The Songbird's Love Comments
Bonib2
lmao, spoiler comments. lol. On serious note: Great chapter Jenny. I hope they make it ❤❤❤
09/08/2021 20:10Alicia Flores
oh noooo Adennis bleeding out 😱😱😱
09/08/2021 20:04
Reader-555364
Aaaaaarrrrggghhh!! I can’t cope with the tension!! 😮😮😬😬😂
09/08/2021 20:00Reader-555364
Aaaaaarrrrggghhh!! I can’t cope with the tension!! 😮😮😬😬😂
09/08/2021 20:00
nemone van Der bliake
it's getting so tense and exciting
09/08/2021 19:51
Mia
#88 Thank you Jenny for another amazing story! Can’t believe I’ve all caught up ☺️ I started this one waiting for LD, letting chapters gather to binge read and it worked, but now I’m here… Hard to find another author that writes as good as you Jenny, picky reader here 😅, but I’ll try some of your writer friends that you mentioned in one of your live on Fb. So, so, so excited to find out what happens next with Eden and Dante!! xx
09/08/2021 15:08Mia
#77 lLoved how you used “spring mall cleaning after a Black Friday, after a pandemic..” :)))) adding a bit of reality in there ;) Love your style Jenny!! let’s see what happens next ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
09/04/2021 13:51
Beatriz Astorga Morales
Such an amazing story!!! Thank you so much, dear JENNY!!!
09/04/2021 13:18
Mina
So excited that Eden is going up to try and find Pan! Hope this gives her all the insight she needs about her past 💕
09/03/2021 21:00
Nikki
What if Pan is Eden's dad's consciousness uploaded to the system?
09/03/2021 20:18
KrairedEyes
#85 Crazy I just decided... Loir has to be alive, Jenny wouldn't let those puppies die, if Loir died, who saved the puppies!?
09/03/2021 15:25Anne Embery
this is so exciting, I almost feel like I'm there lol.
09/03/2021 11:49
Mina Song
oh Dante 😂🖤🖤 he’s definitely my type and my favorite 😏🖤🖤🖤
09/03/2021 10:13Andreea Melinda Mirza
"Nobody asked Delicate!" 😂😂😂😂😂
09/03/2021 07:02
Elite Knight
ohmygosh dante de luca is just so damn adorable!!!!!!!! 😂😂😂😂😂 Arghhhh i love emmm
09/03/2021 02:54
Kat M
I feel like Pan is an important male from her life before she left the core.
09/03/2021 02:00
Books R Lyfe
hmnn I wonder if Pan is the sentient part of the systems A.I …. and his physical body is the entire computer system. Maybe Pan is an acronym for something like Physical Artificial Network. Thinking about the legend of the God Prometheus, he helped humankind evolve by stealing fire from Zeus and teaching humans how to use it. So Pan has a similar function. Shrug. Can only wait and see what is revealed in future chapters.
09/03/2021 01:16
Roseam
I love the back and forth with all the characters. They're in the middle of a gunfight and still funny as heck. Love your writing Jenny! 💜
09/02/2021 23:47
Penny A Foxie
88 ha ha Dante 💕 I love how much he cares about Eden. I just hope Eden can make it up to the heart. I have a feeling Pan is part of the system now… no pysical body… getting good!
09/02/2021 22:55Ludmila Bacova
such a fitting ending to the chapter 😉
09/02/2021 22:41Reader-397104
great update! hopefully we can get more answers about Pan. ❤️your writing Jenny!
09/02/2021 22:18
shanaaz shaz
❤❤❤❤❤❤
09/02/2021 22:12
Satrupa Mohapatra
I feel like pan is Eden's father or brother who is trapped in the core ..as per the previous chapters pan appeared after her father's death or what ever it was
09/02/2021 21:42Teresa Bryant
I think Pan is her father and he's the heart of the system... I hope I'm wrong
09/02/2021 21:22
SvS 🐝
hahahhahaha he must be like “if you must use rogue, please say rogue married pair” 😏
09/02/2021 21:05Stephanie Messner Smith
Every chapter is one cliffhanger after the other! It’s so good!
09/02/2021 20:43MReinanda
Hehhe love Dante's personality
09/02/2021 20:24Alicia Flores
hahaha Dante never missin the oportunity to tell every one they are married 💕💕💕
09/02/2021 19:50Reader-555364
Love it!!!
09/02/2021 19:36Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma
The rogue pair indeed!
