The Songbird's Love Comments

Ahlie

i really hope they'll be both okay after the attack

Reader-397104

I wonder what she’s going to do when she meets the governor? great update

Penny A Foxie

I really hope Eden gets her happy ending! Thanks for the update Jenny! xox

Taina Iosefo

77 Loir is hilarious in this chapter. everyone not know what he’s gonna do. I can’t wait till Eden gets in and Loir is able to help her even more in there and work his magic. lol

Raelynn Lamouche

oh gosh!! I wish the updates were more frequent!! loving this story so much! thank you Jenny, your writing has been absolutely fantastic. All your stories definitely have been exciting to read!

Ludmila Bacova

that's your Italian marriage

Maria Patricia

I'm kind of confused.. because i haven't reread it after editing... which zodiac are from where etc. ... but! i love 💖💖💖 this story the same way! i like the Tiger being impatient 😌

Patricia Hooda

jenny! you need to update more often! its killing me to wait for another update, a specialy over weekend!!!

Beatriz Astorga Morales

😱😱😱😱😭😭😭

Mee 224

Jenny please don't kill Dante !!!

SvS 🐝

I vote that he is either her brother or her dad. I’m excited for the next update!

I still don't understand her Ghost SIN and do they still need gas masks to breath outside?

76 zombies love loir singing zombies. he is seriously my favorite character.

Ahlie

go Dante! say yes Eden❣

PoisonedPix

too sweet!

Auras Laura

what is going on?🤔

Robin

Jenny you’re about to drop a bomb in us and break our hearts again. aren’t you? I have a sick feeling about everything going on. Please don’t do that to us. The loss of Loir was enough 😢

Cristina Pognant

Wow!!!

jen

I am no longer here for Eden and Dante....I AM HERE FOR LOIR!!!😝

Satrupa Mohapatra

so Charles is no more and he had used the bomb to somehow help Eden to gain a little bit of time from core and to try blow down some of the properties of core

Lillianne Huntley

Yaayy......wedding bells

SuperWhoFly

Chapter 59 So sad about her mom! 😢

Emelie Skillinghaug

love this story, and all of your other stories. I started to read your stories when I needed to improve my English. And you didn’t let me down I really love to read everything you write. keep up the good work and nothing can stop you from being what you want. //Emelie from Sweden

Ludmila Bacova

A proposal!!! ❤

Soph Hugh

I am so excited!!!! nail biting ready to commence!

Soph Hugh

love this book

Reader-474595

best story🥺🥺

Bonib2

Oh my Gosh, this is so good I cannot wait for the next uodate.❤❤❤

okay okay I can breathe a little now

Best story I have read on this site so far. I am super invested. You write beautifully ❤️

Big L

how did Eden call her mom if she was killed by the Core?

Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

The plot is thickening! I hope Dante buys into Eden going to the core...

Marija Marković

great story

Ieva Igaune

I hope that they will walk out of it alive 🙏

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Hahaha! Love Dante’s possessiveness 🥰🥰🥰

Roseam

I love the back and forth with all the characters. They're in the middle of a gunfight and still funny as heck. Love your writing Jenny! 💜

Reader-397104

great update! not quite a cliffhanger but definitely got more questions waiting to be answered!

Satrupa Mohapatra

soooo it's time for the war!!!

Mina

So sweet! 💕💕💕 loved this chapter, thanks Jenny! 🥰

Mina

Oooooh this just keeps getting better and better! 😃 keep up the great work, Jenny! ♥️♥️♥️

Kat M

Loir is hilarious and Edente (Eden and Dante) are perfect!

Julia Lehmann

Good job, loir ❤️

favorite still!

Ieva Igaune

Rolf is something 🤣 nothing phases him 🤣 Dante and Eden 💞💞💞

Maria Patricia

this amazing story has to be on the tops!

Maria Patricia

i was never fond of this kind of fantasy stories... but Jenny Fox 🦊 you are so amazing.... I'm so in love with this story.... all of your stories

wow I can’t wait for the next update this book is awesome 😍

87.... I firmly believe that Newman is both PAN and Eden's real last name and they're related but I don't think that PAN is the Architect. I think he's more likely an older brother who knew more and was able to hide take over their father's legacy. The Architect was too big to be able to hide like that inside the Core and I think Eden's mom is dead plus there was no indication she was any good at hacking.

Roseam

It's on!!! Go Zodiacs.

Penny A Foxie

ha ha ha poor Rolf! You know when you’re not wanted or needed! 😂😂 Dante, love him. 💕 I just hope Lecky’s not wrong about those ppl inside….

conso Africa

Adam was just a friend whom she considered as a brother right? I am not getting it ……. !!!

Beatriz Astorga Morales

I’m wanting so much Pan be Eden’s father… 🙏🙏🙏

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Love Loir!!! 🥰🥰🥰

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Lovely! 🥰🥰🥰

Excuse me while I go sob in the corner....

