victory?

    09/10/2021 06:15

  • Kayla Elliott

    wait….nearing the end?!? noooo I don’t feel like this story has been going long enough 😩😩 I want Dante and eden to make it out and I want to know how they rebuild everything…start over!! please!!! if it has to end, let’s have a 2nd book!!!!

    09/09/2021 23:32

  • shanaaz shaz

    oh gosh

    09/09/2021 17:58

  • Ludmila Bacova

    it's getting more and more intense...

    09/09/2021 17:16

  • Penny A Foxie

    89 Eek my heart almost stopped! I hope they both survive, this is getting intense! The governor needs to go!!!!

    09/09/2021 12:39

  • Mee 224

    Jenny please don't kill Dante !!!

    09/09/2021 11:49

  • SvS 🐝

    I’m so excited to read the next chapter but also terrified thinking of possible outcomes 🙈

    09/09/2021 07:38

  • Mina Song

    oh my heart!!!! please, don’t let anymore die Jenny 😭💔💔💔 she can’t lose Dante, not the only last person she truly loves and needs the most 😭😭

    09/09/2021 06:10

  • PramG

    Wow! What a chapter? Please don’t tell me that Pan is the Governor???

    09/09/2021 05:37

  • Reader-397104

    wow very action packed update and the cliffhanger. How is he and Pan on the same floor?

    09/09/2021 04:13

  • Myrianthe Marton

    woooooooo! that was crazy!

    09/09/2021 02:13

  • Michelle Hill

    what happened to Circe!?!?

    09/09/2021 02:06

  • xian

    so good!!

    09/09/2021 01:47

  • Roseam

    My heart was in my mouth most of that chapter. Very evocative. Very well written. 💜💜💜

    09/08/2021 23:45

  • Mia

    Really good update Jenny xx Thank you!!

    09/08/2021 23:26

  • Andreea Melinda Mirza

    Oh no! 🙀

    09/08/2021 23:25

  • Evita Celeste

    who is here seeing the correlation with what's going on in the real world and this? it's like 1984. imagine 100 year and they read this like OMG.

    09/08/2021 21:48

  • Iani328

    worst cliffhanger ever!!! I don’t think I can’t wait anymore! I need resolution Jenny! great chapter though. :)

    09/08/2021 21:32

  • nv4

    I'm not crying!!!!

    09/08/2021 20:41

  • Mina

    Oh noooo 🙈 great chapter, Jenny! you had me on the edge of my seat!

    09/08/2021 20:37

  • Stephanie Messner Smith

    Each chapter gets better and better!

    09/08/2021 20:23
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