09/02/2021 19:34Ieva Igaune
The last sentence is epic 🤣🤣
09/02/2021 19:27
Shrut Keerti
I hope pan is not linked physically and can't get out stuff. that will b really sad 😥
09/02/2021 19:21Dakota Turnbough
87.... I firmly believe that Newman is both PAN and Eden's real last name and they're related but I don't think that PAN is the Architect. I think he's more likely an older brother who knew more and was able to hide take over their father's legacy. The Architect was too big to be able to hide like that inside the Core and I think Eden's mom is dead plus there was no indication she was any good at hacking.
09/02/2021 14:35shanaaz shaz
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
09/01/2021 20:49Beatriz Astorga Morales
PAN just got into the action! 👊👊👊 Can’t wait for the next chapter 🥳🥳🥳
09/01/2021 03:01
Anet_CZ
I just started reading yesterday and i sooo love it already 😄
08/31/2021 07:27Ludmila Bacova
Circe in fighting mode 😉
08/29/2021 15:24Anita Mara
😱😱😱
08/29/2021 03:58
Nancy
86.. oh Loir.. giving to Core the middle finger again 😄
08/29/2021 02:27Nancy
85.. crying 😔
08/29/2021 02:25Yaya
85.......... Losing Loir is like losing one of the ML, he was a great character with more potential till the end of the story, and the fun, sadness and crazyness of this novel.
08/28/2021 22:26Elite Knight
oh god..! i swear I'm gonna die of overworking heart rn 😂 this is so crazy amazing!!!!! i got nervous in anticipating
08/28/2021 16:00
Sh Ae
great writing. imaginative. inventive. creative. ...so jealous of your brain...
08/28/2021 15:05Penny A Foxie
87 It’s about time Pan showed up! I really hope he can help her bring them down! also Dante, adorable. keeping his lady happy! :)
08/28/2021 14:11Reader-175881
I’m not even happy with pan now losing loir just kind of lost me the character had a lot of potential for a great icon role. I wander why pan lead them to each other I think there was a family connection .
08/28/2021 12:44Reader-175881
I’m so saddened by losing Loir he was the reason the book was interesting! he can’t be dead!
08/28/2021 12:40Roseam
Ok, more and more interesting. The enigma that is PAN may soon be revealed.
08/28/2021 11:13
Zaida
Okay and where has he been hiding this whole time like sir???? There's a whole war going on outside
08/28/2021 09:29LeaWithLove
Please tell me you were inspired by The Matrix and Elysium for this story (to name a few)… because that’s where I draw my inspiration from when I envision this story in my head 😜
08/28/2021 08:48Auras Laura
loir is crazy😈
08/28/2021 05:40
Lei Kela
I have been waiting for this!!!! but is it real? is it really him?!
08/28/2021 05:18Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma
Too many quick but risky decisions to take. I hope Eden's gut feelings are right! Though it's typical of Pan to show unannounced
08/28/2021 03:23Reader-875591
OMG this is the best!!! loving it so much I don’t want it to be over
08/28/2021 03:13Kat M
bout time pan showed!
08/28/2021 02:38SvS 🐝
Run little kitty, Loir is watching from above
08/28/2021 02:16Reader-397104
great update! is it really him? I wonder if Eden will find out more about her past/ father ?
08/28/2021 01:54
SuperWhoFly
Maybe his mind is going to be with them in the computers?
08/27/2021 18:47Drawkser
that hurt! it’s a really bitter sweet feeling! he is gone but we left something he will be remembered for. Gosh I wasn’t ready for this dosis of sadness. thank you for the chapter.
08/27/2021 00:29
Brittney Elrod
ooooh I looooooooove love!! "I wanna be a pepperoni hoe!"
08/26/2021 21:44nfau4714
Thank you crazy cat!!!!
08/26/2021 20:30Johana Lem
😢😢😢 Loir!! 😞💔💔💔
08/26/2021 18:53
Maria Patricia
oh my god...Loir I'm crying out loud!
08/26/2021 18:44Silky Gupta
Loir!!💔💔💔💔💔💔 I never thought I'll be crying over a character, but you Loir the crazy one all call, you are one of the most intriguing character I hv ever encountered. Jenny!! Whar a marvelous job to build Loir's character. I hope you bring him back! Love❤️
08/26/2021 18:19Mina
Loir, you brilliant crazy cat 💔❤️💔
08/26/2021 17:32Satrupa Mohapatra
Loir.....It was the heart wrecking chapter for me ...Loir was my fevorite characters of all ... the crazy Genius I must say ..
