The Songbird's Love Comments
Wcha
wow didn't expect the kiss or her to react that way
09/04/2023 08:29
Ahlie
i really hope they'll be both okay after the attack
09/04/2023 08:29
Reader-397104
I wonder what she’s going to do when she meets the governor? great update
09/04/2023 08:29Penny A Foxie
I really hope Eden gets her happy ending! Thanks for the update Jenny! xox
09/04/2023 08:28Taina Iosefo
77 Loir is hilarious in this chapter. everyone not know what he’s gonna do. I can’t wait till Eden gets in and Loir is able to help her even more in there and work his magic. lol
09/04/2023 08:28Raelynn Lamouche
oh gosh!! I wish the updates were more frequent!! loving this story so much! thank you Jenny, your writing has been absolutely fantastic. All your stories definitely have been exciting to read!
09/04/2023 08:28Ludmila Bacova
that's your Italian marriage
09/04/2023 08:28
Maria Patricia
I'm kind of confused.. because i haven't reread it after editing... which zodiac are from where etc. ... but! i love 💖💖💖 this story the same way! i like the Tiger being impatient 😌
09/04/2023 08:28Patricia Hooda
jenny! you need to update more often! its killing me to wait for another update, a specialy over weekend!!!
09/04/2023 08:28
Beatriz Astorga Morales
😱😱😱😱😭😭😭
09/04/2023 08:28
Mee 224
Jenny please don't kill Dante !!!
09/04/2023 08:28
SvS 🐝
I vote that he is either her brother or her dad. I’m excited for the next update!
09/04/2023 08:28I still don't understand her Ghost SIN and do they still need gas masks to breath outside?
09/04/2023 08:2876 zombies love loir singing zombies. he is seriously my favorite character.
09/04/2023 08:28Ahlie
go Dante! say yes Eden❣
09/04/2023 08:28
PoisonedPix
too sweet!
09/04/2023 08:28Auras Laura
what is going on?🤔
09/04/2023 08:28Robin
Jenny you’re about to drop a bomb in us and break our hearts again. aren’t you? I have a sick feeling about everything going on. Please don’t do that to us. The loss of Loir was enough 😢
09/04/2023 08:28Cristina Pognant
Wow!!!
09/04/2023 08:28jen
I am no longer here for Eden and Dante....I AM HERE FOR LOIR!!!😝
09/04/2023 08:28
Satrupa Mohapatra
so Charles is no more and he had used the bomb to somehow help Eden to gain a little bit of time from core and to try blow down some of the properties of core
09/04/2023 08:28
Lillianne Huntley
Yaayy......wedding bells
09/04/2023 08:28
SuperWhoFly
Chapter 59 So sad about her mom! 😢
09/04/2023 08:28Emelie Skillinghaug
love this story, and all of your other stories. I started to read your stories when I needed to improve my English. And you didn’t let me down I really love to read everything you write. keep up the good work and nothing can stop you from being what you want. //Emelie from Sweden
09/04/2023 08:28Ludmila Bacova
A proposal!!! ❤
09/04/2023 08:28
Soph Hugh
I am so excited!!!! nail biting ready to commence!
09/04/2023 08:28Soph Hugh
love this book
09/04/2023 08:28Reader-474595
best story🥺🥺
09/04/2023 08:28
Bonib2
Oh my Gosh, this is so good I cannot wait for the next uodate.❤❤❤
09/04/2023 08:28okay okay I can breathe a little now
09/04/2023 08:28Best story I have read on this site so far. I am super invested. You write beautifully ❤️
09/04/2023 08:28
Big L
how did Eden call her mom if she was killed by the Core?
09/04/2023 08:28Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma
The plot is thickening! I hope Dante buys into Eden going to the core...
