The Songbird's Love Comments

Hilary

I’m already obsessed with this story! Great work, Jenny!

Roseam

So what is Eden's bloodless takeover plan? I'm intrigued. I'm also confused like everyone else about her mother. Not surprised the architect was her father. Who really is Pan?

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Well, as I’m intrigued about Eden’s “dead” mother I was rereading chapter 14 and Dante in fact investigated about her, he knows about her! So I think that if she’s Eden’s mother perhaps Eden tells about her as “killed by the Core” because she is mentally sick, with no memories 🤷🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️ or she is an adoptive mother to Eden 🤔🤔🤔

I bursted out laughing when jack proposed that Loir should go on with his idea and bam, about selling cookies and jack is like 😶 😂😂😂😂 but I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Superb! 🥰🥰🥰🙃🙃🙃

Lillianne Huntley

That was intense

rosie

GOOD KITTY 😱 best chapter yet Jenny! you’ve out done yourself

Pretty sure that was her master. I was afraid for a few seconds that the book was taking a turn and the core would capture her.

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Oh! who was that??? Her Master??? Her Brother??? Who???!!! 😅😅😅

Alicia Flores

Oooooo Dante really doesn't like the idea of Eden going inside to hack the system he can't protect her there.

Anna Sota

omg! it is so hot!!!

SvS 🐝

I loved the chapter! 😍

Alicia Flores

hahaha I Love Dante I bet Eden us going to clean him up before they enter with the zodiacs

Taina Iosefo

Oh man... Eden is just as crazy if not worse than Loir... that’s saying a lot. 😂😂 But Dante doesn’t seem too happy about it. His smile went to anger or frustration. I can’t wait ... when’s the next update.

Vanja Šegmanović

Ohh the big kitty is about to play with little kitty hahha

my heart goes out to her! 😭

Edina Owens

hahahah omg!! dante u sly tiger😂😂😂

Reader-986715

get it girl!!

Roseam

A map of the Core. The possibilities are endless now they have all this information. I wonder what the four zodiacs will be like during their meeting? Loir's reaction indicates his injuries probably come from one of the other zodiacs mentioned.

So clever

Cristin Ronqvist

Haha omg he is just sutch an amazing charater wow i realy cant belive that you just keep being more awsome for etch chapter no mather witch storie well done Jenny ❤️❤️❤️🕊️

Alicia Rodriguez

🔥 🔥 🔥

I Can't Wait To Find Out The Rest Of Edan's story.

Cristin Ronqvist

🙈❤️🕊️🌹

Roseam

Going to the bar before hacking the Snake's fortress, fun! Love this story. 💜

SvS 🐝

Hahaha Dante is so cheeky! „im sure rose wouldn’t mind“ 😏

Robin

And maybe Adam didn’t really die. Maybe it was supposed to look like he died but he is actually Pan and he went back in the Core. Maybe to help Eden 🤔 So many possibilities

Vanja Šegmanović

"Good Kitty" 😂😂😂

Auras Laura

naughty boy 🤣

Jenny, thank you for being such a wonderful writer!!!

Alicia Flores

wasn't her mom on a hospital with memory loss? and why she nevwr mentions her brother when she tells thestory of her running away? are they people who took care of her back then and that is why she loves them like family? Also I think Dante is super handsome with any eye color he chooses 😍😍😍

Ahlie

oh my... eden and dante are a really crazy tough tandem❤

Edina Owens

wow... that was a huge revelation

Winter Rose

These two are my favorite, besides Lady Dhampir of course. Can't wait until the next update!

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Omg! I think Dante is jealous!!! I hope Eden’s Master be his father and not a boyfriend or something like that 🥳🥳🥳 Loir is adorable!! 🥰🥰🥰

Auras Laura

great🥰👏🥰

Roseam

Love Loir's creepy laugh! OMG scary clowns, mindless bots and flying pink striped cars. ❤😂🐯

Kayla.southerland88

I’m LOVING this book!! Of course since it is Jenny, I didn’t expect much less. ❤️

Karine Juillet

Good Kitty... 🤣🤣🤣 Loved this chapter.

Lei Kela

uh-oh looks like Eden is jealous

Winter Rose

Uh oh, Dante doesn't like to share

Aqua the Unicorn

good kitty takes the win 😂😂😂 yup it was just as I imagined it would be with those two, hot and naughty!! but the good kitty is what I’ll be remembering

Nicole

This is the first update I read on AnyStories!

Beatriz Astorga Morales

I’m not sure... I want to think Eden’s Master is really her father... Although Dante seems to be so jealous about him 😅😅😅 Can’t wait to know more about it and see more interaction between them 🥰☺️🙏🤗

Luna_Lothal

Loir is quickly becoming my favorite character after Eden of course. Loving this story!

adela

dang this was one of ur best hot scenes ! another being in the hot tub with a dragon 🐉

Ayie AieSyah

omggggg its pan rightttt!????!!!!

adela

wow Jenny all you books are great! normally I don’t dig this deep in a authors numerous books but this is my 4th one I really like.

Mizz Meka

Dante guiding her and she trusted him!

Lisa

is that pan????

