The Songbird's Love Comments

Alicia Flores

I knew Dante was on to her he is a bastard but a very clever one and a handsome one too

Ida Wigren

I can’t wait for the next chapter! 😩😩😍

Cristin Ronqvist

Haha omg i love L personality 😳😂 lovly chapter Jenny and wish u well soon ❤️

NINJA

This is so EXCITIIIIIIIING!!!!

Mika Mouton

Can't wait for the next update. You are so talented, you can capture my attention and curiosity in litterly every book you write. But this storry is slowly ranking to the top. But it will never reach TWGF because it's the first book that made me a slave to you writhing😋❤

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Omg!!! Dante is so lovely!!! Eden wasn’t accept her feelings for him... 🤪🥰🥰🥰

cindy bruneau

hard to see if Dante is mad or not... Eden is in deep sh...

Christina Nevarez

I don't want her to give in yet!! I want her to be sure and trust him before! :/

Roseam

Welcome back Loir, looks like he's about to have some fun! Dante still being a prick. The puppies are happily back together. Eden pissed off as usual.

Afia Amoakoah Bonsu

jenny fox....u are the best writer I have come across and am always checking this story for an update.

Tara Holland

omg!!!!! wow 🤯 can't wait for the next chapter

Lally Devon

Guess a romantic dinner a few glasses of wine 🍷 that’ll do it finally that kiss 💋 great 😊 chapter Jenny 🦊 love 💕 it

Amber Brown

love loir love eden love dante love love love love

Nancy

it’s nice that he massaged her pain away and tried to distract her. seems like he’s starting to care about her beyond physical attraction.

Andrea Aludden

this is my fav story, and i got hooked just a few chapters in. as always, excellent work ms Fox 👏

Auras Laura

loveley👏👏👏👏😊

Meredith Boswell

I’m so loving your style of writing and the characters you weave. it so much fun to find the Easter eggs

Jazsime Angeles

I'm really enjoying this book, love reading all your stories but this is a really unique story.

Reader-mags

I love this story. I can’t wait for more. why did her friend back stab her?

Andre2695

😂😂😂

Yaz

so much amazingness in this chapter!

Winter Rose

Loir! Giving himself up for pizza

Amanda Graham Young

Loving the story so much!

Ana Morales

Uuugghhhhh!!!! That cliffhanger Jenny 😫🤯

Jessica

yasss they finally kissed! Yes Eden give in honey

Tara Holland

Boom!!!!! I love this story can't wait for another chapter

Alicia Flores

Call me crazy but I like Dante he is that kind of danger you are not able to walk away from 🙈

Lally Devon

That was pretty intense 😧

Lisa

sad for Loir, he must have gone through a lot....now slowly I can see something blooming here....

Reader-939012

seriously I can’t get enough of this story!!!

Lally Devon

Eden has got some work cut out for her but I reckon she’ll handle it 😘❤️

lol

Lisa

WHAT??? man I never expected that!!!

Auras Laura

let see what happens next😁👏👏👏

PramG

wow, can’t wait for the next update!!!

Amber Savory

Yesssss!

Tablur Spel

think he have a hunch that she is Ghost

Lei Kela

(ch.10) intense!! I hope Dante will save Eden, maybe call the mafia doctor or repairs.🙏 oh Eden has to make it, the puppies need her!🙏 hope Jacquie or anyone takes care of the puppies for the meantime.

jyomarie.

i love peperoni pizza. Loir is so funny. I think Master is her father or uncle, but definetly is family.

SvS 🐝

loved the chapter 🍎

Kelli Reimer

I can not get enough of this book! I absolutely love it!!

Lei Kela

(ch.7) finally their first encounter! can't wait to see how this will turn out 😍

Roseam

Good Kitty....hahaha! Very steamy chapter, thanks Jenny. ❤🔥❤🔥

Anna Sota

that was definitely hot:-)

Bev Pearson

awesome!!!

Daniely Lins da Silva

wow 🔥🔥🔥

Izzy_143

yaasss!!! I need more!!! great work author.

Auras Laura

mistery helper👏👏👏

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Dante, so sweet. Maybe someday, both will realize what are feeling one to another 🙏🥰😘

Lally Devon

Eden starting to open up to Dante 😘❤️❤️❤️

Beatriz Astorga Morales

I need to read more and more!!! 🙏🙏🙏 It’s great! Dante is so sweet!!! 🥰🥰🥰

Edie Gyorki

enjoying this story. wishing there was more interaction with Dante

Reader-939012

seriously my favorite book !!!

Iani328

I knew Loir was not good news when he started acting so weird today. I think Dante is really into Eden aside from wanting her as a hacker. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

Cristin Ronqvist

FINELY he reveile that he knows 🙀🤣 lovly chapter Jenny cant wait for more👍❤️🥰🌹🕊️

Anna Sota

wow, what an ending!!!!