Andreea Melinda Mirza

Adam mister solved. So he is not actually her brother. Wonder who he really was and how they got so close.

Reader-397104

omg another great cliffhanger Jenny! How is Eden going to react? !

Ahlie

i wonder what's the messages all about and the thing in the locker...

🤯🤯🤯

Renee Farrell

❤

Mia

#77 lLoved how you used “spring mall cleaning after a Black Friday, after a pandemic..” :)))) adding a bit of reality in there ;) Love your style Jenny!! let’s see what happens next ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

shanaaz shaz

❤❤❤❤

Mina

So excited that Eden is going up to try and find Pan! Hope this gives her all the insight she needs about her past 💕

Reader-175881

I’m not even happy with pan now losing loir just kind of lost me the character had a lot of potential for a great icon role. I wander why pan lead them to each other I think there was a family connection .

Bonib2

❤❤❤❤❤

Mia

#92 First of HAPPY BIRTHDAY JENNY 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 🥰🤗😘♥️🎁🎈🌈🍀🍾🧸🛍🪄 🎂🎊🎊🎊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🎊🎊🎊 Hoping your day will be amazing, filled with lots and lots of lovely surprises 🥰🤗🎊🎊🎊

Anita Mara

I knew it!! He is Adam!! I wrote a lot of comments suspecting this... 💪🏻

Satrupa Mohapatra

I feel like pan is Eden's father or brother who is trapped in the core ..as per the previous chapters pan appeared after her father's death or what ever it was

Reader-555364

loved it!!

I'm still cringing from the bodyguards being able to hear them. I'm so embarrassed

Mia

#92 First of HAPPY BIRTHDAY JENNY 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 🥰🤗😘♥️🎁🎈🌈🍀🍾🧸🛍🪄 🎂🎊🎊🎊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🎊🎊🎊 Hoping your day will be amazing, filled with lots and lots of lovely surprises 🥰🤗🎊🎊🎊 Second Holy…..🤯🤯🤯🤯 This chapter was intense and soooo much mooore… Loved every bit! Felt like really I was in there next to Eden🔥🔥🔥 Thank you for this amazing story! xoxo

Penny A Foxie

Dante!! ❤️

Sharon MacDonald

instead of claim up, you should say she should of clammed up

Loving this book

Sheetu Zutshi Bhat

didn’t see that coming... loving the story 💕

rosie

this all just got real 😳

Analee Deniz

❤️❤️❤️

Teresa Bryant

I think Pan is her father and he's the heart of the system... I hope I'm wrong

Raelynn Lamouche

Yess!! I knew there was a connection to why Eden was his calm and he didn't know why and why he sought her out!!!

Soph Hugh

exciting!!!

Drawkser

I was absolutely not expecting that! the suspense is killing me! !

Satrupa Mohapatra

❤️ loved it.... thank you Jenny for this chapter

Lei Kela

ch 74 wow! Eden eventually gave in. that was quick! lol. oooh wedding bells. can't wait for the next chapter

Ahlie

oh i knew it!

Ludmila Bacova

didn't expect that....

Andreea Melinda Mirza

"Nobody asked Delicate!" 😂😂😂😂😂

Sheetu Zutshi Bhat

Amazing chapter.. loved it.. thank you Jenny 💕

heheh predictable

SvS 🐝

Oh oh I’m pretty sure that the big kitty does not let Eden go alone

omfgggg Dante!!!!!! yasssssss!!!!! 🤣❤️❤️❤️😏😏😏😏😏😏

bye loir.

I read every chapter of every book! you do such an amazing job Jenny ❤️ please never stop writing✨

Reader-397104

Oh Loir! Who will take his place? I’ll miss your craziness! Great update!

Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

So many questions running through my mind!!!! Is Dante aware? Is Ghost the last piece of the puzzle?Is Loir in on the plan? I can't sleep and I have to wait till Wednesday

Maria Patricia

so intense! can't wait for the next chapter 💕

Web Bookworm

I am reading this and LD. how about you start updating one on Tuesday and Thursday so I always have something to read? 😂😂😂

oh my GOOOOODD, I'm sitting on the edge of my seat 😲🤯

im dying here

loving this story, bring on the action eeek.

Web Bookworm

OK she referred to him as her brother metaphorically since he took care of her and taught her how to live in the suburbs. But she was born in the Core and he the suburbs & he is older so he can’t be her real brother. The Italians had the memory control tech so they used it to wipe out his previous memories to create the perfect heir. So he doesn’t remember her but his heart & body do. plus it’s probably why Eden’s body was doing the same thing & her heartbeat picked up every time he was around & her walls were brought down, she already trusted him. 💕 Amazing twist, Jenny! Childhood friends to lovers 😘 I hope Dante/Adam really didn’t know or Eden will never trust him again...