Heather B.P.

ugh I hate Rose flirting with the Tiger! so rude ! get your own guy Rose

Alicia Rodriguez

omg! this was so stressful. dante needs to scratch that kitty lol

Roseam

Pizzaland! 😂😂😂 Loir is hilarious as usual. I wonder what's in the star? Intrigued by the holographic mat area.

Robin

🐵🙈🙉🙊

Brittany Vermette

love this book. becoming one of my favourites.

SNAP! I guess this is confirmation that Dante does know Eden is Ghost (they’ve danced around it for many chapters now). How will Eden react to that in front of the Zodiacs?? 😜

Beth Wiles

absolutely love this story

Raluca Iolanda Dragoi

I realy love this story !! initialy I thought that will be a short story but I'm sooo happy that is not!!!

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Can’t wait to read about her “new identity” 😅😛🤪 Loir is so funny! 🥰🥰🥰

PramG

OMG! Is Dante in love with her? Can’t wait for the next update?

Cristin Ronqvist

Oh my well that was a steeming chapter 😍🤩 love it SO so mutch and cant wait for more chapters Jenny ❤️😍🥰

Katie Factor

Oh Dante, are you ever slick. You're wearing her down quicker than I bet even you expected. But then again, I think you're getting in deeper than what you ever expected either.

Taina Iosefo

OMG Eden is so trying to keep her self dignity and not giving in. But she should what does she have to lose. But then is it true of what Dante is telling her... can’t wait for the next update!!

Edina Owens

hahahahhahaahha this chapter is so chaotic 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 eden is the boss here guyssss kitty interrogating in the place of big kitty..! 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 gosh loir is just too unique 😂😂

Anne Embery

another amazing story, totally gripped in this, can't wait for the next chapter ❤😁😁

AieSyah RzeCt

O M G!!!!!!!!! WHAT A HUGE SURPRISE!!!!!!!!! AAAAHHHHHHH WAY TO GO MR. TIGER!!!!!!!

Izzy_143

Great chapter, can’t wait for more!!!

Ahlie

jenny this is another one of my fave books by you

omgggg I died when Loir went silent, he was basically letting the two lovers-to-be have a moment of work together. gosh, these cliff hangers are brutal! I can’t wait for the next update!! what if her master was someone in the core, who wanted the world to change or wanted someone like Eden to make a difference in their world? we need more info Jenny!

SvS 🐝

loved how she slapped him 😂

SvS 🐝

crazy times indeed

Shaynie

One hell of a chapter right there, great work!

Winter Rose

Wow this is so good!

Luna_Lothal

woah, this was one hell of a chapter. but it was great to get more background on the Cores. this is getting so good! can't wait for the next chapter

this chapter got me smiling so stupid to myself 😂 Dante and his charms😏 but anyways, maybe the core is looking for Eden? or maybe they’re secretly spying on the suburbs to see if they can wipe them out? there’s a lot of things that could mean why they’re there. I can’t wait for the next chapter!

NINJA

Loving it ❤️❤️❤️❤️

So they took Adam’s body away? 🤔 Eden might end up with a ghost of her own!

Amy Sessions

love this story!! always waiting for the next chapter wth excitement :)

ugh I keep rereading this chapter over and over. I need more! That kiss was 👌🏻

Lei Kela

(ch.15) Eden fits well with the mafia world. totally can imagine that. She's a badass. nice to get some background about the core too

NINJA

this really puts me on the edge! I actually want to run too!!!

I love eden! she’s such a badass😍 she’s like a black panther, quiet, stealthy, strong, and fierce! can we just talk about Dante for a minute?! he reminds me soooo much of Damian from HBMP(image wise) with a bit of Liam’s/Rayan’s attitude.

Auras Laura

👏👏👏👏

Shaynie

I feel really sorry for Loir, but also Eden and Dante has chemistry begging to be tested😍

Tara Holland

I can't wait for the next update😂 this is getting really really really good😍😍😍

Madeeha naaz

I was very skeptical reading this book...but once I started it I am HOOKED!

Ky Sky

Love this story so much!!! I hate to wait, but you are so worth it Jenny! Until next chapter... LD saves me! 😆

Anne Embery

I love this story, it's so hard having to wait for each chapter to come out ☺🤪🤪😜😜

Ayie AieSyah

hahahaha lolllll this is sooo scaryyyy hahahahah i bet i will have trauma to go to the amusement park if i was eden lol

Trisha Sunshine

I actually dislike this story.

Winter Rose

I wish I could see her haha

Sarah Kidman

bahahahaha! nice pink.

Reader-939012

I’m so excited for her to dive again!

Auras Laura

that's a surprise😦

Mizz Meka

oh I have a feeling they have a past connection!

Roseam

Dante you sneaky, cheeky bugger! Now he has Eden and Loir. Loir seems to have a plan. Devious.

Alicia Flores

O my 😲 Dante really felt for her and Eden is a step away from falling crazy in love with him. I got to say these too are a perfect match love love looove the story I need the next update I really hope she thakes that leap of faite

cindy bruneau

oh Dante! I need someone like you!😂

Roseam

Dante being all sweet hugging her to sleep after her nightmare. I'm glad Jackie and Rose are alright although his bar is a mess. The Core is planning something big and bad for the suburbs. Are they going to try and wipe them out for good? Let's see what Dante and Eden can come up with to mess with those plans.

Tiffany Witmer

this story just keeps getting better and better!!! 💜💙💜💙