Gabzzz Rodzzz

very curious how this will go. great book!

Lei Kela

is Dante seriously not going to remove the lipstick smudges on his face? 🤣😂🤣😂

jyomarie.

Dante probably looks like the joker 😄

rosie

😱😱😱 I keep wanting more and more! my fav after lady daphmire

PramG

OMG! The secret is out. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Ludmila Bacova

What a lovely chapter! The interaction between Eden and Dante is great!!!

Katie Factor

So 🔥🔥🔥!!! I love the dynamic between these two! Love them together. I just hope she doesn't get scared and pulls/runs away from him.

Kylee

pepperoni hoe!!!!

Ahlie

dante and eden's interaction is really good. nice of loir to just watch at the two. i can't wait for more intriguing chapters to come

Mariana Cdsdc

I always love your books, but this one..... oh my, can’t get enough of it. Loir is amazing and is Eden’s friend.

NINJA

Wow that was intense for both strong characters 🔥🔥🔥 it sizzles

Hehe love Eden and Dante’s post-sex interactions now. So cute and funny 😝

Roseam

Ooooh Pan, the boy who never grew up. Similar to Loir, the crazy one haha. And Loir was so scared he couldn't look. 😂 Thank goodness for Dante's calm demeanor.

PG25

Oh Dante Dante Dante. What a way to let the cat out of the bag omg. How will Eden explain that one!

I love their banter so much!!

Alicia Flores

Looks like tje Core ia getting ready for war or looking for some one 🤔

Lei Kela

(ch.19) I love the Professor X reference (X-Men) Loir is such a crazy character 🤣😂🤣😂

Taina Iosefo

Oh man.... was that her master at the ending? I can’t wait for the next chapter!!

AieSyah RzeCt

O M G...!!!! its amazing how jenny change the atmosphere from hot n sexy to suspense n thrilling!!!!! i love it!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍

Daniely Lins da Silva

Great chapter! Thank you, Jenny! And a very Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones!

love this book! Eden basically gave away that she’s Ghost and Dante basically confirmed that he knew she was Ghost. Somehow I like this better than some big confrontation 🤔 😙😙

Twila Carter

was that her master??? I wonder 🤔🤨

Anna Sota

Loir for me in my imaginantions looks like L from Death Note. I wonder who was the inspiration for Jenny when she made that character?:-)

NINJA

Ooooooooooh i love this story! 💗💗💗

Ashley Werner

oh my gosh they are so hot 😍 I think eden and dante might be my new favorite couple of yours jenny 😍

Bethany Litton

whoa the heat between the two is definitely growing. So he said he went out of his territory for her twice. He went to the bar she worked at for her. That is an interesting development.

Drawkser

love it. I need more 😍😍 hope he can keep his promises.

Lei Kela

who was that? I'm dying to know.🤩 Jenny Fox you're so good at leaving us with cliffhangers.

Auras Laura

👏👏🥰

Beatriz Astorga Morales

Love Loir! He’s so funny and brilliant!!! 🤣🥰😉

JazH

In neeeeeeed of the next chapter.. 😍😍😍

jyomarie.

great way to finish this chapter. i love Edens name and now with the apple 🤯 is smart move from Peter.

omgggg I freaking love Loir 😂😂😂 Peperoni hoe 💀💀😂 I can’t with him. but ugh, that few sentences!! just who is that?! Her master or her brother who might still be alive?! or maybe someone who knows her from the core?!

What tiger can fly Loir?!?!?! 😂

NINJA

Haha dante you are so gonna get it from eden. Expect a woman's wrath or kiss? Any way, i love Loi, as craaaaazy as it sound haha. Thank you Jenny!! ❤️❤️❤️

minime_29

I felt sorry for Loir. I like his funny and mysterious character he reminds me of Floki from Vikings. And somehow imagine that he has the same voice of Floki.. Weird 😅

Anthony

Ugh, I want more of Dante and Eden. Please Jenny!!! I believe they are definitely looking for someone, maybe Eden, possibly someone else. But it also seems like either the Core wants to destroy and kill everyone in the Suburbs or possibly they jus want power & control over everything. Could also be something we all are not expecting!!! Jenny do you know yet if there will be a sequel to this story, or will this be the only one or are you unsure at this time????

Beatriz Astorga Morales

My god!!!! Ok, ok, ok.... Dear Jenny, I think I can start loving this guy... 🤪☺️🤗. Can’t wait for the next chapter!!! 🥰🥰🥰

Ahlie

Dante knows😊

hahahahaha Eden is going to be mortified when she comes out of her Dive. God I love this book 🤣

Alicia Flores

hahaha Big Kitty is watching

Twila Carter

I love Loir lol

O M G..!!!!! THIS IS CRAZYYYYY.....!!!!! ITS SO THRILLING....!!!!!

Beth Wiles

Ooooohhhh can’t wait to see what happens with her dive