08/26/2021 14:30Roseam
Loir really was a crazy genius!!!
08/26/2021 13:30Zaida
Still sobbing!!!! Thank you Loir
08/26/2021 12:06Florie Frane
One of the saddest heartbreak ever.. Missing Loir already..😭😭😭
08/26/2021 10:56Beatriz Astorga Morales
I was so afraid to read this chapter… Jesus!!! Dear Jenny! I’m crying so much for Loir’s death 🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭 Although I want to believe he’s still alive and Jack and the puppies too!!! 🙏🙏🙏 Can’t imagine this story without that crazy guy! 🙄🙄🙄
08/26/2021 06:46Web Bookworm
I really hope Loir isn’t dead. But if he knew his ending was coming, I hope he snuck Jack and the pups out for Eden ❤️
08/26/2021 04:08Elite Knight
fck.... i really can't move on from loir 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
08/26/2021 03:23SvS 🐝
noooooooo not Loir!!
08/26/2021 03:05xian
I really hope Loir jack and pups r alive
08/26/2021 01:13Kayla Elliott
I still can’t imagine loir actually being gone!! I think maybe he did this to fake his life and end “warlock” get off the raider so to speak….at least I hope!! I love him too much! this was an amazing chapter!
08/26/2021 00:12Reader-397104
great update ! I believe “they” are not dead, Loir last crazy idea the best!
08/25/2021 23:53Penny A Foxie
86 Omg this chapter had me in tears. One last hurrah for Loir. He knew exactly what he was doing. The government have lost their edge! No pun intended! 😭😂
08/25/2021 22:35MReinanda
A bittersweet chapter
08/25/2021 22:20Alicia Flores
oooh Loir that crazy cat did it again 🙃 but I really hope he went to the basement or something with Jack and the pups to stay alive 🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞
08/25/2021 22:13Alicia Flores
not only Loir but Jacky and the pups were there too 😰
08/25/2021 21:51shanaaz shaz
💔💔💔💔💔💔💔
08/25/2021 21:10
Nina Khan
I hope your is not really dead but it's just his trick
08/25/2021 20:56Mina Song
nooooo!!! I’m soooo sad 😭😭😭😭 oh Loir, I truly hoped he was one of the people that would be with Eden until the end!! Loir is definitely the hero.
08/25/2021 20:52Ludmila Bacova
a wonderful chapter...
08/25/2021 20:46Kat M
ohh Loir...
08/25/2021 20:38
cindy bruneau
I'm not crying....
08/25/2021 20:24Reader-555364
Aw……..
08/25/2021 20:18Stephanie Messner Smith
Still crying, I just love Lior so much!
08/25/2021 20:09Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma
My deepest respect, Loir. Still hoping he made it though
08/25/2021 20:08Bonib2
Awww Loir, he still had the last laugh and middle finger to the core and governor. 💔
08/25/2021 20:03Em Gee
Omg… I just found the translation of the French song Loir was singing. It’s a bit sad, given the situation. Look up “Non, Je ne regrette rien” by Edith Piaf. It means “No, I don’t regret anything” 😭😭😭
08/24/2021 09:33shanaaz shaz
no f**King way 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
08/24/2021 05:09Kayla Elliott
nooooo!!! it can’t be! I think he faked his location, that way he could throw them off more! it’s gotta be!! Loir can’t be gone!! ohh I hope they take this governor out!!
08/24/2021 00:31hpearce15
Wowzers Jenny that last bit I was holding my breath! I hope it’s not as it seems in this case!
08/23/2021 21:50MReinanda
Wow did not see that coming. We're going to miss you crazy thing.
08/23/2021 19:20laterseen
bye loir.
08/23/2021 18:26Beatriz Astorga Morales
My heart is in pain… but I want to think Loir is alive! He’s just distracting the Core for Eden, Dante and Circé going up… Please… 🥺🥺🥺🙏🙏🙏
08/23/2021 07:15Penny A Foxie
85 Noooooooooo Loir!!!!! please let him be alive 😭😭😭😭
08/22/2021 23:30Julia Lehmann
Good job, loir ❤️
08/22/2021 21:02
Jacqueline Doss-Cola
We need Lori's humor!
08/22/2021 19:00Lidiane Barros
nooooo not Loir !!!
08/22/2021 08:42