09/04/2023 08:28Marija Marković
great story
09/04/2023 08:28Ieva Igaune
I hope that they will walk out of it alive 🙏
09/04/2023 08:28Beatriz Astorga Morales
Hahaha! Love Dante’s possessiveness 🥰🥰🥰
09/04/2023 08:28
Roseam
I love the back and forth with all the characters. They're in the middle of a gunfight and still funny as heck. Love your writing Jenny! 💜
09/04/2023 08:28Reader-397104
great update! not quite a cliffhanger but definitely got more questions waiting to be answered!
09/04/2023 08:28Satrupa Mohapatra
soooo it's time for the war!!!
09/04/2023 08:28
Mina
So sweet! 💕💕💕 loved this chapter, thanks Jenny! 🥰
09/04/2023 08:27Mina
Oooooh this just keeps getting better and better! 😃 keep up the great work, Jenny! ♥️♥️♥️
09/04/2023 08:27
Kat M
Loir is hilarious and Edente (Eden and Dante) are perfect!
09/04/2023 08:27Julia Lehmann
Good job, loir ❤️
09/04/2023 08:27favorite still!
09/04/2023 08:27Ieva Igaune
Rolf is something 🤣 nothing phases him 🤣 Dante and Eden 💞💞💞
09/04/2023 08:27Maria Patricia
this amazing story has to be on the tops!
09/04/2023 08:27Maria Patricia
i was never fond of this kind of fantasy stories... but Jenny Fox 🦊 you are so amazing.... I'm so in love with this story.... all of your stories
09/04/2023 08:27wow I can’t wait for the next update this book is awesome 😍
09/04/2023 08:2787.... I firmly believe that Newman is both PAN and Eden's real last name and they're related but I don't think that PAN is the Architect. I think he's more likely an older brother who knew more and was able to hide take over their father's legacy. The Architect was too big to be able to hide like that inside the Core and I think Eden's mom is dead plus there was no indication she was any good at hacking.
09/04/2023 08:27Roseam
It's on!!! Go Zodiacs.
09/04/2023 08:27Penny A Foxie
ha ha ha poor Rolf! You know when you’re not wanted or needed! 😂😂 Dante, love him. 💕 I just hope Lecky’s not wrong about those ppl inside….
09/04/2023 08:27conso Africa
Adam was just a friend whom she considered as a brother right? I am not getting it ……. !!!
09/04/2023 08:27Beatriz Astorga Morales
I’m wanting so much Pan be Eden’s father… 🙏🙏🙏
09/04/2023 08:27Beatriz Astorga Morales
Love Loir!!! 🥰🥰🥰
09/04/2023 08:27Beatriz Astorga Morales
Lovely! 🥰🥰🥰
09/04/2023 08:27Excuse me while I go sob in the corner....
09/04/2023 08:27Andreea Melinda Mirza
Adam mister solved. So he is not actually her brother. Wonder who he really was and how they got so close.
09/04/2023 08:27Reader-397104
omg another great cliffhanger Jenny! How is Eden going to react? !
09/04/2023 08:27Ahlie
i wonder what's the messages all about and the thing in the locker...
09/04/2023 08:26🤯🤯🤯
09/04/2023 08:26Renee Farrell
❤
09/04/2023 08:26
Mia
#77 lLoved how you used “spring mall cleaning after a Black Friday, after a pandemic..” :)))) adding a bit of reality in there ;) Love your style Jenny!! let’s see what happens next ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
09/04/2023 08:26
shanaaz shaz
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09/04/2023 08:26Mina
So excited that Eden is going up to try and find Pan! Hope this gives her all the insight she needs about her past 💕
09/04/2023 08:26Reader-175881
I’m not even happy with pan now losing loir just kind of lost me the character had a lot of potential for a great icon role. I wander why pan lead them to each other I think there was a family connection .
09/04/2023 08:26Bonib2
❤❤❤❤❤
09/04/2023 08:26Mia
#92 First of HAPPY BIRTHDAY JENNY 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 🥰🤗😘♥️🎁🎈🌈🍀🍾🧸🛍🪄 🎂🎊🎊🎊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🎊🎊🎊 Hoping your day will be amazing, filled with lots and lots of lovely surprises 🥰🤗🎊🎊🎊
09/04/2023 08:26Anita Mara
I knew it!! He is Adam!! I wrote a lot of comments suspecting this... 💪🏻
09/04/2023 08:26Satrupa Mohapatra
I feel like pan is Eden's father or brother who is trapped in the core ..as per the previous chapters pan appeared after her father's death or what ever it was
09/04/2023 08:26
Reader-555364
loved it!!
09/04/2023 08:26I'm still cringing from the bodyguards being able to hear them. I'm so embarrassed
09/04/2023 08:26Mia
#92 First of HAPPY BIRTHDAY JENNY 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 🥰🤗😘♥️🎁🎈🌈🍀🍾🧸🛍🪄 🎂🎊🎊🎊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🎊🎊🎊 Hoping your day will be amazing, filled with lots and lots of lovely surprises 🥰🤗🎊🎊🎊 Second Holy…..🤯🤯🤯🤯 This chapter was intense and soooo much mooore… Loved every bit! Felt like really I was in there next to Eden🔥🔥🔥 Thank you for this amazing story! xoxo
09/04/2023 08:26Penny A Foxie
Dante!! ❤️
09/04/2023 08:26Sharon MacDonald
instead of claim up, you should say she should of clammed up
09/04/2023 08:26Loving this book
09/04/2023 08:26Sheetu Zutshi Bhat
didn’t see that coming... loving the story 💕
09/04/2023 08:26
rosie
this all just got real 😳
09/04/2023 08:26Analee Deniz
❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 08:26Teresa Bryant
I think Pan is her father and he's the heart of the system... I hope I'm wrong
09/04/2023 08:26Raelynn Lamouche
Yess!! I knew there was a connection to why Eden was his calm and he didn't know why and why he sought her out!!!
09/04/2023 08:26Soph Hugh
exciting!!!
09/04/2023 08:26Drawkser
I was absolutely not expecting that! the suspense is killing me! !
09/04/2023 08:26Satrupa Mohapatra
❤️ loved it.... thank you Jenny for this chapter
09/04/2023 08:26
Lei Kela
ch 74 wow! Eden eventually gave in. that was quick! lol. oooh wedding bells. can't wait for the next chapter
09/04/2023 08:26Ahlie
oh i knew it!
09/04/2023 08:26Ludmila Bacova
didn't expect that....
09/04/2023 08:26Andreea Melinda Mirza
"Nobody asked Delicate!" 😂😂😂😂😂
09/04/2023 08:26Sheetu Zutshi Bhat
Amazing chapter.. loved it.. thank you Jenny 💕
09/04/2023 08:26heheh predictable
09/04/2023 08:26SvS 🐝
Oh oh I’m pretty sure that the big kitty does not let Eden go alone
09/04/2023 08:25omfgggg Dante!!!!!! yasssssss!!!!! 🤣❤️❤️❤️😏😏😏😏😏😏
09/04/2023 08:25bye loir.
09/04/2023 08:25I read every chapter of every book! you do such an amazing job Jenny ❤️ please never stop writing✨
09/04/2023 08:25Reader-397104
Oh Loir! Who will take his place? I’ll miss your craziness! Great update!
09/04/2023 08:25Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma
So many questions running through my mind!!!! Is Dante aware? Is Ghost the last piece of the puzzle?Is Loir in on the plan? I can't sleep and I have to wait till Wednesday
09/04/2023 08:25Maria Patricia
so intense! can't wait for the next chapter 💕
09/04/2023 08:25Web Bookworm
I am reading this and LD. how about you start updating one on Tuesday and Thursday so I always have something to read? 😂😂😂
09/04/2023 08:25oh my GOOOOODD, I'm sitting on the edge of my seat 😲🤯
09/04/2023 08:25im dying here
09/04/2023 08:25loving this story, bring on the action eeek.
09/04/2023 08:25
